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Thanks bhai....
But writter koi accha ya bura nhi hota....readers ko story pasand aaye to writter best....bas ye yaad rakhe ...
Lage raho....aur kuch naya tadka lagao....
Gud luck....
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Thanks bhai....
But writter koi accha ya bura nhi hota....readers ko story pasand aaye to writter best....bas ye yaad rakhe ...
Lage raho....aur kuch naya tadka lagao....
Gud luck....
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Wahin dusri aur raju amit se milkar bhagta hua mandir k pas jata hai kisi se milne aur kehta hai kal wo mere sath subah 7 baje ki bus me chalega tum time se sahi jagah pahunch jana , aur han! Mera kam bhi ho jana chahiye tumhara to maine kar diya ab agar mera kam na bna to bhul jao sab itna kehkar raju wahan se nikal jata hai aur wo dusra shaks khush ho kar kal ka plan banane lagta hai k aisa moka fir nhi milega kal kaise bhi kar k apna kam karna hoga
Ab aage-
Subah Amit uth kar apni routine se akhade me jata hai magar aaj waqt se pehle laut ata hai kyunki aaj raju k sath shehar jana tha ghar aa kar jaldi se tayar hota hai gauri ko bhi malum tha jaldi jayega to uske liye nashta pehle hi se bana deti hai nashta kar k amit ghar se nikalne ko tyar hota hai k gauri use apne kamre me bulati hai
Gauri: amit ye le kuch paise rakhle khali hath jayega kya shehar
Itna kehkar wo amit ki jeb me paise dal deti hai
Amit : maa iski koi zarurat nhi hai mere pas to pehle hi itne paise hain main bhala kya karunga itne paison ka
Gauri: bas chup kar jo bol rhi hun wo sun wahan jakar kahin awaragardi mat karna kisi anjan admi se jyada bat ni karna na kisi kuch lekar khana aur han agar waqt ho to apni mausi k yahan bhi chakkar lga Ana
Amit: theek hai ma jo hukam magar mausi k yahan ni ja paunga agar wahan gya to raat ho jayegi ate ate
Gauri : acha acha rehne dena magar time se wapis aa jana
Amit: theek hai maa ab chalta hun
Itna kehkar amit room se nikalta hai tabhi chhoti maami mil jati hai
Deepika: amit bat sun, ye le kuch paise rakhle aur ache se party dena apne dosto ko koi kanjoosi ni
Itna kehkar wo amit ki jeb me paise dal deti hai
Amit : are ye kya mami pehle hi maa ne itne paise de diye hain aur mere pas apne bhi to hain
Deepika: bas bas pta hai mujhe, paisa jitna ho acha hai. Aur han time se laut ana ye na ho didi tere piche shehar hi na pahunch jaye
Fir amit ghar se nikal kar raju ki taraf jane lgta hai to raju samne se ata hua dikhta hai aur dono dost bus stop ki taraf nikal padte hain
Bus stop par koi khas bheed nhi thi is time me bas me normal hi bheed hoti thi dono dost bus pakad lete hain aur apni seat par baith jate hain Amit ki nazar manjri par padti hai jo aaj khoob tayar ho kar laal salwar suit me apni saheli k sath baithi thi ek pal to amit ki nazar uspar ruk gyi aaj wo bahut khoobsurat lag rhi thi. Amit janta tha k manjri use pasand karti hai magar amit k dil me aisa kuch ni tha, udhar manjari bhi amit ko dekh rhi thi jab dono ki nazar milti hai to dono muskura dete hain
Amit : Abe sale manjari itni subah kahan ja rhi hai tayar ho kar
Raju : dekh bhai bura mat manna jo bhi bolna ho bad me bol lena darasal main manjari ki saheli renu ko pasand karta hun aur usse shadi karna chahta hun, bade hath pair jodkar maine manjari ko manaya hai k tu apne janmdin ki party de rha hai aur tune manjari ko bhi bulaya hai aur renu ko sath lane ko kaha, tu to janta hai uska baap sala use ghar se kahin bahar nikalne ni deta to kisi tarah manjari ki help se aaj main apne dil ki bat karne wala hun renu se, ab apne yar ki khushi k liye tu itna bhi ni kar sakta
( Darasal kal raju bhagkar manjari k pass hi gaya tha usne manjari ki help ka sauda kiya tha Amit k sath uski setting karwane me badle me manjari raju ki setting renu se karwayegi)
Amit: chup sale band kar apna emotional drama tu apne chakkar me mujhe kyu fasa rha hai tujhe pata hai na main ladkiyon se door rehta hun aur tu mera nam lekar manjari ko bula liya, kya tere ko ni pta wo kaise mujhe dekhti hai ab to wo samjhegi k Maine use bulaya matlab main use pasand karta hun
Raju: dekh bhai agar wo tujhe pasand karti hai to tu bhi use pasand kar le na waise bhi usse khoobsurat ladki poore gaon me nhi, kab tak brahmachari bna firega yahi to din hai jawani k , main to bolta hun tu bhi use aaj lapak le wo to kab se tayar baithi hai ek tu hai aise hi bhaaw khaye ja rha hai
Amit : bakwas band kar tujhe pta hai na main in sab baton me nhi padne wala
Raju: yar dekhle meri zindagi ka sawal hai main renu se shadi karna chahta hun ab agar tu meri madad ni karega to aur kaun karega
Waise bhi manjari kaun sa tujhe kha jayegi baten hi to karni hai mujhe thoda waqt mil jayega renu se bat karne ka
Amit: acha theek hai magar gaon me agar kisi ko pta chal gya to socha hai kitni badnami hogi mere gharwale mujhe ghar se nikal denge
Raju: are gaon me kisi ko kuch pta ni chalega wo alag ja rhi hain hum alag hum sidha cinema me hi milenge
Amit : chal theek hai yari k nam par ye bhi manzoor hai magar agar koi lafda hua to apna soch lena
Raju: (haskar) tere liye jan hazir hai mere yar
Yun hi baten karte hue ek ghante me bas rukti chalti shehar pahunch jati hai fir dono dost aur dono sahelian alag alag auto se cinema pahunch jati hain amit ticket lene k liye line me lagta hai to dekhta hai manjari bhi ticket ki line me thi amit raju ko ishara kar k manjari ko ticket lene se rokne ko kehta hai fir amit tickets le kar raju k sath manjari ki taraf jata hai
Manjari: ( manjari aaj gulab ki tarah khili khili lag rhi thi lal suit me wo aaj pakka irada kar k ayi the k aaj amit se dil ka haal bayan kar k hi rahegi , amit ko gulab ka phool dete hue)
Janmdin mubarak ho bhagwan kare aap hamesha yunhi haste khelte rhen aapko wo har khushi mile jo aap chahte hain
