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kya college life thoda detail me ho ya bas jaldi jaldi kuch aham ghatnao ke saath khatm kar diya jay

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A.A.G.

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Update 205

mai dekha ab palki nilesh ke saamne khadi thi aur sravan ke haath me mangalsutra tha. ass pass ke log khushi se nilesh ko ishara kar rahe the ki ab pahna do mangalsutra.
mai bhi ab apne sar dono hatho se pakde kursi pe baitha jamin ki taraf dekh raha tha aur ankhen band kiye soch raha tha ki jaldi se ye sab ho jaye. fir aage kya karna hai wo bhi plan banana padega. sravan se bina badla liye to mai use maaf karunga nahi.
mai ye soch hi raha tha tabhi ek awaj aaaya rukkkk jaooooo mai ye shaadi nahi hone dungaaaaaaaaaa.
mai jaise hi ye suna mai us ladke ke taraf dekha jo nilesh aur palki ke samne khada tha.
mujhse ek galti ho chuka tha jo mai tension me bhool hi gaya tha aur wo tha us ladke ko mana karna jise maine paise diye the palki ki shaadi tudwane ka.
mai nilesh ko ye bolna hi bhul gaya tha ki is ladke ko mana karna hai aur sayad nilesh bhi bhul gaya.
ab jo bhi ho mujhe, nilesh aur palki tino ko ye ahsaas hua ki blunder to ho gaya hai. jaise hi wo lakda chillaya nilesh ke chehre ka rang ud gaya.
nilesh fir turant apne aap ko sambhala aur mamle ko sambhalne ke liye bola-dekh ae ladke. chup chap yahan se jao nahi to jo maar maarunga jindagi bhar na bhulega. meri is se shaadi ho rahi hai. tu dafa ho.
ye sunte hi ladka thoda sakpaka gaya kyunki use ye to bataya hi nahi gaya tha ki nilesh use datega. use to pata tha palki use dategi.
wo ladka bola-ohhhh improvisation. khud se dialogue bol raha hai. yahan shaadi me hai to hero ban ne ki kosis kar raha hai. ab dekh mera talent.
wo ladka jor se pure emotion ke saath bola-mai ye shaadi nahi hone dunga. ye meri girlfriend hai aur iske pet me mera bachha bhi bhi hai. palki ke saath maine kayi din aur kayi raate gujari hai. yakin na aaye to pucho is palki se ki kaise hum dono humare khet me ek dusre ke bahon me duniya se chup kar raate bitatae the.
ye sunte hi pure hall me khusar fusar hone laga.
mai socha sala ye pure shaadi ki aisi taisi karke hi manega isliye mai jaldi se douda use rokne ke liye aur tabhi palki ke papa uthe aur chattak chattak karke us ladke ko ek thappad mare aur khichte hue bahar le jane lage.
mai bhi palki ke pita ke saath holiya aur use khichte hue madap se bahar le aaya aur do thappad mai bhi diya use.
mai palki ke papa ko bola-aap andar jaiye ise mai dekhta hoon aur use khichte hue mandap se aur thoda door kheto ki taraf le gaya.
mai bola-saale tujhe mana kiya tha na yahan aane ko fir kyun aaya yahan.
wo ladka bola-mujhe kahan kisi ne mana kiya. mujhe paise mile the to aana to tha hi.
mai ye sunkar thoda socha aur bola-tujhe nilesh ne phone nahi kiya tha.
wo ladka bola-phone kiya tha 3-4 baar lekin mai phone nahi utha paya. wo khet me kaam kar raha tha na isliye.
mai ye sunkar sochne gusse me bola-sala kismat hi kharab hai.
ladka bola- maine itna achha acting kiya. dekha aapne. kaise kitna emotional acting kiya. mujhe to nilesh ke dost ne baad me 10 hazar aur diye the isliye to maine apni acting me jaan laga di.
mai jaise hi ye suna mera dimag khanka.
mai bola-ab chup chap bhaag ja yahan se samjha. wo ladka chala gaya.
mai bola-sala nilesh tune achha bahut achha acting kiya lekin mujhse achhi acting nahi kar payega. tujhse bhi badla lunga.
wahi idhar nilesh ghoor ke palki ko dekhne laga jaise puch raha ho kya sachme tere pet me iska bachha hai kya. kyunki us ladke ne jis tarike se bola tha aisa lag raha tha jaise uska ek ek labj sach ho.
nilesh man me sochne laga ki kahi sach me palki ke pet me uska ya sravan ka bachha hua to wo kya karega. wo bachha puri jindagi uske paiso pe aish karega jabki wo uska bachha hoga bhi nahi. fir wo man me hisab kiya to use laga ek bachhe ko bachpan se lekar 20 saal ka karne me kam se 20-22 lakh to lag hi jayega aur kya pata bada hokar wo apne asli baap ke pass chala jaye.
fir nilesh ek baar gusse palki ko dekha jaise puch raha ho ki kya sachme tere pet me bachha hai aur bechari bas dar se na na me sar hilayi.
mai bhi ab fir se andar aa gaya. idhar nilesh apna mala gusse se gale se khicha aur todkar mandap ke agni me fek diya.
nilesh gusse me bola-mai nahi karunga tumse shaadi.
palki rote hue boli-mai sach bol rahi hoon wo mera boyfriend nahi hai. mera boyfirend to sravan tha tum bhi jante ho. ye sab baate wahan khade sablog sun rahe the. kisi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha kya kare kya bole.
nilesh bola-sravan tera boyfirend hai na to thik hai ja sravan se shaadi kar le aur wo palki ka haath pakda aur khich kar jahan sravan vina ko mangal sutra pahna chuka tha wahan le aaya. mai bhi uske piche piche bhaga lekin mai undono ke bich abhi nahi bol sakta tha kyunki mai na to nilesh ka ristedaar tha aur na hi palki ka. mai kuch bolta to uske ristedaar log mujhe hi gusse me pitne lag jate.
nilesh aur vina ab humare mandap ki taraf aa rahe the aur un dono ke piche bahut se log. idhar ek ladka khada tha jo sayad vina ka ristedaar tha wo nilesh ko bola-idhar kahan jaa raha hai. dikh nahi raha yahan shaadi chal raha hai.
nilesh uski baat ko ignore karte hue gusse me palki ko sravan ke pass lakar bola-teri girlfirend to ye hai na to tu is se shaadi kar.
is baat pe vina gusse me boli-ye kya kar rahe nilesh dikh nahi raha yahan meri aur sravan ki shaadi ho rahi hai.
ab idhar bhi hall me kisi ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. nilesh ki maa didi saath hi nilesh aur palki ke maa papa aur bhi kuch log jama ho gaye the.
palki rote hue nilesh boli-please shaadi mat todo.
nilesh bola-nahi mujhe tumpe bharosa nahi hai pata nahi tere pet me kiska bachha hai.
palki rote hue boli-mai sach bol rahi hoon mere pet me kisi ka bachha nahi hai yakin na ho to shaadi ke baad doctor se check kara lena.
nilesh ke papa nilesh ko bole-ye kya harkat hai beta. ye kya pagalpan hai. chalo chup chap shadi karo.
nilesh bola-dekho papa ye meri jindagi ka sawal hai. mujhe ispe koi bharosa nahi hai aur mai shaadi nahi karunga.
ye sab sunkar palki ek ummid ke saath ankhon me ashun liye sarvan ko boli-please sarvan tum mujhse shaadi kar lo tum to mujhse apne jee jaan se bhi jada pyaar karte the na. kya tum mujhe aise hi thukra doge.
mai dekha palki ke ankhon me ashun dekhkar sravan ko achha nahi laga. kahte hai na pahla pyaar to pahla hi hota hai bhulaye nahi bhulta aur wahi yahan mujhe hota hua dikha.
idhar nilesh wahan se jaane laga. uske maa papa sab us se samjhane lage lekin nilesh na ruka.
ab sablog ki najre palki, sravan aur vina pe tiki thi.
vina man me boli-jab yahi hona hai to yahi sahi. shaadi ke baad sravan ke saath saath iski bhi jindagi nark bana dungi waise bhi ye rahegi to mujhe noukrani ki jarurat nahi padegi. ghar ka sara kaam isi se karwaungi yahi sarvan ko choot degi badle me ghar ka kaam karegi aur saas sasur ka dekhbhal karegi.
vina aage aayi aur boli-thik hai mujhe koi dikkat nahi hai. mai nahi chahti mere chalte kisi ki jindagi barbaad ho. mere maa papa ne bachpan se yahi sikhaya hai ki dusro ki jindagi achhi karo chahe uske liye khud hi thode dukh kyun na uthana pade.
fir vina kisi heroin ki tarah aur aage aayi aur boli- mujhe pata hai koi bhi ladki apne pati ko kisi ke saath batna nahi chahti aur ye bhi chahti hai ki uska pati sirf use hi pyaar kare to mai ye bhare samaj me wada karti hoon ki mai kabhi bhi palki ka hak nahi chinungi aur kabhi bhi palki ko koi dukh nahi dungi. ise humesha apna maanungi aur humesha apne saath rakhungi.
ye sunkar to bahut si mahilaye bhavuk ho gayi.
hema ji ko to yakin hi nahi ho raha tha unki beti itni achhi hai.
mujhe to laga sala ye vina ko neta bana dena chahiye kyunki mujhe pata tha vina itni bhi achhi nahi hai jitna abhi ban rahi hai.
lekin lata chachi, aur sravni di ye sunkar gussa ho gayi aur boli-nahi ye nahi hoga. sravan ki shaadi sirf ek se hogi aur wo hogi vina.
lata chachi fir boli-ye to pahle bhi mere bete ko chod kar chali gayi thi ab ashoon baha rahi hai.
ye sunte hi palki udas ho gayi tabhi palki ke maa papa aur do tin ristedaar lata chachi ke pass aa gaye aur request karne lage. dheere dheere pura bhid do bhag me bat gaya. kuch log palki ke support me the ki uski jindagi barbaad nahi hona chahiye to bahut se log bol rahe the nahi nahi sravan ki ek hi shaadi ho. kuch log to apas me bhi bahas karne lage. pura shaadi ka mandap machli bajar ban gaya tha.
mujhe laga chahe jo bhi ho sravan ne jo kiya, amar ne jo kiya aur nilesh ne bhi jo kiya aur vina bhi abhi jonoutanki kar rahi hai lekin sravni ki jindagi barbaad nahi honi chahiye isliye mai bhi lata chachi aur sravni di ke pass chala gaya aur unko samjhaya ki please maan jaiye nahi to ye bechari ka kya hoga. aaj jo bhi iljaam ispar lage hai uske baad to is bechari ki shaadi bhi nahi ho payegi. please maan jaiye aur fir akhirnkaar ant me lata chachi maan hi gayi.
sravni ke papa mujhe sukriya bole.
ab palki ek baar fir sravan ko boli-please maan jao pleaseeee. palki ke ankhon me mote mote ashun dekh sayad sravan ka pyaar fir se jaag gaya aur wo bola-thik hai.
fir kya tha sravan bhai ka do shaadi ho gaya.
jab subah hua tab vidayi ka samay hua aur sab log gadi se ghar lountne lage. mai lata chachi se baat kiya ki vimal chacha ko ye sab chije aram aram se bataya jaye taki unhe koi tension na ho. vimal chacha jab jaage to mai aur lata chachi milkar aram aram se unko dheere dheere karke sab baate bata diye. unhe thoda sa ajib laga lekin lata chachi sab sambhal li. unhe koi shock nahi laga.
is shaadi se bahut log naraj the to bahuto ko baatchit ke liye naya topic mil gaya tha. akhir ek raat me itne kaand hue to logon ka manoranjan to hua lekin meri raat bhar halat kharab rahi. kuch log bahut khush bhi the palki ke liye.. dheere dheere sab log marriage hall se gaav aa gaye. bahut se ristedaar marriage hall se hi sidha apne apne ghar ko lout chuke the aur ab ghar me sirf karibi ristedaar hi bache the. jo dheere dheere karke jaa rahe the aur mai sabko vida kar raha tha. ab mai bhi khush tha ki kam se kam ek musibat tal gaya ab mujhe ye nilesh aur sravan dono ka ilaj karna padega. isi tarah subah se sham ho gaya aur mai so gaya kyunki mai kal raat se soya bhi nahi tha.
nice update..!!
palki ki shaadi toh ho gayi sravan se lekin jo sravan ke dimag me hai uska kya hoga aur nilesh ka bhi alag hi chal raha hai aur vina ka bhi alag hi plan hai..dekhte raja kaise handle karta hai..!! lekin yaha par raja bewkoof ban gaya kyunki jisne nagma aur uske pati aur beto ko sabak sikhaya woh sravan, nilesh aur vani jaiso ko handle nahi kar pa raha hai..!!
