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Fantasy Manhoosh ( Revenge By KILLER )
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Update 2
So guys room mai guruji bolte hai ki
Guruji : iss bacche ke saath kuch Kali saktiyo ka saaya hoga kuch matvapurn baate Ye hai ki kabi isse nafrt mat Karna or hamesa pyar Dena Agr Isko nfrt mila to Ye aap sabko ek liye bahoot bura hoga
Ye baat sunne Ke baad sabi shok ho jaate hai
uske baad guruji chale jaate hai
Ye baat mom dad gar Mai baki parivar wali ko bi bata dete hai
Ese thode din ese hi hasi Khushi nikl jaate hai Baad mai dadaji Dadi bi gaanv ke liye nikl jaate hai
ese hi din niklte hai Didi hamesa mere saath hi rete ti and bahoot sab bhai behen bi mere saath hasi Khushi kelte rehte Te and Din nikl jaate hai.
Didi Ke alva abi baki sb Scl Jaane St Kar diya ta
Es tar 1 saal nikl jaata hai iss dauraan papa and dono uncle Ke business Mai chota mota Nissan hua ta but Kisne jyaada dyyan nai diya
mai bi 1 saal hogya ta but mujme 2,3 saal baccho jese samj aane lagi ti
Baad mai ek din dono uncle ke business Mai bahoot bada nuksan hua jisse un ko bahoot bada jatka lagta hai
us din uncle thoda drink karke raat ko aate hai or chhota bacche pe iljam lagate hai
Arvind SINGH : sab kuch iss manhoosh life vaja se hua hai
kamal SINGH : ha sahi kaha bahiya sab kuch iski vajah se hua hai
papa bolte hai are is kuch nai hota andvishwas hai sab kuch
iss tarh papa sab Sant karte and sab ko dinner karne ke Baad sone chle jaat hai
sab ko Lagne laga ta ki mai sach mai manhoosh hu
mom ko bi thoda thoda esa line laga ta but vo jyada react nai kiya
thode smy Baad Ek din Amit bhai Kar accident Ho jaata hai jiska doshi bi hame mana jaat hai
Nita singh: mere bete ka accident iss ki vajh se hua hai iss manhoosh life vaja se
ab sab merko kari koti Sunate hai
merko kya Ganta hi fark padne vala ta hmko kuch jyada Smj mai aaye to ground pade na
AB to mom bi hane jyada Khushi se baat nai karti ab to mere sabi bhai behen and dono uncle aunty dur rehne lage Te
Didi and dad ko jyada kuch dek nai pada
iss tarh mai 3 saal ka Ho gya but merko Ab jitne 5,6 saal ke bachhe ko smj say utna samj mai aane lagta mere Didi looked chod sab bhai behan bi scl Jaane lage lagte Te
iss dauran mom pregnant ti mom ne ek nani si Pari ko janm diya jissse pure gar kushi ka mahol cha gya
dada dadi bi gaanv ke ane vale Te
uske baad ek din Baad naamkarn ke baad uska name Tiya SINGH raka gya
mom merko jyada meri pari ke nai Jaane dete Te so Mai jab vo uske pass nails hote tab mai uske pass jaat Ke kelta
thode din Baad dada Dadi gaanv waps Jaane wale Te rate mai unka accident Ho gya jisme unke death bo gai jiska shrey mujko diya gya
gift mai merko bahoot maar padi and bahoot kuch sunne ko Mila
tab bi didi and dad merko utna kuch nai kkah unko laga hadse to hote rathe hai usme meri kya galti
iss tarh kuch machine bit gye uss Duran mom me ab to mom me mera kyal rakna hi chod diya ta
Isliye dad me jyada bahs nai kiya and mere liya Ek nokrani ko rak diya
(intro
Nokrani : shanti baai
Good looking hai merko Apne bacche ke jese manti hai
Mai abi inko maa and mere real mummy ko mom lekunga )
Iss tarh 1 saal nikl gya Mai 4 saal ka Ho gya ta ek din dad business Mai bahoot bada loss hua
tab unko bahoot gussa aaya
vo gar Mai drink karke aaye Te bolne lage
dad : sab kuch iss manhoosh life vaja se hua Itna nuksan
Arvind SINGH : humne to pele hi kaha ta Aapne nai mana
naina SINGH : ha bhaishab Ye ek number Kaha manhoosh hai
Nita SINGH : ha sahi kaha tune
mom: AB to merko isko apni mom kethe hue bi sarm aate hai
sab mere bhai behen sun rehe te dad mere ko maar rehe te nai rote jaa raha
ab unka roj ka Ho gya ta jab man kare merko marte and jo kaam karte jaa rehte
jo mana karta to maar kaani padti
ab to meri aukat ek bete se leke ek nukar ki Ho gai kisko bi nai kiya ka ki mai iss gar naukrani nai larka Hu
sirf didi and maa Ek kinte muj setup baat karte Te and achi tarh rakte Te mai bi sirf Inke sath hi kelta ta and kabi kabi chupke de pari se milne chla jata.
