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Rambo_004

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कहानी बहुत तेजी से आगे बढ़ा दी अपने। खैर सही ही किया, वरना एक एक दिन लिखना कोई जरूरी नहीं है।

लेकिन कुछ सवाल हैं यहां पर।

१. ओरिजिनल कहानी में हीरो के पास काली शक्तियां थी, शायद आपने वो नहीं रखी।

२. ओरिजिनल परिवार को कब पता चलेगा कि वो लोग गलत सोच रहे हैं हीरो के बारे में?

३. ये जो एकदम से नया कैरेक्टर लाया आपने, वो ही हीरोइन है या फिर किसी और को बनायेंगे, क्योंकि ओरिजिनल कहानी incest में थी।

ये सवाल इसीलिए, क्योंकि आपने खुद लिखा कि कहानी उस कहानी पर बेस्ड है।
me iss kahani ko abhitak copy paste kar raha hun Haan thoda age me changes kiye hain
 
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Rambo_004

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Yeh tow bada fast forward ho gaya dekhte dekhte Shaadi bhi ho gayi
Ab dekhte h Vikram ke mom or dad ko pata chalega tab unka kia reaction hota h
Sweety ka kia reaction hota h
Ab Vikram kisko yaad kerke Rona laga
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya shaandar update
mujhe bhi laga ki thoda fast forward ho gaya hai jiske liye ek aur naye update Lana hoga jisse wo waqt ka jiqr Kiya Jaa sake
 
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Mast hain,,age bado vai
 

Rambo_004

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UPDATE 12

SAB READERS KO UPDATE 11 BAHUT HI FAST FORWARD LAGA

HAN LAST PART 1SAAL KI BAAD KI HAIN



TO CHALO CHALTE HAIN HAM HAMARE USA TOUR PAR JAHAN HAM SHOOTING AUR MARTIAL ARTS SIKHE AUR KILLER NAME HASIL KIYE THE

AB SURU HOGI HAAMRE KILLER KI ACTUAL FACE

AAJ MUJHE USA ME AYE HUE 2SAAL HO CHUKE THE

JACK AUR MARIA KE SATH ME AB GHUL MIL CHUKA THA

JACK KO AB 46SAAL AUR MARIA KO AB 44 SAAL HO CHUKA THA

ME RAAT KO PYAS LAGNE KE KARAN MERA NIND TUT GAYA

UTH KAR DEKHTA HUN KI BOTTLE ME PANI NAHI HAI TO PANI LANE BAHAR AYA TO KUCHH AWAZ SUN ME WAHI KHADA HO GAYA

DEKHA TO JACK AUR MARIA KI KAMRE SE WO AWAZ AA RAHA THA

MARIA - AAHAHHH YESSS FUCK ME HARD JACK YESSSH

ME AWAZ SUN DOOR KE PASS CHALA GAYA DEKHA TO DOOR KHULA HAI TO MARIA PURI NANGI JACK KE LUND PAR BAITH KAR KUD RAHI THI

MENE WO SAB CHIJE BIOLOGY ME PADHA THA LEKIN AAJ KHUD KE ANKHO KE SAMNE DEKH KAR MERA PANT ME HALCHAL HONE LAGA

DEKHTE DEKHTE KAB ME DOOR KO HALKA KHOL DIYA MUJHE BHI PATA NAHI CHALA PAR USSE JO SOUND HUA USKO MARIA NE SUN LI THI AUR MERI AUR DHIRE SE MUD KAR DEKHNE LAGI

FIR HALKI MUSKURAKE FIR SE JACK KE LUND PAR KUDNE LAGI

JACK - BABY I AM CUMMING AAAAHHHHH YESSSSHHHH

MARIA - NO YOU CANT DO SUCH THING WAIT AAHAHHH AAAAHHH I HAVE NOT DONE YET

FIR JACK KUCHH HI PAL ME NIDHAL HO JATA HAI

TO MARIA USKE UPAR SE KHIN HOTE HUE UTH JATI HAI

AUR SUUDENLY MERE AUR MUD KAR DEKHTI HAI LEKIN KEHTI KUCHH NAHI

5 SE 10 SECOND HAM DONO KI ANKHE MILI HOGI ME DARKE WAHAN SE CHALA GAYA AUR PANI KE BOTTLE FRIDGE SE NIKAL KAR KHALI KAR DIYA

