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Update 9

Next day bi roj ki tarh bit gya

Delhi....... Vikram ke purane gar

Vikram ke jane Ke baad Kisi ko kuch bi farq nai pada sab Apne mai mast enjoy kar rahe the manhoosh chala gya tha Isliye

but didi(nisha didi) and Tiya gar valo Se narj The Isliye vo unse jyada baat nai karte The Bas kaam ki baat karte The unka Ye bartaav dek Ke sab ko thoda shock laga tha liken kisne kuch kaha nai jesa chlta tha vesa chlta rehne diya

•••••••••>hero side

mera traning bi chalu ta mai bahoot jald sab kuch sik raha ta

iss tarh samy bitta gya



After 13 years..........

Ab me 20 sal ka Ho gya hu mera body 6 pack hai and dekne mai 25 ka lagta Hu

aaj muje 3 sal ho gya tha USA Mai

aaj meri traing puri Ho gai ti

in 13 sal Mai Maine sabhi fighting skill and sabhi weapons mai expert and computer hacking mai full expert tha

training completely puri karne ke Baad aaj wapis india jana tha

Mai flight Mai bet gya ta Soch raha ta ki 3 sal Mai sab kese hoge

fir mai so jata Hu

flight land karti hai mai Mumbai airport se bahr ata hu vaha par dad, mom and janvi merko receive karne aaye hue te

mai airport se bahr aate h janvi jese muje dekhti hai doud ke ate h and merko rote hue gale lag jaati hai jisse uske ubhre hue mumme mere bisal chhati me dhas jate hain
lekin hamare man me sirf bhai behen wala pyar hi tha to mai bhi usko gale laga leta hu meri anko mai bhi ansu the

me: kesi hai meri angel

janvi: mai tik hu bhai
ya
hmm

mom: hum se bi mil lo hum bi yahi hai

fir mai mom se milta Hu

dad: aa gya mera sher

me: yes dad

fir hum gar aate hai and mai room mai fresh hone chla jata Hu

fir mai niche aata Hu
dining table pe sab mera intajar kar rehe the fir mai bi aa jata hu
for sab lunch karne lagte hai

janvi: bhai aaj muje apko shopping karne le jana hoga and abi tak apne muje apna gift bhi nai diya hai

me: gift?

mai ese react karta hu jese muje shock laga Ho

mom: kya hua beta

me: mom darsal vo mai sweetie ka gift lana bhul gya hu

itna sunte hi sweetie rone lagti hai apne room mai chali jati hai

mom : beta ab jaa usko uska gift de de muje malum hai tu majk kar raha hai

dad: kya tu majk kar raha hai

maine half mai gardn hilla di

dad: merko to laga tu sach mai uske liye gift nai laya

me: are ese kese bhul jau aap dono ke liye bi gift laya hu

thodi der baad bell bajta hai mai darwaja kolta Hu and gift leta hu jo bahoot bada ta

(Ye gift maine USA mai karida ta and delivery ke liye Bol diya ta)

mai fir jaldi gift leke sweetie ke room mai jata Hu vo abi bi ro rahi ti bed pe lete hue

mai uske pass Jake

me: kya hua meri angel ko

janvi : aap bahoot gande ho mere liye gift nai laaye

me: are kisne kaha mai gift nai laya ye deko gift

mai usko gift dikata hu

gift ka name sunn Ke h vo ek dum uth jaati hai and gift ko dekti hai jo maine side mai raka hua ta

vo bed set utr ke gift kolne lagti hai

gift kulne ke Baad gift dekti h vo bahoot kush ho jati hai and chikti hui and nachti hue mere gale lag jati hai

gift mai ek pink colour ka bada sa teddy ta

janvi: thanku thanku bhiya I love you bhai

me: I love you 2 my angel

fir vo mom dad ko gift dikhane lagti hai

mai mom dad ko bi unka gift deta hu

mom gift kolti hai usme bahoot h sundr necklace ta and dad ke gift mai ek bahoot kimti watch ti