Amit : ( thoda narvous ho jata hai k kya kahe kya kare) shukriya manjari iski kya zarurat thi tum itna risk lekar kyun ayi shehar agar kisi ko pta chala to kitni badnami hogi
Manjari : to kya hua apka janmdin tha to kaise na ati apke liye sab kabool hai
Amit hairani se manjari ko dekhne lagta hai , tabhi raju bich me bolta hai
Raju : chalo yar jaldi karo nhi to picture nikal jayegi
Fir charon ander hall me jate hain subah ka show tha isliye jyada rush ni tha charon ki seat sath me hi thi pehle Amit baith jata hai uske sath manjari baith jati hai fir renu fir raju, amit raju ki taraf dekhta hai to raju ankhon se request karta hai ishare se, Amit bhi chup kar k baith jata hai. Manjari k dil me aaj khushion ki shehnaiyan baj rahi thi jane kab se wo amit k sath waqt bitana chahti thi taki wo apna haal -e-dil bayan kar sake pta ni kab se wo amit ko apna sab kuch man chuki thi aur ek amit tha k use ignore karta rehta tha
Thodi der me lights bujh jati hain aur movie shuru ho jati hai ye ek romantic love story ki hindi movie thi aur aap to jante hain k Bollywood ki filmo me kiss karna to aam bat hai aise hi film me jab kissing scene ata hai hero heroine k labon par apne lab rakhta hai to Amit k dil me halchal hone lagti hai akhir tha to wo bhi gabhru jawan wahin manjari k dil me bhi toofan uthne lagte hain uski ankhon me lal dore aane lagte hain aur wo achanak amit ka hath kas k pakad leti hai
Amit manjari ko dekhta hai dono ki nigahen milti hain dono me se koi nhi bolta magar dono k hi dil machal rhe the amit apna chehra sidha kar leta hai aur khud ko control karne lagta hai aise hi thode bahut garma garm scene film me ate hain aur interval ho jata hai amit sabke khane k liye snacks lata hai thodi der me movie fir start ho jati hai . Thodi der k bad film me ek bedroom scene ata hai jise dekhte dekhte Amit ka private part akadne lagta hai aur manjari ka bhi bura haal tha wo bhi kamvasna me jalne lagi thi Amit bas ankhen band kar k khud ko sambhalta hai manjari ka hath abhi bhi amit k hath par tha
Aise hi waqt bit jata hai movie khatam ho jati hai charon bahar ate hain amit bhagwan ka shukriya ada karta hai k film khatam hui
Raju : kyu kaisi lagi picture tujhe
Amit: ( gusse se dekhkar) bakwas
Raju : mujhe to bahut maza aya itna bolkar wo renu ko dekhta hai aur renu sharma jati hai
Amit samjh jata hai k raju ne kuch to kiya hai magar chup rehta hai wahin manjari chup thi aur amit ko dekh rhi thi
Amit : ab chalen ghar
Raju: abe party to abhi rehti hai na chal kuch kha pikar ate hain
Amit gusse se raju ko dekhta hai magar raju fir request karta hai ishare se
Amit : bta fir kahan chalen kya khana hai
Raju: manjari renu tum bhi to batao kya karna hai kahan chalna hai
Manjari : shehar k bare me humen kya maloom aap hi dekhlo
Fir charon ek auto karte hain use batate hain k kisi ache se restaurant me chod de
Fir charon restaurant me ja kar thoda bahut kha kar wapis chalne ka irada karte hain
Manjari dil me soch rhi thi k kaise bat kahe apne dil ki magar Amit tha k use dekh hi nhi rha tha tabhi manjari raju aur renu ko ishara karti hai to renu bathroom jane ka bolkar uth jati hai aur raju bhi uth jata hai unke jate hi manjari apni kamij se hath dalkar ek kagaz nikal kar amit ko deti hai aur kehti hai k ek bar parh lena please itna mujh par ehsan kar dena
Amit awak sa use dekhta rehta hai magar manjari k masum chehre ko dekhte hue uski ankho me ilteza ki nazar dekhkar wo kagaz pakadkar jeb me rakh leta hai. Manjari ko thodi tasalli hoti hai k amit ne kagaz pakad liya matlab uska chance hai kya pta uska prem patr padkar Amit ko uspe taras aa hi jaye
Is patr me manjari ne apne dil ka sara haal bayan kar diya tha kitne hafton se likh likh kar kagaz faad faad kar finally ek prem patr likha tha, itne jyada jazbat usne likh diye the shabdo me k koi pathar bhi ho to pighal jaye magar Amit pighlega k nhi ye pta ni
Thodi der me renu aur raju aa jate hain aur bill amit pay krta hai fir sab nikal padte hain bus stop ki taraf . Yahan se bus stop door nhi tha isliye pedal hi nikal liye
Abhi raste me ja hi rhe the ek gali se se ek aurat k cheekhne ki awaz ati hai
Aurat: bachao nachos koi meri madad karo aaahhhh
Bachao bachaooooo
Amit awaz sunkar awaz ki disha me bhagta hai gali sunsan thi aur aage se band thi is taraf koi ghar dukan kuch bhi nhi tha shayad kisi hotel ki backside thi,
Amit teji se bhagta hua jata hai to ek andhere kone me use teen gunde dikhte hain jo ek aurat pakde hue the unke hathon me chaku the wo koi lutere lag rhe the jo aurat se chaku ki nok par gehne utarwa rhe the
Amit teji se bhagte hu raste me padi hui ek eent utha kar marta hai jo sidha ek gunde k sir me lagti hai aur khoon ki dhar uske sir se foot padti hai
Dusra gunda chaku lekar Amit ko marne ko hota hai k Amit uska baju hawa me hi pakad leta hai aur baju marod kar us gunde ko dusre hath ka istemal kar k hawa me utha k patak deta hai
Tabhi teesra gunda teji se chaku lekar hamla karta hai aur ek war uska amit k baju par lag jata hai magar amit to pehalwan tha wo iski parwah kiye bagair teesre gunde ko bhi pakad kar jor se diwar me uska sir mar deta hai aur wo bhi dher ho jata hai
Teeno ko nipta kar amit aurat ki taraf mudta hai wo dekhta hai k samne ek husan ki dewi khadi hai bilkul dudhia rang chamkta chehra sharbati aankhen us aurat ko dekhkar to Amit ko hemamalini yad aa gyi dream girl kya zabardast figure tha saadi me to aur bhi haseen lag rhi thi baal sir par bandhe hue the umar ka andaza lagana mushkil shayad 30 k asspass ki hogi
Amit ek tak use dekh rha tha
Aurat : ( man me iska chehra mujhe apna sa kyun lag rha hai akhir kaun hai ye aise lag rha hai ye mera apna hai) shukriya bete tumne meri jan bachayi main bahut ehsan mand hun , kya nam hai tumhara?
