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Incest Meri maa ki khusiyan aur mera parivaar

kya college life thoda detail me ho ya bas jaldi jaldi kuch aham ghatnao ke saath khatm kar diya jay

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DesiPathan87

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subah jab hua to sabse pahle nind himani ji ka khula kyunki raat me sabse pahle soyi bhi wo hi thi lekin nind khulne ka karan kuch aur tha. jaise hi wo uthi unhe kuch bilkul gila gila sa mahsoos hua aur wo jaise hi apna haath apne choot ke pass le gayi wo hairan ho gayi. unki choot se dher sara ras nikla tha wo bhi tab jab wo so rahi thi.
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wo uth kar sabse pahle bathroom gayi pesab ki jisme unke choot se dher sara kaamras aur nikla fir wo fresh hui nahayi aur apne room me aa kar baith gayi. tab tak idhar maa didi bhi jaag agyi.
didi jagte hi maa ko boli-sorry maaa mujhe maaf kar dena.
maa boli-beta galti to meri bhi hai mai tumse badi hoon fir bhi bahak gayi. jo ho gaya so ho gaya aaj ke baad aisa nahi karenge.
fir dono haan me sar hilayi lekin dono ke man me ye baat aaya ki kash fir se aisa ho aur is baar raja bhi ho.
fir dono fresh hone chali gayi wo log bhi fresh hokar hall me baith gayi saath me himani ji bhi thi.
didi boli-ye dono laila majnu aaj room se niklenge bhi ki bas awaj hi aayega.
didi ki baat pe tino ko ek baar raat ka yaad aa gaya fir maa boli-chup kar kuch bhi bolti rahti hai. jaa jakar jaga un dono ko.
didi boli-mai nahi karne wali ye sab . mai do pyaar karne walo ke bich kabhi nahi aati. mai nahi jaungi.
maa boli-mai hi jaati hoon.
to himani ji boli-arey aap baithiye mai jaati hoon aur himani ji gate ke pass aayi aur awaj di shivani uth jaoo shivaniiii.
unki awaj sunkar hum dono ka nind khul gaya.
shivani ji boli-bas 5 minut didi aati hoon. aur fir hum dono jaldi jaldi apna apna kapda pahne. shivani ji suthi to unko thoda dard hua lekin wo fir bhi bathroom ki taraf nikal gayi aur mai hall me akar baith gaya.
maa boli-raja tumhari shaadi to ho gayi ab mai soch rahi thi kyun na aaj hum ab lout jate hai. tum aram se 10-15 din honeymoon mana kar aana.
mai kya bolta mujhe to ye bhi nahi pata tha aage ka plan kya hai.
mera chehra dekh kar didi samajh gayi.
didi boli-arey maa ise kuch pata hi nahi hai chehra dekh ke nahi lag raha. ye to bas ab apni ptni ki gulami karega. aapko jo puchna hai shivani ji se puchna padega.
is baat pe himani ji hasne lagi.
mai apna popat hota dekh bola- mai jaa raha hoon nahane aaplog ko subah subah mai hi mila majak banane ke liye.
aur mai uthne laga tab shivani ji bathroom se nikli.
maa boli- shivani beta hum chahte hai ki ab hum chalte hai tum log aram se honeymoon mana kar aana.
shivani ji aayi aur maa ke pass baith gayi.
shivani ji boli-abhi 15 din aap log humare saath rahoge. dekhna aap log chale gaye to mai aapse baat nahi karungi.
maa boli-lekin hum log karenge kay yahan. tumhe bhi dikkat hoga.
shivani ji boli-koi dikkat nahi hoga.
shivani ji mujhe boli-aapko koi dikkat hai.
mai bola-mujhe kyu dikkat hoga.
shivani ji boli-ye mera honeymoon ke saath saath ek family trip bhi hai. ye 15 din hum isi hotel me rahenge sikkim, meghalay, mizoram tripura sab jagah ghumenge bhi aur aaplog bhi mere saath rahoge.
shivani ji himani ji ko boli-didi aapne inhe kuch bataya nahi.
himani ji boli-mai kaise pata hoga sara plan to tera hai na.
shivani ji apna mobile nikali aur fir pura plan batayi ki 15 din hum kahan khana jayenge kya karenge. fir shivani ji boli-didi aap bhi humare saath rahogi.
himani ji boli-dekho tumhe pata hai office me bahut kaam hai aur tum boli thi ki mai shaadi ke wapas jaa sakti hoon.
shivani ji boli-tab jo baat boli thi wo cancel. aaj ki baat hai aap bhi rahogi. nahi to dekh lena mai gussa ho jaungi.
himani ji mujhe boli-raja ise samjhao na mujhe kaam hai.
mai-mujhe aap dono bahne apne baat me mat laiye aap dono khud discuss karo mai chala nahane aur mai udhar se nikal liya. himani ji maan to nahi rahi thi lekin shivani ji ne mana liya.
fir sab log jama hue saath me baith kar khana khaye. ab hume sikkim ke barf me jana tha.
bahar car khada tha. shivani ji ne car hi rent le liya tha. aage maa aur himani ji baith gayi piche shivani ji mai aur didi baith gaye.