Agr galti setup bi mai mere bhai behen ke pass kelne ke liye chal gya to vo merko bahoot marte and and mom dad Ya Dusro ko malum chalta to vo bi merko Marte Te
but Kisne Ye chin notice nai kiya ki merh chote bahoot jaldi bar jaate hai.
Ek din Sunday ka din ta mere bhai behen ke friends aaye hue te. Sab kelte rehe te mai dur swarg Dek raha ta.
gar kaam hall bahoot bada ta.
iss dauran Naina Didi Ke friend ek mom ka favourite and kafi mengha port gir diya jisme draar aa gai jiss vo todi dar gye liken merko dekne Ke baad keloge shetani muskaan aa gai
vo port unonhe Ek chote setup table par rak diya uske pass hi sofa ta
naina Didi : hey kutte idar aa
Mai unke pass gya because mere alva kon ta
Mai : boliye Didi
itna bolte hi mere gaali par ek thappad aa gya Didi Ke hath ka and boli
Naina Didi : Mai Teri koi Didi nai hua Samja malkin bol Ye bolte unhone ek or thpad ka Prasad de diya
Mai rote hue bola
mai: boliye malkin
Naina Didi : iss side ke niche setup ball nikl
mai : ji malkin
Mai niche se ball nikl raha ta tab mera hata table ko halkat sa touch ho gya jisse uske upar raka port niche gir gya and tut gya
tab Naina Didi chilyye kutte Ye tune kya Kar diya port today diya Ye bolte merko Marne lagi and baki mere bhai behen bi marne lage
itna shor sarrba sunn ke sab niche aa gye
unhone pucha kya hua
Naina Didi ne sab kuch bta diya mirchi masala laga Ke.
tab tak Mai ro raha ta
Uske Baad jese pata chal ki mom ka favourite part today diya tune Mai merko Marne lagi mom
mom: saale harmony kuute Ye kya Kar diya mera favorite port today diya kitna mengha ta Kabi deke bi kitne ruppee ka ta
merko bahoot marne lagi
mai: mom Maine kuch nai kiya hai merko Didi ne Kaha ta
mom : gussa mai kon Teri mom mai Teri mom nai Samja malkin bol malkin
mai: malkin chod dijiye merko mat maariye
tab maa bich mai aa gai jisse unko thode maaran but Baad mai merko chod diya and sab Apne Apne room mai chle gya
maa : mere laal terko jyada to nai Mara in darindo ne
mai : nai maa rote hue Mai bola
maa : chal room mai chl terko lap laga deti Hu
(view of house
Mahal jesa gar ta 4th floor Te total
Ground floar: ek bada sa kitchen ta and 3,4 guest room and ek store type ka Ek chota room ta jo ki mera room ta
1st floor : total 6,7 room Te mom dad, dono uncle auntie and Didi and Naina Didi ka room idr ta meri pari to ab mom ke pass rehte ti baaki room kali Te
2nd floor : mere baki saare bhai behen ke rooms Te
3rd floor : idar chote bacche yane 10, 12 saal tak Ke bacche kel sakte itne sabi games Te but idar ab merko nai ane diya jaat ta
4th floor : idar Jim bana raka hai exercise karne ke liye
chat bi ek dam badiya hai whaa par betne ke liye apke sab kuch hai
Gar ke aaspaas Ke bada garden hai
gar ke just bagl Mai Ek bada sa garage hai gar ke piche servants Ke liye rooms hai. )
mere room mai Sone ke liye ek bed and chota sa cupboard ta
mai maa ke saath room mai aaya maa lap lene chle gye tan Didi rote hue aaye and bole
didi : jyda lagi to nai betu
itna bolte jyda rone lagi
maine unko manyya ki merko jyada nai laga hai
Baad mai maa NE merko lap laga and Aatla karne ke liye bola didi mere pass beti rehi Mai so gya pta nai chal
( didi= meri sagi sister NishaSingh s
Lap = Dava vegera )
AB aage next update mai dekte hai kya hoga?.............
So guys room mai guruji bolte hai ki
Guruji : iss bacche ke saath kuch Kali saktiyo ka saaya hoga kuch matvapurn baate Ye hai ki kabi isse nafrt mat Karna or hamesa pyar Dena Agr Isko nfrt mila to Ye aap sabko ek liye bahoot bura hoga
Ye baat sunne Ke baad sabi shok ho jaate hai
uske baad guruji chale jaate hai
Ye baat mom dad gar Mai baki parivar wali ko bi bata dete hai
Ese thode din ese hi hasi Khushi nikl jaate hai Baad mai dadaji Dadi bi gaanv ke liye nikl jaate hai
ese hi din niklte hai Didi hamesa mere saath hi rete ti and bahoot sab bhai behen bi mere saath hasi Khushi kelte rehte Te and Din nikl jaate hai.
