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Adultery Meri biwi RUKHSAAR aur mere KHWAAB (COMPLETE)

Shikari_golu

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Bhai story badi shandaar hai maja aa gaya bas end mai toda acha nahi raha golu ke liya ruksara first rahani chaiya thi duniya ke aage uski biwi ki tarha

saayad ye story me ho sakta tha...but real me muskil hai...isliye real hi likha....jisse teeno khush hai....

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Golubhai apki jitni completed story he usme se one of the best story ye hai... kyun ki esme reality show ho rahi he... limited log the aur sochne par bilkul real life based lagti he.... Johra ke husband ka jo hal huva us part me kafi logo ko pasend nhi aaya tha aisa apne kaha to wo chiz ko apne end me bahot acche se cover kar lia... ye hoti he ek acche writer ki khasiyat... main kafi salo se story padh raha hun... story starting se leke end tak hold karna har kisi ke bas ki bat nahi hoti.... apne starting se leke end tak maza aur suspence bana ke rakha aur story ka jo ending he wo one of the best laga mujhe... you have amazing writing skill.

Golubhai... Thank You So Much For This Wonderful Story.

Bhai isme aapko reality kanha nazar aayi kya real me aisa hota hai, story aap sirf writer ke naam ke karan sirf ek baar padh sakte ho golu bhai ki dusri sabhi story ki tereh dobara nahi, mere hisab se sabse agar golu bhai ki sabhi story ko dekhoge to ye sabse niche hogi kyonki unohne pehle hi ek apna alag level set ker diya hai sab story uske barabar nahi pahuch sakti hai, haan writer accha hai story mast hoti hai but pata nhi kyon ending se pehle ke 2 update chodkar story so so lagi, apni apni pasand hai baki logo ko wahi 2 update pasand nahi aaye, sabhi ko khush to nahi kiya ja sakata hai, but end kuch alag hona chahiye tha. mera personal view hai,
 
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Dekho dost...ye to main pahle hi bata chuka tha ki ye story reality par based hai....but story purpose se aapke qus ka ans de raha hu....

1 - saalgirah ka din rukhsaar ne chuna....saayad wo khud chahti thi ki shaan ko ye feel ho ki uski biwi ab sirf uski nhi rahi......isme golu ka koi lena-dena nhi tha....

2- rukhsaar ki parwaah kyo....iske liye aapko ek fact batata hu....

waise to real me golu ko rukhsaar easily mil gai thi...but stiry me rukhsaar ek behad sareef aourat thi....jo gair mard ka sochti bhi nhi thi aur sirf apne souhar par yakeen karti thi....

but jab kisi aourat ko ye samjh aa jaaye ki khud uska hubby hi use gair mard ke neeche dalna chahta hai...to uska bharosa tootna jaayaj hai...

jab golu aaditya naam se rukhsaar se mila....us waqt rukhsaar ka apne souhar se yakeen toot chuka tha....wo apne aapko unsafe mahsoos kar rahi thi....aur isi baat ka fayda golu ne uthaya...

golu ne rukhsaar ko pyaar dikha kar saadi tak kar li....taki rukhsaar use dil se apna maan sake...

kyoki ye fact hai...ki kai aourten bistar par to aa jati hai...par dil se nhi....aur agar dil se aa gai...to fir khul kar maza deti hai.....


Ab ye fact bhi aapko hajam na ho....to kisi aourat se jaroor puchhna....ki sirf jishm se kisi ka ho kar jyada maza aata hai....ya dil se....aapka doubt clear ho jayga....

3- Golu germany kyo gaya....use pyaar hua...saadi hui....??

Ye sab sach to sirf golu hi janta hai....to uske baare me koi clearification nhi de sakta....kya pata usne sirf rukhsaar se doori banane ko ye sab kiya ho....ho sakta hai na....kyoki golu jaisa banda sirf ek aourat tak nhi atka rahta.....

Aur aap mujhe qus mat kijiye....maine apni biopic nhi likhi....bas ek intresting incident likha...

TO mere liye pyaar aur hawas ke kya maayne hai....is baare me koi baat nhi....

bit is incident me pyaar tha...par sirf hawas ko pura karne tK....

