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Adultery Manhoos se mahan tak

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Raja chouhan

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Sahi kaha birthday party nidhi ko bhari na pad jaye our update main dari kyu sabhi reades nidhi ke sarh kya age kya hoga soch rahe the yahi to writer ne yaha se jo socha bahot badhiya socha
Our fir amit mili hints bhi sahi the sala maneger pohoch chuka tha. Laga ki amit nahi pohochega. Hogaya nidhi ka per bhaisab pohoch gaye. Tab reders ke jan main jan aai kya interest ke sath ye updates ka sab wait kar rahe the.
Pasand aaya sabko mera likhna safal ho gya.
 

Raja chouhan

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Superb update

Nidhi ke sath thoda romance ka tadka lag jaaye to behtar hai. Karan ka thanks jo usne tyre ki hawa nikali so that Amit could save Nidhi.

ye officer to pahle se hi khar khaye huye hai yaar ab ye wapas Amit ke piche pad jaayegi. Kuch karo iska.
Waiting for the next update.
Karan bhi ungali kar raha hai isko danda Amit nahi kar sakta magar koi to karega hi
 

Raja chouhan

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Toh Nidhi Ka bhi account jaldi khulega Amit Ke Bank main ?
Or Woh loude ke Baal manager ki ache se lii Amit ne
Or yeh Police wali Ka bhi Kuch jugad lagao Raja Bhai
pichli Baar Toh ek thapad thok dia tha Amit bechara ko isbaar thoda kahin Zyada na Kerle

Ek Dum Dhansu Update
Nidhi ka account kahan khula bhai ? Account to Amit ka khula nidhi k dil me. Magar ye itna asan nahi hone wala . SP Ritu ki to hawa zarur sarkegi wait karo.
 

Raja chouhan

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aakhir Amit ne nidhi ko bacha he liya.. magar ye sp ritu ko saare case amit ke khilaaf wale he kyun milte hai...

nidhi ki naukri to mohit ki company mein shuru karwa dega amit...

par kya police walo ko flat mein wo camera nahi mila jo un dono ne nidhi ke liye lagaya tha...

usmanager ki to waise aaj amit ne acchi file kholi hai.. peeche se aur saath mein uske chele ki bhi office file complete kar di...

mast update
Police ko nahi mila camera kyunki unhone us angle se case dekha hi nahi . SP Ritu ko ek aur case milne wala hai Amit k khilaf wo bhi ek dhamaka hoga dono k liye
 

Raja chouhan

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Awesome update raja bhai
Ab nidhi to Amit ki patni ban chuki he to uske mann me koi doubt na rahe aur vo Amit ko Mann se apna Amit ko apna pati Mann le to achha rahega. Vese nidhi is mamle me naina ko consult kar sakti he.
By the way great update bhai ye nidhi ka character sabse best he bas ab vo Amit ko bata de ki vo uski wife bann chuki he aur Amit bhi use as a wife accept kar le.
Nidhi alag hai bhai, khamosh rahegi aur dil me hi rakhegi . Ek maryadit ladki hai jise apne pariwar aur rishton ki fikar hai. Lekin amit ki ek ek achai ab use Amit k kareeb lati jayegi.lekin Seema par nahi hogi .
 

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Superb updates and amazing story writing Raja Bhai.
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Kya baat h aap to gajab ka likh rhe ho.
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Amit sb ki band bja rha h.
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Ye monti ka ilaj ka kuch btao bhai kya hua jha wo treatmemt k liye gya.
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Nidhi ko bacha liya amit ne aur ek aur behen flat ho gye ab to neha hi baki h mosi ki beti jo amit ko sirf bhai manti h.
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Bas update ka intjar next wale.
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Great going.
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Keep writing.
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Keep posting.
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Raja chouhan

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Superb update diya aapne Raja chouhan bhai.
:hukka:

Nidhi didi ko bachaya aur maang mein unki Amit ka khoon laga kar, Amit ki kaamdev ke ashirwad wali bullet train aur lambi ho gayee. Manager aur uske sathee ka accha band bajaya. Bahut mazedaar episode tha.
:love2:

Dekhte hain SP sahiba ko kaunse suraag milte hain aur wo Amit tak kaise pahunchegi.

super duper update. Dhanyawaad
Nidhi abhi train me na charhti bhai . Han dil ki ghanti to baj gyi . SP Ritu ko surprise milenge ek k sath ek free wo bhi tab jab wo danda karegi.
 

Raja chouhan

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Shaandaar update bhai. Shukar hy nidhi ka mamla achhe se nipat gia lekin ye maang mein sindoor wala kaand ho gia. SP sahiba ki nazar mein amit ki image achhi nahi hy. Us ne bhi to akhir akhbar (newspaper) padha ho ga jis mein amit ki tasweer chhapi hy
Bhai first impression is the last impression. SP sahiba k liye to wo galat hi hai chahe koi kuch bhi kahe. :cowboy1:
 
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