 

Devil king domnic

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Update 205

mai dekha ab palki nilesh ke saamne khadi thi aur sravan ke haath me mangalsutra tha. ass pass ke log khushi se nilesh ko ishara kar rahe the ki ab pahna do mangalsutra.
mai bhi ab apne sar dono hatho se pakde kursi pe baitha jamin ki taraf dekh raha tha aur ankhen band kiye soch raha tha ki jaldi se ye sab ho jaye. fir aage kya karna hai wo bhi plan banana padega. sravan se bina badla liye to mai use maaf karunga nahi.
mai ye soch hi raha tha tabhi ek awaj aaaya rukkkk jaooooo mai ye shaadi nahi hone dungaaaaaaaaaa.
mai jaise hi ye suna mai us ladke ke taraf dekha jo nilesh aur palki ke samne khada tha.
mujhse ek galti ho chuka tha jo mai tension me bhool hi gaya tha aur wo tha us ladke ko mana karna jise maine paise diye the palki ki shaadi tudwane ka.
mai nilesh ko ye bolna hi bhul gaya tha ki is ladke ko mana karna hai aur sayad nilesh bhi bhul gaya.
ab jo bhi ho mujhe, nilesh aur palki tino ko ye ahsaas hua ki blunder to ho gaya hai. jaise hi wo lakda chillaya nilesh ke chehre ka rang ud gaya.
nilesh fir turant apne aap ko sambhala aur mamle ko sambhalne ke liye bola-dekh ae ladke. chup chap yahan se jao nahi to jo maar maarunga jindagi bhar na bhulega. meri is se shaadi ho rahi hai. tu dafa ho.
ye sunte hi ladka thoda sakpaka gaya kyunki use ye to bataya hi nahi gaya tha ki nilesh use datega. use to pata tha palki use dategi.
wo ladka bola-ohhhh improvisation. khud se dialogue bol raha hai. yahan shaadi me hai to hero ban ne ki kosis kar raha hai. ab dekh mera talent.
wo ladka jor se pure emotion ke saath bola-mai ye shaadi nahi hone dunga. ye meri girlfriend hai aur iske pet me mera bachha bhi bhi hai. palki ke saath maine kayi din aur kayi raate gujari hai. yakin na aaye to pucho is palki se ki kaise hum dono humare khet me ek dusre ke bahon me duniya se chup kar raate bitatae the.
ye sunte hi pure hall me khusar fusar hone laga.
mai socha sala ye pure shaadi ki aisi taisi karke hi manega isliye mai jaldi se douda use rokne ke liye aur tabhi palki ke papa uthe aur chattak chattak karke us ladke ko ek thappad mare aur khichte hue bahar le jane lage.
mai bhi palki ke pita ke saath holiya aur use khichte hue madap se bahar le aaya aur do thappad mai bhi diya use.
mai palki ke papa ko bola-aap andar jaiye ise mai dekhta hoon aur use khichte hue mandap se aur thoda door kheto ki taraf le gaya.
mai bola-saale tujhe mana kiya tha na yahan aane ko fir kyun aaya yahan.
wo ladka bola-mujhe kahan kisi ne mana kiya. mujhe paise mile the to aana to tha hi.
mai ye sunkar thoda socha aur bola-tujhe nilesh ne phone nahi kiya tha.
wo ladka bola-phone kiya tha 3-4 baar lekin mai phone nahi utha paya. wo khet me kaam kar raha tha na isliye.
mai ye sunkar sochne gusse me bola-sala kismat hi kharab hai.
ladka bola- maine itna achha acting kiya. dekha aapne. kaise kitna emotional acting kiya. mujhe to nilesh ke dost ne baad me 10 hazar aur diye the isliye to maine apni acting me jaan laga di.
mai jaise hi ye suna mera dimag khanka.
mai bola-ab chup chap bhaag ja yahan se samjha. wo ladka chala gaya.
mai bola-sala nilesh tune achha bahut achha acting kiya lekin mujhse achhi acting nahi kar payega. tujhse bhi badla lunga.
wahi idhar nilesh ghoor ke palki ko dekhne laga jaise puch raha ho kya sachme tere pet me iska bachha hai kya. kyunki us ladke ne jis tarike se bola tha aisa lag raha tha jaise uska ek ek labj sach ho.
nilesh man me sochne laga ki kahi sach me palki ke pet me uska ya sravan ka bachha hua to wo kya karega. wo bachha puri jindagi uske paiso pe aish karega jabki wo uska bachha hoga bhi nahi. fir wo man me hisab kiya to use laga ek bachhe ko bachpan se lekar 20 saal ka karne me kam se 20-22 lakh to lag hi jayega aur kya pata bada hokar wo apne asli baap ke pass chala jaye.
fir nilesh ek baar gusse palki ko dekha jaise puch raha ho ki kya sachme tere pet me bachha hai aur bechari bas dar se na na me sar hilayi.
mai bhi ab fir se andar aa gaya. idhar nilesh apna mala gusse se gale se khicha aur todkar mandap ke agni me fek diya.
nilesh gusse me bola-mai nahi karunga tumse shaadi.
palki rote hue boli-mai sach bol rahi hoon wo mera boyfriend nahi hai. mera boyfirend to sravan tha tum bhi jante ho. ye sab baate wahan khade sablog sun rahe the. kisi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha kya kare kya bole.
nilesh bola-sravan tera boyfirend hai na to thik hai ja sravan se shaadi kar le aur wo palki ka haath pakda aur khich kar jahan sravan vina ko mangal sutra pahna chuka tha wahan le aaya. mai bhi uske piche piche bhaga lekin mai undono ke bich abhi nahi bol sakta tha kyunki mai na to nilesh ka ristedaar tha aur na hi palki ka. mai kuch bolta to uske ristedaar log mujhe hi gusse me pitne lag jate.
nilesh aur vina ab humare mandap ki taraf aa rahe the aur un dono ke piche bahut se log. idhar ek ladka khada tha jo sayad vina ka ristedaar tha wo nilesh ko bola-idhar kahan jaa raha hai. dikh nahi raha yahan shaadi chal raha hai.
nilesh uski baat ko ignore karte hue gusse me palki ko sravan ke pass lakar bola-teri girlfirend to ye hai na to tu is se shaadi kar.
is baat pe vina gusse me boli-ye kya kar rahe nilesh dikh nahi raha yahan meri aur sravan ki shaadi ho rahi hai.
ab idhar bhi hall me kisi ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. nilesh ki maa didi saath hi nilesh aur palki ke maa papa aur bhi kuch log jama ho gaye the.
palki rote hue nilesh boli-please shaadi mat todo.
nilesh bola-nahi mujhe tumpe bharosa nahi hai pata nahi tere pet me kiska bachha hai.
palki rote hue boli-mai sach bol rahi hoon mere pet me kisi ka bachha nahi hai yakin na ho to shaadi ke baad doctor se check kara lena.
nilesh ke papa nilesh ko bole-ye kya harkat hai beta. ye kya pagalpan hai. chalo chup chap shadi karo.
nilesh bola-dekho papa ye meri jindagi ka sawal hai. mujhe ispe koi bharosa nahi hai aur mai shaadi nahi karunga.
ye sab sunkar palki ek ummid ke saath ankhon me ashun liye sarvan ko boli-please sarvan tum mujhse shaadi kar lo tum to mujhse apne jee jaan se bhi jada pyaar karte the na. kya tum mujhe aise hi thukra doge.
mai dekha palki ke ankhon me ashun dekhkar sravan ko achha nahi laga. kahte hai na pahla pyaar to pahla hi hota hai bhulaye nahi bhulta aur wahi yahan mujhe hota hua dikha.
idhar nilesh wahan se jaane laga. uske maa papa sab us se samjhane lage lekin nilesh na ruka.
ab sablog ki najre palki, sravan aur vina pe tiki thi.
vina man me boli-jab yahi hona hai to yahi sahi. shaadi ke baad sravan ke saath saath iski bhi jindagi nark bana dungi waise bhi ye rahegi to mujhe noukrani ki jarurat nahi padegi. ghar ka sara kaam isi se karwaungi yahi sarvan ko choot degi badle me ghar ka kaam karegi aur saas sasur ka dekhbhal karegi.
vina aage aayi aur boli-thik hai mujhe koi dikkat nahi hai. mai nahi chahti mere chalte kisi ki jindagi barbaad ho. mere maa papa ne bachpan se yahi sikhaya hai ki dusro ki jindagi achhi karo chahe uske liye khud hi thode dukh kyun na uthana pade.
fir vina kisi heroin ki tarah aur aage aayi aur boli- mujhe pata hai koi bhi ladki apne pati ko kisi ke saath batna nahi chahti aur ye bhi chahti hai ki uska pati sirf use hi pyaar kare to mai ye bhare samaj me wada karti hoon ki mai kabhi bhi palki ka hak nahi chinungi aur kabhi bhi palki ko koi dukh nahi dungi. ise humesha apna maanungi aur humesha apne saath rakhungi.
ye sunkar to bahut si mahilaye bhavuk ho gayi.
hema ji ko to yakin hi nahi ho raha tha unki beti itni achhi hai.
mujhe to laga sala ye vina ko neta bana dena chahiye kyunki mujhe pata tha vina itni bhi achhi nahi hai jitna abhi ban rahi hai.
lekin lata chachi, aur sravni di ye sunkar gussa ho gayi aur boli-nahi ye nahi hoga. sravan ki shaadi sirf ek se hogi aur wo hogi vina.
lata chachi fir boli-ye to pahle bhi mere bete ko chod kar chali gayi thi ab ashoon baha rahi hai.
ye sunte hi palki udas ho gayi tabhi palki ke maa papa aur do tin ristedaar lata chachi ke pass aa gaye aur request karne lage. dheere dheere pura bhid do bhag me bat gaya. kuch log palki ke support me the ki uski jindagi barbaad nahi hona chahiye to bahut se log bol rahe the nahi nahi sravan ki ek hi shaadi ho. kuch log to apas me bhi bahas karne lage. pura shaadi ka mandap machli bajar ban gaya tha.
mujhe laga chahe jo bhi ho sravan ne jo kiya, amar ne jo kiya aur nilesh ne bhi jo kiya aur vina bhi abhi jonoutanki kar rahi hai lekin sravni ki jindagi barbaad nahi honi chahiye isliye mai bhi lata chachi aur sravni di ke pass chala gaya aur unko samjhaya ki please maan jaiye nahi to ye bechari ka kya hoga. aaj jo bhi iljaam ispar lage hai uske baad to is bechari ki shaadi bhi nahi ho payegi. please maan jaiye aur fir akhirnkaar ant me lata chachi maan hi gayi.
sravni ke papa mujhe sukriya bole.
ab palki ek baar fir sravan ko boli-please maan jao pleaseeee. palki ke ankhon me mote mote ashun dekh sayad sravan ka pyaar fir se jaag gaya aur wo bola-thik hai.
fir kya tha sravan bhai ka do shaadi ho gaya.
jab subah hua tab vidayi ka samay hua aur sab log gadi se ghar lountne lage. mai lata chachi se baat kiya ki vimal chacha ko ye sab chije aram aram se bataya jaye taki unhe koi tension na ho. vimal chacha jab jaage to mai aur lata chachi milkar aram aram se unko dheere dheere karke sab baate bata diye. unhe thoda sa ajib laga lekin lata chachi sab sambhal li. unhe koi shock nahi laga.
is shaadi se bahut log naraj the to bahuto ko baatchit ke liye naya topic mil gaya tha. akhir ek raat me itne kaand hue to logon ka manoranjan to hua lekin meri raat bhar halat kharab rahi. kuch log bahut khush bhi the palki ke liye.. dheere dheere sab log marriage hall se gaav aa gaye. bahut se ristedaar marriage hall se hi sidha apne apne ghar ko lout chuke the aur ab ghar me sirf karibi ristedaar hi bache the. jo dheere dheere karke jaa rahe the aur mai sabko vida kar raha tha. ab mai bhi khush tha ki kam se kam ek musibat tal gaya ab mujhe ye nilesh aur sravan dono ka ilaj karna padega. isi tarah subah se sham ho gaya aur mai so gaya kyunki mai kal raat se soya bhi nahi tha.