4 - johar air jamaal ko sab pata hai....use mention karna maine jaroori nhi samjha tha...but ab mistake sudhaar li hai....jo new readers ke liye theek hoga...

5 - Golu ki wife...ye bhi pakka nhi ki hai bhi ki nhi....to aage kuch kahna theek nhi banta...

Aur haa.....meri kahani hai iska matlab ye nhi ki main golu ko sahi bol du....

Golu sach me kameena hai....but sirf aourton ke maamle me....lekin kabhi jabran sex nhi karta....bas patane ki kosis karta hai aur pat gai to maza maarta hai...

Baki mujhe khyshi hai ki readers meri kamiya batate hai.....aur ye aapka haq hai...aur isi tarah se to main aage apni mistake sahi kar ke aur accha likh sakuga...

Ye fact hai ki readers hi writter ko banate hai...so i always respect my readers nd his view.....

I hope meri other stories par bhi aapke aise comment milege....c u thr...

Thanks frnd...
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On point 1, Ruksar ne chuna wo din ... mere hisab se yahan wo galat thi.. Shaan ne shuru mein bahle galat kia par baad mein ruksar ki khusi ke liye usne uska pura sath dia... jo bhi ruksar ne bola wo sab kia.. salgirah kisi bhi riste ka khas din hota hai aur shaan ke kehne ke baad bhi usne wo din chuna... wo koi aur din chun sakti thi.. Shaan chahata nahi tha shuru men par wahan jane kebad jo kuch bhi ho raha tah wo mana nahi kar pa raha tah aur shayad ruksar ki khushi ke liye.. to maiin yahan rukasr ko galat bolunga

On point 2, aapki baat puri tarah se sahi hai ki aurat jab kisi ko dil de deti hai to uske kliye sab kuch karti hai par ruksar ne jis tarike se kia mujhe wo sahi nahi laga

aapke baaki points se agrree kar leta hun as wo sab to imaginary hai.. baaki ap keh rahe hai ki ye real story se hai.. to accecpted hai... Shuru mein Shan galat tha aur baad mein ruksar mere hisab se.. baaki aapko to follow karte rahenge :)
 

Shikari_golu

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Bhai isme aapko reality kanha nazar aayi kya real me aisa hota hai, story aap sirf writer ke naam ke karan sirf ek baar padh sakte ho golu bhai ki dusri sabhi story ki tereh dobara nahi, mere hisab se sabse agar golu bhai ki sabhi story ko dekhoge to ye sabse niche hogi kyonki unohne pehle hi ek apna alag level set ker diya hai sab story uske barabar nahi pahuch sakti hai, haan writer accha hai story mast hoti hai but pata nhi kyon ending se pehle ke 2 update chodkar story so so lagi, apni apni pasand hai baki logo ko wahi 2 update pasand nahi aaye, sabhi ko khush to nahi kiya ja sakata hai, but end kuch alag hona chahiye tha. mera personal view hai,

Dost....incident to real hi tha....but haa...story purpose se thoda masala dalna jaroori tha....


Waise ek baat se main bhi agree karta hu...ki ye story meri baki story ki tarah nhi...kyoki un story me pure kaand ki wajah bhi hai...par isme sirf hawas.....jiske chalte shan aur rukhsaar ki jindagi me golu aaya...aur baki kya hua....ye padh hi liya hoga....

Is story me golu ka koi motive nhi tha sivaaye hawas ke....matlab use ek khuli daawat mili thi rukhsaar ki...aur usne kabool kar li....fir golu ne apni to rukhsaar ne apni fantasy ko rang diya...aur baad me shaan ne bhi apni fantasy puri ki bas...


But haa...kisi story ko like ya dislike karna apni-apni choice hai...nd i respect dat...

I hope aapko meri other story pasand aaygi.....so c u thr....

Thanks frnd...
Keep reading...
 

