Fantasy Milan ya Punah Milan

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New Update 18 posted on page 45

 

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[Shahrukh]

Awesome update

 

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Aaj rat ho sakta hain is par do teen update aaye.

Dusri story pe kaam Monday se shuru hoga plot final kar loo thoda uska

 

[mashish]

Hamare bade bujargo ne kha hai jayeda bade bol nahi bolna chahiye aur rahi baat slow chalne ki ya fast ye story ki theam per depand karta hai ham bahut clear sabdo main baat khete hai asha hai aap hamari baat samjh gayi hogi ki ham kya khena chahte hai

 

[mashish]

Aap roj online aati thi but ek chota msg nahi kar payi

 

[Naina]

Update 14

Aayiye ek chale jan lete hain thoda Bhan Singh ki family ko.

Jaise apko bataya ki Bhan Singh Surajpur ke thakur hain unka vivah apne hi mitra ke bahan se huyi. Inke shadi ke pichhe bhi karan hain. Bhan Singh ka mitra ek garib kisan tha maa bapp ki mout chhote ayu me hone karan usane apne aur apni Bahan Nitu ka bharan posan swayam karta tha. Jab Nitu vivah yogy huyi thi ek achche pariwar ko dekh kar usane Nitu ka vivah tay kar diya apne jivan bhar ki puji usane dehaj ke roop me diya.

Magar shayad unki kismat itani achchhi nhi thi ya bahut achchhi thi jo samay rahate jahan shadi huyi unka swabhav samane aa gaya.

Barat jab darwaje pe pahuchi to to dwarpuja se pahale hi Nitu ke hone wale sasural walon ne aur dehaj ki mang rakh di. Nitu ka bhai pahale hi apna sabkuch de chuka tha. Bhan Singh Abhi pahucha nhi tha. Paise ko lekar huyi gahma gahmi ke bad Nitu ke hone wale sasur ne diya hua dehaj ki rakam wapas kar di aur barat lekar wapas chale gaye.

Isase Nitu ke bhai ko sadama laga aur usi time use heart attack aa gaya. Thik usi time Bhan singh waha pahuch gaye apne mitra ki halat dekh kar unka bhi kaleja fat pada Nitu apne bhai ko sambhal rahi thi aur gaon wale khad hokar dekh rahe the kisi ko kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha.

Bhan Singh jab apne mitra ke pass pahucha to wo apni antim sase gin raha tha. Bhan Singh ko dekh uske chehere pe ek khusi aa gayi usane Nitu ka hath Bhan Singh ke hathon me soup diya jab tak Bhan Singh kuch samajh pata tab tak uske mitra ke pran pakheru ud chuke the.

Bhan Singh ke bhi mata pita ki mrityu 1 varsh purv ho chuki thi. Usane wohi gaon walon ke samane Nitu se gandharv vivah kiya. Fir apne mitra ki antim kriya kar Nitu ko lekar haweli aa gaya.

Apne bhai ke gam se bahar ane me Nitu ko thoda samay laga is bich Bhan Singh dwara rakhe jane wale khyal se wo Bhan Singh ke taraf jhukati chali gayi aur ek din dono ka milan hua aur dono me pyar badhata gaya.

unhe pahle santan ke roop me Sushila ki prapti huyi fir kai varshon tak unhe bachcha na hua.

Jab Sushila vivah ke layak huyi to Bhan Singh uska vivah Bhawanipur ke thakur ke ghar me Bhawani Singh kar diya. Ishwar ki lekhon ya pta nhi kya. Sushila ke vivah hone ke bad Nitu aur uski beti Sushila dono ek sath garbhvati huyi.

Jahan Sushila ne ek putra ko janam diya jiska nam Sameer rakha gaya wohi Nitu ko judwa bachche ek ladka aur ek ladki huyi. In dono se Sameer bada tha.

Nitu aur Bhan Singh ke Ghar me Sonal aur uske bhai Shivam ka lalan palan pyar hua. Lekin lad pyar ke sath dono ko samajhik gyan aur shishtachar ke niyamawali se ko bhi samjhaya gaya.

