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Fantasy Manhoosh ( Revenge By KILLER )
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Update 8
Agli subh meri nind 6 baje kuli janvi mujse chipk ke so rahi ti mai usse utye bina fresh hone chala gya fir Garden mai gya vaha dad exercise kar rehe te
me: good morning dad
dad: good morning beta
Dad: chalo exercise karne lag jao
me: ji dad
fir dad ne bi muje kuch exercise dikya mai bi unki tarh karne laga
1 hour tak exercise kiya
dad: beta tumne jo sab kuch sikna hai uske liye Maine do logo bulya hai sham tak aa jaaynge
me: Ohk,and thanks dad
dad: it's Ohk
Fir gar aa gye mom kitchen mai ti
me: good morning mom
mom: good morning beta
mom: jaldi se apni sweetie ko uta do mai nasta lagti hu
me:Ohk
baad mai room mai aaya janvi so rahi ti
Maine usko forehead pe kiss kiya
me: chalo my angel ab jaldi se uth jao and fresh ho jao
vo bi uth gai and gaal pe Ek kiss kiya
janvi : good morning bhai
me: good morning my angel
fir vo apne room mai chali gai and mai bi fresh hone Ke baad dining table pe assa gya
fir breakfast karne ke Baad Scl jaane Ke tayri karne lage because aaj Scl javanu first day ta
Mom: scl ke liye ready dono
hum dono: yes mom
Mom: chalo ab main driver ko bol deti hu tumko scl chod de
fir Mai and janvi car bet gaye and scl ke liye nikl gye
janvi bahoot kush lag rahi ti
Fir scl aa gya scl bahoot bada ta
fir maine janvi ko uske class mail choda and Mai apne class ko dunda and as gya and last bench per bet gya
thodi der baad ek teacher aye
teacher : students to ask humre class mail ek new student aaya please stand up Vikram and say about you
me bi apna name sun ke kadch ho gya
me: Hlo friends my name is Vikram and my father name is Ranvir Roy and my hobbie is reading and playing cricket
(hobbies to Maine isse hi bolte diya kuch yaad nai aaya to ) aur Mai bet gya
mai class mail kisse se baat nai kiya and teachers aaye and padte gya iss tarh recess Ho gyi
mai janvi ka pass gya and usko leke canteen Mai aa gya humne kuch kya piya and wpis byy Bol Ke class mai chle gye
iss tarh scl time finish ho gya mai to Chup chap beta rahah ta lecture mai teacher aate gye padte gya
Baad mai and janvi car mai bet ke gar aa gye 3 baje ke aspass
gar aake
mom: so bachho scl kesa gya
hum dono : acha gya
mom : chalo acha hai abi jaldi se fresh ho jao fir kuch kaa lo
Fir hum fresh hue and thoda bahoot khana kaaya janvi bahoot kush ti
janvi NE jo bi scl mai kiya vo sab kuch batne lagi mai and mom sunn rehe te and has rehe te
iss trh time nikl gya dad 6 baje gar aa gye Te
gar aane Ke baad
mom: aaj aap jaldi aa gye
dad: ha bas aa gya
dad: Vikram chal hum log aate hai Garden jaake thoda bahoot running bi kar lenge
me: ohk dad
mom: are aap bi kya bacche ke piche pade hai
dad: ye iske liye bi aacha hai
mom: ha ha pata hai
janvi to TV dek rahi ti
fir hum log bahr nikle and garden ki trf jaane lage
mai dad sent aage ta
dad: are mere saath chalo kuch btana hai
me: hmm. Ohk
fir mai unke piche chlne laga vo hamre gar ke baju Mai jo gar ta usme gye mai bi unke piche chl diya
bell bajne ke Baad Ek admi NE gate kola
Fir hum andr chle gye vaha par ek aurat bi beti ui ti
dad: beta Ye dono vahi hai jo tumko fighting and computer vagara sikyannge
dad: Ye hai Jack and ye hai Maria
Maine unko handshake kiya
(intro
Jack: age 35 body segments Ek dum fit hai
USA army mai best hai and special forces ka part bi ta ab nai hai
Sabi fighting style janta hai ninja vagre ka bi janta hai
Maria: age 33
Ye ek FBI agent reh chuki hai and fighting bi janti hai but computer knowledge mai inka jesa koi nai )
( yaha bate English mai hogi but hindi mai likunga )
Dad : and ye hai Mera beta Vikram
Jack and Maria : ohk sir hum inki traning kal se start karte hai
dad: ohk.
