Adultery Manhoos se mahan tak

[Aj1980]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

 

[Badshah Khan]

Congrats bhai for starting new story
Great concept
Introduction and updates are awesome
Keep writing
Keep posting

 

[Shikari_golu]

Bhai main copy nhi kar rha magar story ab hai hi aisi to ab kya kahen waise ye kisi ki life se judi hai main bas apni taraf se romance ka tadka dal kar pesh kar rha hun

Maine theam ki baat ki bas...copy ka nhi...

Aap apni taraf se tadka lagaaye...may b usse bhi acchi nikle....

Gud luck....

 

[Shikari_golu]

Bhai usme or esme bhot antar he usme 1 chacha or teen chachiyan thi jabke esme 3 chacha he or usme sablog hero ko chahte the sivay 2 buva ke yahan kamini chachi bhi he jo nafhrat karti he so aap comper na kare bas padhte rahiye

Mujhe puri kahani yaad hai dost...aur saare character bhi....

Maine bas theam ki baat ki thi....

Like....ladke ki 1 bua nafrat karti hai...unhi ki beti heroine hai...ek bua ka pati baahar hai...saare mama baap nhi ban sakte....

Hero ko manhoos samjha jata hai...saayad iske maa-baap ki wajah se kuch hua ho...jaisa usme hua tha....

To ye sab same sa laga...baki story ko compair karna mera style nhi...

Agar aisa karne laga to..housewifes par likhi gai saari story same hai yaha...bas naam aur kaam badalte hai...fir wahi dhokha, hindu-muslim...low class men....etc...sahi kaha na....

Jab un stories ko nhi bola to ise kyo bolu....

 

[kamdev99008]

Pyar, nafrat aur ab sazish aur dhokha bhi

Sahi ja rahe ho

Keep it up

 

[tpk]

wow

 

[urc4me]

Rasprad. Waiting for next

 

[John Cena]

Boht khoob yar kya is ma fantasy bhi hogi yan simple?

 

[MS DHONI]

Aapki Kya kehna Raja Bhai...Bahut hi mast likh rahe ho wo bhi pure detailing ke saath...Aise joint family wala story padhne ka maja hi kuchh aur Hai...Aur agar Amit ka family members ke saath bharpoor sex ho jaye to maza double ho jaayega...Hope this story will be a big hit ....

 

[Chinu singh]

Pristibhumi to bahut hi umda lag rahi hai
Suswagatam