Sushila apne har purta ki 4 janam diwas ke bad apne Mayeke aati thi. To jab Manav aur Mohini ka 4 janam diwas bita to fir ek Sushila apne sabhi bachchon ko lekar aayi apne mayeke.

Abhi ke liye itna agala update sham tak jo Sonal ke jubani hogi kyoki wo kahani Sonal ki life ki turning point hain aur Sonal Sameer ke aesa kyo sochati Hain uski wajah bhi isi update me clear hoga.

atit ke purane panno mein nitu ke bhi dukh ke kuch kisse the.. wo to achha hua ki uska hath bhan Singh ne tham liya us bure waqt mein...
Oh to isliye bachho Umar ko lekar itna fark hai....
Waise ye ek naya mod hoga jab ye baat saamne aayegi.. ki kyun sonal sameer ko dil de baithi...
Well... Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan... dilchasp kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

Hamare bade bujargo ne kha hai jayeda bade bol nahi bolna chahiye aur rahi baat slow chalne ki ya fast ye story ki theam per depand karta hai ham bahut clear sabdo main baat khete hai asha hai aap hamari baat samjh gayi hogi ki ham kya khena chahte hai

Aap roj online aati thi but ek chota msg nahi kar payi

Uff.. ye mashish Sahab ka gussa..

 

[mashish]

Uff.. ye mashish Sahab ka gussa..

gussa is baat ka yha jo bhi achhi story hai ya to close ho gayi ya writer online aakar bhi reply nahi karte story start karte hai to sath nibhana sathiya ki tarhe kahenge aur jab read karna suru karo to bich main aese gayeb honge jese gadhe ke sar se sing aur kai writer to aese hai ki 2 ya 3 update dekar apni story se gayeb ho jayenge karan pucho to kahenge ki reader hi nahi hai to kyo likhu

 

[Naik]

Update 14

Aayiye ek chale jan lete hain thoda Bhan Singh ki family ko.

Jaise apko bataya ki Bhan Singh Surajpur ke thakur hain unka vivah apne hi mitra ke bahan se huyi. Inke shadi ke pichhe bhi karan hain. Bhan Singh ka mitra ek garib kisan tha maa bapp ki mout chhote ayu me hone karan usane apne aur apni Bahan Nitu ka bharan posan swayam karta tha. Jab Nitu vivah yogy huyi thi ek achche pariwar ko dekh kar usane Nitu ka vivah tay kar diya apne jivan bhar ki puji usane dehaj ke roop me diya.

Magar shayad unki kismat itani achchhi nhi thi ya bahut achchhi thi jo samay rahate jahan shadi huyi unka swabhav samane aa gaya.

Barat jab darwaje pe pahuchi to to dwarpuja se pahale hi Nitu ke hone wale sasural walon ne aur dehaj ki mang rakh di. Nitu ka bhai pahale hi apna sabkuch de chuka tha. Bhan Singh Abhi pahucha nhi tha. Paise ko lekar huyi gahma gahmi ke bad Nitu ke hone wale sasur ne diya hua dehaj ki rakam wapas kar di aur barat lekar wapas chale gaye.

Isase Nitu ke bhai ko sadama laga aur usi time use heart attack aa gaya. Thik usi time Bhan singh waha pahuch gaye apne mitra ki halat dekh kar unka bhi kaleja fat pada Nitu apne bhai ko sambhal rahi thi aur gaon wale khad hokar dekh rahe the kisi ko kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha.

Bhan Singh jab apne mitra ke pass pahucha to wo apni antim sase gin raha tha. Bhan Singh ko dekh uske chehere pe ek khusi aa gayi usane Nitu ka hath Bhan Singh ke hathon me soup diya jab tak Bhan Singh kuch samajh pata tab tak uske mitra ke pran pakheru ud chuke the.

Bhan Singh ke bhi mata pita ki mrityu 1 varsh purv ho chuki thi. Usane wohi gaon walon ke samane Nitu se gandharv vivah kiya. Fir apne mitra ki antim kriya kar Nitu ko lekar haweli aa gaya.

