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Thanx a lotNice update bro.Yeh Utpal ke dimag me kya chal raha hai apne dosto se bhi bat chupa raha hai.
Thanx a lotShandaar jaandaar lajawab update bro....... Sahi jaa raha he......utpal sach me pyaar me pagal ho gaya he......dil se pyaar chahne laga he.....
Excellent job32
" humne aap logo se juth kaha tha......humne koi zeher nehi piya....humne sirf 12 ghante behosh rehne ki zeher pi thi....." utpal sari kahani bata deta he...
Jise sun kar prema ki pedo tale jameen khichak jaati he.....palke japkana bhool jaati he wo....do kadam piche ho jaati he.....aankho se aasoon girne lagi uski.....
Kas kas ke utpal ke dono gaal par ulte sidhe haathon se thappar maarti hui boli ek dard se boli....." humari jism paane ke liye tum logo ne itna bada khel rasa.........itni ghatiya soch he tum logo ki.......jab call aaye the ki humare bete hospital me admit he zeher kha liya he.....jeete ji mar gaye the hum teeno mummy....aur tum logo ne itna bada dhokha diya hume.....sirf apne apne dost ki mummy ke jism ki chahat me hume itna dukh diya......til til ke mar rahe the hum jab tak tum logo ko hosh nehi aaye the....aur tum....chi....ghatiya insaan....." prema gusse se utpal ke chehre par thukti he.....
Utpal ke aankho se aasoon ki dhara behne lage the nazre uthane ki sahas nehi kar paaye......sharmindigi se ro ro kar prema ki thuk haathon se poch ke bola......." soch yehi thi humari.......aapka jism paana hi tha......uske liye jaan to nehi denge...... Lekin haa agar kabhi aapko bachane ke liye apni jaan kurbaan karna pada to khushi khushi apni jaan de denge......"
" achcha......ghatiya soch rakhne wala insaan kisi ke liye jaan kurbaan karega sach me....de dikha jaan de.....de de jaan......" prema gusse se boli......
Utpal prema ki aankho me nazre utha kar dekhne laga......aur tabele ke deewar par lage ladki se bana huaa slap par kuch dhundne laga....prema bhi use dekhne lagi kya kar raha he wo.....
Utpal ko wo cheez mili jo use chahiye tha.....usne blade ko pakda aur apni baaye haath ki nash kaat li....." ye he mera sachcha pyaar.......jism ka milan bhi pyaar hissa he.......Lekin aapki jism ke liye nehi.....apni pyaar saabit karne ke liye jaan de raha hoon.... Alvida....."
Prema socked se thar thar kanpne lagi.........jaise hi utpal ke haathon se khoon ki dhaar girte dikha to use hosh aayi aur utpal ke paas jaa kar upar ke kaate huye haath par kaat ke upar haathon se daba ke pakad ke rakhte huye ro ro ko gala phaad kar chillane lagi........
Kuchi second me prema ki chinkh sun kar kothi ke har ek insaan bhaga doura aa gaya.......aur jab tabele ye utpal ke haath khoon se lahu luhaan dekha to sabke hosh ud gaye.....utpal ke chacha aur tauji aur uske baba aur car me jitne log bhar sakta tha utne log gadi me utpal ko hospital le gaye.....utpal ke tauji gadi me hospital phone laga ke sara mamla bata ke doctors ko taiyar rehne ko bolta he.....utpal ke tauji politics me haath aajma rahe the kaafi rutba tha uska.....uske ek ishare se us area me kaam ban jata tha......
Hospital zyada door nehi tha......tez raftar se gaadi chali aur 15 minutes me hospital pohoch ke bina kisi rok tok ke utpal ko admit kiya gaya......aur doctor sidha use ot me le jaa kar treatment shuru kar deta he..
Hospital ke corridor me urmila ki ro ro ke buri hatal ho gayi thi......dono dost bhi kaafi dare huye the sabhi dare huye the shintit the lekin kisi ne dhyaan nehi diya ki haadse par sirf prema thi....usse puchne kisi ke dimaag me baat nehi aayi baas utpal ki jaan bach jaaye yehi duaa kar rahe the........
Urmila ko hospital ke kone me ke jaya gaya wo kaafi zyada ro ro kar chor kar rahi thi....uske saath prema aur sampurna thi sahara dene ke liye........Lekin prema ki bhi halat kharab thi ro ro kar......
Tabhi urmila ke dimaag me kuch baat aati he aur wo rona band kar prema ki ki aankho me aankhe daale pucha..... " kya kiya tha mere bete ne.....bolo kya kiya tha mere bete ne.....kis baat se inkaar kiya tha tumne jo mere bete ne jaan lene ki kashish ki......kahi tumne to..." bete ko zindegi aur maut ki halat me dekh kar urmila ki dimaag kaam karna band kar diya tha.....sak ki nigahe prem ki taraf thi....
