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writer maq writer pbx writer hayan writer new writer yash ek super hero is story ke writer ka naam yaad nahi aa rha but inki ek new story (hero) start hui hai aese jane kitne writer hai jinki story close ho chuki hai aur aaj hi ek story close hui hai white vs black ye ek new writer ki story haiKuch special jiske wajah se apko gussa aa gaya ho
Aesa kya sorry update do ya do reply dugiwriter maq writer pbx writer hayan writer new writer yash ek super hero is story ke writer ka naam yaad nahi aa rha but inki ek new story (hero) start hui hai aese jane kitne writer hai jinki story close ho chuki hai aur aaj hi ek story close hui hai white vs black ye ek new writer ki story hai
writer maq writer pbx writer hayan writer new writer yash ek super hero is story ke writer ka naam yaad nahi aa rha but inki ek new story (hero) start hui hai aese jane kitne writer hai jinki story close ho chuki hai aur aaj hi ek story close hui hai white vs black ye ek new writer ki story hai
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Matlab sameer aur sonal ek dusre ko pehle se hi jaante the, lekin ye pata nahi dono ko ki dono ke bich asal mein rishta kya hai....Update 15
Ham ne kaha tha ki agla update Sonal ke juba se aayega to chaliye le chalte apko Sonal ke jubani agale update ki taraf.
Main Sonal aap logon ko kya batao jaisa pichhale kuch update me aap logon padha hoga ki chhoti si umar me hi maine apne Bhanje Sameer ko apna sab kuch man baithi lekin ye nhi hain main uske upar moh me apna sab kuch har baithi. Jo usane kiya tha uske bad to koi ladki bhi apna sabkuch uspe nyochhawar kar de main to sirf pyar baithi jiska usko pta bhi nhi hain.
Hua yu aaj mere us sal school ka akhir din us kaksha me aur sabko aan atha tha kyonki sabko class me parikshafal milna tha usake bad ghar chale jana tha. Main nhi jana chahati thi kyoki meri didi apne sabhi bachchon ke sath aane wali thi. Didi mujhe bahut dular karti thi aur mere bhanjon aur bhanjiyon ke sath achchha samay bitaya tha. Magar mujhe school jana pad gaya. Idhar mai school ke liye aur udhar didi mere pichhe ghar pahuch gayi.
Ghar me sab ek dusare milkar bahut khush the aur ek dusare sath apni batein kar rhe the. Kuch der bad Sameer gain ghumane nikal gaya.
Samaj me asamajik tatv har yug me rhe hain to main is yug se kaise bach jati. Main apna parikshafal jankar aur apne saheliyon se milkar apne ghar ke liye wapas chal padi magar shayad mere kismat kuch likha tha.
Main jaise Adhe raste aayi dophar ka wakt tha har koi apne gharon me aram kar rhe the rasta pura sun San tha mere samane kuch log aa gaye jinhone apna muh gamachhe se dakh rakha tha.
Unhe dekh kar main kuch samajh pati tab unhone mere muh ko dabakar lekar chal pade nadi ke kinare wale khandhar ki taraf. Aap hi sochiye us samay meri umar kya rahi hogi magar hawas ke bhukhe ko to apni hawas mitani hoti hain.
Main apne hath paow chala rhi thi magar main chhoti si gudiya mera kya chal pata un haiwano ke aage. Unhone khandhar me lga kar mujhe waha puwal par patak diya shayad unhone ne pahle se iski taiyari kar rakhi thi kyoki khandhar me puwal koun rakhega.
Mujhe puwal pe patakane ke bad wo charon taraf mujhe gher ke khade ho gaye.
Main: koun ho tum log aur mujhe yahan kyo lekar aaye ho.
A1: Ham tere chahane wale hain bulbul aur tere is nashile badan se pyar karne ke utha ke laye hain.
Main unki bat sunkar dar gayi. Lekin main itani jaldi apni himmat ne har sakti thi.
Main: tum log jante nhi main koun hoon mujhe ghar jane do warna tum sans lene ke liye jinda nhi bachoge.
