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Sameer aur Abhishek pahli bar shahar aaye the wo bhi shahar ke school me. School ki badi building aur maidan, charon taraf bagwani tatha use pure hisse gherate huye chardiwari. School me ek bada sa lohe ka gate aur jisme paidal walon ke liye ek chota gate bade gate me hi bna hua tha. Dono hastrapeasthe ke kahan unka gaon ka chhora sa school aur kahan ye badi badi imarton wala school. Unhe ye bhi samajh nhi aa rha tha ki dakhile ke liye kahan jana hain. Isliye dono gate ki taraf dekh rahe the jahan surakshakarmi khada tha.

Ye wohi waqt tha jab Mahima, Gunjan aur Chadani teeno auto se Utar kar indono ke bare bat kar rhi thi. Mahima aage badhi, Gunjan aur Chadani uske pichhe pichhe. Dono ke pas pahuchkar.

Mahima: Aap dono pahli bar aaye lagate ho?

Uski bat sunkar pahle Sameer aur Abhishek chok gaye ki kaisi anjan ladki hain jo ajanbi ladkon se bat kar rhi hain magar Mahina ke chehere ki shalinita aur uske satha do ladkiyon ko dekhkar unhe lga shayad unki pareshani ye samajh sake.

Sameer: Ha ji ham pahlibar aaye.

Mahima: koi problem hain?

Gunjan, Mahima ko Sameer batein karte dekh jal rhi thi magar wo janti thi ye tarika hain jisase wo Sameer dosti kar sakti hain.

Sameer: haji problem hain aur ye hain ki hame samajh nhi aa rha hain ki admission ke liye kidhar jaye kyoki hamare gaon me to principal sir cabin ho jata tha.

Sameer ki English pe pakad achchhi thi aur usane jab Mahima English shabdon ka prayog karte dekha to usane bhi jawab me English shabdon ka hi chayan kiya.

Mahima: to isme kya pareshan hain aap dono hamare sath chaliye hame bhi admission lena hain vaise kis stream admission lena hain kyoki usi block me jana padega.

Sameer: ji hame science side me admission lena hain aur mera admission schollership pe hona hai. Aur dost ka karna hain.

Mahima: oh ha ab main samajhi main apko kahan dekha hai. Aap to Sameer ho district topper aap ki photo news paper me chhapi thi. Hamar parichay to hua hi nhi Main Mahina is school se hoon aur ye meri dono dost Chadani aur Gunjan ye bhi apki tarah gaon se hain koun sa gaon hain Chadani tera.

Chadani kuch bolati usase pahle hi Gunjan bol padi.

Gunjan: are gaon ke bare me bad Jan lege abhi hame ek dusare ko jan le.

Gunjan ke bat pe sabhi muskura uthe aur Chadani samajh gayi Gunjan gaon naam kyo nhi batana chahati. Sameer bhi Mahima ke bat khush hua tha ki use log jante hain. Abhishek ko apne dost cum jija kyoki use pta tha uski bahan Sameer ko pasand karti hain ke charche sunkar garv hua.

Sameer: Ji mera naam to apko pta hain ye Mera dost Abhishek. Ham dono Bhawanipur gaon se hain.

Gunjan: apko koun nhi janta hain ek to aap district topper aur dusra Bhawanipur ke thakur Bhawani Singh ji ke bete hain. Chaliye pahle admission kara le fir aram se bat karege.



Gunjan ke muh se apne pita ka nam sunkar Sameer ko koi achary nhi hua kyoki paper me dono ka chhapa tha. Magar wo Thakur hain apne gaon ye bat Gunjan ko kaise pta ye thoda Sameer ke liye acharaj wali thi magar is samay wo bhi apna Dhyan admission me dena chahata tha isliye wo unke sath chal pada.

Sameer to school me tha Abhishek ke sath jahan Mahima ki madada se Gunjan aur Chadani ke sath apne dakhile ke prakriya puri kar rha tha..

Wohi shahr se dur ek kamare ek ladki aine ke samane "Main manti hoon ki hamari shadi ka unhe koi bhan nhi hain magar ab wo mere suhag hain to main ye kaise bhool gayi mang khali rakhna apshagun hota hain kahate hain ki bhari maang se pati ki umar badhati hain jab bhagwan ne unhe mera pati bna diya to main ye apshagun nhi kar sakti. Isase unke sath kuch anhoni ghat gayi to lekin bina kisi ko pta chale mere many me sindur bhi hona chahiye warna kisi ne mang me sindur dekh liya to kya jawab dugi. Mera ye naya rishta samaj swikar nhi karega. Kya karu, ha ye sahi rahega."

Ye soch kar ladki ne chutki me sindur liya aur apne tirchi mang se bal ko side kar sindur bhar diya. Uske use balon se chhupa chal padi apne maa ke pas rasoi me hath batane.

Yahan school me panchon admission liya fir school ke canteen me chale gaye kuch jalpan karne.

Chadani jo bade pyar se Abhishek dekhe ja rhi thi.

Chadani: Agle mah ki 1 tarikh se class lagane lagegi to aap log hostel ke liye bhi apply kar dijiye.

