Romance Miracal - Shades Of Lovers

[kingkhankar]

dev naa drugs sai bhi bura nasha hai

Jhakaas!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Just like your stories which are not less than high quality drugs)

 

[Dev the lover]

Jhakaas!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Just like your stories which are not less than high quality drugs)

Wow.. man thanks ....
And You raise the right thing and that high quality only material some peoples gets and know that some time the quality change but the product is same a always in the taste....i will keep providing that in story as word until i gets bored of mind strucked which i has in last couple of days may be due to illness or something else but i appreciate your words not as you said me best but to tell me something from my content which i give you just now.. .....

 

[kingkhankar]

Wow.. man thanks ....
And You raise the right thing and that high quality only material some peoples gets and know that some time the quality change but the product is same a always in the taste....i will keep providing that in story as word until i gets bored of mind strucked which i has in last couple of days may be due to illness or something else but i appreciate your words not as you said me best but to tell me something from my content which i give you just now.. .....

Take care of your health and mind......Healthy mind will create beautiful stories always.

 

[Dev the lover]

Bhai update padh kr maza to bahut ayea pr rap ka kuch pale nhi pda Or Bhai desi ved ke naam lekar tane to na maro pta hai wo Maine hi bola tha
Or ye akaash ka bhai raj to Ekdum Chutiyapanti kr rha or Apni kabar khud khod rha hai or akaash ko to bol diya pari se pyar krta hai or wo bhi gusse mai usko bol diya ki uske samne pari se pyar ki baat or khud ke bhai hone ki baat dev se na bol de warna phod dega pari ke liye or akaash ke bhai hone ke nate chod to dega pr esi situation Mai ki age se kuch bhi nhi kr payega kyunki wo to apna 𝙏𝙖𝙧𝙯𝙖𝙣 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙟𝙪𝙣𝙜𝙡𝙚 𝙟𝙤 tehra

Waise pale nahi pada toh uss layak thaa nahi 4 - 4 line ki kon si rap battle hoti yeh padh ke samajh jana vaahiye thaa aapko woh just random scene creating for some words jisko padh ke aap jaan sako ki waha kaya ho raha joh abhi tak kisi nai notice nahi kiya toh mai bata bhi nahi raha waisw rap mai red ghar kaa matalab hota hai red light area waale ghar me rehane waaliyaa joh aab legal hua hai ...

aur kuch dialouges repeat ho alag alag way mai woh koi dhyaan nahi de may be aage de jaroor...

Aur tarzan se ladane waale gir jayenge

Haaye haaye kehate hue roz jhatke khayenge

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

poori story pad li bahut badiya likh rahe ho

 

[Alok]

Fabulous update dev bhai....

 

[Death Kiñg]

Riya ki baatein aur harkatein har beet te update ke saath rahasymayi hoti jaa rahi hain... Dev se wo pyaar to bohot zyada karti hai, ismein koyi shakh nahi par kya wo pyaar kewal us behen ke roop mein hai jiska bhai kayi saalon baad uske paas aaya hai, ya fir kuchh aur...? Pari ke baare mein jab bhi baat hoti hai, Riya ka reaction hamesha hi alag sa hota hai... Sunny aur Prince se bhi ye baat chhippi nahi hai... Dono ne hi khulkar Dev aur Riya ke saamne bol bhi diya ke Riya ke expressions apne aap hi Pari ki charcha par badal jaate hain... Khair, abhi tak to yahi lagta hai ke Riya, Dev ko lekar kuchh zyada hi possesive hai, aur wo fir ek baar apne bhai se door nahi hona chahti... Baaki dekhte hain ke bhavishya ke garbh mein kya chhupa hai...

Dev aur Aakash ko Pari ko bachate huye lagi chot ka zimmedar Pari khud ko hi maan rahi thi... Uska bhi aise waqt mein ye sab sochna galat nahi hai... Pari, Dev ke liye kuchh na kuchh special feel karti hai, ye to saaf hi hai, aur aise mein yadi koyi Pari ke kaaran Dev ko nuksaan pahunchaayega to Pari ka yun bartaav karna laazmi hi hai... Par Dev se baat karke shayad wo is feeling se baahar nikal gayi... Idhar, Snehal aur Aakash bhi ek doosre se pyaar ka Izhar kar chuke hain, jismein pehel Snehal ne ki, chalo kisi ko to us ladayi ka faayda hua...