Amit : ( hosh me ata hua) ji ji wo Amit Mam hai mera
Aur please aap shukriya mat kahiye ek taraf mujhe beta bol rhi hain aur fir shukriya kehkar mujh par pap charha rhi hain
Aurat : tum wakai ek ache aur sanskari ghar se ho yakeenan tumhari maa koi devi hogi jisne tumhare jaisa beta paida kiya
Amit : are aap aise hi meri badai karne lagi maine to bas apna farz ada kiya hai
Aurat: nhi Amit aaj kal k zamane me kon kisi ki madad karta hai aur tumne to apni jaan ki baazi lga di agar tumhe kuch ho jata to
Tabhi us aurat ki nazar Amit ki bazu par lage zakham par padti hai wo jaldi se apni saadi ka pallu faad kar amit k baaju pe baandh deti hai
Ye sab hote hue raju bhi wahan pahunch chuka tha aur sab dekh rha tha use bhi amit k zakham ko dekhkar tension ho jati hai
Raju : are ye kya itni chot lag gyi tujh
Amit: kuch nhi yar bas kharonch hai halki c tu tension na le
Raju : chal doctor k pas chalte hain
Amit : are zara c to chot hai itni to lagti hi rehti hai
Aurat: tumhara dost sahi keh rha hai chalo doctor k pass patti karwalo
Amit : are apne patti to kardi hai ab aapke pyar aur sneh se badkar koi dawa thodi ho sakti hai
Waise bhi hum late ho rhe hain humen gaon wapis jana hai agar late ho gye to gharwale pareshan honge
Aurat: are aise kaise chale jaoge tumne meri itni madad ki hai mujhe kuch to moka do sewa ka
Amit : are nhi madam please humen sachmuch deri ho rhi hai fir kabhi mulakat hui to zarur aapke hath ki chai piyunga
Aurat
haste hue ) theek hai yad rakhna waise mera nam madam nhi manju hai
Amit : ( muskura kar ) theek hai manju ji ab chal te hain ijazat dijiye
Fir amit aur raju chal padte hain gali se bahar nikalte hain to samne manjari aur renu ghabrayi hui c khadi thi jab se amit bhagkar gya tha manjari ka dil dar k mare baitha ja rha tha upar se raju dono ko piche aane se mana kar k gya tha
Manjari jab amit ko dekhti hai aur uski baju par patti dekhti hai jisme khoon laga hua tha wo bhagkar Amit k sine se chipak jati hai aur rone lagti hai, Amit k dil ko ek mitha sa ehsas hota hai magar agle hi pal wo manjari ko khud se alag kar k chup karwata hai
Amit : are manjari tum kyun bachon ki tarah ro rhi ho bas zara c kharonch hai kuch ni hua please chup ho jao
Manjari : ( rote hue ansun ponchti hui ) kya zarurat thi aise musibat me fasne ki agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mera kya hota
Amit k dil me ye bat bahut asar karti hai k ‘ mera kya hota “
Ek pal ko soch me pad jata hai k manjari kitne hak se itni bat keh gyi jo sidha Amit k dil par asar kar gyi
Fir Amit use chup karwata hai aur bus stop ki taraf chal padte hain charo
Bus stop par thodi hi der me bas aa jati hai bus ki seats full thi isliye charon khade ho jate hain sabse aage raju fir renu fir manjari fir amit
Bus chal padti hai next stop par aur log charh jate hain bus me aur bheed ho jati hai Amit na chahte hue bhi manjari se chipak jata hai
Bus k bar bar break marne se Amit bar bar manjari se takra rha tha jisse k Amit k nichle hisse me movement shuru ho gyi thi
Manjari ki gaand k sath takra kar Amit ka baburao sir uthane laga Amit ko sharmindagi hone lagti hai k ye uske sath kya ho rha hai manjari kya sochegi mere bare me
Wahin manjari ko bhi Amit ka land apne chootadon par mehsoos hone lagta hai
Ek mitha sa ehsas use hota hai uski munia bhi pania jati hai aur manjari khud par control khone lagti hai ab manjari bhi apne chootad janbujhkar Amit k land par dabane lagti hai aur maza lene lagti hai ye uski zindagi nya ehsas tha jo use bada maza de rha tha
Wahin Amit khud ko control karne ki poori koshish kar rha tha uska chehra lal tamatar ban gya tha aur pasine se bheeg gya tha
Amit piche hatne ki bahut koshish karta hai magar bheed ki vajah se piche nhi hat pata
Gaand k ehsas ne babu rao ki neend tod di thi aur ab wo us gaand se takkar mar rha badla lene k liye. Amit ka land poore joban par aa gya tha jo lohe ki rod ki tarah manjari k andar ghus jana chahta tha
Manjari land ki motai aur lambai apne chootadon me feel kar k poori paniya gyi thi aur apni gaand ko dabaye ja rhi thi land par use samjh ni aa rha tha wo kya kare ye uski zindagi pehla ehsas tha apne chootado par kisi mard k land ka
Amit khud ko rok nhi pa rha tha abhi tak ki zindagi me use ye ehsas kabhi nhi mila tha, hota bhi kaise pehalwani me to yehi sikhaya jata hai aurton se jitna door rho utna acha hai magar aaj amit ka khud par kaboo nhi tha ab use bhi ye ehsas maza dene lga aur thodi der me wo bhi jor lagakar land ko manjari ki gaand me ghusane lga
Manjari jyada der khud ko rok nhi payi aur wahin khade khade jhad gyi ab usse khada nhi hua ja rha pasine se chehra bheeg gya tha tabhi bus rukti hai aur do seat khali ho jati hain Amit renu aur manjari ko wahan bitha deta hai aur apni shirt bahar nikalkar apne akde hue land ko chhupa deta hai
Aise hi ek ghante ka safar khatam ho jata hai aur charon gaon pahunch jate hain
Manjari amit se nazren nhi mila pati aur chupchap renu k sath nikal jati hai Amit bhi bus me hui ghatna se sharminda tha isliye jaldi jaldi wo bhi nikal jata hai raju k sath
Raste me amit raju ko kehta hai jaldi chal aaj to daant padegi 5 baj gye maa gussa karegi
Tab dono apne apne ghar pahunch jate hain
Gauri ghar me pareshan idhar se udhar ghoom rhi thi aur soch rhi thi k use Amit ko jane hi nhi dena chahiye tha agar amit ko kuch ho gya to
Wo kai bar deepika se bhi gusse me keh chuki thi sab teri vajah se hua hai abhi tak ni aya agar use kuch ho gya to main dekh tera kya hal karti hun
Itne me darwaza khulta hai
Wahin dusri aur raju amit se milkar bhagta hua mandir k pas jata hai kisi se milne aur kehta hai kal wo mere sath subah 7 baje ki bus me chalega tum time se sahi jagah pahunch jana , aur han! Mera kam bhi ho jana chahiye tumhara to maine kar diya ab agar mera kam na bna to bhul jao sab itna kehkar raju wahan se nikal jata hai aur wo dusra shaks khush ho kar kal ka plan banane lagta hai k aisa moka fir nhi milega kal kaise bhi kar k apna kam karna hoga
Ab aage-
Subah Amit uth kar apni routine se akhade me jata hai magar aaj waqt se pehle laut ata hai kyunki aaj raju k sath shehar jana tha ghar aa kar jaldi se tayar hota hai gauri ko bhi malum tha jaldi jayega to uske liye nashta pehle hi se bana deti hai nashta kar k amit ghar se nikalne ko tyar hota hai k gauri use apne kamre me bulati hai
Gauri: amit ye le kuch paise rakhle khali hath jayega kya shehar
Itna kehkar wo amit ki jeb me paise dal deti hai
Amit : maa iski koi zarurat nhi hai mere pas to pehle hi itne paise hain main bhala kya karunga itne paison ka