MERE JANE KE BAAD MARIA KE FACE PAR EK KATIL MUSKAN CHHA GAYI

AGLE DIN SUBAH4 BAJE UTHA AUR EXERCISE KARNE NIKLA TO MERE SATH MARIA AAJ AKELI AYI EXERCISE KARNE KELIYE

JABKI HAM TINO EK DATH EXERCISE KARTE THE

ME MARIA KO AKELE DEKH KUCHH PUCHH NAHI SAKA DUE TO LAST NIGHT INCIDENCE

HAM DONO PEHLE STRETCH KARNE LAGE

LEKIN AAJ MARIA KUCHH ALAG HI MOOD ME THI

AAP KO EK BAAT BATA DUN KI MARIA KI UMAR HALAKI 44 HAI LEKIN DIKHTI BILKUL 26-30 SAAL KI

UNHONE APNE BODY KO ACHHA KHASA MAINTAIN KAR KE RAKHA HAI

AAJ WO EXERCISE KELIYE EK ESE OUTFIT PEHNE THE KI KYA BATAUN

unke top me se unki nipple fut ke nikal raha tha mano wo top ko faad dega
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AUR PANT ME UNKI CHUT KI LINES PURA PATA CHAL RAHA THA Ek PATLI SI TRANSPARENT PANT JISME UNKI CHUT ARAM SE DIKH RAHA THA
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YEAH DEKH MERE PANT ME TAMBU BAN GAYA THA

MARIA MERE TAMBU KO DEKH BAHUT HI KHUS HO RAHI THI

LEKIN PEHLE ESA KABHI MERE SATH HUA NAHI THA

MERE SARIR KA TEMPERATURE BADHNE LAGA THA AUR PASINA BINA EXERCISE KE BHI NIKALNE LAGA THA

MARIA - ARE YOU OKEY BIKRAM

ME - HMMM YEAHH I'M OKEY

WO MERE PASS AGAYI

AUR MUJHE PAS KE CHAIR ME BETHA DI

MARIA - YOU ARE SWEATING HARD WITHOUT ANY EXERCISE

AUR WO MERE LUND KE PAS APNI HATH KO LETE HUE MERE PANT KE UBHAR PAR APNA HATH FERNE LAGI

JISSE MUJHE BAHUT HI UNCOMFORTABLE FEEL HUA TO ME WAHAN SE ROOM ME CHALA GAYA AUR BATHROOM ME GHUS GAYA AUR SHOWER ON KAR KE NAHANE LAGA

MUJHE SAMAJH ME NAHI AA RAHA THA YEAH KYA HUA HAI MERE SATH

15MIN SHOWER LENW KE BAAD JA KAR MERE SARIR KI GARMAHAT THODA KAM HUA TAB JA KAR ME BAHAR AAKAR APNA KAPDE BADLE AUR KITCHEN SE KHANA NIKAL KAR KHANE LAGA

TABHI MARIA FIR SE MERE PASS AGAYI JO ABHI ABHI EXERCISE KARKE AYA RAHI THI

UNKE PURA BADAN PASINE SE BHIGA HUA THA JISSE UNKE PURA SARIR ME KAPDE CHIPAK GAYE THE AUR SATH HI SATH PASINE SE WO TRANSPARENT HO GAYE THE

UNKI PURI KI PURI SARIR DIKH RAHA THA

MANO WO FULL NANGI KHADI HO MERE SAMNE

MARIA MUJHE DEKH KAR APNE MUMMO KO HILATE HUE MERE PASS
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ANE LAGI


UNKO DEKH MERA LUND FIR SE KHADA HO GAYA AUR MERE SANSE TEJ HONE LAGI AUR PASINA CHHUTNE LAGA

MARIA - BIKRAM ARE YOU OKEY .?

