Hiii how are you I hope you doing great and healthy, ummm well I don't know what to say,how to say,you will get angry or happy mere words ko aap dil se na lagayen I am saying because I really like the story or dil se mujhe ye story itni pasand aye hay ki main ise 2 times read kar chuka or 3rd time read karne ki soch raha hoon actually this is the first story for which I eagerly wait everytime to read I even open it on seperate tab in browser and it always open so I don't need to open it again n again...I wanna know is it your own thinking or is it from some novel you liked and think to share with us.....you may be curious why I ask this because it's nearly perfect... Now you may think why it's nearly perfect but not totally perfect, well I found so many names and spelling mistakes but it can be managed, and some of mistakes which is related to story while reding all that's why I said it's nearly perfect...well actually I read it 2 times, first time I just did fast reading 2nd time I took time and try to understand everything word and remember it all,
I don't like incet stories sorry about that,but what I liked most is the emotional part and how people express there feelings to others mostly the emotional and romantic and the feeling coming from heart,and the suspense in the story,and the part of karuna,naina,and kalpana, because they are the special part of story because those are the character who makes me laugh a lot I never knew I will come to some story where I can find everything, I don't know how many times but truly I laught so much of these 3 characters sense of humore and it's same a in real with school and college going student they do talk like this which makes other to laugh...and I like how you discribe every details even when telling about home inside you mentioned about how was chairs and what type is there carpet or not how is the door....it's not so descriptive like in novels to understand everything and visualise everything just buy reading but still pretty good and I appreciate you hard work and giving you very important and precious time to this story.... I find these kind of real life experiences only in novels, well I love novels more than watching movies actualy I had not watched hindi movies nearly over 10 years I like old movies which really is different and education not like todays, i don't feel attract towards the movies story it's feel like hollow without any feelings but over acting, because I don't feel myself in movies than in novels,the experience of feeling yourself in the story when you are reading page by page and get a feeling of immersion in the story, which you can't feel in movies or indian serial, I like the main character and his emotional side and I wonder how will the main character will overcome all the coming troubles in future...
Story main, hame kuch chejen real life se hat ke lage jo ke nahi hona chaheye jayse ke
First-----amit se jo relationship bana chuke hay unke saath amit ka formality se pesh ana jab woh akele ho tab bhi..... Jayse ke simple, Deepika ka he jo Amit ki one and only first aurat jisne amit se sabse pahla Milan hua or ek relation banaye or story ke hisab se woh amit ko apna pati man chuki or sare adikar use saup diye ek pati wale balke kai dafa amit se kah chuki hay ki woh use tum ya naam se bulaye jayse ek pati pati ko bulata hay apne pan se ek hak se jo woh suna or mehsoos karna chati hay amit se...jab dono akele ho par phir bhi woh mami-mami karta rahta hay jab dono akele bhi ho jo reality se bilkul alag hay,same manju ke bhi saath wohi jayse ki abhi last update main, respect dena alag bat hay woh koi unse buri tarhan toh nahi bolta ki lage woh respect nahi de raha...real main jab ek dafa koi kisi se physical relationship bana leta hay toh woh rishta bilkul alag hota hay koi 2 jism tabhi ek hote hay jab woh formality ko nikal dete hay nahi toh kabhi koi relationship bana he Na payega or duniya khatam ho jayegi ... Yeh toh ayse he lage ki aap apni gf ya wife ko ap-ap kahen akele main woh bhi sex ke bad.....or nahi koi gandi baten jo harkoi aaj ke jamane main sex karte waqt apne gf ya biwi ko bolte hay ya unse bulwate hay jaan bhooj ke kyunki aurte ye sab jara nahi bol pati sankoch or sharam ki wajah se or mardon ko unse bulwane main maja ata hay.
Second is----- Deepika ki delivery ke baad 6 month ka gap jabki 2 months se jayda nahi lagta dobara sex ke liyea agar surgery se delivery ho, nahi toh sirf 1 month agar normal delivery... Main is liye kah raha kyunki main khud medical se related hoon.
Third------ jab amit ko Ritu ne torture kiya... Police kabhi sirf back par he nahi marti ki log kapre pahanke woh nishani chupa le... Police ye nahi dhekti woh toh har jagah marti hay or sabse pahle toh face par he jo samne hota hay or story main bhe ye show hay par amite ke face par koi nishan ya swelling nahi jabki abhi tak ki jitne hamne police torture news main dheke hay sab main face par jaroor kuch na kuch nisha ya swelling dhekne hay.
I don't have much interest in sex parts there are millions of story fill with only sex.... But what I interested is of funny talk of karuna,naina,kalpana and others story related like...
----advocate suman kab story main ane lagegi?
----- gangster shera kab ane lagega?
----- story kya tab tak chalegi jabtak ki amit poore college khatam kar business na sabhalne lage?
----- Kya woh baljeet rai ko business main haraker uska sab kuch cheen kar kangal karega bhikhari bana kr matlab jaanse mar ke mukti dene se kahi jayda saja toh jindigi deke Harpal Rone dena or pachtawa karna jayda sahi hay?
------ Or dr Rina ka kya hoga kyunki woh toh minimum 6 months maximum 1 year ke liyea London gaye matlab uske saath toh kuch hona nahi siwaye phone par bate.
----- monty kaha hay or kya hua uska?
----- Ankita jo aunty ki kitty party wali kya uska bhi koi role hay? Ya phir aunty ki kitty party main koi or bhi hay jise amit ka relation banege? Waise toh aunty ki beti karishma ka bhi same hoga so am not going to be shocked when it happen but wonder will she also get pregnant with amit or it will be limit to only sex...kyunki woh 2 bar apna bacha kho chuki hay or har aurat ke dil main maa bane ka experience or apne god main apna bacha dhekne ki badi icha hoti hay jise koi kabhi mita nahi sakta ye ek aysa ehsas hay jo sirf ek aurat he samaj sakti hay anyway let's see...
----- kya amit sab ko apne saath rakhega? well agar amit sabko ek he chat ke neeche sabko apne saath rakhe toh bhi I guess sab rahlengi samjhauta karke kyunki sab amite ko pyar or uske saath rahna chati hay so its possible or baljeet rai ka haweli numa ghar itna bara or itne sare kamre toh hay ki sab rah sakengi....
