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Congratulations for new thread
Very nice start..all the best
Nice startHello dosto,
Main A.B.KING,
Meri ye pehli kahani hai aur main aap sab ka pura saath cahta hoon is story ko aage badane mein. Ye kahani incest bhi hogi adultery bhi hogi. Aur ek dum se uper chad kar chodna shuru nahi hoga so thoda sa sabr karna hoga aap ko.
Ye ek ladke ki kahani hai jisne najane kitno ki zindagi savari hai aur bahut saare bure logo ki zindagi ko khatam kiya hai.
Soo friend's update jaldi hi milega aap sub ko.
King
Nice update broUpdate 1:-
" Rahul ..Rahul utt Rahul , Abe ghade utt chutiye utna are oo hero kya huva aabe utt sale aaise kaise gir gaya utt jaldi utt"
ye tha Rajat mera ek louta dost jo mujhey uthane ki koshish kar raha tha. Mere underground fight match ke baad aisi halat hoagai ki main chalte chalte hi behosh hogaya tha sala abhi tak jo jo huva sub kuch film ki tarah agey aara tha.
sala bachpan se itne kand kiye hai hum dono ne wo sab kuch yaad araha tha. Aise hi yaad karte karte main behoshi mein bhi muskura raha tha.
"Bhosdike aise has kyu raha hai. Marr to nahi gaya aabe sale tu beshak Marja magar usse pehle meri wali ko sach batake mariyo. Aabe Rahul sale utt"
sale ko abhi bhi iski Bandi ki padi hai. Jo use mere chote se majak karne se chod kar chali gayi. Hat sala aise bhi koi hota hai .pyar karo to aaise karo jaise jaise sorry magar merko bhi nahi pata ke pyar kaise karte hai lekin maine filmo me dekha tha bahut accha lagta tha merko wo sub. Ye sub babu shoka nibba nibbi wala nahi ek dum "mohabbat" "siddat" "ishq" aur "junoon" aise bhari bhari shabd jo gunje dil me aaisa pyar chahiye tha mujhe lekin mila nahi abhi tak merko.
are sala main bhi na ye kya suna raha hoon main aap logo ko khali pili bore kar raha hoon main hai na. Chalo ye ghada jabtak merko hospital nahi leke jaata tabtak mere aur iske baare mein short mein batata hoon.
Soo bhai log mera naam hai RAHUL "CUTE RAHUL". Ye cute kyu boleto wo kya hai na bachpan me mere class me do teen Rahul the so meri jo class teacher hai na unhone merko bulaya tha are tum dono nahi wo cute Rahul . Bus tab se sub mujhey aise hi bulate hai.
haan to mere dost ki baat to ye mujhse kuch 2 saal bada hai lekin sale ka dimag thoda hattke hai to ye 2 bar fail hogaya aur ab mere saath mere class me hai.
main abhi 11th ki exam diye hai aur chuttiya enjoy kar raha tha to iske uskane pe main ne fight ladi aur pata hai kya bhai jeet bhi gaya wo to sala us taraf wale ki girlfriend ne aake mere pet me kick mari aur main poll se jaa laga aur sar pe maar lagne se behosh hogaya tha.
aur bhai sahab kya thi wo..... Matlab kick ki baat kar raha hoon main aur sala uski Bandi ki bhi magar kick bhi aachi khasi thi aur mera dhyan nahi tha nahi to tumhara bhai itna bhi kamzor nahi ki ladki ke kick lagte hi behosh hojaye.
sala main bhi kya kya bake jaara hoon. Chalo story pe aate hai soo main aur ye chutiya dono hospital agaye. Ha bhai wahi is chutiye ne hi mujhey bharti karvai hai hospital me.
abhi abhi doctor chek kar ke dava vagera kar ke gaya magar mujhey koi fark nahi pada main to jaise tha vaise hi murde ki tarah pada raha. Khair kab tak aise hi pada rehta dava naam ki bhi to koi cheez hai jiska asar bhi to hota hai aur wo asar merpe bhi huva aur mujhey bhi hosh agaya. Aur maine dekha ke main ek bed pe leta huva hoon aur mere baju me sofe par ye bhosdika phone pe apni mashuka ke saath laga huva hai use mana raha hoga chutiya.
main:- "Abe oo hogaya tera". Meri ye awaz sunte hi mahaan Rajat maharaaj ne aapni bijli ki tezi ko dikhate huve aise phone kata ke sala maine uski girlfriend ki.... Jane do sale ne jhat se phone kata aur aagaya mere pass .