Didi Ke alva abi baki sb Scl Jaane St Kar diya ta
Es tar 1 saal nikl jaata hai iss dauraan papa and dono uncle Ke business Mai chota mota Nissan hua ta but Kisne jyaada dyyan nai diya
mai bi 1 saal hogya ta but mujme 2,3 saal baccho jese samj aane lagi ti
Baad mai ek din dono uncle ke business Mai bahoot bada nuksan hua jisse un ko bahoot bada jatka lagta hai
us din uncle thoda drink karke raat ko aate hai or chhota bacche pe iljam lagate hai
Arvind SINGH : sab kuch iss manhoosh life vaja se hua hai
kamal SINGH : ha sahi kaha bahiya sab kuch iski vajah se hua hai
papa bolte hai are is kuch nai hota andvishwas hai sab kuch
iss tarh papa sab Sant karte and sab ko dinner karne ke Baad sone chle jaat hai
sab ko Lagne laga ta ki mai sach mai manhoosh hu
mom ko bi thoda thoda esa line laga ta but vo jyada react nai kiya
thode smy Baad Ek din Amit bhai Kar accident Ho jaata hai jiska doshi bi hame mana jaat hai
Nita singh: mere bete ka accident iss ki vajh se hua hai iss manhoosh life vaja se
ab sab merko kari koti Sunate hai
merko kya Ganta hi fark padne vala ta hmko kuch jyada Smj mai aaye to ground pade na
AB to mom bi hane jyada Khushi se baat nai karti ab to mere sabi bhai behen and dono uncle aunty dur rehne lage Te
Didi and dad ko jyada kuch dek nai pada
iss tarh mai 3 saal ka Ho gya but merko Ab jitne 5,6 saal ke bachhe ko smj say utna samj mai aane lagta mere Didi looked chod sab bhai behan bi scl Jaane lage lagte Te
iss dauran mom pregnant ti mom ne ek nani si Pari ko janm diya jissse pure gar kushi ka mahol cha gya
dada dadi bi gaanv ke ane vale Te
uske baad ek din Baad naamkarn ke baad uska name Tiya SINGH raka gya
mom merko jyada meri pari ke nai Jaane dete Te so Mai jab vo uske pass nails hote tab mai uske pass jaat Ke kelta
thode din Baad dada Dadi gaanv waps Jaane wale Te rate mai unka accident Ho gya jisme unke death bo gai jiska shrey mujko diya gya
gift mai merko bahoot maar padi and bahoot kuch sunne ko Mila
tab bi didi and dad merko utna kuch nai kkah unko laga hadse to hote rathe hai usme meri kya galti
iss tarh kuch machine bit gye uss Duran mom me ab to mom me mera kyal rakna hi chod diya ta
Isliye dad me jyada bahs nai kiya and mere liya Ek nokrani ko rak diya
(intro
Nokrani : shanti baai
Good looking hai merko Apne bacche ke jese manti hai
Mai abi inko maa and mere real mummy ko mom lekunga )
Iss tarh 1 saal nikl gya Mai 4 saal ka Ho gya ta ek din dad business Mai bahoot bada loss hua
tab unko bahoot gussa aaya
vo gar Mai drink karke aaye Te bolne lage
dad : sab kuch iss manhoosh life vaja se hua Itna nuksan
Arvind SINGH : humne to pele hi kaha ta Aapne nai mana
naina SINGH : ha bhaishab Ye ek number Kaha manhoosh hai
Nita SINGH : ha sahi kaha tune
mom: AB to merko isko apni mom kethe hue bi sarm aate hai
sab mere bhai behen sun rehe te dad mere ko maar rehe te nai rote jaa raha
ab unka roj ka Ho gya ta jab man kare merko marte and jo kaam karte jaa rehte
jo mana karta to maar kaani padti
ab to meri aukat ek bete se leke ek nukar ki Ho gai kisko bi nai kiya ka ki mai iss gar naukrani nai larka Hu
sirf didi and maa Ek kinte muj setup baat karte Te and achi tarh rakte Te mai bi sirf Inke sath hi kelta ta and kabi kabi chupke de pari se milne chla jata.
Agr galti setup bi mai mere bhai behen ke pass kelne ke liye chal gya to vo merko bahoot marte and and mom dad Ya Dusro ko malum chalta to vo bi merko Marte Te
but Kisne Ye chin notice nai kiya ki merh chote bahoot jaldi bar jaate hai.
Ek din Sunday ka din ta mere bhai behen ke friends aaye hue te. Sab kelte rehe te mai dur swarg Dek raha ta.
gar kaam hall bahoot bada ta.
iss dauran Naina Didi Ke friend ek mom ka favourite and kafi mengha port gir diya jisme draar aa gai jiss vo todi dar gye liken merko dekne Ke baad keloge shetani muskaan aa gai
vo port unonhe Ek chote setup table par rak diya uske pass hi sofa ta
naina Didi : hey kutte idar aa
Mai unke pass gya because mere alva kon ta
Mai : boliye Didi
itna bolte hi mere gaali par ek thappad aa gya Didi Ke hath ka and boli
Naina Didi : Mai Teri koi Didi nai hua Samja malkin bol Ye bolte unhone ek or thpad ka Prasad de diya
Mai rote hue bola
mai: boliye malkin
Naina Didi : iss side ke niche setup ball nikl
mai : ji malkin
Mai niche se ball nikl raha ta tab mera hata table ko halkat sa touch ho gya jisse uske upar raka port niche gir gya and tut gya
tab Naina Didi chilyye kutte Ye tune kya Kar diya port today diya Ye bolte merko Marne lagi and baki mere bhai behen bi marne lage
itna shor sarrba sunn ke sab niche aa gye
unhone pucha kya hua
Naina Didi ne sab kuch bta diya mirchi masala laga Ke.