Gauri: bas chup kar jo bol rhi hun wo sun wahan jakar kahin awaragardi mat karna kisi anjan admi se jyada bat ni karna na kisi kuch lekar khana aur han agar waqt ho to apni mausi k yahan bhi chakkar lga Ana
Amit: theek hai ma jo hukam magar mausi k yahan ni ja paunga agar wahan gya to raat ho jayegi ate ate
Gauri : acha acha rehne dena magar time se wapis aa jana
Amit: theek hai maa ab chalta hun
Itna kehkar amit room se nikalta hai tabhi chhoti maami mil jati hai
Deepika: amit bat sun, ye le kuch paise rakhle aur ache se party dena apne dosto ko koi kanjoosi ni
Itna kehkar wo amit ki jeb me paise dal deti hai
Amit : are ye kya mami pehle hi maa ne itne paise de diye hain aur mere pas apne bhi to hain
Deepika: bas bas pta hai mujhe, paisa jitna ho acha hai. Aur han time se laut ana ye na ho didi tere piche shehar hi na pahunch jaye
Fir amit ghar se nikal kar raju ki taraf jane lgta hai to raju samne se ata hua dikhta hai aur dono dost bus stop ki taraf nikal padte hain
Bus stop par koi khas bheed nhi thi is time me bas me normal hi bheed hoti thi dono dost bus pakad lete hain aur apni seat par baith jate hain Amit ki nazar manjri par padti hai jo aaj khoob tayar ho kar laal salwar suit me apni saheli k sath baithi thi ek pal to amit ki nazar uspar ruk gyi aaj wo bahut khoobsurat lag rhi thi. Amit janta tha k manjri use pasand karti hai magar amit k dil me aisa kuch ni tha, udhar manjari bhi amit ko dekh rhi thi jab dono ki nazar milti hai to dono muskura dete hain
Amit : Abe sale manjari itni subah kahan ja rhi hai tayar ho kar
Raju : dekh bhai bura mat manna jo bhi bolna ho bad me bol lena darasal main manjari ki saheli renu ko pasand karta hun aur usse shadi karna chahta hun, bade hath pair jodkar maine manjari ko manaya hai k tu apne janmdin ki party de rha hai aur tune manjari ko bhi bulaya hai aur renu ko sath lane ko kaha, tu to janta hai uska baap sala use ghar se kahin bahar nikalne ni deta to kisi tarah manjari ki help se aaj main apne dil ki bat karne wala hun renu se, ab apne yar ki khushi k liye tu itna bhi ni kar sakta
( Darasal kal raju bhagkar manjari k pass hi gaya tha usne manjari ki help ka sauda kiya tha Amit k sath uski setting karwane me badle me manjari raju ki setting renu se karwayegi)
Amit: chup sale band kar apna emotional drama tu apne chakkar me mujhe kyu fasa rha hai tujhe pata hai na main ladkiyon se door rehta hun aur tu mera nam lekar manjari ko bula liya, kya tere ko ni pta wo kaise mujhe dekhti hai ab to wo samjhegi k Maine use bulaya matlab main use pasand karta hun
Raju: dekh bhai agar wo tujhe pasand karti hai to tu bhi use pasand kar le na waise bhi usse khoobsurat ladki poore gaon me nhi, kab tak brahmachari bna firega yahi to din hai jawani k , main to bolta hun tu bhi use aaj lapak le wo to kab se tayar baithi hai ek tu hai aise hi bhaaw khaye ja rha hai
Amit : bakwas band kar tujhe pta hai na main in sab baton me nhi padne wala
Raju: yar dekhle meri zindagi ka sawal hai main renu se shadi karna chahta hun ab agar tu meri madad ni karega to aur kaun karega
Waise bhi manjari kaun sa tujhe kha jayegi baten hi to karni hai mujhe thoda waqt mil jayega renu se bat karne ka
Amit: acha theek hai magar gaon me agar kisi ko pta chal gya to socha hai kitni badnami hogi mere gharwale mujhe ghar se nikal denge
Raju: are gaon me kisi ko kuch pta ni chalega wo alag ja rhi hain hum alag hum sidha cinema me hi milenge
Amit : chal theek hai yari k nam par ye bhi manzoor hai magar agar koi lafda hua to apna soch lena
Raju: (haskar) tere liye jan hazir hai mere yar
Yun hi baten karte hue ek ghante me bas rukti chalti shehar pahunch jati hai fir dono dost aur dono sahelian alag alag auto se cinema pahunch jati hain amit ticket lene k liye line me lagta hai to dekhta hai manjari bhi ticket ki line me thi amit raju ko ishara kar k manjari ko ticket lene se rokne ko kehta hai fir amit tickets le kar raju k sath manjari ki taraf jata hai
Manjari: ( manjari aaj gulab ki tarah khili khili lag rhi thi lal suit me wo aaj pakka irada kar k ayi the k aaj amit se dil ka haal bayan kar k hi rahegi , amit ko gulab ka phool dete hue)
Janmdin mubarak ho bhagwan kare aap hamesha yunhi haste khelte rhen aapko wo har khushi mile jo aap chahte hain
Amit : ( thoda narvous ho jata hai k kya kahe kya kare) shukriya manjari iski kya zarurat thi tum itna risk lekar kyun ayi shehar agar kisi ko pta chala to kitni badnami hogi
Manjari : to kya hua apka janmdin tha to kaise na ati apke liye sab kabool hai
Amit hairani se manjari ko dekhne lagta hai , tabhi raju bich me bolta hai
Raju : chalo yar jaldi karo nhi to picture nikal jayegi
Fir charon ander hall me jate hain subah ka show tha isliye jyada rush ni tha charon ki seat sath me hi thi pehle Amit baith jata hai uske sath manjari baith jati hai fir renu fir raju, amit raju ki taraf dekhta hai to raju ankhon se request karta hai ishare se, Amit bhi chup kar k baith jata hai. Manjari k dil me aaj khushion ki shehnaiyan baj rahi thi jane kab se wo amit k sath waqt bitana chahti thi taki wo apna haal -e-dil bayan kar sake pta ni kab se wo amit ko apna sab kuch man chuki thi aur ek amit tha k use ignore karta rehta tha
Thodi der me lights bujh jati hain aur movie shuru ho jati hai ye ek romantic love story ki hindi movie thi aur aap to jante hain k Bollywood ki filmo me kiss karna to aam bat hai aise hi film me jab kissing scene ata hai hero heroine k labon par apne lab rakhta hai to Amit k dil me halchal hone lagti hai akhir tha to wo bhi gabhru jawan wahin manjari k dil me bhi toofan uthne lagte hain uski ankhon me lal dore aane lagte hain aur wo achanak amit ka hath kas k pakad leti hai
Amit manjari ko dekhta hai dono ki nigahen milti hain dono me se koi nhi bolta magar dono k hi dil machal rhe the amit apna chehra sidha kar leta hai aur khud ko control karne lagta hai aise hi thode bahut garma garm scene film me ate hain aur interval ho jata hai amit sabke khane k liye snacks lata hai thodi der me movie fir start ho jati hai . Thodi der k bad film me ek bedroom scene ata hai jise dekhte dekhte Amit ka private part akadne lagta hai aur manjari ka bhi bura haal tha wo bhi kamvasna me jalne lagi thi Amit bas ankhen band kar k khud ko sambhalta hai manjari ka hath abhi bhi amit k hath par tha
Aise hi waqt bit jata hai movie khatam ho jati hai charon bahar ate hain amit bhagwan ka shukriya ada karta hai k film khatam hui
Raju : kyu kaisi lagi picture tujhe
Amit: ( gusse se dekhkar) bakwas
Raju : mujhe to bahut maza aya itna bolkar wo renu ko dekhta hai aur renu sharma jati hai
Amit samjh jata hai k raju ne kuch to kiya hai magar chup rehta hai wahin manjari chup thi aur amit ko dekh rhi thi
Amit : ab chalen ghar
