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Fantasy Manhoosh ( Revenge By KILLER )

Vik@03

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Iss story pe jo bi jagh Ke name hoge sabh kalpnik hai.

Update 1


Thakur Pratap SINGH Rajasthan ke Rampur gaanv ke Thakur hai. Unke pardada raja mahraja ke vansh Te Isliye unke pass kafi paisa and kafi Jamine hai. Gaanv Mai sabi log dadaji ke ijjat karte hai vo hamesa sabki madad karte hai.

Baad mai Prtap Singh ki Shadi MayaDevi se ho gai jiss mai Baad mai unko 3 bete or 1 beti peda Hui.

Name and baki sab introduction mai dek lai.

sab bade hone Ke baad sabki shadi karva di gai

jismai sab business karne lage so iske chalte Prtap SINGH and Maya SINGH ke siva tino bhai delhi sift ho gye

Teno bhaio me delhi mai Ek bada bunglo Ya fir yu kahu ke mahl because mahal jesa ta.

yaha par samy Age badta gya jis Mai teno bhai ke bache ka janm bi Ho gya ta dono bade chacha and meri badi bahn ka bi janm ho chuka ta. Ye sab bade hote gay sab mai bahoot pyar ta.

yha par dono bade chacha and papa ka business bi achi tarh chal raha ta.

Dadaji and dadi bi sabi baccho ko milne aaya karte Te sabi bacche bi gaanv bi jaaya karta Te.

lekin iss samy papa ka business dono chacha Ke business se bi bahoot adik aage nikl gya ta jiss se unko thodi jlan bi Ho rahi ti.

Thode smay baad.....

Raat Ke smay ek bade hospital Ke Ek room mai Ek aurat chik rahi ti botany pregnant ti
baahr Ek admi chkr kaat raha ta bahoot tension mai ta

Bahr mossam bi bahoot bayank ta Andrei raat ti bhoot tezi se baaris Ho rahi ti

Thode samy baad aurat ek bahoot hi Pyaare bacche ko janm deti hai jiski aanke ek dam nili ti and bahoot hi massom dik raha.


bacche ke rone Ke avaj sune Ke baad bhar vala admi bahoot kush ho jata hai
thodi der baad doctor bahr aata hai and bolta hai congratulations Thakur SherSingh apko beta hua hai. Itna sunne Ke baad Vo noto ki gaadi niklte hai Dr ko dete hai and bolte mitiye baanta pure hospital mai Ye bolte hue vo room mai enter karte hai and bolte hai Neha aaj Tumne hamko bahoot kusiya di hai kitna pyaara beta hai.


(ji haa dosto Ye dono or koi nai balki mere mummy or papa hai )

Jiss smay bacche ka janm hua usi samy kai dur swarg mai Ek Sevk God se bolta hai akir kaar uska janm ho hi gya. Uski baat sunte hi God muskrate hai.

Chaliye chalte hai dhrti pe vapis....

Mere janm hone Ke baad mummy papa dono gar aa jaate hai


(Ab third person ki jubaani)


SherSingh And NehaSingh Apne bacche ko leke gar Mai aate jaha unka swagat hota hai.

bacche ki janm ki kbr gaanv bi paoonch gai ti vo bi delhi ke liye nikl jaate hai.

ab wapis delhi chalte hai....

waha gar pe Ek larki hoti hai jo bacche ko Dek rahi ti and bahoot kush ho rahi ti...


ab donon ladki donon bacche ko ek ladki ka Hath Mein Dete Hain Jo ladke ko dekh kar kahati hai ki mamma yah Mera Bhai hai na

Aurat use ladki se kahati hai ki han beta yah Tera Bhai hai

Ladki kahati Hai mai isse bahoot pyar karongi mera beti...

uski baat sunne Ke baad sabi haste hai

sab bacche and bade bi bahoot kush te

dada and Dadi bi dusre din aa gye

unke guruji ko inform kar diya gya ta naamkarn Ke liye

dusre din naamkarn ka program raka jaata hai.


(So guys ab story mere yani hero Ke point of view se chelgi and sabi charcter Ke name or usse rista ki issab se chalge <Apko lag raha hoga itna chota bachan gai to kese but iss point of view se story acchi tarh samj aayga>)


Naamkarm ke din.....

Didi mere saath so rahi ti mere haath pakd ke jese muje koi utke le jaaye
fir mumny usko utati and vo merko dekti hi bolte hai

Nisha Didi : kitna pyaara betu hai na mummy

mummy : ha beta Tera betu bahoot pyaara hai.