Abhishek ko Chadani dwara is tarah dekhan thoda ajib laga magar un logon ne admission me unka sahyog kiya tha isliye wo kuch na bola. Wo chhup chhup ke Gunjan bhi Sameer ko dekh rhi thi jis par kar kis ka dhyan nhi gaya magar Sameer ne ye bhi notice kar liya tha magar usane Abhishek jaisa sochkar kuch nhi bola. Thakur Sahab ne Sameer ko bata rakhabtha ki wo jaldi Shahar me ek ghar kharid dege taki unhe aur aane wale time bahano ki padhai ke liye thaharane dikkat na ho.

Sameer: ji hamare Pitaji hamare liye ye pe ghar kharid rahe hain kyoki abhi dono hain magar aane wale time hamari bahan aur bhai padhane aayege to unhe bhi rahane dikkat na ho isliye.

Mahima: agar aesi bat hain to hamare ghar ke pas ek ghar bikao hain aap apne pitaji bat karke aur unhe kal hi lekar aa jayiye taki aap log ghar pasand kar sake aur school pas bhi hain auto 15 minut lagate hain.

Mahima ki bat snunkar Gunjan aur Chadani ka dil kiya ki Mahima ko chum le kyoki isase wo jab chahe Apne Dilbar ka didar kar sakti hain.

Sameer: Sujhav achchha hain main pitaji se bat karunga is bare me.

Mahima: thik hain agar ana hua to ye raha address yahan aa jayiga.

Mahima ne kagaj pe apne ghar adress likh Sameer ko diya. Sameer in wo kagaj apne pocket rakha. Fir sabne nashta kiya jiski payment jor dekar Sameer ne kiya.

Jisase teeno ladkiyon ko Sameer ka vyahar dil ko chhu gaya. Fir sab apne apne raste nikal gaye.


School se loutane ke bad jab Sham ko Chadani Gunjan ke sath padhane baithi.

Chadani: tune mujhe kyo batane se roka chalo use nhi bataya kam se kam Mahima ko bta sakti thi. Are ye bhi chhodo apni kasam dekar tune khud bhi wo mujhe na bolane ko bola hain.

Gunjan: tu janti hain ye bat main sabko nhi bta sakti kahi galti se bhi ye naam aaya to wo mujhe pahchan jayega jo main nhi chahati. Main use ek anjan ladki tarah milna chahati hoon. Ye karan hain ki main Mahima ko batanae nhi diya aur tujhe bhi kasam dekar mana kar diya taki galti se bhi ye nam samane na aa jaye.
so finally sameer aur abhishek school pahuch hi gaye... udhar usi waqt mahima aur Chandni ke sath sath gunjan bhi jaa pahuchi school... ab gaon se Pehli baar us school aaya hai, bilkul anjaan sa mahol abhishek aur sameer ke liye to unki madad ki mahima & party ne...
Waise sameer na bhi kehta to bhi madad karti .. akhir gunjan ki jaan basi hai sameer mein :D

Well admission to ho gaya, canteen mein bhi baat cheet ho gayi, pancho nikal bhi gaye waha school se.... lekin gaur karne wali baat ye hai ki... Kya sameer aur abhishek ushi ghar pe rehne wale hai aage chalke jis ghar ki jaankari mahima ne di unko?
Gunjan kyun pehchan chupa rahi hai sameer se? Kya reason ho sakta hai?

udhar wo sindur wali ladki, uske bhi alag hi kisse...
Bas sindur lagao sameer ko surakshit rakho...
Are sameer se ek dafa mil kyun nahi leti wo?

Well shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
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Update 18

Sameer aur Abhishek pahli bar shahar aaye the wo bhi shahar ke school me. School ki badi building aur maidan, charon taraf bagwani tatha use pure hisse gherate huye chardiwari. School me ek bada sa lohe ka gate aur jisme paidal walon ke liye ek chota gate bade gate me hi bna hua tha. Dono hastrapeasthe ke kahan unka gaon ka chhora sa school aur kahan ye badi badi imarton wala school. Unhe ye bhi samajh nhi aa rha tha ki dakhile ke liye kahan jana hain. Isliye dono gate ki taraf dekh rahe the jahan surakshakarmi khada tha.

Ye wohi waqt tha jab Mahima, Gunjan aur Chadani teeno auto se Utar kar indono ke bare bat kar rhi thi. Mahima aage badhi, Gunjan aur Chadani uske pichhe pichhe. Dono ke pas pahuchkar.

Mahima: Aap dono pahli bar aaye lagate ho?

Uski bat sunkar pahle Sameer aur Abhishek chok gaye ki kaisi anjan ladki hain jo ajanbi ladkon se bat kar rhi hain magar Mahina ke chehere ki shalinita aur uske satha do ladkiyon ko dekhkar unhe lga shayad unki pareshani ye samajh sake.

Sameer: Ha ji ham pahlibar aaye.

Mahima: koi problem hain?

Gunjan, Mahima ko Sameer batein karte dekh jal rhi thi magar wo janti thi ye tarika hain jisase wo Sameer dosti kar sakti hain.