Raju: abe party to abhi rehti hai na chal kuch kha pikar ate hain
Amit gusse se raju ko dekhta hai magar raju fir request karta hai ishare se
Amit : bta fir kahan chalen kya khana hai
Raju: manjari renu tum bhi to batao kya karna hai kahan chalna hai
Manjari : shehar k bare me humen kya maloom aap hi dekhlo
Fir charon ek auto karte hain use batate hain k kisi ache se restaurant me chod de
Fir charon restaurant me ja kar thoda bahut kha kar wapis chalne ka irada karte hain
Manjari dil me soch rhi thi k kaise bat kahe apne dil ki magar Amit tha k use dekh hi nhi rha tha tabhi manjari raju aur renu ko ishara karti hai to renu bathroom jane ka bolkar uth jati hai aur raju bhi uth jata hai unke jate hi manjari apni kamij se hath dalkar ek kagaz nikal kar amit ko deti hai aur kehti hai k ek bar parh lena please itna mujh par ehsan kar dena
Amit awak sa use dekhta rehta hai magar manjari k masum chehre ko dekhte hue uski ankho me ilteza ki nazar dekhkar wo kagaz pakadkar jeb me rakh leta hai. Manjari ko thodi tasalli hoti hai k amit ne kagaz pakad liya matlab uska chance hai kya pta uska prem patr padkar Amit ko uspe taras aa hi jaye
Is patr me manjari ne apne dil ka sara haal bayan kar diya tha kitne hafton se likh likh kar kagaz faad faad kar finally ek prem patr likha tha, itne jyada jazbat usne likh diye the shabdo me k koi pathar bhi ho to pighal jaye magar Amit pighlega k nhi ye pta ni
Thodi der me renu aur raju aa jate hain aur bill amit pay krta hai fir sab nikal padte hain bus stop ki taraf . Yahan se bus stop door nhi tha isliye pedal hi nikal liye
Abhi raste me ja hi rhe the ek gali se se ek aurat k cheekhne ki awaz ati hai
Aurat: bachao nachos koi meri madad karo aaahhhh
Bachao bachaooooo
Amit awaz sunkar awaz ki disha me bhagta hai gali sunsan thi aur aage se band thi is taraf koi ghar dukan kuch bhi nhi tha shayad kisi hotel ki backside thi,
Amit teji se bhagta hua jata hai to ek andhere kone me use teen gunde dikhte hain jo ek aurat pakde hue the unke hathon me chaku the wo koi lutere lag rhe the jo aurat se chaku ki nok par gehne utarwa rhe the
Amit teji se bhagte hu raste me padi hui ek eent utha kar marta hai jo sidha ek gunde k sir me lagti hai aur khoon ki dhar uske sir se foot padti hai
Dusra gunda chaku lekar Amit ko marne ko hota hai k Amit uska baju hawa me hi pakad leta hai aur baju marod kar us gunde ko dusre hath ka istemal kar k hawa me utha k patak deta hai
Tabhi teesra gunda teji se chaku lekar hamla karta hai aur ek war uska amit k baju par lag jata hai magar amit to pehalwan tha wo iski parwah kiye bagair teesre gunde ko bhi pakad kar jor se diwar me uska sir mar deta hai aur wo bhi dher ho jata hai
Teeno ko nipta kar amit aurat ki taraf mudta hai wo dekhta hai k samne ek husan ki dewi khadi hai bilkul dudhia rang chamkta chehra sharbati aankhen us aurat ko dekhkar to Amit ko hemamalini yad aa gyi dream girl kya zabardast figure tha saadi me to aur bhi haseen lag rhi thi baal sir par bandhe hue the umar ka andaza lagana mushkil shayad 30 k asspass ki hogi
Amit ek tak use dekh rha tha
Aurat : ( man me iska chehra mujhe apna sa kyun lag rha hai akhir kaun hai ye aise lag rha hai ye mera apna hai) shukriya bete tumne meri jan bachayi main bahut ehsan mand hun , kya nam hai tumhara?
Amit : ( hosh me ata hua) ji ji wo Amit Mam hai mera
Aur please aap shukriya mat kahiye ek taraf mujhe beta bol rhi hain aur fir shukriya kehkar mujh par pap charha rhi hain
Aurat : tum wakai ek ache aur sanskari ghar se ho yakeenan tumhari maa koi devi hogi jisne tumhare jaisa beta paida kiya
Amit : are aap aise hi meri badai karne lagi maine to bas apna farz ada kiya hai
Aurat: nhi Amit aaj kal k zamane me kon kisi ki madad karta hai aur tumne to apni jaan ki baazi lga di agar tumhe kuch ho jata to
Tabhi us aurat ki nazar Amit ki bazu par lage zakham par padti hai wo jaldi se apni saadi ka pallu faad kar amit k baaju pe baandh deti hai
Ye sab hote hue raju bhi wahan pahunch chuka tha aur sab dekh rha tha use bhi amit k zakham ko dekhkar tension ho jati hai
Raju : are ye kya itni chot lag gyi tujh
Amit: kuch nhi yar bas kharonch hai halki c tu tension na le
Raju : chal doctor k pas chalte hain
Amit : are zara c to chot hai itni to lagti hi rehti hai
Aurat: tumhara dost sahi keh rha hai chalo doctor k pass patti karwalo
Amit : are apne patti to kardi hai ab aapke pyar aur sneh se badkar koi dawa thodi ho sakti hai
Waise bhi hum late ho rhe hain humen gaon wapis jana hai agar late ho gye to gharwale pareshan honge
Aurat: are aise kaise chale jaoge tumne meri itni madad ki hai mujhe kuch to moka do sewa ka
Amit : are nhi madam please humen sachmuch deri ho rhi hai fir kabhi mulakat hui to zarur aapke hath ki chai piyunga
Aurat
haste hue ) theek hai yad rakhna waise mera nam madam nhi manju hai Amit : ( muskura kar ) theek hai manju ji ab chal te hain ijazat dijiye
Fir amit aur raju chal padte hain gali se bahar nikalte hain to samne manjari aur renu ghabrayi hui c khadi thi jab se amit bhagkar gya tha manjari ka dil dar k mare baitha ja rha tha upar se raju dono ko piche aane se mana kar k gya tha
Manjari jab amit ko dekhti hai aur uski baju par patti dekhti hai jisme khoon laga hua tha wo bhagkar Amit k sine se chipak jati hai aur rone lagti hai, Amit k dil ko ek mitha sa ehsas hota hai magar agle hi pal wo manjari ko khud se alag kar k chup karwata hai
Amit : are manjari tum kyun bachon ki tarah ro rhi ho bas zara c kharonch hai kuch ni hua please chup ho jao
Manjari : ( rote hue ansun ponchti hui ) kya zarurat thi aise musibat me fasne ki agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mera kya hota
Amit k dil me ye bat bahut asar karti hai k ‘ mera kya hota “
Ek pal ko soch me pad jata hai k manjari kitne hak se itni bat keh gyi jo sidha Amit k dil par asar kar gyi
Fir Amit use chup karwata hai aur bus stop ki taraf chal padte hain charo
Bus stop par thodi hi der me bas aa jati hai bus ki seats full thi isliye charon khade ho jate hain sabse aage raju fir renu fir manjari fir amit
Bus chal padti hai next stop par aur log charh jate hain bus me aur bheed ho jati hai Amit na chahte hue bhi manjari se chipak jata hai
Bus k bar bar break marne se Amit bar bar manjari se takra rha tha jisse k Amit k nichle hisse me movement shuru ho gyi thi
Manjari ki gaand k sath takra kar Amit ka baburao sir uthane laga Amit ko sharmindagi hone lagti hai k ye uske sath kya ho rha hai manjari kya sochegi mere bare me
Wahin manjari ko bhi Amit ka land apne chootadon par mehsoos hone lagta hai