" nehi nehi urmila.....maine maine....maine kuch nehi kiya.....nehi nehi urmila..... Mujhe nehi pata tha wo wo aisa karega.....maaf kar do urmila....urmila maaf kar do......" prema urmila ke aage haath jodne lagi ro ro kar.....
Tabhi mayank aur aayan unlogo ke paas aate huye dikhai diye sampurna ko aur sampurna boli....." aayan aur utpal aa raha he......chup ho jaao....sach kuch bhi ho abhi undono se kuch mat bolna.....pata nehi kya react karenge....."
Mayank aur aayan teeno mummy's ke paas aate he......
" mummy kya huaa tha woha.....utpal ne aisa kyu kiya....mummy aap woha thi...Aapko pata hoga naa kya huaa tha woha......" aayan sidha apni mummy se sawal karta he.....
Prema bolne ke liye muh kholti he lekin haklane lagi........aur sampurna boli......" prema ko bhi kuch pata nehi he......prema pesab karne gayi to use utpal ko us halat mili aur usne chillaya..."
Mayank aur aayan prema ko sak ki nazron se dekhne laga.....aur aayan bola....." pata chal jayega sab kuch....."
Aur dono woha se chala jayega.......urmila bench par baith kar ro rahi thi....prema uske ghutno par baith kar bolne lagi....." urmila....sach me maine kuch nehi kiya...Mujhe nehi pata tha wo aisa karega....."
Urmila nazar utha ke dekhti he aur kehti he......" pata tha naa tumhe uski halat pehle se kharab thi......ek baar jaan dene ki kashish kar chuka tha.....Kya chahta tha wo tumse.....are jo chahta tha de deti naa....mere beta.....kuch ho gaya naa...kabhi maaf nehi karungi....."
Prema man me sochne lagi.....kya karu sach bata doon.....nehi is halat me sach sun nehi paoge tum......maaf kar de urmila par me gunehgaar nehi hoon.....dukh mujhe bhi he.....
Kuch do ghante ke baad doctors aate he aur khabar dete he ki utpal khatre se bahar he......urmila ko jab kahabar mili tab thora sakoon aayi use.... Aur prema bhi uparwale ko shukriya kar kar rahi thi man me......
Sabhi ko thori rahat milti he........utpal ke chacha utpal ko khoon donate karta he......subah tak utpal ko hosh aa jata he......sabse ek ek kar ke mila wo....aur ek hi kahani bataya sabko ki use kuch ho gaya tha.....achanak use bure bure bhayanak cheeze dikhai dene lage aur un cheezon se use haathon ki nash kaatne par mazbur kiya.......Aur tab wo akela tha.......prema nehi thi woha........ye bol kar usne prema ko sak ke ghere se azaad kiya.....
Ab utpal ke baba ko bhi gaaon wale ke kahe huye baat par vishwas hone laga.....utpal ko kisi buri saya ne apne prokop ne apne bach me kar liya tha ya saayed abhi bhi he....aur utpal ke baba tauji chacha sabne soch rakha tha ki utpal ko ghar le jaa kar kisi baba ya pandit sadhu ko dikhayaga aur jo karna pade karega........
Jab dono dost milne gaye utpal se....
" saale ye sab kya tha....tune sach me jaan kaise dene ki kashish kari.....pagal to nehi ho gaya tha.....Kitna dar gaye the hum dono....." mayank utpal ka hath pakad ke bola....
Utpal muskuraya......." usne jaan manngi.....dekhna chahta tha ki juth bol raha hoon ya sach..... Mujhe achanak kya huya maine bhi ek jhat ke me blade se nash kaat daali....."
" tu juth bol raha he......baat kuch aur he..." aayan sak ke nigahon se ghurne laga....
" tumhari kasam bhai......Yehi huaa tha....juth nehi bol raha hoon....tum dono se kyu juth bolunga.." utpal ne aayan ko vishwas dilaya......
" mujhe prema aunty se akele me milna he kuch der.....please kuch karo naa.....sirf unhe bhejna..." utpal request karta he.....
nice update..!!32
" humne aap logo se juth kaha tha......humne koi zeher nehi piya....humne sirf 12 ghante behosh rehne ki zeher pi thi....." utpal sari kahani bata deta he...
Jise sun kar prema ki pedo tale jameen khichak jaati he.....palke japkana bhool jaati he wo....do kadam piche ho jaati he.....aankho se aasoon girne lagi uski.....
