Adultery Manhoos se mahan tak

[Ameya4]

Introduction ke wakt hi pata chal gaya tha Radha heroin hai story ki.

Sab ka size bataya gaya tha Radha chod ke..

Minjri ka thoda kuch samaj nahi aaraha tha but jab vo dusre gaon jari thi tab ki conversation ke vakt hi samaj gaya tha eska chapter toh close hone vala hai.

Ab ye rima eska bhi sab samaj jaye ga ek do clue me. Abhi bas samjha hai ki-
1.Rima kafi paiso vali hai.
2.Amit ko bohot pehle se janti hai.
3.Rima Monty aur Sheena ke group ko avoid kari hai.
So mera guess hai
-Rima Rohit ya Sheena se mili hue hai but hamare writer ko etna saral simple story pasand nahi so aisa nahi hoga.
-Dosra guess Rima Rohit ya fir Sheena se darti hai ya unke durachar ki shikar hai but iski bhi possibilities kam hai quki uska jo nature aur rehen sehen bataya gaya uske hisab se ye possible nahi.
-tisra aur last muze lagta hai ki Rima ka baap bohot bada tof hoga(acha bhi ho sakta hai ya fir bura bhi jab tak koi hint nahi kuch keh nahi sakte) jise sab ki fatti hogi ya fir rima ka background strong hai aur uski pehle hi mudbhed ho gayi hai Monty Sheena se.

Ab Rima ko le kar sirf do sawal hai.

1).Rima Amit ko college ane se pehle se janti hai? Ya baad me se?
Agar pehle se janti hogi toh sayad Amit aur uske mom dad ke past uska aur uske mom dad ka bhi roll rehega hi.

2).Rima ki Rohit n Sheena ke bich kya history hai?(Dosti /Dushmani/Rima ka koi sach/ ya fir writer ka koi Twist?)

Gauri aur amit
Muze lagta hai writer Gauri aur amit ke bich Maa beta vala hi pyar hi rakhege
Q ki writer ne pehle hi clear kar diya tha ki Gauri ki sari garmi ko vijay roj shant kar deta hai aur waise bhi ek bacha hojaye ga toh Gauri amit ki vaise hi koi baat nahi rahegi (I mean Radha se shadi ya fir Kamini ya Deepika mami ke sath sambandh.)


Ek toh maa ka pallu rehne do bichare ke liye jab uske mom dad ka pura sach pata chalega tab ke liye. Tab shayad bichre ko Gauri Radha Manju teena hi aisi character hai jo sambhal payegi.
Radha aur Amit ki Love story dono taraf se one sided hi rahegi lambe samai tak q ki agar un dono me se kisi ne bhi ikrar kiya toh love story romance suru fir amit ki sex life kam hojayigi aur introduction aur characters ke sath jo sambhand hai usse toh ye lagra hai ki uski sex life lambi chalegi aur full speed me rahegi shayad.
So Gauri aur Amit ko writer shayad maa beta hi rakhega nahi toh har jagah adultery incest aur romance hi rahega kahi toh mamta bhi chahiye na story me.

Mohit ke dad shayad Amit ke dad ke bohot ache dost hoge ye toh writer bhai ne mohit ke dad ki entry baad hi hint de diya tha.
Ab isaka conformation next ya uske baad ke update me conform ho jayega aur shayad Amit ko uske mom dad ke bare aur sach pata chal jaye jaise ki muze lagta hai ki amit ke mom dad ka accident nahi murder hua hai vo ya fir amit mar chuka hai aisa sab ko lagta hai ye baat aur uske chacha ki identity ya kuch aur but kuch na kuch toh jarur hoga.

Radha aur Amit toh ek dusre se bohot pyar karte hai aur ek dusre ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai. Ye baat Radha ne toh realise ki lekin Amit ko ab bhi nahi samjha.
Agar Divya mausi kuch bhi bolegi ya kare gi toh Radha hamesa Amit ko bachayegi ye baat toh pakki hai. Ye sab ab next update me Radha ke bday pr clear hogi jayega.

Manju madam Amit ki bua hai ye baat shayad writer manju mam ke sath pyar(sex) kuch samay bad khula karega.

Rahi baat Sheena ki toh writer Sheena ko starting se character acha bata raha tha but sangat kharab so shayad bhot sare samay baad vo fir se achi hojaye.

Shivani ka toh acha hona story ke liye bohot jaruri hai nahi toh story be vaja bohot lambi hojayegi q ki uske sivai shalu ko bachana bohot lamba chalega.

Last bacha Monty toh Monty bhi shayad jada der etna bada dushman nahi rahega Amit ka q ki muze lagta hai jald hi boss logo ki entry hogi story me .


Bhai bas kuch puchna chata hu.
1.Bhai agar story me kuch chut gaya hoga I mean koi clue ya hint jo maine abhi tak notice nahi kiya toh please ek bar bata dena q ki abhi tak nahi notice nahi kiya matlab age bhi notice karne ke chances bohot kam hai so please.
2.ab tak maine jo bhi bola vo sab muze lagta hai isiliye padhne me muze maza aata hai toh usmeka kuch sahi hoga kuch halat hoga but plz ap kya sahi kya galt bata kr story ke spoiler mat dena but agar agar kuch aisa ho jo muze pata hona chahiye toh bata dijiyega plz.
3.Bhai muze aisa laga ki abhi tak sirf story la built up tha asli story ab suru hogi.jaisa abhi vo sirf manhoos se bahar aaya hai ab vo mahan banega.
4. Bhai ap jaisa likh rahe ho vaisa hi likhiye but agar ho sake toh baki stories ki tarah jab war suru ho toh Amit ko luck ke vajese ya kisi ke help ki baje se bachna aur vo sab ghisi piti style me story mat rakhna amit ko bhi et(brick) ka javab pathar se dene vala aur koi bhi usse chal ya bal se na hara sake aisa bana dena. Agar vo kahi fasta bhi hai toh vo amit ki marji hogi ya amitka plan aise type ka kuch.

Bhai agar koi baat ka bura laga ho toh sorry.mai ek silent reader hu toh etne comments karta nahi hu so agar kuch galat bol diya toh chota bhai samaj ke maf kr dena.

Aur aisi gazab ki story likhne ke liye bohot bohot shukriya bhai aise hi likhe rahiye bohot maja araha hai padhne me..
Aur as a reader ummid nahi rakhta bhai but jab bhi din me do ya use jada update milata hai words me bata nahi sakta etni khushi milti hai.

Thank you very much Raja bhai.

 

[Arman to sabhi kae hae]

Bai aj update aae gae kya?

 

[Mkumar]

उपडेट

 

[kamdev99008]

update next dear

 

[Mkumar]

Update please

 

[Ayush2017]

Awesome

 

[siraz123fucker]

mujhe lagta hai rima relative hai monty or sheena ki
sister or cousin

 

[Raja chouhan]

Update 85



Darwaza khulte hi samne Aunty khade the Main khud kar unke paon chune laga to unhone mujhe gale laga liya.

Aunty s : jeete raho beta kaise ho ? Kab se tumhari rah dekh rahe the hum

Amit : main theek hun aunty aur maine to bataya tha k 12 baje tak aaunga.

Shivani : bataya tha maine mom ko magar ye to bar bar puchi ja rahi thi k abhi tak aya nahi Amit kya bat hai . Aise lagta hai jaise inhe jyada jaldi thi tumse Milne ki.

