Fantasy Meri Police wali Biwi

[Shetan]

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Awesome story likhi hai aapne jo duusri kayi saari stories se unique hai. Aapki wiring skills kamal ki hain aur story plot bhi unique hain. baki ke writers sirf aapni stories mai ladkiyo ko lund ki pyasi hi dikhate hain jabki aakpi story mai ye dikhta hai ki aik aurat pyaar ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hain. Uske liye aik aisa purush jiske pass saccha dil ho wo uske liye sab kuch kar sakti hain. Madhuri aapne pati se paaglo ki tarah pyaar karti hai ye hi aapki story ki khass baat hai.

Dusri stories ko padh kar aisa lagta hai jaise ladkiya 11 inch lambe aur 4 inch mote ling ko dekh kar hi pagal ho jati hain aur sex karne ke liye betab ho jati hain jabki vaastivika isse bilkul alag hoti hai. Magar galti ismai unn writers ki nahi hoti kyuki jayada tar writers Purush hote hain jo istriiyo ki bhavnayo wa khayalat ko nahi samajh sakte. Prakrati ne Purusho ko aisa banaya hai jismai wo istriyoo ke sharirik banavat se aakarshit hote hain jaise sundar chehera, bade wa kaase boobs, sundar uthaav lete piiche ke ubhar, kamuk kamar, laambe baal ityaadi. Magar Istriya sirf sharrik banavat se hi nahi balki aur bhi bohot sii cheese dekhti hain purusho mai jaise caring nature, baatchiit karne ka tarika, uski financial condition aur sabse badkar uska saccha hridya ya dill. Agar sirf ling ka size dekhkar istriyaa purusho ko chunti to shayad iss sansaar ki saari istriyaa ki shadi Haapsiyo se ho rahi hoti. Jabki iss sansar mai hota bilkul ulta hi hai, ye sansaar aisi khaniyo se bharaa pada hai jahan istriyoo ne aise purusho ko Pati ke roop mai chuna jo usse bohot pyaar karta tha aur jo dill ka bohot accha tha.

Aapki khanahi mai bhi yahi dikhta hai ki Madhuri aapne pati se iitna pyaar karti hai ki wo uske liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai. Wo aapne shariik bhuk ke liya ya aapne maksad ko paane ke liye bhaale hi kisi aur ke pass chali jaye aur usse sambhog kar le magar usse mansik santuchti aapne pati se prem mai hi milti hai. Jo iss khanai ko unique banata hai.

Kuch Suggestions

• Waise to ye sirf aapki marji hai ki story ko aap kis mod par le jaan chahati hain magar phir bhi kuch suggestion aapki kahani ko aur jayada rochak bana sakte hain. Aapko kahani ko aik flow mai hi chalte rehene dena chayi jabardaasti sex scene na daale sirf wahan hi daale jahan kahani ki demand ho.
• Aaliya ka chulbuli pana iss khanai ke aik majboot aadhar hai. Aapko aise scenes aur daalne chahiye jismai Aaliya chulbuli pana dikhaye kyuki isse uska character aur strong baan kar saamne aayega aur ye natural bhi lagega kyuki wo aik college jaane waali ladki hai to usse aise hi appeksha jayada hai aur ye khanahi ko aur sundar banayega.
• Jabardasti Aaliya ko Madhuri jaise hand to hand fighter banane ki koshish na kare kyuki ye possible nahi lagta. Hand to hand combat fighting sirf kuch training ya kuch dino mai nahi sikhi jaa sakti iske liye saalo ki training ki jarurat hoti hai. Haan long distance fight jaise sniper skills 10 ya 15 dino ki training mai sikhi jaa sakti hai. Aik sniper ke role mai Aaliya jayada natural lagegi bajaye aik low distance fighter ke role mai.
• Aapko Villian ke role ko aur strong banana chahiye kyuki aik dumdaar villian ke bina aik hero ka role bhi ubhaar kar saamne nahi aa pata. Kyuki abhi aisa lag raha hai ki saari baajiya madhuri ke hath main hi hain aur Villian kamjor bana hua hai. Iram ke role ko aaap aik villian ke ruup mai istemaal kar sakti hai jo use iss story mai aur strong banayega. Kyuki usmai kuch negative shades hai jaise wo blast karwana chahati hai aur positive shades bhe hai jaise wo bhi tapan se bhohot pyaar karti hai aur uske liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai.
• Abhi Tapan ka role bhohot hi week lagta hai aise lagta hai jaise use Madhuri ne Aaliya aur Shilpa naam ka Lolipop de diya hai aur wo use he chuusta reheta hai. Aur iski Aad mai Madhuri kuch bhi karti reheti hai, Tapan ko koi farak nahi padta ki wo Raat ko kahan hai der se kyo aa rahi hai sirf Mulk bachane ke naam par wo kuch bhi kar rahi hai aur Tapan sirf Aaliya aur Shilpa ke sath kush hai use koi farak nahi pad raha hai. Ye Kaisa Pyaar hai Tapan ka. Aapko Tapan ke role ko aur strong banana chahiya. Bich mai Tapan ne Madhuri ke Ilaaj ki koshish kari thi uske Naukar ko Shilpa se Narco Analysis test karwa kar magar use baad Tapan ne kuch bhi nahi kiya jaise use Madhuri ki koi Parwaah hi nahi hai yaa use aapne khudke self respect se bhi koi lena dena nahi hai aur wo Shilpa aur Aaliya se kush hai.
• Aapko aur bhi plot daalne chahiye jisse Tapan ka role bhi thoda strong dikhe shuruwaat mai aapne Tapan ko strong dkhikhaya tha Jab usne Madhuri ko Tailor ke sath sex karte hue dekha tha shayad Tapan Madhuri se itna pyaar karta tha ki usne Madhuri ke dwaara diya gaaye saare reason ko maan liya aur Madhuri ko maaf kar diya. Aapko aise story plots daalne chahiye jismai Tapan Madhuri ko kisi aur ke sath sex karte hue dekhe aur usse gussa ho jae. Gussa mai wo Iram ke paas jayad jaaye aur jisse Madhuri aur Tapan ki dono biwiya jealous feel kare. Tapan ka Iram ke paas jaane se Madhuri wa uski dono biwiya tapan ko phir se haasil karne ki koshish kare. Isse Iram bhi Villian ke ruup mai aur nikhar kar saamne aaye gi aur readers ko bhi Iram aur Madhuri ke beech mai Tapan ko leke aik Rassa Kasshi dikhaayi degai jo iss story aur real aur intreasting bana degi.
• Aapko Jaggu ke role ko bhi thoda explore karna chahiye use aap second hero ke taur par iss story mai pesh kar sakti hai. Jaggu, Nida aur Surbhi ka aik love triangle aap dikha sakti hain jo khahani ko intreasting banayega. Surbhi ke dwaara kiya gaya sex agar Jaggu dekh le aur iss karan ke wajah se wo Nida ki aur aakarshit ho jaaye aur surbhi phir jaagu ko paane ke koshish kar to ismai aur emotions or love kahani mai daala jaa sakta hain.

