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Kya tha fight thi kya yr mujh to nhi lgi fight ye to kmaal ho gya apna hero ka attitud lajavab tha atitude dkh kr bahut accha lga
Bhai shuru mai hero ko week dekhana ek tarha ka master plane tha but ya sirf shuriwat hai aagy kuch aur be hoga jo sabky soch se thora hatky hoga keep supporting
 
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doston maine ya socha hai ke story mai sex add nhi kruga romantic seens add kruga kyu ke sex ke bina be story achi jaige baki aap logo batai many sahi disicion liya hai ya nhi
 

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well...ek action scenes ka mahol banane mein aap mahir hai... jishe padhte waqt sceans cha jaye dilo dimag pe.... hamesha ki tarah writer sahab ne bahot hi ummda aur ek details ke sath fighting aur action scenes create ki hai update mein , Jo sach mein adbhut aur prashansaniya hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai..

shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan....har shabd ek alag kahani bayaan kar raha tha.. update padhte waqt aisa lage ki jaise likha gaya har shabd jeevit ho utha aur mujhe ye update mein ghatit drishya ko dikha rahe hai.... .

Kayi mamlo mein ye update sarvashresth hai....mujhe koi wajah najar nahin aayi ki main is update se koi kami nikalu.... ek reader ke liye sab se badi khushi ki baat yahin hoti hai ki aise update padhne ko mile .. bahut bahut dhanyavaad aapko jo itna achha sundar update ham sab pathakon ke madhya rakhe... main is update ko 5 mein se 5 ank deti hoon..
.. The narration and the dialogues were perfect fit for the atmosphere of the update.
Btw brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 

Luffy

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update 16

jafar komal aur raja is waqt ek secret place mai khre the jo zameen ke 50/ metter niche bana hua tha

wahan is waqt 3 aur log khre the
sid....weapons exprt +explosive bomb bnana aur defuse krna all time exprt
juan...swords master all type of swords knife and bladess
veena...martieal arts exprt all fights unknown lagend tequinics exprt

jafar...ya 3no tum dono ko training degy

sid...jafar kya ya log hamara tourchar seh paige kyu ke u know that inhe train krne se phle ham inka stamina inky speed inky powrs body ke lachkkkk har chix parhkhegy usky bad he ham log inhe train krna hai ya nhi decide kregy

jafar...han janta hun aur mujhe bhrosa hai ya dono apny har test mai khre utregy

juan...well see kyu ke ya ek unofficiel traning hai to mai be dekhna chahta hun kitna dum hai inho mai coz inky to abhe dudh ke dant be nhi tote hahaha

juan ne ya baat raja aur komal ke face pe expression dekhne ke lye kahi thi ke unhe gussa ata hai ya nhi lakin iska natija inhe kesa miliga ya to bad mai pta chalega jaha komal ne locket ke khne pe apna chahra sapat he rakha wahin raja ne to jese usky bat he nhi suny

veena...chalo tum dono mere sath aao

ya bol wo un dono ko sath le jany lge wo aagy the sab aur komal raja piche

komal...raja ham pe is dharti ko protect krne ke bohat bary zimidary hai hamen har kimat pe inhe apna best dena hoga tabhi ya hamwn traning degy

raja...i well give you answr after test

ya raja ne without any emotion kaha tha

locket...komal ab kuch mat bol raja ke locket ne usky mind ko unblock kr diya hai ab aai ga maza

komal...ok

wo dono ek hal mai poche jaha is waqt 4 studant traning kar rhe the 2 boys 2 girls

veena...gayz meet these new unofficiel studants raja n komal

boy 1....kamal khan...ek cool rehne wala banda har problm ko clamly handel krta bina tenshion ke boly to ek dum bindass rehne wala
boy2...sameer mahawar...wesy to inky porwaj indian the lakin batwary ke waqt inky family yaha aagye to ab ya be yahi rehte hen than ek dum body bildur banda like arbaz khan looks
girl 1...siya ek khunkhar sherni
inka gussa mtlb mout inko mardo se nafrat hai
waja aagy pata chalegy

roma...ek intelegant and very fast thinking girl...kamal ke gf be hai ya

intro ho gya ab

veena...so gayz ya dono be tumhary sath traning legy lakin inka koi record nhi hoga but us se phle inky kabiliyt check krne hai so whos want to try