Shikari_golu

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On point 1, Ruksar ne chuna wo din ... mere hisab se yahan wo galat thi.. Shaan ne shuru mein bahle galat kia par baad mein ruksar ki khusi ke liye usne uska pura sath dia... jo bhi ruksar ne bola wo sab kia.. salgirah kisi bhi riste ka khas din hota hai aur shaan ke kehne ke baad bhi usne wo din chuna... wo koi aur din chun sakti thi.. Shaan chahata nahi tha shuru men par wahan jane kebad jo kuch bhi ho raha tah wo mana nahi kar pa raha tah aur shayad ruksar ki khushi ke liye.. to maiin yahan rukasr ko galat bolunga

On point 2, aapki baat puri tarah se sahi hai ki aurat jab kisi ko dil de deti hai to uske kliye sab kuch karti hai par ruksar ne jis tarike se kia mujhe wo sahi nahi laga

aapke baaki points se agrree kar leta hun as wo sab to imaginary hai.. baaki ap keh rahe hai ki ye real story se hai.. to accecpted hai... Shuru mein Shan galat tha aur baad mein ruksar mere hisab se.. baaki aapko to follow karte rahenge :)

Aapke kyo ka jawaab main rukhsaar se jaroor puchuga...ki usne wo din kyo chuna...pakka...

Aur rahi baat sahi-galat ki...to maine kab kaha ki koi sahi hai....sab apni jagah kahi na kahi galat hi hai...

Par ek baat batao dost....agar kisi rishte me yakeen kho jaaye...to kya eo rishta pahle jaisa ban sakta hai....kabhi bhi...??

Mere hisaab se shaan ne jo apni biwi ka yakeen khoya tha....use uski keemat chukani padi...aur aaj bhi chuka raha hai....


Aur rahi baad ki baat...to khoon karne ke baad kitni bhi galti maano....wo jaan bapis nhi aaygi...ye fact hai...

Saayad kabhi koi aapki najron me bhi gira hoga....ya koi rishta toota hoga....to batao...kya wo bapis usi tarah se najron me aa paya...jaosa pahle tha....???

Mere hisaab se galti hoti hai na...to kuch na kuch bhugatna hi hota hai.....

Well....ye real incident hai...to main rukhsaar ko xf par laauga...aur usi se boluga ki jawaab de....ok


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Ajstyle619

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Ok golu bhai ab end chod ke story pe ate hai.