Aunty s : tum to chup hi raho subah se bar bar kabhi mobile to kabhi gate par hi nazar lagaye baithi ho. Kitni bar security guard de jakar puch chuki ho . Aao Amit tum andar aao iski hat mat suno

Shivani ka bangla jitna bahar se sundar tha utna hi aalishan andar se bhi tha. Aunty ne mujhe sofe par bithaya aur naukrani ko awaz di. Naukrani mere liye juice le aayi. Shivani mere sath hi sofe par baith gyi aur sath wali single chair par Aunty .

Aunty s : main bahut khush hun beta k tum hamare ghar aaye. Warna main samajhti tumne shivani ko maaf nahi kiya. Beta ye hamari iklauti Beti hai is liye ladli hone ki vajah se thoda shararti bhi magar isne jo kuch bhi kiya uski vajah se mera sir sharam se jhuk gya tha. Magar tumne us din jis tarah mujhe ma keh kar iski galati maaf kardi main bata nahi sakti mujhe kitni khushi mili thi. Kash mera bhi tumhare jaisa beta hota . Dhanya hai wo ma jisne tum jaise bete ko janam diya.

Amit : main apka beta hi to hun ma ji . Bachon ki galtiyon se parents ko sharmindagi hoti hai par ma ji galtiyan bhi to bache hi karte hain na. Shivani se bhi galti ho gyi. Main janta hun ye galat nahi hai aur galat ho bhi nahi sakti kyunki jiski aap jaisi ma ho wo bhala galat kaise ho sakti hai. Mujhe yakeen hai shivani samajh gyi hogi k usne kya kiya hai aur aage se ye koi galati nahi karegi.

Maine shivani ki taraf dekha to usne sharmindagi se sar jhukaya hua tha.

Amit : lo dekho khud mujhe yahan bulaya hai aur kaise chup chap baithi hai. Kya friends ki ghar bula kar aise hi sewa ki jati hai.

Shivani ne meri bat sunte hi meri taraf dekha to uski ankhon me aansoo the

Amit : are ye kya tum ro rahi ho? Lagta hai mera aana tumhe acha nahi laga . Acha Aunty Main chalta hun Main to wo hasne khelne wali apni dost se Milne aya tha magar lagta hai wo mujhse milna nahi chahti.

Main itna keh kar khada ho gya to shivani ne jaldi se meri baju pakad kar mujhe kheench kar wapis bitha diya .

Shivani : ja kar dikhao fir batati hun tumhe.

Amit : dekhiye aunty apki beti mujhe dhamki de rahi hai.

Aunty s : bilkul theek kar rahi hai meri beti . Tum kahin nahi ja sakte aaj. Itne Dino se tumhara intzar kar rahi hain hum ma beti aur tum aise jane ki bat kar rahe ho.

Shivani : dekho na ma khud hi mujhe apni dost kehta hai aur khud hi aise dil dukhane wali bat karta hai. Main tumhe kahin nahi jane dungi . Aaj tak mujhe tumhare jaisa itni achi soch Wala ek bhi dost nahi Mila tha aur ab Mila hai main tumhe mujhse mera dost chheen ne nahi dungi. Mom aap ne jo kuch banaya hai sab le aao Main ise apne hathon se khilaungi.

Shivani ka ye roop mujhe sochne par majboor kar raha tha . Kya ye wahi ladki hai jisne mujhe college me badnam karne ki koshish ki . Kya ye wahi ladki hai jo monty aur sheena k sirfire gang ki member hai. Aunty ki nature itni achi hai to zarur shivani k andar bhi unhi k gun honge to fir isne wo sab kyun kiya . Zarur iske peeche bhi koi na koi vajah hogi mujhe uska pata lagana chahiye. Shivani ki bat sun kar Aunty kitchen me chali gyi aur main reh gya akela shivani k sath.

Amit : meri ek bar ka sach sach jawab dogi?

Shivani : pucho jo bhi puchna hai.

Amit : tumhe dekh kar Main hairan hun. Abhi jo tumhara roop main dekh raha hun wo bilkul alag hai. Tum bilkul Aunty k jaisi lag rahi ho to fir college me tum wo sab kaise

Shivani : wo tum nahi samjhoge Amit wo meri bhool thi magar ab mujhe samajh aa gya hai k main apni khushi ki chah me galat raste par chal padi thi aur ye Rasta siwaye barbadi k aur kahin nahi le jayega. Main bahut shraminda hun k Maine tumhare sath itna galat kiya. Magar tumne mujhe is tarah maaf kar k mujhe sochne par majbur kar diya. Papa me hamesha mujhe har bat par support kiya meri har jaiz najayz wish poori ki jis wajah se mujhe sahi galat ka bhi dhyan nahi raha aur Main itni badi galati kar baithi apne usi ghamand me . Us din office me jo kuch hua usne mujhe sochne par majbur kar diya aur mom ne bhi mujhe iske liye bahut danta . Tum chahte to mujhe college se nikalwa bhi sakte the. Pata hai monty sheena aur mere Baki friends ne kitni koshish ki magar principal sir kisi ki bhi bat nahi man rahe the. Magar tumhare kehne se unhone mujhe maf kar diya. Us din mujhe ehsas hua k tum kitne ache ho aur main tumhare sath kitna galat kar rahi thi. Main sheena ko nahi chhod sakti kyunki wo meri bachpan ki dost hai . Is liye main college me tum se door rehti hun . Par agar tum kahoge to main use bhi chhod dungi. Main tumse ek hi request karti hun k meri us galti ko dil se nikal kar fir se mujhe apni dost bana lo. Main tumhare jaisa dost nahi khona chahti. Aur ma bhi tumhe kitna manti hai wo to tumhe apna beta samjhne lagi hai agar tum nahi aate to wo bhi mujhse naraz hi rehti.

Amit : shivani Main nahi chahta tum meri vajah se apne bachpan ki dost ko chhodo . Dosto ki ehmiyat Main janta hun. Main to chahunga k tum uske sath raho aur use bhi sahi rasta dikhao . Aur Han tum meri dost ho aur hamesha rahogi .

Shivani : o Amit I am so happy so happy

Shivani be mujhe gale laga liya . Itne me Aunty bhi aa gye.

Aunty s : bas bas Main ghar par hi hun . Aram se baitho. Dekh liya amit ye kaisi hai kabhi kuch to kabhi kuch. Abhi ro rahi thi abhi kaise khush hai. Main janti thi meri beti galat nahi ho sakti magar pata nahi kaise ye wo sab galat kar gyi . Par lagta hai meri beti mujhe wapis mil gyi hai aur ye sab tumhari vajah se hua hai. Thank you very much beta.

Amit : Aunty ye aap bar bar mujhe thank you Mat kaha kijiye . Kya ma bhi bachon ko thanks kehti hai kabhi.

Aunty. S : theek hai beta nahi kehti. Ab khana khao maine specially tumhare liye apne hathon se banaya hai.

Aunty kitna kuch khane ko le aayi thi aur for zabardasti mujhe khilane lagi. Shivani bhi Aunty k sath milkar mujhe khila khila kar marne par tul gyi. Aunty aur shivani ne mere gale tak pet bhar diya tha k ab saans bhi asani se nahi aa rahi thi.

Aunty s : beta ab kuch meetha le kar aati hun fir uske bad coffee pite hain.

Amit : bas bas Aunty ji aur jagah nahi hai please ab mujhe jane dijiye kahin mera pet na fatt jaye.

Aunty s : aise kaise jane dun aaj aaye ho pata nahi fir kab aaoge . Acha aisa karo tum kuch der aram karlo tab tak main ye sab saf karwati hun. Shivani tum Amit ko apna kamara dikha do tab tak

Shivani : chalo amit Main tumhe apna kamra dikhati hun.