rajat :- "saale ek kick se kaise behosh hogaya tu. saale kuch to sharm hai ki nahi pura shahar terko cute Rahul " hot Rahul " keh ke bula hai aur tu saale ek kick me hi chiii " ye aise bhok raha tha magar mujhey sala ek baat yaad agayi ki maine to wo baat bataya hi nahi.
hot Rahul . Actually huva aisa ki main aur mere kuch dost aur ek gang hai unse jhagda kar rahe they to ek bhosdi wale ne meri shirt phad di thi tab apun ko saaaaab ne matlab sare school ne half nanga dekha. Yes sala itni sharam ki pucho mat magar kar bhi kya sakte the aaise hi unki mayya chod ke apan nikal hi rahe they ki ek hot si ladki ne kaha ki " are ab ye cute kaha hai ab to ye hot Rahul hogaya " bus dosto apni chati do inch aur choudi higayi . Bus tabse hi apun ko girls hot Rahul kehke bulate hai . Aur is ghade ki baat ka javab deta bhi koun. Isiliye maine usko hi ulta sawal puchna sahi samja.
main :- Abe wo sub chod aur ye bata ki pure 5 saal ke tere mere kamayi ke paise hai saale pure 3 lakh rupee they. To uske ketne bane woo bol.
to hamare mahaan Rajat ji ne mera jawaab deye bina hi ek bada sa bag lake mere baju me rakh diya. Aur main kuch samajta usse pehle hi usne chain khinch di aur is pal sirf aur sirf isi pal merko aaise laga ki bhai aise hospital to mahine mein 10 baar ajaavu agar aisa nazara milega to.
bhai log pura bag bhar bhar kar paise they aise lag raha hai jaisa sala thus thus kar bhara hoo. Maine sawaliya nazroo se rajat ki taraf dekha to us chutiye ko bhi mere aise dekhne ka matlab samaj agaya aur sale ne apna moo khol ke jo baat boli use sun ke main sala phir behosh hote hote bacha sala baat hi aisi thi.
rajat :- saale 1.5 crore hai. Apne bet ke 50 guna zyada mila hai be .
main :- kya baat kar raha hai saale aise to apun ko bhi bangla gaadi sab milega. Hai ki nai
rajat :- haan loude tujhey dega kon 1 crore me bangla gaadi.
main :- saale abhi to tune bola ki 1.5 crore hai.
rajat :- saale mera hissa koun dega.
dekha dekha paapi insaan nich insaan ki soch paise mile nahi ki batvaara shuru. Isiliye main bol raha hoon isiliye hi hum jaise log aage nahi badte. In jaise dosto ke rehte dushmano ki zaroorat hi kya hai. Saale ghatiya insaan.
idhar main man hi man galiya deraha tha ki usne ek bade se shopping bags me apne paise daale aur merko bada bag thama diya.
rajat :- ye le ye bada bag me 1 crore ye tera aur shopping bag me 50 lakh mere ok.
ok saala kahe ka ok magar kya kare hamari baat to pehle se hi hogayi thi is sub ke baare mein. Iski gf sali merko pasand nahi karti thi aur uska koi bhi nahi tha to dono sath mein rehna chahte they aur maine bhi isiliye hi underground fight kiya tha ki ye dono apni life mein khush rahe aur apun apni me.
Main :- sahi hai saale tune jaisa bola waisa hi huva aur usse dus guna zyada huva to tu teri gf ko lekar koi flat le aur uske saath reh. Main bhi koi accha sa flat lunga aur acchi si bike leke apni mouj me zindagi bitadunga .
so idhar meri baat puri huvi aur udhar se is nalayak ki gf aur doctor dono agayi aur mujhey check-up kar ke discharge kardiya aur hum dono agaye apne hostel.
hostel aakar rajat apni tayyari kar raha tha aur main aapni sala itna kuch pehli hi soch rakha tha magar abhi bhi pasine chot rahe they ki main jo kar raha hoon wo sahi hai ya ghalat.
mujhey aise hi zindagi bitadeni hai ya ek bada aadmi banna hai.
nujhey bada aadmi banna hai aur main zaroor banunga aur aise banunga ki madarchod Jo dekhe ga wo chakra jayega.
yehi sab soch ke main sogaya aur kal subha kya kya karna hai ye sochte sochte.........
Excellent updateUPDATE 2 :-
" may I come in sir ? " Ye main tha subha subha hamare hostel me hone wale activities karne ke baad main hamare sir ke office ke door ke paas taherkar maine permission mangi.