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Raja maurya

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mai dekha ab palki nilesh ke saamne khadi thi aur sravan ke haath me mangalsutra tha. ass pass ke log khushi se nilesh ko ishara kar rahe the ki ab pahna do mangalsutra.
mai bhi ab apne sar dono hatho se pakde kursi pe baitha jamin ki taraf dekh raha tha aur ankhen band kiye soch raha tha ki jaldi se ye sab ho jaye. fir aage kya karna hai wo bhi plan banana padega. sravan se bina badla liye to mai use maaf karunga nahi.
mai ye soch hi raha tha tabhi ek awaj aaaya rukkkk jaooooo mai ye shaadi nahi hone dungaaaaaaaaaa.
mai jaise hi ye suna mai us ladke ke taraf dekha jo nilesh aur palki ke samne khada tha.
mujhse ek galti ho chuka tha jo mai tension me bhool hi gaya tha aur wo tha us ladke ko mana karna jise maine paise diye the palki ki shaadi tudwane ka.
mai nilesh ko ye bolna hi bhul gaya tha ki is ladke ko mana karna hai aur sayad nilesh bhi bhul gaya.
ab jo bhi ho mujhe, nilesh aur palki tino ko ye ahsaas hua ki blunder to ho gaya hai. jaise hi wo lakda chillaya nilesh ke chehre ka rang ud gaya.
nilesh fir turant apne aap ko sambhala aur mamle ko sambhalne ke liye bola-dekh ae ladke. chup chap yahan se jao nahi to jo maar maarunga jindagi bhar na bhulega. meri is se shaadi ho rahi hai. tu dafa ho.
ye sunte hi ladka thoda sakpaka gaya kyunki use ye to bataya hi nahi gaya tha ki nilesh use datega. use to pata tha palki use dategi.
wo ladka bola-ohhhh improvisation. khud se dialogue bol raha hai. yahan shaadi me hai to hero ban ne ki kosis kar raha hai. ab dekh mera talent.
wo ladka jor se pure emotion ke saath bola-mai ye shaadi nahi hone dunga. ye meri girlfriend hai aur iske pet me mera bachha bhi bhi hai. palki ke saath maine kayi din aur kayi raate gujari hai. yakin na aaye to pucho is palki se ki kaise hum dono humare khet me ek dusre ke bahon me duniya se chup kar raate bitatae the.
ye sunte hi pure hall me khusar fusar hone laga.
mai socha sala ye pure shaadi ki aisi taisi karke hi manega isliye mai jaldi se douda use rokne ke liye aur tabhi palki ke papa uthe aur chattak chattak karke us ladke ko ek thappad mare aur khichte hue bahar le jane lage.
mai bhi palki ke pita ke saath holiya aur use khichte hue madap se bahar le aaya aur do thappad mai bhi diya use.
mai palki ke papa ko bola-aap andar jaiye ise mai dekhta hoon aur use khichte hue mandap se aur thoda door kheto ki taraf le gaya.
mai bola-saale tujhe mana kiya tha na yahan aane ko fir kyun aaya yahan.
wo ladka bola-mujhe kahan kisi ne mana kiya. mujhe paise mile the to aana to tha hi.
mai ye sunkar thoda socha aur bola-tujhe nilesh ne phone nahi kiya tha.
wo ladka bola-phone kiya tha 3-4 baar lekin mai phone nahi utha paya. wo khet me kaam kar raha tha na isliye.
mai ye sunkar sochne gusse me bola-sala kismat hi kharab hai.
ladka bola- maine itna achha acting kiya. dekha aapne. kaise kitna emotional acting kiya. mujhe to nilesh ke dost ne baad me 10 hazar aur diye the isliye to maine apni acting me jaan laga di.
mai jaise hi ye suna mera dimag khanka.
mai bola-ab chup chap bhaag ja yahan se samjha. wo ladka chala gaya.
mai bola-sala nilesh tune achha bahut achha acting kiya lekin mujhse achhi acting nahi kar payega. tujhse bhi badla lunga.
wahi idhar nilesh ghoor ke palki ko dekhne laga jaise puch raha ho kya sachme tere pet me iska bachha hai kya. kyunki us ladke ne jis tarike se bola tha aisa lag raha tha jaise uska ek ek labj sach ho.
nilesh man me sochne laga ki kahi sach me palki ke pet me uska ya sravan ka bachha hua to wo kya karega. wo bachha puri jindagi uske paiso pe aish karega jabki wo uska bachha hoga bhi nahi. fir wo man me hisab kiya to use laga ek bachhe ko bachpan se lekar 20 saal ka karne me kam se 20-22 lakh to lag hi jayega aur kya pata bada hokar wo apne asli baap ke pass chala jaye.
fir nilesh ek baar gusse palki ko dekha jaise puch raha ho ki kya sachme tere pet me bachha hai aur bechari bas dar se na na me sar hilayi.
mai bhi ab fir se andar aa gaya. idhar nilesh apna mala gusse se gale se khicha aur todkar mandap ke agni me fek diya.
nilesh gusse me bola-mai nahi karunga tumse shaadi.
palki rote hue boli-mai sach bol rahi hoon wo mera boyfriend nahi hai. mera boyfirend to sravan tha tum bhi jante ho. ye sab baate wahan khade sablog sun rahe the. kisi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha kya kare kya bole.
nilesh bola-sravan tera boyfirend hai na to thik hai ja sravan se shaadi kar le aur wo palki ka haath pakda aur khich kar jahan sravan vina ko mangal sutra pahna chuka tha wahan le aaya. mai bhi uske piche piche bhaga lekin mai undono ke bich abhi nahi bol sakta tha kyunki mai na to nilesh ka ristedaar tha aur na hi palki ka. mai kuch bolta to uske ristedaar log mujhe hi gusse me pitne lag jate.
nilesh aur vina ab humare mandap ki taraf aa rahe the aur un dono ke piche bahut se log. idhar ek ladka khada tha jo sayad vina ka ristedaar tha wo nilesh ko bola-idhar kahan jaa raha hai. dikh nahi raha yahan shaadi chal raha hai.
nilesh uski baat ko ignore karte hue gusse me palki ko sravan ke pass lakar bola-teri girlfirend to ye hai na to tu is se shaadi kar.
is baat pe vina gusse me boli-ye kya kar rahe nilesh dikh nahi raha yahan meri aur sravan ki shaadi ho rahi hai.
ab idhar bhi hall me kisi ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. nilesh ki maa didi saath hi nilesh aur palki ke maa papa aur bhi kuch log jama ho gaye the.
palki rote hue nilesh boli-please shaadi mat todo.
nilesh bola-nahi mujhe tumpe bharosa nahi hai pata nahi tere pet me kiska bachha hai.
palki rote hue boli-mai sach bol rahi hoon mere pet me kisi ka bachha nahi hai yakin na ho to shaadi ke baad doctor se check kara lena.
nilesh ke papa nilesh ko bole-ye kya harkat hai beta. ye kya pagalpan hai. chalo chup chap shadi karo.
nilesh bola-dekho papa ye meri jindagi ka sawal hai. mujhe ispe koi bharosa nahi hai aur mai shaadi nahi karunga.
ye sab sunkar palki ek ummid ke saath ankhon me ashun liye sarvan ko boli-please sarvan tum mujhse shaadi kar lo tum to mujhse apne jee jaan se bhi jada pyaar karte the na. kya tum mujhe aise hi thukra doge.
mai dekha palki ke ankhon me ashun dekhkar sravan ko achha nahi laga. kahte hai na pahla pyaar to pahla hi hota hai bhulaye nahi bhulta aur wahi yahan mujhe hota hua dikha.
idhar nilesh wahan se jaane laga. uske maa papa sab us se samjhane lage lekin nilesh na ruka.
ab sablog ki najre palki, sravan aur vina pe tiki thi.
vina man me boli-jab yahi hona hai to yahi sahi. shaadi ke baad sravan ke saath saath iski bhi jindagi nark bana dungi waise bhi ye rahegi to mujhe noukrani ki jarurat nahi padegi. ghar ka sara kaam isi se karwaungi yahi sarvan ko choot degi badle me ghar ka kaam karegi aur saas sasur ka dekhbhal karegi.
vina aage aayi aur boli-thik hai mujhe koi dikkat nahi hai. mai nahi chahti mere chalte kisi ki jindagi barbaad ho. mere maa papa ne bachpan se yahi sikhaya hai ki dusro ki jindagi achhi karo chahe uske liye khud hi thode dukh kyun na uthana pade.
fir vina kisi heroin ki tarah aur aage aayi aur boli- mujhe pata hai koi bhi ladki apne pati ko kisi ke saath batna nahi chahti aur ye bhi chahti hai ki uska pati sirf use hi pyaar kare to mai ye bhare samaj me wada karti hoon ki mai kabhi bhi palki ka hak nahi chinungi aur kabhi bhi palki ko koi dukh nahi dungi. ise humesha apna maanungi aur humesha apne saath rakhungi.
ye sunkar to bahut si mahilaye bhavuk ho gayi.
hema ji ko to yakin hi nahi ho raha tha unki beti itni achhi hai.
mujhe to laga sala ye vina ko neta bana dena chahiye kyunki mujhe pata tha vina itni bhi achhi nahi hai jitna abhi ban rahi hai.
lekin lata chachi, aur sravni di ye sunkar gussa ho gayi aur boli-nahi ye nahi hoga. sravan ki shaadi sirf ek se hogi aur wo hogi vina.
lata chachi fir boli-ye to pahle bhi mere bete ko chod kar chali gayi thi ab ashoon baha rahi hai.
ye sunte hi palki udas ho gayi tabhi palki ke maa papa aur do tin ristedaar lata chachi ke pass aa gaye aur request karne lage. dheere dheere pura bhid do bhag me bat gaya. kuch log palki ke support me the ki uski jindagi barbaad nahi hona chahiye to bahut se log bol rahe the nahi nahi sravan ki ek hi shaadi ho. kuch log to apas me bhi bahas karne lage. pura shaadi ka mandap machli bajar ban gaya tha.
mujhe laga chahe jo bhi ho sravan ne jo kiya, amar ne jo kiya aur nilesh ne bhi jo kiya aur vina bhi abhi jonoutanki kar rahi hai lekin sravni ki jindagi barbaad nahi honi chahiye isliye mai bhi lata chachi aur sravni di ke pass chala gaya aur unko samjhaya ki please maan jaiye nahi to ye bechari ka kya hoga. aaj jo bhi iljaam ispar lage hai uske baad to is bechari ki shaadi bhi nahi ho payegi. please maan jaiye aur fir akhirnkaar ant me lata chachi maan hi gayi.
sravni ke papa mujhe sukriya bole.
ab palki ek baar fir sravan ko boli-please maan jao pleaseeee. palki ke ankhon me mote mote ashun dekh sayad sravan ka pyaar fir se jaag gaya aur wo bola-thik hai.
fir kya tha sravan bhai ka do shaadi ho gaya.
jab subah hua tab vidayi ka samay hua aur sab log gadi se ghar lountne lage. mai lata chachi se baat kiya ki vimal chacha ko ye sab chije aram aram se bataya jaye taki unhe koi tension na ho. vimal chacha jab jaage to mai aur lata chachi milkar aram aram se unko dheere dheere karke sab baate bata diye. unhe thoda sa ajib laga lekin lata chachi sab sambhal li. unhe koi shock nahi laga.
is shaadi se bahut log naraj the to bahuto ko baatchit ke liye naya topic mil gaya tha. akhir ek raat me itne kaand hue to logon ka manoranjan to hua lekin meri raat bhar halat kharab rahi. kuch log bahut khush bhi the palki ke liye.. dheere dheere sab log marriage hall se gaav aa gaye. bahut se ristedaar marriage hall se hi sidha apne apne ghar ko lout chuke the aur ab ghar me sirf karibi ristedaar hi bache the. jo dheere dheere karke jaa rahe the aur mai sabko vida kar raha tha. ab mai bhi khush tha ki kam se kam ek musibat tal gaya ab mujhe ye nilesh aur sravan dono ka ilaj karna padega. isi tarah subah se sham ho gaya aur mai so gaya kyunki mai kal raat se soya bhi nahi tha.