Shivani mujhe apne kamre me le gyi. Uska kamra kisi Raj Kumari ki tarah saja hua tha. Bed ki side me ek bada sa teddy bear pada hua tha. Shivani ne mujhe bed par bithaya aur apni baten karne lagi apni purani aur bachpan ki tasveeren dikhane lagi. Tabhi Aunty be use bahar se awaz di to wo bahar chali gyi. Album dekhte hue ek tasveer neeche gir gyi jo shayad kisi aur tasveer k peeche chhipi hui thi jab meri nazar us par padi to main ek pal ki chonk .

Amit : ( to ye bat hai lagta hai isi liye shivani me wo sab kiya hoga . Dekhte hain k iske piche kitni gehrai hai )

Maine fir se tasveer chhupa di aur album ko dekhne laga. Uske bad shivani fir se mere pas aa gyi aur baten karte hue apni yaden mujhse share karne lagi. Meri nazar jab ghadi par gyi to pata chal k 3 baj chuke the aur Maine wapis bhi jana tha. Maine shivani ko wapis jane ka kaha to shivani be Aunty ko awaz laga di . Aunty mujhe rukne ko kehne lagi magar maine bata diya k mujhe practice par jana hota hai. Tab ja kar Aunty ne meri bat mani aur fir coffee lene chali gyi. Main kya soch kar aya tha aur kya kya ho raha tha. Baton baton me main to bhool hi gya k mujhe shalu ki madad karni hai to shivani ko iske liye razi karna hoga. Ek bar to mujhe laga tha k shivani itni achi hai k usse sidhe bat kar lun magar us tasveer ko dekhne k bad mujhe laga k aise bat nahi banegi iske liye to shivani k Kareeb jana hi padega.

Shivani : pata hi nahi chala kaise waqt guzar gya. Aur tumhare jane ka time bhi ho gya. Kya tum ruk nahi sakte kuch der aur ? Aaj chhutti karlo na . Kitna acha lag raha hai tumhare sath bat kar k.

Amit : nahi main chhutti nahi kar sakta agle Hafte competition bhi hai na.

Shivani: college me tum se mil nahi sakti waise tum Milne aaoge nahi to kaise milungi Main tumse?

Amit : ek kam ho sakta hai agar tumhe aitraz na ho to?

Shivani : tum batao main wo karungi

Amit : jyada kuch nahi hai. Tumhe car chalani aati hai magar mujhe nahi aati to kya tum mujhe car chalana sikha dogi ? Agar aitraz na ho to?

Shivani : ye tum kaisi baten kar rahe ho. Mujhe to khushi hogi isi bahane tumse Milne ka moka to milega aur baten bhi hoti rahengi.

Amit : to kab se time hoga tumhare pas?

Shivani : jab tum kaho anytime for you

Amit : theek hai to after college ya fir evening 7 baje k bad

Shivani : theek hai jab bhi tumhe theek lage tab bata dena Main aa jaungi.

Aunty coffee le aaye aur fir Maine Aunty k hath ki coffee pine k bad unse vida li . Aunty ne mujhe fir aane ka kaha . Shivani mujhe Bahar tak chhodne aayi. Uske bad main ghar aa gya aur kuch der aram kark college chala gya prctice k liye. Aaj hum sab ne kuch jyada hi mehnat ki aur Manju Mam k ghar main adha ghanta deri se pahuncha.

Manju m : mil gya time ? Maine to socha tha janab aaj aayenge hi nahi.

Amit : wo kya hai na agle hafte competition hain to ab hum log jyada mehnat karne lage hain.

Manju m : nazar aa raha . Dekho kapde abhi tak geele hain tumhare . Aur paseene ki badbu aa rahi hai jao pehle Naha lo ja kar.

Amit : magar fir bhi to yahi kapde pehenne padenge

Manju m : tum aisa karo kal apne kuch kapde yahan lete ana jab bhi tum yahan aao pehle Naha liya karo aur fir padai.

Amit : nahi main aise hi theek hun isse aapko tangi hogi.

Manju m : ( mera kaan pakadte hue) kya kaha ? Mujhe tangi hogi? Kya Bhai ki vajah se behan ko tangi ho sakti hai. Tune aisa kaha bhi kaise

Amit : sorry sorry galti ho gyi mere kaan chhodiye aaaaaaaa dard ho raha hai please didi.

Manju m : Dubara aisi bat ki to dekh Lena chal jaldi ja kar Naha le Main towel deti hun.

Mam k ghar me neeche k dono kamron me attach bathroom the . Main dusre kamre me chala gya jo khali rehta tha. Apne kapde nikal kar bed par rakhe aur towel le kar nahane chala gya. Achi tarah khud ko saf karne k bad jab main towel bandh kar bathroom se bahr nikla to mere kapde bed par nahi the. Maine Mam ko awaz di .

Manju m : kya hai kyun chilla rahe ho?

Mam bolti hui jaise hi andar aayi Main sirf towel lapete samne adhnangi halat me khada tha. Mam ek pal k liye shant ho gyi aur unki nazar meri body ka avlikan karne lagi. Bade majboot kandhe chodi chhati bhari bharakam kaya jo kapdo k bahar se shayad achi tarah pata nahi chalti thi. Pet muscle to nahi the magar pet sakht tha uske neeche towel jo aage peeche dono side se ubhra hua tha . Majboot pathon aur damdaar hathyar k karan aur fir mote taaze gosht se bharpoor pehalwani jaanghen. Mam mujhe gehri nazar se dekh rahi thi aur kamar k neeche ek bar unki nazar bhi thehar gyi thi . Maine khud ko chhupane ki acting karte hue kaha.

Amit : mere kapde kahan gye ab Main kya pehnunga.

Manju m : wo wo kapde gande the Maine unhe machine se nikal kar tang diya hai pankhe k neeche. Thodi der me hi Sukh jayenge to pehan Lena.

Amit : tab tak kya Main aise hi nanga rahun?

Manju m: kuch nahi hota aram se baith jao koi nahi ata yahan jyada nakhre na dikhao. Main tab tak kuch khane ko banati hun. Coffee piyoge tum ?

Amit : pi lunga magar jaldi mujhe kuch pehnne ko bhi dijiye

Manju m : oye hoye to banno ko sharam aa rahi hai bina kapdo k . Ab to tumhe aise hi rakhungi bada tees mar khan samjhte ho na khud ko ab aya unth Pahad k neeche he he he

Amit : acha aapko hansi aa rahi hai agar Maine kuch kiya na to fir bologi mujhe

Manju m : kya kar lega tu ? Ab to main tumhe kapde nahi dene wali tujhe jo krna hai karle.

Amit : main keh deta hun mujhe tang Mat kijiye warna acha nahi hoga.

Manju m : to munne raja ko gussa bhi ata hai. Chu chu chu chu bechara bina kapdo k ghar kaise jayega sharam aa rahi munne ko

Manju m mera mazak uda rahi thi maine bhi soch liya k abhi mam ki bolti band karta hun. Main mam ki taraf bada to wo mujhe thenga dikhati hui bhag gyi. Main bhi unko pakadne k liye unke piche bhaga . Wo dodti hui apne kamre me chali gyi . Main bhi unke piche unke kamre me chala gya aage bed par chadne k liye jaise unhone paon uthaya maine unhe piche se daboch liya . Magar main balance nahi bana paya aur mam ko sath liye bed par gir gya. Mam mere niche dab gyi thi. Maine unke pet gudgudi karne laga

Amit : ab bataiye kya bol rahi thi. Main munna hun ? Mujhe nanga bhejengi ghar ?