fir iss tarh sham hone lagti hai

sham ko mai and janvi shopping pe jate hai car leke

car Mai

me: aaj ka kya plan hai my angel

janvi : bhai sabse pele movie deknge fir shopping and dinner

me: Ohk. Let's go

fir hum mall aa jate hai and movie ki tickets leke movie dekne lagte hai

movie Ke baad shopping karne lagte hai mai thodi bahoot apne shopping karta hu because thode din baad scl bi st hone vala ta

dad ne mera admission BSC final year mai karva diya ta and sweetie bsc 1st year mai

shopping Ke baad hum dinner karte hai

tab tak 10 baj gye Te mom ko pele h bol diya tha maine

fir hum gar aa jate hai and mom dad se
thodi bahoot baat karke so jate hai sweetie mere sath soie hui ti



subh mai 4 baje ut jata Hu mai sweetie ko side mai karke uth jata Hu and gar ke bahr aake jogging karta hu and exercise karta hu

(Jack and Maria traning dene Ke baad wapis lout gye The)

mai 7 bje tak exercise vgra karta hu wapis gar aata Hu vaha garden mai dad exercise kar rehe te nai unke pass jata Hu

Me: gm dad
dad: GM beta

dad: traning kesi ti
me: good

dad: hmm. Breakfast ke Baad mere sath ana kuch kaam hai

me: ohk dad muje pta hai kya kaam hai

dad: Tuje kese pata hai
me: Baad mai bta dunga

dad: hmm.chalo AB

Fir hum gar mai aata jate hai mai room mai jaake dekta Hu to sweetie abi tak so rahi ti

mai usko forehead pe kisa karke uta ta hu vo uth ke merko gaal pe kiss karti hai

me: good morning my angel
janvi: gm my sweet Bhai

me: chl ab jaldi fresh hone jaa fir breakfast karna hai

for vo chali jati hai Apne room mai

mai bi fresh ho jata hu and niche jata Hu and mom ko GM wish karta hu vo bi gm wish karte hai

iss tarh breakfasht Ke baad mai room mai ake change karta hu and niche aata Hu vaha pe dad bi ready go chuke Te

me: chle dad
dad: ha chalo

mom: kaha jaa rehe ho aal log
dad: are kahi nai bas mai isse le jaa raha hu kuch kaam hai

Janvi: KYa kaam hai Dad

dad: are kuch nai office jaa raha hu ese scl mai kuch kaam hai to Maine kaha mai chod dunga (juth)

mom:ohk

fir mom and janvi ko byy bol Ke hum nikl jate hai

dad ki office CBI head quarter

vaha pauchne ke Baad dad Apne cabin mai jate hue

dad: sab jaldi dek lene ke baad cabin mai ana

me: ohk

Mai to dek raha ta sab kese work karte hai vagara

fir thodi der baad mai cabin mai jata hu and chair pe bet jata Hu

chair pe bet ke

me: so mujse kisko baat karni hai mere dad ko ya Raw chief ko

meri baat sunne Ke baad dad ko jese shock laga Ho

because dad Raw chief Ye baat kuch logo ko hi malum ta merko nai btya ta

dad: Ye baat tumko kisne btya

me: vimram ko pta nai hoga but "Killer"

Ko to pta hoga na dad

meri baat jesi hi puri hui dad ko firse jatka lga

dad: means USA mai underword ka safaya karne vala killer or koi nai mera beta vikram hai

maine ha mai mundi hila di

dad ko firse jatka lga

dad ne pani piya and thodi der baad bole tum killer kese

me: uske liye apko 1 sal piche jana hoga jab Mai usa gya ta



baki next update mai....................
 