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ab aaj to kuch hona nahi tha sham se raat hua. sab log khana khaye aur fir mai didi ke saath so gaya agli subah utha fresh hua khana khaya aur room me aa gaya aur baith gaya.
didi bhi kuch der me room me aa agyi.
didi-tumko to aaj punam ke pass jana tha na.
mai-nahi baad me jaunga.
didi-baad me kyun aaj kyun nahi.
mai-bas yu hi aaj man nahi hai.
didi boli-mujhe pata hai mai gussa hoon isliye tu nahi jaa raha. aur tere naa jane se mera gussa kam nahi hoga samjhe aur badhega.
mai bola-ye kya baat hua jao to bhi gussa na jao to bhi gussa.
didi boli-ye baat tumko kal sochna chahiye tha na jab punam ji ko bol rahe the ki kal mai aaunga. nahi bolte use ki aaunga. ab bol diye ho to wo intejaar kar rahi hogi aur tum nahi jaoge to na use achha lagega aur na mujhe.
didi fir boli-jada natak mat karo aur chup chap jao samjhe.
mai udas chehre ke saath bola-thik hai jaata hoon.
aur mai uth kar kapde badalne laga.
didi chup chap mujhe piche se dekh rahi thi aur chup chap kuch soch rahi thi.
didi man me boli-bahut badmash ho gaya hai bina bataye sab kaam karne laga hai aur thoda gussa ho jao to udas ho jata hai. is baar mai tere udas chehre se nahi fasne wali aisa saja dungi tab yaad rahega agli baar se kabhi hume bina bataye nahi jayega apni jaan jokhim me dalne.
idhar mai taiyar hokar nikalne laga to didi boli-sirf punam ji ke pass jaoge apna kaam karoge aur chup chap idhar aaoge. bich me idhar udhar kisi kaam se gaye to dekh lena aur aisa koi bhi kaam nahi karoge jis se tumhe khatra ho ya ladai ho.
mai bola-kahin nahi jaunga meri maa jada shak hai to tum bhi chalo. mere haath paav bandh ke le jana fir le aana.
didi boli-jada natak nahi ab jao.
mai ab gate se nikalne hi wala tha ki didi fir se boli-ruko.
mai-ab kya ho gaya.
didi mere pass aayi aur muaahhhh karke ek kiss mere hoth pe di.
mai to khush ho gaya.
didi boli-jada khush hone ki jarurat nahi hai mai abhi bhi tumse gussa hoon.
mai didi ko dekhne laga.
didi boli-ye kiss isliye tha ki tumhe yaad rahe mai abhi bhi tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon aur aise udas rahne ki jarurat nahi hai lekin saja to tumhe milega hi milega. ab chup chap jao.
mai bhi chup chap wahan se nikal liya. didi ke kiss se mujhe khushi hua ki didi bhi dukhi nahi hai bhale thoda naraj hai.
idhar mai to apna bike lekar nikal gaya.

ab aaiye chalte hai thoda samay me piche yani kal din ka samay.
dopahar ke lagbhag 3 baj rahe the. punam ji apni factory me apne office ke chair pe baithi hui thi. unke thik samne table pe mera bag rakha hua tha jise wo do din se dekh rahi thi. aur jab bhi bag ko gour se dekhti to unka dil jor jor se dhadakne lag jata aur wo dar jati.
unke man me baar baar aise khyal aate jaise mujhe meri didi jor jor se daat rahi hai aur didi jitna mujhe daat rahi hai utna hi mai punam ji pe gussa hote jaa raha hoon. aur fir achanak se unke cabin me mere do gunde aate hai aur goli chalate hai thayyyyyyyyyyy thayyy aur punam ji mar jati hai.
punam ji ke jahan me jaise hi ye khyal aata wo dar jati hai. lekin fir thik uske baad punam ji ko aise khyal aate hai jaise unhe do gunde kidnap karke ek ghar me le jate hai jahan mai apni jaan pe khel kar unki jaan aur ijjat bachata hoon aur sab gundo ko marta hoon fir ant me mai unke gulabi hothon ko chum leta hoon. ye khyal aate hi unke sarir me ek gudgudi si hone lagti hai. pichle 30-40 ghanto se ye dono khyaal baar baar punam ji ke jahan me aa rahe the kabhi wo dar jati to kabhi sharma jati.
har khyal ke baad unka dhyan apne phone pe jata wo baar baar sochti ki mujhe phone karu ya na kru. karu ya na karu. abhi wo ye soch hi rahi thi ki ek aurat punam ji ke office me ghusi aur ek file dekar gayi.
punam ji us file ko dhyan se dekhi to is mahine ka profit ka sara hisab kitab tha usme. yani punam ji ko jitne paise chahiye the naye factory ko kholne ke liye us se adhe aa chuke the matlab factory banane ka kaam suru kiya jaa sakta tha.
punam ji apne factory ke kaam ko aur late nahi karna chahti thi kyunki deva ke chalte already thoda plan late ho chuka tha lekin wo chahti thi ki wo ek baar mujhse baat kare. wo aaj bhi 2-3 ghante apne phone ko dekhti rahi aur apne pyaar aur dar ke khwab dekhte rahi lekin unme himmat na aaya. aur fir wo ghar chali aayi sath hi mera bag bhi le aayi. pichle do dino se wo mera bag humesha apne saath hi rakhti thi. aksar unka man karta tha mera bag kholkar mere kapdo ko dekhne ka chune ka use feel karne ka ki mera badan pe wo kaise lagte hai.
kuch der baad punam ji apne ghar me ek nighty me thi aur abhi bhi isi soch me thi ki phone karu ya na karu aur akhirkaar wo sochi-ab jo hoga so hoga mujhe dusri factory ka kaam suru karna chahiye aur wo mujhe phone laga di. phone ring hone laga. idhar mera phone ring ho raha tha udhar unki dhadkan badh rahi thi aur fir achanak se mera awaj aaya-hello.
punam ji jaise hi mera awaj suni wo bhul gayi unhe kya bolna tha. wo chup ho gayi aur unka dil aur tej tej dhadakne laga.
mai fir se bola-hello awaj aa raha hai.
punam ji ke mooh se achanak se nikla-sorry raja.

mai turant bola-its okay aapki galti nahi hai.
ye sunte hi punam ji ke dil me achank se umag bharne lag gaya.
punam ji boli-tumhara bag mere pass hai.
abhi punam ji aur kuch bol pati ki mai bola-aap kyun chinta karti hai mai. mai kal aunga aur....
idhar jaise hi punam ji bas itna suni ki mai kal aaunga unke rom rom pulkit ho gaya aage wo kuch sun hi nahi payi.
aur jab tak punam ji wapas se apne hosh me aayi tab tak phone cut chuka tha. maine unko kya kya bola kuch bhi unke kaano se andar naa ja paya. unhe to bas ye hi sunayi diya ki mai kal aa raha hoon.
punam ji bas apne room me bechaini me idhar udhar tahalne lagi unka dil jor jor se dhadak raha tha. punam ji ko apna tej dhadakta dil mahsoos hua aur unhe aisa laga jaise unhe dar lag raha hai. aur ye baat jaise hi unke dil aur dimag tak pahucha dono ne bagawat kar diya.
punam ji ke dil ne dimag se bola-is bewkoof ko samjhao dil sirf dar me hi nahi pyaar me bhi dhadakta hai.
dimag bola-mai kuch nahi karne wala. dar rahi hai to darne do usko.
dil bola-dekh usko bata nahi to tujhe khoon dena band kar dunga aur tu bina khun ke tadapne lagega.
dimag bola-arey bhai khoon rokne ki kya jarurat hai. tu bas dekh mai aaj se kal tak me ise kaise pura yakin dila dunga ye dar nahi pyaar hai.
dil bola-sabash mai khush hua ye le extra khoon aur dil jor se dhadka aur dher sara khoon dimag ke nashon me doudne laga.
idhar punam ji ko ab kuch samajh me hi nahi aaya ki unke saath kya ho raha hai unhe aisa laga jaise achanak se unka dimag kaam karna band kar diya hai aur unke saamne bed pe mera bag dikh gaya.
aaj unhe pata tha ki kal mai aaunga aur bag le jaunga aur wo apne aap par control na kar saki aur jaldi se bag kholi.
bag kholte hi unhe mera ek tshirt mila. wo mere tshirt ko nikali aur bade pyar se chu chu kar dekhne lagi. unhe aisa lagne laga ki wo sirf ek tshirt nahi hai us tshirt me mai bhi hoon aur wo sharma gayi. fir wo mere tshirt ko chumne lagi jaise wo mujhe chum rahi ho. aur 3-4 kiss ke baad unhe hosh aaya aur wo sharma ke uthi aur apna gown khol kar mere tshirt ko pahan li. punam ji ko aisa lagne laga jaise wo tshirt nahi balki mai hi unse chipak gaya hoon aur tabhi mera tshirt unke doodh ke pass thoda tight ho gaya kyunki ye ladko wala tshirt tha. jaise hi mera tshirt unke doodh ke pass akda unhe laga jaise mere tshirt ne nahi balki maine unke pyaare se chuchi ko daba diya hai aur wo ghabra kar jaldi se bed pe let gayi. punam ji ko aisa lag raha tha jaise aaj wo mere bahon me so rahi hai.
raat me unhe bahut achha nind aaya.
subah jab uthi to yaad aaya aaj mai aane wala hoon. wo jaldi se bathroom gayi aur se khoob achhe se mooh dhoyi. aisa nahi tha ki wo mooh nahi dhoti thi lekin aaj kuch jada hi saaf safayi pe dhyan tha. fir nahate samay bhi aaj do baar sabun laga laga kar nahayi fir shampoo se baalon ko achhe se dhoyi.
punam ji ko aaj bahut jada khush thi aur aise saj rahi thi jaise koi unka barso purana aashique aaj unse milne aa raha hai. fir wo ek towel lapete apne room me aayi aur dressing table ke saamne baith gayi.
sabse pahle wo ek hair oil li aur use achhe se apne baalon me lagayi. fir punam ji ki najar jaise hi apne badan pe gaya jo sirf ek towel se dhaka hua tha tabhi bahar khidki se ek hawa ka jhoka aaya aur punam ji ka towel halka sa uda lekin unhe laga ki unka towel hawa nahi balki mai khich raha hoon aur wo sharm se paani paani ho gayi.
punam ji fir turant bhag kar almira ke pass gayi aur ek khubsurat sa saree nikali use pahni fir dressing table ke saamne baith kar achhe se khud ko taiyar ki aur fir ek low heel wali sandle pahen li. punam ji apni khubsurati dekhkar ek baar khud hi sharma gayi aur jab ghadi me dekhi to 9 baj chuka tha.
punam ji jaldi se khana khayi aur bhgate hue office me aakar baith gayi. ab unhe bas mera intejaar tha. lekin unhe kya pata tha mai 10 baje to apne ghar se niklunga. wo baar baar ghadi ko dekhti to kabhi mere bag ko aur fir unko yaad aaya ki wo tshirt to ghar pe hi chut gaya. tabhi unko laga jaise mera bag dheere dheere bada hokar mujhme badal gaya aur mai unhe gusse me bola-batao kahan hai mera tshirt. tumne chura liya use bolo jawab do.
punam ghabrate hue boli-sorry sorry galti se chut gaya mai chor nahi hoon.
mai bola-tumhe saja milega aur mai jhuka aur unke hothon ko chumne laga. punam ji bhi josh me mere hothon ko chumne lagi aur jor jor se saase lene lagi tabhi unki ankh khuli aur wo bas hawa me hi apne hoth ko chumne wale andaj me banaye sisak rahi thi.
ye dekhte hi unhe thoda ajib sa feel hua aur bahut sharm bhi aaya.
abhi bhi unke saamne bag hi tha. wo bag ko ek thappad mari aur boli-hatt mujhe bewkoof banata hai.
abhi punam ji aise baithe baithe mere bag ko dekh rahi thi ki achanak se fir mera bag bada hokar mujhme badal gaya lekin ye kya mai abhi sirf ek trouser me tha upar se mera badan pura khula hua tha thik usi tarah jaisa punam ji ne mujhe gaav me dekha tha jab mai nilu aur bhaori ke sath khada hua tha deva ke gundo ko marne ke liye.