Kas kas ke utpal ke dono gaal par ulte sidhe haathon se thappar maarti hui boli ek dard se boli....." humari jism paane ke liye tum logo ne itna bada khel rasa.........itni ghatiya soch he tum logo ki.......jab call aaye the ki humare bete hospital me admit he zeher kha liya he.....jeete ji mar gaye the hum teeno mummy....aur tum logo ne itna bada dhokha diya hume.....sirf apne apne dost ki mummy ke jism ki chahat me hume itna dukh diya......til til ke mar rahe the hum jab tak tum logo ko hosh nehi aaye the....aur tum....chi....ghatiya insaan....." prema gusse se utpal ke chehre par thukti he.....
Utpal ke aankho se aasoon ki dhara behne lage the nazre uthane ki sahas nehi kar paaye......sharmindigi se ro ro kar prema ki thuk haathon se poch ke bola......." soch yehi thi humari.......aapka jism paana hi tha......uske liye jaan to nehi denge...... Lekin haa agar kabhi aapko bachane ke liye apni jaan kurbaan karna pada to khushi khushi apni jaan de denge......"
" achcha......ghatiya soch rakhne wala insaan kisi ke liye jaan kurbaan karega sach me....de dikha jaan de.....de de jaan......" prema gusse se boli......
Utpal prema ki aankho me nazre utha kar dekhne laga......aur tabele ke deewar par lage ladki se bana huaa slap par kuch dhundne laga....prema bhi use dekhne lagi kya kar raha he wo.....
Utpal ko wo cheez mili jo use chahiye tha.....usne blade ko pakda aur apni baaye haath ki nash kaat li....." ye he mera sachcha pyaar.......jism ka milan bhi pyaar hissa he.......Lekin aapki jism ke liye nehi.....apni pyaar saabit karne ke liye jaan de raha hoon.... Alvida....."
Prema socked se thar thar kanpne lagi.........jaise hi utpal ke haathon se khoon ki dhaar girte dikha to use hosh aayi aur utpal ke paas jaa kar upar ke kaate huye haath par kaat ke upar haathon se daba ke pakad ke rakhte huye ro ro ko gala phaad kar chillane lagi........
Kuchi second me prema ki chinkh sun kar kothi ke har ek insaan bhaga doura aa gaya.......aur jab tabele ye utpal ke haath khoon se lahu luhaan dekha to sabke hosh ud gaye.....utpal ke chacha aur tauji aur uske baba aur car me jitne log bhar sakta tha utne log gadi me utpal ko hospital le gaye.....utpal ke tauji gadi me hospital phone laga ke sara mamla bata ke doctors ko taiyar rehne ko bolta he.....utpal ke tauji politics me haath aajma rahe the kaafi rutba tha uska.....uske ek ishare se us area me kaam ban jata tha......
Hospital zyada door nehi tha......tez raftar se gaadi chali aur 15 minutes me hospital pohoch ke bina kisi rok tok ke utpal ko admit kiya gaya......aur doctor sidha use ot me le jaa kar treatment shuru kar deta he..
Hospital ke corridor me urmila ki ro ro ke buri hatal ho gayi thi......dono dost bhi kaafi dare huye the sabhi dare huye the shintit the lekin kisi ne dhyaan nehi diya ki haadse par sirf prema thi....usse puchne kisi ke dimaag me baat nehi aayi baas utpal ki jaan bach jaaye yehi duaa kar rahe the........
Urmila ko hospital ke kone me ke jaya gaya wo kaafi zyada ro ro kar chor kar rahi thi....uske saath prema aur sampurna thi sahara dene ke liye........Lekin prema ki bhi halat kharab thi ro ro kar......
Tabhi urmila ke dimaag me kuch baat aati he aur wo rona band kar prema ki ki aankho me aankhe daale pucha..... " kya kiya tha mere bete ne.....bolo kya kiya tha mere bete ne.....kis baat se inkaar kiya tha tumne jo mere bete ne jaan lene ki kashish ki......kahi tumne to..." bete ko zindegi aur maut ki halat me dekh kar urmila ki dimaag kaam karna band kar diya tha.....sak ki nigahe prem ki taraf thi....
" nehi nehi urmila.....maine maine....maine kuch nehi kiya.....nehi nehi urmila..... Mujhe nehi pata tha wo wo aisa karega.....maaf kar do urmila....urmila maaf kar do......" prema urmila ke aage haath jodne lagi ro ro kar.....
Tabhi mayank aur aayan unlogo ke paas aate huye dikhai diye sampurna ko aur sampurna boli....." aayan aur utpal aa raha he......chup ho jaao....sach kuch bhi ho abhi undono se kuch mat bolna.....pata nehi kya react karenge....."
