Erotica Meri Maa Renuka Dubey

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[Rand Chinar Mahira]

Index

Chapter 01 - Meri Maa Renuka Dubey

Page No. 01 - 0) Jhalak
Page No. 03 - i) Jaan Pehchaan
Page No. 11 - ii) Anjaan Ehsaas

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[Rand Chinar Mahira]

Chapter #0

Jhalak

"Phattt.. Phattt.. phattt.. chaaappp.. chaaaappp.. chaaaappp.... chaaappp.... chaaaapppp... thaaappp... thaaappp... thap.. thap"

Jaise jaise wo kaala lund meri Maa ki yoni main tezi se andar bahar ho raha tha.. waise waise lund k andar ghuste hi, jab uncle ki kamar aur unke bade bade gande aand meri Maa ki kamar se takrate tab yahi madhur sangeet pure kamre main gunj ja raha tha

us chote se kamre main es samay ye madhur aawaz puri tarah ghunj rahi thi.. meri bhare jism aur kasi chuchiyon waali Maa apne honthon ko khud hi chabate hue apni yoni main us kaale mote lund ko gehrai tak mehsus kar rahi thi

Maa- aaaahhh.. Aslam ji... aaahahhhh.. Maaaa... dhire... ufffff... haiiiii.. Maaaa..... thoda toh dhire karo.. aaahhhhh.. Maaaa... esssshhh... Ufffff aaahhh dekh kutteee kaise chod rahe hai Aslam ji teri Maa.. ko.. aaaahhh

Aslam namak us 45+ saal k vyakti ne meri Maa ki dono tango ko utha k unke mote mote doodh tak la diya tha.. aur apni yoni main us lund ko leke k liye meri Maa ki baitabi hi thi ki khud unhone apne hi pairon ko apne hathon se jadka hua tha, taki Aslam ji ka mota kaala lund unki yoni ko chirte hue asani se gehrai tak ghus sake

Aslam ji meri taraf dekhte hue
"Q Beta.. maza aa raha hai na.. Apni Maa Chudwa k"

Main toh maare sharam k jaise laal hi pad gaya tha, maine apni nazron ko neeche kar liya par mera hath chalna band nahi hua..

Asal main es samay main Maa aur Aslam ji k dayi taraf ek kurshi pe baitha hua tha aur mera lower mere pairon main fasa hua tha.. aur mere hath main mera lund tha jise main apni Maa ki chudai dekhte hue behremi se masle ja raha tha

ki tabhi mere kaan main Maa ki wapas se aawaz sunai padti hai.. aur phir es unhone Aslam ji se nahi apitu mujhse kahi thi

"aaahhhhh.. Kamine.. uffff... Maaaa... ab kiya nazren jhuka k baitha hai.. aahhhh.. Maaaa... kamine.. uffff.. ab khus hai na apni Maa chudwa k.. aahahhhhh.. dhire Aslam ji.. uffff... Maaaa.... aap toh lagta hai aaj 'Atul' ki Maa ki chut phad k hi manenge.. essshhh"

Maa ne jaan k mere naam liya tha.. par Maa k munh se aisi baat sunkar mera haal aur bigad gaya tha.. aur main aur jor jor se apne lund ko masalne lagta hu

Us chote se kamre main Maa aur Aslam ji es samay mere samne bistar pe thay.. aur main unki dayi taraf ek kurshi pe baitha hua tha

Ki tabhi kamre ka darwaja khulta hai aur ek 55-60 saal ka buddha aadmi kamre main andar aata hai jiski nazren sabse pehle mujhse hi milti hai aur mere hath main mera lund dekh k muskurata hai aur phir samne bistar pe meri Chudti hui Maa ko dekh k haste hue kehta hai

"Waaaahhh.. Aslam Beta, tune toh rand ki chut bajani bhi suru kar di.."

Andar aane wala wo aadmi apni baat bhi puri nahi kar paya tha ki usne apni lungi ki gaanth ko ek hi baar main khol diya jisse uski lungi lehrati hui uske pairon main nazar aane lagi

Aur aisa hote hi uska kaala bheemkay lund uchal k khuli hawa main saans lene laga

Main ek baar unke lund ko dekhta hu jo har maayne mein Aslam Uncle k lund se bada nazar aa raha tha.. jise wo ab piyar se sehalate hue mujhe dekhta hai aur haste hue kehta hai

"Waaahh 'Renuka ji' kiya beta paida kiya hai.. dekho saala apni Maa ki Chudai dekh k kaise muth maar raha hai"

Aslam uncle unki baat sunkar has padte hai.. aur Maa ki dono tango ko khud hi pakad k aur jada faila dete hai jisse unka lund aur jada andar gehrai tak ghusne laga tha.. jisse Maa ko maze k sath sath thodi peeda bhi hoti hai

Maa apne honthon ko kamukta se katte hue
"Aaaahhh.. Dassssssss... ji... uffff.... aap bhi aa gaye... esssshhhh.. .Maaa..... aur aap apni lungi q utar rahe hai.. essssshhhhh... aisa waisa kuch sochna bhi nahi.. esssshhhh... haiiiii... Maaaaa......"

Maa ek baar phir se mujhe muth marte hue dekhti hai.. aur es baar ek pal k liye hum dono ki nazren apas main takrati hai.. aur Maa apni paseene se bheege kamuk chehre aur apne laal honthon pe jeebh firate hue
"uffffff... Kuttteee... tu bhi bol na.. Bhai Sahab se ki teri Maa ko thoda aaram se chodo.. esss.. kamine yaha teri Maa ki chut phat rahi thi.. aur waha tum apni mathni chala raha hai.. essshhhhh.. kaise Madarchod paida kiya hai.."