Manju m : he he he chhodo he he he bas bhi karo ha ha ha bas bas ha ha ha ha aur nahi sorry sorry ruk jao bas bas

Amit : ab logi panga mujhse ?

Maine mam ko dheela chhodte hue ye poocha to man fir se meri pakad se nikalne ki koshish karte hue boli .

Manju m : tum abhi bache ho aur bachon ko chaddi me hi rakha jata hai munna

Mam fir se mera mazak udane lagi to Main fir unpar toot pada aur unko dabochne ki koshish ki to Mam apna bachav karti hui palat gyi . Unhone apni ek paon mere pet pe rakh kar mujhe piche dhaklne ki koshish ki . Maine unke dono baju pakad liye the magar unke paon ki vajah se main unhe kabu nahi kar pa raha tha . Unke paon ko hatane k liye maine apni body Tezi se is tarah jhatka k unka paon fisal kar side me nikal gya jisse maine unki dono tango k beech me aa gya. Maine unko poori tarah kabu karne k liye unke upar late gya aur unke hath upar ko sidhe karte hue bed par daba diye. Ab wo hil bhi nahi pa rahi thi.

Amit : ab boliye kya bol rahi thi.

Manju m : yahi ki tu Aise hi acha lagta hai

Amit : aapne kuch aur kaha tha

Manju m : aur kya kaha tha maine

Amit : apne mujhe bacha kaha tha

Manju m : Maine to itna kaha tha k bacho ko chaddi me rakha jata hai.

Amit : matlab aapne mujhe bacha kaha tha . Is liye ab maafi mango

Manju m : main kyun mangu maafi maine kaun sa jhooth kaha tha.

Amit : lagta hai aise nahi manengi aap

Maine Mam k dono hath apne ek hath se pakde aur ek hath se unke pet me fir se gudgudi karne laga.

Manju m : ha ha ha aaaiiii chhodo hato ha ha ha chhodooooo ha ha ha bas bas bassss munnna nahi to Teri chaddi utar jayegi

Mam mujhse chhutne ki koshish kar rahi thi k unka ek hath mere hath se fisal gya aur wo bhi mere pet par gudgudi karne lagi. Maine jaldi se unka hath pakdne ki koshish ki to mam ne apni dono tange meri kamar par bandh kar mujhse zor azmaish shuru kar di. Bhala wo Nazuk badan mere jaise bhari bharkam shareer wale pehalwan k sath kaise kushti kar sakti thi magar Main bhi unko jyada zor se nahi daba raha tha balki Main to maza le raha tha unhe tang kar k. Maine apne ghutne bed par tika kar upar uthne ki koshish ki to Mam be apni tango se mujhe zor laga kar uthne nahi diya

Manju m : bade aaye pehalwan Main bhi to dekhun kitna dam hai tum me

Amit : acha mujhe challenge kar rahi hain ye lo

Maine apni kamar se unki kamar ko dabate hue unke dono hath pakade hue aise hi uthne ki koshish ki . Is sab me mujhe yad hi nahi tha k mera towel kab ka mera sath chhod chuka hai aur is tarah dabane se mera land mam ki choot k muh par lag chuka tha. Mere is tarah de dabav dene se mera land jo k is tarah ki ragdai se khada ho chuka tha Mam ki choot par dab gya aur kapde faad kar andar ghusne ko hone laga. Main mam ko pakde hue sidha baith gya aur Mam aise hi meri kamar par tange kanchi shape me kase hue mere land par yani meri god me baith gyi.

Amit : ab bolo aur dekhna hai dam .

Mam ko shayad ab apne neeche mera land chubhne laga tha . Jiska ehsas hote hi unki sari hansi aise gayab ho gyi jaise gadhe k sir se seeng .

Manju m : mujhe neeche utaro Amit

Amit : bas ho gyi bolti band ? Ab nahi dekhna zor?

Manju m : nahi bas ab mujhe chhodo tumhare kapde sukh gye honge please mujhe chhodo

Mam k is tarah serious hote hi main chonk gya aur unhe turant chhod diya. Mam jaldi se ek side ko Palti aur uth kar jane se pehle meri tango k beech me dekha. Unki nazar ka peeche karte hue jab Maine neeche dekha to Main bhi hairan ho gya. Towel khul chuka tha aur land maharaj chaddi me se top ki tarah sar uthaye apni maujudgi ka ehsas karwa rahe the. Maine jaldi se towel ki taraf nazar daudai tab tak Mam kamre se ja chuki thi. Maine towel utha kar lapet liya. Mujhe khud par sharmindagi hone lagi ki Mam kya sochegi maine ye kya galti kardi . Mujhe khud par kabu rakhna chahiye tha ab Main unka samna kaise karunga? kahin wo bura hi na man jaye? Jo bhi hua anjane me hua isme meri koi galti nahi hai . Mujhe maafi mang leni cahhiye . Wo zarur maf kar dengi . Agar unhone gussa kiya to Main kal se nahi aaunga. Mujhe unse bat karni chahiye. Main kamre se bahar nikle to Mam mujhe kahin nazar nahi aayi Main dusre kamre me gya aur fir guest room me magar wo kahin nahi thi . Mujhe laga Mam mujhse naraz ho gyi hain. Main khud ko kosne laga aur jakar dusre room me baith gya. Maine sar jhukaye baitha soch raha tha k Mam kamre me aayi

Manju m : ab kya yunhi baithe rahoge ? Ye lo kapde pehen lo . Pehnne layak ho gye hain. Jaldi karo coffee taiyar hai

Maine nazar utha kar Mam ki taraf dekha to wo normal lag rahi thi magar meri nazron me itni gambheerta dekh kar Mam wahin ruk gyi

Amit : I am sorry Mam mujhse galti ho gyi

Manju m : galti pehle to nahi hui thi magar ab kar rahe ho. Main tumhe ek behan ki tarah treat kar rahi thi aur tumne mujhe Mam kehna shuru kar diya. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hua jiski vajah se tum mafi mango . Hansi mazak me to ye sab ho jata hai . Waise bhi mujhe acha laga tumhare sath chhedkhani karna . Mujhe mera bachpan yad aa gya. Agar tumne koi aisi waisi bay ki ya ye rone dhone wali shakal banai to keh deti hun pehle hi . Yahan se chaddi me hi ghar bhejungi han.

Amit : aapko bura nahi laga ?

Manju m : bura to ab lag raha hai Teri ye roni surat dekh kar . Lagta hai aaj tu mar kha k rahega mere hathon se.

Mam mujhe marne ki acting karte hue aage badi to Main jhatke se khada ho gya. Aur hath jodne laga . Mam ne kapde mere upar fenke aur jaldi bahar aane ko kaha. Main to soch raha tha k Mam gussa hongi par unhone saf kar diya k unhe gussa nahi aya shayad ab wo mujhe dil se hi Bhai man baithi thi magar fir bhi mujhe acha nahi lag raha jis tarah mera land poora khada tha zahir hai unko bhi uski chubhan mehsus hui hogi . Khair mam ne bat ko khatam kar diya aur maine bhi soch liya k aisi galti dobara nahi hone dunga.main kapde pehen kar bahar aa gya aur Mam k sath coffee peene laga .

Manju m : jaldi coffee khatam karo aur kitab kholo . Aaj to padai beech me hi reh gyi .

Amit : aaj rehne dete hain na didi mujhe zara ek kam hai

Manju m : Maine kaha na mujhe bura nahi laga to fir tum kyun usi bat ko lekar mood off kar rahe ho ?

