Fantasy MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER) [completed]

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Update 28

Jarur iski koi waja rahi hogi..
Abi apne aap se itna he bola tha ki fir panna palta or isbar mere saamne kuch drishya dikhai dea rahe the jisse dekh mea bohot chaunk gaya tha or mere ankho me gusse ke angare jal rahe the..
Meri puri body ke nashe filme lagi or mera gussa satve aasman par pohach chuka tha..

Tab mere muh se sirf itna he nikla..
Khanjar me tumhe apna ta hu..

Ab aage..

Few moments back..

Jaise he panna palta toa mere samne us page par ek drishya aaya (like video)
Jismea maa papa se jagad rahi thi kisi baat par..
Par papa ne unki ek naa suni..
Or wo apne room mea chalegaye or darwaza band kardiya..
Bahar mom bethkar ro rahi thi..
Or kuch toa boo rahi thi par muje sunayi ni dea raha tha..
Tabi mom bahar jane lagi tabi waha mea agaya tha or mom ka pallu pakad ne lagga..
Mom ne ek bar meri taraf dekha or unki ankho se fir aanshu aagaye..
Or fir kuch toa bole par yaar awaj he ni aarahi thi Tabi mea book se bola .

Aaryan - yaar awaj q ni aari kuch toa kar na..

Tabi khanjar boli .

Khanjar - Tumhe wo he chije sunayi degi jo tumhe sunni chahiye...

Tabi maa ne muje god mea liya or muje uthakar bahar ki or chaldior apni car mea beth car chalane lagi..

Tabi book me drishya change hua..
Or isbar book mea ek daravne se dikhne wale aadmi ko dikhaya


Jo kafi daravana dikh raha tha..
Tabi uske piche se ek buddha aadmi aaya or usse kaha..
B aadmi - Andhaksur tumhe agar panch bhuto (jal agni prithvi wayu or aasman ki saktiya)ko kabu mea karna hea toa tumhe uske rakshak ko marna hoga..
Wo b usske taqatwar hone se pehlea..
Anyata us dev kanya ke janam ke baad tumhara usse marna muskil hoga..

Tabi Andhakasur(tantrik) piche palta or apni daravni awaj mea bola .

Andhakasur - Mea kisi ko b mere lakshya ke aage ni aanedungaaa...
Muje prithvi or jinlok par kabu karne se koi ni rok sakta...
Or uss rakshak ko b marna hoga..

Itna bol wo daravni hasi hasne lagga..
Uski hasi itni daravni thi ki us budhe aadmi ko b ek bar toa dar lagne laga..

Tabi Andhaksur waha se gayab hoagaya..

Idar mea or maa gadhi mea beth kahi jaa rahe the..
Or maa phone par kisi sea baat kar rahi thi or ro rahi thi..

Tabi hamare car ke saamne koi aaya jisse maa ne turant brake lagaya..
Or car skate hone lagi..
Or gol gol gumne lagi..
Mea car mea beth ro raha tha..
Or maa kafi gahrayi hui thi..
Ke tabi..
Maa ne muje apni god mea uthaya or jungle ke taraf doudne lagi..


Yaha muje ab tak ni dikha tha ki aisa kya dekha tha jo maa aise doud rahi thi..
Tabi maa jungle .mea doudte doudte nadi ke pass pohach gayi..

Is waqt maa kafi dari hui thi or mea ro raha tha tabi maa ne kaha..

Maa - He bholenath mere bache ko bachlo..
Chaho toa muje mardo..
Par mere bache ko bachalo bholenath mere bache ko bachalo..

Ma ki baat sun meri ankho mea aasu aane lage..
Aakhir kaise koi dusre ke bache ko itna pyaar kar sakta he ki uske liye apni jaan b dene ko tayar hojaye..

Mea ye sab dekhkar apne aap ko kafi bebas mehsoos kar raha tha ki..
Mere wajase maa ke sath ye sab hua or mea kuch kar b ni paa raha tha..

Meare ankh se lagatar aansu nikal rahe the or idar maa muje apne god me uthakar nadi par karne ki kosis kar rahi thi..

Maa abi aadhe raste b ni pohachi thi ke tabi piche se chalang lagakar maa ke saamne koi aaya..