1) Apne start me kaha tha ki yeh story shaan ke sapne par hai aur ek story hai fir ab kah rahe ki reality hai to story waise hi end ki ye to galat hai hume to fir ek story ke hisab se end chahiye kyunki aise reality bahut dekhe hai isase bhi badtar.
2) Apne character ke emotions ko baar baar badla hai. Shaan pahle cuckold banana dikhaya fir wo biwi ka sacha ashik. jaisa pyaar karne ke karan uski har khwahis ko puri ki. bhale uske liye rukshar ne use uksaya ho ya uske sapne ne. Agar shaan ka rukhsar ke liye pyaar apne dikhaya na hota to mere jaise log shaan ke liye aur story ke end liye bura feel nahi karte.
Rukhsar ko apne start me sanskari bataya wo thik tha jab tak usne golu ko apne aap ko soupa fir achanak se apne bataya ki wo pehle se hi golu ke sath so chuki thi aur age uski bhawnaye bani ek patni jaisi jo ki achanak se hua aur age bhi ek randi jaisi ban gayi wo golu ki is wajah se wo logo ko buri lagi. Ab aap dekhe to dusri story me sania ko apne same sansari dikhaya lekin wo ek dam se nahi badli pahle wo majbur thi isliye golu ko dur nahi kar payi uske pati ne use kabhi izzat nahi di na hi usko koi fark padta ki wo golu ke sath soti fir golu ne uski izzat bachayi jisase uske dil me golu ke liye pyar aur izzat badhi aur uske pati ka lund accident ki wajah se thik se khada na ho pana. Isliye sania ka character zyada pasand hai logo ko us story me. Yaha rukhsar age puri patni ban kar rahti hai yaha tak ki wo shaan ke samne bhi sirf golu ko tavajjo deti hai sirf golu ke liye sajti hai ek patni ki tarah lekin wo last me golu ki shadi ke liye man jati hai. Ab aap kahoge ki is sawal ka jawab apne pahle de diya ki rukshar sochti hai golu uska husafar nahi banega na hi use shaan ki tarh zindgi bhar sath rakhega kyunki golu yaha vaha muh marta firta hai to fir apne rukhsar aise dikhaya hai jaise wo usase saccha pyar karti hai kam se kam apke likhe hue shabd to yahi kahte hai isliye logo ko golu ka kisi aur se shadi karna rukhsar ki marzi se samajh nhi aya.
3) Yeh kaun se zamane ki story hai kyunki apne likha hai ki rukhsar shaan ko batati golu use kaise chodta hai to shan use waise chodta to use santushti milti kya usne kabhi porn nhi dekha kya kabhi sex story nahi padhi jo abtak ek hi position try kiya. to use cuckhold ka kaha se pata chala wo to porn ya fir stories se hi pata laga hoga ya usne khud invent kiya.
4) Ap ne kaha isme sab matlabi hai jo ki hai. Lekin apne isme pyar ko dikhaya lekin portrait fir galat kiya. jaise shaan agar sach me rukhsar se pyar karta to wo apne fatansy ko sach nahi hone deta. Yeh kaisa pyaar hai ki wo kehta hai ki wo rukhsar se pyaar karta hai to use golu ke baho me baar baar kaise dekh pata hai aap kahoge hawas ki wajah se to jab tine launch pe milte hai tab rukhsar ka pura dhyan golu par hota dono mil kar shaan ko chadhate hai aur har bar shan bardasht kar jata jo ki namumkin hai.
Rukhsar kehti ki wo shaan se pyar karti hai apne dikhaya bhi hai kuch scene me lekin fir wo golu ke age shaan ko bhul kaise jati hai wo sirf golu ke liye sajti hai. Yha tak ki baad me wo khule aam golu ke sath ghumti hai bina shaan ke izzat ki prwa kiye to yeh kaisa pyar. Thik golu ke liye bhi rukhsar ka pyaar dikhaya lekin kaise wo to janti hai ki wo kaisa hai to usase pyar kaise ho gaya wo to hawas thi.
Kyunki pyar ek samay par sirf ek se hota hai 2 se nhi yaha hum jante hai rukhsar sirf golu se pyar karti dikhaya gaya story me aur ek aurat dusri aurat ko apne premi ke baho me kaise dekh sakti kya uski bhi fantasy hai shaan jaisi lesbian wali.
5)Ek electronic shop wala kaha har samay 4 5 din ke liye meeting jata hai jaha tak main janta hun compny wale khud apne agent bhejte hai business deal ke liye. Shops par
6) golu supar man hai mana lekin rukhsar kaise puri raat aur dusre din dophar tak chudne ke baad bhi uthkar sare kam karti bhale hi break liya ho fir bhi ye mumkin nahi bhale yeh story ho lekin thodi to reality dikhao. aap sex scene ya duration ko bada kar sakte ho.
7)Yaha rukhsar pahle hi golu ke sath sex kar chuki hai baad me shaan use golu ko supta hai yeh baat bhi wo chupati hai to galti to pahle uski hui kyunki jad lagane ke bad fal ache aur bure ate hai lekin hum bure fal fenk dete hai khate nahi thik bache ki parvarish ke liye maa baap zimmedar hote hai lekin baache ke bigad ne me aur log zimmedar hote hai aur baccha saza bhi bhugatata hai yaha rukhsar ko zindagi bhar ka maja mila aur wo bewafa bhi nhi kehlayi. Uske bacche ko kisi tarah pata chal jayega to age jake incest story to banegi lagta hai. Iska 2 nd part bhi ban sakta hai lekin aap incest nhi likhte to umeed nhi.
Ant me yahi kahunga ki aisa lagta hai aap reality aur story ke beech shayad confused ho gaye the isliye ye sab feeling aur pyar ka golmaal hua hai. Ap character ko sahi se portrait kare aur use badle to ek dum se nahin koi khas wajah aur dhire dhire. souhar bechare iska acha example hai waha sab sahi portrait kiya hai apne aur sania ka badlav bhi ache se dikhaya hai.
Best of luck for future stories
 

Ajstyle619

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Aapke kyo ka jawaab main rukhsaar se jaroor puchuga...ki usne wo din kyo chuna...pakka...

Aur rahi baat sahi-galat ki...to maine kab kaha ki koi sahi hai....sab apni jagah kahi na kahi galat hi hai...