"Come in" andar se ek bhari bharkam awaaz ayi sir ki aur main ander dakhil hogaya.
mohan mishra :- age 45 aur yaha ke hostel aur school ke head aur bahut acche aadmi. Har kisi ki madad karte hai sab se alag hai acchi body hai aur dikne mein bhi thik thak hi hai.
andar pahunch kar main ne sir ke table ke pass khada raha aur sir ko dekhne laga wo kuch file pad rahe they ya koi bacche ki information hogi shayad. Magar main bas chup chap khada dekhta raha unhe. Thode der baad unhon ne sir utha kar mujhey dekha aur samne bithne ka ishara kiya main bhi samne chair per bhait gaya. Thodi der tak phir unhoone usi file me dekha aur file side me rakh kar mujhey dekhne lage.
sir :- haa to Rahul kaise aana huva mere office me. Idhar to tum kabhi nahi aate they fir aaj kaise.
main :- " sir main hostel chod raha hoon." Mere aise kehte hi unhoone khuch der mujhey dekha aur uth kar ek taraf chale gaye aur thode der baad ek file leke agaye.
sir:- ye hai tumhari file aur jo main abhi pad raha tha na ye wali hai rajat ki. Wo bhi abhi aya tha thode der pehle usne bhi kaha hai ki ab wo yaha nahi rehna chahta. Ek dum se tum dono ko kya hogaya jo dono ek saath nikal rahe ho yaha se.
sir ki baat sun kar main sochne laga ki ab inhe kya batakar nikal lu yaha se. Kuch to bolna hi tha.
main :- sir wo kya hai na ki main aur rajat ko noukri mili hai. Isiliye hum yaha se jaana chahte hai.
sir :- accha thik hai tum jaana chahte ho to tumhari ek cheez hai mere paas wo lekar chale jaana ok.
ye kehkar sir phir se andar gaye aur ek box nikal kar lekar agaye aur mere haath me dediya . Main kuch kuch samaj bhi raha tha but na samaj ki tarah ek baar sir ke taraf dekha.
sir :- ye bachpan mein tumhe koi dekar gaya tha aur tum ne ye mujhey diya tha ki main sambhal kar rakhu. Kuch yaad aya ?
sir ki bath sun kar mujhey bhi kuch yaad aya aur aise hi sochte sochte aankhon se aansoo nikal gaye aur bus ek baar sir ko dekha.
main :- (ansoo pochte huve ) "priya" ye priya ne diya tha sir mujhey jab wo ye jagah chod kar jaarahi thi. Aur fir kabhi bhi wo nahi aayi na kabhi kuch pata chala uska. Aap ko kuch pata hai kya sir uske baare mein.
aur ye sub bolte bolte gala bhi thoda bhari hogaya tha mera. Meri halath dekh kar wo mere paas aaye aur mere kandhe par haath rakh kar mujhe housla de rahe they.
sir :- wo yaha se 70 km door bade shahar me hai rahul bas itna hi pata chala tha mujhey. Ghar ka adress pe jab gaya to waha ke logo ne kaha tha ki. Priya aur unke mata pita ab wo jaga chod kar kisi bade ilake mein rah rahe hai aur kaafi ameer bhi hai wo log.
sir ki ye baath sunkar mujhey bahut kushi huvi ki priya ek acchi zindagi jee rahi hai. Aur maine bhi socha ki main bhi wahi jaunga. Main abhi soch hi raha tha ki unhone mere kandhe ko pakad kar hilaya.
sir :- Rahul tum dono yaha se jaakar kya karo ge. Rajat kato mujhey pata hai usne kuch socha hoga apne liye magar Mujhey pata hai ki tum kisi ke nichey noukri nahi karoge. To batao kya karne wale ho.
main :- kuch accha aur bada karne wala hoon sir main aur aap pareshan nahi hona main kabhi bhi ghair kanooni kaam nahi karunga. Kabhi bhi nahi.
sir meri baat sunkar muskuradiye aur papers pe signature kar ke mujhey pakda diya .
sir :- ye main rules ke khilaf kar raha hoon magar tum par mujhey mujh se bhi jyada bharosa hai isiliye tum jaa sakte ho. Magar apne 11th ka result lene aajana ok.
main :- ok sir aur thank you very much sir.
Aur main yaha se nikal gaya.
Ye ek sanstha ka anaath asharam aur hostel hai jo anaath baccho ke liye aur dusre gaavn se jo bacche jinke gaavn me school nahi hai wo yaha rehkar padai karte hai.main bhi yahi 11th lak pada hoon aur is tarah chod kar jaana mujhey accha nahi lag raha rha.