mera pet pe halke halke abs aur choudi chati dekh kar punam ji ke mooh me paani aane laga. punam ji dheere se aage badhi aur mere pet se lekar chati tak jibh se chat te hue chumne lagi fir mai apna haath unke mooh pe rakha to wo meri ungaliya bhi badi ada se chusne lagi tabhi mai chillaya niluuuuuuuuuu bhaoriiiiiiiiiii aur achanak se dono mere bagal me aa gayi. dono ke haath me donali tha dono ek saath goli chalayi thayyyyyyyyyy aur goli sidha punam ke sar pe laga aur fir se punam ji hosh me aa gayi. darasal punam ji apne hi unaglio ko apne mooh me dale chus rahi thi.
unhe samajh hi nahi aa raha tha kya ho raha hai. wo apna sar table pe rakh ke sochne lagi fir mere bag ko pakdi aur bolne lagi-tu chup chap nahi rah sakta har baar raja me badal jata hai.
wo is baat se anjaan thi ki unke khwab do ghante se chal rahe the aur mai unke cabin me ghus chuka tha aur unke bagal me khada ho gaya tha.
mai bola-is bechare bag ko kyun daat rahi ho punam ji.
meri awaj sunte hi wo turant hadbada kar khada hui aur mere taraf mudi tabhi unka sandle table ke ek side se lag kar mood gaya aur wo girne hi wali thi ki mai jaldi se apna haath unki taraf badhaya unhe sambhalne ke liye.
punam ji ke liye to mano ye sab chije bilkul slow motion me hone laga. unka pair muda aur wo ahhhh karke mere taraf girne lagi aur mera dono hath bilkul unke dono doodh ke side ko ragadta hua sidha unke kamar ke thik upar aur blouse se just niche laga. jaise hi mere nange haath unke nange kamar ko dono side se chua unke andar ek current sa doud gaya. itna hi nahi unki makhmali si kamar ko chute hi mera bhi sarir ne ek jhatka khaya aur mere lund tak signal pahuch gaya.
mai jaldi se apna haath unke kamar se hata liya aur bola-sorryyyy.
punam ji khud ko sambhalte hue boli-koi baat nahi and thank you.
punam ji fir turant boli-baitho baitho mai tumhara hi intejaar kar rahi thi.
mai bola-haan aur lagta hai mai thoda late ho gaya tabhi to aap mere bag ko daat rahi thi.
punam ji boli-arey nahi nahi wo bas bore ho rahi thi to time pass kar rahi thi.
punam ji itna bol kar chup to ho gayi lekin unhe abhi bhi apne dono doodh ke side me aur kamar pe mera sparsh feel ho raha tha. unke nipple bra ke andar hi tight ho chuka tha. unka jangh choot ke pass machal raha tha. unhe samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki unke saath kya ho raha hai.
mai jahan apna bag me paper nikalne me busy ho gaya wahi punam ji mere naak kaan hoth gaal ye sab dekhne me busy ho gayi.
mai jaise hi paper apne bag se nikala to dekha punam ji ghoor kar mujhe dekh rahi thi aur fir achanak se mera dimag me himani ji ka baat ghuma" ye punam tumhari dost hai kya. kosis karna ye shivani se door hi rahe" aur is baat ka matlab ab mujhe tab samajh nahi aaya tha lekin ab kuch kuch samajh me aaya.
mai turant bola-dekhiye jaldi se mai aapko sare papers de deta hoon fir mujhe kuch gundo ko marne bhi jana hai. ek ek ko ulta tang ke marunga.
ye sunte hi punam ji thoda dar gayi.aur mai khush ho gaya.
mai man me socha-chalo ye mujhse dari rahegi tabhi door rahegi.
fir mai unhe factory ke jamin ke paper de diya.
wo bhi fir apne hosh me aayi aur fir wo mujhe batayi ki wo factory ka kaam suru karna chahti hai. maine bhi bol diya koi dikkat nahi hai aur ab to wahan madad ke liye bhi kai log hai. aur fir punam ji mujhe is factory ka sara 6-7 mahino ki working profit loss ye sab ke chart aur bill dikhayi.
mai bola-ye sab aap hi dekho mujhe ap par bharosa hai.
fir mai kamini muskan ke saath bola-aapko to pata hi hai na aap mujhe dhokha dengi to mere do gunde aayenge aur fir thayyy thayyyy.
wo fir se dar gayi aur mai hasne lag gaya.
yahi mujhse ek galti ho gaya. jaise hi mai hasne laga wo mere chehre ko pyaar se dekhne lag gayi.
mai turant hasna band kiya aur bola-achha mai chalta hoon. aur mai apna bag liya aur jaane laga.
punam ji boli-jab aaye ho kam se kam kha kar to jao.
mai bola-nahi mai kha kar aaya hoon aur mai jaldi se wahan se nikla kyunki mujhe punam ji se door rahna hi sahi laga.
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mai punam ji ke ghar se nikla to sidha didi ke pass gaya nahi to didi gussa ho jati. fir hema ji ka kuch madad kiya aur fir khaya piya . ab chuki ghar me shaadi hai to kaam to hoga hi isliye dheere dheere ghar me sab log busy hone lage. aise hi din bitne laga. mujhe jab bhi samay milta mai didi ke pass pahuch jata lekin didi mujhe ek kiss bhi nahi de rahi thi. jab bhi mai unke karib jata to mujhe bolti ki koi kiss nahi milega yahi tumhari saja hai. ab hema ji ke saath bhi mouj karne ka samay nahi mil pa raha tha kyunki ghar me aur bhi ristedaar log aane lage the. main bhi ghar ke kaam ke saath saath shaadi me jo her fer karna tha uske planning me busy ho gaya. shaadi me palki ka nakli boyfriend ban ne wale ladke se bhi baat kar liya tha aur use 10 hazar diye the is acting ke liye. main in sab kamo ke bich ek baar madhav ji aur unke bete se bhi mil liya tha. wo dono bhi ab kaafi khush the humare coaching center me kaam karke. mai bich bich me sahar me bhi jitne log hai sabse baat kar liya. jahan rani, archana , ruhi mam ye sab pyaar se baate ki wahi shivani ji aur nirmala ji ne shikayat kiya ki mai unse milne nahi aaya. fir pratibha ji se aksar baat hota hi rahta tha isi tarah saat din nikal gaya.
aaj ka din khushi ka tha kyunki aaj chennai se maa aane wali thi humare pass aur delhi se sravni di aane wali thi gaav me. itna hi nahi aaj mera saja ka bhi akhiri din tha matlab kal se mujhe didi ke saath pyaar karne ka mouka mil sakta hai.
mai aur didi car se chal diye station maa ko lane kyunki bhai ne kal hi mujhe bata diya tha. mai aur didi samay se pahle hi station pahuch gaye aur train ke aate hi us dabbe ke pass pahuch gaye jisme maa thi. maa ko dekhte hi dil me ek ajib si khushi aa jata tha ankhon me chamak aa jata tha yahi haal maa ka bhi tha. khidki se hume panvi aunty aur auncle bhi dikh gaye. yahan train ka 15 minut ka time tha to 15 minut mai aur didi panvi aunty aur auncle se baat kiye. wo dono bhi hum dono se milkar khush hue fir train chal padi aur wo log chale gaye kyunki unhe sahar jana tha. ab hum tino matlab mai, maa aur didi the. mai maa ko jhuk ke paranam kiya to maa mujhe jor se apne gale laga li.
mai maa ke kaan me bola-maa ye railway station hai ghar nahi.
tab maa mujhse alag hui fir didi bhi maa ko pranam ki aur maa use bhi gale laga li.
mai bola-chalo maa chalte hai. aur fir hum tino railway station se bahar nikalne lage saath hi baate bhi kar rahe the.
maa hum dono ko boli-dekho to kitne patle duble ho gaye ho tum dono kuch khate pite nahi kya.
didi boli-maa hum patle nahi hue hai aap patli hui ho. aap ghar chalo ye 15 din mai aapko khub thoos thoos ke khilaungi lagta hai chennai me bhai ne nahi thik se nahi khilaya aapko.
maa mere taraf dekh ke boli-ye to yahi hai ise to khila.
did boli-kha kha ke saand to ho gaya hai aur kitna khayega ye.
maa boli-aeee aise nahi bolte apne bhai ke baare me.
didi boli-maa aap to kuch mat hi bolo. aapko jab bhai ke karname bataungi to aap bhi iski piatyi karogi.
mai man me bola-mar gaya. kahi abhi didi ne deva aur wahan ka sab bol diya to maa bhi gussa ho jayegi. pahle 7 din didi ne kuch nahi karne diya fir maa bhi 10 din na pyaar karne degi aur naa hi kisi ko mere pass aane degi aur gussa ho jayegi wo alag.
maa boli-dekho meena jhuth muth ka raja ko bura bhala mat bolo. mera raja beta to bilkul sona hai sona.
mai ishare se didi se chup rahne ko bola-to didi kuch nahi boli. aur hum tino apne car ke pass pahuch gaye tabhi piche se ek jaani pahchani aawaj aayi-arey maaya tu yahan.
wo awaj sunte hi hum tino ghume to humare saamne lata chachi, sravni di aur unke pati dev the. saath hi vimal chacha bhi the.
maa aur lata chachi gale mile fir mai aur didi lata chachi aur vimal chacha ko pranam kiye. fir mai sravni di ko bhi pranam karne ke liye jhuka to unhone mera haath pakad liya.
mai pucha-aur jijaji ke saath achha chal raha hai na didi.
sravni di boli-bahut achha.
aur mai didi ke chehre pe khushi dekh sakta tha. mujhe achha laga ki didi jijaji ke saath khush hai.
lata chachi boli-kaisi kismat hai. sravani ke shaadi ke samay bus stand pe mile the aur sravan ke shaadi pe abhi railway sation pe.
lata chachi hum sabko boli-ab chalo humare saaath sravan ki shaadi hai to 10 din ab wahi rahna hai.
maa boli-lekin mai to meena ke sasuraal aane ke liye aayi thi.
lata chachi boli-mai koi bahane nahi sunungi sirf vina ki hi shaadi hai kya sravan ki bhi shaadi hai aur tu mere sath chalegi baat khatm. aur wo maa ka haath pakdi aur apne car me baitha di.
didi boli-lekin chachi....
lata chachi didi ko bhi apne car me baitha di.
mai bola-lekin hum car laye hai aur hume car chalana nahi aata aur didi ke to kapde bhi nahi hai.
lata chachi boli-thik hai vimal chacha tumhare saath jayenge. tum meena ke kapde le aana aur inko car chalane aata hai.
ab lata chachi ke saamne na maa mana kar paayi na didi. aur wo sab log unke saath chale gaye. idhar car me ab mai aur vimal chacha the.
hum dono baate karte hue jane lage.
vimal chacha mujhse puchne lage aage kya krna hai aur mai unko apne aage ki padhayi ka plan bataya jise sunkar wo bahut khush hue. fir mai unse bhi unka haal chal pucha to wo bataye ki unhe high bp ho gaya hai. khane me parhej karne ko bola hai nahi to baad me dikkat aa sakta hai.
mai bola-aap apna khyal rakha kijiye chacha. abhi aapko humare bachhon ko bhi god me khelana hai.
chacha bole-haan haan tere bachhe kya unke bachhon ko bhi khela kar jaunga is duniya se. doctor ka kya hai jab jao duniya bhar ki chije bata deta hai aur dher sara paisa le leta hai.
isi tarah baat karte karte hum pahuch gaye ghar. jahan vimal chacha ek baar hema ji se mile fir bataye ki maa aur didi abhi wahan hai shaddi se pahle aa jayengi. fir wo mujhe bhi le jana chahte the lekin hema ji ne unhe mana liya aur mai yahi ruk gaya hema ji ke pass. aur vimal chahca didi ke kapde ka bag lekar chale gaye.