Par ek baat batao dost....agar kisi rishte me yakeen kho jaaye...to kya eo rishta pahle jaisa ban sakta hai....kabhi bhi...??

Mere hisaab se shaan ne jo apni biwi ka yakeen khoya tha....use uski keemat chukani padi...aur aaj bhi chuka raha hai....


Aur rahi baad ki baat...to khoon karne ke baad kitni bhi galti maano....wo jaan bapis nhi aaygi...ye fact hai...

Saayad kabhi koi aapki najron me bhi gira hoga....ya koi rishta toota hoga....to batao...kya wo bapis usi tarah se najron me aa paya...jaosa pahle tha....???

Mere hisaab se galti hoti hai na...to kuch na kuch bhugatna hi hota hai.....

Well....ye real incident hai...to main rukhsaar ko xf par laauga...aur usi se boluga ki jawaab de....ok


Thanks frnd...
Keep reading...
Bhai aap pahle Ankit ko le aao. Abhi rukhar ka koi matlab nahi ek jurm ke badle baar baar jurm kaun karta hai aur use itna bura laga dil toota to chod deti abhi ye real story hai to ek sharif aurat kabhi itna niche nahi gir sakti. Wo apne husband ko chod kar agar thoda sa bhi atmasamman hota to age badhti aur use itna hi dukh tha to wo shaan se payr ka natak kyun. Real me koi aurat aisa kuch bardasht nahi karti rukhar pahle se hi loose character lagti hai. Aap jab use yaha lao to hume advance me bata dena bahut kuch puchna hai kyunki story ke hisaab se wo zyada galat lagti hai.
 

Shikari_golu

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Ok golu bhai ab end chod ke story pe ate hai.