jack : kal tum subh morning mai 4 baje idr aa jana
me: ohk uncle
Fir hum log gar aa gye and dinner karke Sone gye janvi mere pass spider ui ti
Maine alarm laga diya ta 3:30ka
subh alarm bajne setup meri nind kuli maine jaldi se alarm band kar diya kahi janvi na uth jaaye
mai fresh hone Ke baad Jack ke vaha chal gya vaha Jack and Maria running kar raha ta
uska gar bi hamra jese hi ta but aaspaas ka area bahoot bada ta
Mai bi gya vaha pe
me: good morning uncle and and auntie
dono: good morning vikram
Jack : vikram abi tum hum dono ko hamre name se bulana
me: Ohk uncle sorry Jack
jack : Ohk ab traning St karte hai sab so Pele 10 round lago iss medan ke 5 minutes
mai, to dekte hi chonk gya because medan bahoot bada ta
iss tarh 7 baje training puri hue
3 hours mai muje bahoot kuch sikya ta and baad mai kuch pilya jo bahoot kadva ta but Baad takan jese gyab Ho gye
Jack : Vikram sham ko Scl ke Baad aa jana maria bi tumko jo sikana hai vo sika dehgi
me: Ohk. Jack
me:byy Jack and Maria
jack&maria : byy
Fir mai gar aa gya vaha dad garden Mai bete hue te
me: good morning dad
dad: good morning beta kesa raha Pela din
me: good. But dad Apne mom ko kyu nai batya iss bare me
dad: usko batata to vo mana karti and tension bi rehti Isliye
me: Ohk. Dad
fir hum gar Mai aate gye and Maine room mai jake janvi ko utya and fresh hone ko chala gya
baad mai break fast hone Ke baad dad office chle gye and hum dono scl aa gye
Mai Scl Mai chul chal rehta ta sirf janvi ka sath baat kiya karta ta koi baat karne ke liye aye to jyda kuch bolta nai ta so koi mujse baat karne nai ata ta
iss tarh aaj karva din bi scl Jaane smpt hua
gar pe aa Ke kuch kana Kaya
me: mom mai apne pass vala jo gar vaha pe jaa raha hu
mom: kyu vaha pe kya kaam hai
me: mom vaha pe uncle auntie rehte hai jisko Mai morning mai Mila ta so auntie computer knowledge bahoot hai so unhone bola ta ki sikna ho to sham ko aa jana so mai jaa raha hu
mom: Ohk. Jao
baate sun ke janvi boli mai bi chku sath mai
me: sweetie tu vaha kya kargi usse acha to idar TV dek ya homework karle hai vaha pe Tu bore Ho jaayge
janvi : ha Ye bi sahi baat hai
me: Ohk. Byy mom and sweetie
dono: byyy
fir mai Jack and Maria ke gar aa gya bell bajaya
Maria ne gate kola
me: Good afternoon Maria
Maria : good afternoon vikram
me: Jack kahi dik nai raha
maria : ha vo kuch kaam he bahr gya hai. Chalo hum Apni traning St karte hai
me: ohk
fir 7 baje tak traning chali muje bi computer mai bahoot interest ta
fir mai unko byy Bol Ke gar aa gya dad bi aati gye Te
Fir Sanne milke dinner kiya and mai room mai jaake homework finish kiya and laptop leke jo sika ta usko ajmne laga
sweetie bi niche TV dekne Ke baad mai gai room mai baad mai kuch masti kiya and so gye
baki next update mai.............
