Fantasy Meera ki dastan (मीरा की दास्तान)

[Star Lover]

Kahani achi thi, magar Jai ke liye bura laga. Meera se sabse jayada pyaar karta tha shayad Raj se bhi jayada. Meera ki khushi ke liye usne Meera ko Raj ke paas jaane diya. Sirf Meera ke chehere par muskaan dekhne ke liye usne bohot badi kurbaani de di.

Aik Pati aapni Patni ki khushi ke liye itni badi kurbaani nahi de sakta jo Jai ne di. Purusho mai aik aehenkaar hota hai ki wo aapni istri ko kisi ke sath nahi baant sakte. Isss aehenkaar ko chodna aasan nahi hota. Magar iss story mai Jai ne Meera ke liye iss ego ko bhi chod diya. Isliye Jai ka pyar Raj ke pyaar se bhi bada hai. Shayad Meera iss baat ko kabhi na samaj paye kyuki use sirf Raj ka roj uske liye thappad khana aur gundo se bachana hi dikh raha hai. Yahi iss duniya ki vidambna hai ki yahan Silent love ki koi keemat nahi hai. Magar jo log dikhava karte hain pyaar mai wahi last mai jeet jate hain. Aur true silent lovers ko haar milti hai jaise Jai ko mili.

In the last story narration is superb. Story writing skills bohot acchi hai. Aapne emotions ko bohot acchi tarah se pesh kiya story mai. Aapko aur bhi stories likhni chahiye iss platform par.

 

[xxxlove]

Neelkr ji kahani ka end pasand nahi aaya.Meera to randi se bhi gayi gujri nikli jo tay vakt tak grahaq ke saath samarpan karti hai par meera ko jay ka pyar ki bhi koi kadra nahi rahi aur Raaj aur meera ne ek pyar karne wale insaan ko dhoka diya aur es sabme dipti ne bhi saath diya use bhole bhale jai ko friend banke aur shadi ka vada karke.
Raaj ka charactor to behad hi ghatia nikla jo bholi ladki ka phayada uthane ke liye uska mindwash karta hai.
NeelKr ji Second part ka intzaar hai...............

 

[S.m2420]

Nice story lekin jay ke sath achcha nhi hua
Wait for second part

 

[Neelkr22]

second part me aap samaz jaoge jay ki kahani adhuri kyu chori.

 

[Sexy launda]

Bhai ab second part ka update dijiye dost,
Updates kb aayenge ye bta dijiye

 

[Neelkr22]

Kahani achi thi, magar Jai ke liye bura laga. Meera se sabse jayada pyaar karta tha shayad Raj se bhi jayada. Meera ki khushi ke liye usne Meera ko Raj ke paas jaane diya. Sirf Meera ke chehere par muskaan dekhne ke liye usne bohot badi kurbaani de di.

Aik Pati aapni Patni ki khushi ke liye itni badi kurbaani nahi de sakta jo Jai ne di. Purusho mai aik aehenkaar hota hai ki wo aapni istri ko kisi ke sath nahi baant sakte. Isss aehenkaar ko chodna aasan nahi hota. Magar iss story mai Jai ne Meera ke liye iss ego ko bhi chod diya. Isliye Jai ka pyar Raj ke pyaar se bhi bada hai. Shayad Meera iss baat ko kabhi na samaj paye kyuki use sirf Raj ka roj uske liye thappad khana aur gundo se bachana hi dikh raha hai. Yahi iss duniya ki vidambna hai ki yahan Silent love ki koi keemat nahi hai. Magar jo log dikhava karte hain pyaar mai wahi last mai jeet jate hain. Aur true silent lovers ko haar milti hai jaise Jai ko mili.

In the last story narration is superb. Story writing skills bohot acchi hai. Aapne emotions ko bohot acchi tarah se pesh kiya story mai. Aapko aur bhi stories likhni chahiye iss platform par.

Aapne har choti cheez par gaur kiya, duniya khamoshi ko andekha karke ronak band baja ke piche bhagti hai, sacchai se koi muh nahi fer sakta.

Par ye koi sacchi kahani nahi hai, second part me aapko jaroor sukun milega.

Thanks for compliment, emotions dalne ki koshish me har bar ruk jata hu kyunki lafzo pe pakad itni majboot nahi hai, fir bhi koshish karunga.

 

[Neelkr22]

Bhai ab second part ka update dijiye dost,
Updates kb aayenge ye bta dijiye

Bhai jaroor par ek alag story likh raha hu vo complete hote hi iska dusara part shuru hoga.

 

[Sexy launda]

D

Bhai jaroor par ek alag story likh raha hu vo complete hote hi iska dusara part shuru hoga.

Dost phle is story ko complete krte to achha hota,
Is story ka besabri se intzaar hai,
Ho ske to is story ko phle complete krke dusra story start kre

 

[Sexy launda]

Waiting bro

 

[S.m2420]

Bhai story kb start karoge