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Update 9

Next day bi roj ki tarh bit gya

Delhi....... Vikram ke purane gar

Vikram ke jane Ke baad Kisi ko kuch bi farq nai pada sab Apne mai mast enjoy kar rahe the manhoosh chala gya tha Isliye

but didi(nisha didi) and Tiya gar valo Se narj The Isliye vo unse jyada baat nai karte The Bas kaam ki baat karte The unka Ye bartaav dek Ke sab ko thoda shock laga tha liken kisne kuch kaha nai jesa chlta tha vesa chlta rehne diya

•••••••••>hero side

mera traning bi chalu ta mai bahoot jald sab kuch sik raha ta

iss tarh samy bitta gya



After 13 years..........

Ab me 20 sal ka Ho gya hu mera body 6 pack hai and dekne mai 25 ka lagta Hu

aaj muje 3 sal ho gya tha USA Mai

aaj meri traing puri Ho gai ti

in 13 sal Mai Maine sabhi fighting skill and sabhi weapons mai expert and computer hacking mai full expert tha

training completely puri karne ke Baad aaj wapis india jana tha

Mai flight Mai bet gya ta Soch raha ta ki 3 sal Mai sab kese hoge

fir mai so jata Hu

flight land karti hai mai Mumbai airport se bahr ata hu vaha par dad, mom and janvi merko receive karne aaye hue te

mai airport se bahr aate h janvi jese muje dekhti hai doud ke ate h and merko rote hue gale lag jaati hai jisse uske ubhre hue mumme mere bisal chhati me dhas jate hain
lekin hamare man me sirf bhai behen wala pyar hi tha to mai bhi usko gale laga leta hu meri anko mai bhi ansu the

me: kesi hai meri angel

janvi: mai tik hu bhai
ya
hmm

mom: hum se bi mil lo hum bi yahi hai

fir mai mom se milta Hu

dad: aa gya mera sher

me: yes dad

fir hum gar aate hai and mai room mai fresh hone chla jata Hu

fir mai niche aata Hu
dining table pe sab mera intajar kar rehe the fir mai bi aa jata hu
for sab lunch karne lagte hai

janvi: bhai aaj muje apko shopping karne le jana hoga and abi tak apne muje apna gift bhi nai diya hai

me: gift?

mai ese react karta hu jese muje shock laga Ho

mom: kya hua beta

me: mom darsal vo mai sweetie ka gift lana bhul gya hu

itna sunte hi sweetie rone lagti hai apne room mai chali jati hai

mom : beta ab jaa usko uska gift de de muje malum hai tu majk kar raha hai

dad: kya tu majk kar raha hai

maine half mai gardn hilla di

dad: merko to laga tu sach mai uske liye gift nai laya

me: are ese kese bhul jau aap dono ke liye bi gift laya hu

thodi der baad bell bajta hai mai darwaja kolta Hu and gift leta hu jo bahoot bada ta

(Ye gift maine USA mai karida ta and delivery ke liye Bol diya ta)

mai fir jaldi gift leke sweetie ke room mai jata Hu vo abi bi ro rahi ti bed pe lete hue

mai uske pass Jake

me: kya hua meri angel ko

janvi : aap bahoot gande ho mere liye gift nai laaye

me: are kisne kaha mai gift nai laya ye deko gift

mai usko gift dikata hu

gift ka name sunn Ke h vo ek dum uth jaati hai and gift ko dekti hai jo maine side mai raka hua ta

vo bed set utr ke gift kolne lagti hai

gift kulne ke Baad gift dekti h vo bahoot kush ho jati hai and chikti hui and nachti hue mere gale lag jati hai

gift mai ek pink colour ka bada sa teddy ta

janvi: thanku thanku bhiya I love you bhai

me: I love you 2 my angel

fir vo mom dad ko gift dikhane lagti hai

mai mom dad ko bi unka gift deta hu

mom gift kolti hai usme bahoot h sundr necklace ta and dad ke gift mai ek bahoot kimti watch ti

