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Fantasy MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER) [completed]

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UPDATE 30

Itna bol tigress waha se gayab hogai or mea yaha apne aap se bola..
Aaryan- salla fir hukum suna ke cgali gayi..
Agli baar milegi toa iss b dekh lunga..
Filal ghar chalna chahiye muje kafi der ho chuki hea yaha..

Ab aage..

Mea hall se nikal ghar 2 gaya..
Or apne room mea chalagaya..
Waha zoya bed par adhleti hui thi..
Sayad mera he wait kar rahi thi..
Or wait karte karte sogayi thi..

Is waqt zoya nea red color ki short nighty pehni hui thi..
Or usme wo kafi khubsurat lag rahi thi..
Is waqt muje uske taraf kafi khichav mehsoos horaha tha..
Is baat se mea pareshan b tha q ki pehle muje aisa ni laga kabi zoya ko dekh..

Sayad ye sab khanjar ko apna ne ke waja se horaha hoga..
Par abi b meri body mere control mea thi siway mere man ke..
Joki zoya ke taraf khicha jaaraha tha..

Kuch der zoya ko dekhne ke baad mea uske pass gaya or usse tk tarike se bed par litaya or fir uske baju mea he let gaya..

Shubha meri neend mere hotho par kuch gila gila mehsoos hone ke wajase khuli..

Mene aankh khol dekha toa zoya mere upar zuk mere hotho ko chus rahi thi..

Or wo ye kaam bada man lagakar pure sidat se kar rahi thi..

Usse aisa karta dekh mea b khudko ni rok paya or usse kiss karne lagga..

Mere response pakar zoya ki kissing kafi wild hone lagi..

Wo ab pure josh ke sath muje kiss karne lagi or mea b uska sath dea raha tha..

Kuch der ham aise he kiss karte fir meane zoya ko khud se alag kiya..

Qki kajal abi ghar mea he thi isliye isse jada kuch karpana mere liye sambhav nai tha..

Ye baat mene zoya ko b kahi or usse b yahi sayi lagga..
Par zoya ka chera utar gaya
Isliye wo mere bed se uthte huye jane lagi..

Par pata nai muje kya suja zoya ka pakad mene usse apne taraf khicha or ek chota sa kiss karne ke baad usko chod diya..

Zoya ke b face par smile aagayi or fir wo mere bedroom se apne room ke taraf chaligayi..
Or mea b fresh hone ke liye washroom chalagaya..

Idar wo tantrik or uska sewak aapas me baate kar rahe the..

Tantrik - bas or kuch mahine fir mea is pure sristi mea sarv sakti man ban jaunga..
Or muje aisa karne se rokne ke liye koi b ni hea..

Itna bol wo ek daravni hasi hasne lagga..
Tabi uski hasi ko todte huye sewak bola..

Sewak - he malik he ek jan jo aapko is karya me rok sakta hea..

Sewak ki baat sun tantrik junjula sa gaya..
Or wyakul hote huye usse puchta hea .

Tantrik - kon he aisa is srishti mea jo muje rok sake..
Bolo..

Sewak - Malik ..

DEVO KE DEV
MAHADEV

Wahi ek he jo aapke is karya mea badha ban sakte hea..

Tantrik mahadev ka naam sun soch mea padgaya tha..
Qki usse pata tha mahadev ke virudh ja koi nai bach paya he aaj tak..

Tabi sewak bola..

Sewak - Malik par ek tarika he mahadev ko b apne raste se hatane ka..

Sewak ki ye baat sun tantrik ka mann prafullit ho utha..
Kuch der pehlea jaha usse apne sare sapne tutte bikharte najar aarahe the..
Waha usse ek asha ki kiran najar aane lagi
Or ussne turant he sewak se puchaa..

Tantrik - Kya he wo tarika jaldi batao muje..
Jaldi..Andhakasur ki utsukta dekh sewak ne muskurute huye kaha..

Sewak - Malik mahadev ko na bal se haraya ja sakta hea na chal se..