ME - YEAH I'M DEFINITELY FINE

MARIA - NO YOU SEEM TO BE ABNORMAL

LET ME CHECK

WO MERE PASS BAITH GAYI AUR MERE SARIR ME HATH LAGANE LAGI

WO MUJHE CHECK KARNE KE BAHANE MERE LUND ME HATH LAGANE LAGI
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JISSE MERA LUND KA PRESSURE AUR BHI BADHNE LAGA

MUJHE AJIB LAGA JISSE ME KHANA ADHURA KARKE FIRSE BATHROOM ME GHUS GAYA AUR LUND ME PANI DAL KAR USSE THANDA KARNE LAGA

THANDA HONE KE BAAD JAB ME BAHAR AYA TO SAMNE MARIA KHADI THI

MARIA - WHAT HAPPEN BIKRAM

ME AB THODA ASAHAJ MEHSUS KAR RAHA THA

ME - MARIA I.... I....

FEEL SOME STRANGE THING UNDER MY PANT SINCE I SAW YOU NAKED YESTERDAY ( MERE PANT ME KUCHH AJIB SA LAGA RAHA HAI JAB SE TUMHE ME KAL NANGA DEKHA THA )

MARIA - DONT WORRY BIKRAM ITS NORMAL FOR EVERY GROWN MAN

YOU ARE NOW GROWN UP

AUR USNE MERE NICHE TOWEL ME DEKHNE LAGI

MARIA - YOU HAVE STUDIED IN YOUR SCHOOL REGARDING REPRODUCTION IN YOUR BIOLOGY CLASS
(TUM SCHOOL ME BIOLOGY ME PRAJANAN KE BARE ME TO PADHE HI HOGE)

ME - YES

MARIA - WE WERE DOING IN PRACTICAL YESTERDAY NIGHT
(HAM KAL RAT WO PRACTICAL KAR RAHE THE )
AND ONE THING YOU HAVE LEARNT EVERY TACTICS TO FIGHT AGAINST YOUR ENEMIES BUT YOU ARE LACK IN ONE THING WHICH MAY BE YOUR BIG MISTAKE THAT IS SEX (EK AUR BAAT TUMNE SAB LADHAI ME MAHARAT HASIL KAR LIYE HO SIVAY EK KE JO TUMHARI BADI GALTI HO SAKTA HAI AUR WO HAI CHUDAI )

ME - BUT HOW (WO KESE)

MARIA - ALL MEN ARE THINK BY THEIR DICK ( HAR MARD APNE LUND SE SUNTA HAI)

AND YOUR ENEMY MIGHT TEMPT YOU AND AT THE END YOU WILL KILLED BY YOUR ENEMY WITHOUT YOUR KNOWLEDGE (AUR TUMHARA SATRU TUMHE USKA KAR MARWA BHI SAKTA HAI TUMHE PATA LAGE BINA )


ME - THEN HOW CAN I FIGHT IN THAT CONDITION ( ME USS SAMAY KAISE LADH SAKTA HUN)

MARIA - YOU HAVE A VERY BIG FAT DICK

(TUMHARE PASS EK BADA MOTA LUND HAI)

IT WILL BE YOUR WEAPON (YAHI TUMHARA SASTRA HOGA)
IT CAN MAKE ANY WOMAN INTO YOUR SLAVE
(YEAH HAR KISI BHI LADKI KO TUMHARA GULAM BANA SAKTA HAI )
ME - HOW CAN IT MAKE ANY WOMAN INTO MY SLAVE ( KAISE YEAH KISIBHI AURAT KO MERA GULAM BANA SAKTA HAI )

MARIA - I WILL EXPLAIN AND GIVE EVERY INSTRUCTIONS AND TRAIN YOU WITH YOU WEAPON AFTER YOU ARE 18

ME - YOU REMBERED MY BIRTHDAY

MARIA - YES OFCOURSE

I HAVE A SURPRISE ON YOUR BIRTHDAY BIKRAM

DONT TELL JACK ABOUT THIS CONVERSATION

NOW GET READY AND GO TO COLLEGE

ITNA BOL KAR MARIA MERE KAMRE SE CHALI GAYI
ME MARIA KO JATE DEKH RAHA THA


ME FIR READY HO KAR COLLEGE CHALA GAYA


ESE HI DIN KHATAM HO GAYA

RAAT KE 12 BAJE MERE MOBILE KI GHANTI BAJNE LAGA

TRING .....TRING..... TRING...... TRING.....