fir iss tarh sham hone lagti hai

sham ko mai and janvi shopping pe jate hai car leke

car Mai

me: aaj ka kya plan hai my angel

janvi : bhai sabse pele movie deknge fir shopping and dinner

me: Ohk. Let's go

fir hum mall aa jate hai and movie ki tickets leke movie dekne lagte hai

movie Ke baad shopping karne lagte hai mai thodi bahoot apne shopping karta hu because thode din baad scl bi st hone vala ta

dad ne mera admission BSC final year mai karva diya ta and sweetie bsc 1st year mai

shopping Ke baad hum dinner karte hai

tab tak 10 baj gye Te mom ko pele h bol diya tha maine

fir hum gar aa jate hai and mom dad se
thodi bahoot baat karke so jate hai sweetie mere sath soie hui ti



subh mai 4 baje ut jata Hu mai sweetie ko side mai karke uth jata Hu and gar ke bahr aake jogging karta hu and exercise karta hu

(Jack and Maria traning dene Ke baad wapis lout gye The)

mai 7 bje tak exercise vgra karta hu wapis gar aata Hu vaha garden mai dad exercise kar rehe te nai unke pass jata Hu

Me: gm dad
dad: GM beta

dad: traning kesi ti
me: good

dad: hmm. Breakfast ke Baad mere sath ana kuch kaam hai

me: ohk dad muje pta hai kya kaam hai

dad: Tuje kese pata hai
me: Baad mai bta dunga

dad: hmm.chalo AB

Fir hum gar mai aata jate hai mai room mai jaake dekta Hu to sweetie abi tak so rahi ti

mai usko forehead pe kisa karke uta ta hu vo uth ke merko gaal pe kiss karti hai

me: good morning my angel
janvi: gm my sweet Bhai

me: chl ab jaldi fresh hone jaa fir breakfast karna hai

for vo chali jati hai Apne room mai

mai bi fresh ho jata hu and niche jata Hu and mom ko GM wish karta hu vo bi gm wish karte hai

iss tarh breakfasht Ke baad mai room mai ake change karta hu and niche aata Hu vaha pe dad bi ready go chuke Te

me: chle dad
dad: ha chalo

mom: kaha jaa rehe ho aal log
dad: are kahi nai bas mai isse le jaa raha hu kuch kaam hai

Janvi: KYa kaam hai Dad

dad: are kuch nai office jaa raha hu ese scl mai kuch kaam hai to Maine kaha mai chod dunga (juth)

mom:ohk

fir mom and janvi ko byy bol Ke hum nikl jate hai

dad ki office CBI head quarter

vaha pauchne ke Baad dad Apne cabin mai jate hue

dad: sab jaldi dek lene ke baad cabin mai ana

me: ohk

Mai to dek raha ta sab kese work karte hai vagara

fir thodi der baad mai cabin mai jata hu and chair pe bet jata Hu

chair pe bet ke

me: so mujse kisko baat karni hai mere dad ko ya Raw chief ko

meri baat sunne Ke baad dad ko jese shock laga Ho

because dad Raw chief Ye baat kuch logo ko hi malum ta merko nai btya ta

dad: Ye baat tumko kisne btya

me: vimram ko pta nai hoga but "Killer"

Ko to pta hoga na dad

meri baat jesi hi puri hui dad ko firse jatka lga

dad: means USA mai underword ka safaya karne vala killer or koi nai mera beta vikram hai

maine ha mai mundi hila di

dad ko firse jatka lga

dad ne pani piya and thodi der baad bole tum killer kese

me: uske liye apko 1 sal piche jana hoga jab Mai usa gya ta



baki next update mai....................
Mast update hai bhai... Apna bhai Vikram kya kya keeya hoga usa mai Mazza aayega ..... 🎊🎊🥶
 
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Bhai maine ye to nahi kaha na ki story copy hai ....
Maine to sirf ye kaha ki ye kahani incomplete rahegi ya complet ho jayegi ... Story aapki acchi hai kuch changes hai sahi hai writing kamal ki hai ...
 