aaj hema ji ke ghar me bhi kuch aur ristedaar gaav se aa gaye the. ab ghar dheere dheere bharne laga tha. sham ko ek baar maa aur didi se mera phone pe baat hua fir maa didi wahan busy ho gayi aur mai yahan. shadi ki taiyari ab joro se chalne laga tha. card batne laga tha. isi tarah 3 din aur nikal gaya. ab shaadi me sirf 7-8 din bacha tha. mai ghar me ghoom ghoom kar un ristedaaro ki pahchan kar raha tha jo har baat me taang aada rahe the kyunki ye log hi shaadi me bhi taang ada sakte the. maine soch liya tha inme se jo jo pine wale hai unhe pahle hi pila pila ke tunn kar diya jayega aur jo ladies jada gyan de rahi hai unko khilane me busy rakha jayega.
mai aaj ek list banaya jisme wo sabhi ristedaar ke naam likh liya jo bina matlab ke sabko gyan dete the kyunki yahi log humare plan ke liye khatra the aur fir mai chat pe baith kar sochne laga ki isme koi agar problem khada karega to kaise nipatna hai kyunki itne sare logon ko manage karna samjhana bahut muskil ho jata hai.abhi mai apne hisab kitab me laga hua tha tabhi mere mobile pe ek message aaya.
mai mobile khol ke dekha to ye ek picture tha jisme mai vina ko kiss kar raha tha. aur background aur kapde dekh kar turant mujhe pata chal gaya ki ye photo to bas 8-9 din hi purana hai. ye us din ka photo tha jab mai vina ko hall me chum raha tha. fir mai dimag doudaya to yaad aaya usi din amar mujhe gusse me ghoorte hue gaya tha.
mai jaldi se mobile apni pocket me dala aur chat se niche ghar me gaya aur amar ko dhundhne laga. sab room me dekhte dekhte wo mujhe toilet ke paas mila. wo toilet se nikal raha tha.
man to kiya yahi saale ko patak ke koot doon lekin ghar me bahut log the. mai uska haath pakda aur use bahar le aaya fir mai use khichte hue thoda door kheto me le aaya.
mai gusse me bola-saale kutte ki dum ho kya kabhi nahi sudhroge.
amar gusse me bola-haan haan sab galti meri hi hai. sale tune meri biwi ko mujhse door kiya. mai chup raha. tune meri maa aur bahan ko mere khilaf kar diya fir bhi mai chup raha. ab teri itni himmat badh gayi ki meri bahan pe haath dale ye mai nahi hone dunga. tujhe to mai barbaad kar dunga.
mai gusse me pattakkkk se ek thappad uske gaal pe mara wo gir gaya aur apne gaal pe haath rakhkar bola-is baar mai darne wala nahi hoon. tune meri bahan pe haath dala hai bhale hi mai mar jau lekin tujhe to barbaad karke hi rahunga. teri barbaadi bas aa hi raha hai.
usen abhi itna hi bola ki mera phone fir se baja. call sravan bhai ka tha. call me naam dekhte hi mai gussse me ek laat mara amar ko.
mujhe pata tha tir ab kaman se nikal chuka hai wapas nahi hi hoga. ab bhugtaan mujhe hi karna padega.
mai phone uthaya aur jaisa mujhe shak tha wahi hua. udhar se gusse me sarvan bola-raja tu abhi mujhe mil coaching center me.
mai ek aur laat amar ko mara aur bola-tune sahi nahi kiya hai tu bahut pachtayega.
aur fir mai udhar se bhagte hue coaching center ki taraf jaane laga ki tabhi mujhe nilesh ka phone aa gaya.
mai chalte hue phone uthaya.
nilesh udhar se chillate hue bola-ye kya majak hai. pahle tumne bola ki meri shaadi kisi se nahi hoga ab palki bol rahi hai uski shaadi mere saath hogi.
mai-matlab.
nilesh gusse me chilla kar bola-matlab tere bhadwe bhai ne palki se shaadi karne se mana kar diya hai. ab palki mujhe bol rahi hai ki please shaadi kar lo. agar meri shaadi kahi nahi hogi to mera aur mere parivaar kahi mooh dikhane layak nahi rahenge.
mai bola-tum mujhe bas adha ghanta do mai sab thik kar dunga.
nilesh bola-jaldi thik karo aur apne backchod bhai ko samjhao plan na bigade. bahut mehant se plan bana hai aur paise bhi lage hai.
mai uska phone rakhte hi coaching center tak pahuch chuka tha. mai jaldi se andar office me aaya.
office me ghuste hi chatttakkkk chatttaaakkkkk do thapapd gusse me sravan bhai mujhe jad diya.
sravan gusse me bola-to yahi planning tha tera. tune suru se mujhe ullu banaya. tu chahta tha ki vina tere lund pe rahe lekin tujhe us se shaadi na karna pade isliye mere gale bandh diya aur mujhe palki naam ka lollypop pakda diya.
mai-aap pagal ho kya aap hi to us se pyaar karte the uske saath shaadi karne ke liye mare jaa rahe the.
sravan gusse me bola-haan mai pyaar karta tha palki se iska matlab ye to nahi ki tu mera fayda uthaye. apni rakhel ko mere gale bandh de.
mai gusse me bola-dekho juban sambhal ke baat karo aur vina ki ijaat karo. tune hi to bola ki tu vina ko haath bhi nahi lagageyga to kya wo puri jindagi bina mard ke rahegi.
sravan bola-nahi to kya sabse chudwati firegi aur mere ghar ka naam kharab karegi. tujhe pata bhi hai papa ko kal hi hospital le gaya tha mai regular check-up ke liye. doctor bola hai papa ko high BP hai sadme se heart attack aa sakta hai.
mai bhi ye sun ke tension me aa gaya.
sravan bola-dekho mujhe kuch nahi maloom ab meri shaadi sirf vina se hoga uske baad wo meri dharmpatni banegi. tu uske aas pass bhi dikha na to tujhe kaat ke rakh dunga. mujhe bas apne maa papa ke saath khushi khushi rahna hai.
mai-aur palki ka kya hoga.
sravan gusse me bola-mujhe nahi pata. mai pahle bewkoof tha lekin ab nahi hoon. usne mujhse pyaar kiya kyunki use laga tha meri sarkari noukari ho jayegi. fir mera noukari nahi laga to mujhe chod di. aur fir ab mai yahan kaam karne laga hoon achha kamane laga hoon to fir se pyaar jaag gaya. ye sab paiso ka khel hai. vina bhi paise ke piche hai. palki bhi paise ke piche hai. nilesh bhi paise ke piche hai to mai bhi paise ke piche bhagunga.
mai-aap pagal ho gaye ho.
sravan bola-chup saale. pagal mai pahle tha ab mere pass dimag hai. dekho tu jitne bhi fayde nilesh ko dene wala tha is shaadi ke baad wo sab tu mujhe dega. naye coaching center ka head mujhe banayega. taki mai nilesh ka senior banu aur puri jindagi palki ko dukh ho ki uska pati mere under kaam karta hai.
mai bola-pagal ho gaye ho kya.
sravan bola-agar tumne aisa nahi kiya to ye tumhari aur vina ki photo mai maa didi aur papa tino ko dikha dunga. mujhe pata hai tu maa aur didi aur papa ko bahut manta hai. wo log bhi bachpan se hi tumhe mujhse jada apna mante aaye hai. mere papa ko kuch hua to uski jimmedari teri. ye shaadi toota to jimmedaar tu.
sravan ka baat sunte hi mujhe 3-4 din pahle ka baat yaad aa gaya. lata chachi sravni di vimal chacha sab kitne khush the. mere chalte chacha ko heart attack aa jayega. lata chachi vidhwa ho jayegi. vina ki shaadi toot jayegi ye soch ke rona aa gaya mujhe .
mai bola-dekho bhai please shant ho jao aur dimag se kaam lo. jo bhi problem hai hum dono milkar soolve kar lenge. agar koi dikkat hai to vina se bhi baat kar lenge.
amar bola-use bhi bulaya hai aati hi hogi.
aur fir sravan bola-dekho naam liya chudail hajir.
idhar mere piche vina aa chuki thi.
vina boli-kyun bulaya mujhe.
sravan wo photo uske samne fek diya jise dekhkar uske bhi ankh bade bade ho gaye.
sravan bola-randi ab plan me change hai. ab sirf tu meri biwi banegi uske baad dekhna kaise mai randi bana bana ke lund pe kudata hoon.
vina gusse me boli- randi kisko bol raha hai harami. pagla gaya hai kya tu. waise bhi tujhe to sirf palki se matlab tha na. mai kisi ke bhi lund pe kudu tumhare gaand me dard kahe ho raha hai.
sravan gusse me bola-dekh chup chap mujhse shaadi karle nahi to dekhna sab barbaad kar dunga. tera naam ijjat raja ka naam ijjat sab kuch.
vina gusse me sravan ka collar pakdi aur boli-sale tu mujhe randi banayega, tu mujhe barbaad karega. tere jaise ko to mai apni juti bhi chatne nahi deti. mujhse shaadi karke mujhe randi banane ka shouk hai na kar shaadi tu mujhse fir dekh koun kya banta hai. tujhe pata nahi hai mere aur mere sapno ke bich jo bhi aayega use mai kachha chaba jaungi. ab dafa ho yahan se nahi to yahi gaad dungi.
sravan gusse me fufkarte hue wahan se nikal gaya.
vina gusse me boli-mai iski maa baap sabka wo haal kardungi ki ye log mere naam se darenge.
mai bola-dekho gussa mat ho. ye bura hai lekin inke maa papa bahut achhe hai.
vina boli-arey bhad me jaaye ye log. saale ye log mujhe dhmaka rahe hai aukat to dekho iski.
mai bola- arey wo chala gaya meri baat to sun lo.
vina boli-thik hai tu bol rahe ho to iske maa papa ke saath mai kuch nahi karungi lekin tumhe wada karna hoga shaadi ke baad bhi tum mujhe khush karte rahoge aur chahe jo ho jaye suhagraat to mai tumhare saath hi manaungi.
mai bola-pagal mat bano waise bhi sara kaam kharab ho raha hai tum kaam aur mat bigado.
vina boli-haan ya naa tum jawab do.
mai-thoda time to do.
vina boli-thik hai do din time le lo aur batana haa ya naa. agar haan hai to thik hai aur agar naa hai fir dekhna shaadi ke baad mai kya karti hoon iska aur iske gharwalon ka.
vina fir wo photo utha kar boli-ye photo ise kisne diya hai pata kiya.
mai-haan tere bhai ne.
vina jaise hi ye suni uske ankhon me gussa ke saath saath ashoon bhi aa gaya. vina mujhe bina kuch bole gusse me ghar ki taraf bhagi.
mai to dar gaya ki kahi vina ghar me bawal na macha de isliye mai bhi jaldi se uske piche bhaga tabhi mujhe madahv ji mil gaye aur baat karne lage. ab unse bina baat kiye kaise chala jata unhe jaldi se bola-abhi busy hoon kal baat karenge ye bol kar mai bhaga tab tak vina bahut aage nikal chuki thi.
mai bhi bhgate hue uske ghar aaya tab vina andar chali gayi thi. ab shaadi wala mahol tha mai koi ho halla nahi chahta tha.
mai vina ko sab room me dhundha lekin mujhe na vina dikhi aur na hi amar.
mai to pareshan ho gaya tabhi mujhe palki ka phone aaya jo babhut rote hue boli-please raja kuch karo. mai aur mere gharwale barbaad ho jaynege. sravan ne mujhse shaadi karne se mana kar diya aur ab nilesh bhi mana kar raha hai. mana ki maine pahle sravan ko chod di thi lekin mai kya karti mere gharwale sravan se shaadi ke liye maan hi nahi rahe the aur na hi us samay mere pass koi upay tha fir tum aaye jisne ek ummid dikhaya ki sayad mai aur sravan ek ho jaye lekin sayad sravan ne mujhse badla liya jaise maine use thukraya tha waise usne mujhe thukra diya fir bhi kam se kam meri kisi ke saath shaadi to honi chahiye. mere maa papa apna sara paisa is shaadi me laga chuke hai. abhi meri shaadi nahi hui to fir mere maa papa kya karenge.
ye sab palki ro ro kar bolne lagi. uski baat bhi sahi tha. mujhe kisi bhi tarah uski shaadi karani hi thi. mai nahi chahta tha mere chalte kisi ki bhi jindagi barbaad ho.
mai isliye dodbara se nilesh ko phone kiya use bahut samjhaya fir use kuch paise dena ka bhi wada kiya tab jakar wo mana.
mujhe to kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha achanak se kya se kya ho gaya.
mera to nind chain sb loot gaya tha. mujhe saam tak na to vina dikhi aur na hi amar. pata nahi kahan sab gayab ho gaye the. mai raat me khana kha kar soya lekin ankhon me nind nahi tha. late hote hote subah ke 4 baje nind lag gaya.