kamal..mam but ham pichle 6 mounths sw train ho rhe hen aur ya new hen kya ya hamen face kr paigy

juan...well hamen dekhna hai ya tumhary samny kab tak tik sakte hen

sid...to rull sun lo
raja tum kamal pe 10/mint tak attack krogy than wo sirf defence krega aur tumhe usky defence ko obsrve krna hai 10/mint bad wo defence khtm krki hand to hand tumse fight krega

raja....i am ready

juan..bache atttitude mat dekha ya kamal hand combat mai veena ka sabsy best studant hai

raja...i well give you answr in fight

komal mann mai...bap re ya to pora he badal gya darpok se sidha angriz ke olad ban gya

locket...hayyy kitne waqt bad wo attitude dekhne ko mila hazaro sal bad be ek prcnt be uska attitude nhi badala

komal...esa na ho wo attitude usko bhare pr jai

locket....well see

sabny ek carcel bnaya
sid..raja 10 mint hen tumhary pass show krke dekhao tum kamal se ziyada powr full ho show me

veena...imposdibl hai wesy kyu ke kamal defence krte hue be kafi heavy attack krta hai kafi bar mai be chounk gye usky speed se

juan...11we mint mai fight clos hai

raja aur kamal face to face khre the

kamal...dost fikar mat kro mai ziyada heavy punch nhi kruga ya bus test hai khul kr khud ko show kru

raja...i want to see you
mujhe dekhna hai tum kya kya sikh chuky ho

kamal...mazak acha tha

raja....i well be challengd you 10/mint mai tum mujhe ek be bar punch nhi kar paoge mai bina defence ke bus tumse bachoga

kamal...gurror bohat hai tum mai

raja....khud pe bhrosa hai mujhe kya tumhe bhrosa nhi khud pe

kamal...well mere usol ya krne ke ijazat nhi dete mujhe

raja...ok to mere hits ko defence krki dekhao ab

kamal man mai...intresting confidant high level ka hai iska dekhta hun dum kitna hai is mai kya pta kuch new sikhne ko mil jai

kamal ne defence posstion le but defence kiya nhi ese he khra rha aur ungli se raja ko hit krne ka ishara kiya

raja...i love it

ya bol raja bhaga usky taraf
kamal ko lga raja jhamp mar kar kick krega lakin ya kya raja bhagta hua aaya aur jab tak kamal samaj pata raja ne sleep mar kar kamal ke pet mai ek dumdar punch jhar diya

ya unexcebl tha waha bethe sabky lye coz ya to sirf ek exprt fightr he kar sakta hai jo apna hit ka spot kuch dekhata hai lakin uska hit kahi aur hota hai

raja wahi nhi ruka kamal ke pet pe punch krne ke bad he usky dono tango ko apny tango mai phasa kar ek dum se jhatka mar kr gira diya
dhmmmmmmm ke tagre awaz ke sath kamal niche gira

raja uth kr khra hua aur kamal ke taraf apna hath barha diya
kamal ek to phle sadmy mai tha ke ek fresher ne usko just ek mint mai dhol chata de lakin phr usny raja ka hath pkra aur raja ne usko uthaya

kamal...impressive yaar bina traning ke itna fast and unblivbl attack wo be ek sath 2 bar
.raja kuch na bola...

raja...abhe 8 mint baki hen ab tum attack krogy ya nhi

kamal...ab tumny apny taqat dekhai ha to chalo ham be dekha dete hen tumhe

ya bol phr se dono fight posstion mai aai

raja ke ankhen kamal ke body ke har moment ko scane kar rhe thi like ek choti se moment be capture kr rha tha wo

kamal ne raja ke taraf jhamp ke aur jese he usko kick marne chahe raja waha se hat gya same time kamal ne raja ke pet pe punch krna chaha lakin raja back flip mar kr waha se door ho gya

ya dekh veena raja se impress ho gye the kyu ke raja jo speed aur mind abhe use kr rha tha wo uska tha he nhi lakin moments to usky he the na bus krwa locket raha tha

veena...i must say ya kafi fast hai usky eye moments dekho har choti se choti moment ko note kr rha hai wo

sid...hmmm but kamal abhe apny real powr kaha show kr rha hai he was played

udhr kamal lgatar attacks kar raha tha but ek be baar wo raja ko touch be nhi kar paya tha