17 saal pehle ek nurse ne mujhey yaha ke ek kaam karne wale mahila ko diya tha kyu ki mera koi nahi tha aur meri maa mujhey janam dete hi mar gayi thi . Meri maa ka bhi koi nahi tha wo bhi akele hi hospital ayi thi mujhey janam dete din. Aur wo bhi shayad aanath hi thi aisa us nurse ne hi yaha kaam karne wali aurat ko kaha tha.
wo hospital aur ye anathalay aur hostel sab kuch ek hi sanstha ka hai isiliye zyada takleef nahi huvi mujhey yaha palne me. Aur main ab insab aur ye sabkuch chod ke jaa ra tha jaha mujhey shaya thoda bahut dukh jhelna pade magar apne pass paisa bhi hai na soo tention nahi hai.
main mere bag pack kiya aur sab se pahle rajat ko alwida kaha aur usne bhi apna number dediya bola ki touch me rahe. Saala ek din nahi huva isne mobile bhi khareed liya sahi hai.
maine bhi noto ki ek gaddi nikali aur chal pada markit ki taraf.
market pahunch kar maine accha sa ek mobile liya pehle apne waste aur 3-4 jodi naye kapde thode mahenge wale liye. Shoes liye aur wahi pe mere purane chappal bag me daal kar shoes aur naye kapde pahen liye aur chal pada bus adde ki taraf.
bus adde par pahunch kar main pehle kuch khaya aur ye sab karte karte 1 baj gaya aur bade shaher jane wali bus 1:30 ko thi so main intezar karne laga bus ke aane ka.
PRIYA ye naam abhi bhi mere dimag me ghom raha tha jub sir ne wo box mere samne rakha to mujey pata nahi kyu rona agaya tha. Aise hi kuch bate sochte sochte bus bhi agayi aur main bhi window seat per baith gaya.
ab kuch karna to tha nahi so mobile chalu kar ke rajat ka aur sir ka number save karliye. Abhi maine sim nahi liya tha socha jaakar wahi lelunga.
sahar jaaker kya karna hai kaise karna hai yahi sab sochte pata hi nahi chala ki bus kab ruki aur kab baki ke passenger utre. Conductor ne mujhey awaz dekar bola tab jaakar main hosh me aya.
"Sala 2 ghante itni jaldi hogaye " maine time dekhte huve bola aur bus se utar gaya.
Mere pant me rakhi huvi 500 ki gaddi me se kuch 5000 rupee nikal kar uper rakh liye aur chal pada kuch khane ke liye.
bus stand se thoda dur chalne par ek 3 star hoteland restaurant tha main bhi wahi per chalpada aur jakar pehli khana khaya aur bill pay kar ke hotel side agaya counter pe ek ladka tha use room ka puch aur ek room liya 2 din ke liye aur aram karne key leke room me agaya.
aaj pata nahi kyu andar se bahut gabra raha tha main kal tak jo kisi se nahi darta tha aaj is Rahul ko bhi der lag raha tha. Pata nahi kya kya aur ketne kaam kar ke wo 3 lakh ekhatta kiya tha maine aur rajat ne. Aur un 3 lakh ko aise chupakar rakhte they jaise bahut khazaana ho. Waise tab khazane se kam bhi nahi they wo 3 lakh rupee. Magar ab mere pass 1 crore hai bahut zyada paise lekin pata nahi kyun darne ke bajaye main aise lekhar ghom raha tha jaise ye koi mamuli kapdon ka bag ho.
jab 3 lakh rupee hostel me chupate chupate itna dar lagta ki raat ko hum dono bhi kabhi chain se so nahi paate they. Lekin ab mujhme aisa change aur wo bhi sirf ek din me mere samaj ke bahar tha.
aur aise hi sochte sochte kab main sogaya pata hi nahi chala. Sham me 6 baje utha aur acche se fresh hokar naye kapde pehen kar bahar aya door lock kar chabhi jeb me daali aur chal pada hotel ke bahar.bahar nikal kar ek taxi roki aur nikal pada kuch shopping karne.
market pahunch kar ek sim liya aur phone me daal kar sir ko aur rajat ko ek messenge kardiya.aur aise hi shahar ki market ghum raha tha. Aur waha se nikal hi raha tha ki samne ek poster laga tha ek building ka aur area ka naam bhi "golden lion society". "Sala naam se hi raees lagti hai colony" aise dekh kar us poster ki ek pic li maine aur chalpada main road ki taraf.
time bhi bahut hogaya tha aur main ghom kar thak bhi gaya tha to maine hotel jana hi sahi samja. Waha se ek taxi ki aur chalpada hotel ki taraf pata nahi kyun mujhey wohi colony ka naam baar baar yaad araha tha . Khair jaise taise pahucha main hotel khana khakar room me hi baith ke socha ki "subha jaunga main udhar " aur sogaya.sala abhi bhi thoda bahut pain hai magar kal tak sab sahi ho jayega.
kal ki nayi subha aur kya naya badlav ayega dekhna hai.......
Excellent update
Congratulations for new story
Nice start
Nice update bro
Excellent update