ME SOYA HUA THA MOBILE KI GHANTI KE WAJAH SE MERI NIND TUT GAYI

ME APNI ANKHE MALTE HUE ANKHE KHOLE AUR MOBILE KO DEKHA TO DAD KA CALL THA

ME - HELLO DAD PRANAM

DAD - JITE RAHO MERE BACHCHE

ME - DAD ITNI RAAT ME

DAD - ARE GHANI DOPAHAR KO RAAT BOL RAHA HAI

ARE HAAN AB TO TUM USA ME HO

ME (ARE HAAN TO ME USA ME HUN)

FIR DAD KE SATH SATH MOM AUR JANVI TINO EK SAATH BOLNE LAGE

HAPPY BIRTHDAY BETA

HAPPY BIRTHDAY BHAIYAA

ME - THANK YOU VERY MUCH MOM,Dad aur Janvi

Tino ne mujhe raat ko call karke bahut hi bada surprise de diye

FIR HAM CHARON KI BAAT LAGBHAG 2BAJE TAK CHALA AUR FIR ME SO GAYA

AAJ ME THODA DER SE UTHA TAB TAK JACK AUR MARIA DONO KAHIN CHALE GAYE THE

ME NICHE AYA TO ROOM KO EK ALAG HI DHANG SE SAJAYA GAYA THA

MANO AAJ KISI JASN KA DIN HO

PICHLE 2 SALON SE TO MERE BIRTHDAY KO ESE NAHI MANAYA HAI KOI LEKIN ISS BAR ITNE BADE TARIKE SE TO NAHI KARNE WALE AUR KOI WAJAH HO SAKTA HAI

YEAH SOCH KAR ME FRESH HONE CHALA GAYA




DEKHTE HAIN AGLE UPDATE ME MARIA KYA GURU GYAN DETI HAI BIKRAM KO .........
 

ARTICUNO

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UPDATE 12

SAB READERS KO UPDATE 11 BAHUT HI FAST FORWARD LAGA

HAN LAST PART 1SAAL KI BAAD KI HAIN



TO CHALO CHALTE HAIN HAM HAMARE USA TOUR PAR JAHAN HAM SHOOTING AUR MARTIAL ARTS SIKHE AUR KILLER NAME HASIL KIYE THE

AB SURU HOGI HAAMRE KILLER KI ACTUAL FACE

AAJ MUJHE USA ME AYE HUE 2SAAL HO CHUKE THE

JACK AUR MARIA KE SATH ME AB GHUL MIL CHUKA THA

JACK KO AB 46SAAL AUR MARIA KO AB 44 SAAL HO CHUKA THA

ME RAAT KO PYAS LAGNE KE KARAN MERA NIND TUT GAYA

UTH KAR DEKHTA HUN KI BOTTLE ME PANI NAHI HAI TO PANI LANE BAHAR AYA TO KUCHH AWAZ SUN ME WAHI KHADA HO GAYA

DEKHA TO JACK AUR MARIA KI KAMRE SE WO AWAZ AA RAHA THA

MARIA - AAHAHHH YESSS FUCK ME HARD JACK YESSSH

ME AWAZ SUN DOOR KE PASS CHALA GAYA DEKHA TO DOOR KHULA HAI TO MARIA PURI NANGI JACK KE LUND PAR BAITH KAR KUD RAHI THI

MENE WO SAB CHIJE BIOLOGY ME PADHA THA LEKIN AAJ KHUD KE ANKHO KE SAMNE DEKH KAR MERA PANT ME HALCHAL HONE LAGA

DEKHTE DEKHTE KAB ME DOOR KO HALKA KHOL DIYA MUJHE BHI PATA NAHI CHALA PAR USSE JO SOUND HUA USKO MARIA NE SUN LI THI AUR MERI AUR DHIRE SE MUD KAR DEKHNE LAGI