raja...thak gye ho to 5 mint rest le lo i must see you are tired
Ab mr cool ka mind waqai mai angry hony lga tha aaj tak esa nhi hua tha ke koi usky samny es tarha tik pai jabky wo usko hit kar sakta ho lakin kamal pori kosish ki bad be usko chu na pai

juan...kamal only 2 mint you have

ya sun kamal...i think its over

ya bol kamal khra hua aur usny apny ankhen band ke

veena...kamal apna last war kar raha hai imposibl 6mint mai kamal apny har attack ko try kiya wo fail hua

udhr kamal ne apny ankhen band kar apny dono hath jore aur 30second bad apny ankhen kholi raja ke nazar is waqt kamal ke ankho aur lips pr the jese he usny ankhen kholi to raja ne dekha kamal wahi khra hai lakin ya ek prachin kal ki ek ese fight scale the jo hypnotic thi raja 2 second esa he lga lakin 3rd second mai raja urta hua puche deewar se ja lga

raja ko is baar jis speed se kai punch lge the usky mou mai halka khoon aagya tha usny is khoon ko thoka

raja...note bad note bad mujhe lga tha dharti pe ya sab prachin kala khtm ho gye hogy lakin aaj be yahan ya kala ya mojod hai

kamal..kyu bhai maza aaya

raja usky taraf dekh kr...tumny apna akhri attack kr liya lakin mainy to abhe fight start be nhi ke

kamal...nice joke 30 second baki hen himat hai to hit krki dekha

ya sun raja itni time mai phli baar muskuraya

usny apny ankhen bus bnd ke aur khol di aur hawa ke jhoky ke tarha kamal ke pass pocha usky samjny se phle ek punch usky jabde mai thok diya wahin apna ghutna usky pet pe jhara jesw he wo niche jhuka wohi ghutna usky mou pe jhar diya kamal flip hote hue niche ghasit.ta hua jaky diwar se takra gya

abhe jo hua wo kese ko be yakeen nhi aa rha tha tha juan sid aur veena 3no shock aur sadmy mai the ke ek new larka itna fast aur fast kese ho sakta hai

wahin kamal diwar ko tik lga kar wahin betha hua tha usky mou se khoon nikl rha tha aur uska jabra pori tarha dard kr rha tha aur wo yahi soch rha tha ya hua kya aur kese hua

sabky tantra tote komal ke awaz se

komal pass jakar raja ko galy lag gye
komal zor se...wow raja itni tagre aur fast fight phle baar dekhi real mai

raja aram se komal ke kan mai...ab hath chor be do mera hath kahi aur touch ho rha hai

komal raja ke baat nhi samjhe lakin jab usny raja ka bazo dekha to paya uska bazo komal ne apny chest se sata rakha hai
ya dekh komal ke gori gal lal tamatar jese ho gye aur usny raja ka bazo chor diya

tav tak sab sadmy se bahar aa chuky the sameer ne sahara dekr kamal ko uthaya

kamal pass aakr...man.na parega kafi dum hai tum mai

raja...khud pe bharosa ho to tum akily he har musibat se lar sakte ho har jung jit sakte ho bus kabhi piche mat hato tumhari himat he tumhara hathiyar hai tumhara bhrosa he tumhari taqat

sameer...nice yaar kafi mature lagte ho anyway can we frnd

raja...ofcourse why not and kamal sorry for these bro
kamal...no worrys mainy he kha tha tumhe kuch kar ke dekhao lakin socha nhi tha tum mujhe is tarha sarprise krogy
raja...bhrosa aur yakeen ho to sab kuch ho sakta hai

ya 3no chalkr 3no teachrs ke pass aate hen

raja ko apny pass aata dekh 3no apny discuss band krte hen

kamal..mam these gay is very tough opponent of these my intry life

veena...i musy seee to ya dekhni mai jitna masom lag rha hai uska ulta ya utna he dangrous andr se hai kyu ke mai tum dono ke fyt ke nich bus isky ankho ke moment he note kar saky baki iska face bina expression ke dekha mujhe

sid...well tumhe train krne mai maza aai ga
juan...Komal i think tum be hamen kuch sarprise zaror krogi

komal..no sir bus jo sikhe hue hun wohi show krogi

juan...wo why u wait
veena..siya u ready
siya..yes mam
ab siya aur komal aamny samny the