bahut hi khubsurat ratsa tha raste ke dono taraf barf hi barf aur hum chalte hue thodi uchai pe aa gaye. jahan barf hi barf tha. hum sab thande kapde pahan liye the jo hotel me rent pe liye the.
ab sab log barf pe aa to gaye lekin kare kya.
didi boli-mai ice man banane jaa rahi hoon aur wo barf jama karke ice man banane lagi. mai khada dekh raha tha tabhi fattt se mujhe ek ice ka gola sar pe laga. mai ghum kar dekha to wo gola shivani ji ne feka tha aur has rahi thi.
mai turant jamin se barf uthaya aur gol karke bana ke feka lekin shivani ji ko nahi laga wo has ke mujhe chidhane lagi aur fir se wo udhar se barf feki mai bhi hat gaya. fir kya tha hum dono barf ek dusre ko fekne lage aur idhar didi ka ice man ban kar khada hone wala hi tha ki shivani ji ka ek gola sihda ice man ko laga. didi shivani ji ko boli-aapko mai chodungi nahi. aur didi bhi mere taraf se ho gayi. shivani ji ko akele dekh kar maa uar himani ji dono us sde ho gayi kyunki shiavni ji ne request kiya tha. ab bas gole chal rahe the kabhi mai aur didi unhe chidhate to kabhi wo hume. jab lagtar 2-3 baar shivani ji ka gola mujhe miss kar gaya to is baar wo gola lekar aayi aur sidha mere pass aakar mujhe markar bhag gayi.
mai bola-abhi batatta hoon aur mai bhi gola lekar unke piche douda wo bachao didi bachao didi bol kar idhar idhar bhagne lagi. mai unke piche bhag hi raha tha ki maa aur himani ji dono mere piche se gola mere sweater je andar daal di. mujhe khub thanda laga aur mai tuarnt barf ka gila lekar maa uar himani ji ke taraf douda wahi didi aur shivani ek dusre me lagi hui thi. mai ek gola uthaya aur maa ke sweater me daal diya fir dusra uthane ke liye jhuka tab tak himani ji ek gola aur mere sar pe de di. mai utha aur himani ji ko kamar se pakad liya aur ek gola unke sweater me daal diya. wo bhi kampne lagi. udhar didi aur shivani ji bhi kaamp rahi thi. jab hum sabko thanda lagne laga to sab jaldi jaldi apna sweater jhade aur car me aakar baith gaye.
sab log bahut khush the lekin shivani ji sabse jada khush thi. unhe ek achha parivaar mil gaya tha itna hi nahi aaj wo apne didi ko bhi haste khelte dekh rahi thi. fir sab log shaam tak ghar pahuche. sab log thak gaye the to sab khana khaye to raat ho gaya aur fir sab sone chale gaye. sabka room wahi tha jaisa kal tha.
mai aur shiavni ji room me aaye aur bed pe let gaye.
shivani ji bed pe let te hi mujhe pakdi aur jor se muaahhhhhhh karke mere hoth chum li.
shivani ji boli-aap bahut achhe ho. aur apka parivaar bahut bahut achha hai muahhhhhhhhhh
mai-kya baat hai aaj to pyaar ki barsaat ho rahi hai.
fir hum dono let gaye. shivani ji ka bahut man kar raha tha mujhe pyaar karne ka lekin bolne se sharma rahi thi aur wo dekhi dheere dheere meri ankhen band hone laga to unhe laga agar so gaye tab to aise hi raat khatm ho jayega.
wo boli-suniye na.
mai ankh khol ke bola-boliye.
shivani ji sharma ke boli-ek baar karte hai na.
wo itne pyaar se sharma ke boli ki mujhe unke sharm pe bhi pyaar aa gaya.
mai bola-kya karna hai.
shivani ji boli-jaiye mai baat nahi karti aapse mujhe tang karte ho.
aur mai shivani ji pakda aur apne upar khich kar chumne laga. unko chumte chumte mai unke sare kapde utarne laga aur dekhte dekhte wo sirf panty me aa gayi.
shivani ji boli-aap humesha aisa hi karte ho mera kapde utar dete ho aur mujhe mouka nahi dete. ab meri baar ye bolkar dheere dheere wo mujhe chum kar mere kapde utarne lagi. ab mai bhi chaddi me aa gaya.
hum dono ek dusre ke samne baithe hue the. mai dheere se unki panty me haath ghusaya aur unki choot sahlane laga.
shivani ji fir se madmast hokar sisakne lagi.
mai fir apna chaddi utara aur baithe baithe hi unhe god me uthaya aur dheere dheere apne lund pe baithane laga.
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shivani ji bhi maje me ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhh karne lagi aur mai unko apne god me uthaye chudayi suru kar diya. mera lund fir se unke tight choot ko khol kar andar sair karne laga. aaj shivani ji kal se jada josh me dikh rahi thi aur fir khud hi wo mera chehra pakdi aur mere balon ko sahlate hue ummhhhhhhhhhh umhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh karke mujhe chumne lagi. saath me jor jor se mere lund pe aage piche hone lagi.