1) Apne start me kaha tha ki yeh story shaan ke sapne par hai aur ek story hai fir ab kah rahe ki reality hai to story waise hi end ki ye to galat hai hume to fir ek story ke hisab se end chahiye kyunki aise reality bahut dekhe hai isase bhi badtar.
2) Apne character ke emotions ko baar baar badla hai. Shaan pahle cuckold banana dikhaya fir wo biwi ka sacha ashik. jaisa pyaar karne ke karan uski har khwahis ko puri ki. bhale uske liye rukshar ne use uksaya ho ya uske sapne ne. Agar shaan ka rukhsar ke liye pyaar apne dikhaya na hota to mere jaise log shaan ke liye aur story ke end liye bura feel nahi karte.
Rukhsar ko apne start me sanskari bataya wo thik tha jab tak usne golu ko apne aap ko soupa fir achanak se apne bataya ki wo pehle se hi golu ke sath so chuki thi aur age uski bhawnaye bani ek patni jaisi jo ki achanak se hua aur age bhi ek randi jaisi ban gayi wo golu ki is wajah se wo logo ko buri lagi. Ab aap dekhe to dusri story me sania ko apne same sansari dikhaya lekin wo ek dam se nahi badli pahle wo majbur thi isliye golu ko dur nahi kar payi uske pati ne use kabhi izzat nahi di na hi usko koi fark padta ki wo golu ke sath soti fir golu ne uski izzat bachayi jisase uske dil me golu ke liye pyar aur izzat badhi aur uske pati ka lund accident ki wajah se thik se khada na ho pana. Isliye sania ka character zyada pasand hai logo ko us story me. Yaha rukhsar age puri patni ban kar rahti hai yaha tak ki wo shaan ke samne bhi sirf golu ko tavajjo deti hai sirf golu ke liye sajti hai ek patni ki tarah lekin wo last me golu ki shadi ke liye man jati hai. Ab aap kahoge ki is sawal ka jawab apne pahle de diya ki rukshar sochti hai golu uska husafar nahi banega na hi use shaan ki tarh zindgi bhar sath rakhega kyunki golu yaha vaha muh marta firta hai to fir apne rukhsar aise dikhaya hai jaise wo usase saccha pyar karti hai kam se kam apke likhe hue shabd to yahi kahte hai isliye logo ko golu ka kisi aur se shadi karna rukhsar ki marzi se samajh nhi aya.
3) Yeh kaun se zamane ki story hai kyunki apne likha hai ki rukhsar shaan ko batati golu use kaise chodta hai to shan use waise chodta to use santushti milti kya usne kabhi porn nhi dekha kya kabhi sex story nahi padhi jo abtak ek hi position try kiya. to use cuckhold ka kaha se pata chala wo to porn ya fir stories se hi pata laga hoga ya usne khud invent kiya.
4) Ap ne kaha isme sab matlabi hai jo ki hai. Lekin apne isme pyar ko dikhaya lekin portrait fir galat kiya. jaise shaan agar sach me rukhsar se pyar karta to wo apne fatansy ko sach nahi hone deta. Yeh kaisa pyaar hai ki wo kehta hai ki wo rukhsar se pyaar karta hai to use golu ke baho me baar baar kaise dekh pata hai aap kahoge hawas ki wajah se to jab tine launch pe milte hai tab rukhsar ka pura dhyan golu par hota dono mil kar shaan ko chadhate hai aur har bar shan bardasht kar jata jo ki namumkin hai.
Rukhsar kehti ki wo shaan se pyar karti hai apne dikhaya bhi hai kuch scene me lekin fir wo golu ke age shaan ko bhul kaise jati hai wo sirf golu ke liye sajti hai. Yha tak ki baad me wo khule aam golu ke sath ghumti hai bina shaan ke izzat ki prwa kiye to yeh kaisa pyar. Thik golu ke liye bhi rukhsar ka pyaar dikhaya lekin kaise wo to janti hai ki wo kaisa hai to usase pyar kaise ho gaya wo to hawas thi.
Kyunki pyar ek samay par sirf ek se hota hai 2 se nhi yaha hum jante hai rukhsar sirf golu se pyar karti dikhaya gaya story me aur ek aurat dusri aurat ko apne premi ke baho me kaise dekh sakti kya uski bhi fantasy hai shaan jaisi lesbian wali.
5)Ek electronic shop wala kaha har samay 4 5 din ke liye meeting jata hai jaha tak main janta hun compny wale khud apne agent bhejte hai business deal ke liye. Shops par
6) golu supar man hai mana lekin rukhsar kaise puri raat aur dusre din dophar tak chudne ke baad bhi uthkar sare kam karti bhale hi break liya ho fir bhi ye mumkin nahi bhale yeh story ho lekin thodi to reality dikhao. aap sex scene ya duration ko bada kar sakte ho.
7)Yaha rukhsar pahle hi golu ke sath sex kar chuki hai baad me shaan use golu ko supta hai yeh baat bhi wo chupati hai to galti to pahle uski hui kyunki jad lagane ke bad fal ache aur bure ate hai lekin hum bure fal fenk dete hai khate nahi thik bache ki parvarish ke liye maa baap zimmedar hote hai lekin baache ke bigad ne me aur log zimmedar hote hai aur baccha saza bhi bhugatata hai yaha rukhsar ko zindagi bhar ka maja mila aur wo bewafa bhi nhi kehlayi. Uske bacche ko kisi tarah pata chal jayega to age jake incest story to banegi lagta hai. Iska 2 nd part bhi ban sakta hai lekin aap incest nhi likhte to umeed nhi.
Ant me yahi kahunga ki aisa lagta hai aap reality aur story ke beech shayad confused ho gaye the isliye ye sab feeling aur pyar ka golmaal hua hai. Ap character ko sahi se portrait kare aur use badle to ek dum se nahin koi khas wajah aur dhire dhire. souhar bechare iska acha example hai waha sab sahi portrait kiya hai apne aur sania ka badlav bhi ache se dikhaya hai.
Best of luck for future stories

Wow...sach a long nd meeningfull comment i ever had....thanks yaar....

IIknow...thr r lots of things...dat doesnt seems well enough in dis story....but believe me....its true....rukhsaar love her hubby still....nd she is a whore of golu...

I dont know how rukhsaar manage both stuff...but she is living good with both men......

Mow ur point....looks good....nd may b ur right somewhere....

1- maine kaha tha ki ye full reality nhi....but ek real incident par based hai...jise ek story ki tarah likhuga....aur aisa isiliye kaha tha..taki log ye na samjhe ki jo bhi story me hua...wo sab real me bhi hua....but ye hua hai...shaan aur rukhsaar aaj bhi sath hai aur golu aaj bhi rukhsaar ko chod raha hai....