siya...tumhe sharam nhi aai us raja ke bazo ki sath apny chest ragrte hue

komal ya sun...ya mera matter hai teri kyu jal rhe hai

siya...ya sab mard bus aurat ki jism ke chahat rakhte hen hawasi kahi ke

komal...oye tu kisko hawasi boli

siya..sab mard jo be is duniya mai hen sath us raja ko be

ya sun komal ka dimag thnka
komal...kutiya teri himat kese hue meri raja ko hawasi bolne ke ya bol komal ne waha khre hue he hawa mai chalang mare lakim locket ke powrs ke madad se wo hawa mai he rehte hue tezi se siya ke pass aai aur ek kick usky chest pe de mare wo wahi nhi ruky hawa mai flip marte hue komal ne siya ke kandho ko pkr kr usky back pe char gye aur usky lakin ulte usny apny tange siya ke galy mai phasa kar apny hath zameen pe rakhe aur siya ko hawa mai uthate hue zor se zameen pe de mara dhmmmmmmmmmm siya ek dum canfusd ho gye the jabky wo be ek achi khasi fightr thi sath martial arts mai wo be kamal ko takar deti thi dono same to same level pe fight krte

siya niche gire to usko ahsas hua uska lift hand gya kam se kyu ke ek to komal gusse mai dosra locket powrs ke wajasy siya ke band baj gye the siya jese tese khud ko sambhalti hue uthe aur khre ho gye

komal gusse mai ....aaj khe diya dubara kabhi bhool kr be tumny raja ke khilaf ek alfaz be kaha to yaad rakhna zinda nhi chorogi tujhe

siya...mai sabit krki rhogi ke ya be sabky tarha jism ka bhooka hai

komal...agr waqai mai tujhme dum hai to sabit krki dekha de umar bhar teri kutiya banky rhogi lakin agr tu na kar pai to umar bhar tu meri kutiya banky rhegy

siya...challenge accpt

tab tak roma siya ke pass aai
roma...mam siya ka hand isolet ho gya she cant fyt more

veena...ek din mai apny 2 best studants ko 2new freshrs se mar khate hue dekha aaj pori life mai phle he din inho ne itna bara jhatka diya hai aagy pta nhi kya kya dekhna hoga

yahi khayal sid aur juan ke be dimag mai chal rhe the



update hazir hai doston
next update se shuru hogy traning and new adventures
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The angry man

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update 16

jafar komal aur raja is waqt ek secret place mai khre the jo zameen ke 50/ metter niche bana hua tha

wahan is waqt 3 aur log khre the
sid....weapons exprt +explosive bomb bnana aur defuse krna all time exprt
juan...swords master all type of swords knife and bladess
veena...martieal arts exprt all fights unknown lagend tequinics exprt

jafar...ya 3no tum dono ko training degy

sid...jafar kya ya log hamara tourchar seh paige kyu ke u know that inhe train krne se phle ham inka stamina inky speed inky powrs body ke lachkkkk har chix parhkhegy usky bad he ham log inhe train krna hai ya nhi decide kregy

jafar...han janta hun aur mujhe bhrosa hai ya dono apny har test mai khre utregy

juan...well see kyu ke ya ek unofficiel traning hai to mai be dekhna chahta hun kitna dum hai inho mai coz inky to abhe dudh ke dant be nhi tote hahaha

juan ne ya baat raja aur komal ke face pe expression dekhne ke lye kahi thi ke unhe gussa ata hai ya nhi lakin iska natija inhe kesa miliga ya to bad mai pta chalega jaha komal ne locket ke khne pe apna chahra sapat he rakha wahin raja ne to jese usky bat he nhi suny

veena...chalo tum dono mere sath aao

ya bol wo un dono ko sath le jany lge wo aagy the sab aur komal raja piche

komal...raja ham pe is dharti ko protect krne ke bohat bary zimidary hai hamen har kimat pe inhe apna best dena hoga tabhi ya hamwn traning degy

raja...i well give you answr after test

ya raja ne without any emotion kaha tha

locket...komal ab kuch mat bol raja ke locket ne usky mind ko unblock kr diya hai ab aai ga maza

komal...ok

wo dono ek hal mai poche jaha is waqt 4 studant traning kar rhe the 2 boys 2 girls