Apne bhai ke gam se bahar ane me Nitu ko thoda samay laga is bich Bhan Singh dwara rakhe jane wale khyal se wo Bhan Singh ke taraf jhukati chali gayi aur ek din dono ka milan hua aur dono me pyar badhata gaya.

unhe pahle santan ke roop me Sushila ki prapti huyi fir kai varshon tak unhe bachcha na hua.

Jab Sushila vivah ke layak huyi to Bhan Singh uska vivah Bhawanipur ke thakur ke ghar me Bhawani Singh kar diya. Ishwar ki lekhon ya pta nhi kya. Sushila ke vivah hone ke bad Nitu aur uski beti Sushila dono ek sath garbhvati huyi.

Jahan Sushila ne ek putra ko janam diya jiska nam Sameer rakha gaya wohi Nitu ko judwa bachche ek ladka aur ek ladki huyi. In dono se Sameer bada tha.

Nitu aur Bhan Singh ke Ghar me Sonal aur uske bhai Shivam ka lalan palan pyar hua. Lekin lad pyar ke sath dono ko samajhik gyan aur shishtachar ke niyamawali se ko bhi samjhaya gaya.

Sushila apne har purta ki 4 janam diwas ke bad apne Mayeke aati thi. To jab Manav aur Mohini ka 4 janam diwas bita to fir ek Sushila apne sabhi bachchon ko lekar aayi apne mayeke.

Abhi ke liye itna agala update sham tak jo Sonal ke jubani hogi kyoki wo kahani Sonal ki life ki turning point hain aur Sonal Sameer ke aesa kyo sochati Hain uski wajah bhi isi update me clear hoga.

Bahot behtareen shaandaar

 

[rubythebindas]

Update 15

Ham ne kaha tha ki agla update Sonal ke juba se aayega to chaliye le chalte apko Sonal ke jubani agale update ki taraf.

Main Sonal aap logon ko kya batao jaisa pichhale kuch update me aap logon padha hoga ki chhoti si umar me hi maine apne Bhanje Sameer ko apna sab kuch man baithi lekin ye nhi hain main uske upar moh me apna sab kuch har baithi. Jo usane kiya tha uske bad to koi ladki bhi apna sabkuch uspe nyochhawar kar de main to sirf pyar baithi jiska usko pta bhi nhi hain.

Hua yu aaj mere us sal school ka akhir din us kaksha me aur sabko aan atha tha kyonki sabko class me parikshafal milna tha usake bad ghar chale jana tha. Main nhi jana chahati thi kyoki meri didi apne sabhi bachchon ke sath aane wali thi. Didi mujhe bahut dular karti thi aur mere bhanjon aur bhanjiyon ke sath achchha samay bitaya tha. Magar mujhe school jana pad gaya. Idhar mai school ke liye aur udhar didi mere pichhe ghar pahuch gayi.

Ghar me sab ek dusare milkar bahut khush the aur ek dusare sath apni batein kar rhe the. Kuch der bad Sameer gain ghumane nikal gaya.

Samaj me asamajik tatv har yug me rhe hain to main is yug se kaise bach jati. Main apna parikshafal jankar aur apne saheliyon se milkar apne ghar ke liye wapas chal padi magar shayad mere kismat kuch likha tha.

Main jaise Adhe raste aayi dophar ka wakt tha har koi apne gharon me aram kar rhe the rasta pura sun San tha mere samane kuch log aa gaye jinhone apna muh gamachhe se dakh rakha tha.

Unhe dekh kar main kuch samajh pati tab unhone mere muh ko dabakar lekar chal pade nadi ke kinare wale khandhar ki taraf. Aap hi sochiye us samay meri umar kya rahi hogi magar hawas ke bhukhe ko to apni hawas mitani hoti hain.

Main apne hath paow chala rhi thi magar main chhoti si gudiya mera kya chal pata un haiwano ke aage. Unhone khandhar me lga kar mujhe waha puwal par patak diya shayad unhone ne pahle se iski taiyari kar rakhi thi kyoki khandhar me puwal koun rakhega.

Mujhe puwal pe patakane ke bad wo charon taraf mujhe gher ke khade ho gaye.

Main: koun ho tum log aur mujhe yahan kyo lekar aaye ho.

