Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)
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There is lots of obstacles to write the story.. Thinking is being imposed. so now it's too necessary to change the story plot.
Hope that. Critics will remain silent. And let me write..
Hope that. Critics will remain silent. And let me write..
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maaf karna bhai per aap ne itni mast story ki aisi taisi kar di sach me aap se ye umeed ba thi bura lga ho to sorry
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Ek writer kabhi story ki Kabhi asi tesi nhi karta... Wo to jo sochta hai .wo hi likhta hai...lekin jab anguli hone lagti hai...to koi bhi nhi likh payega...
Har kisi ko khush karna mushkil hai...
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Wahi Madhu ko samj nhi aa rah tha ki aakhir panty gayi kaha ..kahi koi aaya to nhi tha ..kahi babu ji to nhi the.... Hey bhagwan kya karu ab .....
Ye sab sochate hue sabji bnane lagi ..
.Ab aage::
Virendra apne room m tha ,or daru pi raha tha ..jabki Madhu kitchen m khana bna rahi thi...
or apni khoyi hui panty ke bare main soch rahi thi...
Tabhi phone baja....
Pehle to usne socha ki sayad Virendra phone attend kar lega...lekin Virendra bhar nhi aaya...
to madhu khud hi bhar aayi kitchen se or phone pick kiya ..
Samne sarla thi...jo kafi ghabrai hui thi...
Sarla:: hello..
M:: hello...
S:: madhu tere babu ji kaha hai..?? Zaldi se phone de unko....punam ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi h...( Rote hue)
M:: kya hua didi ko??( Ghabrate hue)
S:: tu tere Babu ji ko de phone ..( rote hue)
Madhu ne Zaida question puchna sahi nhi samja or Zaldi se Virendra ke room ke bhar khadi ho ke boli .
M:: babu ji babu ji....maa ji ka phone aaya h ...Zaldi aayie....
Madhu ke is tarah se bolne pe .. Virendra turant bhar aaya...or bina madhu se kuch bhi bole ..sidha phone ke tarf bada....or sarla se baat karne laga ..
V:: kya hua sarla??
S:: app zaldi se ***”” hospital aa jao.....punam ki
tabiyat kharab ho gayi h ...gir gayi h niche.... bhuwan bhi aa raha h...( Rote hue)
V:: kya hua Punam ko...( Tension m)
S:: meri beti ko maar diya...isne ...hey bhagwan main kya karu....app aao Zaldi.... police m report likhati hu main ....( Gusse m or rote hue)
Virendra bina kuch Zaida bole ..Zaldi se apne room ko jane laga ..
Uske dimag se madhu ka kyal nikal gaya...apni beti ko is halat m dekh ke....
Madhu Wahi khadi thi ...or Virendra se boli...
M:: kya hua babu ji ?? Didi ko...( Tension m)
Virendra usko bina dekhe jate hue bola ..
V:: pata nhi pankaj ne kya kiya....ja raha hu main...bhuwan aa raha h...usko bhej dunga ...( Ruke swar main)
Madhu ne bhi Zaida puchna sahi nhi samja....
Thodi der baad Virendra chala gaya....madhu Wahi bhar haal main Bethe rahi...or sochne lagi ki aakhir hua kya abhi abhi....
Hospital main....
Virendra hospital pahuch gaya...jaha sarla or bhuwan the ..bhuwan thodi der pehle hi phucha tha ...
Virendra ne sarla se pucha to pata chala ki ..
Pankaj or punam ki ladai hui thi kisi baat pe
...pankaj nashe main tha or usne gusse m punam ko thappad mara to wo gir gayi...or Uski bleeding hone suru ho gayi...pankaj or sarla usko le kar hospital aa gaye....
Sarla ko bhut gussa tha pankaj pe ..wo baar baar Virendra ko bol rahi thi...F.I.R karne ko..
.lekin bhuwan or Virendra usko samja rahe the ki asia karne se unke hi parivar ki vadnaami hogi....
Wahi pankaj ko apne kiye pe pachtawa ho raha tha..
.or wo apne pariwar ke sath alag khada tha...
Wahi Madhu akele thi ghar pe.... phone bhi karti to kisko karti....
Bas intezar kar rahithik kisi ke aane ka....jo batte ki aakhir hua kya h....
Ase hi subh ke 4 baj gaye... hospital main doctor bhar aaya subh or usne bola ki punam ka abortion karna pada...unko...
Or wo thik h pehle se or abhi behos hai....
Tab sarla or Virendra ko thoda rahat mili....
Deepika ke maa ke ghar main...
Deepika ke pitaji hospital main hi the....abhi thoda thik the pehle se .... first hart attack tha...to tvacha gaye the ...
Gupta bhi hospital main hi tha... lekin Deepikaa se dur tha...lekin uski himmat nhi thi...wo Janta tha Deepika ab pehle ki tarh darpok nhi h....
Or suresh bhi tha...or Deepikaa uske or ko ek baar bhi dekho nhi ..na hi uskr per chue the....is baar...
Hospital main kafi log the....
Neema ,radha ka husband.,neema ke papa.,bhai...or bhi relatives...
Deepika bhut tension m thi apne papa ko le kar ...
Suresh ke ghar main....
Sham ko ravi ne phone kiya tha ..madhu ke ghar se aane ke baad Deepika ke ghar pe...apni nani ke kehne pe...
Lekin baat bas Deepika ki choti behan shweta se hi baat ho paayi thi ...