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shivani ji boli-aap bahut achhe ho ji... aapke saath pyaar karne me bahut maja aata hai.
mai bhi bas shivani ji ki chudayi jari rakha. shivani ji ki awaj dheere dheere badhne laga jo room se bahar jane laga.
jaise hi ye awaj himani ji suni man me sochi-ye dono thakte bhi hai ki nahi. din bhar ke khel ke baad mai to thak gayi lekin ye dono suru ho gaye hai.
wahi dusri taraf fir se maa aur didi ke kaan me ye awaj jaa raha tha. didi aur maa dono ke chehre bhi ek taraf hi the. dono khud ko rokne ki kosis kar rahe the.
idhar mai shiavni ji ko bed pe lataya aur gupppppppp guppppppp karke pura lund unki choot me utarne laga.
shivani ji bhi jor jor se ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh karte hue chudne lag gayi.
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mujhe pata tha ab shivani ji jhadne wali hai isliye mai chudayi tej kar diya aur hua bhi wahi shiavni ji mere jor jor ke dhakko ko bardast nahi kar payi aur jhatke kha kha kar sisak sisak kar jhad gayi.
shivani ji to jhad gayi lekin mera lund khada hi tha. jo shivani ji ne dekh liya.
wo boli-fir se karte hai ji.
mai bola-aap thak gaye ho sab thik ho jayega aur mai unhe choom kar samjha kar sula diya. shivani ji bhi meri baat akhir maan li aur thake hone ke karan wo so gayi. tabhi mujhe fir se halka sa ahhhhh awaj sunayi diya.
jaise hi mai ye suna mujhe pata tha ye awaj maa ki hai. aur mai turant ek towel pahna aur room se nikla lekin bagal wala room band tha.
darasal hua ye tha ki shivani ji ki awaje sun kar na to maa khud ko rok payi aur na didi aur jaise josh me dono apne aap hi khud ke kapde utarati chali gayi aur didi maa ke upar chadh gayi.
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didi maa ko pakad ke jor jor se unhe chumne lagi. maa bhi josh me didi ko chume jaa rahi thi.
didi boli-i am sorry maa mujhe maaf kar doo maa aaur wo jor jor se maa ke hoth ko chumne lagi maa bhi ummhhhhhh umhhhh karke siskane lagi aur dekhte dekhte dono ki gili choot ek dusre se chipak gaya aur aur dono dheere dheere ahhhh ummhhhhhhh ahhhhh umhhhhhhh karte hue sisak sisak kar choot ragadne lagi.
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mai bahar se kuch dekh to nahi paa raha tha lekin andar ki awja sun kar mera lund pagal ho gaya aur jor jor se fadfadane laga wahi andar maa didi umhhhh ahhhhh umhhhhhh ahhhhhhh karte hue jhadne lagi. unke jhadte hi mai bathroom ki taraf bhaga to dekha bathroom lock tha. mai intejaar karne laga. aur tabhi gate khula aur samne ka najar dekh kar to mai pagal ho gaya.
aur sabse badi baat thi ki himani ji samne ki ore dekh hi nahi rahi thi.
himani ji bhi ek towel me kyunki aaj bhi jab wo shivani ji ki siskiyan suni to unki panty gili hone lagi aur unhe ajib sa lagne laga isliye nahane chali aayi.
mera to dimag hi ruk sa gaya tha aur uspar bhi ye hua ki himani ji achanak se mujhse takra gayi aur takrate hi hum dono ko hosh aaya . mai jaldi se sorry bolkar bathroom me ghus gaya wahi himani ji bhi jaldi se apne towel sambhalte hue apne room me aayi kapde pahni aur so gayi. mai to bathroom me ek ghante nahaya tab jakar lund shant hua aur mai aakar room me shivani ji ke saath so gaya.