Ek mitha sa ehsas use hota hai uski munia bhi pania jati hai aur manjari khud par control khone lagti hai ab manjari bhi apne chootad janbujhkar Amit k land par dabane lagti hai aur maza lene lagti hai ye uski zindagi nya ehsas tha jo use bada maza de rha tha
Wahin Amit khud ko control karne ki poori koshish kar rha tha uska chehra lal tamatar ban gya tha aur pasine se bheeg gya tha
Amit piche hatne ki bahut koshish karta hai magar bheed ki vajah se piche nhi hat pata
Gaand k ehsas ne babu rao ki neend tod di thi aur ab wo us gaand se takkar mar rha badla lene k liye. Amit ka land poore joban par aa gya tha jo lohe ki rod ki tarah manjari k andar ghus jana chahta tha
Manjari land ki motai aur lambai apne chootadon me feel kar k poori paniya gyi thi aur apni gaand ko dabaye ja rhi thi land par use samjh ni aa rha tha wo kya kare ye uski zindagi pehla ehsas tha apne chootado par kisi mard k land ka
Amit khud ko rok nhi pa rha tha abhi tak ki zindagi me use ye ehsas kabhi nhi mila tha, hota bhi kaise pehalwani me to yehi sikhaya jata hai aurton se jitna door rho utna acha hai magar aaj amit ka khud par kaboo nhi tha ab use bhi ye ehsas maza dene lga aur thodi der me wo bhi jor lagakar land ko manjari ki gaand me ghusane lga
Manjari jyada der khud ko rok nhi payi aur wahin khade khade jhad gyi ab usse khada nhi hua ja rha pasine se chehra bheeg gya tha tabhi bus rukti hai aur do seat khali ho jati hain Amit renu aur manjari ko wahan bitha deta hai aur apni shirt bahar nikalkar apne akde hue land ko chhupa deta hai
Aise hi ek ghante ka safar khatam ho jata hai aur charon gaon pahunch jate hain
Manjari amit se nazren nhi mila pati aur chupchap renu k sath nikal jati hai Amit bhi bus me hui ghatna se sharminda tha isliye jaldi jaldi wo bhi nikal jata hai raju k sath
Raste me amit raju ko kehta hai jaldi chal aaj to daant padegi 5 baj gye maa gussa karegi
Tab dono apne apne ghar pahunch jate hain
Gauri ghar me pareshan idhar se udhar ghoom rhi thi aur soch rhi thi k use Amit ko jane hi nhi dena chahiye tha agar amit ko kuch ho gya to
Wo kai bar deepika se bhi gusse me keh chuki thi sab teri vajah se hua hai abhi tak ni aya agar use kuch ho gya to main dekh tera kya hal karti hun
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Wahin dusri aur raju amit se milkar bhagta hua mandir k pas jata hai kisi se milne aur kehta hai kal wo mere sath subah 7 baje ki bus me chalega tum time se sahi jagah pahunch jana , aur han! Mera kam bhi ho jana chahiye tumhara to maine kar diya ab agar mera kam na bna to bhul jao sab itna kehkar raju wahan se nikal jata hai aur wo dusra shaks khush ho kar kal ka plan banane lagta hai k aisa moka fir nhi milega kal kaise bhi kar k apna kam karna hoga
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Subah Amit uth kar apni routine se akhade me jata hai magar aaj waqt se pehle laut ata hai kyunki aaj raju k sath shehar jana tha ghar aa kar jaldi se tayar hota hai gauri ko bhi malum tha jaldi jayega to uske liye nashta pehle hi se bana deti hai nashta kar k amit ghar se nikalne ko tyar hota hai k gauri use apne kamre me bulati hai
Gauri: amit ye le kuch paise rakhle khali hath jayega kya shehar
Itna kehkar wo amit ki jeb me paise dal deti hai
Amit : maa iski koi zarurat nhi hai mere pas to pehle hi itne paise hain main bhala kya karunga itne paison ka
Gauri: bas chup kar jo bol rhi hun wo sun wahan jakar kahin awaragardi mat karna kisi anjan admi se jyada bat ni karna na kisi kuch lekar khana aur han agar waqt ho to apni mausi k yahan bhi chakkar lga Ana
Amit: theek hai ma jo hukam magar mausi k yahan ni ja paunga agar wahan gya to raat ho jayegi ate ate
Gauri : acha acha rehne dena magar time se wapis aa jana
Amit: theek hai maa ab chalta hun
Itna kehkar amit room se nikalta hai tabhi chhoti maami mil jati hai
Deepika: amit bat sun, ye le kuch paise rakhle aur ache se party dena apne dosto ko koi kanjoosi ni
Itna kehkar wo amit ki jeb me paise dal deti hai
Amit : are ye kya mami pehle hi maa ne itne paise de diye hain aur mere pas apne bhi to hain
Deepika: bas bas pta hai mujhe, paisa jitna ho acha hai. Aur han time se laut ana ye na ho didi tere piche shehar hi na pahunch jaye
Fir amit ghar se nikal kar raju ki taraf jane lgta hai to raju samne se ata hua dikhta hai aur dono dost bus stop ki taraf nikal padte hain
Bus stop par koi khas bheed nhi thi is time me bas me normal hi bheed hoti thi dono dost bus pakad lete hain aur apni seat par baith jate hain Amit ki nazar manjri par padti hai jo aaj khoob tayar ho kar laal salwar suit me apni saheli k sath baithi thi ek pal to amit ki nazar uspar ruk gyi aaj wo bahut khoobsurat lag rhi thi. Amit janta tha k manjri use pasand karti hai magar amit k dil me aisa kuch ni tha, udhar manjari bhi amit ko dekh rhi thi jab dono ki nazar milti hai to dono muskura dete hain
Amit : Abe sale manjari itni subah kahan ja rhi hai tayar ho kar
Raju : dekh bhai bura mat manna jo bhi bolna ho bad me bol lena darasal main manjari ki saheli renu ko pasand karta hun aur usse shadi karna chahta hun, bade hath pair jodkar maine manjari ko manaya hai k tu apne janmdin ki party de rha hai aur tune manjari ko bhi bulaya hai aur renu ko sath lane ko kaha, tu to janta hai uska baap sala use ghar se kahin bahar nikalne ni deta to kisi tarah manjari ki help se aaj main apne dil ki bat karne wala hun renu se, ab apne yar ki khushi k liye tu itna bhi ni kar sakta
( Darasal kal raju bhagkar manjari k pass hi gaya tha usne manjari ki help ka sauda kiya tha Amit k sath uski setting karwane me badle me manjari raju ki setting renu se karwayegi)
Amit: chup sale band kar apna emotional drama tu apne chakkar me mujhe kyu fasa rha hai tujhe pata hai na main ladkiyon se door rehta hun aur tu mera nam lekar manjari ko bula liya, kya tere ko ni pta wo kaise mujhe dekhti hai ab to wo samjhegi k Maine use bulaya matlab main use pasand karta hun
Raju: dekh bhai agar wo tujhe pasand karti hai to tu bhi use pasand kar le na waise bhi usse khoobsurat ladki poore gaon me nhi, kab tak brahmachari bna firega yahi to din hai jawani k , main to bolta hun tu bhi use aaj lapak le wo to kab se tayar baithi hai ek tu hai aise hi bhaaw khaye ja rha hai
Amit : bakwas band kar tujhe pta hai na main in sab baton me nhi padne wala
Raju: yar dekhle meri zindagi ka sawal hai main renu se shadi karna chahta hun ab agar tu meri madad ni karega to aur kaun karega
Waise bhi manjari kaun sa tujhe kha jayegi baten hi to karni hai mujhe thoda waqt mil jayega renu se bat karne ka
Amit: acha theek hai magar gaon me agar kisi ko pta chal gya to socha hai kitni badnami hogi mere gharwale mujhe ghar se nikal denge