Sameer: haji problem hain aur ye hain ki hame samajh nhi aa rha hain ki admission ke liye kidhar jaye kyoki hamare gaon me to principal sir cabin ho jata tha.

Sameer ki English pe pakad achchhi thi aur usane jab Mahima English shabdon ka prayog karte dekha to usane bhi jawab me English shabdon ka hi chayan kiya.

Mahima: to isme kya pareshan hain aap dono hamare sath chaliye hame bhi admission lena hain vaise kis stream admission lena hain kyoki usi block me jana padega.

Sameer: ji hame science side me admission lena hain aur mera admission schollership pe hona hai. Aur dost ka karna hain.

Mahima: oh ha ab main samajhi main apko kahan dekha hai. Aap to Sameer ho district topper aap ki photo news paper me chhapi thi. Hamar parichay to hua hi nhi Main Mahina is school se hoon aur ye meri dono dost Chadani aur Gunjan ye bhi apki tarah gaon se hain koun sa gaon hain Chadani tera.

Chadani kuch bolati usase pahle hi Gunjan bol padi.

Gunjan: are gaon ke bare me bad Jan lege abhi hame ek dusare ko jan le.

Gunjan ke bat pe sabhi muskura uthe aur Chadani samajh gayi Gunjan gaon naam kyo nhi batana chahati. Sameer bhi Mahima ke bat khush hua tha ki use log jante hain. Abhishek ko apne dost cum jija kyoki use pta tha uski bahan Sameer ko pasand karti hain ke charche sunkar garv hua.

Sameer: Ji mera naam to apko pta hain ye Mera dost Abhishek. Ham dono Bhawanipur gaon se hain.

Gunjan: apko koun nhi janta hain ek to aap district topper aur dusra Bhawanipur ke thakur Bhawani Singh ji ke bete hain. Chaliye pahle admission kara le fir aram se bat karege.



Gunjan ke muh se apne pita ka nam sunkar Sameer ko koi achary nhi hua kyoki paper me dono ka chhapa tha. Magar wo Thakur hain apne gaon ye bat Gunjan ko kaise pta ye thoda Sameer ke liye acharaj wali thi magar is samay wo bhi apna Dhyan admission me dena chahata tha isliye wo unke sath chal pada.

Sameer to school me tha Abhishek ke sath jahan Mahima ki madada se Gunjan aur Chadani ke sath apne dakhile ke prakriya puri kar rha tha..

Wohi shahr se dur ek kamare ek ladki aine ke samane "Main manti hoon ki hamari shadi ka unhe koi bhan nhi hain magar ab wo mere suhag hain to main ye kaise bhool gayi mang khali rakhna apshagun hota hain kahate hain ki bhari maang se pati ki umar badhati hain jab bhagwan ne unhe mera pati bna diya to main ye apshagun nhi kar sakti. Isase unke sath kuch anhoni ghat gayi to lekin bina kisi ko pta chale mere many me sindur bhi hona chahiye warna kisi ne mang me sindur dekh liya to kya jawab dugi. Mera ye naya rishta samaj swikar nhi karega. Kya karu, ha ye sahi rahega."

Ye soch kar ladki ne chutki me sindur liya aur apne tirchi mang se bal ko side kar sindur bhar diya. Uske use balon se chhupa chal padi apne maa ke pas rasoi me hath batane.

Yahan school me panchon admission liya fir school ke canteen me chale gaye kuch jalpan karne.

Chadani jo bade pyar se Abhishek dekhe ja rhi thi.

Chadani: Agle mah ki 1 tarikh se class lagane lagegi to aap log hostel ke liye bhi apply kar dijiye.

Abhishek ko Chadani dwara is tarah dekhan thoda ajib laga magar un logon ne admission me unka sahyog kiya tha isliye wo kuch na bola. Wo chhup chhup ke Gunjan bhi Sameer ko dekh rhi thi jis par kar kis ka dhyan nhi gaya magar Sameer ne ye bhi notice kar liya tha magar usane Abhishek jaisa sochkar kuch nhi bola. Thakur Sahab ne Sameer ko bata rakhabtha ki wo jaldi Shahar me ek ghar kharid dege taki unhe aur aane wale time bahano ki padhai ke liye thaharane dikkat na ho.

Sameer: ji hamare Pitaji hamare liye ye pe ghar kharid rahe hain kyoki abhi dono hain magar aane wale time hamari bahan aur bhai padhane aayege to unhe bhi rahane dikkat na ho isliye.

Mahima: agar aesi bat hain to hamare ghar ke pas ek ghar bikao hain aap apne pitaji bat karke aur unhe kal hi lekar aa jayiye taki aap log ghar pasand kar sake aur school pas bhi hain auto 15 minut lagate hain.

Mahima ki bat snunkar Gunjan aur Chadani ka dil kiya ki Mahima ko chum le kyoki isase wo jab chahe Apne Dilbar ka didar kar sakti hain.

Sameer: Sujhav achchha hain main pitaji se bat karunga is bare me.

Mahima: thik hain agar ana hua to ye raha address yahan aa jayiga.