Ye Sirf kuch suggestions the magar ye khahani to aapki hai aur ise aap aapi tarike se aage badayiye.

Last mai to mai ye hi khahunga ki Agar kisi insaan ko Madhuri Dixit, Aaliya Bhatt aur Shipa Shetty biwi ke ruup mai mil jaye to aisa hi lagega ki aisa Saubhagya to Bharma Ji ki Tapasya se hi mil sakta hai.

 

[Shetan]

Kuchh duri par eram apni sigaret ke pekat se ek nikal kar sulgati he or aage badhti he. Uske dill me ek ajib si nafrat aliya shilpa or Madhuri ke lie. Madhuri ko marne ka plan fail huaa or aliya ki goli vo kha chuki thi. Use ye pata nahi tha ki use jo goli lagi he vo aliya ki thi. Eram dhire dhire Madhuri ke ghar ki taraf badh rahi thi. Dhue udati band car me hath bhi kap rahe the. Dill me bafle ki bhavna or teeno baheno ko mar dalne ka zunnun. Eram ne samne aliya ko dekha par hosh use tab aaya jab vo aliya ko cross kar ke aage nikal gai.
Achanak usne brek mari or hosh aaya. Vo dill me boli.

Badi nahi to chhoti sahi. Koi to pahele mare. Eram ne dobara car ghumati he. Or aliya ki taraf badhne lagi.
Pedal pedal chal rahi aliya sumshan sadak hone ke bavjud bhi rode ke kinare pe hi chal rahi thi. Aliya ne note kiya ki uske pichhe takriban 50 mitar pichhe koi car bhi pichhe hi chal rahi he. Bilkul pedal challne vali speed pe. Aliya ne pichhe mud kar dekha. Vo car bikul kam speed me uski taraf hi badh rahi thi. Aliya ruki to vo car bhi ruk gai. Aliya thodi aage chali car bhi uske pichhe chalne lagi or ek horn bajaya aliya ruki or pichhe mud ke dekha. Car exiletar de car aage badhi or ruki. Fir full exiletar. Aliya samaz gai thi ki khatra he. Aliya tez kadmo se bhagi. Lekin vo car bhi uski taraf bhagne lagi.

Car me betthi eram ko bahot maja aa raha tha. Vo apne muh se haste hue bol rahi thi.

Eram ; bhag sali bhag kitna bhagegi.

Aliya tez bhagne lagi car use pichhe use bhaga rahi thi. Ab vo car se tez nahi bhag sakti thi. Aliya bhagte hue gir padi vo kar sirf 10 kadmo ki duri pe khadi ho gai. Car sirf bas exiletar diye ja rahi thi. Aage koi strit light bhi nahi charo taraf andhera tha. Aliya rode pe giri hui sirf car ko dekh rahi thi. Car ki dono hedlight ki roshni se uski ankhe chodiya gai.
Lekin achanak do goliya chali or eram ki car ki ek light or mirar tut gaya. Eram to bach gai par eram ne car full speed me aage baadhadi. Aliya ne moka dekha or lete lete hi Right side ludhak ke nikal gai. Aliya bach chuki thi. Usne najar ghuma kar rode ki taraf dekha to mom pistol tane vaha khadi thi.

Mom ne aaj uski jaan bacha li. Vo keae pahochi ye bhi ek raz hi rahega par eram aage nikal gai. Use gussa aa gaya vo chilati hui boli.

Eram ; hattttt. .. Sali ye kaha se aa gai iiii....

Mom bhag kar aliya ke pas pahochi or use gale lagaya.

Mom ; meri bachi tu thik to he na???

Aliya ; ha maa me thik hu.

Vo aliya ko apni car me bitthati par achanak uske pas ek jeep rukti he vo Madhuri thi. Chalu jeep me se hi Madhuri ne kach ke tukde tayar ki ghisahat or aage aliya or mom ko dekha to usne jeep rok di. Or vo aliya ki taraf bhagti hui aai.

Madhuri ; alu .... Beta kya huaa tu thik he.

Mom ne aliya ko khada kiya or ghum ke ek zannate dar thappad Madhuri ke gal pe mar diya or gusse me boli.