Maa ki es baat ya gaali main na jane aisa kiya tha ki mere lund se safed paani tapakne lagta hai jo mere pairon main fase lower pe girne lagta hai.. meri halat dekh k Das namak wo 55-60 varsiye vyakti haste hue kehte hai
"Lo.. bechara abhi se rone laga... wo bhi apne lund se"

Das uncle ki baat sunkar main sharam se laal ho jata hu par na jane q mujhe sab kuch bahut hi acha aur gudgudi bhara lag raha tha.. wahi dusri taraf Aslam uncle ab bhi meri Maa ki chut ka kachumar nikal rahe thay

Dono hi puri tarah paseene main bheege hue thay.. wahi Das ji un dono ko dekh k ab bhi apna lund sehla rahe thay aur main usi prakar apni kurshi pe baitha hue abhi abhi apne lund se itna gaada paani nikalne ki wajah se kaafi thakan si mehsus kar raha tha esliye apna sar tek laga k Kurshi pe baith k lambi lambi saanse lene lagta hu..

Par itni thakan k baad bhi ek pal k liye bhi maine apni nazron ko Maa aur Aslam uncle se nahi hatayi thi

"Kiya hua Bhai.. maza aa raha hai hamare Atul ko.. apni Maa chudwa k"

tabhi kamre main ek aur inshan andar aata hai.. jo ki meri hi Maa ki umar ki ek bhari hui aurat thi aur jinhone es samay salwar suit pehen rakha tha

Aslam Uncle meri Maa ki ek chuchi ko muthi main bhar k joro se masal dalte hue aur haste hue kehte hai
"aaaaaahhhhh... kaha reh gayi thi saali.."

Wo aurat andar aati hai aur pehle Das uncle ko dekh k muskurati hai aur phir meri taraf chalte hue aake meri kurshi k peeche khadi hoke mere kandhe pe apne hath rakhte hue kehti hai
"Kiya karu yaar.. apne Atul ki Maa k honeymoon k liye intizam kar rahi thi"

Das Uncle- (haste hue apna lund sehla k kehte hai) Saali 'Kumkum' lagta hai.. tu Renuka ji ko bhi apne jaisi Chinar bana k hi manegi

Kamre main abhi abhi aane waali in aurat ka naam Kumkum hai.. jo meri hi Maa ki umar ki hai

Kumkum aunty mere baalon main hath firate hue
"Abhi aap sabne hamari Renuka k andar ka chinara dekha kaha hai.. q hai na Atul beta"

Kumkum aunty ki baaton main na jane aisa kiya tha ki main apne samne apni Maa ki chut main Asalm Uncle ka lund andar bahar hote hue keh k apna sar ha main hila deta hu

Aap Sabhi soch rahe honge ki ye achanak se kiya hone laga.. aisa kiya hua ki meri Maa yu Aslam ji se chudne lagi

Aur sabse badi baat Main (Atul), meri Maa (Renuka), Aslam Uncle, Das Uncle aur ye Kumkum aunty hai kon.. ?

Aur ye sab kiya ho raha hai.. ese janne k liye hume thoda peeche chalna padega.. aur sab kuch thoda vistar se janna hoga

Ye sab suru hota hai aaj se theek 1 Saal pehle.. us din se jab main pehli baar apne gaon se bahar kadam rakhne wala tha

Par uske liye aap sabhi ko bus agle Update tak mere sath rehna hoga

Milta hu jaldi hi Nxt Update k sath

Das Kumkum Aslam kiya jodi hai, par ek jawan 17-18 saal ka ladka bhi hona chahiye

 

[Rand Chinar Mahira]

•Previous Update on Page No. 03•

Chapter 01
Meri Maa Renuka Dubey

ii) Anjaan Ehsaas

Main (Atul) hamesha ki tarah aaj bhi dair se hi utha tha, mujhe konsa jaldi uth k murge ki tarah bhaang lagani hoti hai

Waise main chatt pe bane eklaute kamre main sota hu.. aap toh jante hi hai jaise jaise jawani aur umar badti hai hum ladkon ko raat k samay thoda akelapan chahiye hota hai.. hathon k beech apni garam cheez ko lene k liye

Waise ye chatt wala kamra abhi puri tarah bana nahi hai, na hi esmain darwaja laga hai na hi khidki pe kapad hai

Balki ghar k extra razai bistar bhi esi kamre main rakhe jaate hai.. ese kuch kuch aap store room jaisa samajh sakte hai

Par main jaan k yaha sota hu.. qki esi bahane thoda ekant jo milta hai mujhe aur yaha uper jaldi koi aata bhi nahi, ha Maa jarur kapde dalne ya kabhi kabhi mere kamre ki saaf safai k liye aati rehti hai

Eske alawa chatt pe hi ek chota sa snanghar(Bathroom) jaisa bana hua hai.. waise esi sahi mayne main snanghar bhi nahi kaha ja sakta qki esmain bhi koi darwaja nahi laga hai bus Maa ki ek purani saree hai wahi darwaje k esthan pe daali hui hai

Aur toh aur bathroom k ek taraf khidki lagane k liye khali jagah hai.. jismain aaj tak khidki nahi lagi hai

Par mere liye ye sab itna mayne nahi rakhta, main konsa ladki hu jo apni ijjat chupane ki jarurat hogi mujhe

Waise bhi chatt pe toh main akela hi rehta hu

Baki apni ghar ki vyakhya karu toh ghar main 3 kamre hai, beech main bada sa aangan aur bahar ek bada sa baramda hai

Aangan k ek taraf snanghar aur shauchalay hai par inke beech diwar k naam pe sirf ek patli si baans aur kharpatwar se bani diwar hai, aap toh jante hi hai Gaon main sehro jaisa attach wala system nahi hota

Eske alawa 2 kamre hai jo apas main jude hua hai aur aap ek kamre se dusre kamre main ja sakte hai

Inhi main se ek kamra Maa aur Pitaji ka hai aur dusra kamra khali hai jo kabhi agar koi mehman aata hai toh uske rukne k liye hai

Waise in dono hi kamro k beech ek darwaja laga hai.. jo mehmaan k aane pe band kar liya jata hai taki ek se dusre kamre main jane ka rasta band ho sake

Aur teesra kamra aangan ki dusri taraf hai jismain Hamesha hi chawal gehu ki boriya bhari rehti hai, yu samjho Pita ji ne ghar pe hi ek chota sa godam bana rakha hai