Ek baar toa usse dekh mea b dargayatha..

 

[Smith_15]

Awesome
Update please

 

[Alok]

Nice but very small update bhai...

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Update 28

Jarur iski koi waja rahi hogi..
Abi apne aap se itna he bola tha ki fir panna palta or isbar mere saamne kuch drishya dikhai dea rahe the jisse dekh mea bohot chaunk gaya tha or mere ankho me gusse ke angare jal rahe the..
Meri puri body ke nashe filme lagi or mera gussa satve aasman par pohach chuka tha..

Tab mere muh se sirf itna he nikla..
Khanjar me tumhe apna ta hu..

Ab aage..

Few moments back..

Jaise he panna palta toa mere samne us page par ek drishya aaya (like video)
Jismea maa papa se jagad rahi thi kisi baat par..
Par papa ne unki ek naa suni..
Or wo apne room mea chalegaye or darwaza band kardiya..
Bahar mom bethkar ro rahi thi..
Or kuch toa boo rahi thi par muje sunayi ni dea raha tha..
Tabi mom bahar jane lagi tabi waha mea agaya tha or mom ka pallu pakad ne lagga..
Mom ne ek bar meri taraf dekha or unki ankho se fir aanshu aagaye..
Or fir kuch toa bole par yaar awaj he ni aarahi thi Tabi mea book se bola .

Aaryan - yaar awaj q ni aari kuch toa kar na..

Tabi khanjar boli .

Khanjar - Tumhe wo he chije sunayi degi jo tumhe sunni chahiye...

Tabi maa ne muje god mea liya or muje uthakar bahar ki or chaldior apni car mea beth car chalane lagi..

Tabi book me drishya change hua..
Or isbar book mea ek daravne se dikhne wale aadmi ko dikhaya


Jo kafi daravana dikh raha tha..
Tabi uske piche se ek buddha aadmi aaya or usse kaha..
B aadmi - Andhaksur tumhe agar panch bhuto (jal agni prithvi wayu or aasman ki saktiya)ko kabu mea karna hea toa tumhe uske rakshak ko marna hoga..
Wo b usske taqatwar hone se pehlea..
Anyata us dev kanya ke janam ke baad tumhara usse marna muskil hoga..

Tabi Andhakasur(tantrik) piche palta or apni daravni awaj mea bola .

Andhakasur - Mea kisi ko b mere lakshya ke aage ni aanedungaaa...
Muje prithvi or jinlok par kabu karne se koi ni rok sakta...
Or uss rakshak ko b marna hoga..

Itna bol wo daravni hasi hasne lagga..
Uski hasi itni daravni thi ki us budhe aadmi ko b ek bar toa dar lagne laga..

Tabi Andhaksur waha se gayab hoagaya..

Idar mea or maa gadhi mea beth kahi jaa rahe the..
Or maa phone par kisi sea baat kar rahi thi or ro rahi thi..

Tabi hamare car ke saamne koi aaya jisse maa ne turant brake lagaya..
Or car skate hone lagi..
Or gol gol gumne lagi..
Mea car mea beth ro raha tha..
Or maa kafi gahrayi hui thi..
Ke tabi..
Maa ne muje apni god mea uthaya or jungle ke taraf doudne lagi..


Yaha muje ab tak ni dikha tha ki aisa kya dekha tha jo maa aise doud rahi thi..
Tabi maa jungle .mea doudte doudte nadi ke pass pohach gayi..

Is waqt maa kafi dari hui thi or mea ro raha tha tabi maa ne kaha..

Maa - He bholenath mere bache ko bachlo..
Chaho toa muje mardo..
Par mere bache ko bachalo bholenath mere bache ko bachalo..

Ma ki baat sun meri ankho mea aasu aane lage..
Aakhir kaise koi dusre ke bache ko itna pyaar kar sakta he ki uske liye apni jaan b dene ko tayar hojaye..

Mea ye sab dekhkar apne aap ko kafi bebas mehsoos kar raha tha ki..
Mere wajase maa ke sath ye sab hua or mea kuch kar b ni paa raha tha..