FIR HALKI MUSKURAKE FIR SE JACK KE LUND PAR KUDNE LAGI

JACK - BABY I AM CUMMING AAAAHHHHH YESSSSHHHH

MARIA - NO YOU CANT DO SUCH THING WAIT AAHAHHH AAAAHHH I HAVE NOT DONE YET

FIR JACK KUCHH HI PAL ME NIDHAL HO JATA HAI

TO MARIA USKE UPAR SE KHIN HOTE HUE UTH JATI HAI

AUR SUUDENLY MERE AUR MUD KAR DEKHTI HAI LEKIN KEHTI KUCHH NAHI

5 SE 10 SECOND HAM DONO KI ANKHE MILI HOGI ME DARKE WAHAN SE CHALA GAYA AUR PANI KE BOTTLE FRIDGE SE NIKAL KAR KHALI KAR DIYA

MERE JANE KE BAAD MARIA KE FACE PAR EK KATIL MUSKAN CHHA GAYI

AGLE DIN SUBAH4 BAJE UTHA AUR EXERCISE KARNE NIKLA TO MERE SATH MARIA AAJ AKELI AYI EXERCISE KARNE KELIYE

JABKI HAM TINO EK DATH EXERCISE KARTE THE

ME MARIA KO AKELE DEKH KUCHH PUCHH NAHI SAKA DUE TO LAST NIGHT INCIDENCE

HAM DONO PEHLE STRETCH KARNE LAGE

LEKIN AAJ MARIA KUCHH ALAG HI MOOD ME THI

AAP KO EK BAAT BATA DUN KI MARIA KI UMAR HALAKI 44 HAI LEKIN DIKHTI BILKUL 26-30 SAAL KI

UNHONE APNE BODY KO ACHHA KHASA MAINTAIN KAR KE RAKHA HAI

AAJ WO EXERCISE KELIYE EK ESE OUTFIT PEHNE THE KI KYA BATAUN

unke top me se unki nipple fut ke nikal raha tha mano wo top ko faad dega
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AUR PANT ME UNKI CHUT KI LINES PURA PATA CHAL RAHA THA Ek PATLI SI TRANSPARENT PANT JISME UNKI CHUT ARAM SE DIKH RAHA THA
44165401.gif

YEAH DEKH MERE PANT ME TAMBU BAN GAYA THA

MARIA MERE TAMBU KO DEKH BAHUT HI KHUS HO RAHI THI

LEKIN PEHLE ESA KABHI MERE SATH HUA NAHI THA

MERE SARIR KA TEMPERATURE BADHNE LAGA THA AUR PASINA BINA EXERCISE KE BHI NIKALNE LAGA THA

MARIA - ARE YOU OKEY BIKRAM

ME - HMMM YEAHH I'M OKEY

WO MERE PASS AGAYI

AUR MUJHE PAS KE CHAIR ME BETHA DI

MARIA - YOU ARE SWEATING HARD WITHOUT ANY EXERCISE

AUR WO MERE LUND KE PAS APNI HATH KO LETE HUE MERE PANT KE UBHAR PAR APNA HATH FERNE LAGI

JISSE MUJHE BAHUT HI UNCOMFORTABLE FEEL HUA TO ME WAHAN SE ROOM ME CHALA GAYA AUR BATHROOM ME GHUS GAYA AUR SHOWER ON KAR KE NAHANE LAGA

MUJHE SAMAJH ME NAHI AA RAHA THA YEAH KYA HUA HAI MERE SATH

15MIN SHOWER LENW KE BAAD JA KAR MERE SARIR KI GARMAHAT THODA KAM HUA TAB JA KAR ME BAHAR AAKAR APNA KAPDE BADLE AUR KITCHEN SE KHANA NIKAL KAR KHANE LAGA

TABHI MARIA FIR SE MERE PASS AGAYI JO ABHI ABHI EXERCISE KARKE AYA RAHI THI

UNKE PURA BADAN PASINE SE BHIGA HUA THA JISSE UNKE PURA SARIR ME KAPDE CHIPAK GAYE THE AUR SATH HI SATH PASINE SE WO TRANSPARENT HO GAYE THE

UNKI PURI KI PURI SARIR DIKH RAHA THA

MANO WO FULL NANGI KHADI HO MERE SAMNE

MARIA MUJHE DEKH KAR APNE MUMMO KO HILATE HUE MERE PASS
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ANE LAGI


UNKO DEKH MERA LUND FIR SE KHADA HO GAYA AUR MERE SANSE TEJ HONE LAGI AUR PASINA CHHUTNE LAGA

MARIA - BIKRAM ARE YOU OKEY .?