Ghar k mukhya darwaje k pass hi ek bada sa baramda (Hall) jaisa hai, aur mere Dada ji wahi apna ek purana sa Radio aur apni Charpi liye hue pade rehte hai.. jaha unki umar k unke kai dost roz aake baithte hai aur aurton ki tarah un sabhi ki panchayat chalti rehti hai

Dada ji k pramukhya dosto k agar naam likhu toh unmain aate hai
Hari Dada, Usman Dada, aur Bhole Dada

Dada aur in teeno k beech aisi chanti hai maano bachpan se sath hi rahe ho.. waise sayad main batana bhool gaya ki mere Dada ji kabhi Pehelwani kiya karte thay.. sayad esi karan aaj bhi es umar main itne tagde aur kasarti jism k hai

Apni aankhon ko malte hue bans ki sidiyon se neeche utarte hue neeche aata hu, ji ha hamare yaha pakki sidi nahi hai.. aur sidha Rasoighar main Maa k pass chal padta hau

Main jaise hi Rasoighar me kadam rakhta hu, Maa jo dusri taraf munh kiye hue kaam kar rahi thi.. unhe na jane kaise pata chal jata hai ki ye main hu aur wo turant hi bina mujhe dekhe tokte hue kehti hai

"Ja Pehle snan kar.. kitni baar kaha hai bina nahaye subha subha Rasoi main nahi aate, ye aaj kal k bache na jane q apne Maa Baap ki tanik bhi nahi sunte.. 4 kitabe kiya pad li khud ko sarv budhimaan samajhne lagte hai"

Mujhe meri Maa ki aadat pata hai.. ye unka roz hai aur mujhe bhi unhe aise tang karne main kaafi maza aata hai, esliye main haste hue andar ghus aata hu aur Maa ko peeche se apni baahon main bharte hue kehta hu
"Lo Maa.. ab toh aapko bhi nahana padega, qki aab bhi meri jaisi ho gayi"
Aur hasne lagta hu

Maa bhi has padti hai aur mujhe marte hue khud se hatati hai aur haste hue kehti hai
"Mujhe pata hai tu roz mujhe aise hi pareshan karta hai.. par koi nahi aaj toh mujhe waise hi talab pe jana hai"

Meri Maa kabhi kabhi kabhar ghar k bistar dhone k liye Gaon k talab pe jaati rehti hai.. waise wo akeli nahi jaati unke sath hamari Pados ki 2 aurte hai jo umar main unhse 6-7 saal badi hi hai, wo bhi sath sath jaati hai

Yu samjho wo dono Maa ki achi saheliya hai

Par Maa ki baat sunkar mera munh utar jata hai, qki Maa ka talab pe jane ka matlab hota hai ki mujhe us din us wo bhari bistar talab tak pahuchane honge

Maa- (Meri halat dekhte hue, has padti hai aur piyar se mere baalon ko sehlate hue) ohhoo.. mera bacha, bada piyar aa raha tha abhi apni Maa pe ab ja, maine dulhne k liye sare bistar nikal k aangan main charpai pe rakh diye hai.. ja unhe talab pe pahucha de main thodi dair main aati hu

Maa apni baat kehte hue has padti hai, aur mera munh aise ban jata hai maano maine subha subha ki kadwa karela ka liya ho

Maa haste hue Chai ki tray uthati hai jismain Chai k cup rakhe hue thay aur wo mujhe dete hue kehti hai
"Ab ye sada sa munh sahi kar, jara sa kaam kiya bata do aaj kal k bachon ko.. ki munh ban jata hai, ye le Chai jake bahar bamarde main Dadaji aur bakiyon ko de aa"

Main- (Chai ki tray lete hue) ohoo.. aaj subha se hi Dada aur unke dosto waali panchayat suru ho gayi

Meri baat pe Maa hase bina khud ko rok nahi paati

Maa- kisi din tere Dada ne teri baaten sun li na toh tere sath sath mujhe bhi sunna padega.. chal ab ja

Main- (Haste hue) are rehne do Maa.. Dada ji aur aapko datenge, ho hi nahi sakta

Meri baat pe Maa muskura padti hai, asal main Dada ji Maa ko beti saman mante hai.. wo kaha bhi karte hai ki
'Unka hamesha se ek sapna tha ki unki ek beti hoti, jo Renuka ne es ghar main aake puri kar di'

Main bina man k Chai ki tray uthata hu bahar baramde main aata hu aur jaisa ki maine ummid ki thi waha pehle se hi Dada ji aur unke teeno dost baithe Gaon ki panchayat karne ka apna kaam suru kar chuke thay

Hari Dada- are maine suna hai.. Thakur Sahab k yaha jo nayi bahu aayi hai na wo badi tez hai kisi ki nahi sunti

Mere Dada- Thakurain konsa sidhi hai.. jaise ko taisa mila hai

Usman Dada- waise kuch bhi kaho.. Thakurain maal hai puri

Usman Dada ki baat pe charo dost has padte hai.. unki ye sab baaten mere liye aam hai aur maine pehle bhi unki aisi faltu bakwas sun rakhi thi

Main- (Un sabhi k pass jaate hue) Dada ji Chai

Sabhi jaise hi mujhe dekhte hai aise chup ho jaate hai ki na jane konse khajana ka naksha ek dusre ko bata rahe thay ab tak

Usman Dada- (Chai ka Cup uthate hue) aur Atul beta.. kiya chal raha hai, tere toh 12vi k paper aane wala hoga na ?

Main Chai ki Tray Bhole Dada ki taraf badate hue jawab deta hu

"Ji kuch dino baad suru hone waale hai"

Bhole Dada bhi Chai ka Cup uthate hue bol padte hai
"Toh 12vi k baad kiya socha hai.. aage padai karni hai ya apne Pita k sath kaam main lagega"

Mere Dada ji- Abhi toh eske khelne kudne k din hai, abhi kaha kaam waam.. Banaras main koi bada school hai waha se aage kuch karega, q hai na Beta.. kiya naam hai uska

Main- बनारस हिंदू विश्वविद्यालय

Usman Dada- are wo toh bahut bada hai, ye akela kaise karega sab.. rahega kaha ?