Mahima ne kagaj pe apne ghar adress likh Sameer ko diya. Sameer in wo kagaj apne pocket rakha. Fir sabne nashta kiya jiski payment jor dekar Sameer ne kiya.

Jisase teeno ladkiyon ko Sameer ka vyahar dil ko chhu gaya. Fir sab apne apne raste nikal gaye.


School se loutane ke bad jab Sham ko Chadani Gunjan ke sath padhane baithi.

Chadani: tune mujhe kyo batane se roka chalo use nhi bataya kam se kam Mahima ko bta sakti thi. Are ye bhi chhodo apni kasam dekar tune khud bhi wo mujhe na bolane ko bola hain.

Gunjan: tu janti hain ye bat main sabko nhi bta sakti kahi galti se bhi ye naam aaya to wo mujhe pahchan jayega jo main nhi chahati. Main use ek anjan ladki tarah milna chahati hoon. Ye karan hain ki main Mahima ko batanae nhi diya aur tujhe bhi kasam dekar mana kar diya taki galti se bhi ye nam samane na aa jaye.
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Update 17

Sonal to bus Sameer ke shabd sochate huye sapno ke duniya me kho gayi. Ye karan tha ki Sonal ke dil apne bhanje Sameer ke liye pyar jaga ye flashback bhi isliye tha ki aap Jan sako ki kyo ek mousi ko uske bhanje se pyar hua.

Ab agar ham dekh to Sameer ko apna banane wali isliye total char log hain ek to Sonal, Dusari Shweta, Tisari wo ladki jiski mang me sindur pda hain aur chouthi wo aurat jo maa banana chahati hain. Dekhate hain jisake kismat kya ata hain aur kitna aata hain.


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Aaj haweli me sabki ankh time pe khul gayi. School me admission process shuru ho chuke the isliye subah apna roj ka kam nipatne ke bad aur nashta karne ke bad Sameer ja pahucha baithak me apne pitaji ke pas jaha pe Bhawani Singh sarpanch ji ke sath baithkar apni ghosna ke anusar usne vichar vimarsh kar rahe the.

Thakur: Sarpanch aaj aap kisi ko lga kar ye pta karawaye ki hamari gaon me aesi kitani kanyaye hain jinki padhai ka kharch unke maa bap nhi utha sakte. Taki ham unke shiksha shulk aur baki sanshadhano ki vyavstha kara sake.

Sarpanch: ji Thakur Sahab ham aaj hi in sab chijon ka pta kar lete hain kyoki agale mah se school chalu ho jayega to hame bhi is mah dhakhile ki sare kary karne padege.

Sarpanch ji ke bat pe Thakur Sahab kuch kahate usase pahle hi Sameer unke pas pahuch gaya.

Sameer: Pranam sarpanch kaka? Kaise hain, kaki aur ghar me sab log kaise hain?

Sarpanch: beta khush rahon ghar me sab badiya hain. Tumhari kaki mayek gayi huyi thi magar aaj aa jayegi. Tumse naraj hain unse milane jo nhi aaye.

Sameer: aap meri taraf se kaki se mafi mang lena. Main dakhile ke bad unse mil luga.

Sarpanch: Thik hain beta, achchha thakur sahab chalta hoon kaam khatm karke aap se miluga.

Thakur: Thik hain sarpanch ji. Ha Sameer beta subah subah baithak me hamse koi kaam tha kya.

Sameer: ha pitaji dakhile ke liye main aur Abhishek Shahar1 ja rhe hain. Mera to vajife se kam chal jayega magar Abhishek ke dakhile ke liye paise chahiye.

Thakur: achchhi bat hain.

Ye bol kar thakur sahab ne aane jane aur khane ke liye 20 Rupaye aur Abhishek Admission ke liye 50 rupaye diye jo dakhile ke alwaya salabhar ke shulk ke bad bhi jyda tha.

Sameer: Pitaji ye to 70 rupaye hain.

Thakur: ha to?

Sameer: ye bahut jyada hain.

Thakur: Mujhe pta hain dekho dakhile aur salbhar ki shulk mila kar Abhishek ka ho gaya 18 Rupaye. Ana jane ka 2 Rupaye. Tumlogo ke khane pine ka badiya si jagah pe kharch hua 5 rupaye. Bacha 45 to dono apni kitabe, copi aur school dress le lena iske bad ghar pe sabhi bachchon ke kuch khane ke liye lete aana.

Apni pita ke bat sunkar muskura utha. Pita ji abhi se sari chij final kar dena chahate hain taki bad Abhishek sirf rahne aur khane ka dekhna ho.

Apne Pita se paise lekar Sameer apni maa bhai aur bahno ke pas pahucha jahan Abhishek bhi Shweta ke sath aa chuka tha.

Sabko kya chahiye pooch kar Abhishek ko lekar Sameer Shahar1 ke liye nikal gaya.

Inhe shahar1 aane dete hain tab tak chal ke jayeja lete hain shahar1 me ghat rhi ghatano ka.

Do ladkiya apne ghar se nikali aur bagalwale ghar ki ghanti bajayi.