Fir sab tyar hote hai hall Mai aate hall bi bahoot bada ta dada, Dadi, dono bade mummy and papa and mere saare bade BHAI behen sab tyaar Te and dusre bi bahoot memhan aaye hue te

mere sare bahi behen mere saath kel rehe te


(Guys yaha Mai dono bade mummy, papa ko name likunga)


NitaSingh : kitna pyaara bacha hai

NainaSingh : Ha sahi kaha apne bahoot hi pyaara hai.

Thodi der Mai guruji bi aa jaate hai

tab guruji bolte hai bacche ke mummy papa idar aa Ke bet jaaye

Mom merko unki goad Mai leke beti hai and dad unke pass Mai
fir pooja start hoti hai bahoot lambe smay ke Baad pooja smapt hoti hai
Tabi guruji bolte

Guruji : bacche ko merko dijiye

guruji bacche ko lene ke baad usko dekte hai and usme h ko jaate hai
Baad mai guruji dyyan lagte hai and bahoot achambit hote hai unko passena aa jaata hai.

Ye dek Ke sabi ko jatka lagta hai

thodi der baad guruji bolte hai

Guruji : Ye baccha bahoot hi baagysali hoga and jo bi karya karega usme vijay hoga Jo bi isse dushmani karega uska Ye sarvanaas karega Isliye iska naam hoga
VikramSingh

so guys mera name hai VIKRAMSINGH

uske baad guruji dada, Dadi and mom, dad ko ek dusre room mai bulate hai and bolte hai

Guruji : aap sabko ek mathva purn baat batani hai

sab ko unki baat sunne Ke baad shok laga



(Aisa kya bta diya guruji NE Ye next update mai dekte hai)
 

Vik@03

New Member
56
548
84
Iss story pe jo bi jagh Ke name hoge sabh kalpnik hai.

Update 1


Thakur Pratap SINGH Rajasthan ke Rampur gaanv ke Thakur hai. Unke pardada raja mahraja ke vansh Te Isliye unke pass kafi paisa and kafi Jamine hai. Gaanv Mai sabi log dadaji ke ijjat karte hai vo hamesa sabki madad karte hai.

Baad mai Prtap Singh ki Shadi MayaDevi se ho gai jiss mai Baad mai unko 3 bete or 1 beti peda Hui.

Name and baki sab introduction mai dek lai.

sab bade hone Ke baad sabki shadi karva di gai

jismai sab business karne lage so iske chalte Prtap SINGH and Maya SINGH ke siva tino bhai delhi sift ho gye

Teno bhaio me delhi mai Ek bada bunglo Ya fir yu kahu ke mahl because mahal jesa ta.

yaha par samy Age badta gya jis Mai teno bhai ke bache ka janm bi Ho gya ta dono bade chacha and meri badi bahn ka bi janm ho chuka ta. Ye sab bade hote gay sab mai bahoot pyar ta.

yha par dono bade chacha and papa ka business bi achi tarh chal raha ta.

Dadaji and dadi bi sabi baccho ko milne aaya karte Te sabi bacche bi gaanv bi jaaya karta Te.

lekin iss samy papa ka business dono chacha Ke business se bi bahoot adik aage nikl gya ta jiss se unko thodi jlan bi Ho rahi ti.

Thode smay baad.....

Raat Ke smay ek bade hospital Ke Ek room mai Ek aurat chik rahi ti botany pregnant ti
baahr Ek admi chkr kaat raha ta bahoot tension mai ta

Bahr mossam bi bahoot bayank ta Andrei raat ti bhoot tezi se baaris Ho rahi ti

Thode samy baad aurat ek bahoot hi Pyaare bacche ko janm deti hai jiski aanke ek dam nili ti and bahoot hi massom dik raha.


bacche ke rone Ke avaj sune Ke baad bhar vala admi bahoot kush ho jata hai
thodi der baad doctor bahr aata hai and bolta hai congratulations Thakur SherSingh apko beta hua hai. Itna sunne Ke baad Vo noto ki gaadi niklte hai Dr ko dete hai and bolte mitiye baanta pure hospital mai Ye bolte hue vo room mai enter karte hai and bolte hai Neha aaj Tumne hamko bahoot kusiya di hai kitna pyaara beta hai.


(ji haa dosto Ye dono or koi nai balki mere mummy or papa hai )

Jiss smay bacche ka janm hua usi samy kai dur swarg mai Ek Sevk God se bolta hai akir kaar uska janm ho hi gya. Uski baat sunte hi God muskrate hai.

Chaliye chalte hai dhrti pe vapis....