Abi sewak aagekuch bolta tabi tantrik fir usse rokte huye bola..

Tantrik - Tum muje tarika bata rahe ho ya dara rahe ho..

Sewak - Aap kuch der shant re meri puri baat sunlijiye..

Mahadev ko na bal se na chal se kintu bhakti se haraya ja sakta hea..
Ab sayad aage ka aap samaj gaye honge mea kya kehraha hu..

Sewak ki baat sun tantrik ke chere par fir uski kamini muskan aagayi..
Or ussne haste huye fir kaha..

Tantrik - Ab dekhta hu kon bachayega is sristi ko mere kahar se..

Fir vo jaga tantrik ke hasi ke karan gunj ne lagi..
Or tantrik waha se kahi gayab hogaya .

Or yaha..

Mea tayar ho jab dining table par aaya toa kajal or zoya waha pehle se bethe huye the or nasta kar rahe the..

Muje dekh mere taraf doudte huye aayi or muje hug karte huye kaha..

Kajal - Bhaiya tnqu so much..
Aapko pata kitne dino baad me kal sukun se soyi hu..
Or waha toa koi meri baat b ni sunta tha..

Itna bol kajal ki ankho mea pani aagaya..

Kajal ki baate sun mene usske sar par hath firate huye kaha..

Aaryan - Tu chinta q karti hea..
Jab tak mea hu tuje kisi sea b darne ki jarurat ni hea..
Chal ab ja or jaldi se nasta kar..
School nai jana kya..

Meri baat sun kajal mujse alag hui or apne sir par hath marte huye..
Boli..

Kajal - oo no mea bulhi gayi batana mea toa apni books lana he bulgayi waha se..

Aaryan - Koini tayar hokar wahise books lete huye jana..
Muje b kuch kaam he isliye mea bahar jaa raha hu..
Zoya didi tuje drop kardegi school or wahi se apne office chali jayegi..
Tk heana zoya(mene zoya ke taraf dekhte huye kaha)

Zoya ne b haa keh diya..
Fir ham tino ne milkar nasta kiya or kajal or zoya nikal gaye ghar 1 ke taraf uski books lene..
Or mea hall bethkar soch raha tha ki ab aage kaisi training karni he muje or kya hoga..

Tabi muje yaad aaya ki kal toa meane ye dekha he nayi ki mea uss jarne mea girne ke baad kese bacha or fir aage kya hua..

Koini raatko fir magical book pad ye dekhlunga par abi muje apni speed kese badami hea ye sochna hoga qki..
Mene pehlea b apni speed badane ki kosis ki thi training ke doran par ek limit ke baad wo bad he nai rahi hea..

Tabi khanjar ki awaj aai mere man mea..

Khanjar - tumhe apne speed ko badane ke liye mount thunder par jana hoga..
Or waha sirf dragons ya dragonholder he ja sakte hea..
Isliye tumhe apne rakshako ko dund unse is bareme baat karni hogi..

Tabi muje yaad aaya ki mera b ek rakshak dragon hea par mea usse kese dundungaor kaha. .

Tabi fir khanjar ki awaj aii .

Khanjar - Tumhe unhe dundne ki jarurat ni hea wo toa hamesa tumhare ass pass he rehte hea..
Bas tumhe unhe pehchan na hoga..

Aaryan - yaar par mere aas pass kitne log he mea unme un dono ko kese pehchanuga..

Khanjar - Ye toa tumhe he karna hoga ismea me tumhari koi help ni kar sakti bas itna kahaungi.

Apne ankho se nai balki apne energy source se unhe mehsoos karne ki kosis karo..
Tumhe wo khud mehsoos honge or fir tum unhe aaram se pehchan paoge.

Aaryan - tk ye b karke dekhunga .
Par muje ye baat batao kya mea magical book apne marji se use kar paunga..

Khanjar - Ha kar paoge par abi nai..
Abi tum wo hi chije dekh sakoge jo tumhare janna tk hoga....