veena...gayz meet these new unofficiel studants raja n komal

boy 1....kamal khan...ek cool rehne wala banda har problm ko clamly handel krta bina tenshion ke boly to ek dum bindass rehne wala
boy2...sameer mahawar...wesy to inky porwaj indian the lakin batwary ke waqt inky family yaha aagye to ab ya be yahi rehte hen than ek dum body bildur banda like arbaz khan looks
girl 1...siya ek khunkhar sherni
inka gussa mtlb mout inko mardo se nafrat hai
waja aagy pata chalegy

roma...ek intelegant and very fast thinking girl...kamal ke gf be hai ya

intro ho gya ab

veena...so gayz ya dono be tumhary sath traning legy lakin inka koi record nhi hoga but us se phle inky kabiliyt check krne hai so whos want to try

kamal..mam but ham pichle 6 mounths sw train ho rhe hen aur ya new hen kya ya hamen face kr paigy

juan...well hamen dekhna hai ya tumhary samny kab tak tik sakte hen

sid...to rull sun lo
raja tum kamal pe 10/mint tak attack krogy than wo sirf defence krega aur tumhe usky defence ko obsrve krna hai 10/mint bad wo defence khtm krki hand to hand tumse fight krega

raja....i am ready

juan..bache atttitude mat dekha ya kamal hand combat mai veena ka sabsy best studant hai

raja...i well give you answr in fight

komal mann mai...bap re ya to pora he badal gya darpok se sidha angriz ke olad ban gya

locket...hayyy kitne waqt bad wo attitude dekhne ko mila hazaro sal bad be ek prcnt be uska attitude nhi badala

komal...esa na ho wo attitude usko bhare pr jai

locket....well see

sabny ek carcel bnaya
sid..raja 10 mint hen tumhary pass show krke dekhao tum kamal se ziyada powr full ho show me

veena...imposdibl hai wesy kyu ke kamal defence krte hue be kafi heavy attack krta hai kafi bar mai be chounk gye usky speed se

juan...11we mint mai fight clos hai

raja aur kamal face to face khre the

kamal...dost fikar mat kro mai ziyada heavy punch nhi kruga ya bus test hai khul kr khud ko show kru

raja...i want to see you
mujhe dekhna hai tum kya kya sikh chuky ho

kamal...mazak acha tha

raja....i well be challengd you 10/mint mai tum mujhe ek be bar punch nhi kar paoge mai bina defence ke bus tumse bachoga

kamal...gurror bohat hai tum mai

raja....khud pe bhrosa hai mujhe kya tumhe bhrosa nhi khud pe

kamal...well mere usol ya krne ke ijazat nhi dete mujhe

raja...ok to mere hits ko defence krki dekhao ab

kamal man mai...intresting confidant high level ka hai iska dekhta hun dum kitna hai is mai kya pta kuch new sikhne ko mil jai

kamal ne defence posstion le but defence kiya nhi ese he khra rha aur ungli se raja ko hit krne ka ishara kiya

raja...i love it

ya bol raja bhaga usky taraf
kamal ko lga raja jhamp mar kar kick krega lakin ya kya raja bhagta hua aaya aur jab tak kamal samaj pata raja ne sleep mar kar kamal ke pet mai ek dumdar punch jhar diya

ya unexcebl tha waha bethe sabky lye coz ya to sirf ek exprt fightr he kar sakta hai jo apna hit ka spot kuch dekhata hai lakin uska hit kahi aur hota hai

raja wahi nhi ruka kamal ke pet pe punch krne ke bad he usky dono tango ko apny tango mai phasa kar ek dum se jhatka mar kr gira diya
dhmmmmmmm ke tagre awaz ke sath kamal niche gira

raja uth kr khra hua aur kamal ke taraf apna hath barha diya
kamal ek to phle sadmy mai tha ke ek fresher ne usko just ek mint mai dhol chata de lakin phr usny raja ka hath pkra aur raja ne usko uthaya

kamal...impressive yaar bina traning ke itna fast and unblivbl attack wo be ek sath 2 bar
.raja kuch na bola...

