Fantasy Meera ki dastan (मीरा की दास्तान)

[kamdev99008]

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bhai bahut jabardast kahani hai............. haalaat ki majburiyaan, khwahishon ki aandhiyaan aur bhawnaon ka toofan

wastav mein ye kahani ek bahut gambhir vishay ki hai.........isko padhne se jyada samajhne ki jarurat hai
2 log jo eksath jivanbhar rahne ke liye jude waqt, halaat, majburi aur nasamjhi mein kaise unka na sirf ghar balki man bhi tinkon ki tarah bikharne lagta hai...........

kya waqt rahte jay aur meera khud ko halaaato ke hawale karne ki bajay.......sath milkar in halaaton ka mukabla kar aage badh payeinge

abhi to shayad shuruat hai............. bhanwar ki gahrai mein jana baki hai

 

[Naina]

bhai bahut jabardast kahani hai............. haalaat ki majburiyaan, khwahishon ki aandhiyaan aur bhawnaon ka toofan

wastav mein ye kahani ek bahut gambhir vishay ki hai.........isko padhne se jyada samajhne ki jarurat hai
2 log jo eksath jivanbhar rahne ke liye jude waqt, halaat, majburi aur nasamjhi mein kaise unka na sirf ghar balki man bhi tinkon ki tarah bikharne lagta hai...........

kya waqt rahte jay aur meera khud ko halaaato ke hawale karne ki bajay.......sath milkar in halaaton ka mukabla kar aage badh payeinge

abhi to shayad shuruat hai............. bhanwar ki gahrai mein jana baki hai

jab kammo saheb ne itne achhe comments kiye hai toh kahani jarur dilchasp hogi....

 

[Naina]

revo shaam ko

 

[Naina]

Btw yeh meera ka naam sun harshit sir ki haweli wali meera ki yaad aaye... waise woh meera gehne churane wali chorni thi chaliye dekhte hai yeh wali meera kya gul khila rahi is story mein

 

[Neelkr22]

bhai bahut jabardast kahani hai............. haalaat ki majburiyaan, khwahishon ki aandhiyaan aur bhawnaon ka toofan

wastav mein ye kahani ek bahut gambhir vishay ki hai.........isko padhne se jyada samajhne ki jarurat hai
2 log jo eksath jivanbhar rahne ke liye jude waqt, halaat, majburi aur nasamjhi mein kaise unka na sirf ghar balki man bhi tinkon ki tarah bikharne lagta hai...........

kya waqt rahte jay aur meera khud ko halaaato ke hawale karne ki bajay.......sath milkar in halaaton ka mukabla kar aage badh payeinge

abhi to shayad shuruat hai............. bhanwar ki gahrai mein jana baki hai

aap to jakhad lete ho lafzo me.

Aapne Bakhubi pehchan liye me kis tarah ki story likh raha hu kaise halat the dono ke upar kai logo ki majburiya isase bhi badhkar hoti he, shayad muze bhi pata nahi hoga.

Mene apni taraf se puri koshish ki he par kya ek bar dil tut jaye to dubara jud sakta he, pehle jo pyar tha jo nata tha us vishas ko vapas la sakta he dono ka pyaar.

Stay tuned bhai aage bahot dilchasp kahani he aapko jaroor pasand aayegi.

Jyada lambi kahani nahi he or aapko jyada intzar bhi karna nahi padega.

 

[Neelkr22]

Btw yeh meera ka naam sun harshit sir ki haweli wali meera ki yaad aaye... waise woh meera gehne churane wali chorni thi chaliye dekhte hai yeh wali meera kya gul khila rahi is story mein

haveli ki kahani to padhi nahi mene, ab tak to aapne meera ko pehchana nahi, shayad kahani ke ant me samajh jaogi, ya agle do part me.

Tahe dil se Shukriya kahani padhne ke liye.

 

[Neelkr22]

Comming soon

 

[Naina]

Meera 01

Meera 24 saal ki shadi shuda ladki thi......behad khubsurat uske haseen chehre pe hamesha muskan hoti thi.......uska pati jay 26 saal ka tha apni biwi ko bahot pyaar karta tha vo ek daftar me nokari karta tha......or Meera bhi kisi daftar me kaam karti thi......jisase dono hasi Khushi jindagi beeta rahe the.

Roj ki tarah aaj bhi use der ho gai thi.....tez kadamo ke sath neela kurta pajama pehen ke vo apne Makan ki taraf jane lagi.

Agle mod pe kacchi sadak par mudte hi uske dil ki dhadakan tez hui......vaha roj ki tarah do aavara gunde bidi fuk rahe the.......Meera niche dekhti unsae bachte huye chalne lagi......unke samne se gujarte hi use dekh ek bola.

