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Congratulations brother for your new story...
Bdw introduction story ekdum jhkas tha ...
Aapke new stroy ke liye bahut bahut congratulations bhai.HI Guys..!!
readers kisi kisam ke bhi hon.. wo sex (incest.adult) stories shauk se padhte hon, ya fir thriller, fanatasy stories padhne ke shaukeen hon..
vintage tale sabke mann ko bhaya karti hai.. aur fir vintage tale me fasntasy aur sex bhi ho to fir kaha hi kehne.. kahani ka maza dobala ho jata hai.. main laya hon kuch aisa hi aap sab ke liye, jo har kisam ke readers ke liye manoranjan se bharpur hoga.
MERI MANORMA 1913....1937-38 ke beech ki ek munfard kahani..
meri ab tak ki likhi kahaniyon me se meri ye kahani sabse best kahani hogi.. aur ise likhne k liye main bohut time se bechain bhi tha... kahani week me 2 time ....... parr mega updates ke sath post ki jayegi..
updates har wednesday aur sunday ko post ki jaayengi..
Shukriya..!!
thank u very much bhai.. is story se milta julta theame saalon se hi mere mann me tha.. parr kabhi likhne ka nahi socha tha..Aapke new stroy ke liye bahut bahut congratulations bhai.
Mai bhi hope krta hu ye aapki sbse best story ho.
Prologue to aapne bahut hi acha ikha h asad bhai maja aayega I must say .imagination based story... story me aane wale characters ka kisi zinda ya murda insan se koi connection nahi hai...
aaj tak maine sab stories apne hisab se likhi hai.. lekin ye jo story main shuru karne ja raha hon ye kuch hatt ke hai.. matlab k keyboard par ungliyan to meri hi chalengi, parr shabd mere nahi honge..
REASON
hua kuch youn k mai computer ke saamne baitha HIMMAT-WALA story ki last update likh raha tha, to achanak se hi mujhe ehsas hua k room me main akela hi nahi hon, koi aur bhi mere room me maujud hai. jaise hi mujhe is sabb ka ehsas hua, maine apni nazaro ko us taraf mod dia, jahan mujhe kisi ke hone ka ehsas hua, jaise hi maine wahan dekha to maare darr aur hairat ke main uchhal pada.. mere saamne ek ladka aur ek ladki khade hue the. dono hi apni sundarta me bakamal the, mujhse nazren milen to wo mujhe muskurati ankhon se dekhne lage.. dono mere pass aye, ladki ne ek nazar meri chair ke paas dekha to wahan do chair visible ho gaen, darr ke maare mere mathe par paseene ki boonden chamakne lagee.. dil ki dhakan aise sust padi, mano kuch hi der me tham jayegi... pehle kabhi mere sath aisa kuch nahi hua tha.. mai imagination world me to raha hon, par kabhi bhi mera vasta fanrasy world se nahi pada tha.. dono visible hui chairs par baith gaye, dono mujhe dekh muskurane lage.. ladki ne ladke ko rudra ke nam se mukhtib kiya.. rudra mujhse bola..
rudra:-how are you asad bhai..uske mohn se apna naam sunkar mai heran nahi hua, wo the hi ajeeb, achanak se hi mere room me aaye, mere saamne magic k dwara chairs mangwaai gaee.. mera naam jaan lena unke liye kaunsa mushkil kaam tha... meri halat to kharab hone lagi thi.. aisa laga pal bhar me hi dumm nikal jayega..
asad:- mmmm..mmmm.. maine bolne ki koshish kari.. parr nahi bol paya.. dono meri ghabrahat par hasne nahi.. rudra ne ladko manorma keh kar bulaya..manorna ne jaane kya kiya k meri sari ghabrahat pal bhar me hi khatam hogai, mujhe khud me ek ajeeb si shakti mehsus hone lagi.. fir dono ne mujhse kuch der baten kee.. ladki ne mere sarr par apna hath rakha to uske hath se ek roshni si nikli aur mere sarr me samati chali gai.. badi ajeeb baat thi, pal bhar me hi mujhe un sabb ki guzri life ke saare manazar dikhne lage.. mai bhi sab jaan gaya k wo mere paas kyun aaye han... abb se aage jo bhi kuch mai likhonga wo unke tarteeb hue hue alfaz honge,. keyboard par meri ungliyan to chalengi, par jo meri ungliyon se type hoga wo sabb khud se hi hoga..
