Incest Mard ka bachcha.

[Pta nhi]

Awesome update

 

[Raja thakur]

Awesome updates

 

[Sharad97]

Bahot khubsurat update

Agle update ka intajar rahega

 

[Ng_TheViper]

Nice update.. story m multiple points h jo ek sath chal rahi h jo ki acha lag raha h.
Ek taraf adult part h jahn kaki k sath sath target m cousins bi h , dusri taraf 2 aisi ladkia jo special malum pad rahi h ( 1 angrez , 1 ashram wali ) , teesra h lallu k andar supernatural powers hona , chautha h lallu k khud k karname jo abi usne sharab k theke aur wahn k gundo ko marne k baad shuru krdiye h.. in shorts story kahi s bi boring ni h ..

Mujhe bs ek fault nazar aati h ji ki family m h .
Ya to writer shahab is cheez ko baar baar galti s kar rahe h ya janbhuz k... Ghar m ek taraf dikhate h ki sunil aur baki mardo k aalwa jitni ladies taygirks h unhe sach m lallu ki chinta , fikr aur pyar h ya phir ye sab darr ki wajah s aisa dikhate h....
Agar sach m care karte h to ye care krna itna dikhta ni h kyuki koi na koi aisa mauka van hi jata h jahan lallu ko dukhi hona pad jata h .. ab ye kehna ki it's a normal thing to hum ni mante kyuki ye story h aur kisi bi baat k 2 meaning ho sakte h wo bi tab jab aisa pratach hamare samne ho like kajal ritu ka tana dena , baki sisters ka mil kar majak banana ... Sisters ka chalo samajh aata h ki bhabhi aagai h to firki le rahi h par ye wahi h jo lallu k liye ro rahi thi aur ab thappad mar rahi.. ho sakta h ye bi pyar ho unka par filahal shayad situation clear karne ki jarurat h ki kya sach m sab lalit ko lallu samjhte h abtk ya care karte h dil s ...

lets ssee

 

[Rajthehunterr]

Kya ghajab back to back hot update updates tha bro kaafi interesting and sensual laxmi ku suhagrat hi gyi aur lallu me toh apna you sadhna Pura kr liye sayad se usko Kuch power Mili hai ghajab bro abb dekhna hai ki lallu ke sath kya kya hota hai ya fir yeh kehlo lallu kya kya krta hai soman di kb aayegi lead mai laxmi toh jaa rhi hai kal mama ghar

 

[sonukale]

Very nice update
Waiting for next

 

[123aaliahai]

Nice update

 

[prem pujari]

bhai update ka intzaar hai

 

[Lovingheart]

I m agree with Ng bro rebu

Ghar ke sabhi priwar walo character samjh nahi aa raha hai sirf sunil dada mama mami aur lallu ke ilawa

Baki characters ka sahi base hi nazar ni aa raha esa lagta hai ki yeh sab character jabardasti ke hai

Kajal ek maa hai par maa wale lakshan kahi nahi dikhe usmein usne bs hawas mitayi apni lallu ke sath verna ek maa ko pata nahi chalega kya ki bete ne khana khaya ya nahi kitne hi moke ese aye ki maa ko farak hi nahi pada ki bete ne khana khaya hi nahi

Ram lallu ka baap use jese kisi se matlab hai hi nahi biwi se alag betha hai bete futi ankh nahi suhata use yeh ek bichittar character hai beta ghar se gayab hua baap ka iss cheez ko leke koi dialogue hi nahi hai

Ritu isne bhi hawas mitayi bs apni aur kuch nahi aur mujhe yahan bhi point samjh nahi aya ki Ritu ka pati bhi usse alag sota hai yahi meri samjh mein nahi aa raha yahan ghar ke sare bade marad apni biwio ke sath nahi balki alag kamre mein sote hai

Raghni bhi alag character hai hina soche samjhe kadam utati hai
4th kaki bhi esi hi hai