Amit : wo bat nahi hai . Asal me kal meri cousin ka birthday hai to Maine abhi tak uske liye koi gift nahi liya . Ab agar der ki to fir market bhi band ho jayegi

Manju m : pehle kyun nahi bataya ? Ruko Main abhi aayi.

Mam itna keh kar apne room me chali gyi aur main sochne laga k mam kya karne gyi hain. Main baitha soch hi raha tha k main yellow suit pehne mere samne aa kar khadi ho gyi. Ye un suits me de tha jo Maine Mam ko dilwaye the. Mam us yellow suit me bahut hi khubsurat lag rahi thi bilkul foolon ki tarah Mam is yellow color me apni kanchan kaya ki chhata bikher rahi thi. Mujhe ye samajh nahi aa raha tha k suit mam Par janch raha hai ya mam suit par . Stitching karne wale me bhi kya karigari dikhai thi . Bilkul sahi nap ka stitch kiya tha . Safed salwar yellow kameez ka ye combination Mam k dudhiyan rang par sone par sunhage jaisa lag raha tha. Mam kab se mere samne khadi thi aur main unhe sar se paon tak aankhen faade dekh raha tha.

Manju m : kya hua acha nahi laga kya?

Amit : beautiful aise lag raha hai jaise Suraj ki ujali kiran jaise khilta hua peela gulab aap to indr lok de utari koi apsara lag rahi hain.

Manju m : ( blushing ) bas bas itni bhi tareef Mat karo . Ye tareef apni gf k liye bacha kar rakho

Amit : gf to jab hogi tab hogi magar ye tareef sirf aapke liye hai

Manju m : kyun kya tumhari gf nahi hai? Itne handsome ho itne samjhdar ho fir bhi gf nahi ? Strange

Amit : kash k aap jaisi koi mil jati to zarur gf bana leta .

Manju m : kya kaha ?

Amit(Ye main kya bol gya bhawnaon me . Ab to Mam zarur gussa karengi ) mere kehne ka matlab tha mujhe gf banane me interest nahi.

Manju m : to main dhooond deti hun apne chhote Bhai k liye ek pyari si gf.

Amit : rehne dijiye aap jaisi koi aur nahi banai hogi bhagwan ne

( fir se zuban fisal gyi)

Manju m : lagta hai tumhara ilaz karna hi padega . Chalo ab jaldi karo . Ab tumhe der nahi ho rahi ?

Amit : Han Han wo Main chalta hun . Acha bye mam

Manju m : ae kahan ja rahe ho ? Mujhe bhi sath lekar jao .

Amit : aap kahan jayengi ?

Manju m : tumhe apni cousin k liye gift Lena hai na ?

Amit : ji

Manju m : to tumhe kaise pata chalega ladkiyon ko kya pasand hai kya nahi. Main tumhari madad karungi gift lene me isi liye to ye naya suit pehna aur tum budhu ram itna bhi nahi samjhe . Chalo ab aur ye bar bar mam kehna band karo. Mam sirf college me

Amit : ji samajh gya

Main Manju m k is ravaiye se man hi man khush hua aur jo thodi bahut atmgalani ho rahi thi wo bhi door ho gyi. Main bahar nikal kar khada ho gya k pooch lun bike par jana hai ya car se. Mam lock laga kar meri taraf palti to mera matlab samajh kar boli

Manju m : jo maza bike par ata hai wo car me nahi ata is liye bina kahe bike nikal liya karo.

Aur ye piche rani kyu likha rakha hai tune bike ke

Amit : kyunki yehi meri gf hai aur main isi k sath khush hun

Manju m : to romance bhi isi k sath karne ka Irada hai kya? Waise Maine to nahi suna k science me itni tarakki bhi kar li ho . He he he

Main mam ki bat se jhenp gya . Maine jaldi se bike start ki aur Mam ko piche bitha kar nikal pada. Main sidha mall me hi gya kyunki mind me koi idea nahi tha k kya Lena hai aise me mall hi better option thi jahan bahut sari alag alag kism ki dukane ek hi chhat k neeche mil jati hain. Mam mujhe ek super store me le gyi ye ek bahut bada section tha jisme har cheez mojud thi . Ladies section me Mam nye fashion k branded top dekhne lagi to Maine unhe roka

Manju m : kya hua ?

Amit : wo meri cousin simple kapde pehnti hai matlab suits hi to wo ye sab nhi pehnegi

Manju m : pehle kyun nahi bataya . Chalo kuch aur dekhte hain.

Mam ghumte hue ek section me ruk gyi jahan par bahut hi sundar hand bag tange hue the . Mam unme se bag dekhne lagi aur ek bag Pasand kar liya.

Manju m : ye kaisa rahega ? College going hai na ? Us hisab se ye perfect rahega agar nahi hai to bata do ?

Amit : ji wo apne hi college me hai

Manju m : acha acha use to Maine dekha hai college me she is really beautiful bahut simple aur cute c hai wo . Tum ye bag use gift de do college me uske kam aayega simple bhi hai aur ye brand bhi acha hai .

Humme wo bag le liya magar Mam ne uske paise khud pay kiye ye keh kar k ye meri taraf se hai. Agar ye Mam ki taraf se hai to meri taraf se kya hua. Main sochne laga k Radha ko kya diya ja sakta hai .

( yahi sahi rahega use iski zarurat hai )

Main man ko sath le kar electronic section me chala gya aur ek new branded mobile Radha k liye le liya

Manju m : gift le to liya tha na fir iski kya zarurat thi

Amit : wo to apki taraf se hua na. Ye meri taraf se . Waise bhi uske pas mobile nahi hai aur college me to sabke pas rehta hai isse usko bahut fayda hoga.

Manju m : kya ? Uske pas abhi tak mobile nahi tha. Lagta hai wo abhi tak college life me aayi hi nahi hai. Bahut innocent lagti hai warna ye sab to school me hi shuru ho jata hai.

Amit : wo aisi hi hai . Bahut innocent aur cute Bhagwan kare use kisi ki nazar na lage . Wo hamesha khush rahe

Manju m : lagta hai tumhe bahut pyari hai wo fir to wo sachmuch achi hogi warna tum aise tareef nahi karte . Mujhe milwana usse kal.

Amit : jaisa aap kahen . Ye gift aap khud hi de dena.

Manju m : nahi college me ye sab acha nahi lagta . Tum khud hi de dena .

Hum shopping k bad fir ek sath dinner karne k bad hi ghar aaye . Mam ko jaise mere sath rehna acha lagane laga tha. Aur jab unhe chhod kar ghar jane laga to unke chehre par fir udasi chha gyi.

Amit : ab kya hua

Manju m : aaj tum ja rahe ho kal tum birthday me busy hoge . Uska matlab parson tak wait krna hoga?

Amit : kal milunga na college me

Manju m : kya tum kal nahi aa sakte ?

Amit : parson fir se sath me dinner karne jayenge theek hai ?

Manju m : theek hai . Apni cousin ko meri taraf se good wishes dena .

Amit : kal khud hi de dena

Main bye bye karta hua ghar ki taraf nikal gya.

 

[Raja chouhan]

Awsome bhai waiting for next

Ab dekhna hai ki kahani kaun sa mod legi.. Yahan is update se kahani ki kaya palat shuru hoti hai.. Waiting for next update

Mast update

Bahut kuch tha.. maza aa gaya

Awesome update

Superb Raja bhai.....
Bahut hi khubsurat story hai or us se v khubsurat iska har ek update hai... Is kahani ki sabse acchi baat ye hai ki isme ek v bakwas nhi hai. Isme faltu bate na hone k karan or v story acchi banti jaa rahi hai.... Sach kahu to is story k lye mere pass shabd nhi hai. Ye story jitni acchi hai utni meri capacity nhi hai jo mai story k according apni pratikriya de saku......
Apka bahut bahut dhanyawad jo itni acchi story hum sab k beech rakhi......
Apki koi or story hai to please uska link v de dijyega....