Mere janm hone Ke baad mummy papa dono gar aa jaate hai


(Ab third person ki jubaani)


SherSingh And NehaSingh Apne bacche ko leke gar Mai aate jaha unka swagat hota hai.

bacche ki janm ki kbr gaanv bi paoonch gai ti vo bi delhi ke liye nikl jaate hai.

ab wapis delhi chalte hai....

waha gar pe Ek larki hoti hai jo bacche ko Dek rahi ti and bahoot kush ho rahi ti...


ab donon ladki donon bacche ko ek ladki ka Hath Mein Dete Hain Jo ladke ko dekh kar kahati hai ki mamma yah Mera Bhai hai na

Aurat use ladki se kahati hai ki han beta yah Tera Bhai hai

Ladki kahati Hai mai isse bahoot pyar karongi mera beti...

uski baat sunne Ke baad sabi haste hai

sab bacche and bade bi bahoot kush te

dada and Dadi bi dusre din aa gye

unke guruji ko inform kar diya gya ta naamkarn Ke liye

dusre din naamkarn ka program raka jaata hai.


(So guys ab story mere yani hero Ke point of view se chelgi and sabi charcter Ke name or usse rista ki issab se chalge <Apko lag raha hoga itna chota bachan gai to kese but iss point of view se story acchi tarh samj aayga>)


Naamkarm ke din.....

Didi mere saath so rahi ti mere haath pakd ke jese muje koi utke le jaaye
fir mumny usko utati and vo merko dekti hi bolte hai

Nisha Didi : kitna pyaara betu hai na mummy

mummy : ha beta Tera betu bahoot pyaara hai.

Fir sab tyar hote hai hall Mai aate hall bi bahoot bada ta dada, Dadi, dono bade mummy and papa and mere saare bade BHAI behen sab tyaar Te and dusre bi bahoot memhan aaye hue te

mere sare bahi behen mere saath kel rehe te


(Guys yaha Mai dono bade mummy, papa ko name likunga)


NitaSingh : kitna pyaara bacha hai

NainaSingh : Ha sahi kaha apne bahoot hi pyaara hai.

Thodi der Mai guruji bi aa jaate hai

tab guruji bolte hai bacche ke mummy papa idar aa Ke bet jaaye

Mom merko unki goad Mai leke beti hai and dad unke pass Mai
fir pooja start hoti hai bahoot lambe smay ke Baad pooja smapt hoti hai
Tabi guruji bolte

Guruji : bacche ko merko dijiye

guruji bacche ko lene ke baad usko dekte hai and usme h ko jaate hai
Baad mai guruji dyyan lagte hai and bahoot achambit hote hai unko passena aa jaata hai.

Ye dek Ke sabi ko jatka lagta hai

thodi der baad guruji bolte hai

Guruji : Ye baccha bahoot hi baagysali hoga and jo bi karya karega usme vijay hoga Jo bi isse dushmani karega uska Ye sarvanaas karega Isliye iska naam hoga
VikramSingh

so guys mera name hai VIKRAMSINGH

uske baad guruji dada, Dadi and mom, dad ko ek dusre room mai bulate hai and bolte hai

Guruji : aap sabko ek mathva purn baat batani hai

sab ko unki baat sunne Ke baad shok laga



(Aisa kya bta diya guruji NE Ye next update mai dekte hai)
Update 1 aa gya hai
 

tpk

Well-Known Member
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Iss story pe jo bi jagh Ke name hoge sabh kalpnik hai.

Update 1


Thakur Pratap SINGH Rajasthan ke Rampur gaanv ke Thakur hai. Unke pardada raja mahraja ke vansh Te Isliye unke pass kafi paisa and kafi Jamine hai. Gaanv Mai sabi log dadaji ke ijjat karte hai vo hamesa sabki madad karte hai.

Baad mai Prtap Singh ki Shadi MayaDevi se ho gai jiss mai Baad mai unko 3 bete or 1 beti peda Hui.

Name and baki sab introduction mai dek lai.

sab bade hone Ke baad sabki shadi karva di gai

jismai sab business karne lage so iske chalte Prtap SINGH and Maya SINGH ke siva tino bhai delhi sift ho gye

Teno bhaio me delhi mai Ek bada bunglo Ya fir yu kahu ke mahl because mahal jesa ta.

yaha par samy Age badta gya jis Mai teno bhai ke bache ka janm bi Ho gya ta dono bade chacha and meri badi bahn ka bi janm ho chuka ta. Ye sab bade hote gay sab mai bahoot pyar ta.

yha par dono bade chacha and papa ka business bi achi tarh chal raha ta.

Dadaji and dadi bi sabi baccho ko milne aaya karte Te sabi bacche bi gaanv bi jaaya karta Te.

lekin iss samy papa ka business dono chacha Ke business se bi bahoot adik aage nikl gya ta jiss se unko thodi jlan bi Ho rahi ti.