Khanjar ki baate sun me soch mea padgaya tha ki book ka toa kabi na kabi pura sach pata chal jayega par abi in dono rakshako ko dhundna padega..

Koini pehlea clg jata hu nai toa wo nai class teacher meri band baja degi..
Waise b usse mujse kafi problem hea pata nai q..

Itna soch mea b apne car lekar clg ke taraf chalagaya..
very nice update bhai
 
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Bhai aap Devanjali story re start kare
 

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Update 31

Koini pehlea clg jata hu nai toa wo nai class teacher meri band baja degi..
Waise b usse mujse kafi problem hea pata nai q..

Itna soch mea b apne car lekar clg ke taraf chalagaya..

Ab aage..

Yaha se kai dur kailash ke pahodo mea..
Agoriyo ka ek kabila tha.


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Waha kuch agori apas mea beth baate kar rahe the
Tabi unke piche se ek agori aaya..
Jo dikhne mea unka leader lag raha tha
Proud Of You Reaction GIF

Usne un sabi agoriyo se kaha..

Agori L - Waqt aagaya he sathiyo..
Ab wo tantrik sadhna mea leen hea yahi waqt he us dev kanya ko marne ka warna is sristi ke vinash hone se koi rok ni payega..

Unke leader ki baat sun sabi agoriyo ne apne apne trisul uthaliye or hava me karte huye hukare bharne lage..

Aahoo..ahhoooo..ahhoooo..

Fir wo sabi aage badgaye apne lakshya ke taraf..

Or yaha mea in sab se bekhabar clg ke parking mea pohach gaya jaha sagar or ankit mera he wait kar rahe the..

Waise toa mere or b bohot se dost the par nikki ke sath huye hadse ke baad mea sagar or ankit ke alawa kisi se b baat ni karta tha..

Khair ham tino aise he idar udar ki baate karte huye apne class mea pohache jaha..
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Jaha hamari nayi class teacher jo ki hamri eng mam b thi wo bench par beth kar pada rahi thi..

Tabi mene mam ki permission mangte huye kaha
Aaryan - may i come in miss..

Mene ye baat bade he pyaar se kahi thi par na jane kya pata ye miss ko mujse problem thi jo jab se aayi hea mere he piche padi hea..

Abi b ham tino ko gate ke bahar khada dekh pehlea toa mam ke face par smile aayi..

Bas saala idar he
Idar he galti hogayi salla..


Aise toa mea bada sakt lounda hu..
Par salla is khanjar ko apnane ke wajase mere dekhneka najariya he badal gaya tha or kya..

Me pigal gaya..

Or mam ke hushan ka didar karne lagga..
Kya kayamat dah rahi thi is waqt mam..

Mea abi mam ko dekhne mea he khoya tha tabi mam boli..

Mam - sagar ankit come in n u mr.aaryan..

Yaha tak toa bade pyaar se boli muje lagga muje b andar aane ko bolegi isliye mea b indono ke sath apne bench ke taraf jane lagga par mam ne toa bichme he rokte huye kaha..

Mam - kaha chaldiye mr.aarayn i didn't allowed you to enter the class
Or itna he kehte he usne

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Gate ke taraf ishara karte huye kaha..

Mam - get out of my class...

Mea kuch keh pata usse pehlea wo fir boli..

Mam - First learn to stay in discipline and then come in ma class..
Now without uttering a word get out..
And meet me after class in ma cabin(yaha batadu ki hamara clg goa ka sabse badda clg hea so yaha sabi head faculties ko unka alag cabin diya gaya tha)

Ab mea kya karta kamini nea pure class ke saamne tisri baar izaat ka bajipala kiya tha or aaj toa bahar he nikal diya..

Class ke bahar aakar mea sidha canteen mea chala gaya or waha jakar coffe pite huye mam ke bareme soch ne laga.