Sab log hospital pe hi the...raat 11 baje jab Deepika ghar aayi to shweta ne usko bataya tha ..ravi ke phone ke baare main ..
Deepika ka mood kharab tha to usne koi baat nhi ki ravi se...
Wahi sunita bhi Apne pati ke aane se thoda dur rahi ravi se taaki uske pati ko koi shak na ho....
To be continued....
Ye sab sochate hue sabji bnane lagi ..
.Ab aage::
Virendra apne room m tha ,or daru pi raha tha ..jabki Madhu kitchen m khana bna rahi thi...
or apni khoyi hui panty ke bare main soch rahi thi...
Tabhi phone baja....
Pehle to usne socha ki sayad Virendra phone attend kar lega...lekin Virendra bhar nhi aaya...
to madhu khud hi bhar aayi kitchen se or phone pick kiya ..
Samne sarla thi...jo kafi ghabrai hui thi...
Sarla:: hello..
M:: hello...
S:: madhu tere babu ji kaha hai..?? Zaldi se phone de unko....punam ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi h...( Rote hue)
M:: kya hua didi ko??( Ghabrate hue)
S:: tu tere Babu ji ko de phone ..( rote hue)
Madhu ne Zaida question puchna sahi nhi samja or Zaldi se Virendra ke room ke bhar khadi ho ke boli .
M:: babu ji babu ji....maa ji ka phone aaya h ...Zaldi aayie....
Madhu ke is tarah se bolne pe .. Virendra turant bhar aaya...or bina madhu se kuch bhi bole ..sidha phone ke tarf bada....or sarla se baat karne laga ..
V:: kya hua sarla??
S:: app zaldi se ***”” hospital aa jao.....punam ki
tabiyat kharab ho gayi h ...gir gayi h niche.... bhuwan bhi aa raha h...( Rote hue)
V:: kya hua Punam ko...( Tension m)
S:: meri beti ko maar diya...isne ...hey bhagwan main kya karu....app aao Zaldi.... police m report likhati hu main ....( Gusse m or rote hue)
Virendra bina kuch Zaida bole ..Zaldi se apne room ko jane laga ..
Uske dimag se madhu ka kyal nikal gaya...apni beti ko is halat m dekh ke....
Madhu Wahi khadi thi ...or Virendra se boli...
M:: kya hua babu ji ?? Didi ko...( Tension m)
Virendra usko bina dekhe jate hue bola ..
V:: pata nhi pankaj ne kya kiya....ja raha hu main...bhuwan aa raha h...usko bhej dunga ...( Ruke swar main)
Madhu ne bhi Zaida puchna sahi nhi samja....
Thodi der baad Virendra chala gaya....madhu Wahi bhar haal main Bethe rahi...or sochne lagi ki aakhir hua kya abhi abhi....
Hospital main....
Virendra hospital pahuch gaya...jaha sarla or bhuwan the ..bhuwan thodi der pehle hi phucha tha ...
Virendra ne sarla se pucha to pata chala ki ..
Pankaj or punam ki ladai hui thi kisi baat pe
...pankaj nashe main tha or usne gusse m punam ko thappad mara to wo gir gayi...or Uski bleeding hone suru ho gayi...pankaj or sarla usko le kar hospital aa gaye....
Sarla ko bhut gussa tha pankaj pe ..wo baar baar Virendra ko bol rahi thi...F.I.R karne ko..
.lekin bhuwan or Virendra usko samja rahe the ki asia karne se unke hi parivar ki vadnaami hogi....
Wahi pankaj ko apne kiye pe pachtawa ho raha tha..
.or wo apne pariwar ke sath alag khada tha...
Wahi Madhu akele thi ghar pe.... phone bhi karti to kisko karti....
Bas intezar kar rahithik kisi ke aane ka....jo batte ki aakhir hua kya h....
Ase hi subh ke 4 baj gaye... hospital main doctor bhar aaya subh or usne bola ki punam ka abortion karna pada...unko...
Or wo thik h pehle se or abhi behos hai....
Tab sarla or Virendra ko thoda rahat mili....
Deepika ke maa ke ghar main...
Deepika ke pitaji hospital main hi the....abhi thoda thik the pehle se .... first hart attack tha...to tvacha gaye the ...
Gupta bhi hospital main hi tha... lekin Deepikaa se dur tha...lekin uski himmat nhi thi...wo Janta tha Deepika ab pehle ki tarh darpok nhi h....
Or suresh bhi tha...or Deepikaa uske or ko ek baar bhi dekho nhi ..na hi uskr per chue the....is baar...
Hospital main kafi log the....
Neema ,radha ka husband.,neema ke papa.,bhai...or bhi relatives...
Deepika bhut tension m thi apne papa ko le kar ...
Suresh ke ghar main....
Sham ko ravi ne phone kiya tha ..madhu ke ghar se aane ke baad Deepika ke ghar pe...apni nani ke kehne pe...
Lekin baat bas Deepika ki choti behan shweta se hi baat ho paayi thi ...
Sab log hospital pe hi the...raat 11 baje jab Deepika ghar aayi to shweta ne usko bataya tha ..ravi ke phone ke baare main ..
Deepika ka mood kharab tha to usne koi baat nhi ki ravi se...
Wahi sunita bhi Apne pati ke aane se thoda dur rahi ravi se taaki uske pati ko koi shak na ho....
To be continued....
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Nice update bhai...
Sab apni pareshaniyo mein hai lekin Ravi kya soch raha hai....
Sab apni pareshaniyo mein hai lekin Ravi kya soch raha hai....
Love for you
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