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Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)

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Ravi's character need lots of build up , so far his character displays a Lustful child
He lacks maturity and without it he cannot win Deepika also he is yet not ready to take on Gupta uncle and other such characters.
My views
Bro I agree with you100%.but we need to remember Ravi's age right now..its just 16..so we can't accept much more maturity as compare of other characters...,while this is the reason that he quarrel with his sister and deepika regularly..it 's show lack of maturity...

In the story Ravi is not a super hero type..who has no impurity...he is a normal guy..and he will learn slowly slowly...and will fight against Gupta or any other else...
..i want to write a story which have no artificial characters...like Bollywood movies...
It should be close to the nature...that's why Ravi seems Unmatured in the story....


Thank you bro to give your outputs...
Thanks again...hope you will be understand...🥰🥰🥰
 

Luffy

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Wahi dusri tarf ravi room m aa gya....sunita ke room abhi bhi tv chal raha tha...golu so chuka tha..or bablu or sunita tv dekh rahe the...room ki light bhi jali thi...

Ravi ne apne room Ka door open kiya...


Ab aage::::

door kholne ki awaz sunita ko sunayi di... sunita or bablu koi movie dekh rahe the..
golu so chuka tha...
or bablu bhi bed m let Kar kohani ke bal dono hathon ko face m rakh kr pet ke bal let kar tv dekh raha tha....

(((kabhi kabhi wo hota h na ,man m koi baat aaye or na chate hue bhi hum log bol dete h ,us baat ko..us time bhi ye hi hone wala tha sunita ke room pe)))

jaise hi sunita ko door khulne ki awaz aayi usne ,ek jahtake m bablu ko bol diya...

s:: chacha aa Gye h room m....( TV dekhte hue...bina soche boli)
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jaise hi usne bola usko Apne upper aashcharya hua ki wo kaise bol di ye baat....

sunita ka ye bolna tha ki bablu zaldi se utha or bhar chala gya ravi ke room ko ... sunita rokna chati thi...lekin bacche kha rukte h....

agle hi pal bablu ravi ke room ke bhar net wale door ke samne khada tha....
ravi apna iport rakh ke...apni bed shear sahi karne laga....matlab ki sone ki tayari....
tabhi bablu bola.....

B::: chacha chacha picture nhi dekhoge....(bhar se Bolte hue zaldi m..jaise picture chute ja rahi ho)

ravi Apne hi dhun m tha ,bablu ki baat suni to bola ..

R:: kon si picture aa rahi h...( Blanket khote hue)

B:: Are chacha bhut aachi picture h....( Ankh badi karke picture ki tarif karte hue)

R:: aa raha hu aa raha hu tu ja ...( Pani pite hue)

Fir ravi kuch sochne laga ...

Tab tak Bablu apne room ko chala gya....
Or wahi Ravi Apne room ki light bnd karke peshab karne....

Bablu room m aaya to sunita usko boli....

.S..tujko mane awaz di sunta nhi h tu...( Dante hue)
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...B:: kyaaa...chacha ko to bulane gya tha....( Bacche daant khane ke baad jaise Bolte h us style m)

S:: wo soyenge nhi...tere jaise hain...subh uth ke padhte h wo...( Bablu ko sunate hue)

Bablu chup chap movie dekhne laga pehle jaise ....

Tabhi sunita ke room ke bhar knock hua....
Or awaz aayi....

R::Bablu..bablu .. ( dheere se)

Sunita ne dheere se bablu ko bola ..or apni saree sahi karne lagi ...

S:: ja na...chacha awazz de rahe h.... ( Bhut dheere)

Bablu door ke paas gya...door lock nhi tha..bas band tha....
Or khol diya...fir waps aake bed m let gya...

Ravi ander aa gya....


Usne dekha...room m ek 100 watt ka bulb jal raha tha...
golu bed ke zamin wale side ke orr ko soya tha ...,
Golu ke per ke side bablu let kar tv dekh raha tha...or sunita wahi bed ke bich bethi thi....

Bed 6×6 ka tha...thoda purana...sayad sunita ki shadi m mila tha....
Gadde bhi bhut mote nhi the .. or bed Sheat bhi normal thi....
Sunita ne red or black mix saree pehni thi...or sar m palla daal rakha tha.....