Aaryan Man me - Kya patta ye mam kis janam ka badla lea rahi hea..
Dikhne mea deko kitni sundar haye haye..
Man karta he bas dekhta rahu..
Par
Juban se puri tikhi mirchi hea..
Ab pata ni apne cabin mea q bulaya hea isne..
Jo b ho aaj toa puch ke rahunga ki isse problem kya hea mujse..
Jabse aayi hea nah doke piche pad gayi hea..

Yahi sab sochte sochte mea canteen mea bacha kucha lecture gujara bell hone tak or fir..
 

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Update 29

Meare ankh se lagatar aansu nikal rahe the or idar maa muje apne god me uthakar nadi par karne ki kosis kar rahi thi..

Maa abi aadhe raste b ni pohachi thi ke tabi piche se chalang lagakar maa ke saamne koi aaya..

Ek baar toa usse dekh mea b dargayatha..

Ab aage..


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Maa ke saamne ek kale rang ka khukar bhediya khada tha..
Jo ki kafi daravana tha dikhne mea..

Wo dire dire chalte huye maa ke pass aaraha tha or maa nadi me piche ke taraf ja rahi thi muje hath me pakad..

Tabi bhediye ne maa ke upar japetamara or muje bachane ke maa piche ke taraf palat bhag ne lagi .

Tabi unka pav kisi pathar se lagga or vo nadi mea girgayi..
Or unke hatho se mea b chhut gaya..
Mea toa ro ro kar behosh ho chuka tha..
Par fir b muje bachana chahti thi isliye unhone pass pade pathar ko uthaya or us bhediye par mara..
Par us bhediye par iska koi asar ni hua..

Vo ab dire dire maa ke karib aane laga tha..
Par maa b ab bebas ho kisi chamatkar hone ke gujaris kar rahi thi upar wale se..
Tabi bhediye ne fir unpar japetamarra or unko............

Ye sab dekh mere muh se sirf ek dard bhari chikh nikali ...

Aaryan - naiiiiiiiiiiiii...maaaaaaaa..


Or mea uss book pakad rone lagga.

Udar bhediya maa ko marne ke baad mere taraf bad raha tha par mea already behosh ho chuka tha..
Or ek pathar ke sahara aada nadi me or aada us pathar par gira hua tha..

Tabi wo bhediye ne muje apne muh se pakada or nadi se behrahe jarne se niche fek diya..


Muje us jarne se niche fek wo bhediya nadi ke kinare aagaya or apne asli roop yani ki tantrik ke roop mea change hogaya..

Or apni khushi jahir karne ke liye jor jor se haste huye kehne lagga..

Tantrik - Akhir maar diya mene us rakshak ko..
Koi ni rok sakta muje na he dev na he mahadev..

Itna bol fir wo hasne lagga or tabi waha piche se ek full kale libhasmea aadmi/aaurat aai..

Or uss tantrik ke pass aakuch bola usnea..

Par muje uski baate ni sunai di..
Par uski baate sun jo tantrik ne kaha usse sun mera gussa satve asman mea pohach chuka tha

Tantrik - aao akhir tumhara b kaam hogaya..
Iss bache or uski maa ke marne ke baad..
Par muje ye ni samaj aaya ki akhir tumhari isse kya dusmani thi jo tum uske pariwar wale hone ke bawjood uss bache ko or uski maa ko marna chahte the..

Bas itna he sunna tha ki mene khajar ko apnane ka faisla liya..
Or apne man me kuch soch mene khanjar ko pukara or apne andar sama jane ko kaha..

Or meri baat sun khanjar b mere andar aagayi bina kuch bole..
Sayad usse pata tha ye sab dekhne ke baad mea usse apna he lunga qki agar muje tantrik ko harana he goa muje demon ki power ki jarurat thi qki tantrik khud ek rakshas hea..
Or mea apni power se usse kabi ni hara pata..

Ye baat khanjar ke mere andar aate he muje samaj aagayi..
Yahi nai muje bohot kuch aisa b
Pata chala jo muje sayad he kabi aata ya pata chalta...