Pari ko jo gunde Mam kehkar pukaar rahe the wo Aakash ke bade bhai Raj ke aadmi the... Raj Pari se pyaar karta hai, aisa uska kehna hai, par kya ye sach hai, ye to aage chalkar hi pata chalega... Khair, Raj pehle to Dev ke baare mein baat karte huye kaafi positive tha, jis prakar uski tareef aur badaayi kar raha tha, ek pal ko to laga ke Dev ke liye wo Pari ko bhi bhool jaayega... Parantu last update mein Aakash ke saath, aur fir us gunde ke saath jo baatein huyi Raj ki, wo kisi aur hi taraf ishara karti hain... Jab gaaon mein Prabhas aur Dev ka jhagda hua tha, tab bhi Pari ke bhai ne Aakash se kaha tha ke wo apne bhai ko is baare mein kuchh na bataye... Arthat, Raj ke baare mein sabhi jaante hain... Ab dekhna ye hai ke Raj asal mein chahata kya hai, kya wo sach mein Pari se pyaar karta hai ya uska kuchh aur lakshya hai? Aage wo kya karega, kya wo firse Dev ko nuksaan pahunchaane ki koshish karega ya...?

Wahin, Dev ke Mausa Ji ne ek baar fir use khari khoti suna di... Unka dar bhi vyarth nahi hai... Wo kayi saalon se shehari maahol mein rahen hain aur wo sab log kya kar sakten hain is baat se bhali bhaanti parichit hain, aise mein Dev ka un sabse seedhe ladayi mol lena, unhe pareshan karne ke liye kaafi hai... Par achha laga dekh kar jis tarah se Riya ne Dev ke paksh mein daleelein pesh ki, ek baar firse Riya ke bhaavon par sawaal bhi zaroor se khada ho gaya... Khair, ant mein Riya ke hi kehne par Dev ne apne Mausa Ji ko Papa Ji kehkar bhi pukaara, Riya ka swabhav beech beech mein khatarnak bhi ho jaata hai, jis tarah wo Dev se apni baatein manwati hai, aage chalkar ek taraf Pari aur doosri taraf Riya, Dev ki band bajne ke poore aasar hain...

Baat ki jaaye Dev ki to, wo bhi Pari ko chaahne laga hai, ismein koyi shanka nahi hai... Bas, abhi apni feelings ko samajh nahi paaya hai, ya unhe sweekar nahi karna chahata hai...? Kuchh bhi ho par lagta nahi ke zyada samay tak Dev aur Pari ek – doosre se apni feelings ko chhupa paayenge... Dev subah ke waqt jungle mein gaya tha, iska kaaran uska jungle aur wahaan ke maahol se pyaar hai ya kuchh aur? Kya wo wahaan kewal excercise wagerah karne gaya tha ya kuchh aur raaz chhipa hai isme? Dev ko abhi Raj aur uski harkaton ki jaankari nahi hai, jab use pata chalega ke Raj ne hi Pari ke liye un gundon ko bheja tha, aur Raj Pari se pyaar karta hai, tab Dev ka kya reaction hoga? Kahin Raj ke kaaran aage chalkar Dev aur Aakash ki dosti par bhi asar naa pad jaaye...

Wahin Riya ko Dev ki baaton se dark feelings bhi aayi thi... Kya Dev ke saath koyi bada Rahasya juda hai? Uske abhi tak gaaon mein hi rehne aur shehar se door rehne ka koyi aur vishesh kaaran bhi hai? Dev se jude kayi sawaal hain jinka jawaab aage chalkar hi milega... Ab dekhna ye hai ke Pari aur Dev kab apni – apni feelings ko samjhenge aur jab ye hoga tab Riya ka kya reaction hoga, ye shayad sabse bada sawaal hai...

Teenon hi updates bohot achhe likhe aapne bhai, shabdon ka chayan kaafi achha hai... Abhi tak pyaar aur sabhi kirdaaron ke bhavon ko kaafi behatreen tareeke se darshaya gaya hai, isi prakar se likhte rahiye...

Excellent Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

 

[Aakash.]

Nice update​

 

[Alok]

Waiting for next update dev bhai

 

[FallenAngel]

Riya ki baatein aur harkatein har beet te update ke saath rahasymayi hoti jaa rahi hain... Dev se wo pyaar to bohot zyada karti hai, ismein koyi shakh nahi par kya wo pyaar kewal us behen ke roop mein hai jiska bhai kayi saalon baad uske paas aaya hai, ya fir kuchh aur...? Pari ke baare mein jab bhi baat hoti hai, Riya ka reaction hamesha hi alag sa hota hai... Sunny aur Prince se bhi ye baat chhippi nahi hai... Dono ne hi khulkar Dev aur Riya ke saamne bol bhi diya ke Riya ke expressions apne aap hi Pari ki charcha par badal jaate hain... Khair, abhi tak to yahi lagta hai ke Riya, Dev ko lekar kuchh zyada hi possesive hai, aur wo fir ek baar apne bhai se door nahi hona chahti... Baaki dekhte hain ke bhavishya ke garbh mein kya chhupa hai...