Ab bari behno ki ati hai agar dekha jaye to behno ko itni care ni hai hero ki unhe lallu ki yaad tabhi ati hai jab uska mazak banana hota hai ya kam hota hai ya fir usne dukhi karna hota hai ya marna hota hai pyar ke hisab se abi tak unka ek bhi point nahi aya hai jese ek bhai behan mein prem hota hai vesa kuch nahi hai

Ab baat karte hai lakshmi ki woh jab se ghar mein ayi hai tabse agar dekha jaye to usne first night lallu ke sath manayi uske baad jan bujh ke lallu ke pass nahi ayi like ek kathputli ki tarha hai woh jese lallu ki behne use nacha rahi hai woh nach rahi hai
Yahan tak ki usne pehle yeh batana bhi jaruri ni samjha ki woh mami ke sath ja rahi hai jab use pata chala ki lallu ko pata chal chuka hai is baat ka to rone dhone ka drama karke apni hawas mita li baki use bhi koi fikar ni hai lallu ki ki pati ne khana khaya ya nahi pati pareshan hoga ya nahi balki ulta use jan bujh ke tang karti hai verna ek biwi apne pati ko dukhi nahi kar sakti chahe koi lakh chutiyapa kare use apni pati ki fikar hoti hai para yahan yo ulta hai

Fir bari ati hai sonam ki jise pata hai ki lallu ki shadi ho chuki hai fir bhi woh jan bujh ke lallu aur lakshmi ke vich drar dalne ki koshish kar raHi hai yahan tak ki mujhe lagta hai dono mami aur mama ko chorh ke koi bhi lallu ki shadi se khush nahi hai sab koshish kar rahe hai ki shadi tut jaye agar gaur se dekha jaye

Baki shayad writer sahab ne kuch socha hoga in characters ke bare mein sorry bro agar mera rebu hura lage to but mujhe jo points galat lage bol diye aur mere rebus ese hi hote hai jhuthi tarif mujh se nahi hoti

 

[Lovingheart]

Nice update.. story m multiple points h jo ek sath chal rahi h jo ki acha lag raha h.
Ek taraf adult part h jahn kaki k sath sath target m cousins bi h , dusri taraf 2 aisi ladkia jo special malum pad rahi h ( 1 angrez , 1 ashram wali ) , teesra h lallu k andar supernatural powers hona , chautha h lallu k khud k karname jo abi usne sharab k theke aur wahn k gundo ko marne k baad shuru krdiye h.. in shorts story kahi s bi boring ni h ..

Mujhe bs ek fault nazar aati h ji ki family m h .
Ya to writer shahab is cheez ko baar baar galti s kar rahe h ya janbhuz k... Ghar m ek taraf dikhate h ki sunil aur baki mardo k aalwa jitni ladies taygirks h unhe sach m lallu ki chinta , fikr aur pyar h ya phir ye sab darr ki wajah s aisa dikhate h....
Agar sach m care karte h to ye care krna itna dikhta ni h kyuki koi na koi aisa mauka van hi jata h jahan lallu ko dukhi hona pad jata h .. ab ye kehna ki it's a normal thing to hum ni mante kyuki ye story h aur kisi bi baat k 2 meaning ho sakte h wo bi tab jab aisa pratach hamare samne ho like kajal ritu ka tana dena , baki sisters ka mil kar majak banana ... Sisters ka chalo samajh aata h ki bhabhi aagai h to firki le rahi h par ye wahi h jo lallu k liye ro rahi thi aur ab thappad mar rahi.. ho sakta h ye bi pyar ho unka par filahal shayad situation clear karne ki jarurat h ki kya sach m sab lalit ko lallu samjhte h abtk ya care karte h dil s ...

lets ssee

Apse shikayat hai sab ki story pe aye aap bhai but meri story pe nahi it's hurts alot but ab maine story write karna chorh diya hai