Khanjar ke mere andar sama te waqt us hall mea ek tej nilli roshni chamki or dire dire wo roshni ka aakar badal ne lagga or jab mene uss roshni ke taraf dekha toa samne khade saks ne kaha..

Saksh - Aakhir tumne apna dil chod dimag use karna sikh liya hea...

Muje uski bate jara b achi nai lagti isliye mene kaha .

Aaryan - Pehli baat toa ye mea na sirf apne dimag ki balki dil ki b suni hea..
Qki mera dil or dimag ek he baat keh rahe the ke khanjar ko apnauu..
Or dusri tum muje bar bar aakar sirf aadhi adhuari baat batati ho ya order dekar chali jati ho..
Ab ye ni chalega..
Tum muje apne bareme sab kuch batao aakhir mea kon hu kya hu..
Mera wajood kya hea...
Or is khanjar me mujme samane ke baad itna toa muje patta chal gaya he ki..
Ye tantrik ko mere life mea layagaya hea ya yuh kahu ki muje insab ki life mea janbujkar daala gaya hea..
Aakhir q kiya gaya he mere sath aisa..
Batao muje tum..

Sakhs - tum is waqt gusse mea ho isliye aisa bol rahe ho..
Waqt aane par tumhe khud pata chalega ki tum kon ho..
Or ye sab q ho raha hea..
Or tumhe in sabki life mea q dalla gaya hea..
Mea bas ye keheneaayi thi ki tantrik ko marne se pehlea tumhe training karni hogi or khanjar ki powers par kabu pana hoga..

Tum khanjar ki sari powers tabhi use kar paoge jab tumhara kawach tumhare pass hoga..
Qki khanjar ki power tumne he pichle janam mea tumhare kawach se jodi thi..
Or ab wo kawach us tantrik ke pass he or iss khanjar ke alawa us tantrik par kisi b hatyar ka asar ni hoga..
Isliye ab tumhe apne speed ko badana hoga..
Tumhe abb bijli se b tej banna hoga taki tum apni furti se ye khanjar se us tantrik ko hara sako.

Itna bol tigress waha se gayab hogai or mea yaha apne aap se bola..
Aaryan- salla fir hukum suna ke cgali gayi..
Agli baar milegi toa iss b dekh lunga..
Filal ghar chalna chahiye muje kafi der ho chuki hea yaha..

Note- khanjar ko pane ke baad mera dimag kafi shant or tej chalne lagga tha..
Isliye abi mea kafi cool tha..
Meri cool hone ka karan aaplogon ko next update mea pata chalega..
nice update
 

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Update 31

Koini pehlea clg jata hu nai toa wo nai class teacher meri band baja degi..
Waise b usse mujse kafi problem hea pata nai q..

Itna soch mea b apne car lekar clg ke taraf chalagaya..

Ab aage..

Yaha se kai dur kailash ke pahodo mea..
Agoriyo ka ek kabila tha.


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Waha kuch agori apas mea beth baate kar rahe the
Tabi unke piche se ek agori aaya..
Jo dikhne mea unka leader lag raha tha
Proud Of You Reaction GIF

Usne un sabi agoriyo se kaha..

Agori L - Waqt aagaya he sathiyo..
Ab wo tantrik sadhna mea leen hea yahi waqt he us dev kanya ko marne ka warna is sristi ke vinash hone se koi rok ni payega..

Unke leader ki baat sun sabi agoriyo ne apne apne trisul uthaliye or hava me karte huye hukare bharne lage..

Aahoo..ahhoooo..ahhoooo..

Fir wo sabi aage badgaye apne lakshya ke taraf..

Or yaha mea in sab se bekhabar clg ke parking mea pohach gaya jaha sagar or ankit mera he wait kar rahe the..

Waise toa mere or b bohot se dost the par nikki ke sath huye hadse ke baad mea sagar or ankit ke alawa kisi se b baat ni karta tha..

Khair ham tino aise he idar udar ki baate karte huye apne class mea pohache jaha..
Holiday Confetti GIF by Little Mix

Jaha hamari nayi class teacher jo ki hamri eng mam b thi wo bench par beth kar pada rahi thi..

