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Yep most Stories have a very same look after some time it has some basic plot points but new character intro make it diffrence from them and there are already that have that same view when it goes longer then 40-50 updates.Baat to apki theek hai ye story' ab TMKOC serial base nahi rahi but sabki story same hi hoti hai isliyee mene thodi different story likhi hai taki logo ko kuch different padhne ko mile or unko kuch intresting Mile padhne ke kiye or isme me kamyaab bhi hui hu logo ko mere story padhne me maja aarha hai....
or sabse important baat Other TMKOC story me yehi hota hai ki society ki sari ladies Randi hoti hai or wo kabhi kisi na kisi se chudti rehti hai but mene apni story' me kuch different dekhaya hai....
ab apko meri story pasand na aaye usme meri koi galti nahi hai..
Personally I liked the new introduction and also want not only yuvi but other characters like avneet to have more participation in the story you have already said she had already have some interst in jethalal after visiting his shop so that could be also explored.
New character will make this story more fresh and good to read and not just same plot but at different locations