Raju: are gaon me kisi ko kuch pta ni chalega wo alag ja rhi hain hum alag hum sidha cinema me hi milenge
Amit : chal theek hai yari k nam par ye bhi manzoor hai magar agar koi lafda hua to apna soch lena
Raju: (haskar) tere liye jan hazir hai mere yar
Yun hi baten karte hue ek ghante me bas rukti chalti shehar pahunch jati hai fir dono dost aur dono sahelian alag alag auto se cinema pahunch jati hain amit ticket lene k liye line me lagta hai to dekhta hai manjari bhi ticket ki line me thi amit raju ko ishara kar k manjari ko ticket lene se rokne ko kehta hai fir amit tickets le kar raju k sath manjari ki taraf jata hai
Manjari: ( manjari aaj gulab ki tarah khili khili lag rhi thi lal suit me wo aaj pakka irada kar k ayi the k aaj amit se dil ka haal bayan kar k hi rahegi , amit ko gulab ka phool dete hue)
Janmdin mubarak ho bhagwan kare aap hamesha yunhi haste khelte rhen aapko wo har khushi mile jo aap chahte hain
Amit : ( thoda narvous ho jata hai k kya kahe kya kare) shukriya manjari iski kya zarurat thi tum itna risk lekar kyun ayi shehar agar kisi ko pta chala to kitni badnami hogi
Manjari : to kya hua apka janmdin tha to kaise na ati apke liye sab kabool hai
Amit hairani se manjari ko dekhne lagta hai , tabhi raju bich me bolta hai
Raju : chalo yar jaldi karo nhi to picture nikal jayegi
Fir charon ander hall me jate hain subah ka show tha isliye jyada rush ni tha charon ki seat sath me hi thi pehle Amit baith jata hai uske sath manjari baith jati hai fir renu fir raju, amit raju ki taraf dekhta hai to raju ankhon se request karta hai ishare se, Amit bhi chup kar k baith jata hai. Manjari k dil me aaj khushion ki shehnaiyan baj rahi thi jane kab se wo amit k sath waqt bitana chahti thi taki wo apna haal -e-dil bayan kar sake pta ni kab se wo amit ko apna sab kuch man chuki thi aur ek amit tha k use ignore karta rehta tha
Thodi der me lights bujh jati hain aur movie shuru ho jati hai ye ek romantic love story ki hindi movie thi aur aap to jante hain k Bollywood ki filmo me kiss karna to aam bat hai aise hi film me jab kissing scene ata hai hero heroine k labon par apne lab rakhta hai to Amit k dil me halchal hone lagti hai akhir tha to wo bhi gabhru jawan wahin manjari k dil me bhi toofan uthne lagte hain uski ankhon me lal dore aane lagte hain aur wo achanak amit ka hath kas k pakad leti hai
Amit manjari ko dekhta hai dono ki nigahen milti hain dono me se koi nhi bolta magar dono k hi dil machal rhe the amit apna chehra sidha kar leta hai aur khud ko control karne lagta hai aise hi thode bahut garma garm scene film me ate hain aur interval ho jata hai amit sabke khane k liye snacks lata hai thodi der me movie fir start ho jati hai . Thodi der k bad film me ek bedroom scene ata hai jise dekhte dekhte Amit ka private part akadne lagta hai aur manjari ka bhi bura haal tha wo bhi kamvasna me jalne lagi thi Amit bas ankhen band kar k khud ko sambhalta hai manjari ka hath abhi bhi amit k hath par tha
Aise hi waqt bit jata hai movie khatam ho jati hai charon bahar ate hain amit bhagwan ka shukriya ada karta hai k film khatam hui
Raju : kyu kaisi lagi picture tujhe
Amit: ( gusse se dekhkar) bakwas
Raju : mujhe to bahut maza aya itna bolkar wo renu ko dekhta hai aur renu sharma jati hai
Amit samjh jata hai k raju ne kuch to kiya hai magar chup rehta hai wahin manjari chup thi aur amit ko dekh rhi thi
Amit : ab chalen ghar
Raju: abe party to abhi rehti hai na chal kuch kha pikar ate hain
Amit gusse se raju ko dekhta hai magar raju fir request karta hai ishare se
Amit : bta fir kahan chalen kya khana hai
Raju: manjari renu tum bhi to batao kya karna hai kahan chalna hai
Manjari : shehar k bare me humen kya maloom aap hi dekhlo
Fir charon ek auto karte hain use batate hain k kisi ache se restaurant me chod de
Fir charon restaurant me ja kar thoda bahut kha kar wapis chalne ka irada karte hain
Manjari dil me soch rhi thi k kaise bat kahe apne dil ki magar Amit tha k use dekh hi nhi rha tha tabhi manjari raju aur renu ko ishara karti hai to renu bathroom jane ka bolkar uth jati hai aur raju bhi uth jata hai unke jate hi manjari apni kamij se hath dalkar ek kagaz nikal kar amit ko deti hai aur kehti hai k ek bar parh lena please itna mujh par ehsan kar dena
Amit awak sa use dekhta rehta hai magar manjari k masum chehre ko dekhte hue uski ankho me ilteza ki nazar dekhkar wo kagaz pakadkar jeb me rakh leta hai. Manjari ko thodi tasalli hoti hai k amit ne kagaz pakad liya matlab uska chance hai kya pta uska prem patr padkar Amit ko uspe taras aa hi jaye
Is patr me manjari ne apne dil ka sara haal bayan kar diya tha kitne hafton se likh likh kar kagaz faad faad kar finally ek prem patr likha tha, itne jyada jazbat usne likh diye the shabdo me k koi pathar bhi ho to pighal jaye magar Amit pighlega k nhi ye pta ni
Thodi der me renu aur raju aa jate hain aur bill amit pay krta hai fir sab nikal padte hain bus stop ki taraf . Yahan se bus stop door nhi tha isliye pedal hi nikal liye
Abhi raste me ja hi rhe the ek gali se se ek aurat k cheekhne ki awaz ati hai
Aurat: bachao nachos koi meri madad karo aaahhhh
Bachao bachaooooo
Amit awaz sunkar awaz ki disha me bhagta hai gali sunsan thi aur aage se band thi is taraf koi ghar dukan kuch bhi nhi tha shayad kisi hotel ki backside thi,
Amit teji se bhagta hua jata hai to ek andhere kone me use teen gunde dikhte hain jo ek aurat pakde hue the unke hathon me chaku the wo koi lutere lag rhe the jo aurat se chaku ki nok par gehne utarwa rhe the
Amit teji se bhagte hu raste me padi hui ek eent utha kar marta hai jo sidha ek gunde k sir me lagti hai aur khoon ki dhar uske sir se foot padti hai
Dusra gunda chaku lekar Amit ko marne ko hota hai k Amit uska baju hawa me hi pakad leta hai aur baju marod kar us gunde ko dusre hath ka istemal kar k hawa me utha k patak deta hai
Tabhi teesra gunda teji se chaku lekar hamla karta hai aur ek war uska amit k baju par lag jata hai magar amit to pehalwan tha wo iski parwah kiye bagair teesre gunde ko bhi pakad kar jor se diwar me uska sir mar deta hai aur wo bhi dher ho jata hai
Teeno ko nipta kar amit aurat ki taraf mudta hai wo dekhta hai k samne ek husan ki dewi khadi hai bilkul dudhia rang chamkta chehra sharbati aankhen us aurat ko dekhkar to Amit ko hemamalini yad aa gyi dream girl kya zabardast figure tha saadi me to aur bhi haseen lag rhi thi baal sir par bandhe hue the umar ka andaza lagana mushkil shayad 30 k asspass ki hogi
Amit ek tak use dekh rha tha
Aurat : ( man me iska chehra mujhe apna sa kyun lag rha hai akhir kaun hai ye aise lag rha hai ye mera apna hai) shukriya bete tumne meri jan bachayi main bahut ehsan mand hun , kya nam hai tumhara?