Tabi mene mam ki permission mangte huye kaha
Aaryan - may i come in miss..

Mene ye baat bade he pyaar se kahi thi par na jane kya pata ye miss ko mujse problem thi jo jab se aayi hea mere he piche padi hea..

Abi b ham tino ko gate ke bahar khada dekh pehlea toa mam ke face par smile aayi..

Bas saala idar he
Idar he galti hogayi salla..


Aise toa mea bada sakt lounda hu..
Par salla is khanjar ko apnane ke wajase mere dekhneka najariya he badal gaya tha or kya..

Me pigal gaya..

Or mam ke hushan ka didar karne lagga..
Kya kayamat dah rahi thi is waqt mam..

Mea abi mam ko dekhne mea he khoya tha tabi mam boli..

Mam - sagar ankit come in n u mr.aaryan..

Yaha tak toa bade pyaar se boli muje lagga muje b andar aane ko bolegi isliye mea b indono ke sath apne bench ke taraf jane lagga par mam ne toa bichme he rokte huye kaha..

Mam - kaha chaldiye mr.aarayn i didn't allowed you to enter the class
Or itna he kehte he usne

Meagan Good GIF by Harlem

Gate ke taraf ishara karte huye kaha..

Mam - get out of my class...

Mea kuch keh pata usse pehlea wo fir boli..

Mam - First learn to stay in discipline and then come in ma class..
Now without uttering a word get out..
And meet me after class in ma cabin(yaha batadu ki hamara clg goa ka sabse badda clg hea so yaha sabi head faculties ko unka alag cabin diya gaya tha)

Ab mea kya karta kamini nea pure class ke saamne tisri baar izaat ka bajipala kiya tha or aaj toa bahar he nikal diya..

Class ke bahar aakar mea sidha canteen mea chala gaya or waha jakar coffe pite huye mam ke bareme soch ne laga.

Aaryan Man me - Kya patta ye mam kis janam ka badla lea rahi hea..
Dikhne mea deko kitni sundar haye haye..
Man karta he bas dekhta rahu..
Par
Juban se puri tikhi mirchi hea..
Ab pata ni apne cabin mea q bulaya hea isne..
Jo b ho aaj toa puch ke rahunga ki isse problem kya hea mujse..
Jabse aayi hea nah doke piche pad gayi hea..

Yahi sab sochte sochte mea canteen mea bacha kucha lecture gujara bell hone tak or fir..
nice update bhai
 
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Alok

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Superb fantastic update Hero tera bhai....
Ek request hai please consider kare kyuki update thoda chota hai aur story ka pace bhi slow hai toh utna interest nahi aa raha hai isliye aapse nivedan hai ki thoda story ka pace badhiya aur update thoda bada dijiye....
Baki story bahut acchi chal rahi hai aur isse aise hi chalne dijiye

Dhanyawad
 

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Update 27

Ye sab padte huye meri ankho se bohot tej aanshu nikal ne lage qki muj jese anath ko inhone(lalita) maa ka pyaar diya apna naam diya..

Kuch der mea rota raha apne maa ke yaad me fir apne aap ko sambhal mea aage padne lagga..

Ab aage..

1st bua


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Sushmita singh
Age 40
Dikhne mea kafi sundar or dil se b ye apne pariwar ko bohot pyar karti hea or apne mata pita ko b par apne chote bhai ke ghar chodkar janeke baad inhone b apne pita se rista tod diya hea..
inke husband ka naam rajesh he or kaam ke silsile mea out of india he rehte hea jada tar.
Isliye waqt gujarne ke liye inhone ratan gadh ke he sabse badi unversiuni mea as professor sikhna suru kiya hea.

Inki b 2 betiya hea
Or dono twins hea...