Darwaja ek mahila ne khola.

L1: Namaste aunty Mahima taiyar ho gayi.

Mahila: Are Chadani beta tum khus raho. Mahima taiyar ho gayi hain. Aao ander aao abhi school me time hain. Ye khubsurat ladki tumhare sath koun hain?

Apne liye khubsurat word sunakar L2 Sharma gayi.

Chadani: aunty ye mere bachpan ki saheli Gunjan hain. Gaon me ham dono ek hi school padhate the ab yahan bhi sath sath padegi.

Mahila: bada pyara nam hai bitiya ka iski hasmukh chehere ki tarah.

Aunty abhi aur kuch kahti tabhi Mahima aa gayi.

Mahima: tum dono apna sara kagaj sath li ho na.

Chadani: Ha.

Mahima: fir chalo aaj admission ka kaam khatm kar dete hain.

iske bad teeno ghar bahar nikali aur auto lekar chalndi school ke liye.

Yahan Sameer aur Abhishek bhi Shahr1 taxi stand pahuch ke auto lekar school ke liye nikal chuke the.

Thodi hi der me dono school ke gate ke samane the unhone auto wale ko paisa diya aur gate ander ho gaye. Ye shahar ka sabse badiya aur bada school tha. Dono gate ander hokar school ke charon taraf dekh rhe the abhi wo school ke gate ke taraf dekh rahe the tabhi ek auto ruka aur teen ladkiya usme se utari. Ek auto walo ko paise de rhi thi aur dono gate ki taraf ander ki aur dekh rhi thi. Jisme se ek to stabh hokar sirf Sameer ko ghure ja rhi thi.

L1: kya ladka hain wo lamba wala dil aa gaya us par.

L3: Sahi kah rhi hain chadani abhi jakar prapose karne ka man kar rha hain lambe wale ko.

L2: Dono wahan se nazar hata lo ye mera maal hain.

Chadani: Sahi me Gunjan.

Gunjan: Ha ye wohi hain sharir bada ho gaya magar main photo dekhi hain jo akhabar me chhapi thi.

Mahima: ye tum dono kis bare me bat kar rhi ho.

Chadani: tujhe bataya tha na Gunjan kisi ko chahati hain ye lamba wala wohi hain aur chhote wale to mera dil aa gaya.

Mahima: sahi me ye wohi kya bat hain Gunjan lakhon me ek pasand kiya tha aur jo bacha use ye chadani le udi chalo puchate hain kya pareshani hain bus charon taraf ghum ghum dekh rhe hain.

ye bol Mahima, Chadani aur Gunjan ka hath pakad Sameer aur Abhishek ki taraf badh chali.
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Precap Update 18

Sameer to school me tha Abhishek ke sath jahan Mahima ki madada se Gunjan aur Chadani ke sath apne dakhile ke prakriya puri kar rha tha..

wohi shahr se dur ek kamare ek ladki aine ke samane "main ye kaise bhool gayi mang khali rakhna apshagun hota hain kahate hain ki bhari maang se pati ki umar badhati hain jab bhagwan ne unhe mera pati bna diya to main ye apshagun nhi kar sakti."

ye soch kar ladki ne chutki me sindur liya aur apne tirchi mang se bal ko side kar sindur bhar diya. Uske use balon se chhupa chal padi apne maa ke pas rasoi me hath batane.
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School se loutane ke bad jab Sham ko Chadani Gunjan ke sath padhane baithi.

Chadani: tune mujhe kyo batane se roka chalo use nhi bataya kam se kam Mahima ko bta sakti thi.

Gunjan: tu janti hain ye bahut hain sabko nhi bta sakti kahi galti se bhi ye naam aaya to wo mujhe pahchan jayega jo main nhi chahati. Main use ek anjan ladki tarah milna chahati hoon.


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Update 18

Sameer aur Abhishek pahli bar shahar aaye the wo bhi shahar ke school me. School ki badi building aur maidan, charon taraf bagwani tatha use pure hisse gherate huye chardiwari. School me ek bada sa lohe ka gate aur jisme paidal walon ke liye ek chota gate bade gate me hi bna hua tha. Dono hastrapeasthe ke kahan unka gaon ka chhora sa school aur kahan ye badi badi imarton wala school. Unhe ye bhi samajh nhi aa rha tha ki dakhile ke liye kahan jana hain. Isliye dono gate ki taraf dekh rahe the jahan surakshakarmi khada tha.

Ye wohi waqt tha jab Mahima, Gunjan aur Chadani teeno auto se Utar kar indono ke bare bat kar rhi thi. Mahima aage badhi, Gunjan aur Chadani uske pichhe pichhe. Dono ke pas pahuchkar.

Mahima: Aap dono pahli bar aaye lagate ho?

Uski bat sunkar pahle Sameer aur Abhishek chok gaye ki kaisi anjan ladki hain jo ajanbi ladkon se bat kar rhi hain magar Mahina ke chehere ki shalinita aur uske satha do ladkiyon ko dekhkar unhe lga shayad unki pareshani ye samajh sake.