Mere Dadaji- are mera Pota hai, kisi se darta hai ka.. baki abhi toh kuch dino baad pehle parcha bharega phir naam aayega toh tab ki tab dekhenge

Usman Dada- (Jo puri tarah anpadh hai) Parcha bharega matlab?

Main- Ji ek scholarship nikli hai, agar use bhar diya aur ache number aaye toh waha meri padai ki fees bahut kam lagegi.. baki uske baad entrance exam bhi honge

Meri baat sunkar charo ki bahut khus hote hai aur meri tareef karne lagte hai ki ladka abhi se bada hosiyar hai

Asal ye scholarship ka form hume school main bharwaya gaya tha aur maine jaan k banaras ko chuna tha paper Dene k liye.. warna pass k sehar bhi main center chun sakta tha

Qki mujhe Gaon se bahar nikal k ghumne ka man tha aur maine suna hai ki Banaras main gori gori videshi bhi bahut aati hai.. esiliye jaan k maine Banaras ko chuna

Warna padai k naam pe toh waise bhi main suru se aakhiri seat pe baithne walon main se raha hu

Baki Banaras University main admission k liye entrance exam hote hai aur wo bhi 12vi k exam k baad hone hai..

Yani main jaan k abhi tak ghar pe pura sach nahi bataya tha

Ki tabhi Maa ki aawaz aati hai
"Atul, beta ja jaldi se ye jab talab pe rakh aa"

Main Maa ki baat sunkar jaldi se baki sabhi ko chai deta hu par jaise hi mudta hu mujhe mere Dada ko dekh k aisa lagta hai maano wo murti ban gaye ho aur ektuk ek taraf dekhe ja rahe thay

Mujhe samajh nahi aata ki achanak ye kaha kho gaye, par jab main unki nazron ka peecha karta hu toh hairan reh jata hu

Dada ji Aangan main jhuki hui meri Maa ki kamar ko dekh rahe thay, asal main Maa es samay Charpai pe dhulne k liye rakhe hue unhi bistar ko ekattha karke ek sath bandh rahi thi taki main asani se unhe le ja saku.. esiliye karanwas wo halka sa jhuki hui thi

Main dhiyan diya ki mere Dada ji Maa ki saree k beech nazar aa rahi kamar ko dekhe ja rahe hai.. Maa ki aadat hai ki wo hamesha apni saree ko apni kamar main ghusa k rakhti hai jis karan unki khubsurat kamar kuch jada hi nazar aati rehti hai

Maa subha se hi ghar k kaamo main vyast thi jisse unhe halka halka paseena aaya hu tha.. aur es samay bhi unki Khubsurat kamar pe paseene ki bundhe subha hi halki dhoop main kisi moti saman chamak rahi thi

Maa bistar ko sahi se rakhti hai aur phir wapas Rasoighar ki taraf chal padti hai aur tab main dekhta hu ki Dada aise apni chaitana main wapas lautte hai ki unke chup ki chai tak chalak padti hai aur unke pair pe gir padti hai

Dada- aaahhh.. behenchod jal gaya

Gaon main bade budhon k munh se aisi gaaliya bahut aam baat hai

Usman Dada- (Chai ka maza lete hue muskura k kehte hai) Paap ki saza toh milni hi thi

Bhole Dada- aur saik apni nazren akele akele

Usman Dada ki baat pe baki sabhi has padte hai aur mere Dada unhe dekh k muskura padte hai

Un sabhi ki ye baaten aur yu hasna mujhe bada hi ajeeb lagta hai aur ek ajeeb si baichani si mehsus hoti hai, maano ajeeb si garmi ka prabhav ho raha hi mujhpe.. par sach toh ye tha ki main kisi bhi baat ko samajh nahi paya tha

Tabhi unhe ehsaas hota hai ki main ab bhi wahi khada hu

Dada- are.. wo.. Beta.. tu abhi yahi hai, ja ja wo sare bistar talab tak pahucha de

Mujhe Dada ka Maa ko yu dekhna bada hi ajeeb sa lagta hai aur uspe Usman Dada ki wo baat aur ajeeb

Par phir sochta hu in buddhon ka hasi mazak toh chalta hi rehta hai, main hi kuch jada dimag laga raha hu

Esliye main espe aur jada dhiyan nahi deta aur waha se Rasoighar main Jake chai ki tray rakhta hu aur aangan main aake wo sabhi bistar ko apne kandhe pe laad k Gaon k eklaute talab ki taraf chal padta hu


Yaha se dur Banaras k ek ache elake main jaha sabhi ghar kaafi alishan bane hue thay.. wahi ek ghar jiske bahar ek name plate lagi hui thi aur uspe 'Chaubey Niwas' likha hua tha uski bell bajti hai

Kuch hi palon baad ek 50-55 saal ka vyakti andar se aake darwaja kholta hai aur samne khade insaan ko dekh k Muskurate hue kehta hai
"Are Aslam aa gaye tum, ghar dhundhne main koi problem toh nahi hui na"

Aslam muskurate hue
"Nahi Sir,
ye rahi sales Report"

Chaubey ji- Are Aslam miya pehli baar ghar aaye ho aise kaise.. andar aao, tumhari Bhabhi k hath ki mast Chali pilata hu

Aslam namak wo vyakti kuch bol pata usse pehle hi andar se ek aurat jisne sirf maxi pehni hui thi darwaje k pass aate hue
"Kon hai ji ?"

Chaubey ji- are.. ye Aslam ji hai, hamari company k Banaras zone k Sales head, abhi jaldi hi yaha transfer hoke aaye hai.. aur abse ye mere under kaam karenge

Waise abhi kuch dino pehle Office party main milwaya toh tha maine.. sayad tum bhool gayi hogi"

Phir Chaubey ji apni Patni ki taraf dekhte hue
"And Aslam ji aapko toh yaad hi hoga.. ye hai meri Dharmpatni 'Kumkum'

Aslam muskurate hue pure samman k sath apne dono hath jodte hue kehta hai
"Bhabhi ji ko kon bhool sakta hai"

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•Previous Update on Page No. 11•

Chapter 01
Meri Maa Renuka Dubey

iii) Shreematee Chaubey.. Aaaaahhh

Phatttt.. phatttt... Pattttt... Patttttt.... Phattttt... Aaaaaahhhh..... Chatttakkkkk.... Phatttttt.... Patttttt.... Patttttt

"Aaaaaahhhh... Dhire dhire... Uffff... Maaaa.. dhire... Aahhhhh... Maaaaaa... Maaarrrrrr... Gayiiii.... Haiiii reeeee... Maaaaaaaaaa.. maaaarrrrr gayiiii reeee... kuttteeee... madarchod... aaaahhhh... thoda... dhire... aaaaahhhh... Maaaaaa.. aaaaahhhh... dhire... Aslam ji... Aaaaahhhhhh.... Dhire.. babaa..."