2- yaha main aapse agree karta hu ki emotions ka badalna mujhe thoda aur acche se discribe karna chahiye tha....kuch missing rah gaya hai....saayad isliye kai readers ko ye theek nhi lag raha....but fact yahi hai...ki shaan apne aap me isi tarah change hua hai....aur rukhsaar bhi...baki golu to bas dikhawa karta raha....taki use fayda ho...

baki sania ki baat usi story par karege....wo alag hai....jo aap last tak samjh jayge....ok...

3- isme zamaane ki baat kaha se aa gai dost....hum kai tarah ki story padhte hai ya vedio dekhte hai...par eo karne lage ye jaroori nhi....kuch hum karna nhi chaahte aur kuch karna hum soch bhi nhi sakte....aur kuch karne ko hume milta nhi...

jaise incest padh kar koi apni maa-behan nhi chodne kagta...na hi anal scene dekh jar apni biwi ki gaand marne lagta hai...wo biwi ki marji ho tab hi ho pata hai.....

wahi haal shaan ka tha...use sex me nayapan pasand tha....par dar bhi tha ki kahi biwi gussa na ho...aur kabhi apni parvarish ka bhi...jisme sex ka funda kuch aur hi hota hai....

Aur sabse badi baat....uske liye sex ek jaroorat thi...fun nhi...aur aise kai log ab bhi hai jo sex ko ek jaroorat ki tarah hi karte hai...maza nhi lete....chahe to apne aas-paas walo ka view le sakte ho...

like....mera ek frnd anal lover hai...anal padhna aur dekhna use sabse jyada pasand hai...par uski biwi ne aaj tak use anal nhi karne diya....to bolo..kya kare wo...jabran kare ya biwi ki khushi me khush rahe....

4- fir se wahi baat....ki characters ke kuch emotions ko perfact tareeke se nhi dikha paya.....i hope ab aage kisi story me aisi galti na ho....


Asal me kabhi- kabhi incident ko likhne ke chakkar me emotion rah jate hai...bas wahi hua saayad...

Par ek baat sahi thi...ki rukhsaar ko shaan se pyaar to tha...aur hamesha....bas wo jishmani maze ki wajah se golu ko pyaar kar baithi...aur is tarah ka pyaar 1 aourat 2 mardo se karti hai.....aaj bhi kai cases dekh sakte ho aap...ki aourat na souhar ko chhodne taiyaar hai aur na aashiq ko....

Rahi baat shaan ki....to usko rukhsaar ka sath milna hi sabkuch tha....aur fir uske khwaab pure hona bonus....

isliye shaan khush tha ki uski biwi golu ki baahon me hai..kyoki wo ye kafi time se chaah raha tha....

may b aage kabhi use bura lage...par abhi to wo khush hai apni is life se.....

5 - yaha aap sahi nhi....ek electonics wala agar kisi company ki leadership leta hai....to use meetings me jana hota hai....aur events hote hai to bhi jate hai log....ye fact hai....aap pata kar sakte ho....

6- ab aap chudaai ko bhi reality me le aaye....koi nhi...waise us raat se subah tak total kitni baar chudaai thi....?

waise 1 aourat 4-5 baar chune ke baad bhi kaam khatm kar leti hai..... :wink:

7- rukhsaar golu se milne se pahle hi shaan se khafa ho chuki thi....aur uske dil me gair mard ka chaska chad chuka tha....aur fir jab shaan golu ko apne ghar le gaya...tabse rukhsaar puri tarah chudaai ke rang me rang gai....balki us raat ke pahle usne rukne ka socha bhi tha....saayad aapne read nhi kiya....

Aur haa...aap ye kah sakte hai ki main confuse ho gaya....kyoki maine kuch to miss kiya hai...to main maan bhi jauga...

Vut sach ye hai ki sirf reality likhta to saayad kusi ko maza bhi nhi aata...to masal saayad kahi-kahi kam-jyada ho gaya bas ....to thoda adjust kar lo yaar....hahaha....