Mayank aur aayan teeno mummy's ke paas aate he......
" mummy kya huaa tha woha.....utpal ne aisa kyu kiya....mummy aap woha thi...Aapko pata hoga naa kya huaa tha woha......" aayan sidha apni mummy se sawal karta he.....
Prema bolne ke liye muh kholti he lekin haklane lagi........aur sampurna boli......" prema ko bhi kuch pata nehi he......prema pesab karne gayi to use utpal ko us halat mili aur usne chillaya..."
Mayank aur aayan prema ko sak ki nazron se dekhne laga.....aur aayan bola....." pata chal jayega sab kuch....."
Aur dono woha se chala jayega.......urmila bench par baith kar ro rahi thi....prema uske ghutno par baith kar bolne lagi....." urmila....sach me maine kuch nehi kiya...Mujhe nehi pata tha wo aisa karega....."
Urmila nazar utha ke dekhti he aur kehti he......" pata tha naa tumhe uski halat pehle se kharab thi......ek baar jaan dene ki kashish kar chuka tha.....Kya chahta tha wo tumse.....are jo chahta tha de deti naa....mere beta.....kuch ho gaya naa...kabhi maaf nehi karungi....."
Prema man me sochne lagi.....kya karu sach bata doon.....nehi is halat me sach sun nehi paoge tum......maaf kar de urmila par me gunehgaar nehi hoon.....dukh mujhe bhi he.....
Kuch do ghante ke baad doctors aate he aur khabar dete he ki utpal khatre se bahar he......urmila ko jab kahabar mili tab thora sakoon aayi use.... Aur prema bhi uparwale ko shukriya kar kar rahi thi man me......
Sabhi ko thori rahat milti he........utpal ke chacha utpal ko khoon donate karta he......subah tak utpal ko hosh aa jata he......sabse ek ek kar ke mila wo....aur ek hi kahani bataya sabko ki use kuch ho gaya tha.....achanak use bure bure bhayanak cheeze dikhai dene lage aur un cheezon se use haathon ki nash kaatne par mazbur kiya.......Aur tab wo akela tha.......prema nehi thi woha........ye bol kar usne prema ko sak ke ghere se azaad kiya.....
Ab utpal ke baba ko bhi gaaon wale ke kahe huye baat par vishwas hone laga.....utpal ko kisi buri saya ne apne prokop ne apne bach me kar liya tha ya saayed abhi bhi he....aur utpal ke baba tauji chacha sabne soch rakha tha ki utpal ko ghar le jaa kar kisi baba ya pandit sadhu ko dikhayaga aur jo karna pade karega........
Jab dono dost milne gaye utpal se....
" saale ye sab kya tha....tune sach me jaan kaise dene ki kashish kari.....pagal to nehi ho gaya tha.....Kitna dar gaye the hum dono....." mayank utpal ka hath pakad ke bola....
Utpal muskuraya......." usne jaan manngi.....dekhna chahta tha ki juth bol raha hoon ya sach..... Mujhe achanak kya huya maine bhi ek jhat ke me blade se nash kaat daali....."
" tu juth bol raha he......baat kuch aur he..." aayan sak ke nigahon se ghurne laga....
" tumhari kasam bhai......Yehi huaa tha....juth nehi bol raha hoon....tum dono se kyu juth bolunga.." utpal ne aayan ko vishwas dilaya......
" mujhe prema aunty se akele me milna he kuch der.....please kuch karo naa.....sirf unhe bhejna..." utpal request karta he.....
Thanx a lotBeta ji .. Isbaar to utpal ne hadd he kardi .. Is baar jo daav khela usne .. Ya to ye aar ya paar he kardega .. Magar prema se alag sab ki hila ke rakh di hai .. Aur utpal ke is move ne uski zubaan pe aur pairo pe aisa tala laga diya hai ki vo chaah kar bhi kisi ko sacch jaahir nahi karegi ...
Aur kucch ho ya na ho .. Par ek kaam ye hoga ki abse urmila ka pati bete ke maamle mein narmi bartega .. Ab wo bhi koi garam joshi wala decision lene se pehle 2 baar jaroor sochega ki kahi uska beta kucch ulta seedha kaand na karde ...
Becchaari urmila to ab total surrender he kar degi apne bete ke aage .. Agar ek baar prema nahi bhi maani to urmilA khud aage badh karr apne bete ki hasrat poori karegi ...
Bahut he superb likha .. Waise ye pandit ko involve karke shayad kucch naya angle jude ya utpal ka faayda ho jaaye indirectly ...
Lets wait and watch ...