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Incest Mix sex story (Tv Serial TMKOC Bollywood actress)

Ab Next sex kis virgin ladki ka dekhau ?

  • Urvi

    Votes: 15 25.9%

  • Avneet

    Votes: 29 50.0%

  • Jannat

    Votes: 6 10.3%

  • Sonu

    Votes: 7 12.1%

  • Rita

    Votes: 1 1.7%
  • Total voters
    58
  • Poll closed .
Hijab Lover

Hijab Lover

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Tania Malik said:
Lagta hai tumne meri story ka name theek se nahi padha
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Yup it interprets to, TV SERIAL TMKOC AND BOLLYWOOD ACTRESSES. I Mean you gotta change your story name, if it's anything other than that. The point is, The new character, which i am pretty sure, is neither a TMKOC character nor a tv/Bollywood actress. I don't know, in what part of the world you think the story name even suggests that.
And a random dude character gets to take atleast half, if not full, role of main character? I mean The story was going from third person view till the intro of the new guy and now suddenly it went from third person to first person. There was no "me" but now it's "me" in story. I mean if you still don't see the problem then i don't have any nice way left to explain it to you.

Other than that You obviously just don't want to get comments other than nice story than All good man, it's your choice. But from now on don't ask for comments in updates or rather be specific that you want only "nice story" as comment.

Because i don't know you so I don't have any grudge or anything like that towards you. It's just that i believe one can truly appreciate the story with a constructive criticism. It's my way of appreciation and POSSIBLY contributing in making it even better. You don't want that than i won't post anymore. Good luck.
 
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Hijab Lover said:
Yup it interprets to, TV SERIAL TMKOC AND BOLLYWOOD ACTRESSES. I Mean you gotta change your story name, if it's anything other than that. The point is, The new character, which i am pretty sure, is neither a TMKOC character nor a tv/Bollywood actress. I don't know, in what part of the world you think the story name even suggests that a random dude character gets to take atleast half, if not full, role of main character. The story was going from third person view till the intro of the new guy and now suddenly it went from third person to first person. There was no "me" but now it's "me". I mean if you still don't see the problem then i don't think it's earth that you live on bro.

You obviously just don't want to get comments other than nice story than All good man, it's your choice. But from now on don't ask for comments in updates or rather be specific that you want only "nice story" as comment.

Because i don't know you so I don't have any grudge or anything like that towards you. It's just that i believe one can truly appreciate the story with a constructive criticism. You don't want that than i won't post anymore. Good luck.
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Aapko pdna hai pdo nhi pdna hai na pdo aapko achi nhi lgg rhi story aapki choice bhuat logo ko achi lgg rhi hai tbhi dekh rhe hai
 
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Saksham23s said:
Aapko pdna hai pdo nhi pdna hai na pdo aapko achi nhi lgg rhi story aapki choice
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Na me story ko bura bola hu nahi mene ye kaha ki ye padhne ke layak nahi hai. Writer chahta hai ki reader comment kare ki unko story/update kaisa laga. Mujhe jo laga mene bola aur writer ne bhi mujhe uske tarike se jawab diya. It's a discussion not a fight.
Saksham23s said:
bhuat logo ko achi lgg rhi hai tbhi dekh rhe hai
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Ye baat me bhi apne pichhle comment me bola tha ki writer ki story bahoto ko pasand bhi hai. Lekin nahi tumhe chanune kaat rahe hai aur bina agla pichla jane comment karna hai bas. Tumhare logic ke hisab se to tumhe bhi mera comment achha nahi lag raha to mat padho.
 
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