Meare ankh se lagatar aansu nikal rahe the or idar maa muje apne god me uthakar nadi par karne ki kosis kar rahi thi..

Maa abi aadhe raste b ni pohachi thi ke tabi piche se chalang lagakar maa ke saamne koi aaya..

Ek baar toa usse dekh mea b dargayatha..

fantastic update bhai

 

[Hero tera]

Update 29

Meare ankh se lagatar aansu nikal rahe the or idar maa muje apne god me uthakar nadi par karne ki kosis kar rahi thi..

Maa abi aadhe raste b ni pohachi thi ke tabi piche se chalang lagakar maa ke saamne koi aaya..

Ek baar toa usse dekh mea b dargayatha..

Ab aage..


Maa ke saamne ek kale rang ka khukar bhediya khada tha..
Jo ki kafi daravana tha dikhne mea..

Wo dire dire chalte huye maa ke pass aaraha tha or maa nadi me piche ke taraf ja rahi thi muje hath me pakad..

Tabi bhediye ne maa ke upar japetamara or muje bachane ke maa piche ke taraf palat bhag ne lagi .

Tabi unka pav kisi pathar se lagga or vo nadi mea girgayi..
Or unke hatho se mea b chhut gaya..
Mea toa ro ro kar behosh ho chuka tha..
Par fir b muje bachana chahti thi isliye unhone pass pade pathar ko uthaya or us bhediye par mara..
Par us bhediye par iska koi asar ni hua..

Vo ab dire dire maa ke karib aane laga tha..
Par maa b ab bebas ho kisi chamatkar hone ke gujaris kar rahi thi upar wale se..
Tabi bhediye ne fir unpar japetamarra or unko............

Ye sab dekh mere muh se sirf ek dard bhari chikh nikali ...

Aaryan - naiiiiiiiiiiiii...maaaaaaaa..


Or mea uss book pakad rone lagga.

Udar bhediya maa ko marne ke baad mere taraf bad raha tha par mea already behosh ho chuka tha..
Or ek pathar ke sahara aada nadi me or aada us pathar par gira hua tha..

Tabi wo bhediye ne muje apne muh se pakada or nadi se behrahe jarne se niche fek diya..


Muje us jarne se niche fek wo bhediya nadi ke kinare aagaya or apne asli roop yani ki tantrik ke roop mea change hogaya..

Or apni khushi jahir karne ke liye jor jor se haste huye kehne lagga..

Tantrik - Akhir maar diya mene us rakshak ko..
Koi ni rok sakta muje na he dev na he mahadev..

Itna bol fir wo hasne lagga or tabi waha piche se ek full kale libhasmea aadmi/aaurat aai..

Or uss tantrik ke pass aakuch bola usnea..

Par muje uski baate ni sunai di..
Par uski baate sun jo tantrik ne kaha usse sun mera gussa satve asman mea pohach chuka tha

Tantrik - aao akhir tumhara b kaam hogaya..
Iss bache or uski maa ke marne ke baad..
Par muje ye ni samaj aaya ki akhir tumhari isse kya dusmani thi jo tum uske pariwar wale hone ke bawjood uss bache ko or uski maa ko marna chahte the..

Bas itna he sunna tha ki mene khajar ko apnane ka faisla liya..
Or apne man me kuch soch mene khanjar ko pukara or apne andar sama jane ko kaha..

Or meri baat sun khanjar b mere andar aagayi bina kuch bole..
Sayad usse pata tha ye sab dekhne ke baad mea usse apna he lunga qki agar muje tantrik ko harana he goa muje demon ki power ki jarurat thi qki tantrik khud ek rakshas hea..
Or mea apni power se usse kabi ni hara pata..

Ye baat khanjar ke mere andar aate he muje samaj aagayi..
Yahi nai muje bohot kuch aisa b
Pata chala jo muje sayad he kabi aata ya pata chalta...

Khanjar ke mere andar sama te waqt us hall mea ek tej nilli roshni chamki or dire dire wo roshni ka aakar badal ne lagga or jab mene uss roshni ke taraf dekha toa samne khade saks ne kaha..

Saksh - Aakhir tumne apna dil chod dimag use karna sikh liya hea...

Muje uski bate jara b achi nai lagti isliye mene kaha .