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Bhai maine ye to nahi kaha na ki story copy hai ....
Maine to sirf ye kaha ki ye kahani incomplete rahegi ya complet ho jayegi ... Story aapki acchi hai kuch changes hai sahi hai writing kamal ki hai ...
bhai 17 ke age tak me maximum 50 tak jane ki kosis karunga
 
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Update 9

Next day bi roj ki tarh bit gya

Delhi....... Vikram ke purane gar

Vikram ke jane Ke baad Kisi ko kuch bi farq nai pada sab Apne mai mast enjoy kar rahe the manhoosh chala gya tha Isliye

but didi(nisha didi) and Tiya gar valo Se narj The Isliye vo unse jyada baat nai karte The Bas kaam ki baat karte The unka Ye bartaav dek Ke sab ko thoda shock laga tha liken kisne kuch kaha nai jesa chlta tha vesa chlta rehne diya

•••••••••>hero side

mera traning bi chalu ta mai bahoot jald sab kuch sik raha ta

iss tarh samy bitta gya



After 13 years..........

Ab me 20 sal ka Ho gya hu mera body 6 pack hai and dekne mai 25 ka lagta Hu

aaj muje 3 sal ho gya tha USA Mai

aaj meri traing puri Ho gai ti

in 13 sal Mai Maine sabhi fighting skill and sabhi weapons mai expert and computer hacking mai full expert tha

training completely puri karne ke Baad aaj wapis india jana tha

Mai flight Mai bet gya ta Soch raha ta ki 3 sal Mai sab kese hoge

fir mai so jata Hu

flight land karti hai mai Mumbai airport se bahr ata hu vaha par dad, mom and janvi merko receive karne aaye hue te

mai airport se bahr aate h janvi jese muje dekhti hai doud ke ate h and merko rote hue gale lag jaati hai jisse uske ubhre hue mumme mere bisal chhati me dhas jate hain
lekin hamare man me sirf bhai behen wala pyar hi tha to mai bhi usko gale laga leta hu meri anko mai bhi ansu the

me: kesi hai meri angel

janvi: mai tik hu bhai
ya
hmm

mom: hum se bi mil lo hum bi yahi hai

fir mai mom se milta Hu

dad: aa gya mera sher

me: yes dad

fir hum gar aate hai and mai room mai fresh hone chla jata Hu

fir mai niche aata Hu
dining table pe sab mera intajar kar rehe the fir mai bi aa jata hu
for sab lunch karne lagte hai

janvi: bhai aaj muje apko shopping karne le jana hoga and abi tak apne muje apna gift bhi nai diya hai

me: gift?

mai ese react karta hu jese muje shock laga Ho

mom: kya hua beta

me: mom darsal vo mai sweetie ka gift lana bhul gya hu

itna sunte hi sweetie rone lagti hai apne room mai chali jati hai

mom : beta ab jaa usko uska gift de de muje malum hai tu majk kar raha hai

dad: kya tu majk kar raha hai

maine half mai gardn hilla di

dad: merko to laga tu sach mai uske liye gift nai laya

me: are ese kese bhul jau aap dono ke liye bi gift laya hu

thodi der baad bell bajta hai mai darwaja kolta Hu and gift leta hu jo bahoot bada ta

(Ye gift maine USA mai karida ta and delivery ke liye Bol diya ta)

mai fir jaldi gift leke sweetie ke room mai jata Hu vo abi bi ro rahi ti bed pe lete hue

mai uske pass Jake

me: kya hua meri angel ko

janvi : aap bahoot gande ho mere liye gift nai laaye

me: are kisne kaha mai gift nai laya ye deko gift

mai usko gift dikata hu

gift ka name sunn Ke h vo ek dum uth jaati hai and gift ko dekti hai jo maine side mai raka hua ta

vo bed set utr ke gift kolne lagti hai

gift kulne ke Baad gift dekti h vo bahoot kush ho jati hai and chikti hui and nachti hue mere gale lag jati hai

