Incest Mard ka bachcha.

[Chunmun]

Awesome update

Thanks bhai

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

Waiting.....

 

[Raj142]

WAITING

 

[jonny khan]

waiting next .....

 

[Nd3]

Nice update bhai. Ab ritu ke alwa baki sab par bhi kuch dhyan do.

 

[Malik-18]

JAB MAINE YE STORY READ KARNA START KIYA THA TO
MUJHY LAGA THA K YE SIRF EK LUSTY STORY HAI JIS MEIN
SIRF SEX SEX AUR SEX HI HO GA...YOU KNOW LOCKDOWN
K TIME PE TIME PASS KRNA HI THA TO MAINE SOCHA
CHALO READ KR K HI DEKHTE HAIN TO MAINE
STORY READ KRNA START KR DIYA...BUT LAST
SE KUCH UPDATES MEIN AP NE JO EMOTIONS CREATE
KIYE HAIN...LA'JAWAB BRO...KAMAL HI KAR DIYA...
SOCHA BHI NAHI THA K ESA BHI TURNING POINT
AYE GA IS STORY MEIN...

LIKE...SUNIL KAKA AUR LALLU KI ITNI CLOSENESS...
LALLU AUR US K PAPA MEIN NAH BANNA...AUR AB TO
YE BHI CLEAR HO GEYA HAI K LALLU K PARENTS MEIN
BHI NAHI JAMTI KUCH KHAAS...

START MEIN JO BEHNO KI CONVERSATION THI
NAH US SE ESA LAGA THA K BHAI LALLU TO
DIRECT HI SAB K PARKHACHE URATE JAYE...
BUT AB BEHNO K SATH BAAT CHIT DECENT WAY
MEIN ACHI LAY MEIN JA RAHI HAI STORY...

EK BAAT I THINK AP YAHAN PE KUCH ZABAR'DASTI KA
HI VILLAN ADD KARNE KI KOSHISH KAR RHE HO...
MTLB SERIOUSLY LALLU KO KOI FARAK PARNA
CHAHIYE K GAON MEIN KOI SHARAB BECH RHA
BRO AP K MUTABI US KI DIMAGHI HALAT
THK NAHI HAI...MAIN TO YEHI SUGGEST KARUN
GA K ZABAR'DASTI KA VILLAN ADD KARNE
SE BEHTAR HEI K FAMILY DRAMA HI DIKHA
DO...COZ STORY FIL'HAL FAMILY
K GIRD HI GHOOM RAHI HAI...BAKI AP WRITTER
HO AP BEHTAR SMATHE HO K KYA LIKHA HAI AP KO
PLOT MAINTAIN RAKHNE K LIYE...


KUCH AUR POINTS THE WO ZARA ZEHAN SE NIKAL GAYE
AGAR NEXT REVIEW DIYA TO US MEIN MENTIONS KAR DUN GA

WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE​

 

[Ashutosh Mishra]

Lovely story boss keep it up

 

[Princetaswi]

Hn bhai zabardasti villan add mt kro bhai family drama hi rakho tu isse bhut acha hoga

 

[hellboy]

shandaar update bhai.keep it up

 

[Naik]

Shaandaar update dost
Keep posting