Amar ne to bohot bada kand kar diya
Dekhte hai raja sab thik kaise karta hai
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mai dekha ab palki nilesh ke saamne khadi thi aur sravan ke haath me mangalsutra tha. ass pass ke log khushi se nilesh ko ishara kar rahe the ki ab pahna do mangalsutra.
mai bhi ab apne sar dono hatho se pakde kursi pe baitha jamin ki taraf dekh raha tha aur ankhen band kiye soch raha tha ki jaldi se ye sab ho jaye. fir aage kya karna hai wo bhi plan banana padega. sravan se bina badla liye to mai use maaf karunga nahi.
mai ye soch hi raha tha tabhi ek awaj aaaya rukkkk jaooooo mai ye shaadi nahi hone dungaaaaaaaaaa.
mai jaise hi ye suna mai us ladke ke taraf dekha jo nilesh aur palki ke samne khada tha.
mujhse ek galti ho chuka tha jo mai tension me bhool hi gaya tha aur wo tha us ladke ko mana karna jise maine paise diye the palki ki shaadi tudwane ka.
mai nilesh ko ye bolna hi bhul gaya tha ki is ladke ko mana karna hai aur sayad nilesh bhi bhul gaya.
ab jo bhi ho mujhe, nilesh aur palki tino ko ye ahsaas hua ki blunder to ho gaya hai. jaise hi wo lakda chillaya nilesh ke chehre ka rang ud gaya.
nilesh fir turant apne aap ko sambhala aur mamle ko sambhalne ke liye bola-dekh ae ladke. chup chap yahan se jao nahi to jo maar maarunga jindagi bhar na bhulega. meri is se shaadi ho rahi hai. tu dafa ho.
ye sunte hi ladka thoda sakpaka gaya kyunki use ye to bataya hi nahi gaya tha ki nilesh use datega. use to pata tha palki use dategi.
wo ladka bola-ohhhh improvisation. khud se dialogue bol raha hai. yahan shaadi me hai to hero ban ne ki kosis kar raha hai. ab dekh mera talent.
wo ladka jor se pure emotion ke saath bola-mai ye shaadi nahi hone dunga. ye meri girlfriend hai aur iske pet me mera bachha bhi bhi hai. palki ke saath maine kayi din aur kayi raate gujari hai. yakin na aaye to pucho is palki se ki kaise hum dono humare khet me ek dusre ke bahon me duniya se chup kar raate bitatae the.
ye sunte hi pure hall me khusar fusar hone laga.
mai socha sala ye pure shaadi ki aisi taisi karke hi manega isliye mai jaldi se douda use rokne ke liye aur tabhi palki ke papa uthe aur chattak chattak karke us ladke ko ek thappad mare aur khichte hue bahar le jane lage.
mai bhi palki ke pita ke saath holiya aur use khichte hue madap se bahar le aaya aur do thappad mai bhi diya use.
mai palki ke papa ko bola-aap andar jaiye ise mai dekhta hoon aur use khichte hue mandap se aur thoda door kheto ki taraf le gaya.
mai bola-saale tujhe mana kiya tha na yahan aane ko fir kyun aaya yahan.
wo ladka bola-mujhe kahan kisi ne mana kiya. mujhe paise mile the to aana to tha hi.
mai ye sunkar thoda socha aur bola-tujhe nilesh ne phone nahi kiya tha.
wo ladka bola-phone kiya tha 3-4 baar lekin mai phone nahi utha paya. wo khet me kaam kar raha tha na isliye.
mai ye sunkar sochne gusse me bola-sala kismat hi kharab hai.
ladka bola- maine itna achha acting kiya. dekha aapne. kaise kitna emotional acting kiya. mujhe to nilesh ke dost ne baad me 10 hazar aur diye the isliye to maine apni acting me jaan laga di.
mai jaise hi ye suna mera dimag khanka.
mai bola-ab chup chap bhaag ja yahan se samjha. wo ladka chala gaya.
mai bola-sala nilesh tune achha bahut achha acting kiya lekin mujhse achhi acting nahi kar payega. tujhse bhi badla lunga.
wahi idhar nilesh ghoor ke palki ko dekhne laga jaise puch raha ho kya sachme tere pet me iska bachha hai kya. kyunki us ladke ne jis tarike se bola tha aisa lag raha tha jaise uska ek ek labj sach ho.
nilesh man me sochne laga ki kahi sach me palki ke pet me uska ya sravan ka bachha hua to wo kya karega. wo bachha puri jindagi uske paiso pe aish karega jabki wo uska bachha hoga bhi nahi. fir wo man me hisab kiya to use laga ek bachhe ko bachpan se lekar 20 saal ka karne me kam se 20-22 lakh to lag hi jayega aur kya pata bada hokar wo apne asli baap ke pass chala jaye.
fir nilesh ek baar gusse palki ko dekha jaise puch raha ho ki kya sachme tere pet me bachha hai aur bechari bas dar se na na me sar hilayi.
mai bhi ab fir se andar aa gaya. idhar nilesh apna mala gusse se gale se khicha aur todkar mandap ke agni me fek diya.
nilesh gusse me bola-mai nahi karunga tumse shaadi.
palki rote hue boli-mai sach bol rahi hoon wo mera boyfriend nahi hai. mera boyfirend to sravan tha tum bhi jante ho. ye sab baate wahan khade sablog sun rahe the. kisi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha kya kare kya bole.
nilesh bola-sravan tera boyfirend hai na to thik hai ja sravan se shaadi kar le aur wo palki ka haath pakda aur khich kar jahan sravan vina ko mangal sutra pahna chuka tha wahan le aaya. mai bhi uske piche piche bhaga lekin mai undono ke bich abhi nahi bol sakta tha kyunki mai na to nilesh ka ristedaar tha aur na hi palki ka. mai kuch bolta to uske ristedaar log mujhe hi gusse me pitne lag jate.
nilesh aur vina ab humare mandap ki taraf aa rahe the aur un dono ke piche bahut se log. idhar ek ladka khada tha jo sayad vina ka ristedaar tha wo nilesh ko bola-idhar kahan jaa raha hai. dikh nahi raha yahan shaadi chal raha hai.
nilesh uski baat ko ignore karte hue gusse me palki ko sravan ke pass lakar bola-teri girlfirend to ye hai na to tu is se shaadi kar.
is baat pe vina gusse me boli-ye kya kar rahe nilesh dikh nahi raha yahan meri aur sravan ki shaadi ho rahi hai.
ab idhar bhi hall me kisi ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. nilesh ki maa didi saath hi nilesh aur palki ke maa papa aur bhi kuch log jama ho gaye the.
palki rote hue nilesh boli-please shaadi mat todo.
nilesh bola-nahi mujhe tumpe bharosa nahi hai pata nahi tere pet me kiska bachha hai.
palki rote hue boli-mai sach bol rahi hoon mere pet me kisi ka bachha nahi hai yakin na ho to shaadi ke baad doctor se check kara lena.
nilesh ke papa nilesh ko bole-ye kya harkat hai beta. ye kya pagalpan hai. chalo chup chap shadi karo.
nilesh bola-dekho papa ye meri jindagi ka sawal hai. mujhe ispe koi bharosa nahi hai aur mai shaadi nahi karunga.
ye sab sunkar palki ek ummid ke saath ankhon me ashun liye sarvan ko boli-please sarvan tum mujhse shaadi kar lo tum to mujhse apne jee jaan se bhi jada pyaar karte the na. kya tum mujhe aise hi thukra doge.
mai dekha palki ke ankhon me ashun dekhkar sravan ko achha nahi laga. kahte hai na pahla pyaar to pahla hi hota hai bhulaye nahi bhulta aur wahi yahan mujhe hota hua dikha.
idhar nilesh wahan se jaane laga. uske maa papa sab us se samjhane lage lekin nilesh na ruka.
ab sablog ki najre palki, sravan aur vina pe tiki thi.
vina man me boli-jab yahi hona hai to yahi sahi. shaadi ke baad sravan ke saath saath iski bhi jindagi nark bana dungi waise bhi ye rahegi to mujhe noukrani ki jarurat nahi padegi. ghar ka sara kaam isi se karwaungi yahi sarvan ko choot degi badle me ghar ka kaam karegi aur saas sasur ka dekhbhal karegi.
vina aage aayi aur boli-thik hai mujhe koi dikkat nahi hai. mai nahi chahti mere chalte kisi ki jindagi barbaad ho. mere maa papa ne bachpan se yahi sikhaya hai ki dusro ki jindagi achhi karo chahe uske liye khud hi thode dukh kyun na uthana pade.
fir vina kisi heroin ki tarah aur aage aayi aur boli- mujhe pata hai koi bhi ladki apne pati ko kisi ke saath batna nahi chahti aur ye bhi chahti hai ki uska pati sirf use hi pyaar kare to mai ye bhare samaj me wada karti hoon ki mai kabhi bhi palki ka hak nahi chinungi aur kabhi bhi palki ko koi dukh nahi dungi. ise humesha apna maanungi aur humesha apne saath rakhungi.
ye sunkar to bahut si mahilaye bhavuk ho gayi.
hema ji ko to yakin hi nahi ho raha tha unki beti itni achhi hai.
mujhe to laga sala ye vina ko neta bana dena chahiye kyunki mujhe pata tha vina itni bhi achhi nahi hai jitna abhi ban rahi hai.
lekin lata chachi, aur sravni di ye sunkar gussa ho gayi aur boli-nahi ye nahi hoga. sravan ki shaadi sirf ek se hogi aur wo hogi vina.
lata chachi fir boli-ye to pahle bhi mere bete ko chod kar chali gayi thi ab ashoon baha rahi hai.
ye sunte hi palki udas ho gayi tabhi palki ke maa papa aur do tin ristedaar lata chachi ke pass aa gaye aur request karne lage. dheere dheere pura bhid do bhag me bat gaya. kuch log palki ke support me the ki uski jindagi barbaad nahi hona chahiye to bahut se log bol rahe the nahi nahi sravan ki ek hi shaadi ho. kuch log to apas me bhi bahas karne lage. pura shaadi ka mandap machli bajar ban gaya tha.
mujhe laga chahe jo bhi ho sravan ne jo kiya, amar ne jo kiya aur nilesh ne bhi jo kiya aur vina bhi abhi jonoutanki kar rahi hai lekin sravni ki jindagi barbaad nahi honi chahiye isliye mai bhi lata chachi aur sravni di ke pass chala gaya aur unko samjhaya ki please maan jaiye nahi to ye bechari ka kya hoga. aaj jo bhi iljaam ispar lage hai uske baad to is bechari ki shaadi bhi nahi ho payegi. please maan jaiye aur fir akhirnkaar ant me lata chachi maan hi gayi.
sravni ke papa mujhe sukriya bole.
ab palki ek baar fir sravan ko boli-please maan jao pleaseeee. palki ke ankhon me mote mote ashun dekh sayad sravan ka pyaar fir se jaag gaya aur wo bola-thik hai.
fir kya tha sravan bhai ka do shaadi ho gaya.
jab subah hua tab vidayi ka samay hua aur sab log gadi se ghar lountne lage. mai lata chachi se baat kiya ki vimal chacha ko ye sab chije aram aram se bataya jaye taki unhe koi tension na ho. vimal chacha jab jaage to mai aur lata chachi milkar aram aram se unko dheere dheere karke sab baate bata diye. unhe thoda sa ajib laga lekin lata chachi sab sambhal li. unhe koi shock nahi laga.
is shaadi se bahut log naraj the to bahuto ko baatchit ke liye naya topic mil gaya tha. akhir ek raat me itne kaand hue to logon ka manoranjan to hua lekin meri raat bhar halat kharab rahi. kuch log bahut khush bhi the palki ke liye.. dheere dheere sab log marriage hall se gaav aa gaye. bahut se ristedaar marriage hall se hi sidha apne apne ghar ko lout chuke the aur ab ghar me sirf karibi ristedaar hi bache the. jo dheere dheere karke jaa rahe the aur mai sabko vida kar raha tha. ab mai bhi khush tha ki kam se kam ek musibat tal gaya ab mujhe ye nilesh aur sravan dono ka ilaj karna padega. isi tarah subah se sham ho gaya aur mai so gaya kyunki mai kal raat se soya bhi nahi tha.
