Adultery Meri biwi RUKHSAAR aur mere KHWAAB (COMPLETE)

[Baba27030]

Ek baat clear hai ki hum insaan apne exp ko hi sahi maante hai...aur manna bhi chahiye....aakhir mirchi khane wala hi uski jalan jaan sakta hai....to apne-apne exp ke hisaab se point of view rakhte hai...ok

Aur ye real hai....saayad isliye ye end mila aapko...warna aap meri other story dekh le....aur running me bhi dekhna...ki end bilkul clear hoga...jo deserv karta hai.....to is par bahas ka koi matlab nhi...so its a end of argument frm my side too...

C u on other story....ok

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Bhai mana ye real hai but aap to story likh rahe the end badlna to aapke haath me tha sala hazmola khane ke baad bhi ending hazam nahi ho rahi hai, kam se kam tino me se kisi ko maar bhi dete to bhi kuch samjh aata, chalo koi nahi hota hai main baat aapko bhi malum hai aap jabardast writer ho isliye readers aapse kuch jyada hi expectations rakhte hai isliye yanha per itne question ho rahe hai. Kul milakar story acchi hai aap tention na lo jo kami reh gyai wo next story me door ho jayegi.

 

[Arvind274]

Bhai mana ye real hai but aap to story likh rahe the end badlna to aapke haath me tha sala hazmola khane ke baad bhi ending hazam nahi ho rahi hai, kam se kam tino me se kisi ko maar bhi dete to bhi kuch samjh aata, chalo koi nahi hota hai main baat aapko bhi malum hai aap jabardast writer ho isliye readers aapse kuch jyada hi expectations rakhte hai isliye yanha per itne question ho rahe hai. Kul milakar story acchi hai aap tention na lo jo kami reh gyai wo next story me door ho jayegi.

Raight bro yha shaan ko pakka mar Jana tha .film dewana ke rishi kapoor ki tarah .tabhi sayad is story ka sahishot end kahlata

 

[Shikari_golu]

Bhai mana ye real hai but aap to story likh rahe the end badlna to aapke haath me tha sala hazmola khane ke baad bhi ending hazam nahi ho rahi hai, kam se kam tino me se kisi ko maar bhi dete to bhi kuch samjh aata, chalo koi nahi hota hai main baat aapko bhi malum hai aap jabardast writer ho isliye readers aapse kuch jyada hi expectations rakhte hai isliye yanha per itne question ho rahe hai. Kul milakar story acchi hai aap tention na lo jo kami reh gyai wo next story me door ho jayegi.

Bilkul dost....main end badal sakta tha aur maine ek end socha bhi tha...jaha golu hi main villiin ban jata....but shaan aur rukhsaar uske liye nhi maane....to maine ise yu hi chhod diya....jaisa aaj chal raha hai....

Well...mujhe lagta hai ki is yopic par itne arguments kafi hai....kyoki end to badalbe nhi wala...

To jo bhi kami rahi hai....use yahi chhodte hai....aur other story par aate hai....

I hope waha bhi kafi arguments ho sakte hai....so...c u thr....ok

Aur rahi haazme ki baat....so y dont u try 3 peg whisky of 1 qutr wid half tandoori chiken....

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[Shikari_golu]

Raight bro yha shaan ko pakka mar Jana tha .film dewana ke rishi kapoor ki tarah .tabhi sayad is story ka sahishot end kahlata

Ab baksh do bechare ko....

Ab shoaib aur kamil ki fikr karo...unka kya hoga re....hahaha....

C u thr ....ok


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[Shikari_golu]

Hello frnds.....

U all know dat this story is over...
But our fun not over yet......

So frnds....
New updates comming tonight on my other running story...
""SOUHAR BECHARE""

So...c u all thr.....

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[rksun]

Bhai isme aapko reality kanha nazar aayi kya real me aisa hota hai, story aap sirf writer ke naam ke karan sirf ek baar padh sakte ho golu bhai ki dusri sabhi story ki tereh dobara nahi, mere hisab se sabse agar golu bhai ki sabhi story ko dekhoge to ye sabse niche hogi kyonki unohne pehle hi ek apna alag level set ker diya hai sab story uske barabar nahi pahuch sakti hai, haan writer accha hai story mast hoti hai but pata nhi kyon ending se pehle ke 2 update chodkar story so so lagi, apni apni pasand hai baki logo ko wahi 2 update pasand nahi aaye, sabhi ko khush to nahi kiya ja sakata hai, but end kuch alag hona chahiye tha. mera personal view hai,

Es se badhiya reality aur kya hogi ? har story ka ending movie jesa ho zaruri nahi... Ese affairs ki ek limit hoti he.... kuch month ya kuch years he ap chala sakte ho phr time ke sath changes hote he risto me... Golu ka aur rukshar ka rista lifetime to nahi chal sakta tha... bacche hote he chize change hoti he sab hota he life me.... Golu ko bhi to shadi karni thi uski apni family banani thi... no doubt Rukshar se rista tha par jese Rukshar apne husband ko chhodna nahi chahti thi us condition me time ke sath change ko accept karna he padta hai... Rukshar chahe jitna bhi Golu se pyar kare par baccha to wo shan ka he chahegi kyun ki legal wahi uska husband hai...