Mom ; bahen nahi tu to iski maa ban ne chali thi. Ab nibhali tune iski jimmedari.

Mom ke ek hi thapad ne Madhuri ko pura zanzod diya. Madhuri ko aaj tak us se bhari ye paheli mili thi.

Mom ; muje bol rahi thi me iska istemal kar rahi hu. Ye to jan liya hota uski madad kar rahi hu ya kuchh or

Madhuri ne apne aap ko sambhala apne gore gal pe lal nishano ko hatho me chhupate hue ankho me anshu lie apna sar upar utthati he. Mom ko bhi dukh hota he kyo ki apni sab se pyari dost ki beti ko aaj vo kis hal me dekh rahi thi.

Madhuri ; kaha se kaha nikal gai me. Vo har risto ko chhod kar. Kuchh ko mene chhoda or kuchh muje chhod gae. Muje kya pata maa ka dharm kya he. Vo kese bacho ko sambhalti he. Kese unki jarurat puri karti he.
Muje to bas ladhna aata he. Jit hasil karna chahe kimmat kuchh bhi chukani pade.

Mom ka dill betth gaya vo Madhuri pe ek lambe arse se us par najar rakhe hue thi. Vo chhoti thi tab se. Par uski bhi kuchh majburiya thi. Use vo bigadte hue rok nahi sakti thi. Mom ne bhi Madhuri ko vo ghatak hathiyar ban ne se nahi roka.

Mom ; to fir tu ladh jo tuje pyara he use me kuchh nahi hone dungi ye samz ye trinetra hi chif nahi anjli ka vada he.

Mom vaha se aliya ko lekar nikal gai. Apne ghar ki taraf nahi Madhuri ke ghar ki taraf mom ja chuki thi. Madhuri bich raste me ban than kar taiyar thi vahi gandi duniya ki ladhai ke lie. Jiske lie use esihi banaya gaya tha. Ek hawas or lalach ki duniya. Madhuri ka ek dar khatam ho chuka tha. Ab usme or jyada badlav aa gaya. Vo apni hawas ka khel khul kar khelne ke lie netaji ke bangle me pahoch gai.
Gate pe hi kanti mila. Kanti Madhuri ko is roop me dekh kar mohit ho gaya. Madhuri ne red saree me bahot jyada kamukh rup le liya tha. Khubshurat sexy hot face ke sath uska ghatak yovan or uski patli kamar pe purane jamane ka chandi ka kamarbandh jo Madhuri ki khubshurati me chand chand laga raha tha.

Madhuri ; (smaile) kese ho kanti?

Kanti ; (smaile) thik hu mem.

Madhuri ; kanti mera ek kam karoge??

Kanti ; bolo mem aap ke lie to jan pe bhi khel jaenge.

Madhuri joro se hasne lagi.

Madhuri ; are bhai jan van nahi chahiye bas information chahiye

Kanti ; bataiye medam bataiye.

Madhuri ; is ghar me aane ke kitne raste he. Or kis kis raste se kon kon aata he. Ye mantri sala netaji sab se jyada kis se milta he sab jan na he.

Kanti ; mem puri information ke lie to wakt lagega par is gate ki puri information me de sakta hu. Is ragister me aane or jane valo ki puri information he. Or jiske bare me nahi likhna matlab koi jankari nahi jutane ka order he vo mere dimag me. Aap ke lie ek memory card me sari photos khich kar aap ko de dunga.

Madhuri ; good kisi ko pata na chale.

Kanti ; nahi chalegi par yaha camera bahot chalu he medam jara khayal rakhna apna.

Madhuri ne kanti ke gal pe ek pappi kari or jeep andar le aati he. Madhuri andar aakar dekhti he ghar me koi nahi dikhata he. Ghar ke pichhe ke hisse me swimming pul tha. Halki halki roshni thi. Madhuri gai to use kisi ne pichhe se use jakad liya kamar ke niche hips ki taraf se kisi ne use jakad liya. Madhuri girte girte bachi.

Madhuri ne pichhe mudke dekha to netaji farsh pe hi bettha tha. Anddhere se bhi kala netaji ke hatho me Madhuri ki gori gori kamar thi. Madhuri ne us se apne aap ko chhudvaya. Or dur ja kar sharmane ki acting karte hue angdai leti he. Or hasne lagi.

Madhuri ; are netaji aap niche kya kar rahe ho.

Netaji ne Madhuri ko is roop me dekha to netahi ki lar tapakne lagi. Red saree me jo arapar Madhuri ka badan dikh raha tha vo dekh kar netahi ke hotth sukh gae. Nashili ankhe or katil smaile lekin sab se jyada sexy thi Madhuri ki patli kamar or kamar pe latak raha chandi ka kamar band. Madhuri ke dill kash chahere ne netaji ko pagal kar diya.

Madhuri ; netaji saf safai ka kam nokaro ki bajay aap hi to nahi karne lag gae.

Madhuri neta ka majak udda rahi thi

Netaji ; re aaja rani kab se intjar kar raha hu. Ssss aaj to tuje pura nanga lar ke ragdunga.

Madhuri apni surili avaj me haste hue apne badan ki madak numais karte hue use dekh kae haste hue boli.

Madhuri ; aap muje ragdoge??? Kabhi sakal dekhi he aaine me. Dekho me kitni sundar hu. Jara meri ye patli kamar dekho!!!!!

Madhuri esa bol kar jor jor se hasne lagi. Badi sokhiyo se netaji ko chudhate hue ye bat boli. Netaji ko Madhuri ki bat jitni buri lagi utni hi achhi lagi. Kyo ki Madhuri jo kah rahi thi vo sach hi kah rahi thi. Or netaji ko ye bat pata thi ki vo kitna badshurat he.
Us mukable Madhuri ko chhuna or us se jyada aage badhna ek shapne ke saman hi he.

