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Dear hira ji aapki story kaafi achi thi magar ek problem hai woo yeh ki apne story ka end esse likha jesse aapko story se picha chudana ho jo mujhe laga woo maine bol diya agar meri iss baat se apko taklif hui ho toh uske liye maafi chahuga magar aap iske end ko aur bhi sunder tarike se likh sakti thi wese toh main bolna nahi chahata tha magar kya krru aapne main hu kutiya 1 aur 2 dono ke end ke aath insaaf nahi kiya jo ki mujhe pasand nahi aaya issi wajeh se majburan bolna pada