'Chaubey Niwas' main es samay Shreematee Chaubey hawa main uchal rahi thi.. aur unhe apni gaud main utha k hawa main uchalne ka kaam aur koi nahi balki 'Aslam' kar raha tha

Aslam- aaaahh Saaliii rand kutiya, uffff kiya kasi gand hai teri uffff.. mere lund ka pura juice nichod legi kiya kutiya

Shreematee Chaubey, yani bhare hue jism ki 'Kumkum' jo buri tarah hawa main uchal rahi thi.. aur jiski gand main es samay Aslam ji ka mota lund gapak gapak karke andar bahar ho raha tha

Aur apni kamukta aur lagbhag kasi hui gand k ched main Aslam k kaale mote lund se milne waali piyari dardbhari peeda ko sehte hue kehti hai
"Aaaaaaahhhh... Aslam ji uffff.. Maaaaa... Maaarrrr gayiiiiii ree... Aaaahhhh.. meri gand kiya tumhare lund ka juice nikalegi.. ?????? Aaahhh, uffff ulta tum meri gand ka bharta bana rahe ho... Aaaahhhhh... Thoda toh dhire karo... kisi ne ghar k bahar sun liya toh mere Pati ki badi badami hogi.. aaaahhhh... Haiiii... Reeeeee... Maaaaa..."

Dono hi es samay puri tarah nange thay aur Aslam ka kaala lund puri gati k sath Kumkum ki gand ko chirta hu baar baar uske antim bindu ko chum raha tha

Itna tagda lund apne andar lene se Kumkum k daant puri tarah bhiche hue thay aur uska jism aise hilore maar raha tha maano tez aandhi main koi sukha patta kaanp raha tha

"Aaaaaaahhhh... Maaaaaa.... Dhire.. baba... Esssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Haiiiii... Meri gand... Maaaaaaaa.... Maaarrrrrrrrrrr gayiiii... Reeeeeeeeee.... Essshhhhhhhhh... bahut jor ka dard ho raha hai.... Aaaahhhhh.. kuch toh reham dikha kutteeeeeeeeee"

Aslam, Kumkum ki baaton pe has padta hai aur wo achanak se Kumkum ko apni god se utar deta hai, jisse uska mota kaala fauladi lund gapak ki Madhur Aawaz k sath gand se bahar nikal pada tha

Kumkum ko ye kum palon ka antral bahut hi sukun bhara lagta hai.. yu samjho use saans lene ki fursat mili thi, qki Aslam ka khel abhi pura thodi hui tha

Wo Kumkum ko uski gardan se pakadta hai aur wahi ki ek diwar k pass khichte hue le jata hai use ulta karke chipka deta hai.. yani Kumkum ki gudgudi gand ek baar phir se Aslam k kaale lund k samne apni Khubsurati ka drishya utpann kar rahi thi

Kumkum- (Munh k bal diwar se chipki hone k karan uski badi badi doodh ki thailiyan buri tarah se diwar se ragad rahi thi) aaaaaahhhh.... Saans toh lene do... Aaaahhh... Maaaaaa.. aaram se lo na.. main konsa mana kar rahi hu... Aaaahhhh... kiya ek hi din main meri gand ka ghu bahar nikal doge.. Aaaaahhh.. Maaaa...."

Par Aslam ka na khel abhi pura hua tha aur na hi uska man bhara tha

Wo Kumkum k kaale lambe baalon ko ek hath se pakad k khichta hai aur dusra hath uski kamar pe rakhte hue apne fauladi kaale lund ko usko gand k laal pad chuke ched pe wapas chipkate hue
"Saali.. rand.. munh band kar, jab tak mera nahi hoga chodta rahunga.. phir saali chahe tera Pati parmeshwar q na aa jaye"

Aslam apni baat puri karne k baad aur samay nast nahi karta aur pehle se Kumkum ki laal pad chuki gand k ched pe apna lund ache se jamate hue andar utar deta hai

"Aaaaaahhhh.... Maaaaaaa..... aaapppp.. insaan ho ki janwar... Haiii... Maaaaa.... Maaarrrrrr gayiiiiii"

Par Aslam kuch kehta nahi sirf hasta hai aur uska khel phir se suru ho jata hai, wo apna lund ek hi baar main pura ka pura andar utar chuka tha aur phir se uske jordar dakkon ka khel suru ho jata hai

Uska lund gapak gapak karke andar ghusta aur phir usi raftar se bahar ata..

Aslam jitni jor se lund gand main ghusata utni hi jor se uske bade bade gol aand aur uski kamar Kumkum ki gand se takrate aur pure kamre main

Thaaaapp... Thaaaapp.... Taaaappp... Chaaaappp.. thaaapaaakk.. thapaaaakkk....

Ki madhur Aawaz pure hall main gunj jaati

Kumkum- (Aslam ka mota lund apni gand main ghuswate hue) aaaahhhh... Maaaaa... Aaram se ji... Ufffff... Maaaaaa... Maaarrrrr... Gayiiii... Reeeee... Maaaaa.. Meri gand... Aaaaaahhhhhhhh... yakin nahi hota.. jo aadmi mujhe 1 mahine pehle Pati ki office party main mila tha, wo aaj meri gand main apna lund utar chuka hai.. aaaahhhhh... Maaaaaaaaaa

Aslam- (Jor jor se gand ka bharta banate hue) aaaahhhhhh... esse pata chalta hai tu kitni badi rand hai... Kutiya chinar kahi ki... Aaaahhh.. ye le.. haramjadi..

