Introduction ke wakt hi pata chal gaya tha Radha heroin hai story ki.
Sab ka size bataya gaya tha Radha chod ke..
Minjri ka thoda kuch samaj nahi aaraha tha but jab vo dusre gaon jari thi tab ki conversation ke vakt hi samaj gaya tha eska chapter toh close hone vala hai.
Ab ye rima eska bhi sab samaj jaye ga ek do clue me. Abhi bas samjha hai ki-
1.Rima kafi paiso vali hai.
2.Amit ko bohot pehle se janti hai.
3.Rima Monty aur Sheena ke group ko avoid kari hai.
So mera guess hai
-Rima Rohit ya Sheena se mili hue hai but hamare writer ko etna saral simple story pasand nahi so aisa nahi hoga.
-Dosra guess Rima Rohit ya fir Sheena se darti hai ya unke durachar ki shikar hai but iski bhi possibilities kam hai quki uska jo nature aur rehen sehen bataya gaya uske hisab se ye possible nahi.
-tisra aur last muze lagta hai ki Rima ka baap bohot bada tof hoga(acha bhi ho sakta hai ya fir bura bhi jab tak koi hint nahi kuch keh nahi sakte) jise sab ki fatti hogi ya fir rima ka background strong hai aur uski pehle hi mudbhed ho gayi hai Monty Sheena se.
Ab Rima ko le kar sirf do sawal hai.
1).Rima Amit ko college ane se pehle se janti hai? Ya baad me se?
Agar pehle se janti hogi toh sayad Amit aur uske mom dad ke past uska aur uske mom dad ka bhi roll rehega hi.
2).Rima ki Rohit n Sheena ke bich kya history hai?(Dosti /Dushmani/Rima ka koi sach/ ya fir writer ka koi Twist?)
Gauri aur amit
Muze lagta hai writer Gauri aur amit ke bich Maa beta vala hi pyar hi rakhege
Q ki writer ne pehle hi clear kar diya tha ki Gauri ki sari garmi ko vijay roj shant kar deta hai aur waise bhi ek bacha hojaye ga toh Gauri amit ki vaise hi koi baat nahi rahegi (I mean Radha se shadi ya fir Kamini ya Deepika mami ke sath sambandh.)
Ek toh maa ka pallu rehne do bichare ke liye jab uske mom dad ka pura sach pata chalega tab ke liye. Tab shayad bichre ko Gauri Radha Manju teena hi aisi character hai jo sambhal payegi.
Radha aur Amit ki Love story dono taraf se one sided hi rahegi lambe samai tak q ki agar un dono me se kisi ne bhi ikrar kiya toh love story romance suru fir amit ki sex life kam hojayigi aur introduction aur characters ke sath jo sambhand hai usse toh ye lagra hai ki uski sex life lambi chalegi aur full speed me rahegi shayad.
So Gauri aur Amit ko writer shayad maa beta hi rakhega nahi toh har jagah adultery incest aur romance hi rahega kahi toh mamta bhi chahiye na story me.
Mohit ke dad shayad Amit ke dad ke bohot ache dost hoge ye toh writer bhai ne mohit ke dad ki entry baad hi hint de diya tha.
Ab isaka conformation next ya uske baad ke update me conform ho jayega aur shayad Amit ko uske mom dad ke bare aur sach pata chal jaye jaise ki muze lagta hai ki amit ke mom dad ka accident nahi murder hua hai vo ya fir amit mar chuka hai aisa sab ko lagta hai ye baat aur uske chacha ki identity ya kuch aur but kuch na kuch toh jarur hoga.
Radha aur Amit toh ek dusre se bohot pyar karte hai aur ek dusre ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai. Ye baat Radha ne toh realise ki lekin Amit ko ab bhi nahi samjha.
Agar Divya mausi kuch bhi bolegi ya kare gi toh Radha hamesa Amit ko bachayegi ye baat toh pakki hai. Ye sab ab next update me Radha ke bday pr clear hogi jayega.
Manju madam Amit ki bua hai ye baat shayad writer manju mam ke sath pyar(sex) kuch samay bad khula karega.
Rahi baat Sheena ki toh writer Sheena ko starting se character acha bata raha tha but sangat kharab so shayad bhot sare samay baad vo fir se achi hojaye.
Shivani ka toh acha hona story ke liye bohot jaruri hai nahi toh story be vaja bohot lambi hojayegi q ki uske sivai shalu ko bachana bohot lamba chalega.
Last bacha Monty toh Monty bhi shayad jada der etna bada dushman nahi rahega Amit ka q ki muze lagta hai jald hi boss logo ki entry hogi story me .
Bhai bas kuch puchna chata hu.
1.Bhai agar story me kuch chut gaya hoga I mean koi clue ya hint jo maine abhi tak notice nahi kiya toh please ek bar bata dena q ki abhi tak nahi notice nahi kiya matlab age bhi notice karne ke chances bohot kam hai so please.
2.ab tak maine jo bhi bola vo sab muze lagta hai isiliye padhne me muze maza aata hai toh usmeka kuch sahi hoga kuch halat hoga but plz ap kya sahi kya galt bata kr story ke spoiler mat dena but agar agar kuch aisa ho jo muze pata hona chahiye toh bata dijiyega plz.
3.Bhai muze aisa laga ki abhi tak sirf story la built up tha asli story ab suru hogi.jaisa abhi vo sirf manhoos se bahar aaya hai ab vo mahan banega.
4. Bhai ap jaisa likh rahe ho vaisa hi likhiye but agar ho sake toh baki stories ki tarah jab war suru ho toh Amit ko luck ke vajese ya kisi ke help ki baje se bachna aur vo sab ghisi piti style me story mat rakhna amit ko bhi et(brick) ka javab pathar se dene vala aur koi bhi usse chal ya bal se na hara sake aisa bana dena. Agar vo kahi fasta bhi hai toh vo amit ki marji hogi ya amitka plan aise type ka kuch.
Bhai agar koi baat ka bura laga ho toh sorry.mai ek silent reader hu toh etne comments karta nahi hu so agar kuch galat bol diya toh chota bhai samaj ke maf kr dena.
Aur aisi gazab ki story likhne ke liye bohot bohot shukriya bhai aise hi likhe rahiye bohot maja araha hai padhne me..
Aur as a reader ummid nahi rakhta bhai but jab bhi din me do ya use jada update milata hai words me bata nahi sakta etni khushi milti hai.
Thank you very much Raja bhai.