tab tak Mai ro raha ta
Uske Baad jese pata chal ki mom ka favourite part today diya tune Mai merko Marne lagi mom
mom: saale harmony kuute Ye kya Kar diya mera favorite port today diya kitna mengha ta Kabi deke bi kitne ruppee ka ta
merko bahoot marne lagi
mai: mom Maine kuch nai kiya hai merko Didi ne Kaha ta
mom : gussa mai kon Teri mom mai Teri mom nai Samja malkin bol malkin
mai: malkin chod dijiye merko mat maariye
tab maa bich mai aa gai jisse unko thode maaran but Baad mai merko chod diya and sab Apne Apne room mai chle gya
maa : mere laal terko jyada to nai Mara in darindo ne
mai : nai maa rote hue Mai bola
maa : chal room mai chl terko lap laga deti Hu
(view of house
Mahal jesa gar ta 4th floor Te total
Ground floar: ek bada sa kitchen ta and 3,4 guest room and ek store type ka Ek chota room ta jo ki mera room ta
1st floor : total 6,7 room Te mom dad, dono uncle auntie and Didi and Naina Didi ka room idr ta meri pari to ab mom ke pass rehte ti baaki room kali Te
2nd floor : mere baki saare bhai behen ke rooms Te
3rd floor : idar chote bacche yane 10, 12 saal tak Ke bacche kel sakte itne sabi games Te but idar ab merko nai ane diya jaat ta
4th floor : idar Jim bana raka hai exercise karne ke liye
chat bi ek dam badiya hai whaa par betne ke liye apke sab kuch hai
Gar ke aaspaas Ke bada garden hai
gar ke just bagl Mai Ek bada sa garage hai gar ke piche servants Ke liye rooms hai. )
mere room mai Sone ke liye ek bed and chota sa cupboard ta
mai maa ke saath room mai aaya maa lap lene chle gye tan Didi rote hue aaye and bole
didi : jyda lagi to nai betu
itna bolte jyda rone lagi
maine unko manyya ki merko jyada nai laga hai
Baad mai maa NE merko lap laga and Aatla karne ke liye bola didi mere pass beti rehi Mai so gya pta nai chal
( didi= meri sagi sister NishaSingh s
Lap = Dava vegera )
AB aage next update mai dekte hai kya hoga?.............
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Update 2 ☝☝☝Update 2
So guys room mai guruji bolte hai ki
Guruji : iss bacche ke saath kuch Kali saktiyo ka saaya hoga kuch matvapurn baate Ye hai ki kabi isse nafrt mat Karna or hamesa pyar Dena Agr Isko nfrt mila to Ye aap sabko ek liye bahoot bura hoga
Ye baat sunne Ke baad sabi shok ho jaate hai
uske baad guruji chale jaate hai
Ye baat mom dad gar Mai baki parivar wali ko bi bata dete hai
Ese thode din ese hi hasi Khushi nikl jaate hai Baad mai dadaji Dadi bi gaanv ke liye nikl jaate hai
ese hi din niklte hai Didi hamesa mere saath hi rete ti and bahoot sab bhai behen bi mere saath hasi Khushi kelte rehte Te and Din nikl jaate hai.