Kumkum- (Apni Gand ki gehrai main itna mota lund bardasht karti hui) aaaahhhh... Randi toh hu.. par sirf tumhare es jandar lund ki... uffff... na jane es lund main aisi kiya baat hai.. haiiii... meri jaisi aurat ko Chinar bana diya.. esne... Aaahhhhhhh

Aslam Muskura padta hai aur apne lund main apne jism ki puri jaan laga k aur jordar dakkon se Kumkum ki gand ka kachumar nikalne lagta hai

Chudai ka ye khel puri raftar se aage bad raha tha, par yaha tak ye dono kaise aaye aur Chaubey ji kaha nikal gaye.. chaliye ye bhi jaan lete hai

Jaisa ki yaad hi hoga hi Aslam subha subha hi apne Office k ek senior 'Chaubey ji' k ghar pahuchta hai

Aur phir Chaubey ji Aslam ko apni Patni se milwate hai

Chaubey ji apni Patni ki taraf dekhte hue
"Aslam ji aapko toh yaad hi hoga.. ye hai meri Dharmpatni 'Kumkum' "

Aslam muskurate hue pure samman k sath apne dono hath jodte hue kehta hai
"Bhabhi ji ko kon bhool sakta hai""

Kumkum bus muskura padti hai aur haste hue kehti hai
"Aapka andaaz toh bada hi nirala hai Aslam ji.. aayie na andar aap bahar q kahe hai ?"

Aslam muskurate hue
"Aapki ijajat hui toh jarur andar aana chahunga"

Aslam ne jis prakar se aankh marte hue apni baat kahi thi usse toh nahi lag raha tha ki wo ghar main andar aane ki baat kar raha ho

Kumkum bhi muskura k andar aane ka rasta deti hui
"Ghar aaye mehman ko kisi baat k liye mana thodi karte hai, ye hamare Sanskar nahi.. q hai na ji"

Kumkum apne Pati ki taraf dekhte hue, maano unse puch rahi ho

Chaubey ji- ha.. ha.. Bilkul sach baat kahi, aur hamara Banaras toh Atithi samman k liye hi prasiddh hai

Jaldi hi Aslam, Chaubey ji k sath unke alishan ghar main ek bade se hall main baitha hua tha.. jaha dono sofe pe baithe hue office aur kaam ki baaten karne lag chuke thay

Ki tabhi andar se Kumkum ek tray main nasta leke aati hai.. aur apne Pati ki taraf dekhte hue kehti hai
"Jab dekho tab kaam kaam.. are unhe kuch khane peene toh dijiye"

Chaubey ji- (Haste hue) are.. ha.. lao.. lao

Aslam- are Bhabhi ji eski kiya jarurat thi

Kumkum muskurate hue naste ki tray neeche rakhne k liye jhukti hai toh Aslam ko uski nighty k gale se ek khubsurat nazara milta hai.. qki es samay Kumkum ki nighty k uper k 2 button khule hue thay
"Lijiye na Bhai Sahab"

Aslam muskurate hue
"Jarur Bhabhi ji.. jarur lunga"

Chaubey ji- (Jo bechare in sab se puri tarah abhigya thay) are Kumkum tum bhi baith jao hamare sath

Kumkum- Mujhe jara kitchen main kuch kaam hai, main thodi dair main aati hu

Kumkum itna kehte hue wapas kitchen ki taraf chal padti hai

Edhar Chaubey ji aur Aslam baaten karne lagte hai ki tabhi Chaubey ji ka Phone bajna suru ho jata hai

Chaubey ji Phone recived karte hue
"Kiya hua, Chaturvedi ji.. subha subha.. are.. are main toh puri tarah bhool hi gaya tha"

Chaubey ji kisi se Phone pe baat karte hue diwar pe tangi gadi ko dekhte hai aur aage jawab dete hai
"bus 5 min.. main bus pahuchta hu.. ha ha bus 5 min"

Chaubey ji jaise hi apni baat puri karke Phone rakhte hai wo apni jagah se uthte hue
"Aslam mujhe jara ghat ki taraf jana hai, aaj hamari society meeting hai waha.. main wo bhool hi gaya tha"

Aslam apne senior ki baat sunte hi apni jagah se uth khada hota hai
"Ha.. ha jarur sir, main bhi nikalta hu"

Chaubey ji, naste ki tray ki taraf dekhte hue
"Are nahi nahi.. tumne kuch khaya hi kaha tha, are Kumkum"

Chaubey ji apne baat jaise hi puri karte hai wo apni Patni ko aawaz dete hai.. jisse Shreematee Chaubey jaldi hi unke samne hoti hai

Chaubey ji- Kumkum.. aaj ghat pe sabhi ne milkar society meeting rakhi thi aur main puri tarah bhool gaya tha. tum jara dekhna ki Aslam ji bina kuch khaye piye na jaye

Kumkum- (Muskurate hue) Aap fikr na kariye ji.. main Aslam ji ka itne ache se dhiyan rakhungi ki wo yaha se khus hoke hi jayenge

Chaubey- Ye hui na meri patni jaisi baat

Chaubey ji haste hue Aslam se Monday ko Office main milne ki baat kehte hai aur turant ki nikal padte hai

edhar Kumkum, Aslam ji ko dekh k muskurate hue
"Aap baithye.. main aapke liye kuch garma garam leke aati hu"

Kumkum itna hi kehti hai aur muskurate hue es baar kithen ki jagah apne bedroom ki taraf chal padti hai

Aslam wahi hall main sofe pe baitha hue garmagaram pakodiya khane main laga rehta hai ki tabhi uske kaano main aawaz padti hai

"Lijiye.. khas aapke liye bilkul garma garam"

Yaha aage kiya hua tha, ye hum baad main Janenge qki abhi samay ho raha hai.. wapas mere gaon chalne ka waise maine sayad abhi tak apne Gaon ka naam nahi bataya hai

mere gaon ka naam hai.. 'Sanskarpur'

 

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Chapter 01
Meri Maa Renuka Dubey

iii) Shreematee Chaubey.. Aaaaahhh

Phatttt.. phatttt... Pattttt... Patttttt.... Phattttt... Aaaaaahhhh..... Chatttakkkkk.... Phatttttt.... Patttttt.... Patttttt

"Aaaaaahhhh... Dhire dhire... Uffff... Maaaa.. dhire... Aahhhhh... Maaaaaa... Maaarrrrrr... Gayiiii.... Haiiii reeeee... Maaaaaaaaaa.. maaaarrrrr gayiiii reeee... kuttteeee... madarchod... aaaahhhh... thoda... dhire... aaaaahhhh... Maaaaaa.. aaaaahhhh... dhire... Aslam ji... Aaaaahhhhhh.... Dhire.. babaa..."