Raja chouhan bhai bht zabardast update eagrly waiting for the new one nd bhai lockdown ha to kindly koshish kro aik din me 2 updates.

bhai mast update
story nay mod par

very nice update
maine kagi dino baad ye story visit ki
kafi kuch hua story me
but amit ki college life itni active kyun dikha rahe ho
manju mam wala kissa pace up kardo thoda and shivani and shalu wala kissa bhi pace up kardo
it's just suggestions and request
you know better

Nice n fantastic update

Nice update bhai

Awesome updates

Dhakd update

Keep rocking

Ab radha ke bd par maza aye ga jab amit diviya masi ke ghar jaye ga

Nice update

Awesome update ?

Nice update

Jaandaar update bhai.
Waiting for next update.

Lovely update bro

Amit ka pyar pane ki hod Radha, Neha Naina Karuna Nidhi Reema me lagi hui hai. Dekhe kaun pa sakti hai. Waiting for next

Bahot Hi Badhiya Update Tha Bhai
Monty, Sheena aur Rima shayad aapas me cousins hai aur isiliye canteen me Monty aur Sheena ki aawaze sun kar Rima waapis chali gayi Matlab ye teeno Amit ke dono Taau ki aulade hai Amit ke cousins aur Manju Amit ki Bua Anjaane me hi Sahi Amit apni dusari family ke paas pahunch hi gaya. Shivani aur uski Maa milkar kahi Amit ko phansa na de Amit ke liye Radha ka Pyar shayad Amit ko Divya ke Dil se apni Nafrat mitane me madadgar sabit ho Radha ka Birthday aur Amit ka Competition Divya aur Amit ke bich ki duriya shayad kuch kam karde Aur ab shayad Amit aur Manju me Bahot jald Incest relation shuru ho jaye Dekhte hai
Waiting for Update

Mast time guzar raha hai abhi tak dekhte hain amit shivani ke zariye woh videos haasil kar paayega ki nahin? Aur yeh shivani ki koi chaal toh nahin na?
Manju amit ke saath kaise fir se jina shur'u karegi aur jab use amit ki haqiqat pata lagegi toh uska kya reaction hoga......
Lagta hai...... Radha bhi amit se pyaar karne lagi hai dekhte hain amit ko is pyaar ka ahsaas kab hoga aur kya woh is pyaar ko qubool kar paayega?
Kya divya ka amit ke liye jazb prem baahar aa paayega? Jab use yeh pata lagega ki radha amit se pyaar karne lagi hai tab woh kya karegi? Aur baaqi parivaarwalon ka kya reaction hoga

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

Super update bhai

Nai bhai us ek ko chor ke sbko chod do q ki wo ek h insaan h jo usko real love samja skti h incase in future hero kahi hawas ke chalte koi ulta kadam uthaye to tb dipika mami nd kamini mami ki jagah gauri bina sex ke use life ka nazariya de skti h mere hisab se to ye thik lag rha baki aapki marzi bhai

Jabardast update

Waiting for update bhai

Koi ek character to yesa hona chahiye jiske feeling ko samajne k liye physical relationship jaruri na ho....

Bhai Mujhe bhi lagta hai ke Gauri ko Amit ke Pyar ki Zarurat mehsus hogi jaisa Wo Kamini aur Deepika ko de raha hai kyuki jo use Vijay se itne saalo me nahi mila wo Amit se Sirf ek raat me mila hai aur jaisa Aapne dikhaya ke Gauri Amit ke room me hote huye bhi Kamini aur Amit ne Dusare room me jaa kar sex kiya to jab Amit Week me ek Baar ghar aayega to Deepika aur Kamini apne aapko rok nahi payegi aur Gauri bhi apne aapko Amit ka doshi mante huve jyada se jyada time Amit ke sath bitana chahegi to Deepika aur Kamini ka ye Raaz Gauri ko Pata chal hi jana hai tab Gauri ki Amit ko dekhne ki Nazar badal jayegi uski bhi ichha hogi ke jaise pregnancy me Kamini aur Deepika ko unke hone wale bachche ke Baap ka jo Pyar mil raha hai uski Kokh me pal rahe bachche ke Baap ka Pyar bhi use aur uske bachche ko mile. Ab ye aapki lekhni par depend karta hai ke ye Sara scene Kaise create karna hai kyuki jab ye Raaz Gauri ke saamne khulega to pahele to wo Naraz hogi Lekin usne bhi Baanjh hone ke Taane sahe hai isliye wo Deepika aur Kamini ki Majburi ko samajh jayegi. Mera suggestion Bas yahi hai Baaki aapko jo Sahi lage wo Likhte raho Bhai.

Bilkul nahi bhai. Admi pyar krne ke liye hi bana hai...

Mere Nazariye se Gauri aur Amit me Incest relationship hona chahiye aur wo bhi Deepika se bhi jyada bonding wala kyuki wo dono Emotionally Bahot jyada attached hai mana Gauri ne use bachpan se Bete ki tarha Pala hai lekin wo uska saga beta nahi hai aur Yaha to kayi stories sage Maa Bete par based hai. Ab to wo Amit ke bachche ki Maa bhi Banne wali hai.

Shukriya Bhai Aapka par main aapke saamne kuch bhi nahi hu. Aapki Imagination aur Writing skill Bahot achhi hai Have a Good Luck Bhai

Lajawab superb update.......?

Waiting for next

Bhai jab Divya Amit ko Dil se apna legi to use Amit aur Radha ke Rishte se Koi Problem nahi hogi kyuki Vijay ne bataya tha ke bachpan se hi Damini Divya se kaha karti Radha Meri Beti hai aur uske bade hone par wo use le legi aur Divya kaheti thi Amit Mera Beta hai main use lelungi is Liye us problem ke hone ka Koi Chance nahi hai.

Mere khayal se Gauri or Amit k beech aisa rishta nhi hona chahiye kyonki bhale hi Gauri ne use janam nhi diya but usne apne dil se humesha Amit ko beta hi mana hai. Or aapne jis trah Gauri ka character avi tak dhikhaya hai us se to mujhe yahi lagta hai or ha Gauri ye jarur chahegi aapne bacche k lye ki use uske original pita k pyar pita k jaisa hi milti rahe...
Agar Gauri or Amit ka sex scene dhikhate v hai to kuch is trah dhikhaya ki Amit or Gauri k beech avi jaisa relation hai wo dhumil nhi hona chahiye....ye mera ko suggestions nhi hai. Suggestions to wo hi de sakta jise insabka behater gyan ho. Baki mujhe aap pe pura bharosa hai aap jo v likhenge bahut hi acche trah se likhenge.....