Agli subh meri nind 6 baje kuli janvi mujse chipk ke so rahi ti mai usse utye bina fresh hone chala gya fir Garden mai gya vaha dad exercise kar rehe te
me: good morning dad
dad: good morning beta
Dad: chalo exercise karne lag jao
me: ji dad
fir dad ne bi muje kuch exercise dikya mai bi unki tarh karne laga
1 hour tak exercise kiya
dad: beta tumne jo sab kuch sikna hai uske liye Maine do logo bulya hai sham tak aa jaaynge
me: Ohk,and thanks dad
dad: it's Ohk
Fir gar aa gye mom kitchen mai ti
me: good morning mom
mom: good morning beta
mom: jaldi se apni sweetie ko uta do mai nasta lagti hu
me:Ohk
baad mai room mai aaya janvi so rahi ti
Maine usko forehead pe kiss kiya
me: chalo my angel ab jaldi se uth jao and fresh ho jao
vo bi uth gai and gaal pe Ek kiss kiya
janvi : good morning bhai
me: good morning my angel
fir vo apne room mai chali gai and mai bi fresh hone Ke baad dining table pe assa gya
fir breakfast karne ke Baad Scl jaane Ke tayri karne lage because aaj Scl javanu first day ta
Mom: scl ke liye ready dono
hum dono: yes mom
Mom: chalo ab main driver ko bol deti hu tumko scl chod de
fir Mai and janvi car bet gaye and scl ke liye nikl gye
janvi bahoot kush lag rahi ti
Fir scl aa gya scl bahoot bada ta
fir maine janvi ko uske class mail choda and Mai apne class ko dunda and as gya and last bench per bet gya
thodi der baad ek teacher aye
teacher : students to ask humre class mail ek new student aaya please stand up Vikram and say about you
me bi apna name sun ke kadch ho gya
me: Hlo friends my name is Vikram and my father name is Ranvir Roy and my hobbie is reading and playing cricket
(hobbies to Maine isse hi bolte diya kuch yaad nai aaya to ) aur Mai bet gya
mai class mail kisse se baat nai kiya and teachers aaye and padte gya iss tarh recess Ho gyi
mai janvi ka pass gya and usko leke canteen Mai aa gya humne kuch kya piya and wpis byy Bol Ke class mai chle gye
iss tarh scl time finish ho gya mai to Chup chap beta rahah ta lecture mai teacher aate gye padte gya
Baad mai and janvi car mai bet ke gar aa gye 3 baje ke aspass
gar aake
mom: so bachho scl kesa gya
hum dono : acha gya
mom : chalo acha hai abi jaldi se fresh ho jao fir kuch kaa lo
Fir hum fresh hue and thoda bahoot khana kaaya janvi bahoot kush ti
janvi NE jo bi scl mai kiya vo sab kuch batne lagi mai and mom sunn rehe te and has rehe te
iss trh time nikl gya dad 6 baje gar aa gye Te
gar aane Ke baad
mom: aaj aap jaldi aa gye
dad: ha bas aa gya
dad: Vikram chal hum log aate hai Garden jaake thoda bahoot running bi kar lenge
me: ohk dad
mom: are aap bi kya bacche ke piche pade hai
dad: ye iske liye bi aacha hai
mom: ha ha pata hai
janvi to TV dek rahi ti
fir hum log bahr nikle and garden ki trf jaane lage
mai dad sent aage ta
dad: are mere saath chalo kuch btana hai
me: hmm. Ohk
fir mai unke piche chlne laga vo hamre gar ke baju Mai jo gar ta usme gye mai bi unke piche chl diya
bell bajne ke Baad Ek admi NE gate kola
Fir hum andr chle gye vaha par ek aurat bi beti ui ti
dad: beta Ye dono vahi hai jo tumko fighting and computer vagara sikyannge
dad: Ye hai Jack and ye hai Maria
Maine unko handshake kiya
(intro
Jack: age 35 body segments Ek dum fit hai
USA army mai best hai and special forces ka part bi ta ab nai hai
Sabi fighting style janta hai ninja vagre ka bi janta hai
Maria: age 33
Ye ek FBI agent reh chuki hai and fighting bi janti hai but computer knowledge mai inka jesa koi nai )
( yaha bate English mai hogi but hindi mai likunga )
Dad : and ye hai Mera beta Vikram
Jack and Maria : ohk sir hum inki traning kal se start karte hai
dad: ohk.