Didi Ke alva abi baki sb Scl Jaane St Kar diya ta
Es tar 1 saal nikl jaata hai iss dauraan papa and dono uncle Ke business Mai chota mota Nissan hua ta but Kisne jyaada dyyan nai diya
mai bi 1 saal hogya ta but mujme 2,3 saal baccho jese samj aane lagi ti
Baad mai ek din dono uncle ke business Mai bahoot bada nuksan hua jisse un ko bahoot bada jatka lagta hai
us din uncle thoda drink karke raat ko aate hai or chhota bacche pe iljam lagate hai
Arvind SINGH : sab kuch iss manhoosh life vaja se hua hai
kamal SINGH : ha sahi kaha bahiya sab kuch iski vajah se hua hai
papa bolte hai are is kuch nai hota andvishwas hai sab kuch
iss tarh papa sab Sant karte and sab ko dinner karne ke Baad sone chle jaat hai
sab ko Lagne laga ta ki mai sach mai manhoosh hu
mom ko bi thoda thoda esa line laga ta but vo jyada react nai kiya
thode smy Baad Ek din Amit bhai Kar accident Ho jaata hai jiska doshi bi hame mana jaat hai
Nita singh: mere bete ka accident iss ki vajh se hua hai iss manhoosh life vaja se
ab sab merko kari koti Sunate hai
merko kya Ganta hi fark padne vala ta hmko kuch jyada Smj mai aaye to ground pade na
AB to mom bi hane jyada Khushi se baat nai karti ab to mere sabi bhai behen and dono uncle aunty dur rehne lage Te
Didi and dad ko jyada kuch dek nai pada
iss tarh mai 3 saal ka Ho gya but merko Ab jitne 5,6 saal ke bachhe ko smj say utna samj mai aane lagta mere Didi looked chod sab bhai behan bi scl Jaane lage lagte Te
iss dauran mom pregnant ti mom ne ek nani si Pari ko janm diya jissse pure gar kushi ka mahol cha gya
dada dadi bi gaanv ke ane vale Te
uske baad ek din Baad naamkarn ke baad uska name Tiya SINGH raka gya
mom merko jyada meri pari ke nai Jaane dete Te so Mai jab vo uske pass nails hote tab mai uske pass jaat Ke kelta
thode din Baad dada Dadi gaanv waps Jaane wale Te rate mai unka accident Ho gya jisme unke death bo gai jiska shrey mujko diya gya
gift mai merko bahoot maar padi and bahoot kuch sunne ko Mila
tab bi didi and dad merko utna kuch nai kkah unko laga hadse to hote rathe hai usme meri kya galti
iss tarh kuch machine bit gye uss Duran mom me ab to mom me mera kyal rakna hi chod diya ta
Isliye dad me jyada bahs nai kiya and mere liya Ek nokrani ko rak diya
(intro
Nokrani : shanti baai
Good looking hai merko Apne bacche ke jese manti hai
Mai abi inko maa and mere real mummy ko mom lekunga )
Iss tarh 1 saal nikl gya Mai 4 saal ka Ho gya ta ek din dad business Mai bahoot bada loss hua
tab unko bahoot gussa aaya
vo gar Mai drink karke aaye Te bolne lage
dad : sab kuch iss manhoosh life vaja se hua Itna nuksan
Arvind SINGH : humne to pele hi kaha ta Aapne nai mana
naina SINGH : ha bhaishab Ye ek number Kaha manhoosh hai
Nita SINGH : ha sahi kaha tune
mom: AB to merko isko apni mom kethe hue bi sarm aate hai
sab mere bhai behen sun rehe te dad mere ko maar rehe te nai rote jaa raha
ab unka roj ka Ho gya ta jab man kare merko marte and jo kaam karte jaa rehte
jo mana karta to maar kaani padti
ab to meri aukat ek bete se leke ek nukar ki Ho gai kisko bi nai kiya ka ki mai iss gar naukrani nai larka Hu
sirf didi and maa Ek kinte muj setup baat karte Te and achi tarh rakte Te mai bi sirf Inke sath hi kelta ta and kabi kabi chupke de pari se milne chla jata.
Agr galti setup bi mai mere bhai behen ke pass kelne ke liye chal gya to vo merko bahoot marte and and mom dad Ya Dusro ko malum chalta to vo bi merko Marte Te
but Kisne Ye chin notice nai kiya ki merh chote bahoot jaldi bar jaate hai.
Ek din Sunday ka din ta mere bhai behen ke friends aaye hue te. Sab kelte rehe te mai dur swarg Dek raha ta.
gar kaam hall bahoot bada ta.
iss dauran Naina Didi Ke friend ek mom ka favourite and kafi mengha port gir diya jisme draar aa gai jiss vo todi dar gye liken merko dekne Ke baad keloge shetani muskaan aa gai
vo port unonhe Ek chote setup table par rak diya uske pass hi sofa ta
naina Didi : hey kutte idar aa
Mai unke pass gya because mere alva kon ta
Mai : boliye Didi
itna bolte hi mere gaali par ek thappad aa gya Didi Ke hath ka and boli
Naina Didi : Mai Teri koi Didi nai hua Samja malkin bol Ye bolte unhone ek or thpad ka Prasad de diya
Mai rote hue bola
mai: boliye malkin
Naina Didi : iss side ke niche setup ball nikl
mai : ji malkin
Mai niche se ball nikl raha ta tab mera hata table ko halkat sa touch ho gya jisse uske upar raka port niche gir gya and tut gya
tab Naina Didi chilyye kutte Ye tune kya Kar diya port today diya Ye bolte merko Marne lagi and baki mere bhai behen bi marne lage
itna shor sarrba sunn ke sab niche aa gye
unhone pucha kya hua
Naina Didi ne sab kuch bta diya mirchi masala laga Ke.
