Fantasy Meri Police wali Biwi

[Arvind274]

Nice update

 

[Shetan]

Hsmne dekha vo ladki ki ankho me anshu the ham dono niche utr ham samaj gae ke haram jade budhhe karim ne us ke sath jabardasti karne ki sochi muje bahot gussa aaya me dod ke gaya dekha rafik ne us ladki par kabu kar liya or use ghasit ta huaa andar le ja raha tha me vaha pahocha mene ek jordar zapad us budhe ke gal pe mara vo gir gaya me rafik ko pitne laga vo bachne ki kosis karta lekin meri lat or ghuse use utthne nahi de rahe the madhuri ne hame chhudaya vo mujrim ki tarah chup khada tha vo ladki andar gai or saman le kar jane lagi.
Me jor se chillaya or bola

Me ; orat ki marji hoti he vo kis ke niche soegi jabar dasti uska rap karta he sale bhadve tuje to me andar karwaunga.

Madhuri ; rukiye pahele aap us ladki ko dhundhiye vo bechari koi galat kadam na uttha le.

Me charo or ghuma vo nahi dikhai di. Me rode pe bhagte hue aage nikla vo ladki rode pe apne saman ke sath bethi ro rahi thi ghar se takribsn 500 mitar dur. Me uske pas pahocha. Me haf raha tha. Ladki abhi bhi ro rahi thi niche face kar ke.

Ladki ; sukriya sahab aaj aapne muje bacha liyya.
Me ; abhi tum kaha jaogi sham ho chuki he aao mere ghar chalo.
Ladki ; nahi sir ab kisi pe bharosa nahi kar sakti.
Me ; dekho mere ghar meri biwi bhi he vo police inspector he.
Ladki ; sir me to yaha padhne aai thi lekin muje kya pata ye duniya itni jalim he.
Me ; dekho sab ek jese nahi hote tum pahele ghar chalo






Usne rona thoda kam kiya. Or mere sath chalne lagi.



Udhar rafik or madhuri

Rafik gusse me

Rafik ; muje mara sale ne.

Madhuri ; dekho tum unhe koi gali mat do varna tum jante ho me unke lie kya kar sakti hu

Rafik ; lekin muje mara us ladki ke lie vo kon lagti he thoda maja le leta.

Madhuri ; dekho jabar dasti kisi ke sath nahi me vada karti hu use tumhare niche me le aaungi or bolo.

Rafik ; sali rand tere pati ne muje kutto ke jese pita tuje to me uske samne chodunga

Madhuri ; ye nahi ho sakta or bol kya karu tera mud thik karne.

Rafik ; me tere sath suhagrat mana na chahta hu.

Madhuri smail karti he

Madhuri ; manjur or bolo.

Rafik ; ese nahi tum dulhan ke jode me singar ke sath vahi joda jo tere pati se shadi ki vahi or puri suhagrat bistar vo bhi tere hi ghar me.

Madhuri ko fir hasi aa jati he

Madhuri ; manzur ab mere pati pe koi var nahi teri sari kwais me puri karungi lekin mere pati par ek kharoch bhi aai to tuje zamin me zinda gad dungi.

Rafik hasta he

Rafik ; manzur sali rand tuje chodke suhagrat manaunga or tu meri rakheil banegi meri randi.

Dono haste he or rafik rod pe hi madhuri ko pakad ke apni baho me bhar ke uski hips masalne lagta he.

 

[Arvind274]

Bahut dino bad aap ko dekh kr achha laga.ab apne updato ko contineu kriye

 

[Arvind274]

Yr is madhuri ka cairacter itna gira hua kyu bnaya aapne.aur itni gulami kyu kr rhi hai is rafeek ki sirf uska land lene ke liy bs ?

 

[Shetan]

Bro

Yr is madhuri ka cairacter itna gira hua kyu bnaya aapne.aur itni gulami kyu kr rhi hai is rafeek ki sirf uska land lene ke liy bs ?

Story aage chalegi to pata chalega me abhi nahi bataunga vese aap logo ko bahot sare saprais milenge story me

 

[Arvind274]

Yr aap bhi dr chutiya ka takiya Kalam apni kahani me use mt Krna ki "patni pyar kregi bs apne pati se aur chudegi jamane bhar se.

 

[Shikari_golu]

Mr shetan.....

ye to samjh gaya ki ab aap is kameeni biwi ka character justify jaroor karoge....

par suru se story padh kar mujhe yakeen hai ki ye story ek cuckold ka soch kar likhi gai thi...but ab aap change karne wale..tabhi itna gap ho gaya....sahi hai...