jack : kal tum subh morning mai 4 baje idr aa jana
me: ohk uncle
Fir hum log gar aa gye and dinner karke Sone gye janvi mere pass spider ui ti
Maine alarm laga diya ta 3:30ka
subh alarm bajne setup meri nind kuli maine jaldi se alarm band kar diya kahi janvi na uth jaaye
mai fresh hone Ke baad Jack ke vaha chal gya vaha Jack and Maria running kar raha ta
uska gar bi hamra jese hi ta but aaspaas ka area bahoot bada ta
Mai bi gya vaha pe
me: good morning uncle and and auntie
dono: good morning vikram
Jack : vikram abi tum hum dono ko hamre name se bulana
me: Ohk uncle sorry Jack
jack : Ohk ab traning St karte hai sab so Pele 10 round lago iss medan ke 5 minutes
mai, to dekte hi chonk gya because medan bahoot bada ta
iss tarh 7 baje training puri hue
3 hours mai muje bahoot kuch sikya ta and baad mai kuch pilya jo bahoot kadva ta but Baad takan jese gyab Ho gye
Jack : Vikram sham ko Scl ke Baad aa jana maria bi tumko jo sikana hai vo sika dehgi
me: Ohk. Jack
me:byy Jack and Maria
jack&maria : byy
Fir mai gar aa gya vaha dad garden Mai bete hue te
me: good morning dad
dad: good morning beta kesa raha Pela din
me: good. But dad Apne mom ko kyu nai batya iss bare me
dad: usko batata to vo mana karti and tension bi rehti Isliye
me: Ohk. Dad
fir hum gar Mai aate gye and Maine room mai jake janvi ko utya and fresh hone ko chala gya
baad mai break fast hone Ke baad dad office chle gye and hum dono scl aa gye
Mai Scl Mai chul chal rehta ta sirf janvi ka sath baat kiya karta ta koi baat karne ke liye aye to jyda kuch bolta nai ta so koi mujse baat karne nai ata ta
iss tarh aaj karva din bi scl Jaane smpt hua
gar pe aa Ke kuch kana Kaya
me: mom mai apne pass vala jo gar vaha pe jaa raha hu
mom: kyu vaha pe kya kaam hai
me: mom vaha pe uncle auntie rehte hai jisko Mai morning mai Mila ta so auntie computer knowledge bahoot hai so unhone bola ta ki sikna ho to sham ko aa jana so mai jaa raha hu
mom: Ohk. Jao
baate sun ke janvi boli mai bi chku sath mai
me: sweetie tu vaha kya kargi usse acha to idar TV dek ya homework karle hai vaha pe Tu bore Ho jaayge
janvi : ha Ye bi sahi baat hai
me: Ohk. Byy mom and sweetie
dono: byyy
fir mai Jack and Maria ke gar aa gya bell bajaya
Maria ne gate kola
me: Good afternoon Maria
Maria : good afternoon vikram
me: Jack kahi dik nai raha
maria : ha vo kuch kaam he bahr gya hai. Chalo hum Apni traning St karte hai
me: ohk
fir 7 baje tak traning chali muje bi computer mai bahoot interest ta
fir mai unko byy Bol Ke gar aa gya dad bi aati gye Te
Fir Sanne milke dinner kiya and mai room mai jaake homework finish kiya and laptop leke jo sika ta usko ajmne laga
sweetie bi niche TV dekne Ke baad mai gai room mai baad mai kuch masti kiya and so gye
baki next update mai.............
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Bahot badhiya
Tow Vikram ka school chalu ho gaya or saath m fight training or computer training chalu ho gayi jo bahot achchi baat h
Kuch Vikram ki asli family ki khaber bataye Vikram k waha se nikalne k baad kia huwa waha
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Nice and lovely update....
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First of all thanks Vik@03 hamare suggestions par update ho bada dene ke liye. Ab shuru hua Vikram ka actual safar, physical aur skill upgradation ka. Ab dekhna hai story kis track par aage badhti hai.
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