ME - YEAH I'M DEFINITELY FINE

MARIA - NO YOU SEEM TO BE ABNORMAL

LET ME CHECK

WO MERE PASS BAITH GAYI AUR MERE SARIR ME HATH LAGANE LAGI

WO MUJHE CHECK KARNE KE BAHANE MERE LUND ME HATH LAGANE LAGI
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JISSE MERA LUND KA PRESSURE AUR BHI BADHNE LAGA

MUJHE AJIB LAGA JISSE ME KHANA ADHURA KARKE FIRSE BATHROOM ME GHUS GAYA AUR LUND ME PANI DAL KAR USSE THANDA KARNE LAGA

THANDA HONE KE BAAD JAB ME BAHAR AYA TO SAMNE MARIA KHADI THI

MARIA - WHAT HAPPEN BIKRAM

ME AB THODA ASAHAJ MEHSUS KAR RAHA THA

ME - MARIA I.... I....

FEEL SOME STRANGE THING UNDER MY PANT SINCE I SAW YOU NAKED YESTERDAY ( MERE PANT ME KUCHH AJIB SA LAGA RAHA HAI JAB SE TUMHE ME KAL NANGA DEKHA THA )

MARIA - DONT WORRY BIKRAM ITS NORMAL FOR EVERY GROWN MAN

YOU ARE NOW GROWN UP

AUR USNE MERE NICHE TOWEL ME DEKHNE LAGI

MARIA - YOU HAVE STUDIED IN YOUR SCHOOL REGARDING REPRODUCTION IN YOUR BIOLOGY CLASS
(TUM SCHOOL ME BIOLOGY ME PRAJANAN KE BARE ME TO PADHE HI HOGE)

ME - YES

MARIA - WE WERE DOING IN PRACTICAL YESTERDAY NIGHT
(HAM KAL RAT WO PRACTICAL KAR RAHE THE )
AND ONE THING YOU HAVE LEARNT EVERY TACTICS TO FIGHT AGAINST YOUR ENEMIES BUT YOU ARE LACK IN ONE THING WHICH MAY BE YOUR BIG MISTAKE THAT IS SEX (EK AUR BAAT TUMNE SAB LADHAI ME MAHARAT HASIL KAR LIYE HO SIVAY EK KE JO TUMHARI BADI GALTI HO SAKTA HAI AUR WO HAI CHUDAI )

ME - BUT HOW (WO KESE)

MARIA - ALL MEN ARE THINK BY THEIR DICK ( HAR MARD APNE LUND SE SUNTA HAI)

AND YOUR ENEMY MIGHT TEMPT YOU AND AT THE END YOU WILL KILLED BY YOUR ENEMY WITHOUT YOUR KNOWLEDGE (AUR TUMHARA SATRU TUMHE USKA KAR MARWA BHI SAKTA HAI TUMHE PATA LAGE BINA )


ME - THEN HOW CAN I FIGHT IN THAT CONDITION ( ME USS SAMAY KAISE LADH SAKTA HUN)

MARIA - YOU HAVE A VERY BIG FAT DICK

(TUMHARE PASS EK BADA MOTA LUND HAI)

IT WILL BE YOUR WEAPON (YAHI TUMHARA SASTRA HOGA)
IT CAN MAKE ANY WOMAN INTO YOUR SLAVE
(YEAH HAR KISI BHI LADKI KO TUMHARA GULAM BANA SAKTA HAI )
ME - HOW CAN IT MAKE ANY WOMAN INTO MY SLAVE ( KAISE YEAH KISIBHI AURAT KO MERA GULAM BANA SAKTA HAI )

MARIA - I WILL EXPLAIN AND GIVE EVERY INSTRUCTIONS AND TRAIN YOU WITH YOU WEAPON AFTER YOU ARE 18

ME - YOU REMBERED MY BIRTHDAY

MARIA - YES OFCOURSE

I HAVE A SURPRISE ON YOUR BIRTHDAY BIKRAM

DONT TELL JACK ABOUT THIS CONVERSATION

NOW GET READY AND GO TO COLLEGE

ITNA BOL KAR MARIA MERE KAMRE SE CHALI GAYI
ME MARIA KO JATE DEKH RAHA THA


ME FIR READY HO KAR COLLEGE CHALA GAYA


ESE HI DIN KHATAM HO GAYA

RAAT KE 12 BAJE MERE MOBILE KI GHANTI BAJNE LAGA

TRING .....TRING..... TRING...... TRING.....