'Chaubey Niwas' main es samay Shreematee Chaubey hawa main uchal rahi thi.. aur unhe apni gaud main utha k hawa main uchalne ka kaam aur koi nahi balki 'Aslam' kar raha tha

Aslam- aaaahh Saaliii rand kutiya, uffff kiya kasi gand hai teri uffff.. mere lund ka pura juice nichod legi kiya kutiya

Shreematee Chaubey, yani bhare hue jism ki 'Kumkum' jo buri tarah hawa main uchal rahi thi.. aur jiski gand main es samay Aslam ji ka mota lund gapak gapak karke andar bahar ho raha tha

Aur apni kamukta aur lagbhag kasi hui gand k ched main Aslam k kaale mote lund se milne waali piyari dardbhari peeda ko sehte hue kehti hai
"Aaaaaaahhhh... Aslam ji uffff.. Maaaaa... Maaarrrr gayiiiiii ree... Aaaahhhh.. meri gand kiya tumhare lund ka juice nikalegi.. ?????? Aaahhh, uffff ulta tum meri gand ka bharta bana rahe ho... Aaaahhhhh... Thoda toh dhire karo... kisi ne ghar k bahar sun liya toh mere Pati ki badi badami hogi.. aaaahhhh... Haiiii... Reeeeee... Maaaaa..."

Dono hi es samay puri tarah nange thay aur Aslam ka kaala lund puri gati k sath Kumkum ki gand ko chirta hu baar baar uske antim bindu ko chum raha tha

Itna tagda lund apne andar lene se Kumkum k daant puri tarah bhiche hue thay aur uska jism aise hilore maar raha tha maano tez aandhi main koi sukha patta kaanp raha tha

"Aaaaaaahhhh... Maaaaaa.... Dhire.. baba... Esssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Haiiiii... Meri gand... Maaaaaaaa.... Maaarrrrrrrrrrr gayiiii... Reeeeeeeeee.... Essshhhhhhhhh... bahut jor ka dard ho raha hai.... Aaaahhhhh.. kuch toh reham dikha kutteeeeeeeeee"

Aslam, Kumkum ki baaton pe has padta hai aur wo achanak se Kumkum ko apni god se utar deta hai, jisse uska mota kaala fauladi lund gapak ki Madhur Aawaz k sath gand se bahar nikal pada tha

Kumkum ko ye kum palon ka antral bahut hi sukun bhara lagta hai.. yu samjho use saans lene ki fursat mili thi, qki Aslam ka khel abhi pura thodi hui tha

Wo Kumkum ko uski gardan se pakadta hai aur wahi ki ek diwar k pass khichte hue le jata hai use ulta karke chipka deta hai.. yani Kumkum ki gudgudi gand ek baar phir se Aslam k kaale lund k samne apni Khubsurati ka drishya utpann kar rahi thi

Kumkum- (Munh k bal diwar se chipki hone k karan uski badi badi doodh ki thailiyan buri tarah se diwar se ragad rahi thi) aaaaaahhhh.... Saans toh lene do... Aaaahhh... Maaaaaa.. aaram se lo na.. main konsa mana kar rahi hu... Aaaahhhh... kiya ek hi din main meri gand ka ghu bahar nikal doge.. Aaaaahhh.. Maaaa...."

Par Aslam ka na khel abhi pura hua tha aur na hi uska man bhara tha

Wo Kumkum k kaale lambe baalon ko ek hath se pakad k khichta hai aur dusra hath uski kamar pe rakhte hue apne fauladi kaale lund ko usko gand k laal pad chuke ched pe wapas chipkate hue
"Saali.. rand.. munh band kar, jab tak mera nahi hoga chodta rahunga.. phir saali chahe tera Pati parmeshwar q na aa jaye"

Aslam apni baat puri karne k baad aur samay nast nahi karta aur pehle se Kumkum ki laal pad chuki gand k ched pe apna lund ache se jamate hue andar utar deta hai

"Aaaaaahhhh.... Maaaaaaa..... aaapppp.. insaan ho ki janwar... Haiii... Maaaaa.... Maaarrrrrr gayiiiiii"

Par Aslam kuch kehta nahi sirf hasta hai aur uska khel phir se suru ho jata hai, wo apna lund ek hi baar main pura ka pura andar utar chuka tha aur phir se uske jordar dakkon ka khel suru ho jata hai

Uska lund gapak gapak karke andar ghusta aur phir usi raftar se bahar ata..

Aslam jitni jor se lund gand main ghusata utni hi jor se uske bade bade gol aand aur uski kamar Kumkum ki gand se takrate aur pure kamre main

Thaaaapp... Thaaaapp.... Taaaappp... Chaaaappp.. thaaapaaakk.. thapaaaakkk....

Ki madhur Aawaz pure hall main gunj jaati

Kumkum- (Aslam ka mota lund apni gand main ghuswate hue) aaaahhhh... Maaaaa... Aaram se ji... Ufffff... Maaaaaa... Maaarrrrr... Gayiiii... Reeeee... Maaaaa.. Meri gand... Aaaaaahhhhhhhh... yakin nahi hota.. jo aadmi mujhe 1 mahine pehle Pati ki office party main mila tha, wo aaj meri gand main apna lund utar chuka hai.. aaaahhhhh... Maaaaaaaaaa

Aslam- (Jor jor se gand ka bharta banate hue) aaaahhhhhh... esse pata chalta hai tu kitni badi rand hai... Kutiya chinar kahi ki... Aaaahhh.. ye le.. haramjadi..