Dev aur Aakash ko Pari ko bachate huye lagi chot ka zimmedar Pari khud ko hi maan rahi thi... Uska bhi aise waqt mein ye sab sochna galat nahi hai... Pari, Dev ke liye kuchh na kuchh special feel karti hai, ye to saaf hi hai, aur aise mein yadi koyi Pari ke kaaran Dev ko nuksaan pahunchaayega to Pari ka yun bartaav karna laazmi hi hai... Par Dev se baat karke shayad wo is feeling se baahar nikal gayi... Idhar, Snehal aur Aakash bhi ek doosre se pyaar ka Izhar kar chuke hain, jismein pehel Snehal ne ki, chalo kisi ko to us ladayi ka faayda hua...

Pari ko jo gunde Mam kehkar pukaar rahe the wo Aakash ke bade bhai Raj ke aadmi the... Raj Pari se pyaar karta hai, aisa uska kehna hai, par kya ye sach hai, ye to aage chalkar hi pata chalega... Khair, Raj pehle to Dev ke baare mein baat karte huye kaafi positive tha, jis prakar uski tareef aur badaayi kar raha tha, ek pal ko to laga ke Dev ke liye wo Pari ko bhi bhool jaayega... Parantu last update mein Aakash ke saath, aur fir us gunde ke saath jo baatein huyi Raj ki, wo kisi aur hi taraf ishara karti hain... Jab gaaon mein Prabhas aur Dev ka jhagda hua tha, tab bhi Pari ke bhai ne Aakash se kaha tha ke wo apne bhai ko is baare mein kuchh na bataye... Arthat, Raj ke baare mein sabhi jaante hain... Ab dekhna ye hai ke Raj asal mein chahata kya hai, kya wo sach mein Pari se pyaar karta hai ya uska kuchh aur lakshya hai? Aage wo kya karega, kya wo firse Dev ko nuksaan pahunchaane ki koshish karega ya...?

Wahin, Dev ke Mausa Ji ne ek baar fir use khari khoti suna di... Unka dar bhi vyarth nahi hai... Wo kayi saalon se shehari maahol mein rahen hain aur wo sab log kya kar sakten hain is baat se bhali bhaanti parichit hain, aise mein Dev ka un sabse seedhe ladayi mol lena, unhe pareshan karne ke liye kaafi hai... Par achha laga dekh kar jis tarah se Riya ne Dev ke paksh mein daleelein pesh ki, ek baar firse Riya ke bhaavon par sawaal bhi zaroor se khada ho gaya... Khair, ant mein Riya ke hi kehne par Dev ne apne Mausa Ji ko Papa Ji kehkar bhi pukaara, Riya ka swabhav beech beech mein khatarnak bhi ho jaata hai, jis tarah wo Dev se apni baatein manwati hai, aage chalkar ek taraf Pari aur doosri taraf Riya, Dev ki band bajne ke poore aasar hain...

Baat ki jaaye Dev ki to, wo bhi Pari ko chaahne laga hai, ismein koyi shanka nahi hai... Bas, abhi apni feelings ko samajh nahi paaya hai, ya unhe sweekar nahi karna chahata hai...? Kuchh bhi ho par lagta nahi ke zyada samay tak Dev aur Pari ek – doosre se apni feelings ko chhupa paayenge... Dev subah ke waqt jungle mein gaya tha, iska kaaran uska jungle aur wahaan ke maahol se pyaar hai ya kuchh aur? Kya wo wahaan kewal excercise wagerah karne gaya tha ya kuchh aur raaz chhipa hai isme? Dev ko abhi Raj aur uski harkaton ki jaankari nahi hai, jab use pata chalega ke Raj ne hi Pari ke liye un gundon ko bheja tha, aur Raj Pari se pyaar karta hai, tab Dev ka kya reaction hoga? Kahin Raj ke kaaran aage chalkar Dev aur Aakash ki dosti par bhi asar naa pad jaaye...

Wahin Riya ko Dev ki baaton se dark feelings bhi aayi thi... Kya Dev ke saath koyi bada Rahasya juda hai? Uske abhi tak gaaon mein hi rehne aur shehar se door rehne ka koyi aur vishesh kaaran bhi hai? Dev se jude kayi sawaal hain jinka jawaab aage chalkar hi milega... Ab dekhna ye hai ke Pari aur Dev kab apni – apni feelings ko samjhenge aur jab ye hoga tab Riya ka kya reaction hoga, ye shayad sabse bada sawaal hai...

Teenon hi updates bohot achhe likhe aapne bhai, shabdon ka chayan kaafi achha hai... Abhi tak pyaar aur sabhi kirdaaron ke bhavon ko kaafi behatreen tareeke se darshaya gaya hai, isi prakar se likhte rahiye...

Excellent Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Ye to mini update lag rha