Fantasy MAYAJAAL (SciFi Paranormal)

[anandsngh12]

Bhai plz continue this story....and try to post update much faster


aapki ye story bahut khas lag rahi hai


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Arre Writer sahab, waiting waiting waiting..

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Nice update

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hansh, hansh ke pet me dard karne lagi hai.. uff..
ramu ko kalakari karne ke liye bathroom ki bijli socket hi mila tha kya , jo ushi pe painting kar dali ...
aur ye rajesh bhi kam nahi... khud to apne bete ke realistic painting ki taraf akarshit hoke kissi karne lag gya. par jab bijli ka jhatka laga to apni baat chupane ke liye bechare ramu ko hi pit diya...
ye kya... ye ramu kya karne ja raha tha.. mathematics me zero hai to kya bas isliye marne ja raha tha... ye to galat baat hai na . aur usko piche kisne pakad liya ab.I think, story me suspense aane wali hai..
Brilliant update Anand ji... Keep it up.

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[anandsngh12]

Superb update brother
Mast comedy scene likha h
Haste haste pet dard krne lga
Ramu ko bathroom m wo bi bijli k bord me painting krne ko mili..wahh..bhai..maza aa gaya
Rajesh chumma chati krne k chakkar m hoth jala baitha
Aur gussa ramu par utar diya
Ab ye kya ho gya...ye kaha ja rha h
Very nice suspense

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Very nice update

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Nice update

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Awesome Update
To chamatkar shuru ho gaya
Ramu ko painting ke liye sahi jagah mili
Rajesh ko badhiya jhatka laga
What a funny scene created...hahahahaha
Lekin ye ramu kya karne ja raha h...?
Aur kisne pakad liya usko...?
what a suspense..great
Wtng Nxt One...

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[anandsngh12]

Mast update bhai ab maza Ayega

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Ab lgta h apna bhai math teacher ko he math seekhayega

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