"haye kya chutad he sali makkhan ki tarah matak rahe he" .......meera ke pasine chutne lage niche dekhti hui aage badhte hi fir aavaj aai.

"Aaja kone me apne lal hoto se ek baar rus pila de"

"Patli kamar kamal kya lag rahi he kal saree pehen ke aaja maza aayega"

Meera tezi se aage nikal gai.........usne piche mud ke dekha to vo dur aa gai thi.....chain ki saans leke meera aage badhne lagi.......makan ka darvaja khula hi tha andar jate hi usne bag tang di.

Shankar - aaj bhi der ho gai !

Meera - kya karu kaam hi itna he, upar se sadak ke lafange roj bachte bachate aana padta he, mene kitni baar kaha shikayat kar par aap he ke meri ek nahi sunte ! .....akhbaar padh rahe jay ne kaha.

Jay - itna dil pe mat le meera, shikayat ki to kamine or jyada tang karenge aise logo ke muh nahi lagte ! .....haat muh dhokar meera roj ki tarah khana pakane lagi.

Dono ne sath milkar khana khaya.......khatiye pe let ke jay so gaya......bartan doti hui meera ko bar bar un lafango ki batein yaad aake jyada dar jati.

Subah subah apne pati ko dibba dene gai tab jay ne use bahon me bhar liya.......meera sharam se lal ho gai.

Meera - choriye muze der ho jayegi aap kabhi bhi shuru ho jate ho ! .......hasate huye jay ne use chor daftar ki or chala gaya.

dhun me gun gunati hui meera ne apni bag uthai.....makan ko tala lagake daftar ki or jane lagi.

Kacche raste pe mudne ke baad ab use dar nahi tha......choti sadak ke ek taraf purani tuti hui imarat thi...... .....dusari taraf zhadiya or maidan tha..... ....meera ki nazar tuti purani imarat pe gai...... ...jo raste ke baju me hi thi vahi aavara gunde raat ko baith ke use pareshan karte the.

Meera apne daftar ki or chali gai........kaam karte karte usko waqt ka pata hi nahi chala.......jab uski nazar ghadi pe gai to raat ke 9 baje the......fauran usne bag uthaya.....or tez kadmo ke sath apne Makan ki or badhne lagi.

Kacche raste pe jab vo mudi......or tezi se aage ki or chalte huye yaha vaha dekha...... .......tuti imarat ke pass se gujarte waqt achanak ek aadmi samne aake ruk gaya...... .....maile kapde pehna vo aadmi bidi fuk raha tha.......dar ke mare meera ke pasine chutne lage.

Meera uske baju se aage ki or badhne hi wali thi ki usne meera ka haat pakad liya......meraa ka jism kaapane laga.

"Tune sach me aaj sari pehen li chamiya mast lag rahi he" ......meera ko fauran kal ki baat yaad aai.....jisase uska dil or ghabra gaya.

Meera - dekhiye me shikayat kar dungi thane me haat chor do ! ........tabhi vaha ek or aadmi aaya.

"Shikayat baad me karna pehle hamari pyaas to buzha de"

Itna kehte huye dusare aadmi ne meera ki kamar ko chu liya...... .....dari hui meera yaha vaha dekhne lagi...... ...par aas paas use koi dikhai nahi diya ye rasta aage se mud ke uske makan ki or jake khatam hota tha isliye koi nahi tha.

"Tera badan garam he lagta he tuze bhi apni garmi mitani he" ........bidi pite huye gunde ne meera ka pallu khinch ke apna muh poch liya.

piche khade gunde ne meera ko bahon me bhar ke saree ke upar se hi jangho ke bich berehmi se masalne laga........ .......kapati hui meera jor jor se cheekhne lagi.

Meera - bachao koi heee bachaaaaaoooo muze ! .........dono dar gaye......mauka dekh meera puri jaan lagake daudne lagi...... .....mod se mud ke ek makan ke samne aake meera ne dekha darvaje pe tala tha....
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Le ab isme Kounsi badi baat hai... bag mein sabji kaatne wali dhaar dar chaaku rakh leti... waqt aane par ek do ke pet mein ghoup deti... simple
kissa hi khatam kar dene ka... roz roz ki jhik jhik koun bardast kare
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill

 

[Naina]

Meera 24 saal ki shadi shuda ladki thi.

thi matlab.. bole toh jinda nahi hai kya

 

[Morningstar173]

Le ab isme Kounsi badi baat hai... bag mein sabji kaatne wali dhaar dar chaaku rakh leti... waqt aane par ek do ke pet mein ghoup deti... simple
kissa hi khatam kar dene ka... roz roz ki jhik jhik koun bardast kare
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill

Chaku to rakh leti pr usko to maza aa raha he na is sb me to kyo rakhe chaku