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Update 16

"Meri Sonal"

Mere man ki bhawanao me kuch bach gaya tha ye shabd main Sameer ke sath ghar to ja rhi thi magar mere upar mere balatkar hone ke dar ya bachane ke khusi ke itar hi chal rha tha ki Sameer ne kaha "Meri Sonal" main uski mousi thi ye bat main bhi janti thi aur Sameer bhi magar dil me to alag hi khyal the. Main apni soch pe pta nhi kab tak gum rahti magar meri tandra turi Sameer ke awaj se.

Sameer: Sonal tum thik to ho na.

MAin: Ha main thik hoon.

Sameer: badiya ghar pe is hadase ke bare me mat batana koi late ka karan puchhe to bol dena ki main raste me mil gaya aur jabardasti tumhe nadi ki taraf le gaya tha.

Mujhe Sameer ki bat sunkar tajjub hua ki wo ye kyo chahata hain isliye puchh baithi.

Main: Magar kyo?

Sameer: iske do karan hain pahal Nana Nani dar jayege aur jab bhi tum ghar se bahar nikalogi wo isi dar me rahege ki beti surakshit hain ya nhi. Dusara sabase bda karna iske wajah se unme kahin dar jyada baith gaya tto wo tumhe akele ghar se bahar nhi jane dege.

Nana Nani ya koi bhi maa bap chahe kitani bhi achchhi soch rakhte ho magar beti ki ijjat sabko pyar hoti hain is dar ke karan Shayad tumhe padhai bhi gaon se bahar jakar na ho paye isliye kisi ko kuch mat batana.

Sameer ki batein me sunkar soch me pad gayi ki yahan tak ki soch leta hain itan anubhavi soch abhi se hain iske aage jakar pta nhi kya soch hogi iski.

Main: Thik hain jaisa tum kahon main vaise hi ghar pe kahungi.

Itani bat karne ke bad Sameer shant ho gaya aur thode hi der me ham haweli pahuch gaye.

Ham jaise hi haweli pahuche mera bhai jo apne dosto ke sath jaldi nikal aaya tha use dekhkar mere chehere pe ek gussa aaya lekin main shant rahi hi iska to roj ka ye apne dosto ke sath school se alag ho jata hain fir ghar aata hain isko kya dosh doo aur Aaj Suman ko kuch kam tha wo dusari ladki sath gayi thi jo bit gaya so bit gaya.

Abhi main ye soch rhi thi ki tabhi maa ne kaha

Maa: Kaha rah gayi thi dekh teri Didi aur bachche aaye hain.

Main kuch bolti usase pahle hi.

Sameer: are nani Sonal ko kuch na bolo wo mujhe raste me mil gayi main ise jabardasti le kar chala gaya.

Main: ha maa is wajah se main deri se aayi.

Meri bat sunkar maa shant ho gayi magar Sameer ki maa yani meri didi.

Sushila: Sameer beta Sonal teri mousi hain naam lekar bulata hain mousi kahane me sharam aati hain.

Apni maa ki batein sunkar wo meri taraf dekhane laga. Uska mujhe dekhna mujhe samajh aa gaya.

Main: Didi use nhi mujhe sharam aati hain isme uski koi galti nhi hain wo to mujhe mousi bulata hain magar main hi nhi bulane deti.

Didi: magar kyo jobrishta hain wo kahane me tujhe sharam kaisi?

Main: Didi batein ye hain ek to ye mujhe bada hain aur hamumar hain sharir se bhi badiya hain. Agar ye mujhese bada hota to koi dikkat nhi thi magar mujhe ye achchha nhi lagta ki mujhse bada hokar mujhe mousi bulaye.
isme mujhe sharam aati thi isliye jabbye pichhali bar aaya tha tab maine ise apki kasam dekar raji kiya naam se bulane.

Meri bat sunkar sabko samajh me aa gaya ki Sameer mujhe mousi kyo nhi bulata. Fir sabne aapas me khub bate ki.

Main Mohani aur Manav ke bath bachchi bankar khelan lagi aese hi din bita aur rat aa gayi. Fir sab sone chale gaye.

Main bister pe aa to gayi magar nind mere ankhon me na thi tanhai me aate hi fir dil me wo hi shabd bajane lage "Meri Sonal" mujhe lga jaise Sameer hi mere sapane ka rajkumar hain jo meri har musibat se raksha kar sakta hain aur jab kar ke dikha bhi diya tha to ye kahan hi galat tha. Uska us tarah avesh me akar unko marna mere liye kahin na kahin mere dil me dastak de gayi thi. Agar main use nhi rokati to shayad unhe mar bhi dalta. Sham ko usne bataya bhi tha ki wo ek bar gaon ka aur us jagah chakkar dekhane ke liye ki wo log gaon me hain ki nhi.

Magar wo to kuch dino ke liye kuch kaam se aaye the gaon aur itna pitane ke bad aur ye harkat karne ke bad wo gaon me rukate kaise kisi tarah bagh gaye hoge is liye use dubara na mile. Magar mujhe mera Rajkumar mil gaya mere dil jagi ye chingari kya banegi ye apko aage lekhika ji batayegi main to chali apne nind me taki sapno me apne rajkumar ke sang batiya saku.
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Naina

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Update 16

"Meri Sonal"

Mere man ki bhawanao me kuch bach gaya tha ye shabd main Sameer ke sath ghar to ja rhi thi magar mere upar mere balatkar hone ke dar ya bachane ke khusi ke itar hi chal rha tha ki Sameer ne kaha "Meri Sonal" main uski mousi thi ye bat main bhi janti thi aur Sameer bhi magar dil me to alag hi khyal the. Main apni soch pe pta nhi kab tak gum rahti magar meri tandra turi Sameer ke awaj se.