वाह राजा की तो चांदी हो गई , क्या मस्त चुड़ककड़ बीवी मिली है ।अब जल्दी से मां और दीदी को एक साथ राजा से चुदवाओ🔥🔥🔥 , हिमानी की मस्तानी बुर भी राजा से चुदवा दो ।
 

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sab log raat me so gaye fir subah hua aur subah sabse pahle aaj bhi jaagi shivani ji. aur iska karan tha kal raat hua hum dono ke bich takrav. darasal jab bathroom ke saamne hum dono takraye the tab maine dhyan nahi diya tha lekin mera ek haath galti se bas kuch seconds ke liye unke stan se takra gaya tha uske baad mai bathroom me ghus gaya tha aur himani ji bhaag kar room aa gayi thi. himani ji room to aa gayi thi lekin baar baar unhe aisa lag raha tha ki koi unke stan ko chu raha hai. aisa unke saath isliye bhi ho raha tha kyunki mai unki jindagi me wo pahla ladka tha jiske haath unke nange stan ko upar se halka sa chu kar nikal gaya tha. shivani ji baad me so to gayi lekin unka sarir jaise ab bagawat pe utar aaya tha aur unki choot mere haath ko yaad karke khub royi jiska natija ye hua ki subah shivani ji ki panty aaj bhi bhig gayi thi. shiavni ji ke liye ye sab bahut hi ajib tha aur unhe samajh nahi aa raha tha kya karna hai. wo to bas ye hi soch soch kar apne dil ko mana rahi thi bas 5-10 din ki to baat hai uske baad sab thik ho jayega.
subah fir ek ek karke sab log jaage. fir sab log nahaye. aaj kisi ne khana nahi khaya kyunki hum sab yahan ek famous mandir me jaane wale the. subah subah hi car se hum sab nikle. bahar ka mousam bahut hi suhana tha. subah subah suraj ki laal kirno ke karan jitne bhi barf the sab laal dikh rahe the. jab hum manidr pahuche to mandir bhi bahut achha dikh raha tha. hum sab mandir gaye aur puja paah kiye prasad chadhaye aur khaye bhi. kuch der mandir me baithe. madir me bahut shanti mila hum sabko. mandir se nikalne ke baad sab ek restaurant gaye jahan sab log khaye.
shivani ji boli-aaj humlog kuch adventure karenge. aur hum sab car me baith gaye.
car chalte chalte ek pahadi ke upar aa gaya. yahan se ice sliding hota tha. yahan ek pahad se barf ke upar se logon ko ek chota sa plastics ka tub jaisa pe baitha kar chod diya jata tha jo apne aap slide karke niche pahuch jate the.
hum sab wahan ticket kataye aur andar ghus gaye.
jo instructor tha usne achhe se hume samjha diya ki kaise jana hai aur isme ye tha ki ek baar me do logon ko bhejte the. lekin hum panch log the to ye tay hua ki sabse pahle mai aur shivani ji jayenge uske baad maa aur didi jayenge. jab tak maa aur didi jayenge tab tak shivani ji ice boat se wapas aa jayegi aur fir wo himani ji ke saath jayegi.
ab sabse aage mai aur shivani ji khade ho gaye.
sabse pahle ek instructor ne mujhe us tub me baitha diya fir mere god me shivani ji ko baitha diya aur fir wo 1...2...3....ready bol kar hume dhakka de diya. hum dono us pahad ke barf par dheere dheere tub me fisalane lage. pahad se thoda aage aate hi speed tej ho gaya. samne se chere pe bilkul thanda thnda hawa lagne laga. shivani ji achhe se tub ka handle pakdi hui thi shivani ji mere god me baith hoooooooooooooooooooo huhuuuuuuuuuuuu chilla rahi thi. ab shivani ji aur mujhe maja to aa raha tha lekin shivani ji baithi thi meri god me jiske karan mera lund bhi khada ho gaya aur shivani ji chubhne laga. jaise hi shivani ji ko ye ahsaas hua wo to garm hone lagi. hum dono ek to thande thande barf pe slide kar rahe the wahi hum dono ke andar garmi badh raha tha. niche pahuchte pahcuhte halat ye ho gaya ki shivani ji ko jor se toilet lag gaya.
shivani ji aur hum jaise hi niche pahuche shivani ji boli-dekhiye mujhe jaldi se washroom jana hai please aap upar chale jao na didi ke saath aap aa jana please. ab shivani ji ne itne pyaar se bola to mai mana kaise karta..
ab fir maa aur didi bhi ek tub me baith kar slide karne lagi. didi aage baithi thi aur maa unke piche. dono slide karte hue aane lagi tab tak mai ice boat ke sahare upar gaya.
mujhe dekhte hi himani ji boli-tum aaye ho shivani kahan hai.
mai-ji wo washroom gayi hai.
shivani ji boli-thik hai chalo.