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To be continued....
Nice update
 
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Bed 6×6 ka tha...thoda purana...sayad sunita ki shadi m mila tha....
Gadde bhi bhut mote nhi the .. or bed Sheat bhi normal thi...
Sunita ne red or black mix saree pehni thi...or sar m palla daal rakha tha....


Ab aage:::

Ravi ke ander aate hi sunita ki dhadkan tez ho gayi...usko samaj nhi aa ya ki kaise react kare....

Ravi darwaza se ander aa gya..or fir apne dono hath piche ko le ja ke door band kar diya...lekin lock nhi lagaya....

or tv ke pass aagya.....or bola ...

R:: are cable kab lagwayi?( Sunita ko dekh ke ,smile dete hue)

s:: are mne kha lagwayi,Didi ne lagawa di aaj....( Normal hone ki kosis karte hue)

ravi khada khada hi tv dekh raha tha...to sunita bablu ke pith m halke se marte hue boli....

S:: Chacha ko room se bulaya..or bethne bhi nhi de raha h( kamar m hath se marte hue)

R:: are thik h ..main to Ase hi aa gya....jata hu ab.....( Sunita ki aankhon m dekhte hue smile de kar)

tab bablu tv dekhte hue, .golu ke bagl m aa ke let gya ...
or ravi beth gya...golu ke per ke pass....

sunita se to saans hi nhi li ja rahi thi .. ghabraht se...usko Ase lagne laga jaise boby m week Ness aa gayi ho.....
ek ajeeb si feeling....
wo Ajj apne dono bacchon ke sath...usi bed m jissme karib 10 saal pehle uski suhagraat Mani thi....or Ajj ek ** saal ke ladke ke sath bethi thi...jo kis reason se aaj uske room m aaya tha ye wo ladka or sunita dono jante the.....

Bablu pet ke bal let kar tv dekh raha tha...
Ravi bablu ke or golu ke per ke pass ...betha tha apne dono per zamin m rakh ke....
Or ravi ke dono haath..piche ko bed ka Shara liye the....

Or ravi ke hath se thodi dur hi sunita bethi thi...dono ghutne mod ke..or sir ghutno ke upper....

((Kuch is tarah)))


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((((Sunita ka room or bed....)))






Ravi to tv nhi dekh raha tha ..bas sunita ka face dekh e m tha....bhut mast lag rahi thi sunita...
Sunita abhi apni jawani ke peak m thi..uski shadi zaldi ho gayi thi...nhi to uska bada beta ** saal ka nhi hota...

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Sunita tv dekhne ka natak karti rahi...kabhi uska dimag to ravi ke or tha....wo janti thi ki jab se ravi aaya h usko or uske bhare hue jism ko hi dekhe ja raha h...
Sunita ne apna yovan pura chupa rakha tha....saree se....


Wahi Ravi bhi janta tha ki ager dekhte hi reh gya to movie khtam ho jayegi or usko Apne room m Jana padega...
To thoda sa beta m let gya...uske per abhi bhi bed se niche hi the....
Or sir ko right hand ke sahare kohani se mod ke .sunita or tv ko dekhne laga....
Sunita ne ravi ko hath ka sahara liye leta dekha,to paas pade tabiyat ko dediya...ravi ko or boli....

S:: isko laga lijiye...( Ek baar nazar jhuka ke dekhi fir tv ki or dekhne lagi)

Ravi ne to apni mansa puri tarah se jta di thi....
Wo to ghurne m laga tha sunita ko ....or uske signal ka intezar kar raha tha ....
Jab thodi der tak sunita ke trf se koi postive response na dekha to ...apna left hand Jo usne one pet ke pass bed m rakha tha ...sunita ke per ke pass le gya.....

Or sunita ke red nail polish lage pero m touch kar liya.....

Sunita ravi ke sir se thoda upper ko bethi thi....
 
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Ravi ne to apni mansa puri tarah se jta di thi....
Wo to ghurne m laga tha sunita ko ....or uske signal ka intezar kar raha tha ....
Jab thodi der tak sunita ke trf se koi postive response na dekha to ...apna left hand Jo usne one pet ke pass bed m rakha tha ...sunita ke per ke pass le gya.....