Aaryan - Pehli baat toa ye mea na sirf apne dimag ki balki dil ki b suni hea..
Qki mera dil or dimag ek he baat keh rahe the ke khanjar ko apnauu..
Or dusri tum muje bar bar aakar sirf aadhi adhuari baat batati ho ya order dekar chali jati ho..
Ab ye ni chalega..
Tum muje apne bareme sab kuch batao aakhir mea kon hu kya hu..
Mera wajood kya hea...
Or is khanjar me mujme samane ke baad itna toa muje patta chal gaya he ki..
Ye tantrik ko mere life mea layagaya hea ya yuh kahu ki muje insab ki life mea janbujkar daala gaya hea..
Aakhir q kiya gaya he mere sath aisa..
Batao muje tum..

Sakhs - tum is waqt gusse mea ho isliye aisa bol rahe ho..
Waqt aane par tumhe khud pata chalega ki tum kon ho..
Or ye sab q ho raha hea..
Or tumhe in sabki life mea q dalla gaya hea..
Mea bas ye keheneaayi thi ki tantrik ko marne se pehlea tumhe training karni hogi or khanjar ki powers par kabu pana hoga..

Tum khanjar ki sari powers tabhi use kar paoge jab tumhara kawach tumhare pass hoga..
Qki khanjar ki power tumne he pichle janam mea tumhare kawach se jodi thi..
Or ab wo kawach us tantrik ke pass he or iss khanjar ke alawa us tantrik par kisi b hatyar ka asar ni hoga..
Isliye ab tumhe apne speed ko badana hoga..
Tumhe abb bijli se b tej banna hoga taki tum apni furti se ye khanjar se us tantrik ko hara sako.

Itna bol tigress waha se gayab hogai or mea yaha apne aap se bola..
Aaryan- salla fir hukum suna ke cgali gayi..
Agli baar milegi toa iss b dekh lunga..
Filal ghar chalna chahiye muje kafi der ho chuki hea yaha..

Note- khanjar ko pane ke baad mera dimag kafi shant or tej chalne lagga tha..
Isliye abi mea kafi cool tha..
Meri cool hone ka karan aaplogon ko next update mea pata chalega..

 

[Alok]

Nice update bhai

 

[Hero tera]

Thanks bhai

 

[@Rock@@]

Update 29

Meare ankh se lagatar aansu nikal rahe the or idar maa muje apne god me uthakar nadi par karne ki kosis kar rahi thi..

Maa abi aadhe raste b ni pohachi thi ke tabi piche se chalang lagakar maa ke saamne koi aaya..

Ek baar toa usse dekh mea b dargayatha..

Ab aage..


Maa ke saamne ek kale rang ka khukar bhediya khada tha..
Jo ki kafi daravana tha dikhne mea..

Wo dire dire chalte huye maa ke pass aaraha tha or maa nadi me piche ke taraf ja rahi thi muje hath me pakad..

Tabi bhediye ne maa ke upar japetamara or muje bachane ke maa piche ke taraf palat bhag ne lagi .

Tabi unka pav kisi pathar se lagga or vo nadi mea girgayi..
Or unke hatho se mea b chhut gaya..
Mea toa ro ro kar behosh ho chuka tha..
Par fir b muje bachana chahti thi isliye unhone pass pade pathar ko uthaya or us bhediye par mara..
Par us bhediye par iska koi asar ni hua..

Vo ab dire dire maa ke karib aane laga tha..
Par maa b ab bebas ho kisi chamatkar hone ke gujaris kar rahi thi upar wale se..
Tabi bhediye ne fir unpar japetamarra or unko............

Ye sab dekh mere muh se sirf ek dard bhari chikh nikali ...

Aaryan - naiiiiiiiiiiiii...maaaaaaaa..


Or mea uss book pakad rone lagga.

Udar bhediya maa ko marne ke baad mere taraf bad raha tha par mea already behosh ho chuka tha..
Or ek pathar ke sahara aada nadi me or aada us pathar par gira hua tha..

Tabi wo bhediye ne muje apne muh se pakada or nadi se behrahe jarne se niche fek diya..


