Adultery MERI JINDAGI.....MERI MAA NE BADAL DI....(COMPLETE)

[THE_PHENOM]

Very good update

Dhanyawaad Mitra.

 

[THE_PHENOM]

Bhai is story me sirf sex hi hoga ya crime thriller or revange ka koi scene hai ki aadi se koi badla le or use fasaye aisa kuchh kyu ki is me sirf sex hi dikh raha hai or long stories me boring lagti hai ye mera suggestion hai baki aap ki marzi story achhi jaa rahi hai kyu ki jis ki jubani story chal rahi vo to sirf hila raha hai or kuchh nahi kar raha or ye sirf story me ho sakta hai real me nahi

Bhai end me thoda crime thriller scene dalo jese kisi ka murder ho ya Aisa kuchh

Dekho mitra, ye story amit naam ka ek xf frnd likhwa raha hai, to wahi likhta hu jo uski soch hai, wo batata hai, main likh deta hu.

Par maine fir bhi kuch twist dalne ka socha tha, par saayad logo ko story utni acchi nhi lag rahi, to ab jaldi hi khatm karuga.

Dhanyawaad.

 

[THE_PHENOM]

No sir story bahut achchhi chal rahi hai aap update do isko band nahi karna

Abhi to update aayge, aise beechbme band nhi karuga, ek acchi ending ke sath hi khatm karuga.

Dhanyawaad.

 

[THE_PHENOM]

Waiting for update bhai..

Update jaldi hi karta hu mitra.

Dhanyawaad.

 

[THE_PHENOM]

Waiting

Update jaldi hi aayga mitra.

Dhanyawaad.

 

[Gokb]

Waiting for your update

 

[Sharad97]

Waiting

 

[Mr.007]

Dekho mitra, ye story amit naam ka ek xf frnd likhwa raha hai, to wahi likhta hu jo uski soch hai, wo batata hai, main likh deta hu.

Par maine fir bhi kuch twist dalne ka socha tha, par saayad logo ko story utni acchi nhi lag rahi, to ab jaldi hi khatm karuga.

Dhanyawaad.

Ok bhai jese tum thik samjo waiting for next update

 

[Incest_lover_]

Update bro

 

[baabyboy]

Bro update kab tak aye ga