Sameer: Ha ji ham pahlibar aaye.

Mahima: koi problem hain?

Gunjan, Mahima ko Sameer batein karte dekh jal rhi thi magar wo janti thi ye tarika hain jisase wo Sameer dosti kar sakti hain.

Sameer: haji problem hain aur ye hain ki hame samajh nhi aa rha hain ki admission ke liye kidhar jaye kyoki hamare gaon me to principal sir cabin ho jata tha.

Sameer ki English pe pakad achchhi thi aur usane jab Mahima English shabdon ka prayog karte dekha to usane bhi jawab me English shabdon ka hi chayan kiya.

Mahima: to isme kya pareshan hain aap dono hamare sath chaliye hame bhi admission lena hain vaise kis stream admission lena hain kyoki usi block me jana padega.

Sameer: ji hame science side me admission lena hain aur mera admission schollership pe hona hai. Aur dost ka karna hain.

Mahima: oh ha ab main samajhi main apko kahan dekha hai. Aap to Sameer ho district topper aap ki photo news paper me chhapi thi. Hamar parichay to hua hi nhi Main Mahina is school se hoon aur ye meri dono dost Chadani aur Gunjan ye bhi apki tarah gaon se hain koun sa gaon hain Chadani tera.

Chadani kuch bolati usase pahle hi Gunjan bol padi.

Gunjan: are gaon ke bare me bad Jan lege abhi hame ek dusare ko jan le.

Gunjan ke bat pe sabhi muskura uthe aur Chadani samajh gayi Gunjan gaon naam kyo nhi batana chahati. Sameer bhi Mahima ke bat khush hua tha ki use log jante hain. Abhishek ko apne dost cum jija kyoki use pta tha uski bahan Sameer ko pasand karti hain ke charche sunkar garv hua.

Sameer: Ji mera naam to apko pta hain ye Mera dost Abhishek. Ham dono Bhawanipur gaon se hain.

Gunjan: apko koun nhi janta hain ek to aap district topper aur dusra Bhawanipur ke thakur Bhawani Singh ji ke bete hain. Chaliye pahle admission kara le fir aram se bat karege.



Gunjan ke muh se apne pita ka nam sunkar Sameer ko koi achary nhi hua kyoki paper me dono ka chhapa tha. Magar wo Thakur hain apne gaon ye bat Gunjan ko kaise pta ye thoda Sameer ke liye acharaj wali thi magar is samay wo bhi apna Dhyan admission me dena chahata tha isliye wo unke sath chal pada.

Sameer to school me tha Abhishek ke sath jahan Mahima ki madada se Gunjan aur Chadani ke sath apne dakhile ke prakriya puri kar rha tha..

Wohi shahr se dur ek kamare ek ladki aine ke samane "Main manti hoon ki hamari shadi ka unhe koi bhan nhi hain magar ab wo mere suhag hain to main ye kaise bhool gayi mang khali rakhna apshagun hota hain kahate hain ki bhari maang se pati ki umar badhati hain jab bhagwan ne unhe mera pati bna diya to main ye apshagun nhi kar sakti. Isase unke sath kuch anhoni ghat gayi to lekin bina kisi ko pta chale mere many me sindur bhi hona chahiye warna kisi ne mang me sindur dekh liya to kya jawab dugi. Mera ye naya rishta samaj swikar nhi karega. Kya karu, ha ye sahi rahega."

Ye soch kar ladki ne chutki me sindur liya aur apne tirchi mang se bal ko side kar sindur bhar diya. Uske use balon se chhupa chal padi apne maa ke pas rasoi me hath batane.

Yahan school me panchon admission liya fir school ke canteen me chale gaye kuch jalpan karne.

Chadani jo bade pyar se Abhishek dekhe ja rhi thi.

Chadani: Agle mah ki 1 tarikh se class lagane lagegi to aap log hostel ke liye bhi apply kar dijiye.

Abhishek ko Chadani dwara is tarah dekhan thoda ajib laga magar un logon ne admission me unka sahyog kiya tha isliye wo kuch na bola. Wo chhup chhup ke Gunjan bhi Sameer ko dekh rhi thi jis par kar kis ka dhyan nhi gaya magar Sameer ne ye bhi notice kar liya tha magar usane Abhishek jaisa sochkar kuch nhi bola. Thakur Sahab ne Sameer ko bata rakhabtha ki wo jaldi Shahar me ek ghar kharid dege taki unhe aur aane wale time bahano ki padhai ke liye thaharane dikkat na ho.

Sameer: ji hamare Pitaji hamare liye ye pe ghar kharid rahe hain kyoki abhi dono hain magar aane wale time hamari bahan aur bhai padhane aayege to unhe bhi rahane dikkat na ho isliye.

Mahima: agar aesi bat hain to hamare ghar ke pas ek ghar bikao hain aap apne pitaji bat karke aur unhe kal hi lekar aa jayiye taki aap log ghar pasand kar sake aur school pas bhi hain auto 15 minut lagate hain.

Mahima ki bat snunkar Gunjan aur Chadani ka dil kiya ki Mahima ko chum le kyoki isase wo jab chahe Apne Dilbar ka didar kar sakti hain.