tab tak Mai ro raha ta
Uske Baad jese pata chal ki mom ka favourite part today diya tune Mai merko Marne lagi mom
mom: saale harmony kuute Ye kya Kar diya mera favorite port today diya kitna mengha ta Kabi deke bi kitne ruppee ka ta
merko bahoot marne lagi
mai: mom Maine kuch nai kiya hai merko Didi ne Kaha ta
mom : gussa mai kon Teri mom mai Teri mom nai Samja malkin bol malkin
mai: malkin chod dijiye merko mat maariye
tab maa bich mai aa gai jisse unko thode maaran but Baad mai merko chod diya and sab Apne Apne room mai chle gya
maa : mere laal terko jyada to nai Mara in darindo ne
mai : nai maa rote hue Mai bola
maa : chal room mai chl terko lap laga deti Hu
(view of house
Mahal jesa gar ta 4th floor Te total
Ground floar: ek bada sa kitchen ta and 3,4 guest room and ek store type ka Ek chota room ta jo ki mera room ta
1st floor : total 6,7 room Te mom dad, dono uncle auntie and Didi and Naina Didi ka room idr ta meri pari to ab mom ke pass rehte ti baaki room kali Te
2nd floor : mere baki saare bhai behen ke rooms Te
3rd floor : idar chote bacche yane 10, 12 saal tak Ke bacche kel sakte itne sabi games Te but idar ab merko nai ane diya jaat ta
4th floor : idar Jim bana raka hai exercise karne ke liye
chat bi ek dam badiya hai whaa par betne ke liye apke sab kuch hai
Gar ke aaspaas Ke bada garden hai
gar ke just bagl Mai Ek bada sa garage hai gar ke piche servants Ke liye rooms hai. )
mere room mai Sone ke liye ek bed and chota sa cupboard ta
mai maa ke saath room mai aaya maa lap lene chle gye tan Didi rote hue aaye and bole
didi : jyda lagi to nai betu
itna bolte jyda rone lagi
maine unko manyya ki merko jyada nai laga hai
Baad mai maa NE merko lap laga and Aatla karne ke liye bola didi mere pass beti rehi Mai so gya pta nai chal
( didi= meri sagi sister NishaSingh s
Lap = Dava vegera )
AB aage next update mai dekte hai kya hoga?.............
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For starting new story thread....
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Nice and beautiful introduction of the story....Introduction
Dadaji: Thakur PrtapSingh
Age 80 years hai healthy hai Gaanv mai sab ijjat karte because gaanv ke Thakur hai and dayavaan hai.
Dadiji: MayaSingh
Age 77 hai Ye bi healthy hai husband se and unke baccho se bahoot pyar karte hai. Dyyalu hai and kisi se nafrt nai karte.
Prtapsingh and Mayadevi ke 4 Bacche hai 1 lardki and 3 ladke
1) Bade papa : Thakur ArvindSingh
Age 48 hai but abi bi healthy hai lalchi kism ke inssn hai . Paiso ke Lover hai
.Bade Mummy : NitaSingh Ye ArvindSingh Ke patni hai.
Age 40 hai abi bi koi deke to Bol nai sakta Ye 40 age Ke hai
Apne pati se pyaar karti unke jese lalchi kism ke hai.
Inke 4 bacche hai 3 larki and 1 beta
1) Bada Beta : AmitSingh
Age 25 hai Ammer baap ki bigdi hui aulaad hai. Paiso ka gmand hai . Baki age deknge hai.
2) Dusri Beti : NainaSingh
Age 23 hai. Iss be paiso ka gmand hai. Hamesa party and friends mai rehti hai dusro ko kuch bi nai samjti. Dusra age deknge.
3) Dusra Beta : RohanSingh
Age 22 hai Ye bi Apne badi behen and bhai ke tarh hai.
4) Dusri Beti : RiyaSingh
Age 22 Ye Rohan and Riya dono Judwa hai. But Riya baki sabse alg hai. Sabko pyar and respect deti hai paiso ka gmand nai hai.
Ye sabi abi college Mai hai. Delhi ke and Des ke sabse no1 college mai hai.
College name M.V. College (Iss Story mai jo bi name and dusri jagh ke name Bas kalpnik hai)
2) Dusre Bade Papa : KamalSingh
Age 45 Hai Ye bi bade BHAI ke tarh lalchi insaan hai apne bevi baccho se pyaar karte hai Apne bade bhai ke saath company chalte hai.
2) Bade mummy : NainaSingh
Age 40 hai Kamal SINGH ke patni hai Ye Achi and Melissa aurat hai apne bacho se pyar karti hai.
Inke 2 bacche hai 2 larki hai
PyalSingh And PriyaSingh Dono Judwa hai. Age 21 hai right now Abi apne bade bhai behen Ke saath college mai hai
3) Papa: SherSingh Age 40 hai but abi 25 lagte hai
Gar Mai sabse Chote hai but hosiyar hai sabse jyaada sabse pyaar karte hai but Ek se nfrt jo age pata chelga
inki Ek alg company hai jo india top 10 mai hai.
3) Mummy : NehaSingh Age 35 hai
Sabi se pyar karti sivya Ek. Baki ache aurt hai koi lalch nai man Mai.
Inke 3 bace hai 2 larki 1 ladka
1) Badi Beti : NishaSingh
Age 20 hai abse pyaar karte hai sivya Ek () jo age pata chelga.
