Incest Mard ka bachcha.

[Badshah Khan]

Awesome update bhai
Emotions ko bohut hi khub dikhaya aur Lallu ka apni behno se rishta jo mazboot ho raha hai wo bhi acha hai
Aur Lallu ko usey pagal bolne se zyada is baat ki taqlif hui ke uske baap ke us baat se uski maa ke ankho mai pani aya is se pata chalta hai ki Lallu apni family se kitna pyaar karta hai
Aur komal ka Lallu ka rishta to saga hai isliye komal ko utni taqlif hona jayaz hai.
Dekhte hai ab kahani mai agey kya hota hai.
Keep writing
Keep posting

 

[Chunmun]

Bilkul bhi bura nhi laga dost....maine khud thoda bahut likha hai....thoda kuch as a writter jaanta hu....aur kai baar readers ki buraai bhi sun chuka hu...so main possitives dekhta hu...bura nhi manta.....

Ab aate hai apni baat par.....to yaha maine pati-patni ki baat ki ....jo duniya ka sabse bada roshta hai..inke alawa ek-dusre ko koi har tareeke se na hi janta hai aur na hi samjhta hai....

aur dono ne jis bete ko paida kiya...use to dono hi samjhte honge na...

aur ek baat aur kahuga...ki agar koi bhi baccha 17-18 saal tak aisa ho to maa-baap ko is tarah ki baaton ka effect nhi hota...real life me bhi nhi....

aur bura tab lagta hai jab koi paraya tana maare .....

But jis baap ne khud paida kiya...wo tana to nhi maar sakta na....fir itna bura kyo....bas yahi baat kuch extra lagi.....

Think abt it.....

Thik kaha aap ne.
Sikke k do pahli hote hai. Aap head dekh kr bole ho or mai tail dekh kr. Yahi hum dono ka fark hai.
Aap ne jo kaha wo bhi sahi hai.

 

[Chunmun]

Hota hai...bur apno me aur maa-baap me koi bhi barabri nhi ....

jab maa-baap hume kuch kahte hai yo hume bura nhi lagta....bas apne aap par gussa aata hai...

well...lallu roya to bhi sahi tha...bur patni ko pati ki baat itni buri lagi...ye nhi maan pa raha ..well is emotion ko apni jagah rakh kar close karte hai....

dusri baat....ye sach gai ki jo mind me aata hai wo likhta jata hai...i agree...

Ye maine bhi kiya...sab karte hai....

Fir bhi yahi kahuga ki ek baar padh kar post kare....saayad meri baat samjh jaay....baki kuch kami ho bhi to bhi padhna band nhi hoga....bas as a writter ek advice thi.....jo maine jhela hai..seekha hai......wahi bol diya....

keep rocking.....

Hahaha sahi baat hai. Thik hai kosis karunga ki aage se ek bar jarur padh lu.

 

[Chunmun]

Awesome update bhai
Emotions ko bohut hi khub dikhaya aur Lallu ka apni behno se rishta jo mazboot ho raha hai wo bhi acha hai
Aur Lallu ko usey pagal bolne se zyada is baat ki taqlif hui ke uske baap ke us baat se uski maa ke ankho mai pani aya is se pata chalta hai ki Lallu apni family se kitna pyaar karta hai
Aur komal ka Lallu ka rishta to saga hai isliye komal ko utni taqlif hona jayaz hai.
Dekhte hai ab kahani mai agey kya hota hai.
Keep writing
Keep posting

Thanks Badshah bhai for your supporting

 

[Amar kumar Mohanty]

Kahani padh ke mujhe lagta hai ki main kahani main ghus gaya hun...aur main khud ye sab kar raha hun....apko manna padega...itne intresting likhte ho....continue sir ji

 

[Sharad97]

Very nice update

Waiting next update

 

[John Cena]

Hmm avhanak kahani ka rukh mor dala tum na too hero ko behosh kar dala

 

[Killerkd]

Dhasu update bro

 

[Black water]

Super fantastic update bhai

 

[Chunmun]

Kahani padh ke mujhe lagta hai ki main kahani main ghus gaya hun...aur main khud ye sab kar raha hun....apko manna padega...itne intresting likhte ho....continue sir ji

Thanks bhai ki AAP KO pasand aaya. Yu hi sath bane rahiye.