Sameer: Sonal tum thik to ho na.

MAin: Ha main thik hoon.

Sameer: badiya ghar pe is hadase ke bare me mat batana koi late ka karan puchhe to bol dena ki main raste me mil gaya aur jabardasti tumhe nadi ki taraf le gaya tha.

Mujhe Sameer ki bat sunkar tajjub hua ki wo ye kyo chahata hain isliye puchh baithi.

Main: Magar kyo?

Sameer: iske do karan hain pahal Nana Nani dar jayege aur jab bhi tum ghar se bahar nikalogi wo isi dar me rahege ki beti surakshit hain ya nhi. Dusara sabase bda karna iske wajah se unme kahin dar jyada baith gaya tto wo tumhe akele ghar se bahar nhi jane dege.

Nana Nani ya koi bhi maa bap chahe kitani bhi achchhi soch rakhte ho magar beti ki ijjat sabko pyar hoti hain is dar ke karan Shayad tumhe padhai bhi gaon se bahar jakar na ho paye isliye kisi ko kuch mat batana.

Sameer ki batein me sunkar soch me pad gayi ki yahan tak ki soch leta hain itan anubhavi soch abhi se hain iske aage jakar pta nhi kya soch hogi iski.

Main: Thik hain jaisa tum kahon main vaise hi ghar pe kahungi.

Itani bat karne ke bad Sameer shant ho gaya aur thode hi der me ham haweli pahuch gaye.

Ham jaise hi haweli pahuche mera bhai jo apne dosto ke sath jaldi nikal aaya tha use dekhkar mere chehere pe ek gussa aaya lekin main shant rahi hi iska to roj ka ye apne dosto ke sath school se alag ho jata hain fir ghar aata hain isko kya dosh doo aur Aaj Suman ko kuch kam tha wo dusari ladki sath gayi thi jo bit gaya so bit gaya.

Abhi main ye soch rhi thi ki tabhi maa ne kaha

Maa: Kaha rah gayi thi dekh teri Didi aur bachche aaye hain.

Main kuch bolti usase pahle hi.

Sameer: are nani Sonal ko kuch na bolo wo mujhe raste me mil gayi main ise jabardasti le kar chala gaya.

Main: ha maa is wajah se main deri se aayi.

Meri bat sunkar maa shant ho gayi magar Sameer ki maa yani meri didi.

Sushila: Sameer beta Sonal teri mousi hain naam lekar bulata hain mousi kahane me sharam aati hain.

Apni maa ki batein sunkar wo meri taraf dekhane laga. Uska mujhe dekhna mujhe samajh aa gaya.

Main: Didi use nhi mujhe sharam aati hain isme uski koi galti nhi hain wo to mujhe mousi bulata hain magar main hi nhi bulane deti.

Didi: magar kyo jobrishta hain wo kahane me tujhe sharam kaisi?

Main: Didi batein ye hain ek to ye mujhe bada hain aur hamumar hain sharir se bhi badiya hain. Agar ye mujhese bada hota to koi dikkat nhi thi magar mujhe ye achchha nhi lagta ki mujhse bada hokar mujhe mousi bulaye.
isme mujhe sharam aati thi isliye jabbye pichhali bar aaya tha tab maine ise apki kasam dekar raji kiya naam se bulane.

Meri bat sunkar sabko samajh me aa gaya ki Sameer mujhe mousi kyo nhi bulata. Fir sabne aapas me khub bate ki.

Main Mohani aur Manav ke bath bachchi bankar khelan lagi aese hi din bita aur rat aa gayi. Fir sab sone chale gaye.

Main bister pe aa to gayi magar nind mere ankhon me na thi tanhai me aate hi fir dil me wo hi shabd bajane lage "Meri Sonal" mujhe lga jaise Sameer hi mere sapane ka rajkumar hain jo meri har musibat se raksha kar sakta hain aur jab kar ke dikha bhi diya tha to ye kahan hi galat tha. Uska us tarah avesh me akar unko marna mere liye kahin na kahin mere dil me dastak de gayi thi. Agar main use nhi rokati to shayad unhe mar bhi dalta. Sham ko usne bataya bhi tha ki wo ek bar gaon ka aur us jagah chakkar dekhane ke liye ki wo log gaon me hain ki nhi.

Magar wo to kuch dino ke liye kuch kaam se aaye the gaon aur itna pitane ke bad aur ye harkat karne ke bad wo gaon me rukate kaise kisi tarah bagh gaye hoge is liye use dubara na mile. Magar mujhe mera Rajkumar mil gaya mere dil jagi ye chingari kya banegi ye apko aage lekhika ji batayegi main to chali apne nind me taki sapno me apne rajkumar ke sang batiya saku.
sameer ne mana kya us ghatana ke bare mein ghar pe batane se kyunki agar bata diya to shayad ek tarah se sonal ki azaadi hi chin jaati usse....
udhar ghar pe sabhi hairan the ki sameer sonal ko mousi na pukar ke sidhe dosto wale andaz mein kyun baatein karta hai, lekin yaha sonal ne bhi solution nikal liya...
Hmm... so jis tarah se raksha ki uski sameer ne... aur jis tarah se "meri sonal "bol raha tha, isse sonal ke dilo dimag pyar ankurit hua sameer ke liye...
aur ye pyar dhire dhire itna badh gaya hai ki ab sonal sameer ke bina jee nahi paayegi... lekin kismat ka khel ajib hai... yahan dono bhanje mousi hai...

Jane ye sonal ka pyar ka anjaam kya hoga ye to waqt hi batayega..

Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan.. sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 
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