2) Hero(Killer) : VikramSingh
Age 19 hai six pack body hai baki age pta chelga
3)Choti Behen : TiyaSingh
Age 16 hai . Hero ki jaan hai. isko pta nai ki iska Ek saga bada bhai hai buhoot cute hai and natkat hai sabki ladli hai
Dono bade papa ki company ka name hai "SINGH GROUPS OF COMPANY "
Mere papa ki company ka name hai TSS GROUPS OF COMPANY (TSS= THAKUR SHER SINGH)
4) Bua : Smita Roy
Age 40 hai Achi aurat hai apne sab ko pyar karti hai.
Fufa : Vilas Roy
Age 45 Hai india Ke jaane maane Doctor hai.
Enki 1 larki hai
name hai Khushi Roy hero Ke age ki hai. Delhi Mai rehte hai Apne cousins Ke saath college mai hai.
Ye Sab abi Delhi mai rehte hai sivya Dada and Dadi With Joint family
END OF INTRODUCTION
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Bhai update ka bad 25% he samajh mai aaya baaki ka 75 % spelling mistakes ke wajah se sarr ke upar se chala gya.
Spelling mistake thik karo otherwise story ka plot accha hai..
Spelling mistake thik karo otherwise story ka plot accha hai..
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AMAZING AWE AND FANTASTIC VERY VERY NICE UPDATE AND STORY THANKS BHAI
nice updateUpdate 2
So guys room mai guruji bolte hai ki
Guruji : iss bacche ke saath kuch Kali saktiyo ka saaya hoga kuch matvapurn baate Ye hai ki kabi isse nafrt mat Karna or hamesa pyar Dena Agr Isko nfrt mila to Ye aap sabko ek liye bahoot bura hoga
Ye baat sunne Ke baad sabi shok ho jaate hai
uske baad guruji chale jaate hai
Ye baat mom dad gar Mai baki parivar wali ko bi bata dete hai
Ese thode din ese hi hasi Khushi nikl jaate hai Baad mai dadaji Dadi bi gaanv ke liye nikl jaate hai
ese hi din niklte hai Didi hamesa mere saath hi rete ti and bahoot sab bhai behen bi mere saath hasi Khushi kelte rehte Te and Din nikl jaate hai.
Didi Ke alva abi baki sb Scl Jaane St Kar diya ta
Es tar 1 saal nikl jaata hai iss dauraan papa and dono uncle Ke business Mai chota mota Nissan hua ta but Kisne jyaada dyyan nai diya
mai bi 1 saal hogya ta but mujme 2,3 saal baccho jese samj aane lagi ti
Baad mai ek din dono uncle ke business Mai bahoot bada nuksan hua jisse un ko bahoot bada jatka lagta hai
us din uncle thoda drink karke raat ko aate hai or chhota bacche pe iljam lagate hai
Arvind SINGH : sab kuch iss manhoosh life vaja se hua hai
kamal SINGH : ha sahi kaha bahiya sab kuch iski vajah se hua hai
papa bolte hai are is kuch nai hota andvishwas hai sab kuch
iss tarh papa sab Sant karte and sab ko dinner karne ke Baad sone chle jaat hai
sab ko Lagne laga ta ki mai sach mai manhoosh hu
mom ko bi thoda thoda esa line laga ta but vo jyada react nai kiya
thode smy Baad Ek din Amit bhai Kar accident Ho jaata hai jiska doshi bi hame mana jaat hai
Nita singh: mere bete ka accident iss ki vajh se hua hai iss manhoosh life vaja se
ab sab merko kari koti Sunate hai
merko kya Ganta hi fark padne vala ta hmko kuch jyada Smj mai aaye to ground pade na
AB to mom bi hane jyada Khushi se baat nai karti ab to mere sabi bhai behen and dono uncle aunty dur rehne lage Te
Didi and dad ko jyada kuch dek nai pada
iss tarh mai 3 saal ka Ho gya but merko Ab jitne 5,6 saal ke bachhe ko smj say utna samj mai aane lagta mere Didi looked chod sab bhai behan bi scl Jaane lage lagte Te
iss dauran mom pregnant ti mom ne ek nani si Pari ko janm diya jissse pure gar kushi ka mahol cha gya
dada dadi bi gaanv ke ane vale Te
uske baad ek din Baad naamkarn ke baad uska name Tiya SINGH raka gya
mom merko jyada meri pari ke nai Jaane dete Te so Mai jab vo uske pass nails hote tab mai uske pass jaat Ke kelta
thode din Baad dada Dadi gaanv waps Jaane wale Te rate mai unka accident Ho gya jisme unke death bo gai jiska shrey mujko diya gya
gift mai merko bahoot maar padi and bahoot kuch sunne ko Mila
tab bi didi and dad merko utna kuch nai kkah unko laga hadse to hote rathe hai usme meri kya galti
iss tarh kuch machine bit gye uss Duran mom me ab to mom me mera kyal rakna hi chod diya ta
Isliye dad me jyada bahs nai kiya and mere liya Ek nokrani ko rak diya
(intro
Nokrani : shanti baai
Good looking hai merko Apne bacche ke jese manti hai
Mai abi inko maa and mere real mummy ko mom lekunga )
Iss tarh 1 saal nikl gya Mai 4 saal ka Ho gya ta ek din dad business Mai bahoot bada loss hua
tab unko bahoot gussa aaya
vo gar Mai drink karke aaye Te bolne lage
dad : sab kuch iss manhoosh life vaja se hua Itna nuksan
Arvind SINGH : humne to pele hi kaha ta Aapne nai mana
naina SINGH : ha bhaishab Ye ek number Kaha manhoosh hai
Nita SINGH : ha sahi kaha tune
mom: AB to merko isko apni mom kethe hue bi sarm aate hai
sab mere bhai behen sun rehe te dad mere ko maar rehe te nai rote jaa raha
ab unka roj ka Ho gya ta jab man kare merko marte and jo kaam karte jaa rehte
jo mana karta to maar kaani padti
ab to meri aukat ek bete se leke ek nukar ki Ho gai kisko bi nai kiya ka ki mai iss gar naukrani nai larka Hu
sirf didi and maa Ek kinte muj setup baat karte Te and achi tarh rakte Te mai bi sirf Inke sath hi kelta ta and kabi kabi chupke de pari se milne chla jata.