Thode smay baad.....

Raat Ke smay ek bade hospital Ke Ek room mai Ek aurat chik rahi ti botany pregnant ti
baahr Ek admi chkr kaat raha ta bahoot tension mai ta

Bahr mossam bi bahoot bayank ta Andrei raat ti bhoot tezi se baaris Ho rahi ti

Thode samy baad aurat ek bahoot hi Pyaare bacche ko janm deti hai jiski aanke ek dam nili ti and bahoot hi massom dik raha.


bacche ke rone Ke avaj sune Ke baad bhar vala admi bahoot kush ho jata hai
thodi der baad doctor bahr aata hai and bolta hai congratulations Thakur SherSingh apko beta hua hai. Itna sunne Ke baad Vo noto ki gaadi niklte hai Dr ko dete hai and bolte mitiye baanta pure hospital mai Ye bolte hue vo room mai enter karte hai and bolte hai Neha aaj Tumne hamko bahoot kusiya di hai kitna pyaara beta hai.


(ji haa dosto Ye dono or koi nai balki mere mummy or papa hai )

Jiss smay bacche ka janm hua usi samy kai dur swarg mai Ek Sevk God se bolta hai akir kaar uska janm ho hi gya. Uski baat sunte hi God muskrate hai.

Chaliye chalte hai dhrti pe vapis....

Mere janm hone Ke baad mummy papa dono gar aa jaate hai


(Ab third person ki jubaani)


SherSingh And NehaSingh Apne bacche ko leke gar Mai aate jaha unka swagat hota hai.

bacche ki janm ki kbr gaanv bi paoonch gai ti vo bi delhi ke liye nikl jaate hai.

ab wapis delhi chalte hai....

waha gar pe Ek larki hoti hai jo bacche ko Dek rahi ti and bahoot kush ho rahi ti...


ab donon ladki donon bacche ko ek ladki ka Hath Mein Dete Hain Jo ladke ko dekh kar kahati hai ki mamma yah Mera Bhai hai na

Aurat use ladki se kahati hai ki han beta yah Tera Bhai hai

Ladki kahati Hai mai isse bahoot pyar karongi mera beti...

uski baat sunne Ke baad sabi haste hai

sab bacche and bade bi bahoot kush te

dada and Dadi bi dusre din aa gye

unke guruji ko inform kar diya gya ta naamkarn Ke liye

dusre din naamkarn ka program raka jaata hai.


(So guys ab story mere yani hero Ke point of view se chelgi and sabi charcter Ke name or usse rista ki issab se chalge <Apko lag raha hoga itna chota bachan gai to kese but iss point of view se story acchi tarh samj aayga>)


Naamkarm ke din.....

Didi mere saath so rahi ti mere haath pakd ke jese muje koi utke le jaaye
fir mumny usko utati and vo merko dekti hi bolte hai

Nisha Didi : kitna pyaara betu hai na mummy

mummy : ha beta Tera betu bahoot pyaara hai.

Fir sab tyar hote hai hall Mai aate hall bi bahoot bada ta dada, Dadi, dono bade mummy and papa and mere saare bade BHAI behen sab tyaar Te and dusre bi bahoot memhan aaye hue te

mere sare bahi behen mere saath kel rehe te


(Guys yaha Mai dono bade mummy, papa ko name likunga)


NitaSingh : kitna pyaara bacha hai

NainaSingh : Ha sahi kaha apne bahoot hi pyaara hai.

Thodi der Mai guruji bi aa jaate hai

tab guruji bolte hai bacche ke mummy papa idar aa Ke bet jaaye

Mom merko unki goad Mai leke beti hai and dad unke pass Mai
fir pooja start hoti hai bahoot lambe smay ke Baad pooja smapt hoti hai
Tabi guruji bolte

Guruji : bacche ko merko dijiye

guruji bacche ko lene ke baad usko dekte hai and usme h ko jaate hai
Baad mai guruji dyyan lagte hai and bahoot achambit hote hai unko passena aa jaata hai.

Ye dek Ke sabi ko jatka lagta hai

thodi der baad guruji bolte hai

Guruji : Ye baccha bahoot hi baagysali hoga and jo bi karya karega usme vijay hoga Jo bi isse dushmani karega uska Ye sarvanaas karega Isliye iska naam hoga
VikramSingh

so guys mera name hai VIKRAMSINGH

uske baad guruji dada, Dadi and mom, dad ko ek dusre room mai bulate hai and bolte hai

Guruji : aap sabko ek mathva purn baat batani hai

sab ko unki baat sunne Ke baad shok laga



(Aisa kya bta diya guruji NE Ye next update mai dekte hai)
nice start
 
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