ME SOYA HUA THA MOBILE KI GHANTI KE WAJAH SE MERI NIND TUT GAYI

ME APNI ANKHE MALTE HUE ANKHE KHOLE AUR MOBILE KO DEKHA TO DAD KA CALL THA

ME - HELLO DAD PRANAM

DAD - JITE RAHO MERE BACHCHE

ME - DAD ITNI RAAT ME

DAD - ARE GHANI DOPAHAR KO RAAT BOL RAHA HAI

ARE HAAN AB TO TUM USA ME HO

ME (ARE HAAN TO ME USA ME HUN)

FIR DAD KE SATH SATH MOM AUR JANVI TINO EK SAATH BOLNE LAGE

HAPPY BIRTHDAY BETA

HAPPY BIRTHDAY BHAIYAA

ME - THANK YOU VERY MUCH MOM,Dad aur Janvi

Tino ne mujhe raat ko call karke bahut hi bada surprise de diye

FIR HAM CHARON KI BAAT LAGBHAG 2BAJE TAK CHALA AUR FIR ME SO GAYA

AAJ ME THODA DER SE UTHA TAB TAK JACK AUR MARIA DONO KAHIN CHALE GAYE THE

ME NICHE AYA TO ROOM KO EK ALAG HI DHANG SE SAJAYA GAYA THA

MANO AAJ KISI JASN KA DIN HO

PICHLE 2 SALON SE TO MERE BIRTHDAY KO ESE NAHI MANAYA HAI KOI LEKIN ISS BAR ITNE BADE TARIKE SE TO NAHI KARNE WALE AUR KOI WAJAH HO SAKTA HAI

YEAH SOCH KAR ME FRESH HONE CHALA GAYA




DEKHTE HAIN AGLE UPDATE ME MARIA KYA GURU GYAN DETI HAI BIKRAM KO .........
Mast update hai bhai .... Ab dekhta hai Maria kitna maje karati hai Vikram ko aur kya kya sikhayegi Vikram ko Mazza aa yega 🎊🎊🎊🎊
 

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Flashback



mai apna 10th complete hone ke baad apna 11th ko pas ke ek college me complete Kiya tha isi bich
mera physical and computer and sabhi fight ki traning complete ho gai thi ab bas latest gun vagera ka traning baki tha sath me kuchh khass kisam ke martial arts ke bare me janna baki tha jis ke liye usa jana tha jack ne bola tha because vaha sabse latest guns hai aur martial arts ke mahaguru ab usa me hai isiliye traning asani se mil sakti hai



fir 11th ke baad mai, jack and maria usa aa gye



usa land karne ke baad hum jack ke gar aa gye



jack: ye gar hai VIKRAM



me: gar to Acha hai



fir vo muje gar ke niche bane under ground training ground mai le gai



vaha pe tarh tarh ke guns and baki hatiyar rake hue te



next din meri traning start ho gai
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and study bi chalti thi

Gun ke training ke sath hi me jack sath chal kar martial arts ke mahaguru se milkar mere training ke bare me puchha .

unhone pehle mere test kiye
unke sare test me pass ho gaya

jisse me unse training lene keliye pura kabil hua

unhone mujhese khus hue aur mujhe training Dene ko Raji ho gaye
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mene bahut jaldi sare martial arts me maharat hasil kar liya

isi bich mene apna 12 th wahi par khatam kar liya aur Bachelor ki study bhi suru kar diya

Mere sar par ab sirf
REVENGE ka bahut sawar tha jiske liye mujhe takat ke sath sath dhan ki bhi abasyakta hoga .