Man to mera bhi kia ki jitne logo ne problems nikale he sab ko jawab du phr socha bahas me nahi padna sab ki apni choice he... Jisne bhi story ko start se leke end tak flow me padhi hogi unko sayad koi doubts nhi dikhenge... sabhi sawalo ke jawab mil he jayenge story me he... aur kuch kami reh bhi gai ho to ap aur main konsa likh rahe he... jo itna accha likh raha he us se kuch galtiya hui bhi he to accpet karni chahiye.... wo kehte hena " Jo kam karta he usi se galti hoti hai", sirf kahani padh kar expet ke jese review dena bahot asan he khud kabhi likho tab andaza aayega (Baba ye me apko nahi keh raha par sabke liye hai.)

Stay Safe friends.

 

[rksun]

Golubhai... Apne kaha ye story real based par he jaha rukshar badi asani se pat gai thi... to kya ap ek bar real story short me bata sakte ho? stating se leke end tak i mean jo abhi bhi chal raha he waha tak... bilkul short me...

 

[chutdriller]

Par Ab aage story seema par hi chalegi.

Ye ankit kaha se aa gaya beech me.....aur wo mera dost hai....to bol diya tha...jab man hoga aayga....


Ha rukhsaar aa jaygi...pakka...aur batauga jaroor....sawaal ready rakhna....ok..

Baki rahi neeche girne ki baat...to sach kahu dost.....maine aisi-aisi ladkiyon aur aourton ko neeche girte dekha hai...jinhe dekh kar aap soch bhi nhi sakte ki wo kuch galat kar bhi sakti hai....

ye kalyug hai dost....bahut kuch aisa ho raha hai jo hum soch bhi nhi sakte....right.....

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Rukhsaar ka intezaar rahega.... kafi lambi discussions aur questions honge agar aisa hua tho. Batana jarror.

 

[Shikari_golu]

majedar update ..to wo shan ka sapna tha jisme ruksar aur golu ghar me chudai kar rahe the aur shan sab chat chat ke saaf kar raha tha ..
ab shan ne doctor se salaah bhi le li hai aur uska power bhi thoda badh gaya hai par golu jitna nahi ..
ruksar ko apne padosiyo ke taane ki koii parwah nahi hai bas wo shan ke baare me sochti hai par wo ye bhul gayi hai ki rehna to isi samaaj me hai teeno ko ..

ab ruksar ne mana liya hai shan ko ki wo golu ke ghar jakar rahe jisse koi unpar ungali na uthaye aur golu ke bina jhijhak chud sake ruksar ..

ruksar ki ek baat pasand nahi aayi ki wo ye sochti hai ki padosiyo ke najro ki parwah nahi usko ..
shan galat hai ye baat sahi hai is kahani ki par ruksar jo sabka naam mitti me mila rahi hai ye baat sabke ghatiya hai aur ruksar ka character bhi ..

teeno ko apne rishte ko sabse chhipkar nibhana chahiye tha par golu aur ruksar ko koi chinta hi nahi ...

ek baar ijjat chali gayi samaaj ki najro me to dobara kitni bhi koshish karo wo laut ke nahi aa sakti ..

Baat to bilkul sahi hai dost...ki ijjat se bada kuch nhi....

Par jo hawas ki aag me pahle hi ijjat ko luta chuki ho...aur jise pata ho ki uska souhar use kuch nhi kahne wala....to wo aisa hi hoga na....

Isme agar shaan chahta...to oahle hi rukhsaar se ye baat kar leta ...to saayad baat itni na badti....golu aur rukhsaar thoda door hi milte ghar se...but jo nhi hua uska kya kahe.....to jane do...

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[Shikari_golu]

nice update ..ruksar patni bankar reh rahi hai golu ke ghar me wo bhi rajni naam rakhke ..
ab ye kya plan hai saalgirah ka jo golu aur ruksar ne banaya hai khas shan ke liye .

nice update ..saalgirah shan ki hai aur ruksar mana rahi hai golu ke saath ...
dono milke chutiya bana rahe hai shan ko aisa lagta hai ..
aaj ki din ya raat ruksar ko sirf shan ke saath hona chahiye tha kyunki wo kehti hai ki wo shan se bhi pyar karti hai par ho kuch aur hi raha hai ..

Pyaar karti thi....tabhi to shaan ke khwaab ko pura kiya....

Par aisa khwaab..jo use gair mard ke neeche le aaya...ye bhi to nhi bhooli wo...isliye usne saalgirah chuni thi....saayad....

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