Par mujhe ye batao...ki biwi sirf pati ko sala bolne par rafik ko maarne ki dhamki deti hai...matlab uski ijjat ki parwah hsi...

wo usi pati ki ijjat ki maa kyo chudwati hsi....kya aise me uski ijjat ka nhi sochti....


Well...mujhe bas ye dekhna hai ki aap character kaise justify karte hai.....kyoki ye muskil hoga....(jis tarah se ab tak likha hai...use dekh kar to biwi ko accha dikhana namumkin hai. )

lage raho

 

[kamdev99008]

Mr shetan.....

ye to samjh gaya ki ab aap is kameeni biwi ka character justify jaroor karoge....

par suru se story padh kar mujhe yakeen hai ki ye story ek cuckold ka soch kar likhi gai thi...but ab aap change karne wale..tabhi itna gap ho gaya....sahi hai...


Par mujhe ye batao...ki biwi sirf pati ko sala bolne par rafik ko maarne ki dhamki deti hai...matlab uski ijjat ki parwah hsi...

wo usi pati ki ijjat ki maa kyo chudwati hsi....kya aise me uski ijjat ka nhi sochti....


Well...mujhe bas ye dekhna hai ki aap character kaise justify karte hai.....kyoki ye muskil hoga....(jis tarah se ab tak likha hai...use dekh kar to biwi ko accha dikhana namumkin hai. )

lage raho

ye chutiya dr ki tarah................chutiyapa hi hai........................
jaise wo apni har randi ko justify karke khush ho lete hain.....................lekin koi bhi.........not a single reader
unke justification se sahmat nahin hain

ab is randi ke liye................ desh, mujrim, kanoon ya .....................jo bhi justification do
ye randi hai..................iska certification...................change nahin ho sakta
iska wo bahana bhi........jo wo har bar deti hai........................ beemar hone ka....................
wo bhi ek limit tak chalta hai....................... iski to sari harkatein hi randipane ki hain................aur sab jante bhi hain...........iske staff ke sipahi tak ka lund check karti firti hai


koi nahi jaisa likhna hai bhai likhte raho....................... hamara mood banega to padh liya kareinge
aur comments ki to koi kami hi nahin hogi..................... negative comments
aur views bhi bharpoor honge

baki ...............dr ki kahaniyon ki tarah............................. sari creativity ...............padhkar koodedaan mein faink dene se jyada nahin rahegi
agar ise revenge/payback ka angle dene ki bajay justify kar diya to......................

 

[Shikari_golu]

ye chutiya dr ki tarah................chutiyapa hi hai........................
jaise wo apni har randi ko justify karke khush ho lete hain.....................lekin koi bhi.........not a single reader
unke justification se sahmat nahin hain

ab is randi ke liye................ desh, mujrim, kanoon ya .....................jo bhi justification do
ye randi hai..................iska certification...................change nahin ho sakta
iska wo bahana bhi........jo wo har bar deti hai........................ beemar hone ka....................
wo bhi ek limit tak chalta hai....................... iski to sari harkatein hi randipane ki hain................aur sab jante bhi hain...........iske staff ke sipahi tak ka lund check karti firti hai


koi nahi jaisa likhna hai bhai likhte raho....................... hamara mood banega to padh liya kareinge
aur comments ki to koi kami hi nahin hogi..................... negative comments
aur views bhi bharpoor honge

baki ...............dr ki kahaniyon ki tarah............................. sari creativity ...............padhkar koodedaan mein faink dene se jyada nahin rahegi
agar ise revenge/payback ka angle dene ki bajay justify kar diya to......................

Bhai maine chutiydr ki 1 hi story padhi hai....biwi ke aasiq....usme usne ye kah kar end kiya ki uske husband ne uksaya...wo bhi galat tha...maone to nhi mana tha....but kam se kam 1 point to mila use kahne ko...

but isme to 1 point bhi nhi dikh raha....aage ka pata nhi ..bas wahi dekhna hai....

mujhe lagta hai ye story sirf ek biwi ka randipan dikhane suru ki gai thi...ab ja kar writter isme change karna chahta hai...may b readers ki wajah se....

well...comments barabar aayge...same here....negative....hahaha.....

lage raho....

 

[Shetan]

Yr aap bhi dr chutiya ka takiya Kalam apni kahani me use mt Krna ki "patni pyar kregi bs apne pati se aur chudegi jamane bhar se.

Bro madhuri ko sex edition ki bimari he ye kese hui kab hui ye aage pata chalega is bimari ka karan or uski life me kya asar hota he.
Bhai dr shab ke fen hu kuchh to unka tadka bhi dalunga