Kumkum- (Apni Gand ki gehrai main itna mota lund bardasht karti hui) aaaahhhh... Randi toh hu.. par sirf tumhare es jandar lund ki... uffff... na jane es lund main aisi kiya baat hai.. haiiii... meri jaisi aurat ko Chinar bana diya.. esne... Aaahhhhhhh

Aslam Muskura padta hai aur apne lund main apne jism ki puri jaan laga k aur jordar dakkon se Kumkum ki gand ka kachumar nikalne lagta hai

Chudai ka ye khel puri raftar se aage bad raha tha, par yaha tak ye dono kaise aaye aur Chaubey ji kaha nikal gaye.. chaliye ye bhi jaan lete hai

Jaisa ki yaad hi hoga hi Aslam subha subha hi apne Office k ek senior 'Chaubey ji' k ghar pahuchta hai

Aur phir Chaubey ji Aslam ko apni Patni se milwate hai

Chaubey ji apni Patni ki taraf dekhte hue
"Aslam ji aapko toh yaad hi hoga.. ye hai meri Dharmpatni 'Kumkum' "

Aslam muskurate hue pure samman k sath apne dono hath jodte hue kehta hai
"Bhabhi ji ko kon bhool sakta hai""

Kumkum bus muskura padti hai aur haste hue kehti hai
"Aapka andaaz toh bada hi nirala hai Aslam ji.. aayie na andar aap bahar q kahe hai ?"

Aslam muskurate hue
"Aapki ijajat hui toh jarur andar aana chahunga"

Aslam ne jis prakar se aankh marte hue apni baat kahi thi usse toh nahi lag raha tha ki wo ghar main andar aane ki baat kar raha ho

Kumkum bhi muskura k andar aane ka rasta deti hui
"Ghar aaye mehman ko kisi baat k liye mana thodi karte hai, ye hamare Sanskar nahi.. q hai na ji"

Kumkum apne Pati ki taraf dekhte hue, maano unse puch rahi ho

Chaubey ji- ha.. ha.. Bilkul sach baat kahi, aur hamara Banaras toh Atithi samman k liye hi prasiddh hai

Jaldi hi Aslam, Chaubey ji k sath unke alishan ghar main ek bade se hall main baitha hua tha.. jaha dono sofe pe baithe hue office aur kaam ki baaten karne lag chuke thay

Ki tabhi andar se Kumkum ek tray main nasta leke aati hai.. aur apne Pati ki taraf dekhte hue kehti hai
"Jab dekho tab kaam kaam.. are unhe kuch khane peene toh dijiye"

Chaubey ji- (Haste hue) are.. ha.. lao.. lao

Aslam- are Bhabhi ji eski kiya jarurat thi

Kumkum muskurate hue naste ki tray neeche rakhne k liye jhukti hai toh Aslam ko uski nighty k gale se ek khubsurat nazara milta hai.. qki es samay Kumkum ki nighty k uper k 2 button khule hue thay
"Lijiye na Bhai Sahab"

Aslam muskurate hue
"Jarur Bhabhi ji.. jarur lunga"

Chaubey ji- (Jo bechare in sab se puri tarah abhigya thay) are Kumkum tum bhi baith jao hamare sath

Kumkum- Mujhe jara kitchen main kuch kaam hai, main thodi dair main aati hu

Kumkum itna kehte hue wapas kitchen ki taraf chal padti hai

Edhar Chaubey ji aur Aslam baaten karne lagte hai ki tabhi Chaubey ji ka Phone bajna suru ho jata hai

Chaubey ji Phone recived karte hue
"Kiya hua, Chaturvedi ji.. subha subha.. are.. are main toh puri tarah bhool hi gaya tha"

Chaubey ji kisi se Phone pe baat karte hue diwar pe tangi gadi ko dekhte hai aur aage jawab dete hai
"bus 5 min.. main bus pahuchta hu.. ha ha bus 5 min"

Chaubey ji jaise hi apni baat puri karke Phone rakhte hai wo apni jagah se uthte hue
"Aslam mujhe jara ghat ki taraf jana hai, aaj hamari society meeting hai waha.. main wo bhool hi gaya tha"

Aslam apne senior ki baat sunte hi apni jagah se uth khada hota hai
"Ha.. ha jarur sir, main bhi nikalta hu"

Chaubey ji, naste ki tray ki taraf dekhte hue
"Are nahi nahi.. tumne kuch khaya hi kaha tha, are Kumkum"

Chaubey ji apne baat jaise hi puri karte hai wo apni Patni ko aawaz dete hai.. jisse Shreematee Chaubey jaldi hi unke samne hoti hai

Chaubey ji- Kumkum.. aaj ghat pe sabhi ne milkar society meeting rakhi thi aur main puri tarah bhool gaya tha. tum jara dekhna ki Aslam ji bina kuch khaye piye na jaye

Kumkum- (Muskurate hue) Aap fikr na kariye ji.. main Aslam ji ka itne ache se dhiyan rakhungi ki wo yaha se khus hoke hi jayenge

Chaubey- Ye hui na meri patni jaisi baat

Chaubey ji haste hue Aslam se Monday ko Office main milne ki baat kehte hai aur turant ki nikal padte hai

edhar Kumkum, Aslam ji ko dekh k muskurate hue
"Aap baithye.. main aapke liye kuch garma garam leke aati hu"

Kumkum itna hi kehti hai aur muskurate hue es baar kithen ki jagah apne bedroom ki taraf chal padti hai

Aslam wahi hall main sofe pe baitha hue garmagaram pakodiya khane main laga rehta hai ki tabhi uske kaano main aawaz padti hai

"Lijiye.. khas aapke liye bilkul garma garam"

Yaha aage kiya hua tha, ye hum baad main Janenge qki abhi samay ho raha hai.. wapas mere gaon chalne ka waise maine sayad abhi tak apne Gaon ka naam nahi bataya hai

mere gaon ka naam hai.. 'Sanskarpur'

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