Sameer: Sujhav achchha hain main pitaji se bat karunga is bare me.

Mahima: thik hain agar ana hua to ye raha address yahan aa jayiga.

Mahima ne kagaj pe apne ghar adress likh Sameer ko diya. Sameer in wo kagaj apne pocket rakha. Fir sabne nashta kiya jiski payment jor dekar Sameer ne kiya.

Jisase teeno ladkiyon ko Sameer ka vyahar dil ko chhu gaya. Fir sab apne apne raste nikal gaye.


School se loutane ke bad jab Sham ko Chadani Gunjan ke sath padhane baithi.

Chadani: tune mujhe kyo batane se roka chalo use nhi bataya kam se kam Mahima ko bta sakti thi. Are ye bhi chhodo apni kasam dekar tune khud bhi wo mujhe na bolane ko bola hain.

Gunjan: tu janti hain ye bat main sabko nhi bta sakti kahi galti se bhi ye naam aaya to wo mujhe pahchan jayega jo main nhi chahati. Main use ek anjan ladki tarah milna chahati hoon. Ye karan hain ki main Mahima ko batanae nhi diya aur tujhe bhi kasam dekar mana kar diya taki galti se bhi ye nam samane na aa jaye.
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Sameer aur Abhishek pahli bar shahar aaye the wo bhi shahar ke school me. School ki badi building aur maidan, charon taraf bagwani tatha use pure hisse gherate huye chardiwari. School me ek bada sa lohe ka gate aur jisme paidal walon ke liye ek chota gate bade gate me hi bna hua tha. Dono hastrapeasthe ke kahan unka gaon ka chhora sa school aur kahan ye badi badi imarton wala school. Unhe ye bhi samajh nhi aa rha tha ki dakhile ke liye kahan jana hain. Isliye dono gate ki taraf dekh rahe the jahan surakshakarmi khada tha.

Ye wohi waqt tha jab Mahima, Gunjan aur Chadani teeno auto se Utar kar indono ke bare bat kar rhi thi. Mahima aage badhi, Gunjan aur Chadani uske pichhe pichhe. Dono ke pas pahuchkar.

Mahima: Aap dono pahli bar aaye lagate ho?

Uski bat sunkar pahle Sameer aur Abhishek chok gaye ki kaisi anjan ladki hain jo ajanbi ladkon se bat kar rhi hain magar Mahina ke chehere ki shalinita aur uske satha do ladkiyon ko dekhkar unhe lga shayad unki pareshani ye samajh sake.

Sameer: Ha ji ham pahlibar aaye.

Mahima: koi problem hain?

Gunjan, Mahima ko Sameer batein karte dekh jal rhi thi magar wo janti thi ye tarika hain jisase wo Sameer dosti kar sakti hain.

Sameer: haji problem hain aur ye hain ki hame samajh nhi aa rha hain ki admission ke liye kidhar jaye kyoki hamare gaon me to principal sir cabin ho jata tha.

Sameer ki English pe pakad achchhi thi aur usane jab Mahima English shabdon ka prayog karte dekha to usane bhi jawab me English shabdon ka hi chayan kiya.

Mahima: to isme kya pareshan hain aap dono hamare sath chaliye hame bhi admission lena hain vaise kis stream admission lena hain kyoki usi block me jana padega.

Sameer: ji hame science side me admission lena hain aur mera admission schollership pe hona hai. Aur dost ka karna hain.

Mahima: oh ha ab main samajhi main apko kahan dekha hai. Aap to Sameer ho district topper aap ki photo news paper me chhapi thi. Hamar parichay to hua hi nhi Main Mahina is school se hoon aur ye meri dono dost Chadani aur Gunjan ye bhi apki tarah gaon se hain koun sa gaon hain Chadani tera.

Chadani kuch bolati usase pahle hi Gunjan bol padi.

Gunjan: are gaon ke bare me bad Jan lege abhi hame ek dusare ko jan le.

Gunjan ke bat pe sabhi muskura uthe aur Chadani samajh gayi Gunjan gaon naam kyo nhi batana chahati. Sameer bhi Mahima ke bat khush hua tha ki use log jante hain. Abhishek ko apne dost cum jija kyoki use pta tha uski bahan Sameer ko pasand karti hain ke charche sunkar garv hua.

Sameer: Ji mera naam to apko pta hain ye Mera dost Abhishek. Ham dono Bhawanipur gaon se hain.

Gunjan: apko koun nhi janta hain ek to aap district topper aur dusra Bhawanipur ke thakur Bhawani Singh ji ke bete hain. Chaliye pahle admission kara le fir aram se bat karege.



Gunjan ke muh se apne pita ka nam sunkar Sameer ko koi achary nhi hua kyoki paper me dono ka chhapa tha. Magar wo Thakur hain apne gaon ye bat Gunjan ko kaise pta ye thoda Sameer ke liye acharaj wali thi magar is samay wo bhi apna Dhyan admission me dena chahata tha isliye wo unke sath chal pada.