Nice update bhai.
Divya masi jo damini ki judwa hain usse bohot zyada pyaar karti hain to usi ke ansh se nafrat kyun bhai ye to ajeeb baat ho gayi.
Agar divya sach me damini ko pyaar karti thi to uske bete se kabhi bhi nafrat ya hamesha use dukh nahi deti.
Nagar ye dischasp hoga jab radha akeli amit ko ghar bulayegi ( dusre mousi aur behno ke bina) jab divya mausi ka bartaav kaisa hoga amit ke saath kya wo jab use ignore karegi ya use ghar se nikalne ke liye kuch karegi ya khud chali jayegi.
Aur mujhe aisa lagta hain amit, rama aunty ke saath zyadti kar raha hain. Na kabhi pyaar bhari baate karta hain na kabhi khudse kuch karta hain atleast gaal pe bhi kiss nahi karta jisse rama ko apni importance ka pata lage.
Sirf chudai karta hain wo bhi aadhe man se, chalo man le ki chudai me use ab maza nahi ata magar rama aunty jitna uska khayaal rakhti hain amit se jismani rishto se pehle se jaisa ke hamesha nashta aur juice pilakar bhejna aur uske liye pareshaan hona usse to ye lagta hain ke wo sirf hawas nahi usse zyada hain pyaar hain jaisa apne bete ko karti hain par hawas bhi mitati hain.
Ye hawas to dono mami ke saath bhi hoti hain unhe to amit bohot care karta hain usi tarah rama ko bhi thoda bohot pyaar dikhana chahiye mujhe aisa laga.

I think yahan jab bhi gauri ko amit ki zarurat ek premi ke roop mein ho toh use ek premi banaya jaye jahan kahin zaroorat ek bete ki ho wahaan use ek bete ke roop mein hi dikhaya jaye

Lekin yeh bhi toh hai na bro ki raaz jinhe chhipaya jaye woh aksar bina khole hi zaahir ho jate hain

Nice

Firstly bro yeh dekhiye ki jab woh aisa kaha karti thin toh tab ki aur abki paristhitiyon mein kitna antar hai tab uska amit ke liye prem zaahir hota tha par ab us prem ko unhone apne andar jazb kar liya hai
Secondly radha chunki uski cousin bhi hai toh aise mein bhi mushkil hoga unka ise jaldi accept karna....

Bhai mera kehna wo hi tha
Situation ke bina ek dum mat lana

Amit kam pyar batna he or pyar ke roop anek hote he
Waiting

english madam uski didi ke sath 2 husband ki bhumika bhi nibha skta he jis se vo hr trh se unko khush rkh ske ....like mature bivi or didi vala role ...baki jo bhi writer ke thought ho ...

Mujhe aisa lag raha h ki yeh manju mam hi amit bua h
Dekhte aage kia hota h
Thanks for lovely update

Introduction ke wakt hi pata chal gaya tha Radha heroin hai story ki.

Sab ka size bataya gaya tha Radha chod ke..

Minjri ka thoda kuch samaj nahi aaraha tha but jab vo dusre gaon jari thi tab ki conversation ke vakt hi samaj gaya tha eska chapter toh close hone vala hai.

Ab ye rima eska bhi sab samaj jaye ga ek do clue me. Abhi bas samjha hai ki-
1.Rima kafi paiso vali hai.
2.Amit ko bohot pehle se janti hai.
3.Rima Monty aur Sheena ke group ko avoid kari hai.
So mera guess hai
-Rima Rohit ya Sheena se mili hue hai but hamare writer ko etna saral simple story pasand nahi so aisa nahi hoga.
-Dosra guess Rima Rohit ya fir Sheena se darti hai ya unke durachar ki shikar hai but iski bhi possibilities kam hai quki uska jo nature aur rehen sehen bataya gaya uske hisab se ye possible nahi.
-tisra aur last muze lagta hai ki Rima ka baap bohot bada tof hoga(acha bhi ho sakta hai ya fir bura bhi jab tak koi hint nahi kuch keh nahi sakte) jise sab ki fatti hogi ya fir rima ka background strong hai aur uski pehle hi mudbhed ho gayi hai Monty Sheena se.

Ab Rima ko le kar sirf do sawal hai.

1).Rima Amit ko college ane se pehle se janti hai? Ya baad me se?
Agar pehle se janti hogi toh sayad Amit aur uske mom dad ke past uska aur uske mom dad ka bhi roll rehega hi.

2).Rima ki Rohit n Sheena ke bich kya history hai?(Dosti /Dushmani/Rima ka koi sach/ ya fir writer ka koi Twist?)

Gauri aur amit
Muze lagta hai writer Gauri aur amit ke bich Maa beta vala hi pyar hi rakhege
Q ki writer ne pehle hi clear kar diya tha ki Gauri ki sari garmi ko vijay roj shant kar deta hai aur waise bhi ek bacha hojaye ga toh Gauri amit ki vaise hi koi baat nahi rahegi (I mean Radha se shadi ya fir Kamini ya Deepika mami ke sath sambandh.)


Ek toh maa ka pallu rehne do bichare ke liye jab uske mom dad ka pura sach pata chalega tab ke liye. Tab shayad bichre ko Gauri Radha Manju teena hi aisi character hai jo sambhal payegi.
Radha aur Amit ki Love story dono taraf se one sided hi rahegi lambe samai tak q ki agar un dono me se kisi ne bhi ikrar kiya toh love story romance suru fir amit ki sex life kam hojayigi aur introduction aur characters ke sath jo sambhand hai usse toh ye lagra hai ki uski sex life lambi chalegi aur full speed me rahegi shayad.
So Gauri aur Amit ko writer shayad maa beta hi rakhega nahi toh har jagah adultery incest aur romance hi rahega kahi toh mamta bhi chahiye na story me.

Mohit ke dad shayad Amit ke dad ke bohot ache dost hoge ye toh writer bhai ne mohit ke dad ki entry baad hi hint de diya tha.
Ab isaka conformation next ya uske baad ke update me conform ho jayega aur shayad Amit ko uske mom dad ke bare aur sach pata chal jaye jaise ki muze lagta hai ki amit ke mom dad ka accident nahi murder hua hai vo ya fir amit mar chuka hai aisa sab ko lagta hai ye baat aur uske chacha ki identity ya kuch aur but kuch na kuch toh jarur hoga.

Radha aur Amit toh ek dusre se bohot pyar karte hai aur ek dusre ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai. Ye baat Radha ne toh realise ki lekin Amit ko ab bhi nahi samjha.
Agar Divya mausi kuch bhi bolegi ya kare gi toh Radha hamesa Amit ko bachayegi ye baat toh pakki hai. Ye sab ab next update me Radha ke bday pr clear hogi jayega.

Manju madam Amit ki bua hai ye baat shayad writer manju mam ke sath pyar(sex) kuch samay bad khula karega.

Rahi baat Sheena ki toh writer Sheena ko starting se character acha bata raha tha but sangat kharab so shayad bhot sare samay baad vo fir se achi hojaye.

Shivani ka toh acha hona story ke liye bohot jaruri hai nahi toh story be vaja bohot lambi hojayegi q ki uske sivai shalu ko bachana bohot lamba chalega.

Last bacha Monty toh Monty bhi shayad jada der etna bada dushman nahi rahega Amit ka q ki muze lagta hai jald hi boss logo ki entry hogi story me .


Bhai bas kuch puchna chata hu.
1.Bhai agar story me kuch chut gaya hoga I mean koi clue ya hint jo maine abhi tak notice nahi kiya toh please ek bar bata dena q ki abhi tak nahi notice nahi kiya matlab age bhi notice karne ke chances bohot kam hai so please.
2.ab tak maine jo bhi bola vo sab muze lagta hai isiliye padhne me muze maza aata hai toh usmeka kuch sahi hoga kuch halat hoga but plz ap kya sahi kya galt bata kr story ke spoiler mat dena but agar agar kuch aisa ho jo muze pata hona chahiye toh bata dijiyega plz.
3.Bhai muze aisa laga ki abhi tak sirf story la built up tha asli story ab suru hogi.jaisa abhi vo sirf manhoos se bahar aaya hai ab vo mahan banega.
4. Bhai ap jaisa likh rahe ho vaisa hi likhiye but agar ho sake toh baki stories ki tarah jab war suru ho toh Amit ko luck ke vajese ya kisi ke help ki baje se bachna aur vo sab ghisi piti style me story mat rakhna amit ko bhi et(brick) ka javab pathar se dene vala aur koi bhi usse chal ya bal se na hara sake aisa bana dena. Agar vo kahi fasta bhi hai toh vo amit ki marji hogi ya amitka plan aise type ka kuch.