Ab aage:::


Or sunita ke red nail polish lage pero m touch kar liya.....

Sunita ravi ke sir se thoda upper ko bethi thi....


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Ravi ne jaise hi uske per touch kiya...
Sunita ji body m current lag gya...or bina ravi ko dekhe...tv dekhte hue...
sunita ne per piche ko khinch liya or apni saree ke ander chup liya...or apne hathon ko Apne ghutne m or zor se sikod li...jaise per aage ko ja rahe ho or sunita piche khinch rahi ho....


Ravi sunita ko dekh raha tha ..uske cherte pe koi gussa ya narazgi nhi thi...bas wo sharm or dari hui lag rahi thi....

Ravi ne fir hath aage badhaya...or per Jo saree ke ander the...unko saree ko peticot ke ander se hi touch kar liya....
Jaise sunita se ye kehna cha raha ho ki ...

Ajj apne jism ko kahi bhi chupa le....usko m dhundh hi lunga ....
Ravi uska left per sehlanelaga ..or sunita ko dekhne laga ...

Sunita bas tv dekh e ka natak karte rahi ..sir ko Apne ghutne m rakh ke ...or Ase react karte lagi ki jaise left per m usko kuch bhi mehsoos hi na hota ho....

Tab ravi ne uske left per ko thoda bhar ko khich liya...jiise sunita ka sir jo bilkul straight tha..left ghutne niche ho jane ke karan ...uka sir bhi thoda left side ko jhuk gya ....

Lekin tab bhi usne apna per is baar piche nhi khincha ...

Ravi to uttejit hone laga tha ..uska tambu ban chuka tha....
Tabhi bablu piche palta..to sunita ne zaldi se per piche khinch liya...or saree se per dhakte hue ..thoda piche ko beth gayi... deewar Ka sahara le kar...
Jab sunita ne per piche kiya to uski payal ne chan ki awaz ki....

B:: chacha ye isko maar dega kya...???( Palt ke ravi ko dekhte hue)

Ravi ne movie ka kuch bhi dekha hi nhi tha ...to khali bhi bol diya. ..

R:: Haan maar dega....( Sunita ko lustfull nazar se dekhte hue)


Sunita ne apni saree ka paala sahi karte hue ravi ko dekha sharma ke ..or fir tv dekhte hue bablu se boli....

S:::tuje sona nhi h ab ..time dekh to....subh uthega nhi ab...chal so ja ab...( Per sikaodte hue..or sath m per ko saree se dhakte hue)

B:: thodi der dekhne do na mummy ( zidd kar e wali awaz m)..

S:: light bhi jala rakhi h ..ager golu utha na tab dekhna tu...( Bablu ko dekh kar)

Ravi samaj gya sunita ka ishara or bina kuch bole sunita ko dekhte hue utha..or light off kar di ...
Ab room m kewal TV Ka hi ujjala tha .jo as per seen ke hisab ke kabhi zaida to kabhi kam ho raha tha ....

Ravi to ab aage badhna chata tha.wo janta tha sunita khul ke kabhi nhi aayegi...usko hi karna padega...hammm lekin sunita mana bhi nhi karegi...ager karne wali hoti...to bus m or abhi per touch kar e m kar di hoti....


To ravi ne takiya jo thodi der pehle lagaya tha hath ke niche..waha fel diya jha sunita bethi thi deewar ke sahare....

Ravi ke Ase takiya fekne se sunita ab puri tarah se kampane lagi ..usko thand ka ehssas hone laga body kampne lagi....saanse Lene m dikkat....

Uska mind bol raha tha .::. Sunita light on karwa de nhi to galt ho jayega Ajj...

Wahi mann keh raha tha :: sunita tu iski baat mat sun...ravi tuje badnam nhi karega....kabhi kisi ko nhi bolega....

Tabhi Ravi uske bagal m aa gya ...

Ravi ne ek gehri saans li or takiya pith ke piche lagya or sunita ke bagal m beth gya....

To be continued.....

Updated bada nhi de pa raha hu kyonki load nhi ho paa raha h... delete ho gya ek baar isliye step wise de raha hu...Ajj pura hoga..
 
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