Muje us jarne se niche fek wo bhediya nadi ke kinare aagaya or apne asli roop yani ki tantrik ke roop mea change hogaya..

Or apni khushi jahir karne ke liye jor jor se haste huye kehne lagga..

Tantrik - Akhir maar diya mene us rakshak ko..
Koi ni rok sakta muje na he dev na he mahadev..

Itna bol fir wo hasne lagga or tabi waha piche se ek full kale libhasmea aadmi/aaurat aai..

Or uss tantrik ke pass aakuch bola usnea..

Par muje uski baate ni sunai di..
Par uski baate sun jo tantrik ne kaha usse sun mera gussa satve asman mea pohach chuka tha

Tantrik - aao akhir tumhara b kaam hogaya..
Iss bache or uski maa ke marne ke baad..
Par muje ye ni samaj aaya ki akhir tumhari isse kya dusmani thi jo tum uske pariwar wale hone ke bawjood uss bache ko or uski maa ko marna chahte the..

Bas itna he sunna tha ki mene khajar ko apnane ka faisla liya..
Or apne man me kuch soch mene khanjar ko pukara or apne andar sama jane ko kaha..

Or meri baat sun khanjar b mere andar aagayi bina kuch bole..
Sayad usse pata tha ye sab dekhne ke baad mea usse apna he lunga qki agar muje tantrik ko harana he goa muje demon ki power ki jarurat thi qki tantrik khud ek rakshas hea..
Or mea apni power se usse kabi ni hara pata..

Ye baat khanjar ke mere andar aate he muje samaj aagayi..
Yahi nai muje bohot kuch aisa b
Pata chala jo muje sayad he kabi aata ya pata chalta...

Khanjar ke mere andar sama te waqt us hall mea ek tej nilli roshni chamki or dire dire wo roshni ka aakar badal ne lagga or jab mene uss roshni ke taraf dekha toa samne khade saks ne kaha..

Saksh - Aakhir tumne apna dil chod dimag use karna sikh liya hea...

Muje uski bate jara b achi nai lagti isliye mene kaha .

Aaryan - Pehli baat toa ye mea na sirf apne dimag ki balki dil ki b suni hea..
Qki mera dil or dimag ek he baat keh rahe the ke khanjar ko apnauu..
Or dusri tum muje bar bar aakar sirf aadhi adhuari baat batati ho ya order dekar chali jati ho..
Ab ye ni chalega..
Tum muje apne bareme sab kuch batao aakhir mea kon hu kya hu..
Mera wajood kya hea...
Or is khanjar me mujme samane ke baad itna toa muje patta chal gaya he ki..
Ye tantrik ko mere life mea layagaya hea ya yuh kahu ki muje insab ki life mea janbujkar daala gaya hea..
Aakhir q kiya gaya he mere sath aisa..
Batao muje tum..

Sakhs - tum is waqt gusse mea ho isliye aisa bol rahe ho..
Waqt aane par tumhe khud pata chalega ki tum kon ho..
Or ye sab q ho raha hea..
Or tumhe in sabki life mea q dalla gaya hea..
Mea bas ye keheneaayi thi ki tantrik ko marne se pehlea tumhe training karni hogi or khanjar ki powers par kabu pana hoga..

Tum khanjar ki sari powers tabhi use kar paoge jab tumhara kawach tumhare pass hoga..
Qki khanjar ki power tumne he pichle janam mea tumhare kawach se jodi thi..
Or ab wo kawach us tantrik ke pass he or iss khanjar ke alawa us tantrik par kisi b hatyar ka asar ni hoga..
Isliye ab tumhe apne speed ko badana hoga..
Tumhe abb bijli se b tej banna hoga taki tum apni furti se ye khanjar se us tantrik ko hara sako.

Itna bol tigress waha se gayab hogai or mea yaha apne aap se bola..
Aaryan- salla fir hukum suna ke cgali gayi..
Agli baar milegi toa iss b dekh lunga..
Filal ghar chalna chahiye muje kafi der ho chuki hea yaha..

Note- khanjar ko pane ke baad mera dimag kafi shant or tej chalne lagga tha..
Isliye abi mea kafi cool tha..
Meri cool hone ka karan aaplogon ko next update mea pata chalega..

Super update bhai