Netaji ; chahe kuchh ho jae aap tu muje khali hath nahi chhod sakti tera ye badan muje tera deewana bana diya.

Neta ne Madhuri pe zapta mara Madhuri use dhakka de kar bhagne lagi. Madhuri ke hasne ki gunj or nashila mahol netaji me ek ajib si uttejna peda kar raha tha. Netaji ne Madhuri ko uttejit karne ke liye ye mahol banaya tha par Madhuri ne hi use usi ke jal me fasa diya. Madhuri ki adao ne mahol ko kuchh or hi bana diya.
Netaji Madhuri ke pichhe bhagne lage. Madhuri khil khilati hasi ke sath vo bhi pull ke gol gol bhagne lagi. Netaji Madhuri ko pakad nahi pata is lie use or bhi gussa aata he. Madhuri ko bhi is khel me or maja aane laga. Madhuri jan buch kar thodi dhimi hui taki netaji use pakad sake. Lekin murakh neta ne jump kiya or Madhuri ka ek pau (lag) pakad liya.
Madhuri ghutno ke bal girti he. Neta. Madhuri ki pau se zango tak apne hatho se mashalta huaa upar ko aane laga. Madhuri bhi apne dono hatho ko jamin pe tika kar ulti betthi hui hafne or sharmane ka natak karti he.

Madhuri ; sss aauch..... Ha ha.

Netaji Madhuri ki madak aavajo se or jyda hosh gava bettha vo Madhuri ki zango ko jakad kar usi pe hi betth gaya or Madhuri ki kamar ko hatho se jor jor se mashal ne laga lekin jawab me Madhuri use ukshane ke lie vese hi sirf siskariya bharne lagi

Madhuri ; ah..ssss gande admi. Sss uiii maa...

Madhuri ki adae uski siskariya neta ko pagal bana ne lagi thi. Hal vahi tha. Jese bhikhari ko roti nahi tanduri mil gaya ho. Madhuri jan buch kar thodi sidhi hui. Netaji uski tango ko jakde hue tha. Madhuri ne thodi takat laga kar apna ek pau folt kiya or neta ke seene par apna pau ka panja pura tika kar puss kiya netaji dur gira sidha pull ke pani me. Netaji ko terte nahi aata tha. Par pani sirf 4 fit tha. Netahi khade hue. Or Madhuri ko gusse se dekhne lage. Madhuri netaji ka majak udate huee jor jor se has rahi thi.
Netaji pani me hi khade hue Madhuri ko dekhte he. Ek white jispar log dhum sekne ke lie let te he uspe Madhuri ja kar kamar or koni ke bal Madhuri let gai.

Letne ke karan Madhuri ke boobs halka sa niche ko kampan karte hue zuke. Ye najara dekh kar neta apni bejati bhi bhul gaya. Netaji pani me khada Madhuri ke madak jisham or katil nigaho ko hi dekhta raha. Madhuri ki kamar or uspe bandha huaa chandi ka chamakta huaa challa

,netaji apne hosh khote ja rahe the. Madhuri netaji ke dimag pe asar kar rahi thi. Use apne vash me kar rahi thi.
Madhuri ne netaji ko ungli se use apni taraf aane ka hisara kiya. Netaji Madhuri ki ungliyo ke hisaro me nachte hue pani se bahar aae. Vo ghtno ke bal Madhuri ki taraf badhne laga. Madhuri bahot katil smaile karti he. Smaile is lie kyo ki bina sikhae hi kuchh kiye bager netaji 4 pero pe to aa gae. Mardo ko ghutne par lana Madhuri ko bahot pasand tha. Netaji Madhuri ke pero ke pas aa kar betth gae. Madhuri ke gore gore kele jese per dekh kar netaji ki ankhe fati ki fati rahe gai. Netaji ne hath Madhuri ke pero ki taraf jarur badhaya par Madhuri ne use rok diya.

Madhuri ; nahi bilkul nahi. Tum apne aap ko dekho or muje dekho. Tum muje chhuoge to me gandi nahi ho jaungi.

Madhuri janti thi neta he to vo bada kamina hoga. Kuchh wakt ke lie to uske dimag pe kabja kiya ja sakta he har pal nahi. Vo hosh me pakka aaega.

Netaji ; lekin ab tum meri ho tumhara jishm ab mera he. Tumhe meri pyas bhujani hogi.

Netaji ne Madhuri ke pau ko pakadne ki kosis ki par Madhuri ne pau pichhe khich liya.

Madhuri ; muje tumhari pyas bhujane ki jarurat nahi. Tum me esa kya he jo me tumhare sath bistar sare karu.

Netaji ; tumhe kya chahiye???

Madhuri ; muje kutte bahot pasand he. Bolo banoge mere dogi ha.

Netaji Madhuri ke badle tevar dekh kar heran rahe gae. Vo soch nahi sakta tha vo kya kimat chukae Madhuri ke jisham ko pane ki. Madhuri dobara aram se vese hi let gai. Madhuri ne apna pau lamba kiya. Or apne pau ke anguta netaji ke lips ko tach karne lagi. Netaji ne koi pratikriya nahi di. Madhuri bahot madak smaile ke sath boli.

Madhuri ; lo apni malkin ke pau chumo. Lo lo na.