Agr galti setup bi mai mere bhai behen ke pass kelne ke liye chal gya to vo merko bahoot marte and and mom dad Ya Dusro ko malum chalta to vo bi merko Marte Te
but Kisne Ye chin notice nai kiya ki merh chote bahoot jaldi bar jaate hai.
Ek din Sunday ka din ta mere bhai behen ke friends aaye hue te. Sab kelte rehe te mai dur swarg Dek raha ta.
gar kaam hall bahoot bada ta.
iss dauran Naina Didi Ke friend ek mom ka favourite and kafi mengha port gir diya jisme draar aa gai jiss vo todi dar gye liken merko dekne Ke baad keloge shetani muskaan aa gai
vo port unonhe Ek chote setup table par rak diya uske pass hi sofa ta
naina Didi : hey kutte idar aa
Mai unke pass gya because mere alva kon ta
Mai : boliye Didi
itna bolte hi mere gaali par ek thappad aa gya Didi Ke hath ka and boli
Naina Didi : Mai Teri koi Didi nai hua Samja malkin bol Ye bolte unhone ek or thpad ka Prasad de diya
Mai rote hue bola
mai: boliye malkin
Naina Didi : iss side ke niche setup ball nikl
mai : ji malkin
Mai niche se ball nikl raha ta tab mera hata table ko halkat sa touch ho gya jisse uske upar raka port niche gir gya and tut gya
tab Naina Didi chilyye kutte Ye tune kya Kar diya port today diya Ye bolte merko Marne lagi and baki mere bhai behen bi marne lage
itna shor sarrba sunn ke sab niche aa gye
unhone pucha kya hua
Naina Didi ne sab kuch bta diya mirchi masala laga Ke.
tab tak Mai ro raha ta
Uske Baad jese pata chal ki mom ka favourite part today diya tune Mai merko Marne lagi mom
mom: saale harmony kuute Ye kya Kar diya mera favorite port today diya kitna mengha ta Kabi deke bi kitne ruppee ka ta
merko bahoot marne lagi
mai: mom Maine kuch nai kiya hai merko Didi ne Kaha ta
mom : gussa mai kon Teri mom mai Teri mom nai Samja malkin bol malkin
mai: malkin chod dijiye merko mat maariye
tab maa bich mai aa gai jisse unko thode maaran but Baad mai merko chod diya and sab Apne Apne room mai chle gya
maa : mere laal terko jyada to nai Mara in darindo ne
mai : nai maa rote hue Mai bola
maa : chal room mai chl terko lap laga deti Hu
(view of house
Mahal jesa gar ta 4th floor Te total
Ground floar: ek bada sa kitchen ta and 3,4 guest room and ek store type ka Ek chota room ta jo ki mera room ta
1st floor : total 6,7 room Te mom dad, dono uncle auntie and Didi and Naina Didi ka room idr ta meri pari to ab mom ke pass rehte ti baaki room kali Te
2nd floor : mere baki saare bhai behen ke rooms Te
3rd floor : idar chote bacche yane 10, 12 saal tak Ke bacche kel sakte itne sabi games Te but idar ab merko nai ane diya jaat ta
4th floor : idar Jim bana raka hai exercise karne ke liye
chat bi ek dam badiya hai whaa par betne ke liye apke sab kuch hai
Gar ke aaspaas Ke bada garden hai
gar ke just bagl Mai Ek bada sa garage hai gar ke piche servants Ke liye rooms hai. )
mere room mai Sone ke liye ek bed and chota sa cupboard ta
mai maa ke saath room mai aaya maa lap lene chle gye tan Didi rote hue aaye and bole
didi : jyda lagi to nai betu
itna bolte jyda rone lagi
maine unko manyya ki merko jyada nai laga hai
Baad mai maa NE merko lap laga and Aatla karne ke liye bola didi mere pass beti rehi Mai so gya pta nai chal
( didi= meri sagi sister NishaSingh s
Lap = Dava vegera )
AB aage next update mai dekte hai kya hoga?.............