raja...abhe 8 mint baki hen ab tum attack krogy ya nhi

kamal...ab tumny apny taqat dekhai ha to chalo ham be dekha dete hen tumhe

ya bol phr se dono fight posstion mai aai

raja ke ankhen kamal ke body ke har moment ko scane kar rhe thi like ek choti se moment be capture kr rha tha wo

kamal ne raja ke taraf jhamp ke aur jese he usko kick marne chahe raja waha se hat gya same time kamal ne raja ke pet pe punch krna chaha lakin raja back flip mar kr waha se door ho gya

ya dekh veena raja se impress ho gye the kyu ke raja jo speed aur mind abhe use kr rha tha wo uska tha he nhi lakin moments to usky he the na bus krwa locket raha tha

veena...i must say ya kafi fast hai usky eye moments dekho har choti se choti moment ko note kr rha hai wo

sid...hmmm but kamal abhe apny real powr kaha show kr rha hai he was played

udhr kamal lgatar attacks kar raha tha but ek be baar wo raja ko touch be nhi kar paya tha

raja...thak gye ho to 5 mint rest le lo i must see you are tired
Ab mr cool ka mind waqai mai angry hony lga tha aaj tak esa nhi hua tha ke koi usky samny es tarha tik pai jabky wo usko hit kar sakta ho lakin kamal pori kosish ki bad be usko chu na pai

juan...kamal only 2 mint you have

ya sun kamal...i think its over

ya bol kamal khra hua aur usny apny ankhen band ke

veena...kamal apna last war kar raha hai imposibl 6mint mai kamal apny har attack ko try kiya wo fail hua

udhr kamal ne apny ankhen band kar apny dono hath jore aur 30second bad apny ankhen kholi raja ke nazar is waqt kamal ke ankho aur lips pr the jese he usny ankhen kholi to raja ne dekha kamal wahi khra hai lakin ya ek prachin kal ki ek ese fight scale the jo hypnotic thi raja 2 second esa he lga lakin 3rd second mai raja urta hua puche deewar se ja lga

raja ko is baar jis speed se kai punch lge the usky mou mai halka khoon aagya tha usny is khoon ko thoka

raja...note bad note bad mujhe lga tha dharti pe ya sab prachin kala khtm ho gye hogy lakin aaj be yahan ya kala ya mojod hai

kamal..kyu bhai maza aaya

raja usky taraf dekh kr...tumny apna akhri attack kr liya lakin mainy to abhe fight start be nhi ke

kamal...nice joke 30 second baki hen himat hai to hit krki dekha

ya sun raja itni time mai phli baar muskuraya

usny apny ankhen bus bnd ke aur khol di aur hawa ke jhoky ke tarha kamal ke pass pocha usky samjny se phle ek punch usky jabde mai thok diya wahin apna ghutna usky pet pe jhara jesw he wo niche jhuka wohi ghutna usky mou pe jhar diya kamal flip hote hue niche ghasit.ta hua jaky diwar se takra gya

abhe jo hua wo kese ko be yakeen nhi aa rha tha tha juan sid aur veena 3no shock aur sadmy mai the ke ek new larka itna fast aur fast kese ho sakta hai

wahin kamal diwar ko tik lga kar wahin betha hua tha usky mou se khoon nikl rha tha aur uska jabra pori tarha dard kr rha tha aur wo yahi soch rha tha ya hua kya aur kese hua

sabky tantra tote komal ke awaz se

komal pass jakar raja ko galy lag gye
komal zor se...wow raja itni tagre aur fast fight phle baar dekhi real mai

raja aram se komal ke kan mai...ab hath chor be do mera hath kahi aur touch ho rha hai

komal raja ke baat nhi samjhe lakin jab usny raja ka bazo dekha to paya uska bazo komal ne apny chest se sata rakha hai
ya dekh komal ke gori gal lal tamatar jese ho gye aur usny raja ka bazo chor diya

tav tak sab sadmy se bahar aa chuky the sameer ne sahara dekr kamal ko uthaya

kamal pass aakr...man.na parega kafi dum hai tum mai

raja...khud pe bharosa ho to tum akily he har musibat se lar sakte ho har jung jit sakte ho bus kabhi piche mat hato tumhari himat he tumhara hathiyar hai tumhara bhrosa he tumhari taqat

sameer...nice yaar kafi mature lagte ho anyway can we frnd

raja...ofcourse why not and kamal sorry for these bro
kamal...no worrys mainy he kha tha tumhe kuch kar ke dekhao lakin socha nhi tha tum mujhe is tarha sarprise krogy
raja...bhrosa aur yakeen ho to sab kuch ho sakta hai