gift mai ek pink colour ka bada sa teddy ta

janvi: thanku thanku bhiya I love you bhai

me: I love you 2 my angel

fir vo mom dad ko gift dikhane lagti hai

mai mom dad ko bi unka gift deta hu

mom gift kolti hai usme bahoot h sundr necklace ta and dad ke gift mai ek bahoot kimti watch ti

fir iss tarh sham hone lagti hai

sham ko mai and janvi shopping pe jate hai car leke

car Mai

me: aaj ka kya plan hai my angel

janvi : bhai sabse pele movie deknge fir shopping and dinner

me: Ohk. Let's go

fir hum mall aa jate hai and movie ki tickets leke movie dekne lagte hai

movie Ke baad shopping karne lagte hai mai thodi bahoot apne shopping karta hu because thode din baad scl bi st hone vala ta

dad ne mera admission BSC final year mai karva diya ta and sweetie bsc 1st year mai

shopping Ke baad hum dinner karte hai

tab tak 10 baj gye Te mom ko pele h bol diya tha maine

fir hum gar aa jate hai and mom dad se
thodi bahoot baat karke so jate hai sweetie mere sath soie hui ti



subh mai 4 baje ut jata Hu mai sweetie ko side mai karke uth jata Hu and gar ke bahr aake jogging karta hu and exercise karta hu

(Jack and Maria traning dene Ke baad wapis lout gye The)

mai 7 bje tak exercise vgra karta hu wapis gar aata Hu vaha garden mai dad exercise kar rehe te nai unke pass jata Hu

Me: gm dad
dad: GM beta

dad: traning kesi ti
me: good

dad: hmm. Breakfast ke Baad mere sath ana kuch kaam hai

me: ohk dad muje pta hai kya kaam hai

dad: Tuje kese pata hai
me: Baad mai bta dunga

dad: hmm.chalo AB

Fir hum gar mai aata jate hai mai room mai jaake dekta Hu to sweetie abi tak so rahi ti

mai usko forehead pe kisa karke uta ta hu vo uth ke merko gaal pe kiss karti hai

me: good morning my angel
janvi: gm my sweet Bhai

me: chl ab jaldi fresh hone jaa fir breakfast karna hai

for vo chali jati hai Apne room mai

mai bi fresh ho jata hu and niche jata Hu and mom ko GM wish karta hu vo bi gm wish karte hai

iss tarh breakfasht Ke baad mai room mai ake change karta hu and niche aata Hu vaha pe dad bi ready go chuke Te

me: chle dad
dad: ha chalo

mom: kaha jaa rehe ho aal log
dad: are kahi nai bas mai isse le jaa raha hu kuch kaam hai

Janvi: KYa kaam hai Dad

dad: are kuch nai office jaa raha hu ese scl mai kuch kaam hai to Maine kaha mai chod dunga (juth)

mom:ohk

fir mom and janvi ko byy bol Ke hum nikl jate hai

dad ki office CBI head quarter

vaha pauchne ke Baad dad Apne cabin mai jate hue

dad: sab jaldi dek lene ke baad cabin mai ana

me: ohk

Mai to dek raha ta sab kese work karte hai vagara

fir thodi der baad mai cabin mai jata hu and chair pe bet jata Hu

chair pe bet ke

me: so mujse kisko baat karni hai mere dad ko ya Raw chief ko

meri baat sunne Ke baad dad ko jese shock laga Ho

because dad Raw chief Ye baat kuch logo ko hi malum ta merko nai btya ta

dad: Ye baat tumko kisne btya

me: vimram ko pta nai hoga but "Killer"

Ko to pta hoga na dad

meri baat jesi hi puri hui dad ko firse jatka lga

dad: means USA mai underword ka safaya karne vala killer or koi nai mera beta vikram hai

maine ha mai mundi hila di

dad ko firse jatka lga

dad ne pani piya and thodi der baad bole tum killer kese

me: uske liye apko 1 sal piche jana hoga jab Mai usa gya ta



baki next update mai....................
Wow awesome update 👏👍
 
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