Bhai agar koi baat ka bura laga ho toh sorry.mai ek silent reader hu toh etne comments karta nahi hu so agar kuch galat bol diya toh chota bhai samaj ke maf kr dena.

Aur aisi gazab ki story likhne ke liye bohot bohot shukriya bhai aise hi likhe rahiye bohot maja araha hai padhne me..
Aur as a reader ummid nahi rakhta bhai but jab bhi din me do ya use jada update milata hai words me bata nahi sakta etni khushi milti hai.

Thank you very much Raja bhai.

Bai aj update aae gae kya?

उपडेट

update next dear

Update please

Awesome

Update posted

 

[Raja chouhan]

B

Introduction ke wakt hi pata chal gaya tha Radha heroin hai story ki.

Sab ka size bataya gaya tha Radha chod ke..

Minjri ka thoda kuch samaj nahi aaraha tha but jab vo dusre gaon jari thi tab ki conversation ke vakt hi samaj gaya tha eska chapter toh close hone vala hai.

Ab ye rima eska bhi sab samaj jaye ga ek do clue me. Abhi bas samjha hai ki-
1.Rima kafi paiso vali hai.
2.Amit ko bohot pehle se janti hai.
3.Rima Monty aur Sheena ke group ko avoid kari hai.
So mera guess hai
-Rima Rohit ya Sheena se mili hue hai but hamare writer ko etna saral simple story pasand nahi so aisa nahi hoga.
-Dosra guess Rima Rohit ya fir Sheena se darti hai ya unke durachar ki shikar hai but iski bhi possibilities kam hai quki uska jo nature aur rehen sehen bataya gaya uske hisab se ye possible nahi.
-tisra aur last muze lagta hai ki Rima ka baap bohot bada tof hoga(acha bhi ho sakta hai ya fir bura bhi jab tak koi hint nahi kuch keh nahi sakte) jise sab ki fatti hogi ya fir rima ka background strong hai aur uski pehle hi mudbhed ho gayi hai Monty Sheena se.

Ab Rima ko le kar sirf do sawal hai.

1).Rima Amit ko college ane se pehle se janti hai? Ya baad me se?
Agar pehle se janti hogi toh sayad Amit aur uske mom dad ke past uska aur uske mom dad ka bhi roll rehega hi.

2).Rima ki Rohit n Sheena ke bich kya history hai?(Dosti /Dushmani/Rima ka koi sach/ ya fir writer ka koi Twist?)

Gauri aur amit
Muze lagta hai writer Gauri aur amit ke bich Maa beta vala hi pyar hi rakhege
Q ki writer ne pehle hi clear kar diya tha ki Gauri ki sari garmi ko vijay roj shant kar deta hai aur waise bhi ek bacha hojaye ga toh Gauri amit ki vaise hi koi baat nahi rahegi (I mean Radha se shadi ya fir Kamini ya Deepika mami ke sath sambandh.)


Ek toh maa ka pallu rehne do bichare ke liye jab uske mom dad ka pura sach pata chalega tab ke liye. Tab shayad bichre ko Gauri Radha Manju teena hi aisi character hai jo sambhal payegi.
Radha aur Amit ki Love story dono taraf se one sided hi rahegi lambe samai tak q ki agar un dono me se kisi ne bhi ikrar kiya toh love story romance suru fir amit ki sex life kam hojayigi aur introduction aur characters ke sath jo sambhand hai usse toh ye lagra hai ki uski sex life lambi chalegi aur full speed me rahegi shayad.
So Gauri aur Amit ko writer shayad maa beta hi rakhega nahi toh har jagah adultery incest aur romance hi rahega kahi toh mamta bhi chahiye na story me.

Mohit ke dad shayad Amit ke dad ke bohot ache dost hoge ye toh writer bhai ne mohit ke dad ki entry baad hi hint de diya tha.
Ab isaka conformation next ya uske baad ke update me conform ho jayega aur shayad Amit ko uske mom dad ke bare aur sach pata chal jaye jaise ki muze lagta hai ki amit ke mom dad ka accident nahi murder hua hai vo ya fir amit mar chuka hai aisa sab ko lagta hai ye baat aur uske chacha ki identity ya kuch aur but kuch na kuch toh jarur hoga.

Radha aur Amit toh ek dusre se bohot pyar karte hai aur ek dusre ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai. Ye baat Radha ne toh realise ki lekin Amit ko ab bhi nahi samjha.
Agar Divya mausi kuch bhi bolegi ya kare gi toh Radha hamesa Amit ko bachayegi ye baat toh pakki hai. Ye sab ab next update me Radha ke bday pr clear hogi jayega.

Manju madam Amit ki bua hai ye baat shayad writer manju mam ke sath pyar(sex) kuch samay bad khula karega.

Rahi baat Sheena ki toh writer Sheena ko starting se character acha bata raha tha but sangat kharab so shayad bhot sare samay baad vo fir se achi hojaye.

Shivani ka toh acha hona story ke liye bohot jaruri hai nahi toh story be vaja bohot lambi hojayegi q ki uske sivai shalu ko bachana bohot lamba chalega.

Last bacha Monty toh Monty bhi shayad jada der etna bada dushman nahi rahega Amit ka q ki muze lagta hai jald hi boss logo ki entry hogi story me .


Bhai bas kuch puchna chata hu.
1.Bhai agar story me kuch chut gaya hoga I mean koi clue ya hint jo maine abhi tak notice nahi kiya toh please ek bar bata dena q ki abhi tak nahi notice nahi kiya matlab age bhi notice karne ke chances bohot kam hai so please.
2.ab tak maine jo bhi bola vo sab muze lagta hai isiliye padhne me muze maza aata hai toh usmeka kuch sahi hoga kuch halat hoga but plz ap kya sahi kya galt bata kr story ke spoiler mat dena but agar agar kuch aisa ho jo muze pata hona chahiye toh bata dijiyega plz.
3.Bhai muze aisa laga ki abhi tak sirf story la built up tha asli story ab suru hogi.jaisa abhi vo sirf manhoos se bahar aaya hai ab vo mahan banega.
4. Bhai ap jaisa likh rahe ho vaisa hi likhiye but agar ho sake toh baki stories ki tarah jab war suru ho toh Amit ko luck ke vajese ya kisi ke help ki baje se bachna aur vo sab ghisi piti style me story mat rakhna amit ko bhi et(brick) ka javab pathar se dene vala aur koi bhi usse chal ya bal se na hara sake aisa bana dena. Agar vo kahi fasta bhi hai toh vo amit ki marji hogi ya amitka plan aise type ka kuch.

Bhai agar koi baat ka bura laga ho toh sorry.mai ek silent reader hu toh etne comments karta nahi hu so agar kuch galat bol diya toh chota bhai samaj ke maf kr dena.

Aur aisi gazab ki story likhne ke liye bohot bohot shukriya bhai aise hi likhe rahiye bohot maja araha hai padhne me..
Aur as a reader ummid nahi rakhta bhai but jab bhi din me do ya use jada update milata hai words me bata nahi sakta etni khushi milti hai.

Thank you very much Raja bhai.

thanks Bhai k apne itne dhyan se story k points note kiye aur ise pasand kiya
Thank you very much