Incest Mard ka bachcha.

[Chunmun]

Lallu or komal dono behosh.. parcha fatega kaki pr..... Bina soche samjhe thappad pel dia upar se pagal bhi bola.. ab tera kya hoga kaaki.. . Besabri se intzaar agle update kaa.

Thanks bhai.

 

[Dev123]

Nice....bhai...

 

[Vickey.a]

Nahi bhai. Lallu agar thik ho gya to story kharab ho jaiga. Abhi Lallu ko Lallu hi rahne do Lalit mat kaho banane ko.

Jaise aapki marzi dear mai to bs uske paas supernatural power dekhne ko soch raha tha isliye bola vaise bhi mujhe lgta h ki 4 ya 5 update de kr story ka rukh Kisi or dasa me mod skte ho dekhte h aage kya hota h bahut he interesting hoti ja rhi h story and I m sure ye story sb story se best benegi jitni story aaj tk maine padhi h

 

[Chunmun]

To ab lallu herogiri bhi pelega.....kya baat...dekhte hai aage kya karta hai.....




Ye kuch jyada nhi ho gaya....yaar pati-patni me itni nok-jhok to aam baat hai....itne me aanshu aa gaye....ye baat to hajam nhi hui....

Well...updates ka content accha tha ...

but sach bolu to update utna accha nhi laga....jitne ki pahle ke the.....

jis tarah ka accha content tha...utna hi bura likha gaya...

saaf pata chal raha hai ki kafi jaldi me likha gaya.....

Dost....bura mat lagana....bas kosis karna ki jo bhi likho wo time le kar likho....

bhale hi update late ho jaaye...but i m sure....fir aapko khud bhi padh kar maza aayga aur hume bhi....

Keep rocking.......

Mera thinking ye hai ki aap ko koi gair pagal bole to utna dard nahi karta lekin koi apna pagal bole to jyada chot karta tha.
Maa k aankho mai aanshu ka kya kahu.
Bas wo yahi soch kr roi ki jab khud ka baap hi bete k liye aise word use karega to gair to kuch bhi bol sakta hai.
Dusra soch kr likhne ka to Mujhe maaf kare..
Yahi ek kaam mujhe nahi aata hai.
Mai jab likhne baithata hu to fir jo dil or dimag tab kahta hai likhta chal jata hu.

Bura laga ho to sorry.

 

[J3star]

Super duper hot

 

[Chunmun]

Jaise aapki marzi dear mai to bs uske paas supernatural power dekhne ko soch raha tha isliye bola vaise bhi mujhe lgta h ki 4 ya 5 update de kr story ka rukh Kisi or dasa me mod skte ho dekhte h aage kya hota h bahut he interesting hoti ja rhi h story and I m sure ye story sb story se best benegi jitni story aaj tk maine padhi h

Aap ka sochna sahi hai lekin fir uska jo naam Lallu hai wo fir lalit ho jaiga. Dusra Lallu ban kr rahne mai bahut fayde hai.
Rahi powers ki baat to wo hum Lallu ban kr bhi dikhayenge don't worry bhai. Bas aap sab sath bane rahiye.

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Bhai apka view ek tarah se thik ho sakta hai.. pr galat bhi ho sakta hai.. wo isliye ki sabi jante hai ki lallu ko pagal bolne pr usko bura lagta hai.. to jahir si baat hai maa ko bhi bura lag sakta hai.. kabhi kabhi emotion bhi jude hote hai writer ke...baat buri lag sakti hai aapko lekin ye mera view hai.. so mind mat kijiyega bhai..

Bilkul bhi bura nhi laga dost....maine khud thoda bahut likha hai....thoda kuch as a writter jaanta hu....aur kai baar readers ki buraai bhi sun chuka hu...so main possitives dekhta hu...bura nhi manta.....

Ab aate hai apni baat par.....to yaha maine pati-patni ki baat ki ....jo duniya ka sabse bada roshta hai..inke alawa ek-dusre ko koi har tareeke se na hi janta hai aur na hi samjhta hai....

aur dono ne jis bete ko paida kiya...use to dono hi samjhte honge na...

aur ek baat aur kahuga...ki agar koi bhi baccha 17-18 saal tak aisa ho to maa-baap ko is tarah ki baaton ka effect nhi hota...real life me bhi nhi....

aur bura tab lagta hai jab koi paraya tana maare .....

But jis baap ne khud paida kiya...wo tana to nhi maar sakta na....fir itna bura kyo....bas yahi baat kuch extra lagi.....

Think abt it.....

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Mera thinking ye hai ki aap ko koi gair pagal bole to utna dard nahi karta lekin koi apna pagal bole to jyada chot karta tha.
Maa k aankho mai aanshu ka kya kahu.
Bas wo yahi soch kr roi ki jab khud ka baap hi bete k liye aise word use karega to gair to kuch bhi bol sakta hai.
Dusra soch kr likhne ka to Mujhe maaf kare..
Yahi ek kaam mujhe nahi aata hai.
Mai jab likhne baithata hu to fir jo dil or dimag tab kahta hai likhta chal jata hu.

Bura laga ho to sorry.

Hota hai...bur apno me aur maa-baap me koi bhi barabri nhi ....

jab maa-baap hume kuch kahte hai yo hume bura nhi lagta....bas apne aap par gussa aata hai...

well...lallu roya to bhi sahi tha...bur patni ko pati ki baat itni buri lagi...ye nhi maan pa raha ..well is emotion ko apni jagah rakh kar close karte hai....

dusri baat....ye sach gai ki jo mind me aata hai wo likhta jata hai...i agree...

Ye maine bhi kiya...sab karte hai....

Fir bhi yahi kahuga ki ek baar padh kar post kare....saayad meri baat samjh jaay....baki kuch kami ho bhi to bhi padhna band nhi hoga....bas as a writter ek advice thi.....jo maine jhela hai..seekha hai......wahi bol diya....

keep rocking.....

 

[Happylundg]

Mst story

 

[Vickey.a]

Aap ka sochna sahi hai lekin fir uska jo naam Lallu hai wo fir lalit ho jaiga. Dusra Lallu ban kr rahne mai bahut fayde hai.
Rahi powers ki baat to wo hum Lallu ban kr bhi dikhayenge don't worry bhai. Bas aap sab sath bane rahiye.

Aap ka sochna sahi hai lekin fir uska jo naam Lallu hai wo fir lalit ho jaiga. Dusra Lallu ban kr rahne mai bahut fayde hai.
Rahi powers ki baat to wo hum Lallu ban kr bhi dikhayenge don't worry bhai. Bas aap sab sath bane rahiye.

nhi bhAi aisa to Bilkul mt krna power Tb he dikana jb Lallu lalit bn jaye kyuki aise me power ek bacche k Hato me aate he vo miss use or show off krne lgega jo story k liye Accha nhi h