1st vinita
Age 19(32-26-34)

fb65a74024b8f6d4c78d91fe7581b4a1Dikhne mea jitni sundar he utni he tej be hea..
Apne aap ko kafi smart samjti he ye aisa b ki wo he kafi smart par isi karan isme thora gamand b hea par dil ki kafi saaf hea or apni choti behen(wo b sirf 1 minute) se bohot pyaar karti hea..

2nd jinisha
Age 19(34-28-36)

Inki height thodi short he par issi wajah se ye or b jadda cute dikhti hea..
Ye hamesa apni height ko lekar chid chodi rehti hea par fashion ka bhut sawar hea ispar..
Isliye aaye din shopping karna pasand karti hea..
Ye b apne behen se bohot pyar karti hea par uski heigth jada hone ke wajah se jalti b hea...
Ye apne behen ke sath ussi clg me padti hea jaha inki mom lecturer hea

2nd bua
Keerti singh
Age 35(34-26-36)
Ka bemisal figure he inka


Malayalam-model-and-actress-Abhirami-hot-navel-show-in-saree-photoshoot-2Inko dekh kar koini kehsakta ki inki age 35 hea aakhir maintain he aisa kiya he inhone apne aapko..
Fitness freak hea yea..
Inke husband ka naam suresh he or ye b rajesh ke sath he business karte hea isliye aaye din inko b out off country jana padtay..
Khene ko toa sab kuch hea inke pass par maa ni ban paayi he ab tak 10 saal tak bohot kosiso ke baad b inhe koi result ni mila isliye inhone b ab umid chod di hea..
Ye apni behen ke sath he rehti hea..
Indono beheno ne apne pita se rista tod rakha hea isliye unki property pe b inko koi interest ni hea par fir b inke naam huye 7-7 gaavo se aani wali aamdani inke ac mea dalwayijati hea..
Jisse inke husband ne apna business start kiya tha..

3rd step bua
Payal


4465c744f9bf0ab2672cb2413853cc09Age 26 (36-26-36)
Inko dekh ke kisike b muh mea pani aajaye..
Dikhne mea bala ki khubsurat hea..
Par inki shadi inki marji ke bagair inki maa ne karwadi wo b sirf isliye ki saamne walla bohot bada businessman hea..
Khair inki shadi ko b 3 saal ho chuke hea par aaj b inko apne pati se nafrat he..
Isliye ye apna smay bitane ke liye aage ki padai jari rakhi hea inhone..
Inko b abi tak koi b bacha nai hua hea..
Inke pati ka rakesh hea or ye udaipur ke royal family se belong karte hea..

2nd step bua
Chaya


703b89a19a5ffe6668c3546468652d1fAge 22
(32-24-32)
Ek dam perfect figure hea inka na kahi se kam na kahi se jaada..
Upar wale ne bade itminan se inhe banaya he aisa lagta he inko dekh..
Ye b neelam ke sath mbbs ke last year mea hea par nature se neelam ke bilkul ulat hea..
Ye bohot he ghamandi hea..
Or apne se niche logon ki jara b ijjat ni karti hea...
Ye apne ma papa ke sath he ratan gadh ki haveli mea rehti hea..



Yaha tak padne ke baad mea sochne lagga ki mere pariwar mea itne log he par papa ne kabi b jikar b ni kiya na hi inme se koi kabi hamse milne aaya hea..

Jarur iski koi waja rahi hogi..
Abi apne aap se itna he bola tha ki fir panna palta or isbar mere saamne kuch drishya dikhai dea rahe the jisse dekh mea bohot chaunk gaya tha or mere ankho me gusse ke angare jal rahe the..
Meri puri body ke nashe filme lagi or mera gussa satve aasman par pohach chuka tha..

Tab mere muh se sirf itna he nikla..
Khanjar me tumhe apna ta hu..
Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
 

Naik

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Jarur iski koi waja rahi hogi..
Abi apne aap se itna he bola tha ki fir panna palta or isbar mere saamne kuch drishya dikhai dea rahe the jisse dekh mea bohot chaunk gaya tha or mere ankho me gusse ke angare jal rahe the..
Meri puri body ke nashe filme lagi or mera gussa satve aasman par pohach chuka tha..

