haan time wali baat to sahi hai ... iss liye mai kabhi bhi kissi bhi writer se jaldi updates dene ke liye nahi bolta houn ... na delays par gussa ho kar ulta seedha bolta hou ... ya tanj kasta hou ... bas aapne reader interest kam hone ki baat ki to maine uski ek sambhavta wajah bata di ...
aur rahi 4-5 ki baat ... to 4 ke liye to mai sure houn ... kyonki yeh public hai yeh sab jaanti hai ...
... khair chodiye ... mai complain thodi hi kar raha houn ... aap bas likhte rahiye ...
... par ek feedback hai ... critique ... for the possible good of further updates ... aapki current do kahaniyon me sex kuch jyada hi mechanical aur unemotional dikhne laga ga ... as compared to the doctor wali aapki pehali kahani ... erotic ched-chaad ... seductive dialog ... deep seated hawas ... woh aurat ya ladki ki sharm ... unki adaayen ... unki chippi icchaen ... iss tarah ki cheezon ki jahlak kuch kam ho gai hai ... even in this story as compared to the first encounter between aadi and the mother ... to jyada comment nahi kar pata ... bas nice yah hot ya next bolne ki aadat nahi hai ... please see if you can add more eroticism to the debauchery on display ...