Amit : ( hosh me ata hua) ji ji wo Amit Mam hai mera
Aur please aap shukriya mat kahiye ek taraf mujhe beta bol rhi hain aur fir shukriya kehkar mujh par pap charha rhi hain
Aurat : tum wakai ek ache aur sanskari ghar se ho yakeenan tumhari maa koi devi hogi jisne tumhare jaisa beta paida kiya
Amit : are aap aise hi meri badai karne lagi maine to bas apna farz ada kiya hai
Aurat: nhi Amit aaj kal k zamane me kon kisi ki madad karta hai aur tumne to apni jaan ki baazi lga di agar tumhe kuch ho jata to
Tabhi us aurat ki nazar Amit ki bazu par lage zakham par padti hai wo jaldi se apni saadi ka pallu faad kar amit k baaju pe baandh deti hai
Ye sab hote hue raju bhi wahan pahunch chuka tha aur sab dekh rha tha use bhi amit k zakham ko dekhkar tension ho jati hai
Raju : are ye kya itni chot lag gyi tujh
Amit: kuch nhi yar bas kharonch hai halki c tu tension na le
Raju : chal doctor k pas chalte hain
Amit : are zara c to chot hai itni to lagti hi rehti hai
Aurat: tumhara dost sahi keh rha hai chalo doctor k pass patti karwalo
Amit : are apne patti to kardi hai ab aapke pyar aur sneh se badkar koi dawa thodi ho sakti hai
Waise bhi hum late ho rhe hain humen gaon wapis jana hai agar late ho gye to gharwale pareshan honge
Aurat: are aise kaise chale jaoge tumne meri itni madad ki hai mujhe kuch to moka do sewa ka
Amit : are nhi madam please humen sachmuch deri ho rhi hai fir kabhi mulakat hui to zarur aapke hath ki chai piyunga
Aurat
Amit : ( muskura kar ) theek hai manju ji ab chal te hain ijazat dijiye
Fir amit aur raju chal padte hain gali se bahar nikalte hain to samne manjari aur renu ghabrayi hui c khadi thi jab se amit bhagkar gya tha manjari ka dil dar k mare baitha ja rha tha upar se raju dono ko piche aane se mana kar k gya tha
Manjari jab amit ko dekhti hai aur uski baju par patti dekhti hai jisme khoon laga hua tha wo bhagkar Amit k sine se chipak jati hai aur rone lagti hai, Amit k dil ko ek mitha sa ehsas hota hai magar agle hi pal wo manjari ko khud se alag kar k chup karwata hai
Amit : are manjari tum kyun bachon ki tarah ro rhi ho bas zara c kharonch hai kuch ni hua please chup ho jao
Manjari : ( rote hue ansun ponchti hui ) kya zarurat thi aise musibat me fasne ki agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mera kya hota
Amit k dil me ye bat bahut asar karti hai k ‘ mera kya hota “
Ek pal ko soch me pad jata hai k manjari kitne hak se itni bat keh gyi jo sidha Amit k dil par asar kar gyi
Fir Amit use chup karwata hai aur bus stop ki taraf chal padte hain charo
Bus stop par thodi hi der me bas aa jati hai bus ki seats full thi isliye charon khade ho jate hain sabse aage raju fir renu fir manjari fir amit
Bus chal padti hai next stop par aur log charh jate hain bus me aur bheed ho jati hai Amit na chahte hue bhi manjari se chipak jata hai
Bus k bar bar break marne se Amit bar bar manjari se takra rha tha jisse k Amit k nichle hisse me movement shuru ho gyi thi
Manjari ki gaand k sath takra kar Amit ka baburao sir uthane laga Amit ko sharmindagi hone lagti hai k ye uske sath kya ho rha hai manjari kya sochegi mere bare me
Wahin manjari ko bhi Amit ka land apne chootadon par mehsoos hone lagta hai
Ek mitha sa ehsas use hota hai uski munia bhi pania jati hai aur manjari khud par control khone lagti hai ab manjari bhi apne chootad janbujhkar Amit k land par dabane lagti hai aur maza lene lagti hai ye uski zindagi nya ehsas tha jo use bada maza de rha tha
Wahin Amit khud ko control karne ki poori koshish kar rha tha uska chehra lal tamatar ban gya tha aur pasine se bheeg gya tha
Amit piche hatne ki bahut koshish karta hai magar bheed ki vajah se piche nhi hat pata
Gaand k ehsas ne babu rao ki neend tod di thi aur ab wo us gaand se takkar mar rha badla lene k liye. Amit ka land poore joban par aa gya tha jo lohe ki rod ki tarah manjari k andar ghus jana chahta tha
Manjari land ki motai aur lambai apne chootadon me feel kar k poori paniya gyi thi aur apni gaand ko dabaye ja rhi thi land par use samjh ni aa rha tha wo kya kare ye uski zindagi pehla ehsas tha apne chootado par kisi mard k land ka
Amit khud ko rok nhi pa rha tha abhi tak ki zindagi me use ye ehsas kabhi nhi mila tha, hota bhi kaise pehalwani me to yehi sikhaya jata hai aurton se jitna door rho utna acha hai magar aaj amit ka khud par kaboo nhi tha ab use bhi ye ehsas maza dene lga aur thodi der me wo bhi jor lagakar land ko manjari ki gaand me ghusane lga
Manjari jyada der khud ko rok nhi payi aur wahin khade khade jhad gyi ab usse khada nhi hua ja rha pasine se chehra bheeg gya tha tabhi bus rukti hai aur do seat khali ho jati hain Amit renu aur manjari ko wahan bitha deta hai aur apni shirt bahar nikalkar apne akde hue land ko chhupa deta hai
Aise hi ek ghante ka safar khatam ho jata hai aur charon gaon pahunch jate hain
Manjari amit se nazren nhi mila pati aur chupchap renu k sath nikal jati hai Amit bhi bus me hui ghatna se sharminda tha isliye jaldi jaldi wo bhi nikal jata hai raju k sath
Raste me amit raju ko kehta hai jaldi chal aaj to daant padegi 5 baj gye maa gussa karegi
Tab dono apne apne ghar pahunch jate hain
Gauri ghar me pareshan idhar se udhar ghoom rhi thi aur soch rhi thi k use Amit ko jane hi nhi dena chahiye tha agar amit ko kuch ho gya to
Wo kai bar deepika se bhi gusse me keh chuki thi sab teri vajah se hua hai abhi tak ni aya agar use kuch ho gya to main dekh tera kya hal karti hun
Itne me darwaza khulta hai
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Aur manju ka agey kahani mai kya role hoga
Amit ki choot dekh kar uski maa kaise react karegi
Keep writing
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