,be sud neta ke pau ka angutha neta ki lips pe tach ho raha tha. Vo Madhuri ke pau ki ungliya gori gori jispar nail polish lagi hui thi bahot sundar lag rahi thi. Vo dekh kar netahi ko Madhuri ko pane ki chahat or badh gai. Vo use pane ke lie gulam kutta hone ke lie majbur ho gaya. Uska muh apne aap khul gaya. Madhuri muskurane lagi use bhi uttejna ka bahav bahane laga.
Neta uske anguthe ko chusne laga. Dill me or sarir me ek anokhi kam vasna ko Madhuri mahesus katne lagi. Vahi netaji ko bhi bahot hi alag prakar ka romanch lagne laga. Vo Madhuri ne pau ke anguthe se hi Madhuri ke badan ki khushbu sanso ki madad se seene me dill me utarne laga. Uski najar kele jesi Madhuri ki gori gori tango pe thi.
Madhuri ne bhi apne ghutno se saree ko pakda or ahista se upar ki taraf khichna suru kiya. Jo najara netaji dekh rahe the vo dekh kar netaji ka bekabu hona lajmi tha. Vo Madhuri ko or chumne or chhune ke lie majbur ho gae ho. Bekabu bhavna pe control ki nakam kosis karte hue vo Madhuri ki ankho me dekh kar Madhuri ki parmition manta he. Madhuri bhi sexy smaile kiye apni palke zabka ke use ha me jawab de deti he. Netaji ne Madhuri ke pau ke panje ko ahista se pakda or use chum liya.
Ek pal ke lie Madhuri ne bhi apni sanse rok li. Or apne sarir ko fir dhila chhoda ye Madhuri ne jan buch kar kiya. Netaji chumte hue aage badhne lage. Madhuri jan buch kar siskari leti lekin kuchh jan buch kar nahi apne lie ek gulam kite ki seva se khud peda ho rahi thi. Chumte hue netaji Madhuri ke ghutno pe pahoch gae. Madhuri ne koi palak tak nahi zabkai neyaji ghutno pe aage badhte hue apne dono hath Madhuri ke ird gird the. Vo Madhuri ke gutno pe apni lips chipkae najar upar uttha kar Madhuri ki ankho me hi dekh raha tha.
Madhuri ne apne hatho se neta ke hath ko utthaya or apni zango pe rakh diya. Netaji ko itna hi hisara bahot tha.vo apne dono hatho ko Madhuri ki zango pe apne dono panje chipkate hue upar ko badhne laga jis se Madhuri ki saree bhi upar hone lagi. Netaji ki jeebh bhi ahista ahista upar ko chalne lagi. Madhuri ko bhi ajib si romanchak khushi mil rahi thi or netaji ko bhi. Netaji ne Madhuri ki saree ko dhire se pura ulet diya. Jis se Madhuri ko bhi koi etraj nahi tha. Ab netahi ke samne thi Madhuri ki red penty jo sexy blue light ki roshni me chamak rahi thi.
Vo khubshurat najara dekh ke netaji bekabu ho kar use chhune ki kosis ki par Madhuri ne uska hath pakad liya.

Madhuri ; aa hatho se nahi.

Netaji Madhuri ko dekhta he. Madhuri sexy ankho se katil smaile kiye usi ki ankho me dekh rahi thi. Netaji ne apne muh se Madhuri ki panty ko dato se pakda or niche ki taraf khicha. Madhuri ne bhi kamar uttha kar netaji ki madad ki dato se panty ko pura khich ke utarne ke lie netaji ko khada hona pada. Muh me Madhuri ki panty apne jabde me lie vo Madhuri ko hasta huaa dekhta he. Netaji ka dill joro se dhadkane laga.
Madhuri bhi vo seen dekhti he to uske dill me ajib si romanchak khushi milti he. Netaji ke samne Madhuri ki kamna ki gaheri ghati thi. Kabhi vo Madhuri ki dono tango bich ki baheti hui ghati ko dekhta he. To kabhi Madhuri ke face ko jo katil mushkan se use hi dekh rahi thi. Madhuri ne uski taraf apna hath kiya. Netaji ne turant uska hath pakda to Madhuri ne use khicha or apne pas bettha liya. Neta bhi Madhuri ke har hukam ko bina hich kichay follow kar raha tha. Madhuri ne apni dono tango ko khola or neta ke sar ke bal pakad kar dono tango ke bich daba diya.
netaji bhi kamna se bahete ras ki ghati se apni hi nahi Madhuri ki bhi pyas bhujane laga. Madhuri uski jeebh ki chhuan se is lie khush ho rahi thi kyo ki kuchh wakt pahele hi apne pati ke pyar ko apni dono tango ke bich bahete hue use bhi sath le aai thi. Jo sukh chuka tha. Use vo chatvane me jo khushi ho rahi thi vo khud bayan nahi kar sakti thi.
Vahi netaji bhi tapan ka pyar or Madhuri ki kamna ke mishran ko anjane me hi chat kar khush ho raha tha. Madhuri ne apne sar ko pichhe ki taraf zula diya. Jis se pull ke pani me Madhuri ke kale lambe bal terne lage. Madhuri ajib si khushi me magan ho chuki thi.



Vahi usi ghar me jaha netaji apni hawas Madhuri se mita rahe the. Vahi iski beti apne pyar tigar ka intjar kar rahi thi. Use pata tha tigar kaha ae aaega. Ghar ke sare nokaro ko moni ne apne room me aane se mana kiya huaa tha. Tigar ek window se andar aaya. Usne jese window se farsh pe pau rakha uska pau gulabo ki patiyo pe tigar jamin pe utra apne bade se badroom me moni use upni taraf aate hue dekh rahi thi.

