Adultery Manhoos se mahan tak

[Raja chouhan]

Sorry for the late response to your story Raja chouhan bhai.....

Speaking about the last two updates both are super fantastic, brilliant writing skills........
Kahani ne bandh kar rakha hai, jis din update na pade toh aisa lagta hai ki aaj kuch kami hai........

itni acchi story likhne ka liye????

Thanks bhai.

 

[Raja chouhan]

But manager ne to cameras lagwaye the wahan p to police ko kyu ni mile... Ye point muje Tang kar raha hai bahut

Zarur bhai , abhi police ne us angle se dekha hi nahi case ko . Lekin wo samne zarur ayenge jab SP sahiba ka danda chalega.

 

[Raja chouhan]

Story me sabko bcha kar ye galat kr rhe ho bhai kisi ko chudne bhi do

Are bhai apna hero hai na to bahar wala kise muh maar jaye

 

[Raja chouhan]

Ritu singh ki mujhe koi tnsn nhi h.. apni heroine nidhi safe bs wahi bhut h... Ritu ka naam amit ki lover m shamil hoga or wo sab kamal hidden camera krega... Ek taraf to nidhi ready h amit k sath suhagraat k liye or dusri taraf ek nyi lover bhi line m lgne wali h Ritu Singh... Shyd bhut jld.. ye sab guessing h meri.. baaki sab raja bhai jaane...

Ha ha ha bhai guessing badi khatarnak laga di. Ye to aapne sitare bata diye

 

[Janu002]

Are bhai apna hero hai na to bahar wala kise muh maar jaye

सही है भाई सब की सब अपने हीरो को ही मिलनी चाहिए

 

[Raja chouhan]

Gajab update Bhai Lage raho kahani full romanchak daur se gujar rahi h har ek update Mai kuch na kuch important ghatna ho rahi h ab to update padne per aisa lagta h ki Puri Kahani mil Jaye or ek hi baar Mai pura pad lu ???

Ek hi din me poori kitab ghol kar pina. Yahi kam hota hai exam se pehle rat ko

 

[Raja chouhan]

Bilkul sahi kah rhe ho bhai.. innocent or pariwar k liye samarpit h ye character... Isliye shuru se mera fav character h nidhi... Dimag p itna pressure to radha k sath rape scene hone wala tha tb bhi nhi hua... Raja bhai ek bhut hi badhiya writer h... Apni kahani k character ko logo ki feeling se jod diya h unhone... Ab nidhi k case m hi dekh lo kitne readers ki jaan p bn aayi thi jabki sabko pta h ye kahani h... Phir bhi sab ise dil se mahsus kr pa rhe the... Hats off Raja bhai
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Aap sab ka pyar hai dosto k theek se likh pa raha hun warna galiyan bhi free me milti hain yahan wo bhi tip k sath

 

[Raja chouhan]

Fantastic. Lagta hai ab Criminal lawyer kee jarurat paregi aur wo apni Bajaj Sahiba hain hee. Par Amit ke liye kuch mushkilen to aa hee gayi hain kyonki SP sahiba to pehle se hee khafa hain. Best of luck for Amit.

Bajaj sahiba ki ehtiyat bhi aayegi par abhi to wo door hai. Filhal ek short break sath hi SP Ritu Singh gaand me danda karegi par ungali kahin aur hi ja ghusegi .

 

[Ashu1345]

Bade bhai super update maza aa gya bus uss din ka wait hai jub amit ko pta chalega ki manju uski buaa hai ek or baat dr. Frnd ya jo bhi new ladaki aayi story me kahi na kahi uske family se judi hoti hai to ye sp or lawyer madam bhi kahi na kahi may be judi ho
Baki Bhai wait nhi ho raha jldi post kro

 

[Raja chouhan]

Wahh .. kya twist aya hai story me..
Nidhi ka direct pati hi ban gaya amit ..
Ab to raat nidhi ke room me gujregi sayad..
Saja to achhi khasi di.. but wo hidden camera ka kya hua..
Ab jald se jald bas amit ek sariff ban jaye SP Ritu ke samne.. To aur maja ayega...

Eagerly waiting for the next update..

Nidhi ka character alag hai bhai wo alag hi kahani chalegi. SP Ritu ka episode bhi mazedar hoga