aur fir se mai baith gaya aur himani ji ko mere god me baith kar instructor ne dhakka de diya. hum barf par sleep karne lage lekin mera halat kharab hone laga kyunki ek to pahle se hi shivani ji ne garm kar diya tha aur ab himani ji mere god me baithi thi. abhi ek minut bhi nahi hua tha ki mera lund khada ho gaya aur jaise hi iska pata himani ji ko laga unka halat kharab ho gaya. hum dono bas slide karte gaye aur wo mere god me hi thi slide karne ke karan hil rahi thi jiske chalte unki gaand mere lund pe ragad kha raha tha. jab tak hum niche pahuche himani ji ko bhi toilet lag gaya wahi mujhe bura lag raha tha.. khair uske baad fir se hum sab log jama hue bahar khana khaye ghume aur fir sham ko hotel wapas aa gaye.
aaj raat me flight tha jis se hum sabko shilong jana tha. isliye room aate hi sablog apne kapde pack kiye aur airport pahuch gaye. wahan se raat me hi hum sab shillong aa gaye aur yahan ke hotel me so gaye. aaj sab bahut thak gaye the to sab jaldi hi so gaye.
agli subah yahan meghalay me kaafi achha mousam tha. subah subah sab log baithe breakfast karne ke liye tabhi himani ji boli-dekhiye aaj mujhe thoda kaam hai isliye mai busy rahungi aap log enjoy karo.
shivani ji boli-kya kaam hai didi. aur wo bhi yahan shillong me.
himani ji boli-dekho ek aadmi hai jise apni company ke liye kuch investment chahiye. uska idea bahut achha hai aur wo pichle 6-7 dino se mujhse milne ki kosis kar raha hai. use jab pata chala mai meghalay aayi hoon to wo yahan aa gaya. lagta hai bahut hi workoholic aadmi hai. asie logon ki company me invest karna hi chahiye.
shivani ji boli-lekin didi yahan kyun wo bhi anjaan jagah me anjaan log se meeting mujhe sahi nahi lag raha. use bol dijiye jo meeting hogi .
shivani ji turant apna mobile nikali aur manager ko phone ki.
shivani ji boli-hello manager.
manager-yes mam.
shivani ji-dekho jo aadmi yahan meghalay aaya hai use bol do jo bhi meeting hogi office me hi hogi. aur meeting 15 din se pahle nahi ho payega. agar invest chahiye to wait kare nahi to dusre jagah investment dhundhe.
manager bola-mam wo bahut request kar raha tha.
shivani ji thoda gusse me boli-request kar raha tha matlab kya tum use humare pass bhej doge. koi protocol, rule regulation ye sab hai bhi ya nahi. ya hum log 10-15 din ke liye company se bahar kya aaye tum logon ne sare rule regulation tod diye.
manager bola-but mam uska idea kafi achha hai is se company ko profit hoga. aapko ek baar use mil lena chahiye.
shivani ji ka gussa aur badh gaya.
shivani ji boli-tumhe samajh aa raha hai mai kya bol rahi hoon. koi meeting nahi hogi aur aaj hi office me ek notice nikalo jab mai aaungi to sabke perforamnece check kiye jayenge aur jisne bhi rule toda hai ya koi bhi protocol toda hai ya jiski performance kharab hai use fire kar diya jayega including you mr understand dobara se 10 days tak tumhari phone nahi aani chahiye humare pass.
himani ji boli-kyun gussa karti ho ek choti si baat hi to thi.
shivani ji boli-mujhe kuch nahi pata di. aap yahan koi kaam nahi karogi sirf maje karogi.
udhar manager ye sunte hi tension me aa gaya aur wo turant ek aadmi ko phone milaya.
manager-dekhiye sir aapki meeting himani ji se nahi ho sakti.
wo aadmi-kyun nahi ho sakti.
manager-dekhiye sir nahi ho sakti matlab nahi ho sakti. yaa to aap 15 days wait kijiye ya fir dusri comapny dhundhiye apne investment ke liye.
wo aadmi-kya aap mujhe reason bata sakte hai.
manager- dekhiye mam abhi vacation me hai jab vacation se aayengi tab hi aapka kaam hoga ye bolkar manager phone cut kar diya wahi wo aadmi jo abhi shillong ke hotel me ruka hau tha man me bola-aur kitna tadpaogi himani.. tere piche piche mai sahar aaya to pata chala tum sikkim me ho. jab wahan pahucha to pata chala yahan meghalay me ho. chalo koi baat nahi official nahi to kya unofficially to mil hi sakte hai.
uske baad wo aine ke saamne khada hua aur gaana gaane laga-sajna hai mujhe sajna ke liye ...... sajna hai mujhe sajna ke liye... la la lala laa la la lala lalaaa.