A2: tu koi bhi ho bul bul ham to is gaon ko aaj chhod ke chale jayege. Hamara kon kya bigad lega aaj tera ras chakh ke ham bhi uske nashe me is gaon se nikal jayegi.
ye bol ko mere taraf badh gaya main ek dum dar gayi aur sadame main ek dum shant si khadi ho gayi unhone jabrdasti mere sameej ki jip khol kar nikal ke mujhe upar se nagi kar diya.
Usme se dusare ne mere nibu jaisi stan ko pakad ke jor daba diya jisase mere sharir me dard ki ek lahar doud gayi aur is dard ne hosh me laya.
Main jor se chilla padi: bachao...
wo chron hasane lage ki kyoki dopahar jaldi koi gaon me bahar nhi nikalata aur nikalata bhi hain to apne kheton ke taraf yahan nadi ke kinare khandhar ke pas koun aata. Main ander se dari huyi thi.
WO charon mere sath aaj dushkarm kar hi dete magar shayad meri kismat I itani bhi buri nhi thi. Unme se dusare ne jab mere dusare stan ko pakadane ke liye hath aage badaya to uske hathon ko kisi ne bich pe pakad liye main khud ko bachane walonnko dekha tha mere chehere pe harsh ki bhawana aagayi.
Kyoki wo koi aur nhi Sameer tha. Wo shayad gaon ghumate ghumate nadi ke kinar aa gaya tha jahan usane meri chikh sun li. main usase choti thi wo mujhe naam se bulata tha. Uske ankhe gusse lal ho chuki thi.
Sameer: meri Sonal ko chhu e ki tune himmat kaisi kute.
ye bol kar usane uska wo hath tod diya. Sameer jaise gusse me shaitan ban gaya tha wo akela charon pe Bhari pad raha tha aur unki durgati kar rha tha.
Uska gussa dekhkar main bhi dar gayi lekin mujhe laga wo kahi. Gussase me inhe Jan se na mar de isliye main apni awastha bhool kar uske pass ja pahuchi.
Main: Unhe chhod do Sameer wo mar jayege unhe tumne bahut saja de di chahati to main bhi hoon inhe jaan se marna magar main bhi chahati tumhe polic khoon ke apradh me pakad le.
Sameer: nhi Sonal aese samaj ke dushmano ko jine ki koi jarurat hain upar se inhone mere Sonal ko chhune ki himmat ki main Jan se mar duga.
Mere dil ne bus Sameer ki ek hi bat suni "Meri Sonal" lekin mujhe Sameer se un dusto ko bhi bachana tha warna Mera Sameer apradhi ban jata.
Main:;tumhe apne Sonal ki kasam Sameer chhod do unhe.
Mere kasam dete hi Sameer ne unhe chhod diya aur meri taraf palta mere taraf ghumate hi usane fir meri taraf pith kar liya. Main apni halat ko bhool chuki thi Sameer ke gusse aur apne liyebfikar dekh kar.
Main: Kya hua tumane apna chehera kyo ghuma liya.
Sameer haklate huye: wo wo wo tum apne upar ke kapade pahan lo.
Sameer ki bat sunkar mujhe apni halat ka hosh aaya aur maine turant apne kapade pahan liye.
Main: ab ghum jao main kapade pahan liye.
Sameer: chalon ab ghar chalon.
Lekin sSameer jaise meri taraf guma main jakar usase chipak gayi aur rone lagi.
Sameer: ab chup ho jao aur ghar chalon koi samay ka puchhe to bol dena main raste me mil gaya tha aur jabardasti tumhe nadi ki traf gumane le gaya tha.
Maine Sameer ki baton pe sar hilaya aur uske sath ghar kebtaraf chal padi magar dil me bus ek bat gunj rhi thi.
"Meri Sonal"
IS update liye itna hi baki agale update me.
Shayad kuch bat adhuri rah gayiek writer (dirty biker) aese bhi hai jinhone sirf hamare liye story
but ham dono se jayeda to aap masoom hai MASOOM NAINA JI