Romance Miracal - Shades Of Lovers

[parkas]

Dev the lover bhai next update kab tak aayega?

 

[Alok]

Waiting

 

[Silent lover]

Update 13

Uske baad Riya didi Apne room mein Jati Hai aur uske baad bathroom mein jakar nahane Lag Jati Hai

Unke sharir sai khoon Dheere Dheere Utar Kar saaf Ho Jata Hai uske baad woh ready hoti hai

Phir jakar mere liye nayi shirt Nikalti Hai aur Neeche aa Jati Hai

Mai - Shukriya didi

Didi - dimaag kharab hai kya ya Jada Javani Chadne Lagi Hai

Maa - arey Bitiya Rani ghussa kyu hoti Ho

Didi - dekh rahi ho na aap mujhe thank you bol raha hai

Maa - Dev aage se nahi karna

Didi Mere galo Ko Apne Haath Mein Lekar - mere bhai tum theek ho na mujhe maaf kar do sab kuch meri wajah se hua aur main tum par ghusa ho rahi hoon

Mai- aahhhhhhhhh Maa

Didi ghabra kar -kya hua kya hua ruk ruk Babu main doctor ko phone Karti Hoon

Akash - didi didi kuch nahi hua hai usse majak kar rha hi

Maine ekdum se Kahi didi Aakash ko kuch ulta seedha na bole- didi Aaram Se Aaram Se kuch nahi hua mazak kar raha tha

Maa - tu kab se Aisa majak Karne Laga

Main - "Ab To Hasi majak mein hi Jeena"
"Kyunki Meri Pyari didi Hi Ek Haseena"

Didi roti Hua Mujhe Gale Laga Leti hi

Didi - Tab Se Kaha Tha Dev tuh Bhai tujhe pakar bhi main bhai ke Pyar Se Anjaan thi

Main - "Aap Mere Pyar Se Anjaan thi"
"Tabhi To Aaj Meri Jaan thi"

Didi - thi matlab abb Nahi Hoon kya

Akash - ab Bhai Behan ka pyar aur Shayari ho gayi ho to Apne college Chale

Main - arey haan yaar jaldi Chalo

Didi - mausiji is Se Keh Do ki aaj Kisi Se Maar Peet nahi karega

Maa - Sun le Teri behan Kya keh rahi hai Ansuna nahi karna esse

Mai haa mai Shir Hila kar Akash ke sath didi ko Lekar college ki taraf chal Diya

College ke andar

Sanju - Ritika ek din hum idhar nahi aaye college me to Hungama Ho Gaya Kaise Mara Kisnai Mara hai Shubham ko

Ritika - Kaun Mar sakta hai Pari Jyada Sahi Bata sakti hi

Snehal - aisa kya chal Pari batao kaun hai woh

Pari - Ritika Kapoor Tum Na Jyada mat bana karo main kyu Batau tujhe bata ne mai Sharma aa rahi hai

Ritika - thik hai Baba theek naraz kyun hoti hai tum logo dev ko jante ho na

Sanju - Baat Karti Hai Wohi Jisne Prabhas ko fod Diya tha

Snehal - hey guys idhar Dekho Hero entry Maar Dil Hai

Pari ghurate hue Apne Man Mein Koi bhala Itna taiyar hokar Ke college mein aata hai kya

Ritika Pari ke kaan Mein Dheere Se - Pari wah aa gaya

Pari - Mujhe dikh raha hai

Sanju Mujhe Hath dikha kar -hi kya haal hai

Hum Tino unki taraf Chal Ke Aate Hain

Sab Mujhse se Akash se didi se Haath milate Hain

Bus Pari Ko Chhod Kar

Akash - aaj baaki ki sena kaha hai

Sanju - woh aa rahe aapke picche

Snehal - riya tum lekar jaao enhe warana bina baat ke jhagada ho jaayega phir

Uske baad mein Didi ke sath aur Akash ke sath class mai aaye

Didi - aur kaha kaha Ladai kar Rakhi Hai Tumne

Mai- woh sab bata dunga Abhi aap apni class mein jao

Didi waha sai Chali gayi Aur Main Aur akash aa kar apni seat par baith Gaye

Akash - kya yaar Pari Se Teri baat bhi nahi hoo paayi

Main - kya bol raha hai mai kaya baat karunga uss sai

Akash - tere dil mein rehta hoo Samjha To Agar usmae Koi aayega tum mujhe to Pata chalega na