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mai dekha ab palki nilesh ke saamne khadi thi aur sravan ke haath me mangalsutra tha. ass pass ke log khushi se nilesh ko ishara kar rahe the ki ab pahna do mangalsutra.
mai bhi ab apne sar dono hatho se pakde kursi pe baitha jamin ki taraf dekh raha tha aur ankhen band kiye soch raha tha ki jaldi se ye sab ho jaye. fir aage kya karna hai wo bhi plan banana padega. sravan se bina badla liye to mai use maaf karunga nahi.
mai ye soch hi raha tha tabhi ek awaj aaaya rukkkk jaooooo mai ye shaadi nahi hone dungaaaaaaaaaa.
mai jaise hi ye suna mai us ladke ke taraf dekha jo nilesh aur palki ke samne khada tha.
mujhse ek galti ho chuka tha jo mai tension me bhool hi gaya tha aur wo tha us ladke ko mana karna jise maine paise diye the palki ki shaadi tudwane ka.
mai nilesh ko ye bolna hi bhul gaya tha ki is ladke ko mana karna hai aur sayad nilesh bhi bhul gaya.
ab jo bhi ho mujhe, nilesh aur palki tino ko ye ahsaas hua ki blunder to ho gaya hai. jaise hi wo lakda chillaya nilesh ke chehre ka rang ud gaya.
nilesh fir turant apne aap ko sambhala aur mamle ko sambhalne ke liye bola-dekh ae ladke. chup chap yahan se jao nahi to jo maar maarunga jindagi bhar na bhulega. meri is se shaadi ho rahi hai. tu dafa ho.
ye sunte hi ladka thoda sakpaka gaya kyunki use ye to bataya hi nahi gaya tha ki nilesh use datega. use to pata tha palki use dategi.
wo ladka bola-ohhhh improvisation. khud se dialogue bol raha hai. yahan shaadi me hai to hero ban ne ki kosis kar raha hai. ab dekh mera talent.
wo ladka jor se pure emotion ke saath bola-mai ye shaadi nahi hone dunga. ye meri girlfriend hai aur iske pet me mera bachha bhi bhi hai. palki ke saath maine kayi din aur kayi raate gujari hai. yakin na aaye to pucho is palki se ki kaise hum dono humare khet me ek dusre ke bahon me duniya se chup kar raate bitatae the.
ye sunte hi pure hall me khusar fusar hone laga.
mai socha sala ye pure shaadi ki aisi taisi karke hi manega isliye mai jaldi se douda use rokne ke liye aur tabhi palki ke papa uthe aur chattak chattak karke us ladke ko ek thappad mare aur khichte hue bahar le jane lage.
mai bhi palki ke pita ke saath holiya aur use khichte hue madap se bahar le aaya aur do thappad mai bhi diya use.
mai palki ke papa ko bola-aap andar jaiye ise mai dekhta hoon aur use khichte hue mandap se aur thoda door kheto ki taraf le gaya.
mai bola-saale tujhe mana kiya tha na yahan aane ko fir kyun aaya yahan.
wo ladka bola-mujhe kahan kisi ne mana kiya. mujhe paise mile the to aana to tha hi.
mai ye sunkar thoda socha aur bola-tujhe nilesh ne phone nahi kiya tha.
wo ladka bola-phone kiya tha 3-4 baar lekin mai phone nahi utha paya. wo khet me kaam kar raha tha na isliye.
mai ye sunkar sochne gusse me bola-sala kismat hi kharab hai.
ladka bola- maine itna achha acting kiya. dekha aapne. kaise kitna emotional acting kiya. mujhe to nilesh ke dost ne baad me 10 hazar aur diye the isliye to maine apni acting me jaan laga di.
mai jaise hi ye suna mera dimag khanka.
mai bola-ab chup chap bhaag ja yahan se samjha. wo ladka chala gaya.
mai bola-sala nilesh tune achha bahut achha acting kiya lekin mujhse achhi acting nahi kar payega. tujhse bhi badla lunga.
wahi idhar nilesh ghoor ke palki ko dekhne laga jaise puch raha ho kya sachme tere pet me iska bachha hai kya. kyunki us ladke ne jis tarike se bola tha aisa lag raha tha jaise uska ek ek labj sach ho.
nilesh man me sochne laga ki kahi sach me palki ke pet me uska ya sravan ka bachha hua to wo kya karega. wo bachha puri jindagi uske paiso pe aish karega jabki wo uska bachha hoga bhi nahi. fir wo man me hisab kiya to use laga ek bachhe ko bachpan se lekar 20 saal ka karne me kam se 20-22 lakh to lag hi jayega aur kya pata bada hokar wo apne asli baap ke pass chala jaye.
fir nilesh ek baar gusse palki ko dekha jaise puch raha ho ki kya sachme tere pet me bachha hai aur bechari bas dar se na na me sar hilayi.
mai bhi ab fir se andar aa gaya. idhar nilesh apna mala gusse se gale se khicha aur todkar mandap ke agni me fek diya.
nilesh gusse me bola-mai nahi karunga tumse shaadi.
palki rote hue boli-mai sach bol rahi hoon wo mera boyfriend nahi hai. mera boyfirend to sravan tha tum bhi jante ho. ye sab baate wahan khade sablog sun rahe the. kisi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha kya kare kya bole.
nilesh bola-sravan tera boyfirend hai na to thik hai ja sravan se shaadi kar le aur wo palki ka haath pakda aur khich kar jahan sravan vina ko mangal sutra pahna chuka tha wahan le aaya. mai bhi uske piche piche bhaga lekin mai undono ke bich abhi nahi bol sakta tha kyunki mai na to nilesh ka ristedaar tha aur na hi palki ka. mai kuch bolta to uske ristedaar log mujhe hi gusse me pitne lag jate.
nilesh aur vina ab humare mandap ki taraf aa rahe the aur un dono ke piche bahut se log. idhar ek ladka khada tha jo sayad vina ka ristedaar tha wo nilesh ko bola-idhar kahan jaa raha hai. dikh nahi raha yahan shaadi chal raha hai.
nilesh uski baat ko ignore karte hue gusse me palki ko sravan ke pass lakar bola-teri girlfirend to ye hai na to tu is se shaadi kar.
is baat pe vina gusse me boli-ye kya kar rahe nilesh dikh nahi raha yahan meri aur sravan ki shaadi ho rahi hai.
ab idhar bhi hall me kisi ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. nilesh ki maa didi saath hi nilesh aur palki ke maa papa aur bhi kuch log jama ho gaye the.
palki rote hue nilesh boli-please shaadi mat todo.
nilesh bola-nahi mujhe tumpe bharosa nahi hai pata nahi tere pet me kiska bachha hai.
palki rote hue boli-mai sach bol rahi hoon mere pet me kisi ka bachha nahi hai yakin na ho to shaadi ke baad doctor se check kara lena.
nilesh ke papa nilesh ko bole-ye kya harkat hai beta. ye kya pagalpan hai. chalo chup chap shadi karo.
nilesh bola-dekho papa ye meri jindagi ka sawal hai. mujhe ispe koi bharosa nahi hai aur mai shaadi nahi karunga.
ye sab sunkar palki ek ummid ke saath ankhon me ashun liye sarvan ko boli-please sarvan tum mujhse shaadi kar lo tum to mujhse apne jee jaan se bhi jada pyaar karte the na. kya tum mujhe aise hi thukra doge.
mai dekha palki ke ankhon me ashun dekhkar sravan ko achha nahi laga. kahte hai na pahla pyaar to pahla hi hota hai bhulaye nahi bhulta aur wahi yahan mujhe hota hua dikha.
idhar nilesh wahan se jaane laga. uske maa papa sab us se samjhane lage lekin nilesh na ruka.
ab sablog ki najre palki, sravan aur vina pe tiki thi.
vina man me boli-jab yahi hona hai to yahi sahi. shaadi ke baad sravan ke saath saath iski bhi jindagi nark bana dungi waise bhi ye rahegi to mujhe noukrani ki jarurat nahi padegi. ghar ka sara kaam isi se karwaungi yahi sarvan ko choot degi badle me ghar ka kaam karegi aur saas sasur ka dekhbhal karegi.
vina aage aayi aur boli-thik hai mujhe koi dikkat nahi hai. mai nahi chahti mere chalte kisi ki jindagi barbaad ho. mere maa papa ne bachpan se yahi sikhaya hai ki dusro ki jindagi achhi karo chahe uske liye khud hi thode dukh kyun na uthana pade.
fir vina kisi heroin ki tarah aur aage aayi aur boli- mujhe pata hai koi bhi ladki apne pati ko kisi ke saath batna nahi chahti aur ye bhi chahti hai ki uska pati sirf use hi pyaar kare to mai ye bhare samaj me wada karti hoon ki mai kabhi bhi palki ka hak nahi chinungi aur kabhi bhi palki ko koi dukh nahi dungi. ise humesha apna maanungi aur humesha apne saath rakhungi.
ye sunkar to bahut si mahilaye bhavuk ho gayi.
hema ji ko to yakin hi nahi ho raha tha unki beti itni achhi hai.
mujhe to laga sala ye vina ko neta bana dena chahiye kyunki mujhe pata tha vina itni bhi achhi nahi hai jitna abhi ban rahi hai.
lekin lata chachi, aur sravni di ye sunkar gussa ho gayi aur boli-nahi ye nahi hoga. sravan ki shaadi sirf ek se hogi aur wo hogi vina.
lata chachi fir boli-ye to pahle bhi mere bete ko chod kar chali gayi thi ab ashoon baha rahi hai.
ye sunte hi palki udas ho gayi tabhi palki ke maa papa aur do tin ristedaar lata chachi ke pass aa gaye aur request karne lage. dheere dheere pura bhid do bhag me bat gaya. kuch log palki ke support me the ki uski jindagi barbaad nahi hona chahiye to bahut se log bol rahe the nahi nahi sravan ki ek hi shaadi ho. kuch log to apas me bhi bahas karne lage. pura shaadi ka mandap machli bajar ban gaya tha.
mujhe laga chahe jo bhi ho sravan ne jo kiya, amar ne jo kiya aur nilesh ne bhi jo kiya aur vina bhi abhi jonoutanki kar rahi hai lekin sravni ki jindagi barbaad nahi honi chahiye isliye mai bhi lata chachi aur sravni di ke pass chala gaya aur unko samjhaya ki please maan jaiye nahi to ye bechari ka kya hoga. aaj jo bhi iljaam ispar lage hai uske baad to is bechari ki shaadi bhi nahi ho payegi. please maan jaiye aur fir akhirnkaar ant me lata chachi maan hi gayi.
sravni ke papa mujhe sukriya bole.
ab palki ek baar fir sravan ko boli-please maan jao pleaseeee. palki ke ankhon me mote mote ashun dekh sayad sravan ka pyaar fir se jaag gaya aur wo bola-thik hai.
fir kya tha sravan bhai ka do shaadi ho gaya.
jab subah hua tab vidayi ka samay hua aur sab log gadi se ghar lountne lage. mai lata chachi se baat kiya ki vimal chacha ko ye sab chije aram aram se bataya jaye taki unhe koi tension na ho. vimal chacha jab jaage to mai aur lata chachi milkar aram aram se unko dheere dheere karke sab baate bata diye. unhe thoda sa ajib laga lekin lata chachi sab sambhal li. unhe koi shock nahi laga.
is shaadi se bahut log naraj the to bahuto ko baatchit ke liye naya topic mil gaya tha. akhir ek raat me itne kaand hue to logon ka manoranjan to hua lekin meri raat bhar halat kharab rahi. kuch log bahut khush bhi the palki ke liye.. dheere dheere sab log marriage hall se gaav aa gaye. bahut se ristedaar marriage hall se hi sidha apne apne ghar ko lout chuke the aur ab ghar me sirf karibi ristedaar hi bache the. jo dheere dheere karke jaa rahe the aur mai sabko vida kar raha tha. ab mai bhi khush tha ki kam se kam ek musibat tal gaya ab mujhe ye nilesh aur sravan dono ka ilaj karna padega. isi tarah subah se sham ho gaya aur mai so gaya kyunki mai kal raat se soya bhi nahi tha.
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