Tigar ka aaj tak esa swagat kisi bhi ladki ne nahi kiya tha. Uske face pe smaile aa gai. Window se moni tak pahochne ke lie moni ne khud gulab ki pattiyo se rasta banaya huaa tha.
Madhuri aane ke pure rasto pe mombatiya lagai hui thi. Bich me likha huaa tha vo bhi gulab ki pattiyo se MONI LOVES TIGAR. Moni ke swagat se tigar ke dill me moni ke lie ek alag hi mukam ban gaya. Tigar ne moni se bhi pyar ka izhar kar diya.

Tigar ; moni I love you.

Moni bhi nashili ankho se use dekhti rahi.

Moni ; Moni loves tigar. Chahe me tumhari biwi nahi ban sakti. Chahe tum mujse shadi nahi kar sakte lekin moni hamesha tumse pyar karti rahegi.

Tigar sirf moni ko dekhta raha.

Moni jitni khubshurat quite thi. Utna hi uska dill bhi utna hi sundar tha.

Tigar ; ha aaj me usi pyar ke lie yaha aaya hu. Taki tumhe vo khushi de saku jo tumhe shayad kisi or se na mile kyo ki me bhi tumse pyar karne laga hu moni.

Moni tigar ko pyar se dekhti rahi

Moni dekh rahi thi ki tigar uski taraf hi aa raha he. Tigar uske pas aaya or ghtno pe betth kar moni ke hatho ko apne hatho me lene ki parmition mangata he.
Moni ko ye bahot achha laga. Moni ki ankho se khushi ke anshu bahe gae vo bethi or apne dono hath tigar ke hatho me de diye. Tigar ne moni ko dono hatho ki ungliyo ko chum liya. Apne galo pe laga diya. Moni ne tigar ka sar pakda or uske mathe pe chum liya. Tigar ne apna sar moni ki god me rakh diya.

Tigar ; janti ho moni muje mere papa ne me jab chhota tha tabhi hostel bhej diya army school me. Me vaha apni maa ko bahot yaad karta tha. Sirf week me ek hi din vaha bat karne ki parmition milti thi. Me tarasta tha apne mom ded se milne ko maa se pyar karne badmashiya karne maa ki papa ki dat khane ke lie.

Moni ; aap ke papa kitne be rahem the. Jo unho ne ek bache se uska bachpan chhin liya.

Tigar ; nahi vo bat nahi thi. Darsal mere mom ded bhi meri tarah ek agent hi the. Sayad unhone bhi yahi sikha tha. Agar meri family ne apna bachpan apni jawani apna budhapa jiya hota to sayad hamare mulk ki kai family apni jindgi nai ji pate.

Moni ; kamal he ham logo ko bachane ke lie aap ki family ke har bande ne apni puri jindgi kurban kar di hame aap par garv he.

Tigar ; lekin maje ki bat to ye he jin logo ke lie hamne ye sab kiya unhe khud nahi pata he.

Moni ; yahi to aap logo ki khasiyat he. Kam kamaya name nahi.

Tigar ; tumhari god me vo sukun mil raha he me baya nahi kar sakta sayad maa ki god bhi esi hi hogi na.

Moni ne tigar ka sar upar utthaya vo amsuo se bhara tha.

Moni ; me sochti thi tum unlucky ho jo mujse shadi nahi kar sakte kyo ki me tumse bahot pyar karti hu par hakikat to ye he tumhara kad itna ucha he ki me tumhare layak hi nahi. Kya muje tumse pyar karne ka hak muje doge?????

Tigar ; itna bada mat banao moni me to ek chhota sa shipahi hu. Or tum bahot pyari ho. Meri majburi na hoti to tum meri biwi hoti.

Moni ; nahi hu to kya huaa mera dill tumhara he. Moni bina shadi ke bhi me sirrf tumhari hu. Vada karo me kahi bhi rahu. Shadi karu ya na karu. Tumhe jab bhi moka milega mujse milne jarur aaoge.

Tigar ne ha me sar hilaya dono ek dusro ki ankho me kho gae lab se lab kab takrae ye unhe khud pata nahi chala. Mombatiya bahar se aane vali hawao se bhuj chuki thi. Fulo ki patiya bhi hawa se bikhar gai. Or dono premi jode ek ho gae.



Dono jagah par sambhhog ho raha tha. Ek taraf tigar or moni jaha dono me pyar or sachai thi vahi dusri taraf vo ganda vasna ka khel. Jaha Madhuri ki dono tango ko netaji apne kadho me fasae dhkke laga rahe the or Madhuri gurra rahi thi. Apne dat pis rahi thi.

Madhuri ; netaji sss ahh agar mujse pahele aap khatam hue to ahhhhh ssss to aap ke dungi ssss nahi kabhi

Madhuri ko bhogne ke bavjud bhi uska khud pe kabu nahi tha. Or huaa bhi vo hi. Madhuri ne netaji ko pal pal dara rakha tha. Madhuri is wakt use harana nahi chahti thi. Vo khud ko khalit kar leti he. Madhuri pasina pasina ho gai. Netaji ka bhi yahi hal tha. Netaji bhi antim charam pe pahoch gaya. Madhuri ne jan buch kar netaji ko nishane se bhatka diya. Or netaji ka sara pap Madhuri ki gaheri nabhi me fel gaya.

Madhuri ; sss kya netaji sss itni jaldi sss chaliye ab chat jaiye jaldi ise.

Netaji ko ye ajib laga lekin Madhuri ne netahi ka sar pakd or niche daba diya.

Madhuri ; are netaji kabhi kacha anda (egg) nahi khae ho kya. Ssss sikhana padega aap ko.

Netaji ko pahele to ghirna lagi fir use sab kuchh romnchak lagne laga.

Madhuri subah gate pe pahochi to. Kanti ne hath aage kiya.

