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Fantasy Meri Police wali Biwi

Shetan

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Mr shetan.....

ye to samjh gaya ki ab aap is kameeni biwi ka character justify jaroor karoge....

par suru se story padh kar mujhe yakeen hai ki ye story ek cuckold ka soch kar likhi gai thi...but ab aap change karne wale..tabhi itna gap ho gaya....sahi hai...


Par mujhe ye batao...ki biwi sirf pati ko sala bolne par rafik ko maarne ki dhamki deti hai...matlab uski ijjat ki parwah hsi...

wo usi pati ki ijjat ki maa kyo chudwati hsi....kya aise me uski ijjat ka nhi sochti....


Well...mujhe bas ye dekhna hai ki aap character kaise justify karte hai.....kyoki ye muskil hoga....(jis tarah se ab tak likha hai...use dekh kar to biwi ko accha dikhana namumkin hai. )

lage raho
Bro biwi bimar he lekin uska pyar sachha he kahani ko aage badhne do fir maja aaega
 

Shetan

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ye chutiya dr ki tarah................chutiyapa hi hai........................
jaise wo apni har randi ko justify karke khush ho lete hain.....................lekin koi bhi.........not a single reader
unke justification se sahmat nahin hain

ab is randi ke liye................ desh, mujrim, kanoon ya .....................jo bhi justification do
ye randi hai..................iska certification...................change nahin ho sakta
iska wo bahana bhi........jo wo har bar deti hai........................ beemar hone ka....................
wo bhi ek limit tak chalta hai....................... iski to sari harkatein hi randipane ki hain................aur sab jante bhi hain...........iske staff ke sipahi tak ka lund check karti firti hai


koi nahi jaisa likhna hai bhai likhte raho....................... hamara mood banega to padh liya kareinge
aur comments ki to koi kami hi nahin hogi..................... negative comments :D
aur views bhi bharpoor honge :hehe:

baki ...............dr ki kahaniyon ki tarah............................. sari creativity ...............padhkar koodedaan mein faink dene se jyada nahin rahegi
agar ise revenge/payback ka angle dene ki bajay justify kar diya to......................
Bindash bolo yaar lekin thodi najar jarur marna page par warna agli story nahi likh paunga
 

Shetan

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Bhai maine chutiydr ki 1 hi story padhi hai....biwi ke aasiq....usme usne ye kah kar end kiya ki uske husband ne uksaya...wo bhi galat tha...maone to nhi mana tha....but kam se kam 1 point to mila use kahne ko...

but isme to 1 point bhi nhi dikh raha....aage ka pata nhi ..bas wahi dekhna hai....

mujhe lagta hai ye story sirf ek biwi ka randipan dikhane suru ki gai thi...ab ja kar writter isme change karna chahta hai...may b readers ki wajah se....

well...comments barabar aayge...same here....negative....hahaha.....

lage raho....
Na bhai story mene change nahi ki jo likhna chahta hu vahi likhunga ha meri fresh baki comment padho me kya kahena chahta hu pata chal jaega
 

Shetan

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Me or vo ladki ham ghar ki taraf chal rahe the ham dono khamosh the. Mene bade gor se us ladki ke face ko dekha badi masum si dikh rahi thi ankho me jo ansu the vo bhi sukh gae the. Uska saman mene le liya tha. Mujse raha nahi gaya to me bola.

Me ; aap ka name kya he???
Usne koi jawab nahi diya wo bejan putle ki tarah chale ja rahi thi

Me ; hello me aap se puchh raha hu.

Uska dhyan tuta or boli

Ladki ; jee kya??????

Me ; aap ka name kya he???

Ladki ; jee aliya. Aliya mehmood.

Me ; dekho fikar karne ki koi jarurat nahi he aap ka jab marji aae aap mere ghar rukiye jab dill kare chale jana. Meri biwi he vo aap ki sabhi jarurat pura kar degi.

Aliya ; jee me kisi pe boz nahi ban na chahti hu. Me subah tak chali jaungi.

