Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)
- Thread starterFlymovers777
- Start date
- 18,691,560
Yeh sahi task diye ho magar isme Ravi fail hojayega abhi chota baccha h budhi nahi h utna aur mature bhi nahi h
Ya mera is story py pehly comment ha story bhot he shandar ha. Maza aa gya parh k.
Aur ya Jo sub log madhu k bary Mein keh rahy hain wo agr such mein story mein koi twist lay ga to bh ap ko sath sath ni likhna chaiy tha.
Beshak ap ny kaha k is story Mein koi hero ya heroine ni ha lakin Phr bh Ravi main character ha to story us py ziada focus honi chaiy.
Aur asi cheezyn jb main character k samny aa jayn to us waqt wo as a flashback mein parhny mein Ziada Maza ata ha jasy Gupta aur Deepika wala part wo agr pehly likhty to maza ni ata aur ab bh shaid ap wo Ravi aur Deepika k darmiyan as a conversation deakhyn gy jb Ravi ko koi shak ya asa kuch ho ga.
Aur ya Jo sub log madhu k bary Mein keh rahy hain wo agr such mein story mein koi twist lay ga to bh ap ko sath sath ni likhna chaiy tha.
Beshak ap ny kaha k is story Mein koi hero ya heroine ni ha lakin Phr bh Ravi main character ha to story us py ziada focus honi chaiy.
Aur asi cheezyn jb main character k samny aa jayn to us waqt wo as a flashback mein parhny mein Ziada Maza ata ha jasy Gupta aur Deepika wala part wo agr pehly likhty to maza ni ata aur ab bh shaid ap wo Ravi aur Deepika k darmiyan as a conversation deakhyn gy jb Ravi ko koi shak ya asa kuch ho ga.
bhai bachha hai lekin itna bhi bachha nahi hai jo apni aurat na bacha sake....jab thok sakta hai toh bachana bhi usko hi padega..!!
Last edited:
Baba Mechanchiii
_𝕿𝖍𝖊 𝕽𝖚𝖑𝖊𝖗 𝖔𝖋 𝕾𝖔𝖑𝖎𝖙𝖚𝖉𝖊_🎭🚬
- 360
- 1,190
- 139
...
...