ya 3no chalkr 3no teachrs ke pass aate hen

raja ko apny pass aata dekh 3no apny discuss band krte hen

kamal..mam these gay is very tough opponent of these my intry life

veena...i musy seee to ya dekhni mai jitna masom lag rha hai uska ulta ya utna he dangrous andr se hai kyu ke mai tum dono ke fyt ke nich bus isky ankho ke moment he note kar saky baki iska face bina expression ke dekha mujhe

sid...well tumhe train krne mai maza aai ga
juan...Komal i think tum be hamen kuch sarprise zaror krogi

komal..no sir bus jo sikhe hue hun wohi show krogi

juan...wo why u wait
veena..siya u ready
siya..yes mam
ab siya aur komal aamny samny the

siya...tumhe sharam nhi aai us raja ke bazo ki sath apny chest ragrte hue

komal ya sun...ya mera matter hai teri kyu jal rhe hai

siya...ya sab mard bus aurat ki jism ke chahat rakhte hen hawasi kahi ke

komal...oye tu kisko hawasi boli

siya..sab mard jo be is duniya mai hen sath us raja ko be

ya sun komal ka dimag thnka
komal...kutiya teri himat kese hue meri raja ko hawasi bolne ke ya bol komal ne waha khre hue he hawa mai chalang mare lakim locket ke powrs ke madad se wo hawa mai he rehte hue tezi se siya ke pass aai aur ek kick usky chest pe de mare wo wahi nhi ruky hawa mai flip marte hue komal ne siya ke kandho ko pkr kr usky back pe char gye aur usky lakin ulte usny apny tange siya ke galy mai phasa kar apny hath zameen pe rakhe aur siya ko hawa mai uthate hue zor se zameen pe de mara dhmmmmmmmmmm siya ek dum canfusd ho gye the jabky wo be ek achi khasi fightr thi sath martial arts mai wo be kamal ko takar deti thi dono same to same level pe fight krte

siya niche gire to usko ahsas hua uska lift hand gya kam se kyu ke ek to komal gusse mai dosra locket powrs ke wajasy siya ke band baj gye the siya jese tese khud ko sambhalti hue uthe aur khre ho gye

komal gusse mai ....aaj khe diya dubara kabhi bhool kr be tumny raja ke khilaf ek alfaz be kaha to yaad rakhna zinda nhi chorogi tujhe

siya...mai sabit krki rhogi ke ya be sabky tarha jism ka bhooka hai

komal...agr waqai mai tujhme dum hai to sabit krki dekha de umar bhar teri kutiya banky rhogi lakin agr tu na kar pai to umar bhar tu meri kutiya banky rhegy

siya...challenge accpt

tab tak roma siya ke pass aai
roma...mam siya ka hand isolet ho gya she cant fyt more

veena...ek din mai apny 2 best studants ko 2new freshrs se mar khate hue dekha aaj pori life mai phle he din inho ne itna bara jhatka diya hai aagy pta nhi kya kya dekhna hoga

yahi khayal sid aur juan ke be dimag mai chal rhe the



update hazir hai doston
next update se shuru hogy traning and new adventures
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well...ek action scenes ka mahol banane mein aap mahir hai... jishe padhte waqt sceans cha jaye dilo dimag pe.... hamesha ki tarah writer sahab ne bahot hi ummda aur ek details ke sath fighting aur action scenes create ki hai update mein , Jo sach mein adbhut aur prashansaniya hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai..

shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan....har shabd ek alag kahani bayaan kar raha tha.. update padhte waqt aisa lage ki jaise likha gaya har shabd jeevit ho utha aur mujhe ye update mein ghatit drishya ko dikha rahe hai.... .

Kayi mamlo mein ye update sarvashresth hai....mujhe koi wajah najar nahin aayi ki main is update se koi kami nikalu.... ek reader ke liye sab se badi khushi ki baat yahin hoti hai ki aise update padhne ko mile .. bahut bahut dhanyavaad aapko jo itna achha sundar update ham sab pathakon ke madhya rakhe... main is update ko 5 mein se 5 ank deti hoon..
.. The narration and the dialogues were perfect fit for the atmosphere of the update.
Btw brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
Naina g phle to apka tahi dil se suwagat hamary is choti se theard pe
Jin shabdo se apny update ke tarif ke waqai lajwab hai

Aap sab readrs he hamen likhne ke taqat dete ho apky revos he hamara hosla barhate hen apny sab readrs ka mai dil se saman karta hun aur hamisha yahi kosish kruga ke apna best de saku har update mai
 
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