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Adultery Manhoos se mahan tak

Story kaisi lagi

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Iron Man

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Raja chouhan

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Bhaiyo update par kam kar rha hun. Complete ho gya to aaj hi kar dunga post. Waise abhi kuch din sex encounter hone wale hain kyunki kahani aise mod par hai. Kuch bhai is bat se naraz bhi hain k story aage nahi bad rahi ya tempo sahi nahi hai. To main unke liye itna keh sakta hun bhai k main koi writer to hun nahi ye maine pehle bhi kaha tha. Mujhe jaise sahi lag rha hai main likh rha hun. Agar story ko fast mode par karne ki koshish ki to jaldi hi ye end par pahunch jayegi fir aap log hi kahenge ye kya kiya. Maine story ko sirf masal lagay hai baki story ka ek end fix hai jiske aage main story nahi chalaunga is liye patience rakhen. Mujhe ye tempo wagerah ki samajh nahi hai . Jitna likh sakta hun main apni taraf se acha karne ki koshish kar raha hun. Kai bar comment pad kar mere dimag me story ko jaldi jaldi nye mod dene ki baat aane lagti hai aur fir story patri se neeche utar jaye iska dar lagta hai. Please jaise likh rha hun use swikar karen.
 

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Bhaiyo update par kam kar rha hun. Complete ho gya to aaj hi kar dunga post. Waise abhi kuch din sex encounter hone wale hain kyunki kahani aise mod par hai. Kuch bhai is bat se naraz bhi hain k story aage nahi bad rahi ya tempo sahi nahi hai. To main unke liye itna keh sakta hun bhai k main koi writer to hun nahi ye maine pehle bhi kaha tha. Mujhe jaise sahi lag rha hai main likh rha hun. Agar story ko fast mode par karne ki koshish ki to jaldi hi ye end par pahunch jayegi fir aap log hi kahenge ye kya kiya. Maine story ko sirf masal lagay hai baki story ka ek end fix hai jiske aage main story nahi chalaunga is liye patience rakhen. Mujhe ye tempo wagerah ki samajh nahi hai . Jitna likh sakta hun main apni taraf se acha karne ki koshish kar raha hun. Kai bar comment pad kar mere dimag me story ko jaldi jaldi nye mod dene ki baat aane lagti hai aur fir story patri se neeche utar jaye iska dar lagta hai. Please jaise likh rha hun use swikar karen.
Kasi ki na suno Jo lekhty ho vadiya story lekhty ho
 

u.sir.name

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Bhaiyo update par kam kar rha hun. Complete ho gya to aaj hi kar dunga post. Waise abhi kuch din sex encounter hone wale hain kyunki kahani aise mod par hai. Kuch bhai is bat se naraz bhi hain k story aage nahi bad rahi ya tempo sahi nahi hai. To main unke liye itna keh sakta hun bhai k main koi writer to hun nahi ye maine pehle bhi kaha tha. Mujhe jaise sahi lag rha hai main likh rha hun. Agar story ko fast mode par karne ki koshish ki to jaldi hi ye end par pahunch jayegi fir aap log hi kahenge ye kya kiya. Maine story ko sirf masal lagay hai baki story ka ek end fix hai jiske aage main story nahi chalaunga is liye patience rakhen. Mujhe ye tempo wagerah ki samajh nahi hai . Jitna likh sakta hun main apni taraf se acha karne ki koshish kar raha hun. Kai bar comment pad kar mere dimag me story ko jaldi jaldi nye mod dene ki baat aane lagti hai aur fir story patri se neeche utar jaye iska dar lagta hai. Please jaise likh rha hun use swikar karen.
Bhai apne dil ki karo
 
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