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hello readers main rudra hon aur mere sath meri jaan, meri ek ek saans ki malik meri manorma hai, dunya ki koi aisi jagah nahi hai, jo hum dono na dekh chuke ho.. wo koi bada mulk ho ya koi chhota, kisi mulk ka koi bada shehar ho ya chota, koi jungle ho ya koi desert.. gehre neele paaniyon me, asmaan ki wus'aton me hum ghoom chuke han.
mai aur meri manorma wo sab dekh chuke han. meri manorma azeem shktiyon ki malik hai.. wo chulubli bhi hai, natkhat bhi hai, kisi bachhi ke jaise shararti bhi hai, kabhi wo ek masoom bulbul ban jati hai, to kabhi khun peene wali ek khunkhaar dayen.. ji han dosto meri manorna sirf aur sirf insani khun pi kar zinda aur hamesha sar sabzo shadab rehti hai.. manorma hi ki waja se main bhi mannorma jaisa ban gaya.. mai manorma ki tarha se khun to nahi peeta par mai bhi manorma ki tarha se amar ho chuka hon..
sari dunya hi hum ghome chuke han, meri manorma ka mann hua k hamari bhi story likhi jani chahiye.. main meri manorma ki baat kaise taal sakta tha.. lekin ek problem thi, meri aur meri manorma ki kahani sex se bhi bharpur thi, to main usi kisi kitabi shakal me dhal nahi sakta tha, XFORUM ke baare me bhi bohut kuch sun rakha tha.. maine manorma se mashwara kiya aur fir hum ne apni story ko XFORUM ki nazar karne ka mann bana liya..
main ya meri manorma chahen to jhat se hi sari kahani XFORUM par upload kar sakte han.. lekin meri manorma ne ASADJEE ko dekh liya, uski XFORUM par lagan ko dekhte hue meri manorma ne ye story ASADJEE se likhwane ka soch liya..
hamari life story ASADJEE ke dwara aap sabb ko dheere dheere karke updates ki surat me milti rahegi.. ASADJEE aap sabb ka achhe se khayal rakhenge.. wo bhagenge nahi, aur na hi mai aur meri manorma ASADJEE ko bhagne denge..
mai ye kehne ki zarurat mehsus nahi karta k aap sabb ASADJEE ko bharpoor support karen.. reason mai bhi jaan chuka hon, aap sabb ASADJEE se bohut pyaar karte han, aur uski sabhi stories ko bohut pasand bhi kar rahe han..
main aur meri manorna dono hi aam insaano se alag han.. isliye is kahani me jo kuch bhi likha ya padha jayega uska kisi bhi zinda ya murda insan se koi connection nahi hai.. ye totally ek fantasy story hai..
main batana to bhul hi gaya k story me hoga kya... ye story meri shuruaati kahani hai.. is kahani me zikr hoga ek ke karz ka.. manorma ki daringdi aur mujhse chahat ka. hamari love story bhi apne daur ki ek munfard love story rahi ha..bohut se rang badle the hamari prem katha ne.. kabhi main manorma ko duhtkar kar khud se door kar deta to kabhi manorma mere liye khun tak baha deti, kabhi wo meri koi parwa nahi kiya karti thi.. to kabhi mere liye laila, heer, sassi, sohni bann jaya karti thi..
raja maharaja bhi honge is kahani me.. rajkumariyon ka jamghata bhi hoga.. rujkumaron ki zindagi ke ahwaal bhi bataye jayenge.... singhasan ke chalte sazishen bhi hongi, khun bhi hoga.. raaj mehal me hone wali badtreen behayaai ka zikr bhi hoga..
kya kuch nahi hoga.. mai kya kya bataon, wo samay jitna dard bhara tha.. jitna khun us daur me bahaya gaya, utna maza bhi tha us daur me..
ye meri early life ki story hogi.. 1913-1937-38 ke beech me hui ghantaon par based hogi..
Thanks To All Readers And Writers.............
bundle of thanks bhai.. intezar main bhi ise shuru karne k liye mahino ka kiya hai... kal se iski first update post ki jaayegi bhai.. yakeenan first update se hi aapko story kar bharpur maza aana shru ho jaayegaPrologue to aapne bahut hi acha ikha h asad bhai maja aayega I must say .
Mujhe bhi is story ka besabri se intejar h .
bohut bohut shukriya alok bhai...... maine socha k aap sabb k liye kuch hatt ke ek story pesh ki jaaye to isi liye maine isi start kar dia.. ye meri sabhi stories se kar sabat hogi bhaiCongratulations asadjee bhai nayi kahani ke liye.....
aap apni ghatiya soch ko le ke kisi ghatiya story ko read karne me apna time waste karen.. aur jis story ko aap read nahi karna chahti wahan ja kar apne ghatiya vichar pesh karne ki firse kabhi matt sochiyega..Jab shuruaat hi itni ghatiya hui hai to baki ka koi v update padh k is ghatiya story pe apna time barbaad nahi karungi.