Studxyz
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Kahani mast hai lekin details kuch zyadaa hi hain jis se pace slow ho rhi hai
kitna badhiya sabab hai khulne ka!mai kya kahta.. mujhe ye sari baaten mera lund sikha raha tha.
Badhiya tarqeeb hai beginning ke liye....mai dono ko dekh bed par chadha aur bed ke beech ja leta
tabhi to kahaani mast lag rahi hai bhai.... otherwise usual si hi lagtidetails kuch zyadaa hi hain
tabhi to kahaani mast lag rahi hai bhai.... otherwise usual si hi lagti
Ho sakta hai... but abhi tak saare incidents stepwise change ho rahe hain na ki ek hi incident ko lengthy stretch kiya ja raha haiKuch details tv drama jesi hain
kahani ko slow dikhana zaruri ha.. kahani me full family drama dikhana is liye zaruri ha. har family ek si nahi hoti.. har family me kahani ek si nahi hoti. har ghar ki phuddiyan asani se nahi mila karti.. itna sab dikhane ka ek hi matlab ha bhai.. feroz ko kadi mahnat karni padegi. bohut dimag istemal karna padega..Kahani mast hai lekin details kuch zyadaa hi hain jis se pace slow ho rhi hai
shukriya bhai jiNice story....
ye to achhi baat ho gaiLollywood ki saari favourite actresses hain isme.