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Bhai aap pahle Ankit ko le aao. Abhi rukhar ka koi matlab nahi ek jurm ke badle baar baar jurm kaun karta hai aur use itna bura laga dil toota to chod deti abhi ye real story hai to ek sharif aurat kabhi itna niche nahi gir sakti. Wo apne husband ko chod kar agar thoda sa bhi atmasamman hota to age badhti aur use itna hi dukh tha to wo shaan se payr ka natak kyun. Real me koi aurat aisa kuch bardasht nahi karti rukhar pahle se hi loose character lagti hai. Aap jab use yaha lao to hume advance me bata dena bahut kuch puchna hai kyunki story ke hisaab se wo zyada galat lagti hai.

Ye ankit kaha se aa gaya beech me.....aur wo mera dost hai....to bol diya tha...jab man hoga aayga....


Ha rukhsaar aa jaygi...pakka...aur batauga jaroor....sawaal ready rakhna....ok..

Baki rahi neeche girne ki baat...to sach kahu dost.....maine aisi-aisi ladkiyon aur aourton ko neeche girte dekha hai...jinhe dekh kar aap soch bhi nhi sakte ki wo kuch galat kar bhi sakti hai....

ye kalyug hai dost....bahut kuch aisa ho raha hai jo hum soch bhi nhi sakte....right.....


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Aapke kyo ka jawaab main rukhsaar se jaroor puchuga...ki usne wo din kyo chuna...pakka...

Aur rahi baat sahi-galat ki...to maine kab kaha ki koi sahi hai....sab apni jagah kahi na kahi galat hi hai...

Par ek baat batao dost....agar kisi rishte me yakeen kho jaaye...to kya eo rishta pahle jaisa ban sakta hai....kabhi bhi...??

Mere hisaab se shaan ne jo apni biwi ka yakeen khoya tha....use uski keemat chukani padi...aur aaj bhi chuka raha hai....


Aur rahi baad ki baat...to khoon karne ke baad kitni bhi galti maano....wo jaan bapis nhi aaygi...ye fact hai...

Saayad kabhi koi aapki najron me bhi gira hoga....ya koi rishta toota hoga....to batao...kya wo bapis usi tarah se najron me aa paya...jaosa pahle tha....???

Mere hisaab se galti hoti hai na...to kuch na kuch bhugatna hi hota hai.....

Well....ye real incident hai...to main rukhsaar ko xf par laauga...aur usi se boluga ki jawaab de....ok


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Ruksar ne to jawab de hi dia tha ki usne kyun chuna .. main bas ye keh rah atha ki usne ye galat ki wo din chun kar .... aur haan aapki baat se bilkul shemat hun ki sahi galat apne hisab se hota hai.. aur main bas apne vichar diye.. i thinkn aap yahan par un writers mein se ho jo readers ko apne vichar khul kar likhne ki aazadi dete ho :)

Aur haan Yakeen to ruksaar ne bhi khoya tha apne pati se chupa kar.. Shan galat tha par usne apni baaton ka hint ruksar ko de rakha tha.. ruksar shuru se chupayi aur bad mein bhi kai sare raaj usne rakhe rahe aur salgirah wale din khole.. to jayda galat to wo hui .. par usko to koi saza nahi mili.. sabse jadya asih usi ki thi.. dono pati.. beta bhi

to khoon to aise to ruksar ne bhi kia tha .. to aapki baat puri tarah se sahi nahi..

jahan tak meri baat hai... ji haan mere sath bhi hua hai ki kuch dost meri nazro mein gire aur kuch ke nazari mein main.. galti se.. halaki wahan sex ka koi lena dena nahi he hehehe... par main is mamle mein thora alag hun .. yakeen maniye maine un situration se bahar nikal auar wo riste pehle se jadya acche hai.... to aap ye nahi keh sakte ki dor tut jaye to gaanth reh hi jati hai... ye sirf kahawat hai. duniya mein kai log hai jo us gaath ko khatam kar dete hai. jaise shan ne kia... apni wife ki khushi ke liyee.. par ruksar ko uski galti ki koi saza nahi mili bas yehi kehna tha...

nahi plz ruksar ko na laye... usko apni jindgi mein khush rehne de....
 
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