मस्त अपडेट लगता है हिमानी जी का उद्घाटन भी जल्द होगा 😁😁😁🔥 , पर BC ये आदमी कौन है जो हिमानी से मिलना चाहता है, कहीं कोई साज़िश तो नहीं ?
 

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Fir se jayega na jab wo gaav jayega vina se milne tab. college jane se pahle vina se bhi to milna padega aur vina ko us gaav me khulne wala coaching center ka head banana padega tab na nilesh gussa ho jayega aur villain banega waise bhi wo lalchi to hai hi.
Ha lalchi to hai wo or vilen ko anedo apna hero konsa kam he waiting for your next update
 

Babasarkar

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chalo ek kaam karte hai story me bahut si ladkia ho gayi itna logon ke baare me likh likh ke bahut mehnat lagta hai. ek hi baar me 2-4 ladkio ko marwa dete hai. story bhi halka ho jayega aur thoda indian serial wala feeling bhi aa jayega. log marenge to rona dhona hoga khub maja aayega . aaplog batao koun sa character aaplogon ko bilkul bhi pasand nahi usko marwa dete hai.:):):):):):):)
Agr marwana he to us gaon ke jo jo ladkiya tha usko marwa do but bro maa or bahen ko nhi wo to story ka Jaan he jiske liye apna hero ye sab kar raha he wo dono mar jayega to story pe maja nhi ayega age aap writer ho jese aap ko chalana he story chalao
 

Ash123

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Bahi kisy ko na marwana sab ki ab itni achi character building ho gyi ha or story itni achi ja rahi aesy hi to behtar na maro ha scene kam kr do yan ek dafa larkion ki list bana lo or us ko story ma intro ki first post m dal do or moderator ko us ko stick kr dey is tarah har page poora ka poora list hota rahy ga phir jis ka scene banta ho wo wahan sa pata chal jaye ga apko name bhi yaad nhi krny pareyn gy......
 
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