A1: Ham tere chahane wale hain bulbul aur tere is nashile badan se pyar karne ke utha ke laye hain.

Main unki bat sunkar dar gayi. Lekin main itani jaldi apni himmat ne har sakti thi.

Main: tum log jante nhi main koun hoon mujhe ghar jane do warna tum sans lene ke liye jinda nhi bachoge.

A2: tu koi bhi ho bul bul ham to is gaon ko aaj chhod ke chale jayege. Hamara kon kya bigad lega aaj tera ras chakh ke ham bhi uske nashe me is gaon se nikal jayegi.

ye bol ko mere taraf badh gaya main ek dum dar gayi aur sadame main ek dum shant si khadi ho gayi unhone jabrdasti mere sameej ki jip khol kar nikal ke mujhe upar se nagi kar diya.

Usme se dusare ne mere nibu jaisi stan ko pakad ke jor daba diya jisase mere sharir me dard ki ek lahar doud gayi aur is dard ne hosh me laya.

Main jor se chilla padi: bachao...

wo chron hasane lage ki kyoki dopahar jaldi koi gaon me bahar nhi nikalata aur nikalata bhi hain to apne kheton ke taraf yahan nadi ke kinare khandhar ke pas koun aata. Main ander se dari huyi thi.

WO charon mere sath aaj dushkarm kar hi dete magar shayad meri kismat I itani bhi buri nhi thi. Unme se dusare ne jab mere dusare stan ko pakadane ke liye hath aage badaya to uske hathon ko kisi ne bich pe pakad liye main khud ko bachane walonnko dekha tha mere chehere pe harsh ki bhawana aagayi.

Kyoki wo koi aur nhi Sameer tha. Wo shayad gaon ghumate ghumate nadi ke kinar aa gaya tha jahan usane meri chikh sun li. main usase choti thi wo mujhe naam se bulata tha. Uske ankhe gusse lal ho chuki thi.

Sameer: meri Sonal ko chhu e ki tune himmat kaisi kute.

ye bol kar usane uska wo hath tod diya. Sameer jaise gusse me shaitan ban gaya tha wo akela charon pe Bhari pad raha tha aur unki durgati kar rha tha.

Uska gussa dekhkar main bhi dar gayi lekin mujhe laga wo kahi. Gussase me inhe Jan se na mar de isliye main apni awastha bhool kar uske pass ja pahuchi.

Main: Unhe chhod do Sameer wo mar jayege unhe tumne bahut saja de di chahati to main bhi hoon inhe jaan se marna magar main bhi chahati tumhe polic khoon ke apradh me pakad le.

Sameer: nhi Sonal aese samaj ke dushmano ko jine ki koi jarurat hain upar se inhone mere Sonal ko chhune ki himmat ki main Jan se mar duga.

Mere dil ne bus Sameer ki ek hi bat suni "Meri Sonal" lekin mujhe Sameer se un dusto ko bhi bachana tha warna Mera Sameer apradhi ban jata.

Main:;tumhe apne Sonal ki kasam Sameer chhod do unhe.

Mere kasam dete hi Sameer ne unhe chhod diya aur meri taraf palta mere taraf ghumate hi usane fir meri taraf pith kar liya. Main apni halat ko bhool chuki thi Sameer ke gusse aur apne liyebfikar dekh kar.

Main: Kya hua tumane apna chehera kyo ghuma liya.

Sameer haklate huye: wo wo wo tum apne upar ke kapade pahan lo.

Sameer ki bat sunkar mujhe apni halat ka hosh aaya aur maine turant apne kapade pahan liye.

Main: ab ghum jao main kapade pahan liye.

Sameer: chalon ab ghar chalon.

Lekin sSameer jaise meri taraf guma main jakar usase chipak gayi aur rone lagi.

Sameer: ab chup ho jao aur ghar chalon koi samay ka puchhe to bol dena main raste me mil gaya tha aur jabardasti tumhe nadi ki traf gumane le gaya tha.

Maine Sameer ki baton pe sar hilaya aur uske sath ghar kebtaraf chal padi magar dil me bus ek bat gunj rhi thi.


"Meri Sonal"


IS update liye itna hi baki agale update me.