Kanti ; medam aap ne

 

[Shetan]

Kanti ; ye lo mem aap ki umido se bhi jyada.

Madhuri ke face pe smaile aa gai. Madhuri ne kanti ka shirt pakda or use apni taraf khicha or ek bahot jabardast lip kiss kar diya.

Madhuri ; (smaile) thank you kanti tumne meri bahot badi madad ki he.

Kanti ; are medam me bas itna janta hu aap buri nahi ho.

Madhuri ne use 2000 rupay diye.

Kanti ; iski jarurat nahi he medam ye me kisi lalach me nahi kar raha hu. Me to ek garib inshan hu. Aap ne itni ijaat di ye hi bahot he.

Madhuri has kar vaha se nikal gai. Vo gadi chalate hue sham ki party ke bare me sochne lagi ki sham party ek bahot badi sajish bhi ho sakti he. Madhuri ne soch liya tha. Sham party ke lie vo tigar or mom dono ki help legi

 

[Shetan]

Awesome story likhi hai aapne jo duusri kayi saari stories se unique hai. Aapki wiring skills kamal ki hain aur story plot bhi unique hain. baki ke writers sirf aapni stories mai ladkiyo ko lund ki pyasi hi dikhate hain jabki aakpi story mai ye dikhta hai ki aik aurat pyaar ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hain. Uske liye aik aisa purush jiske pass saccha dil ho wo uske liye sab kuch kar sakti hain. Madhuri aapne pati se paaglo ki tarah pyaar karti hai ye hi aapki story ki khass baat hai.

Dusri stories ko padh kar aisa lagta hai jaise ladkiya 11 inch lambe aur 4 inch mote ling ko dekh kar hi pagal ho jati hain aur sex karne ke liye betab ho jati hain jabki vaastivika isse bilkul alag hoti hai. Magar galti ismai unn writers ki nahi hoti kyuki jayada tar writers Purush hote hain jo istriiyo ki bhavnayo wa khayalat ko nahi samajh sakte. Prakrati ne Purusho ko aisa banaya hai jismai wo istriyoo ke sharirik banavat se aakarshit hote hain jaise sundar chehera, bade wa kaase boobs, sundar uthaav lete piiche ke ubhar, kamuk kamar, laambe baal ityaadi. Magar Istriya sirf sharrik banavat se hi nahi balki aur bhi bohot sii cheese dekhti hain purusho mai jaise caring nature, baatchiit karne ka tarika, uski financial condition aur sabse badkar uska saccha hridya ya dill. Agar sirf ling ka size dekhkar istriyaa purusho ko chunti to shayad iss sansaar ki saari istriyaa ki shadi Haapsiyo se ho rahi hoti. Jabki iss sansar mai hota bilkul ulta hi hai, ye sansaar aisi khaniyo se bharaa pada hai jahan istriyoo ne aise purusho ko Pati ke roop mai chuna jo usse bohot pyaar karta tha aur jo dill ka bohot accha tha.

Aapki khanahi mai bhi yahi dikhta hai ki Madhuri aapne pati se iitna pyaar karti hai ki wo uske liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai. Wo aapne shariik bhuk ke liya ya aapne maksad ko paane ke liye bhaale hi kisi aur ke pass chali jaye aur usse sambhog kar le magar usse mansik santuchti aapne pati se prem mai hi milti hai. Jo iss khanai ko unique banata hai.