Tab mere muh se sirf itna he nikla..
Khanjar me tumhe apna ta hu..

Ab aage..

Few moments back..

Jaise he panna palta toa mere samne us page par ek drishya aaya (like video)
Jismea maa papa se jagad rahi thi kisi baat par..
Par papa ne unki ek naa suni..
Or wo apne room mea chalegaye or darwaza band kardiya..
Bahar mom bethkar ro rahi thi..
Or kuch toa boo rahi thi par muje sunayi ni dea raha tha..
Tabi mom bahar jane lagi tabi waha mea agaya tha or mom ka pallu pakad ne lagga..
Mom ne ek bar meri taraf dekha or unki ankho se fir aanshu aagaye..
Or fir kuch toa bole par yaar awaj he ni aarahi thi Tabi mea book se bola .

Aaryan - yaar awaj q ni aari kuch toa kar na..

Tabi khanjar boli .

Khanjar - Tumhe wo he chije sunayi degi jo tumhe sunni chahiye...

Tabi maa ne muje god mea liya or muje uthakar bahar ki or chaldior apni car mea beth car chalane lagi..

Tabi book me drishya change hua..
Or isbar book mea ek daravne se dikhne wale aadmi ko dikhaya

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Jo kafi daravana dikh raha tha..
Tabi uske piche se ek buddha aadmi aaya or usse kaha..
B aadmi - Andhaksur tumhe agar panch bhuto (jal agni prithvi wayu or aasman ki saktiya)ko kabu mea karna hea toa tumhe uske rakshak ko marna hoga..
Wo b usske taqatwar hone se pehlea..
Anyata us dev kanya ke janam ke baad tumhara usse marna muskil hoga..

Tabi Andhakasur(tantrik) piche palta or apni daravni awaj mea bola .

Andhakasur - Mea kisi ko b mere lakshya ke aage ni aanedungaaa...
Muje prithvi or jinlok par kabu karne se koi ni rok sakta...
Or uss rakshak ko b marna hoga..

Itna bol wo daravni hasi hasne lagga..
Uski hasi itni daravni thi ki us budhe aadmi ko b ek bar toa dar lagne laga..

Tabi Andhaksur waha se gayab hoagaya..

Idar mea or maa gadhi mea beth kahi jaa rahe the..
Or maa phone par kisi sea baat kar rahi thi or ro rahi thi..

Tabi hamare car ke saamne koi aaya jisse maa ne turant brake lagaya..
Or car skate hone lagi..
Or gol gol gumne lagi..
Mea car mea beth ro raha tha..
Or maa kafi gahrayi hui thi..
Ke tabi..
Maa ne muje apni god mea uthaya or jungle ke taraf doudne lagi..


Yaha muje ab tak ni dikha tha ki aisa kya dekha tha jo maa aise doud rahi thi..
Tabi maa jungle .mea doudte doudte nadi ke pass pohach gayi..

Is waqt maa kafi dari hui thi or mea ro raha tha tabi maa ne kaha..

Maa - He bholenath mere bache ko bachlo..
Chaho toa muje mardo..
Par mere bache ko bachalo bholenath mere bache ko bachalo..

Ma ki baat sun meri ankho mea aasu aane lage..
Aakhir kaise koi dusre ke bache ko itna pyaar kar sakta he ki uske liye apni jaan b dene ko tayar hojaye..

Mea ye sab dekhkar apne aap ko kafi bebas mehsoos kar raha tha ki..
Mere wajase maa ke sath ye sab hua or mea kuch kar b ni paa raha tha..

Meare ankh se lagatar aansu nikal rahe the or idar maa muje apne god me uthakar nadi par karne ki kosis kar rahi thi..

Maa abi aadhe raste b ni pohachi thi ke tabi piche se chalang lagakar maa ke saamne koi aaya..

Ek baar toa usse dekh mea b dargayatha..
Bahot behtareen shaandaar update
 
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