Me ; isme boz vali koi bat nahi inshan hi inshan ke kam aata he.

Aliya ; aap ka bahot bahot sukriya.

Me aliya ki masumiyat ko dekhta hi rahe gaya uski masumiyat mera dill ghayal kar diya tha ek bar is beautiful girl ko baho me lene ka man kiya lekin me control kiya. Ham do ghar pahoch chuke the.

Udhar madhuri or budha rafik.

Vo madhuri ko baho me le kar masal raha tha hath dono chutad ko masal rahe the.

Rafik ; andar chalo na meri jaan.

Madhuri ; chutiyapa mat dikhao vo aane vale honge.

Rafik ; yaar ek bar thanda to kar do.

Madhuri ; chup karo me upar jaa rahi hu chhodo.

Rafic ; rat ko aaogi janeman.

Madhuri ; dekhungi

Or madhuri use zatke se chhuda ke upar bhag jati he.
 
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Shetan

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Nice .mtlb yha madhuri bhi sex addicted hai
Madhuri hi he
 

Shikari_golu

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Na bhai story mene change nahi ki jo likhna chahta hu vahi likhunga ha meri fresh baki comment padho me kya kahena chahta hu pata chal jaega

Agar aisa hai tab to ye bahut accha hai....

Ab bas ye dekhna hai ki aap biwi ke character ko kaisa dikhate ho....agar sahi dikhaya to uski wajah jaroor dekhuga....

Aur haa...uske pati ko kya chutiya bana ke hi rakhoge....kyoki abhi to wo full chutiya hai...aur cuckold bhi....

Well....intzaar rahega....dekhte hai...

Lage raho dost....
 

Shikari_golu

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Me or vo ladki ham ghar ki taraf chal rahe the ham dono khamosh the. Mene bade gor se us ladki ke face ko dekha badi masum si dikh rahi thi ankho me jo ansu the vo bhi sukh gae the. Uska saman mene le liya tha. Mujse raha nahi gaya to me bola.

Me ; aap ka name kya he???
Usne koi jawab nahi diya wo bejan putle ki tarah chale ja rahi thi

Me ; hello me aap se puchh raha hu.

Uska dhyan tuta or boli

Ladki ; jee kya??????

Me ; aap ka name kya he???

Ladki ; jee aliya. Aliya mehmood.

Me ; dekho fikar karne ki koi jarurat nahi he aap ka jab marji aae aap mere ghar rukiye jab dill kare chale jana. Meri biwi he vo aap ki sabhi jarurat pura kar degi.

Aliya ; jee me kisi pe boz nahi ban na chahti hu. Me subah tak chali jaungi.

Me ; isme boz vali koi bat nahi inshan hi inshan ke kam aata he.

Aliya ; aap ka bahot bahot sukriya.

Me aliya ki masumiyat ko dekhta hi rahe gaya uski masumiyat mera dill ghayal kar diya tha ek bar is beautiful girl ko baho me lene ka man kiya lekin me control kiya. Ham do ghar pahoch chuke the.

Udhar madhuri or budha rafik.

Vo madhuri ko baho me le kar masal raha tha hath dono chutad ko masal rahe the.

Rafik ; andar chalo na meri jaan.

Madhuri ; chutiyapa mat dikhao vo aane vale honge.

Rafik ; yaar ek bar thanda to kar do.

Madhuri ; chup karo me upar jaa rahi hu chhodo.

Rafic ; rat ko aaogi janeman.

Madhuri ; dekhungi

Or madhuri use zatke se chhuda ke upar bhag jati he


Ye kya tha...suru hote ho khatm....yaar time le kar likho...late bhi ho par aise update na hi do to sahi rahega.....
 

kamdev99008

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Ye kya tha...suru hote ho khatm....yaar time le kar likho...late bhi ho par aise update na hi do to sahi rahega.....
Haan... Update itna to ho ki pata chale kuchh hua.... Kuchh kahani aage badhi
 
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