Mai -chal class shuru ho gayi baad mein baat karte hai us par

Uske baad classes ka Silsila chalu Hua Toh Khatam hi nahi hota haan thoda sa break Mein jakar canteen mein kuch khaya Piya Phir Wapas akar classes hi Chali wo Itna Khaas nahi hua

Aaj mera aur Akash ka Ek Jaise Haal tha

Uske baad Jab chutti hui to riya didi Pehle Se Hi vahan Khadi Thi

Hum Dono kaafi sakate me the Akhir Kaise Kadhi Ho Gayi Pehle Aakar ke

Mai - didi aap kya kar rahi ho

Didi - mai nahi caahati ki tum Akele Ghumo Aur Kisi Se Ladai kar ke Hero Bano

Mai- Aap To Aise bol rahi ho Jaise Main Jaan Bujh ke Ladata Hoon

Didi - chalo jaldi Chalo waise bhi aaj ke liye bahut ho chuka hai sab kuch

Akash - Chal Bhai Phir Milta Hoon Tujhse Kal abhi kuch kaam hai ghar par Jana hai warana pitaji Mere Meri Jaan le lenge

Mai - thik hai jaa bhai

Hum Bhi nikal Chuke Apne Ghar Ke Taraf aur Udhar Pari apni car mai

Pari Apne man mein soch rahi thi-
Kash Ek Bar aur Mujhse mil Jate Hain Tumhein kam se kam Tumhare paper ka jawab to deti

Pata nahi tum mere baare mein kya sochte ho sochte bhi ho ya nahi mujhe pata to nahi par mai jab bhi Tumhare baare mein sochti hoon mujhe lagta hai ki tum Aao mere paas betho kuch Baatein Kaho Mere baare mein Yaa phir Jo Tumhe Accha Lage


Idhar main bike chala raha tha mere dimag mein kuch Khayal the - kya Pari Nai woh paper Dekha Bhi Hoga Kya Sahi likha tha ya galat maine

Kaas mai Tumse Kabhi Akele mil pata

Yeh To nahi pata ki main tumse kuch bol Paunga ya nahi haan Lekin Tumhe Dekh Ke Dil aur dimag ko ek Ajeeb Sa Sukoon Milta Hai Jaise Kahi jungle mein Baitha Hoon aur Tum mere Se Aaram Se Malish kar rahi hai ho

Didi Mujhe Hila kar - Dev kya kar raha hai Samne Dekho Warna lada naa Dena waise kis baat pe Itni Muskurahat aa rahi hai

Mai- Kahan didi Mai Kaha Muskura raha hoon

Didi - Dev ek baat Puchu Sach batana

Mai - Pucho kya puchna aapko

Didi - sach bolega ki nahi hai Bata

Mai - haha sach hi bolunga bolo Aap

Didi - Pari se Tera Kya Rishta Hai

Mai - kuch bhi To Nahi

Didi- dekh Dev tune Kaha Tha Abhi Tu Sach bolega

Mai - arey Sacchi to bol raha hoon

Didi - Tu pari ko kaise Janta hi matlab Hum Jaise Logon se kabhi koi baat nahi karti woh haan acchi hai dil ki par Kabhi normal logo main uthate bethate Dekha Nahi maine

Mai- arey nahi Woh to bahut acche se baat karti hai aap ko pata hai sorry bolne ke liye mere ghar Bhi aayi thi

Didi - Dev kyu nahi bol raha hai tuh sach batana toh Uske baare mein kya Sochta hai

Ajeeb baat hai main Soch raha tha ki aaj ess par baat karenge ki Mujhe Subah woh sab nahi karna chahiye tha Par yeh To Kuch aur hi baat le kar baith Gayi Hai achha hua ghar aa gaya

Mai - didi ghar aa gaya hi

Didi- aaj raat ko Tu mere paas so Jayega

Mai - didi Aap Kya Keh Rahi Hai

Didi - apni Shakal Toh Dekho Jaise koi Sadma Lag Gaya Ho

Mai - aap mere saath mausi mausa kaya sochengi

Didi - mom dad ki tum chinata naa karo

Aur hum baate karate hue andar chale aaye

Nice

 

[parkas]

Dev the lover bhai next update kab tak aayega?

 

[Siraj Patel]

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[Aakash.]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
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Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

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