Sameer to school me tha Abhishek ke sath jahan Mahima ki madada se Gunjan aur Chadani ke sath apne dakhile ke prakriya puri kar rha tha..

Wohi shahr se dur ek kamare ek ladki aine ke samane "Main manti hoon ki hamari shadi ka unhe koi bhan nhi hain magar ab wo mere suhag hain to main ye kaise bhool gayi mang khali rakhna apshagun hota hain kahate hain ki bhari maang se pati ki umar badhati hain jab bhagwan ne unhe mera pati bna diya to main ye apshagun nhi kar sakti. Isase unke sath kuch anhoni ghat gayi to lekin bina kisi ko pta chale mere many me sindur bhi hona chahiye warna kisi ne mang me sindur dekh liya to kya jawab dugi. Mera ye naya rishta samaj swikar nhi karega. Kya karu, ha ye sahi rahega."

Ye soch kar ladki ne chutki me sindur liya aur apne tirchi mang se bal ko side kar sindur bhar diya. Uske use balon se chhupa chal padi apne maa ke pas rasoi me hath batane.

Yahan school me panchon admission liya fir school ke canteen me chale gaye kuch jalpan karne.

Chadani jo bade pyar se Abhishek dekhe ja rhi thi.

Chadani: Agle mah ki 1 tarikh se class lagane lagegi to aap log hostel ke liye bhi apply kar dijiye.

Abhishek ko Chadani dwara is tarah dekhan thoda ajib laga magar un logon ne admission me unka sahyog kiya tha isliye wo kuch na bola. Wo chhup chhup ke Gunjan bhi Sameer ko dekh rhi thi jis par kar kis ka dhyan nhi gaya magar Sameer ne ye bhi notice kar liya tha magar usane Abhishek jaisa sochkar kuch nhi bola. Thakur Sahab ne Sameer ko bata rakhabtha ki wo jaldi Shahar me ek ghar kharid dege taki unhe aur aane wale time bahano ki padhai ke liye thaharane dikkat na ho.

Sameer: ji hamare Pitaji hamare liye ye pe ghar kharid rahe hain kyoki abhi dono hain magar aane wale time hamari bahan aur bhai padhane aayege to unhe bhi rahane dikkat na ho isliye.

Mahima: agar aesi bat hain to hamare ghar ke pas ek ghar bikao hain aap apne pitaji bat karke aur unhe kal hi lekar aa jayiye taki aap log ghar pasand kar sake aur school pas bhi hain auto 15 minut lagate hain.

Mahima ki bat snunkar Gunjan aur Chadani ka dil kiya ki Mahima ko chum le kyoki isase wo jab chahe Apne Dilbar ka didar kar sakti hain.

Sameer: Sujhav achchha hain main pitaji se bat karunga is bare me.

Mahima: thik hain agar ana hua to ye raha address yahan aa jayiga.

Mahima ne kagaj pe apne ghar adress likh Sameer ko diya. Sameer in wo kagaj apne pocket rakha. Fir sabne nashta kiya jiski payment jor dekar Sameer ne kiya.

Jisase teeno ladkiyon ko Sameer ka vyahar dil ko chhu gaya. Fir sab apne apne raste nikal gaye.


School se loutane ke bad jab Sham ko Chadani Gunjan ke sath padhane baithi.

Chadani: tune mujhe kyo batane se roka chalo use nhi bataya kam se kam Mahima ko bta sakti thi. Are ye bhi chhodo apni kasam dekar tune khud bhi wo mujhe na bolane ko bola hain.

Gunjan: tu janti hain ye bat main sabko nhi bta sakti kahi galti se bhi ye naam aaya to wo mujhe pahchan jayega jo main nhi chahati. Main use ek anjan ladki tarah milna chahati hoon. Ye karan hain ki main Mahima ko batanae nhi diya aur tujhe bhi kasam dekar mana kar diya taki galti se bhi ye nam samane na aa jaye.
Bahad khubsurat update Ruby ji
 
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so finally sameer aur abhishek school pahuch hi gaye... udhar usi waqt mahima aur Chandni ke sath sath gunjan bhi jaa pahuchi school... ab gaon se Pehli baar us school aaya hai, bilkul anjaan sa mahol abhishek aur sameer ke liye to unki madad ki mahima & party ne...
Waise sameer na bhi kehta to bhi madad karti .. akhir gunjan ki jaan basi hai sameer mein :D

Well admission to ho gaya, canteen mein bhi baat cheet ho gayi, pancho nikal bhi gaye waha school se.... lekin gaur karne wali baat ye hai ki... Kya sameer aur abhishek ushi ghar pe rehne wale hai aage chalke jis ghar ki jaankari mahima ne di unko?
Gunjan kyun pehchan chupa rahi hai sameer se? Kya reason ho sakta hai?

udhar wo sindur wali ladki, uske bhi alag hi kisse...
Bas sindur lagao sameer ko surakshit rakho...
Are sameer se ek dafa mil kyun nahi leti wo?

Well shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
Ab to dekhane wali bat hain sindur wali ladki aur Sameer milna tatha shahar1 shift hona
 
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