Mujhe malum hua ki Vaha pe street fights hoti usme maine part liya ta maine ek mask pehne hue tha jis mai mera chera nai dikhta tha vaha pe fights kiya jis ke bare mai kis ko pta nai ta because mai ye bol ke niklta tha ki ghum ke aata hu



vaha pe mai as Killer name fight kiya tha jis mai maine vaha ke sabse bade fighter ko tapka diya jiss se muje kafi paisa mila



so maine ek company register karva liya



ek din mai raat ko vapis gar jaa raha ta so raste me ek larki mili jo indian lag rahi ti jo behos thi maine usko hospital le gya and vaha pe usko hosh aaya and lta chla ke uska name "Myra" hai



usne mba kiya hua ta uski anko mai muje achiye najr aye maine usko company ke bare mai btya usko md banne ka kaha jis par uane mana kar diya but kafi manne ke baad vo mani



fir company st ki as TNJ groups of company



meri traning bi chl rahi mai street figts mai mashhoor ho gya ta baad maine fbi ke computer ko hack kiya and vaha ke sabse bade don ke bare mai pta lagya



fir maine direct boss ki info mili thi usse pta chla ki vo street fights Vahi host karta hai jo badi badi fights hoti hai vo ese hi ek fight mai usko mila maine uske phone ko hack kar liya ese to bahoot hard tha but jis fight mai mila tha usme mai jit gya tha vo mujse mila and bate kar raha tha uss dauran maine phone no exchange kiya tab vo do minutes ke liya bahar gya tab maine ek link uske no par beja and vo download ho gya so uska phone mere control mai



baad mai ghar aane ke baad regular jo hota tha vo hota raha



meri company bhi ab bahoot achi chl rahi ti

iss trh time niklta gya mere traning bi complet hone ko aye thi



meri company 1 sal pura hote hote ab worlds top 10 mai thi but kisi ko owner ka nam pta nai tha



Ab mere india aane ke time ho gya ta 3 days baki thi flight ke tab maine ek din pehle boss ke phone se sabhi gundo ko ek jagh bulya jaha pe boss pehle se maujd tha



va pe sabko dekh ke vo shok ho gya isse pele vo kuch bolta maine vaha pe jo bomb laga rakha tha vo blast kar diye jis mai sabi tapk gye fir mai vaha jaldi vaha pauncha and killer ka tag lga diya and vaha se nikl gya uske pass ke sabi cameras mere control mai the



fir kya kisi ko pata nai chla and next din flight se india vapis



maine last din Isliye rakha ta because vaha se safe nikla ja ske



ab killer name pure world mai famous ho gya ta



flashback end





meri bate sunne ke dad ka rang ud gya ta



dad: waahhhh kamal kar diya killer

me: thanks dad

dad: YA FIR KAHUN "AGENT VIDYUT"

me: Ahh dad



dad hasne lage



dad ne muje apna id and offical gun diya ab mai shock mai tha



muje dek ke



dad: mere naak niche tum raw join karoge aur mujhe pata nahi chalega
wo bhi raw chief ko

Me - lekin dad apko pata chalne me pure 1 saal lag gaye

Dad - sahi kaha Bikram
tab me raw chief nahi tha na aur jinhone tumhe recruit kiye the unhone sare agent ka details ko confidential rakhte the

jo bhi ho ab mujhe pata chal hi Gaya isi liye tumko Aaj jakar tumhara yaha deposite hue I'd aur tumhara fav gun dene ka soubhagya mujhe mila


me: thanks dad

Dad - thik hai ab tum Ghar jao me saam ko tumse milta hun


fir mai gar aa gya



meri company ke branch india mai bhi suru ho gye the idhr bhi achi grow ho rahi thi



ab mera college open hone keliye
ek din baki tha



Next day



mai roj ki trh utha exercise kiya and 7 baje janvi ko uthya and fresh hoke break fast kiya fir college ke liye niklne lage



bahr niklte hi muje ek new super bike dike jise dek mai shok ho gya

mom dad has rahe te

janvi to bahoot kush ho gai ti bike dek ke

me: dad ye sab kya hai

dad: surprise hai ab isse college
jana

mai bhi mana nai kar pya





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