Kuch Suggestions

• Waise to ye sirf aapki marji hai ki story ko aap kis mod par le jaan chahati hain magar phir bhi kuch suggestion aapki kahani ko aur jayada rochak bana sakte hain. Aapko kahani ko aik flow mai hi chalte rehene dena chayi jabardaasti sex scene na daale sirf wahan hi daale jahan kahani ki demand ho.
• Aaliya ka chulbuli pana iss khanai ke aik majboot aadhar hai. Aapko aise scenes aur daalne chahiye jismai Aaliya chulbuli pana dikhaye kyuki isse uska character aur strong baan kar saamne aayega aur ye natural bhi lagega kyuki wo aik college jaane waali ladki hai to usse aise hi appeksha jayada hai aur ye khanahi ko aur sundar banayega.
• Jabardasti Aaliya ko Madhuri jaise hand to hand fighter banane ki koshish na kare kyuki ye possible nahi lagta. Hand to hand combat fighting sirf kuch training ya kuch dino mai nahi sikhi jaa sakti iske liye saalo ki training ki jarurat hoti hai. Haan long distance fight jaise sniper skills 10 ya 15 dino ki training mai sikhi jaa sakti hai. Aik sniper ke role mai Aaliya jayada natural lagegi bajaye aik low distance fighter ke role mai.
• Aapko Villian ke role ko aur strong banana chahiye kyuki aik dumdaar villian ke bina aik hero ka role bhi ubhaar kar saamne nahi aa pata. Kyuki abhi aisa lag raha hai ki saari baajiya madhuri ke hath main hi hain aur Villian kamjor bana hua hai. Iram ke role ko aaap aik villian ke ruup mai istemaal kar sakti hai jo use iss story mai aur strong banayega. Kyuki usmai kuch negative shades hai jaise wo blast karwana chahati hai aur positive shades bhe hai jaise wo bhi tapan se bhohot pyaar karti hai aur uske liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai.
• Abhi Tapan ka role bhohot hi week lagta hai aise lagta hai jaise use Madhuri ne Aaliya aur Shilpa naam ka Lolipop de diya hai aur wo use he chuusta reheta hai. Aur iski Aad mai Madhuri kuch bhi karti reheti hai, Tapan ko koi farak nahi padta ki wo Raat ko kahan hai der se kyo aa rahi hai sirf Mulk bachane ke naam par wo kuch bhi kar rahi hai aur Tapan sirf Aaliya aur Shilpa ke sath kush hai use koi farak nahi pad raha hai. Ye Kaisa Pyaar hai Tapan ka. Aapko Tapan ke role ko aur strong banana chahiya. Bich mai Tapan ne Madhuri ke Ilaaj ki koshish kari thi uske Naukar ko Shilpa se Narco Analysis test karwa kar magar use baad Tapan ne kuch bhi nahi kiya jaise use Madhuri ki koi Parwaah hi nahi hai yaa use aapne khudke self respect se bhi koi lena dena nahi hai aur wo Shilpa aur Aaliya se kush hai.
• Aapko aur bhi plot daalne chahiye jisse Tapan ka role bhi thoda strong dikhe shuruwaat mai aapne Tapan ko strong dkhikhaya tha Jab usne Madhuri ko Tailor ke sath sex karte hue dekha tha shayad Tapan Madhuri se itna pyaar karta tha ki usne Madhuri ke dwaara diya gaaye saare reason ko maan liya aur Madhuri ko maaf kar diya. Aapko aise story plots daalne chahiye jismai Tapan Madhuri ko kisi aur ke sath sex karte hue dekhe aur usse gussa ho jae. Gussa mai wo Iram ke paas jayad jaaye aur jisse Madhuri aur Tapan ki dono biwiya jealous feel kare. Tapan ka Iram ke paas jaane se Madhuri wa uski dono biwiya tapan ko phir se haasil karne ki koshish kare. Isse Iram bhi Villian ke ruup mai aur nikhar kar saamne aaye gi aur readers ko bhi Iram aur Madhuri ke beech mai Tapan ko leke aik Rassa Kasshi dikhaayi degai jo iss story aur real aur intreasting bana degi.
• Aapko Jaggu ke role ko bhi thoda explore karna chahiye use aap second hero ke taur par iss story mai pesh kar sakti hai. Jaggu, Nida aur Surbhi ka aik love triangle aap dikha sakti hain jo khahani ko intreasting banayega. Surbhi ke dwaara kiya gaya sex agar Jaggu dekh le aur iss karan ke wajah se wo Nida ki aur aakarshit ho jaaye aur surbhi phir jaagu ko paane ke koshish kar to ismai aur emotions or love kahani mai daala jaa sakta hain.

Ye Sirf kuch suggestions the magar ye khahani to aapki hai aur ise aap aapi tarike se aage badayiye.

Last mai to mai ye hi khahunga ki Agar kisi insaan ko Madhuri Dixit, Aaliya Bhatt aur Shipa Shetty biwi ke ruup mai mil jaye to aisa hi lagega ki aisa Saubhagya to Bharma Ji ki Tapasya se hi mil sakta hai.

Thank you so much aap ne meri story pe bahot gaherai se adhyan kiya me aap ki sukr gujar hu.

Aliya abhi sord fight ke lie redy bhi nahi he or na hi strong he. Is me uska bachpana chanchalta or galtiya bhi dikhegi. Meri galti he ki isme hero party badi jeet or villan party ki sirf sort chhoti si jit dikhi me aage kuchh sudhar bhi karne ki kosis karungi ho sake itna sex kam karne ki kosis bhi rahi he. Ye story meri nahi he.
Mene ye story apne habby se bich me se le li or bahot chijo ko change kiya aage bhi kuchh chij unki andar se nikalni padti he. Par sex dalna mere bas ka nahi he. Unki help leni hi padti he vese kosis karungi story ko ek bahetar mod de saku

 

[Shetan]

Koi bat nahi complete karke post kar dena naye sire se

Thankyou very much kam dev ji. Fir kya socha he. Kya ek love story ki rachna karoge ki nahi???

Ise sirf fens ki dimand hi samziye. Vese aap ki purani storys to me dobara padh hi rahi hu

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

nice update ..mom ka madhuri ko thappad maarna samajh nahi aaya ?? aaliya to apne marji se kahi jaa rahi thi to madhuri har waqt uspe najar to nahi rakh sakti aur aaliya ne hi gale ke pendant se bachke mom se baat ki thi ..
tiger moni ki baate achchi thi pyar bhari ?..
aur madhuri ne bhi netaji ko achche se khush kiya ??..

par kya aaliya aur mom ko pata nahi chala ki car se hamla karne wali eram thi ??..

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

netaji ka to kahi bhi kisike saath rishta hai gairkanooni kaam me aisa dikha nahi to madhuri uske saath bhi sex kyu kar rahi hai ?? aur jo asli mujrim hai unka koi jikr nahi ki wo kya kar rahe hai ??...

 

[Shetan]

nice update ..mom ka madhuri ko thappad maarna samajh nahi aaya ?? aaliya to apne marji se kahi jaa rahi thi to madhuri har waqt uspe najar to nahi rakh sakti aur aaliya ne hi gale ke pendant se bachke mom se baat ki thi ..
tiger moni ki baate achchi thi pyar bhari ?..
aur madhuri ne bhi netaji ko achche se khush kiya ??..

par kya aaliya aur mom ko pata nahi chala ki car se hamla karne wali eram thi ??..

Mom ne Madhuri ko tappad is lie mara kyo ki usne aliya ko mom se milne ke lie. Jab aliya ne 1st DK ke,admi ko mara to use laga ki mom aliya ko mohra bana rahi he. Madhuri ko ye nahi pata thi ki mom use bacha rahi he.

Mom or aliya dono me se kisi ko ye pata nahi chala aage vo pata laga pati he ya nahi updates aate rahenge