Adultery MERI JINDAGI.....MERI MAA NE BADAL DI....(COMPLETE)

[Mr.007]

Hello Mitron.

Agar aap logo ko ye kahani pasand nahi aa rahi to bata dijiye, main kyo bekaar me samay khraab karu, kuch aur likhna suru kar duga.

Chaliye, jaldi hi isko end kar deta hu.

Dhanyawaad.

Bhai kahani bohot hi achhi hai par jo incest pasand karte hai unhe ye samaj nahi aata par story achhi hai aap ki muje pasand hai or aap ne Kamal ki likhi hai aap ne aadi or shourabh ko bohot hi mast dikhaya hai baki agar aap kahani end karna chahte hai to ise ek achhe Cuckold end pe karna jis me sab khush ho beta bhi maa bhi sab baki jaisi aap ki marji​

 

[Saadat noor]

Amazing story keep it up carry on

 

[THE_PHENOM]

Jabardast update bhai

Dhanyawaad Mitra.

 

[THE_PHENOM]

Bhai kahani bohot hi achhi hai par jo incest pasand karte hai unhe ye samaj nahi aata par story achhi hai aap ki muje pasand hai or aap ne Kamal ki likhi hai aap ne aadi or shourabh ko bohot hi mast dikhaya hai baki agar aap kahani end karna chahte hai to ise ek achhe Cuckold end pe karna jis me sab khush ho beta bhi maa bhi sab baki jaisi aap ki marji​

Theek hai, sochta hu, ek acche end ke sath hi finish karuga.

Dhanyawaad.

 

[THE_PHENOM]

Amazing story keep it up carry on

Mujhe lagta hai ki readers ko kuch sahi nhi lag rahi, fir bhi main aise hi khatm nhi karuga, khatm hogi to acche end ke sath.

Dhanyawaad.

 

[Saadat noor]

Mujhe lagta hai ki readers ko kuch sahi nhi lag rahi, fir bhi main aise hi khatm nhi karuga, khatm hogi to acche end ke sath.

Dhanyawaad.

Story bahut hi badhiya chal rahi hai aap likhte raho

 

[khemucha]

Hello Mitron.

Agar aap logo ko ye kahani pasand nahi aa rahi to bata dijiye, main kyo bekaar me samay khraab karu, kuch aur likhna suru kar duga.

Chaliye, jaldi hi isko end kar deta hu.

Dhanyawaad.

bhai itne gaap se updates aayenge to kuch readers doosre bagaano me chale jayenge na ... updates ki raftar jab fir se pehale jaisi ho jayegi to readers ke comments bhi ayenge ... baaki aapki marzi ... vaise bhi chaar paanch kahaniya ek saath chalana koi asaan kaam nahi hai mitra ...

 

[THE_PHENOM]

Story bahut hi badhiya chal rahi hai aap likhte raho

Abhi to likhuga hi, aise hi khatm nhi karuga, dekhte hai ek perfect end kaha milta hai.

Dhanyawaad.

 

[THE_PHENOM]

bahi itne gaap se updates aayenge to kuch readers doosre bagaano me chale jayenge na ... updates ki raftar jab fir se pehale jaisi ho jayegi to readers ke comments bhi ayenge ... baaki aapki marzi ... vaise bhi chaar paanch kahaniya ek saath chalana koi asaan kaam nahi hai mitra ...

Gape ki baat to sahi hai, par kya kare, time har baar kam pad jata hai, reap life jaroori hai na.


Aur 4-5 kaha hai, sirf 2 story hai, aapko 4-5 kaha dikh gai.

Dhanyawaad

 

[khemucha]

Gape ki baat to sahi hai, par kya kare, time har baar kam pad jata hai, reap life jaroori hai na.


Aur 4-5 kaha hai, sirf 2 story hai, aapko 4-5 kaha dikh gai.

Dhanyawaad

haan time wali baat to sahi hai ... iss liye mai kabhi bhi kissi bhi writer se jaldi updates dene ke liye nahi bolta houn ... na delays par gussa ho kar ulta seedha bolta hou ... ya tanj kasta hou ... bas aapne reader interest kam hone ki baat ki to maine uski ek sambhavta wajah bata di ...

aur rahi 4-5 ki baat ... to 4 ke liye to mai sure houn ... kyonki yeh public hai yeh sab jaanti hai ... ... khair chodiye ... mai complain thodi hi kar raha houn ... aap bas likhte rahiye ...

... par ek feedback hai ... critique ... for the possible good of further updates ... aapki current do kahaniyon me sex kuch jyada hi mechanical aur unemotional dikhne laga ga ... as compared to the doctor wali aapki pehali kahani ... erotic ched-chaad ... seductive dialog ... deep seated hawas ... woh aurat ya ladki ki sharm ... unki adaayen ... unki chippi icchaen ... iss tarah ki cheezon ki jahlak kuch kam ho gai hai ... even in this story as compared to the first encounter between aadi and the mother ... to jyada comment nahi kar pata ... bas nice yah hot ya next bolne ki aadat nahi hai ... please see if you can add more eroticism to the debauchery on display ...